Spiral Knights - Chapter 1:Skylark down!

Chapter 1:Skylark down!

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Sun, 02/12/2012 - 21:05

Kaijuhunter

Ok hi. This is my new SK fanfic. The three main characters(for now) are a young knight named Kaigen, a 17 year old girl named Angela, and her boyfriend, a 17 year old archangel named Tsuna. Angela and Tsuna's real names are Fiore and Seinaru. This story takes place on the Spiral Knights original planet, then goes to Cradle. Tsuna's equipment is a skolver coat, a modified valkyrie helm(ill go into the details of the helm later), an argent peacemaker, Wildhunting blade, and grey owlite shield. Angela has an average spiral Pigtail helm, a fearless rigadoon, a mighty defender, and a Wolver coat. Kaigen is armed with an aegis, azure guardian helm, mighty cobalt armor, a valiance, and an ascended calibur. Ok enough talk. Here is my story. Btw this chapter is from the first person view of Angela.

Chapter 1:Skylark down!

I was enjoying a cup of coco with my boyfriend Tsuna when i was interrupted by a cry coming from the main deck. I heard. "Mayday,mayday! The ships engines are failing! All knights get out! Everyone, evacuate! Kozma, Brinks, everyone evacuate!" Suddenly, a young knight bursted into my room. Hehad dark brown hair and black eyes. He yelled at Tsuna and I " Come on, we gotta get out! The Skylarks engines have failed!" Tsuna merely nodded at me. Today was the anniversary of the day i first met him. The young knight stared at us and said, "Come on, you idiot lovebirds! We gotta get out!" Suddenly, there was a crash. Obviously, the Skylark was going to crash. I nodded at the knight and he led us to the escape pod room. The place was full of Spiral knights just like me, all rushing into pods and blasting off towards the nearest planet. I spotted my friends Kozma and Brinks, but they jumped into a pod and blasted away. Suddenly, there was a roar. I could tell that Tsuna was terrified, even though he hid his expression. The young knight said to us, "No... Its him... The bane of the spiral order... The firey demon... LORD VANADUKE IS HERE!"

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 13:49

Kaijuhunter

Stuff

Ok im going to ask ppl to sign up for this story. If your one of the first 10 ppl to fill out this form, u will be in my fanfic!
Heres the form.

Name of character:
Personality:
Age of character:
Gender of character:
Equipment:
Faction(i.e. spiral order, warriors of almire, etc.):
Appearance of character:
Good or evil?
Race of character(spiral knight, snarby, archangel etc.):

There, thats the form!

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 15:47

Valorai

Name: Blue Personality:

Name: Blue
Personality: Fun-loving happy, friendly
Age: well........ in our years: perhaps 16 years
Gender: Female
Equipment: Angelic set heavy plate shield levithan blade
Faction: None
Appearence: um.... look at equipment
GOOD!
Race: Knighty\

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 17:12

Kaijuhunter

Ok ty its a pretty good suggestion

Nice idea, Ill try that one out. Im thinking of making Blue Seinaru's friend. Waddya think? Just tell me if u want her in a different role

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 18:01

Valorai

Im fine with anything

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 14:36

Kaijuhunter

Here ya go

Heres the next chapter of my story. In this one ill be introducing Tsuna's best friend Blue. Ok so this chapter is from Tsuna's view. Ok heres the next part.

