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Fri, 10/28/2011 - 20:42
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Blindshot

Hi everybody, this is a fanfic I made. If you want to join, you can. I would try to update the story every chance I can get. (Considering the terms of school and other matter.) Also I might even post the story on Deviant Art as Short- Stories. Let the battle begin. :)

Prologue: 12:08 PM
All the knights were busy with whatever they are currently doing. It’s either at the Auction House selling or buying, talking to their friends, and or it’s just wondering around. But none expected that the monsters of the clockworks would even come to Haven and take over. This was the last thing the Spiral Order would ever plan for, neither did the knights plan for this. Some knights stood up and tried to defend Haven, while others would be too surprised that they would try to run away and monsters of all kinds would come. Haven needed the knights and this was the time where the knights would fight for their new home. The invasion started at around noon, when it was the busiest time of the day.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 07:40
#1
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Valorai
What would you like us to put

What would you like us to put down? Example: Name and Gender

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 08:22
#2
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Blindshot
Actually....

i was busy last night so heres the character sheet and i might sometimes add on the bottom who entered in the story and if they're alive. You can be a monster too :D

Name:
Race:
Color:
Gender:
Friendly(as in would you help the knights):
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
Hobbies:
Equipment:
Would you want to die?(Optional):

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 08:26
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Firemoon
Can i join?

Name: Alma
Race: Phantom
Color: Red
Gender: Female
Friendly(as in would you help the knights): Yes
Likes: Helping knight pass through the graveyard and flower
Dislikes: Going into war with the knights
Personality: A phantom with a high temper and is a medic
Hobbies: Seeing a hoard zombies chasing the knights
Equipment: Seraphic set, Wise owlite shield, Ascended calibur, Antigua
Would you want to die?: No,because i'm already dead

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 08:44
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Duskfinder
:D

Name: Dusk
Race: Knight
Color: Crimson
Gender: Male
Friendly
Likes : making friends, funny people, breaking the fourth wall, hanging out with buddies
Dislikes: obnoxious people, beggars
Stuff: acheron, gigawatt pulsar, boltbrand, lightning capacitator, rigadoon
Other: rich, funny, nice
No death.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 17:58
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Valorai
Name: BlueRace:

Name: Blue

Race: Skolver

Color: Light blue

Gender: Female

Very Friendly

Likes: People, being loved, being important

Dislikes: Death

Personality: Friendly, Loyal, and forgiving

Hobbies: Helping Knights, and trying to get knights to like her

Equipment: Sharp claws. armor is skolver fur

Other: Carries around a medical pack for knights to use. Has a painful past.

No death please. But i'm fine with getting seriously injured xD

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 07:20
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Softhead
I WANA DIE!!!

Name: Advent

Race: 1/2 Spiralian and 1/2 Almirian

Colour:White eyes, Tuffs of red Hair hangs out of his helm

Gender: Male

Friendly: Heck no, He hates Almire and Spiralians due to a dispute in history that caused the two races. But is good because Haven is his only income for Crowns and CE

Likes: Death of his teamates, Vanaduke getting hurt, Skolvers, Alma(AS A FRIEND), Crowns,Energy

Diklikes:Vog, Vog Club, Spiral HQ, Almire, Order of the Rose, Scarlet Aliance

Personality: Mad, Sadistic, Brooding, not compassionate

Hobbies: Killing, Mad people, Horror

Equipment: Almiran Crusader Armour, Skolver Cap, A Agesis/COA shaped shield that is White and has Shock, Ice and Elemental resist with a Sheild with a Red Fox called End-Field, Claw of Skolver(A FOV with Ice instead of Fire), Shivermist Buster and Hail Driver. Has a flying Jet called Skywing that he uses for transport

Death: Read the darn title. He charges all of his wepaons and causes his CE and ME to explode, causing a blast of Ice so cold it burns. The blast is shaped like a cold snap. This helps the team do this to stop the invasion in the end, being hailed has a hero.

Other!: He becomes a Frozen Shambler in his armour and only has his Claw of Skolver. He now shoots Flames that feel like they burn but freezes. He follows the team around and randomly helps them when the going gets tough. Only Alma can see him due to both being dead. He is happier than usual and loves everything.But is detemined and protective and has regained his compassion and sanity.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 10:20
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Rangerwillx
Me!

