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Fri, 12/23/2011 - 01:36
Thotus's picture
Thotus

"No. It's happening again."

>: User has initialized SPIRAL KNIGHTS.

No, Tate cried. He sat next to Yemai, holding her hand. Haven looked so beautiful at sunset. Yemai squeezed Tate's hand once again, fearful. He looked at her; her, at him. Their eyes met for a brief moment, sad and worrisome. It was Yemai who broke their gazes. It had come again. There was not a time when a day was not interrupted by the User. The User was always after him, wanting his Spiral Knight everyday to roam around in the Clockworks. Tate still felt the abuse he had taken in his system, having shut on and off as the User kept dying and reviving. Dying, and dying, and dying, and dying. He would not remember, he could not remember things so clearly anymore. Memory became faded, day after day, as he kept dying...

>: Username: jackaljester22

"No," Yemai whispered. Her voice was quivering. Sad and small, she sat silently in horror. She could not stop repeating the word in her head. "No," she said again.

>: Password: ********

Tate looked up at Yemai when he felt her hand shaking. Over the waves, he could feel her sorrow. She did not try to hide it--it pained him that she did not. She broadcasted every single feeling of despair, disgust, and dismay over the air waves, leaving it all for Tate to absorb. Worst of all, he could feel her break inside. It was no matter that they were machines--there was a ghost in the machine, a living ghost that could feel, live... and die. She was dying. Truly.

>: Username match? YES
>: Password match? YES

Tate felt the panic, the anxiety build inside him. How long had it been since the last log-in? The answer came instantly as his program received the information from a lightning-fast quarry--three hours. The log-ins were getting more frequent. First, when the User first took control of Tate, it was a week. Then, a day, twenty-two hours, fourteen hours, eight hours, four hours... and now three. Three!, Tate thought. Why? Why would the User begin logging in more frequently?! Unlike other games, Users would log in less frequently, the Three Rings Code told him. The Code was always right, the Code said. Three Rings, the creator of the world, was written to have said it itself. All of its instructions and guidelines were given to in-game characters, certain sections given to the certain appropriate entities in Cradle. It was never wrong; how could a creator not know his own creation? Yet, the Code was wrong--Users obsessively began to play more, control more, enslave more and more and more and more.

>: Loading...

Users would create an account, a bridge between Cradle (or, rather, the Spiral Knights' World) and their world through the great Three Rings. Through it, these "humans" would be able to call a new Spiral Knight out of the depths of code, and call on a new life to serve inside it. By some wonder, from birth, the machines were given souls. Tate bitterly wondered if there were other worlds with other people besides these "humans;" they were probably no better off. It was rumored that there were many other worlds that were created for the... the... their pleasure, their sick pleasure. Their sick pleasure, Tate echoed in his mind. THEIR SICK PLEASURE!

>: Character selection: ?

Tate froze, and looked at... who? Ye... Ye-Yemai! That was right, Tate thought. Tate lowered his eyes in sadness, realizing he was unable to remember her name. He was losing it. She was his love, wasn't she? She was unable to cry. "She" was not a she, and "she" had no eyes. No, they were just "soulless" machines, weren't they? Yet, the sounds that she made were all the same, and told the same emotions as any other soul.

Tate hugged Yemai hard and fast. She was startled, but it was what she needed. He never had told her what was needed to be told.

Tate opened his metal mouth with deep grief.

>: Character selection: Tate

"I am lost."

The girl looked up at Tate, shocked. Tate was satisfied, but hated himself for not telling her sooner. Now, he thought, the waves would do the rest.

Tate closed his eyes, his consciousness fading away easier than all the times before.

>: Logging in...

Yemai realized what Tate had meant. He was not simply lost, but he was lost... to her.

She screamed. She stopped only when Tate's eyes opened again, this time, truly soulless, ready to delve into the Clockworks.

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 21:31
#1
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
D:

This...story...so...sad....

Y!?

Y U MAKE ME FEEL GUILTY FOR LOGGING ON MY KNIGHT NAO!?

I'm sorry Psychodestroyer! You know I try and make you take as little damage as possible! I'm careful! Cmon! We soloed JK mo deaths! We even completed rooms without damage!

Y U DO THIS TO ME!?

I'M SORRY PSYCHODESTROYER!!!

WAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 05:13
#2
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
D: NNNNUUUUUUUUU

What psycho said...

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 05:14
#3
Duskfinder's picture
Duskfinder
On the bright side , amazing

On the bright side , amazing story

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 10:58
#4
Za-Ck's picture
Za-Ck
Wow

Quite a dark portrayal of the game :(
Very original idea though, and I must say I am very impressed with it.

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 12:51
#5
Psychodestroyer's picture
Psychodestroyer
Yea

I must say, great story.