Chapter 2: Flames of Rage

I stared at the young knight, unsure if he was joking. Lord Vanaduke was an extremely powerful foe, and there was no way he could have gotten on this ship. I had heard about how powerful he was.... A foe who nearly killed my friend... It was like it happened yesterday.... I was on a strike team... The best of the best.
I was with my friends... Blue, Striker, Angela, and Ace. Striker was the heavy hitter of the group. He always had his trusty Divine Avenger with him. He wore vog cub armor and cap. He also had swiftstrike buckler, which made his already powerful Divine avenger also have blinding speed.
Angela had her usual pigtailed helm, fearless rigadoon, mighty defender and wolver coat on.
Ace was the quick hitter, or the fastest one on the group. He had a dread venom striker, a Fang of vog, and a Snarbolax set. He never had shields, and he usually used dual swords.
My best friend Blue had her usual angelic set, heavy plate shield, and a Leviathan given to her by Kozma. I was the most powerful of the group, the leader. I had a Skolver coat, grey owlite shield, argent peacemaker, wild hunting blade, and a golden valkyrie helm with blue wings on the side. My white wings shimmered with light, and my orange eyes blazed with fury. We of the Spiral Order made a pact with the kingdom of Almire centuries ago about how we would coexist in peace. Months ago the Almirians had broken that pact and attacked our troops. We vowed never to trust them again, and declared war on Almire. The palace was blazing with fire. There were dead bodies everywhere. I was completely enraged. These Almirians... They killed my fellow knights.... Angela was distraught at the sight of one body. It was her little brother... A knight only 10 years old. Angela was weeping, and even the usually steely hearted Striker was teary eyed. My orange eyes blazed with fury, and i heard a roar from the castle. There was an explosion, and more dead knights were tossed into the air. I couldnt believe it. This... This was a massacre... Worse than any other, the killing of innocent people who were merely trying to make a living, or just trying to save their nation. This was unforgivable... I turned to my friends and said "This is the carnage our fellow knights have seen. They have experience the pain you feel now... Its all because of these Almirians... So... I will destroy Vanaduke and all of Almire. Now... WHO'S WITH ME?!?" We all yelled in unison "VANADUKE WILL DIE AT THE HANDS OF THE SPIRAL KNIGHTS!!! What we didn't know, however, was that when we got there, there would be nothing... Nothing but flames... The flames of Almire

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 18:51

Kaijuhunter

9 more spots!

Ok here ya go! Theres only 9 more spots left in my character regisration! Sign up quick! I may need to change your character a bit, so tell me if theres any part you want to be the same! Heres the regisration form!

Name of character:
Age of character:
Race of character(monster, Spiral Knight, Almirian Knight, etc.):
Good or evil?
Personality:
Equipment(gear, weapons included):
Appearance(eye color, hair, etc):
Background/history:

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:04

Isisdelltion

Vot

Name of character: Vot
Personality: Nice, but a tad weird. Leads without really trying.
Age of character: 22 (In our years)
Gender of character: Male
Equipment: Mighty Cobalt Helm, Azure Guardian Armor, Ascended Cali, no shield
Faction: Spiral Order
Appearance of character: Cobalt eyes color, Spiral knights have hair?
Good
Race of character: Spiral Knight

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:26

Kaijuhunter

Chapter 3

This is an example my friend made, and i will be using it in my story. This is his guy

Name:Ares
Gender:Male
Age:15
Personality:Fighter,Listener
Fears:Nothing except himself
Weapons:Combuster,and Volcanic Pepperbox,also Fang of Vog
Armor:Vog Cub Set
Appearance:Red hair,Blazing red eyes, bloodstained armor
Background/history:Has been through a lot in his past.Lost his father in a war and determined to kill every one of the knights that killed his father and kill the knight who killed his father last.Unfortunately he got damaged when he tried to kill the final knight.When a servant for the king found him and raised him until she found Ares' father but she does not know that his father died 5 years ago.Now after his stepmom died when an enemy tried to invade the castle of the king .Now that he found Angela and Tsuna he asked them to help him kill the knight who killed his father.
Pets(optional):Snarbolax

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:26

Kaijuhunter

Chapter 3

This is an example my friend made, and i will be using it in my story. This is his guy

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:30

#10

Kaijuhunter

Ares the Flame

This is an example my friend made, and i will be using it in my story. This is his guy

Name:Ares
Gender:Male

Age:15

Personality:Fighter,Rash, Loyal

Fears:Nothing except himself

Weapons:Combuster,and Volcanic Pepperbox,also Fang of Vog

Armor:Vog Cub Set

Appearance:Red hair,Blazing red eyes, bloodstained armor

Background/history:Has been through a lot in his past.Lost his father in a war and determined to kill the knights that killed his father. Unfortunately he got damaged when he tried to kill the final knight.When a servant for the king found him and raised him until she found Ares' father but she does not know that his father died 5 years ago.Now after his stepmom died when an enemy tried to invade the castle of the king .Soon he found Angela and Tsuna's strike team and he asked them to help him kill the knight who killed his father.
Pets(optional):Snarbolax

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:33

#11

Kaijuhunter

Nice character tell me what roll ud like him to be. Im thinking of making him Ace's bro. Waddya think

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 19:35

#12

Kaijuhunter

Now 7

Ok there are only 7 spots left! Remember to fill in the form if u want ur guy in my story

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 20:05

#13

Sanin

*yawns*

Name of character: Kana

Personality: wise, has a loving-heart, very kind, like to fight but not to kill. A master with the sword

Age of character:15

Gender of character:Female

Equipment:Crest of Almire (very important), FoV, Fallen Set, Argent Peacemaker

Faction: "Almirian Cusader" (youngest one in Almire history)

Appearance of character: Yellow, wears divine stranger hat and wolver coat as costume.