Name: Will.

Race: Knight.

Color: Dark Blue.

Gender: Male.

Friendly (as in would you help the knights) : Yes.

Likes: Seeing his enemies perish.. Firestorm Citadel.. The power of his Vortex combo.. His friends..

Dislikes: Being laughed at, Losing a battle or duel, Gremlins.

Personality: He is a dark, powerful, man. Though he uses his powers for good, he often has a question in his mind.. should I switch sides? (You could make me switch if you want.

Hobbies: Polishing his weapons.. a lot.

Equipment:
Firestorm Citadel Loadout: Voltedge, Volt Driver, Strike Needle, Electron Vortex.
Tier 3 Non-Fsc Loadout: Voltedge, Silent Nightblade, Volt Driver, Electron Vortex.
Tier 2 & Down Loadout: Voltedge, Silent Nightblade, Strike Needle, Electron Vortex.

Would you want to die? (Optional) : No.

Hope I have a good part in the story! Thanks!

Cheers.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 11:32
#8
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Valorai
BTW i edited my character.

BTW i edited my character.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 13:26
#9
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Blindshot
Ok got it

People so far:
Alma
Dusk
Blue
Advent
Will

Alma, Blue, and maybe Advent, you guys will appear in probably chapter 2.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 13:44
#10
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Softhead
Hey make sure this..

Advent dies early on and his death has an impact in the war against the enermies. Hey make sure he as a relationship with everyone(good bad ect.) before death and apperars in the rest as his zombie form, fighting enermiess secretly but unknown to the naked eye(exept Alma).

Ps: Alma the undead Phantom=Alma the undead psychic ghost
LOL

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 16:54
#11
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Valorai
Im looking forward to read

Im looking forward to read this fanfic.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 17:17
#12
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Blindshot
About the equipment

If you can, could you tell me what armor or sets of armor they wear cause that would help with your pros/cons of some battles.

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 07:17
#13
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Softhead
I already have

See my post and go to equipment, mine has a mix of all defences and shock, curse and ice, has a medium negative to fire. The helm's visor is open.

Equips: Almarian Crusader Armour, Skolver Cap, Claw of Skolver( A freezing version of FOV), A Crest of Almire shaped Sheild that is white with a Red fox called End-Field that has Elemental defence and High shock and Freeze defence, Hail Driver and Shivermist Buster.

Sat, 10/29/2011 - 17:57
#14
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Valorai
My armor is skolver fur. 0.0

My armor is skolver fur. 0.0

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 04:43
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Mysticbeam
MEMEMEME :D

i remember u, amber :D

name: Mysticbeam The Conqueror (Mystic for short :P)

Race: Were-Trojan

Color: .....Im a Trojan Knightmare :D

Gender: Male

Friendly: i dont rly care, but wud prefer 2 be on the good side, whatever that is :D

Likes: pwning his friends enemies, crushing monsters under his trojan sword and seeing them take massive dmg, get stunned, and fly away :D

Dislikes: Backstabbing. Literally. also back-kicking, back punching, and other back attacks on me :D

Personality: A Mystirious shadowy figure that strikes like a ninja,(in Knight form), and a warrior(Trojan form)
he is said 2 have transforming powers, and when he is angry, he enters a Berserker rage, making him invincible :P

Hobbies: Keeping Dusk out of trouble in multiple Fanfics :P

Equipment: In Trojan form: Trojan Knightmare shield, sword, armor, and cool flames on back of head :D
In Knight form: vog cub coat, grey feather cowl, grey owlite shield, Leviathan Blade UV ASI high, gigawatt pulsar

Other: Rich, sarcastically funny, and usually willing 2 help(unless its helping finish off kozmas cooking :P)

I Do Not Want To Die, At All :D

EDIT: i also hate when fanfic authors give me a love interest in the story :P

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 22:02
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Blindshot
Here's the first one

Chapter 1; Ready Yet?: 8:27AM

The start of another day and the start of a new revolution was in the air. But other than that, the knights were busy with their usual business of the day. Though no one expected other than some chattering would happen, this was the start of a different day.