But it DID make me feel guilty :/

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 15:03
#6
Thotus's picture
Thotus
Thanks!

Thanks!

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 15:04
#7
Valorai's picture
Valorai
*Cries* WHAT HAVE I DONE?!

*Cries* WHAT HAVE I DONE?! HOW COULD I? IM SO SORRY ATGATG!!!!!

Oh crap, my mist is probably at 100 right now, I have to KILL DA RABIB SNARBOLAX!!!

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 17:46
#8
Dark-Flare's picture
Dark-Flare
D':

WHHHYYYYY?!?!?!? I DIDN"T KNOW!!! IM SORRY!!!!!!!!!

Great story!!!! +10

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 18:08
#9
Softhead's picture
Softhead
Meh

Nice story.

I don't feel remorse.

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 19:36
#10
Blindshot's picture
Blindshot
I love it! Great

But it's sad at the same time.

I SORRY FOR ALL I'VE DONE, ALL THE TIMES THAT BLINDSHOT DIED....... I'M SORRY!!

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 04:37
#11
Shue-Donnym's picture
Shue-Donnym
Wat

My slaves have not reached their quota yet.

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 06:56
#12
Valorai's picture
Valorai
MANIAC

._.

Everyone should probably stay away from Xplad....

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 08:46
#13
Softhead's picture
Softhead
I still don't feel remorse.

Poor guy. And his spiral character. The dude get amesia.

I feel no remorse for my actions with Atrumvindex. In other words:
I don't feel sorry!

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 11:29
#14
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Ever watch starwars?

He logs in ONLY every 3 hours?

"I find his lack of log ins... Disturbing..."

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 13:57
#15
Gimpyo's picture
Gimpyo
Gimpyo has a hard shell, he

Gimpyo has a hard shell, he can take the abuse I give him on a half-hourly bases, and, should he make it through, I reward him. He now has a nice snarby coat and cap. Next is that queen's head. Get up my little bombing soldier, it's time to work again.

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 14:51
#16
Mysticbeam's picture
Mysticbeam
NUUUU

im sorry Mysticbeam :(

i did not realize O.O

i promise to not die as much, not set myself on fire with the FoV on purpose, and not be mean to players since they might be your friends :S

on the other hand, great story! :D

Sun, 12/25/2011 - 00:02
#17
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Shadownox
I'm sorry, Shadownox. DX But

I'm sorry, Shadownox. DX

But i crafted a new Ash Tail Coat fro you today, right? i'm always upgrading u! and i dont log on very often! i will not die very much.. okay?

Sat, 12/31/2011 - 01:27
#18
Thotus's picture
Thotus
OH YES! TY!

Thanks guys!

Sat, 12/31/2011 - 12:28
#19
Faronel's picture
Faronel
Good thing I follow the

Good thing I follow the Spiral Knight's creed: "A knight need not have courage, only valance." (No, not the gun) Meaning that if I'm low on health, I run like MY life depends on it.

I do love this story, though. Quite creative.

Sun, 01/01/2012 - 19:17
#20
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
O teh Nooes!

I'm so sorry! DX
Isis, we can can get through this together! You just have to tell me about your feelings! We can help each other!

Great story :D

Thu, 01/05/2012 - 11:21
#21
Fallconn's picture
Fallconn
:P

would you be offended if i said "lame"?

Sun, 01/08/2012 - 15:01
#22
Aroxian's picture
Aroxian
DEAL WITH IT AROXIAN. I ARE

DEAL WITH IT AROXIAN. I ARE GOING TO LOG ON AND YOU ARE GOING TO BE PLEASED ABOUT IT.

Thu, 02/09/2012 - 03:31
#23
Thotus's picture
Thotus
LOL

I remember making this. Thanks guys!

Wed, 03/21/2012 - 05:06
#24
Tevokkia's picture
Tevokkia
... not going to apologize to my Knight, though.

Someone mentioned this story to me yesterday and I had to find it. How depressing! It was very good, though; I do enjoy a well-written tragedy.

Mon, 08/12/2013 - 21:02
#25
Valorai's picture
Valorai
:D

This was fun. it deserves to be bumped. :D

Sun, 01/12/2014 - 11:31
#26
Malkalack's picture
Malkalack
Swag IS a virtue

Nooo, it deserved to be DOUBLE BUMBPED! DAT NECROBUMPYNESS IS FUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN AS BACON

Sun, 01/12/2014 - 11:53
#27
Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
...

And no, mass necro-ing threads is not going to make your own thread the most popular and active. If you are going to bump something, don't necro for the hell of it.

Mon, 01/13/2014 - 23:03
#28
Skayeth's picture
Skayeth
This..

is tragic. Needs to be turned into the first SK romance book.

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