Good!

Race of character: Almirian

History: Kana was born into the royal family of Almire (Vanaduke's twin sister). Like Vanaduke, Kana is very proud of Almire and a talented fighter, she then became the youngest Almirian Cusader. Kana was also very good friends with the Sprites, the Sprites soon then blessed Kana with their magic water that made her stay her age forever. Kana was the only survivor after Vanaduke wiped out Almire. Now the young Kana likes to help and advice knights that are in need.

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 20:09

#14

Kaijuhunter

Kool

Hahahha! Nice character! Pretty cool ill use it! Is it ok if i make her like a close friend if the Almirian princess?

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 20:11

#15

Kaijuhunter

6 spots!

6 spots left!

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 20:51

#16

Kaijuhunter

Almirian princess

Heres chapter 3! This is where 4 new characters come in! Their names are Aria,Ares,Vot. And Kana! Enjoy my story, and please suggest characters and how to make this story better! Btw this is from the first person view of Blue, the brains of the group.

Chapter 3: Aria, princess of Almire, vs Vanaduke!

I stared at Tsuna, and i saw a rage in his eyes that i have never seen before. For the first time in my life, I understood how much he had gone through. He had seen his fellow knights ripped apart, and had cut his enemies to shreds with his swords. But even if he avenged them, they would never return to this world, never see the warm smile of Tsuna whenever he was surrounded by friends. I saw the rage... The sadness that burned in his eyes... I knew that he would be the key to the downfall of the evil Lord Vanaduke... But I couldnt say that. It would sound like I thought of him only as a toy... He was my best friend... I sighed. He stared at us and said "VANADUKE WILL DIE AT THE HANDS OF THE SPIRAL KNIGHTS! HE WILL PAY FOR WHAT HE HAS DONE! Now, WHOS WITH ME?!?" We all yelled"SPIRAL KNIGHTS! WE WILL STAND TOGETHER! ALL FOR ONE... AND ONE FOR ALL!" We charged at the castle, and I knew that however this war ended... However we die, or however we survive... We would do it together.

(this is now from the view of Aria)

I sighed and stared out the window. I looked behind myself,and my two friends were behind me, shuffling their feet. There was a group of Knights in front of them, the Imperial Guard of Almire. My friend Kana was dressed in an Angelic set, and scratched her head nervously. She glanced over to me and said "Princess... We cant hold Vanaduke's forces off any longer... Im sorry. He is due to break through the barrier in 1 hour... At the best. At the worst... He will get here in 10 minutes.*sigh* Im sorry... But even our greatest warrior, Ares can't hold out any longer..." I smiled at her and said,"dont worry my friend, we will prevail. Lord Vanaduke will never defeat us... We will not lose to him." The Knights, Kana, and i lifted our shields and cheered. I stared out the window at the figure of Vanaduke fighting our forces. "Prepare yourself, Bane of Almire... For today, we will reclaim our kingdom."

Hope you like this, please comment and suggest how to get it better!

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 21:58

#17

Sanin

this is going pretty well, um.... one request: can u change Kana's "Angelic set" into the "Fallen Set" plz.

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 01:11

#18

Frostrex

Name of character:

Name of character: Frostrex
Personality: Rather angry at times and always wants to get everything he wants.
Age of character: 36
Gender of character: Male
Equipment: Azure Guardian Armour, Mighty Cobalt Helm, BlizzardHale(Read Spiralstory), Furzor(Shield, read To Adventure Down)
Faction(i.e. spiral order, warriors of almire, etc.): Regnum Glacies
Appearance of character: Dark Blue personal colour
Good or evil? Evil
Race of character:Knight

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 06:25

#19

Kaijuhunter

Ok good character suggestion

Ok good character suggestion ill try to have him later in my story as he fits perfectly into one of my upcoming chapters. Keep up the comments, and thnx for the good ratings!

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 06:26

#20

Kaijuhunter

Lol ok ill change it once i

Lol ok ill change it once i get to the special chapter in my story! Ull c

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 14:52

#21

Softhead

I have to criticize......