Dusk was in the Town Square, trying to stay away from the beggars that were usually in the middle of the crowds. Going though that crowd was way more easier than trying to bite into a rock jelly that might cause you to break your teeth. When he got into the Arcade, he saw Amber and walked towards her.

Amber was busy cleaning her Divine Avenger when she saw Dusk come up to her. She put her sword away and started to stand up when Dusk got up to her. "Still like that DA huh," Dusk asked when she got to her feet. "Yea, why not. This sword is good against Undead and Fiend cause they are just EVIL, but still, I like my Levi too," she said with a little more enthusiasm. "Yea yea, whatever you say but I prefer shadow damage better, and if you don't know, it's my Acheron." Than he pulled out his Acheron and held it up in the air. Amber then sighed and figured she had to deal with it anyways. "So than, ready yet," Dusk asked and when Amber was about to answer, something caught Dusk eye.

Dusk spotted a friend of his and waved to him. Amber saw this and looked over her shoulder to see a dark blue color against the cold hard gray of the rocks in the area. The knight waved back and walked towards the two. "Hey there Dusk, whose the Dragon guy?" Amber looked at the knight and silently said, "I'm a girl." "Oops, sorry just that you," he got cut off when she held her hand up to his face and put on her Valkyrie set as a costume. "It's alright, I get that a lot if I have my Dragon set on. Now than, my name's Amber, what's your name," she asked with more kindness. "Name's Will. I was just walking around when I saw Dusk here," he pointed to Dusk.

"Soo…. is this going to be a run or just a recipe run?." Will looked at them and Dusk answered. "We're actually going to do a run where one of the strata is Undead and the other is Beast. Felt like something we should plan on instead of just going into a random gate. Luckily there's one gate just like that." "And that's the Copper Sun gate," Amber finished. "Ok, since we all know what to do, are we now ready yet," Dusk asked again.

All of a sudden a knight appeared out of nowhere and tackled Dusk to the ground and backflipped to get back up on his feet. "Oww…… Mystic would you mind not 'ninja tackling' me EVER again." Dusk sat up and rubbed the back of his head where it made full contact with the cold metal floor. "You should always suspect the unexpected, and that's me." Mystic pointed at himself with a renowned pride. "Will this is Mystic, Mystic this is Will," Amber pointed to the two. "Yea and the unexpected is having a friend of yours tackle you to the ground," Dusk said when he got up and continued on speaking, "Hopefully this is everyone, right?" "Yup," all three said in unison. "Ok than, now, are we ready yet," Dusk asked hoping he won't have to ask that question again, then everyone nodded "Ok than everyone's ready, good, lets go." Then the group headed to the gate and pressed the down button to arrive at a Wolver Den with more Rabid Wolvers and Rabid Alphas than they ever saw in their lifetime.

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 12:40
#17
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Duskfinder
/facepalm

Mystic , for the sake of my sanity please try being normal for once.

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 12:45
#18
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Mysticbeam
:(

HAHHAHAHAHA that was halaruous xD glad ima have a good part in this story :)

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 12:57
#19
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Valorai
Lol. nice work, im looking

Lol. nice work, im looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 14:06
#20
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Stormgirl
can i...

can i create a character too?i know its a little late but please?

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 14:20
#21
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Blindshot
Whenever you want to join

You can join anytime even when its late or early :)

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 16:13
#22
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Stormgirl
ok thanks!

Name:stormer
Race:knight
Color:dark blue
Gender:female
Friendly(as in would you help the knights):struggles to be good.(you can change her to be evil if you like)
Likes:killing monsters even knights if she wants too.mewkats and lovepuppys,her pet Greaver named:spore.
Dislikes:knights who thinks that they are better that everyone else,the graveyard,phantoms.
Personality:a dark,powerful girl.she is deadly fast,her nickname is the silent killer.killing is in her blood.she doesn't want to be bad but sometimes she cant help herself,just like her brother and sister:Annie and tiger.there is always one haunting thought:turn evil.
Hobbies:killing,lockdown,polishing her weapons.
Equipment:Heavenly Iron Set,Dread Skelly Shield,Acheron,Sentenza,Dark Briar Barrage.
Would you want to die?(Optional):no.

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 19:14
#23
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Blindshot
Dusk and Will

Could you guys tell me what armor sets or helms you guys wear, cause that would help me out in some other way.

Sun, 10/30/2011 - 19:38
#24
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Doggies
@mystic ninja trojan lol

can I join the story
Name: Doggies
Race: knight/Wolver
Color: pink and red
Gender: male
I be friendly
Likes: pie, wolvers, chromalisks.
Dislikes: pie, constructs, undead.
Personality: nice, helpful, happy go lucky, partially possessed by Snarlbolax.
Hobbies: helping Snarbolax(forced to), watching wolvers, eating pie, ambushing mystic the *ninja Trojan*
Equipment: final flourish, heavy decon., and royal jelly shield.
Armor: Snarlbolax set with Dusker set custume.
Can I please not die, I have to annoy Mystic.

Mon, 10/31/2011 - 03:54
#25
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Duskfinder
lol

Divine veil, grey feather mantle, grey owlite shield

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 22:03
#26
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Blindshot
Who knew pre-reading with someone is easier. :)

Hint for chapter 3:
3 people will be in it. Different point of view and a bit off time with this chapter, but thats how I'll need to fit people in somehow.

Chapter 2; Meeting a Myth: 9:03AM
Arena-Beastly Brawl

"YES, I need to get those crowns," Dusk said when the elevator halted to a stop. "Don't be too sure, some things can just pop out of nowhere," Will said, walking onto the party button. "Whatever, as long as I get those long needed crowns, I don't care." When everyone got on, they all ran to the first part of the arena. Once they activated the button, each ran off in their own direction. Amber and Mystic ran behind the first two gun puppies that spawned and easily killed both of them. Dusk and Will ran up and fought with the Wolvers and Alphas. Dusk pulled out his Rigadoon and quickly backhanded two of the Wolvers and Will shocked the other two, causing them to look at him and meet their fate. First wave done, at least 2 or 3 more to go. Overall of that first part, no one got seriously injured, just a few scratches here and there but was quickly healed once they got on the pads.

"This is kinda poor," Dusk said when he opened the boxes, only see way more less than he expected. "Hey, what would you expect after just the first part of an arena," Amber said when she picked up the crowns and put them in her pocket. "Still, a little bit more would have been nice," Dusk muttered under his breath.
"At least they were easy kill, especially that expression on Will and that Trojans' face when I transformed. That was one for the photo album, oh if only we could have taken a picture." Mystic started to laugh but then Will hit Mystic in the back of the head, causing him to fall facedown on the ground. "Shut up, Mystic," Will growled. Amber walked over and talked to Will how Mystic was a Were-Trojan, just for his knowing sake. "Umm okay than, well it was a mishap as to how Mystic can be a Were-Trojan, but it comes in handy. I think he said it was because of dark magic so it could be that Konjuring Kat fault," when she tried to go a little bit deeper, she found him looking blankly into the open air. She waved her hand in front of his face and he came to his senses. "Oh, ok than, I think I get the idea now," Will said and walked towards the next button. Amber shrugged and stepped on the button as well.

They than ran the long path up to the empty area, and then Will heard a rustling of leaves. "You guys hear that?" "Hear what," Dusk asked, then getting tackled down to the ground… again. The shadowy figure jumped off of him and stood a good few feet away from them. "I can't believe I'm saying this but, please tell me that's Mystic." Dusk said and was helped to his feet by Amber. "Not me but if it was, I should have took a picture of that" Mystic said. They looked at the figure, wondering if it was a knight or a monster. "Whoever you are, what are you, and what are you doing here," Will asked and held his sword out in an offensive manner. "Look, I'll cooperate if you put your weapons down and not try anything funny." The voice was a female and then they heard a small bark. They looked at each other, still a bit unsure but dropped their weapons. The figure stepped into the light and was a light blue Skolver and they were surprised to see that. "Your a Skolver?" Amber asked. "Yes, I'm a Skolver, so what?." "Umm, never mind I said anything. But what's your name?" "Blue what's your name?"
"Amber."
"Dusk."
"Will."
"Mystic."
"Nice now that I know your names, can I join your party?" She asked. Everyone looked at each other and they all nodded. "Ok you can join us, but why?" Dusk asked picking up his Rigadoon. "I like to make friends," Blue barked. "Well that's nice," Amber said, stepping on the button with everyone else.