Why is the text so blocky? People created paragraphs for a reason. I feel not bothered to read.

Then we got the rule, if a new speaker is talking, do their text on the next line.

Some grammar problems (ie in chapter 1, I saw "hehad". you must mean 'he had'. (take these into concideration!)

(my nitcpicks)Also, Vana was on a different planet from the Spiral Knights. The Almirians had their own problems(the two powerful nations) and the Core exploding was the problem with the fall of the Skylark. Why would HQ cover it up if several knights saw it firsthand?

O_o. And Finally, the Amirians were all dead as they were revived as Slags(from obversation).

Please take the non nitpicks in consideration and the nitpicks, you can decide.

~Atrumvindex/Adventusvindex.

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 14:55

#22

Kaijuhunter

Lol ty i sont know to well

Lol ty i dont know to well the story of Almire, but this IS a fanfic, right? Plus ive seen the issues with the text, and i know. So ty for the observation

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 15:28

#23

Softhead

But I have a urge....

Names: Fragor and Butio
Age of characters: 12 (^_^)
Race of character(monster, Spiral Knight, Almirian Knight, etc.): Knights.
Good or evil: Good
Personality: Both trigger happy bombers. Mischevious, Funny, cunning
Equipment(gear, weapons included): All bombs. Butio has Stagger Storm, Fiery Atominizer, Venom Veiler, Shivermist Buster. Butio's armour is a Volcanic set with a Crest of Almire he got from a Almirian he beat in a match. Fragor, if walking would use Nitronome, Dark Briar Barrage, Graviton and a Ionized Salt Bomb with a Ctr Vh. She also wears(in general) a mad Bomber set with a Ironmight Plate shield.
Appearance(eye color, hair, etc): Fragor has a shade of orange that resembles the gremlin coloured fur. Butio has a shade of grey that resembles a Bone of a slag zombie. Fragor has a fanny box filled with all of the bombs. They are both conjoined by the back. Butio always is the one walking.
Background/history: Two famous twins that became famous due to their disabality. They became skilled bombers due to Butio/Fragor carring the other and they both throw and charge bombs tho deciamate enemies. When the Skylark fell, they got more bombs from the strangers, soon becoming one of the best bombers of all time.
Gender: Butio is male, Fragor is Female.

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 15:35

#24

Softhead

The lore of Almire is

The lore of Almire is here.

http://wiki.spiralknights.com/Firestorm_Citadel

Also, fanfics are in the universe of the object they are based one. The lore is part of the universe.

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 18:08

#25

Kaijuhunter

Ty for the info, ill try to incorporate it into the story. Perhaps in some sort of flashback?

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 18:36

#26

Kaijuhunter

Chapter 4: Enter the Citadel

Heres chapter 4! Plz forgive me for any text mistakes. Btw this is from a new characters view. His name is Ares and he is one of the greatest Almirian warriors ever to live. ENJOY!

Chapter 4: Enter the Citadel

I looked around the room in horror. Blazing bodies... Everywhere. Aria... All the other Almirians... All dead. The throne was smashed to bits... Burning. There was a Fallen Helm on the floor burning... And Aria... Only a charred Crest of Almire and an Argent Peacemaker was left. She NEVER left those things alone... Unless... No. I couldn't bring myself to believe it. Broken Almirian weapons littered the rug of the throne room. And where the proud Flag of Almire used to be... There was a firey banner... With Vanaduke's crest on it. I was furious with myself, with Vanaduke, with life. I remembered how Vanaduke had once been the gracious, kind king of Almire... I had once served under him... But he killed my family, and now he killed my friends. I could feel rage build up in my heart. I screamed, a horrible, loud roar."VANADUKE! I WILL KILL YOU FOR THIS!" Suddenly there was a deafening roar, and a huge jagged hole suddenly appeared. From inside, a thunderous voice boomed, "Kill me? You make me laugh, little knight. If you truly believe you can defeat me, then enter my realm... Enter... THE FIRESTORM CITADEL!"

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 21:35

#27

Sanin

um..............

Kaijuhunter, ur story almost made me bite my finger off..... good job :)

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 06:11

#28

Kaijuhunter

Thanks!

Ty sanin, and plz continue to read my stories!

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 08:27

#29

Emostabe

'Ello 'ello 'ello!