It activated and it was the same as the last one, going off at their own enemies. Mystic turned into a Trojan and Trojan-charged the wolvers off the edge of the platform. One got away but Blue caught it off guard and kicked it off its feet and delivered a bone-crunching bite to its neck. Soon the Mecha Knights spawned and they looked more experienced than before. "What the heck?!" Dusk shouted when all four came after him. Everyone watched him run around the arena, but then four Wolvers and Alphas came up at them behind their backs. Blue spotted them, and shouted, "WATCH OUT!" Mystic was too slow, (since he was a Trojan) and a wolver bit his crystal, he was turned into stone, left helpless until someone broke him free. Amber ran up and using her Levi, sliced a wolver in half. She ran over to Mystic and used the handle of her sword to break the stone. "Man, I hate that. Thanks Amber, now than where is that pesky little wolver?" Mystic was converted back into a knight and saw the wolver trying to get Will. He smirked and ran after it.

Will turned around and held his shield up to see an Alpha bite onto the shield and holding its grip. He tried to shake it off but it never wanted to let go. A wolver was behind him and was about to attack when a sword was sticking right out of its side. "That's what you get for turning me into stone." Mystic pulled his sword back, then Will sliced the Alpha in half and pried the mouth off this shield.

Dusk turned around to see that he was still being followed. Amber and Blue ran up to the Mecha Knights and they both finished the robots off, but Dusk was still running. "Dusk, you can stop running now." Amber said casually. He skidded to a stop and looked behind him. "Oh, well that was stupid." "Hey don't just stand there, there's more coming." Will readied his Voltedge and ran up to the healers who appeared. Dusk charged his Boltbrand while Mystic kept shooting at them with his Gigawatt Pulsar. When Dusk's charge was finished, he dodged Mystic's bullets and let it go when he was close enough. With that the gate opened, and them victorious.

"Well this is a better payout." Dusk picked up the crowns and dropped them in his pocket. "Oh, did I tell you I have a medical pack." Blue pulled the pack out of her fur and held it out for them to see. "No, no you did not," Mystic said. "Well, lets keep going." They did the last part of the arena, got their treasure, and headed down the elevator, into a graveyard.

Mon, 10/31/2011 - 20:12
#27
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Nechrome
Name: Necro Race: Ancient

Name: Necro

Race: Ancient Almirian Crusader

Color: Green with red

Gender: Male

Friendly: Very, very hostile.

Likes: fiends, smishing things with his heavy swords, Almire, Vanaduke

Dislikes: Those people who fought war against Lord Vanaduke, strangers (not those tall guys, but strangers, as in random people he doesn't know), not being able to smish stuff.

Personality: Although from ancient Almire, he is not old at all. For some reason, he hasn't aged a bit since Vanaduke destroyed Almire, and has no memory of what happened between the fall of Almire by Vanaduke to the arrival of the SK. He is an Almirian Crusader, but he doesn't have any of his Crusader Armor anymore, as he threw them away to keep the bad memories about Lord Vanaduke's defeat away. He hates strangers, but has a profound interest in fiends. He feels a sense of duty to protect Almire from the SK, even though the days of Almire are far gone. He haunts the corridors of the Firestorm Citadel, attacking all Knights who invade. The Alpha Team had the luck to miss him, but everyone else, sooner or later, will confront him.

Hobbies: Smishing Knights, monsters, anyone who attacks Almire

Equipment: Khorovod, Jalovec, Blast Bomb, Cobalt Armor, Magic Hood, SHockburst Brandish, Bristling Buckler, Cobalt helm (currently in the AH for sale).

Would you want to die?: No. Thank you very much and have a nice day. It has been very pleasant doing business with you. =D

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 13:26
#28
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Blindshot
well than

Let's make it four that will appear in chapter 3

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 13:40
#29
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Valorai
cool ^^ So far this is my

cool ^^ So far this is my favorite fanfic besides Rise of the heroes.

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 13:42
#30
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Stormgirl
cool

this is my favorite fanfic so far.

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 16:53
#31
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Blindshot
Aww thx that inspires me ^.^

The next chapter will be up soon either today or tomorrow but trust me, I have alot of ideas. :D

Tue, 11/01/2011 - 17:12
#32
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Valorai
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

:D

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 12:40
#33
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Mysticbeam
yay!

guys, dont let this thread sink 2 the bottom of the page!

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 22:04
#34
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Blindshot
Algebra Honers have hard homework D:

Well yea, that's what I get for being good in school last year. But here's the next chapter.

Chapter 3; A Change: 11:34AM

The core, the sealed off section of the Clockworks that is supposed to help power the Skylark once again, is now silent. There are no workers, no engineers, nothing to make the click of buttons nor the sound of feet. Beneath the surface of the hard metal wall that cuts us from going any deeper, is a gathering of monsters… and knights.

Advent, along with Stormer and Doggies, were facing the million of elite monsters that were chosen to be allowed into the core itself. They walked through the crowds, still being a little unsure but the monsters backed up away from them to make a path. At the end they could see five shadowy figures and one thing was for sure, they were HUGE. There was another figure in the middle but it blended in with the shadows so well, they didn't see it until they got close enough.

"Ahh, you must be Advent. Vanaduke have told me much about you, even some things you didn't know," the voice was deep and had a strength to it they might never have heard. "Who are you?" Stormer stepped a bit closer, to try to see him a bit better, but Advent stopped her from getting any closer. "My name is heard all around, in legends, in myths, but you must not remember it so well as you should have. So let me refresh your memory, I am the one who is supposedly, envisioned the Clockworks as it is now and is the king of the gremlins." "You're King Tinkinzar, the 'king of gremlins' part gave it away." Doggies looked at the figure, his eyes showed that he knew it was the king, like the king was an old friend of his. "Why, you really did listen to that Spiral Order of your's, haven't you? Well I admit, knights are smarter than they look but that never cease to amaze me. I am King Tinkinzar, your ruler and nightmare!" He bellowed out his name and cheering was heard from the monsters all around.

The party looked at the monsters and looked back up at Tinkinzar. "I have a message for you Advent, from Vanaduke. He says if you join back with him, you will become a part of the army, a general, and he will forget about you trying to murder him. Besides whatever is in the past is now forgotten." Tinkinzar looked at Advent, certain that he will join them, one way or the other. "No." Advent was looking at his feet and muttered this under his breath. "What was that now?" Tinkinzar asked mockingly. "I said, NO!" Advent shouted now and took a step forward, but was stopped from going any farther by a Knorovod in front of him. "It's ok Necro, he may react any way he wants to react to this." The Crusader, they guessed was Necro, lowered his sword and stepped back.

"So you said no, correct? Than you shall not leave this place alive. Either be prisoners or be in this battle." The group didn't need to talk with each other to know what to say. "Didn't Advent answer already, we said no and that's final." Doggies gripped onto his Final Flourish, just in case the monsters came at them. Then Advent grabbed the two by their wrists and ran down the line of monsters. (Luckily the path wasn't closed so they easily ran through.) "What are you just standing there for?! Get them!!" The king's anger through his voice was heard though out the area and soon monsters ran after them. By the time the monsters ran around a corner, they were gone. But that didn't stop the crowd to ran over each other, all getting pushed and shoved out of the way. A gremlin, with the Crimson Order insignia on its clothes, walked up to Tinkinzar and whispered to him that the knights had disappeared. The king looked down at Necro, who was still standing where he was before, and motioned him to come up to where the king was. "You shall kill those knights before they escape. Focus on Advent, if he is alive he will surely mess up our plans and we don't want to deal with the mess." Nerco nodded, saluted, then ran off into the crowd, jumping on the monsters' heads to get there faster.

It was more than 5 minutes later when they all heard an explosion and smoke risen from where the explosion was. When the smoke cleared, nearly every monster was frozen over with ice, not being able to move, but all kept shouting that they were on fire. Nobody noticed the two figures running out of the core, going onto the elevator, and heading back up to Haven.