Name of character: Mello
Personality: Concerned mainly with the safety of Haven.
Age of character: Acts mid-twenties.
Gender of character: Unknown, but behaves male.
Equipment: Carries Deconstructors. No armor, but is really quite tough (think level 1 4*.)
Faction: Stranger
Appearance of character: Tall, mask like Rudkin (http://wiki.spiralknights.com/File:Rudkin-Mugshot.png), a hat like Bootshzue (http://wiki.spiralknights.com/File:Bootshuze-Mugshot.png), a long brown coat.
Good or evil? Neutral.
Race of character(spiral knight, snarby, archangel etc.): Stranger.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:01

#30

Kaijuhunter

Nice character. Ok ill use him,

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:21

#31

Kaijuhunter

Ok heres chapter 5! Plz enjoy

Ok heres chapter 5! Plz enjoy and continue to comment, rate, and submit character suggestions! Only 4 more submission spots left! This is the cstandoff between Ares, one of the greatest Almirian warriors, and Lord Vanaduke himself. Chapter 6 will be the actual battle. ENJOY!

Chapter 5: Vanaduke and Ares standoff! Battle to the death!

I stared into the huge black hole, and I knew Vanaduke was there. I felt a warm feeling on my back and when I turned around, my sword, shield, and armor were all glowing with a blue flame. I had heard of this flame, one that can give the wielder immense power if used for good. I stared at my Fang of Vog, then jumped into the hole. I fell for almost ten minutes, and finally i crashed into the ground. I stared around the area, and the entire place was like a blazing inferno. But in the center of the flame, about a mile away from me, I saw a huge palace with gleaming tapestries and walls that were fire. I knew it. I was here... I had entered the Firestorm Citadel.
I sprinted towards the castle of fire, and the flames emanating from my equipment started to glow with a dangerous light. Finally, I entered the palace. There were burning pictures of the kings of other lands, but the pictures of Almirian royalty were completely intact, even gleaming beautifully. I could not be distracted. I ran towards the throne and sitting in it was none other than Vanaduke himself. His mask was frozen in a twisted smile, and his hands were giant claws. Fiery wings and spikes sprouted from his mauled back. His once proud Almirian armor was a dreadful black color. I stared at him and took out my two main weapons: my Combuster and the Fang of Vog. I stared at Vanaduke with murderous rage and said "This is it, Vanaduke. I have only one goal. You. And me. To the finish."
Vanaduke laughed and a huge red sword, similar in appearance to a Gran Faust, appeared out of thin air. He raced at me, and I knew this would be our final battle. I knew... I could not lose.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:25

#32

Kaijuhunter

Here

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Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:25

#33

Kaijuhunter

Here

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Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:25

#34

Kaijuhunter

Here

Only 3 spots left! Remember to fill out the form to get ur character in my story!

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Wed, 02/15/2012 - 22:04

#35

Kaijuhunter

*Ace and Tsuna drink coco*

Hey these r good suggestions and i will use them later in the story. I have some questions for you guys though.

@Frostrex: would u like ur guy to be the leader of the Regnium Glacies group? Becuz that name is perfect for the enemies in a later part of this story! Btw can i tweak his name as "Rex" insted of Frostrex? Sounds a bit more realistic...

@Emostabe: ok how about if ur guy is like the leader of the Spiral Knights external advisor group? The strangers collect info, as many people buy from them and give that info to the Order? If u want Mello in a different role, please notify me.

@Atrum: so, can these twins be like the leaders of the Order's elite bomber squad? Please tell me if youd like for one to die, since one part involves a bomber dieing, and it can only be a bomber who dies... It has to do with why they die. Or perhaps one suffers an injury, thus splitting their bodies appart, and therefore they can fight as two different Knights? Plz notify me if you want a change.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 22:09

#36

Softhead

0_o

Um..... To be seperated. They would then fall out of sync. They work well as a team. If they are removed, they both die.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 00:04

#37

Frostrex

Yeah

Meh.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 02:02

#38

Emostabe

Sounds good.

But I've always wanted to see (or at least read about) Strangers in action.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 02:02

#39

Emostabe

Sounds good.

But I've always wanted to see (or at least read about) Strangers in action.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 06:15

#40

Kaijuhunter

Sure, sure

Kk, one more thing, emostabe Ur stranger will still see action, but his team is also like stealth, so he can ambush the enemy... And Atrum, im fine with that. I wont make their bodies seperate

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 06:17

#41

Kaijuhunter

Ace staresat u

Ok i gtg to school be back in a few hours... Btw expect chapter 6 soon!

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 14:34

#42

Kaijuhunter

Here it is! The long awaited

Here it is! The long awaited battle between Ares and the former king of Almire, Lord vanduke himself! Plz rate, comment, suggest characters, and ENJOY!

Chapter 6: Ares vs Vanaduke! The clash for Almire begins!

Vanaduke stared at me with absolute hatred, and I returned the favor. This... Thing had once killed my father, destroyed my home, and now my friend Kana was dead because of him. And Aria... I couldn't take it anymore. I charged towards Vanaduke, with my Combuster charged and ready to strike. I slashed down on Vanaduke, but he intercepted me. But I still had a free hand. I swung down my Fang of Vog towards his head and he crashed backwards into the fiery throne. I grabbed him and threw him outside. My Vog armor now had rockets on the shoes and guns on the arms. I used them to propel myself above him, and started to barrage him with fire blasts from the gauntlet/gun attached to my armor. Then I slashed about 100 times with my Vog sword, and slammed him into the ground with a final strike from my Combuster. Vanaduke went hurdling down towards the ground. I raced towards him and delivered a coup de grace blow into his stomach with both of my swords and kicked him into the lava surrounding the castle.
I couldn't believe it. Vanaduke had killed so many people, yet I had defeated him in a mere 57 seconds. I walked away, but suddenly a hand grabbed me. Vanaduke was melting slowly, but most of his body above the hips and his clawed hands were still intact. He said to me "No... Please don't. Don't leave me to die. Please..." Rage started to build up even more inside me. He had done all of this, yet he expected me to save him? HA! Fat chance! I stared him directly in the eyes and said "You... You did this. I will not forgive you, Vanaduke. You should feel the pain that my friends, my family, and my entire nation felt when you destroyed them with your cursed touch. I will not forgive you. Now die!" I stabbed my Fang of Vog directly into his hand, and Vanaduke went tumbling down into the lava. I slowly walked away, tears in my eyes. This was what it was like... To kill. I cried. My friends would never come back... I let out a frustrating cry, letting the lava overflow on top of me, letting it melt me apart... I smiled. I would see my friends again, soon... Soon...

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 14:52

#43

Valorai

WOAH

0_0

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 20:51

#44

Kaijuhunter

Hey guys expect to c chapter

Hey guys expect to c chapter 1 of the new arc! This is the end of the Clash for Almire arc, and now we go into the Glaciaton Arc! Their are some new characters here named: Vot,Rex, Butio, Fragor,Mello, and Aron. Here it is! Its from the view of Striker, the heavy hitter of the group.

Chapter 1: Crashing... Again.

Wow... Im starting to lose faith in these engineers. A couple years back, the Spiral Knights had crashed into Cradle because the Core of the Skylark had exploded. Now the engines have failed... *sigh* I gazed at Tsuna, the proud leader of our strike team. He seemed so scared, and I almost laughed. He was supposed to be the fearless leader, but i guess even archangels like him get spooked once in a while... Besides, he was probably only an infant compared to other angels... But I knew why he was spooked. Vanaduke... If he had come back, then that would be very bad news for the Order.
I stared at the three young knights who we managed to save from Almire before we had to board the Skylark. We had found them all lying in the palace, very badly injured. We took them in, and eventually they warmed up to us. They had even told us their names.
The eldest one, who was 17, was named Aria, and she supposedly used to be the Almirian Princess. She had a regal, but kind look on her face, but her eyes blazed with fury, as if challenging anyon to attack her. She wore Pig Tailed Helm just like Angela, but had a small tiara on top. She had a crest of Almire and an Argent peacemaker. Somehow, she even had a gun similar in appearance to the Spiral Order's own Valiance.
The two other knights were both 15. Their names were Ares and Kana. Ares had an entire Vog set on, and he spooked even Angela, who was usually the nicest one of our team. His Fang of Vog was an odd blue color instead of the usual red and orange. The flames on his armor and sword were all blue, and even fiercer than a normal Vog set... I wondered how that happened.
Kana had an argent peacemaker and a Crest of Almire shield. She also had a Fallen set and a Fang of Vog that was yellow instead of red. I was stumped. How did they get these strange weapons? Well, what really surprised me about Kana was that she was just like Angela. The two girls had been chattering for days on the ship, and I could barely stand it... Even Tsuna, who was tolerant of almost anything, had occasionally covered his ears when he heard Kana and Angela. I could understand him... Once those two started talking, they would never, EVER shut up. Now that they heard that the Skylark was going to crash, they quickly ushered all of us into an escape pod about the size of a minivan. My brother Kaigen hopped into the pod with us, tapped some buttons, and we blasted off.
I could see other Knights climbing into pods and rocketing towards the nearest planet. Right when the last pod wasat a safe distance from the Skylark, it promptly exploded, leaving no trace. After about ten minutes, the pod smashed into the ground of the nearest planet. I climbed out first and stared at the landscape around me. It was all ice, ice, and ice. Huge glaciers dotted the horizon, and I didn't see anything but a polar icecap where ever I looked.
Suddenly, a group of knights in white armor surrounded us, all on top of frigid ice horses. They were armed with huge white lances and guns that i had never seen before. Their guns looked somewhat familiar. I had once read about how years before the Order was created, humans used weapons known as "rifles". These guns, however were probably more powerful than any rifle made in the old days. Tsuna and the othersjumped behind me, their weapons at the ready. Suddenly another knight riding on an icy dragon came up to us. He had a regal expression and wore an icy mighty cobalt set with a cracked clear crown on top. His shield was clear white. His sword was made of pure absolute zero ice, and Ace finally said what everyone was thinking. "Oh crap!"