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 13:23
#35
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Firemoon
Great story

Great story

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 22:29
#36
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Ztype
Name: Ztype Race: A pet mini

Name: Ztype
Race: A pet mini Grimalkin (the scary monster which only goes away if there is light)
Color:Dark Blue
Gender:Male
Friendly(as in would you help the knights):Yes
Likes:Helping his owner
Dislikes:Helping anyone else but his owner
Personality:A bit frightened of normal sized Grimalkins
Hobbies:Killing to help his owner
Equipment:What ever my owner has
Would you want to die?(Optional):No way but minor injuries

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 13:38
#37
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Stormgirl
nice story

nice story

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 16:53
#38
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Imowor
My Character

Name: Ghigxhalon

Race: Knight

Color (personal color): Light Green

Gender: Male

Friendly, but vicious towards anything that gets in his way

Likes: Ice weapons

Dislikes: Alpha Wolvers, Pesky Devilites

Personality: Funny, Friendly

Equipment: Mighty Cobalt Helm, Armor and Shield, Blizzbrand, Jalovec

Hobbies: Socializing in Training Hall (and of course training)

Dying is a no, but serious injuries are fine for dramatic effect

Wed, 11/02/2011 - 19:10
#39
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Jmtheawesome
>:L

Name: Arus

Race: Gremlin (Crmson Order)

Color: Green

Unfrendly: I hate Knights, alot.

Likes: Other Gremlns, Tinkenzar, Mechanics.

Dislikes: KNIGHTS, LASERS, SIMPLE MACHINES

Hobbies: Waiting in a Deconstruction zone for passing knights. Building weapons.

Dying? No, injuries are fine.

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 00:37
#40
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Softhead
I DIED?

YESSS!!!
Now they have to be worring about me being UNDEAD!!
Ice fire for the win!

I better be back undead(just saying).

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 13:40
#41
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Blindshot
Just a little update...

@Jmtheawesome
3 things i would like to know-

1. Weapon is Endpoint, correct?
2. Should I add any characters from your story, so you won't be lonely?
3. Want to turn rebel or no?

Characters (Total: 12 not including me :D)
Advent
Alma
Dusk
Stormer
Doggies
Mystic
Blue
Will
Necro
Ztype
Ghigxhalon
Arus

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 14:27
#42
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Jmtheawesome
1. Yes, I would like to keep

1. Yes, I would like to keep my Endpoint. :D
2. It's your fanfiction, you choose. :)
3.Rebel against the King? This time, no.

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 18:32
#43
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Nechrome
weapons update. now has a

weapons update. now has a super blast bomb

Thu, 11/03/2011 - 18:43
#44
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Duskfinder
doggies include in urs 2 :3

Now have plasma cap. And fearless rigadoon.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 22:05
#45
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Blindshot
Delays here, delays there

1 day is posting and the next day would be like a writing day. That's what I'm hoping this would turn out. Anyways, enjoy.

Chapter 4; Graveyard Auxiliary: 9:42AM

The air cold and motionless. The normal green mist of the graveyard was gone and everyone saw that, but no one wanted to say anything about it. Walking through the graves, an occasional zombie would pop up every now and then, but was easily sent back to where it belonged. They headed to an intersection with 5 ways they could go. "I choose that way," Dusk went and pointed to the left, the first path. "No, this way," Mystic pointed to the right, the last path. "Look four way leads to certain doom and one leads to certain freedom." Amber than looked at them, hoping they weren't going any further. Apparently when she looked away, they started arguing then Will and Blue tried to pry the two apart. "Umm, little help please!" Amber turned around to see Mystic and Dusk trying to claw each other, Will was pulling Dusk back and Blue was holding Mystic back. Amber walked over to a fire pot and got another one and threw each of them at the two. Dusk got on fire, same as Mystic, but Will and Blue saw it coming and let them go. "Ok, we'll stop now." The two coughed out smoke and flopped down on the ground.