Fri, 02/17/2012 - 15:26

#45

Kaijuhunter

Ok im almost done with

Ok im almost done with chapter 2! Plz continue to rate, read, and suggest new characters! Remember to fill in this form to get them in. Btw you can have monsetres like wolvers as characters. And I'm ok with some evil guys ideas. I need a lot of variety, as a whole group of honorable, chivalrous knights is not too interesting if theres no villains to kill them! Ill need some really good characters for this story... I cant promise to put all of them in... And there are not too many spots left... But Heres the form.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Armor:
Color:
Bio/history:
Shields(optional):
Weapons:
Race(spiralian, wolver, stranger, etc.):
Twist degree:
Expendability:

There ya go! Please enjoy!

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 07:06

#46

Valorai

Name: Emerald Age: 16 Gender:

Name: Emerald
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Armor: Seraphic set
Color: Dark blue
Bio/History: She was a medic for the spiral order. After years of expirence on the battlefield, she thought she could of survived anything. But one day she went on a mission to kill Vanaduke. She was fatally injured and the whole squad was killed. Thinking she was dead, Vanaduke left her in the flaming room. She crawled to the elevator and went to Haven were she was immediantly rushed to a hospital. After she healed she went to go back into the spiral order as a medic, but they turned her down. Her life as a medic was the only one she knew, and she quickly fell into despair. With few to no friends, she decided to make life meaningful again. She frequently goes on adventures.
Shields: She doesn't use a shield. (She just tries to jump out of the way.)
Weapons: Levithan blade, argent peacemaker. (She tends to use argent peacemaker more)
Race: Knight
Expendibility: Well It's your choice.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 07:15

#47

Kaijuhunter

*Ace stares at Emerald awkwardly*

You want her to have some sort of special relations later in the story? Or perhaps she finds friends? Im working in chaoter 2, so be prepared! Im also making a new fanfic... Oh well! Plz continue to rate, read, and suggest characters!

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 07:18

#48

Valorai

If I didnt put it in there,

If I didnt put it in there, make it up!

Sun, 02/19/2012 - 07:22

#49

Kaijuhunter

*Ace naps*

Well im taking a break from this fanfic for a bit, and im starting another called the Battle fo Haven! Sry but im mostly workin on that one. I need artists to create the teasers for it... Plz contact me in game if u can be the artist. Note, Id love for it to be on Spiral Spy, but u dont have to make it there.

Sun, 02/26/2012 - 15:17

#50

Fireherat

i join the act

name firestar

race knight

age 21

aromr ash wolf set

color blue or sky blue

bio. the officer of all the other officer he is the best of the best .... when he was sent to kill vana .. he thought h killed him after 2 times .. when vana kill a officer he got so mad that he forgot that ship was crashing .. and so h didnt know where he was so he seach for a energy soruse that would help him start the ship back up again

gender male

girlfriend . idk you think of one

weprons. croy driver star 3 , cailur star 4, sealed sword star and vter stiker

expendibility. up to you

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