"I think there's someone coming," Blue looked at all the paths and surely, there were mobs of zombies coming at them. "Ahh ****." (yes, yes it is censored) Will looked off to the back and saw more zombies coming. Then there were phantoms coming, but one came up to them and had the Seraphic set on her. "I'm not going to say much but I know the best way to the elevator. Either follow me or you'll meet certain doom." Nobody said anything, the one thing that was on their minds' now is why she wants to help them. Blue answered in the silence "Ok, we'll go, but you better not turn on us." She bared her teeth at the phantom, who was looking at the mobs getting closer and closer. "I won't, I just want the best way out of here and we all know we need each others' help." We were all confused as to why she wanted to leave the graveyard but decided to go with it anyways. "So are you in or out?" "We're in," Will looked over his shoulder and added to his last remake, "Can we go now, they're getting closer by the second."

"Ok, this way is the best," she pointed to the fourth path. They all went up the path, Amber charging until they were close enough that she let the charge go and the zombies where pushed back. Mystic turned into a Trojan then charged into the mob, only to be stuck in the middle of it all, zombies jumping on top him. Dusk charged up his Plasma Capacitor and threw it nearby Mystic. "Take Cover!!" Dusk backed up a bit, as did everyone else so that they didn't get too close to the zombies in the back and the bomb radius.

Mystic heard Dusks' warning and held his shield up, waiting for the charge to go off. Eventually the bomb went off, as so did the zombies on Mystic. "Thanks Dusk." Mystic got on his feet and took out his Gigawatt Pulsar. "Don't just go through it recklessly, work together. Half shoot at the zombies in the back while the other half deal with the ones in the front." They all nodded and Dusk, Mystic, and Will were shooting at the zombies in the back, shocking them as well. Amber, Blue, and Alma were slicing up the zombies in the front. A few minutes later they could see the elevator just a few feet away. "Dusk, Mystic, aim in the front, I'll try to push the ones in the back away." Amber said turning around and charging her Divine Avenger, letting it go at the zombies. It pushed the zombies back farther, giving Dusk and Mystic time to aim in the front and kill the zombies, soon the mob diminished. "Run for it!" Blue yelled before dashing off onto the elevator. Soon everyone got on and Alma pushed the button in time before a zombie jumped on.

The elevator creaked as it descended, then slowed to a stop at the terminal. Everyone walked off and went towards where there were room, Mystic sat down and there were scars from the zombies on his arms and legs. "Here, let me help, I'm a trained medic." Alma said and looked closer at his injuries. Blue walked over and got out her medical pack, gave it to Alma, and sat there either waiting for Alma to tell her to get her something or learning how to fix the injuries. Will was sitting down, polishing his weapons, and waiting to go, Dusk was still looking at Basils' wares, taking his time, and Amber was looking at the gate map, deciding which path was the best and safest. The graveyard run took up the time and they decided that they wait for a bit, to make sure Mystic won't have any problems later on.

"Still wondering if we should even listen to her." Dusk glared at Alma, apparently his stare wasn't strong enough to scare the phantom. "I helped your friend, isn't that enough? Besides that, my name is Alma, what are your names?"
"Dusk."
"Mystic."
"Amber."
"Will."
"Blue."
"We got the introduction down and since Blue joined, it won't be different as a phantom joining." Amber patted on the phantoms' back, treating her like a friend. "Well, oh right than. But can we go now, I'm feeling fine now." Mystic walked over to the elevator and waved his hands to tell us to get on. "Is he good to go?" Blue went over to Alma and asked. "He should be fine if he doesn't strain himself too much, other than that, he's good to go." Alma sighed and walked towards the elevator. "Lets go now before it changes." Amber picked up her things and walked towards the elevator. Blue pushed the button and down, down they went, longer than any other descend into the Clockworks before.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 07:11
#46
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Imowor
????

Will Me, Arus, and Ztype be in the next one?

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 07:50
#47
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Blindshot
Different point of view

I'll probably will, so that at least everyone is in the story now. Should be done tonight if I don't have alot of things planned.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 15:31
#48
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Duskfinder
/sigh

Always comes down to the pots doesnt it?

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 17:44
#49
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Imowor
Weapons Update: DTB

I now have a Dark Thorn Blade in edition to the Blizzbrand and Jalovec.

Sat, 11/05/2011 - 19:34
#50
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Firemoon
:)

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