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Fri, 03/02/2012 - 06:26
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube

Ok, I will kind of get more into this after I post Chapter II- The Avengers on my other Fanfic, but for now let's get started. If you've read my other Fanfic then you will know that I say this at the bottom of my most recent posts: "Don't do it!" "I have to..." that is actually going to be an aspect of this story. This book is kind of based on the book Antherton the "Lord" part I already had in my mind not a rif-off from Lord Phineus. Now I do not want to make a Fanfic, with out my fellow knights here are some character slots:

Lord Ice

Lord Ice's Inner Circle of Knights
Tsuna
Ren
3: OPEN
4: OPEN
5: OPEN
_________________________
Lord Ice's Elite Guards (Similar to King Tinkinzar's Crimson Order)
Blue
Lightning
Frostrex
4: OPEN
5: OPEN
6: OPEN
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Lord Ice's Throne Room Guard (If you've read the book Antherton this is that kind of person)
Guard: Julius

In need of Gremlins!

Darkfang Gremlin Mender: OPEN
Darkfang Gremlin Thwacker: OPEN
Second Darkfang Gremlin Thwacker: OPEN
Ironclaw Gremlin Scortcher: OPEN
Gremlin Lighter: OPEN
Submit you character like this:

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Age:
Arsenal: (Weapons AND Armour)
Characteristics:
Bio:
Role:
Pet: (Optional)
Twist Degree: (How you're character develops)
Additional Facts: (Optional)
Suggestions: (Optional)
Theme: (SOme characters have this but if your's doesn't dun bother putting this on here)

Put other stuff on your character so I can understand him/her more.

"Don't do it!" "I have to..."

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 14:48
#1
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Here is a link to my other

Here is a link to my other Fanfic "Almirian Destiny": http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/43508#comment-298928

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to..."

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 15:28
#2
Scamall's picture
Scamall
So...

Is Lord Ice good or bad? And are we coming up with good or bad characters?

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 15:43
#3
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Good/Bad...

He's gonna be good! :P

Be sure to check out my other Fanfic as well!

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to..."

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 15:53
#4
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Oh yes an answer to you other question

Antherton has a character called Sir Emerik he is like a "Hungry for Power" kind of a guy. THe "Inner Circle" thing is like a group of Lord Ice's trusted knights. Similar to the Fuedal Society ( http://www.historyonthenet.com/Medieval_Life/feudalism.htm )that is not exactly the way I learned it so here is the way I learned it:

King
^
Lords
^
Knights
^
Forgot them but they are higher than the serfs and serve
^
Serfs

Lord Ice is the "King" but his title is "Lord" and his Inner Circle are his "Lords"
The Elite Knights thing... meh, I guess they are like Knights but.. well you know.
The guard thing doesn't have a lot to it just a character portraying the character Horus in Antherton

~Lord Ice "Don't do it!" "I have to..."

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 06:52
#5
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Yay!Name: BlueGender:

Yay!

Name: Blue
Gender: Female
Arsenal: Valkyrie set. The only difference is that she doesn't have the halo. Leviathan blade, and that 5 star antigua. (Srry cant remember the name) and the horned owlite shield.
Characteristics: Serious in almost every situation. Friendly, but only to people she can trust. She has a vast knowledge about cradle and it's inhabitants.
Bio: She was mostly a loner, going into the clockworks alone, and rarely had any friends. She thought that if she had feelings about people, that would be a sign of weakness. But something changed her mind. She found that friends could be helpful. Although she is very serious, sometimes you can tell that the more time she spends around people, the friendlier she gets. With her shady past, other knights were cautious around her. She was found to be very loyal, and would fight to the end for something worth it. After a while she finally decided to join Lord Ice's Inner circle of knights.
Role: Inner circle of knights.
Additional facts: Although she is very smart and is great with her gun, she has many weaknesses. She often pays attention to the monsters she's kiilling, and is very easy to sneak up on, making her an easy kill. And despite her 5 star armor, just a few hits can take her down.
Suggestions: Cant think of an at the moment.

Fri, 03/02/2012 - 21:56
#6
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Isisdelltion
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Name: Ren
Gender: Male
Arsenal: Azure Guardian Helm and Mighty Cobalt Helm, with a Fearless Rigadoon and a RockJelly Shield.
Characteristics: Expirenced and wise in pratical matters, he's always thinking just a tiny bit ahead.
Bio: Ren started out as the rookie of his team, but as his friends died and he took thier higher roles, he became more and more thoughtful and confident of his skills. After retiring from the Order, he couldn't help but be restless, and quickly joined Lord Ice's court as an Inner Knight.
Role: Inner Circle Knight
Additional Facts: He's old, but he still has some muscle on those bones.
Suggestions: Can't suggest without writing. :D

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 08:04
#7
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Kaijuhunter
OOOH, OOH, PICK ME

Lol lemme join!

Name: Tsuna

Gender: male

Age: 17

Arsenal: Tsuna wears a Skolver coat and Valkyrie Helm. He also has two Valiances sheathed within two twin scabbards at his hips. Usually uses a Hunting Blade and a 5 star Divine Calibur. The Divine Calibur looks like a normal Ascended Calibur, but has the charge attack of a Sealed Sword, inflicting random status effects. It inflicts elemental and normal damage. His shield is a Divine Aegis, a golden version of the original Aegis.

Characteristics: Tsuna is always kind to other people, but if anyone dares to hurtt his friends, he will annihilate anything in his path. He is very loyal and prudent. Hes also a very good tactician!

Role: Ice's swordsman, best friend, and one of his inner circle

Bio: Tsuna is a seasoned veteran of the Order and is secretly an Archangel. His skill with the sword is so impressive, it is only matched by Lord Ice himself, but hes also very good with guns. He is Lord Ice's best friend and is the King's greatest tactician. He is very prudent and will never abandon his friends.

Additional facts: Although Tsuna is an Archangel, even he has weaknesses. He cannot resist chocolate croissants or Snipedonalds. He also tries to cheer everyone up in dark times.

Hope u like that one... Please accept!

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 06:52
#8
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Srry i changed my bio a

Srry i changed my bio a little.

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 11:55
#9
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Skolver is it

Skolver is it Argent or Stenza?
And.. do you mind if I make you a Elite Knight instead of a Inner Circle knight? Blue makes me think of an Elite Knight instead.

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 11:51
#10
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
OH!

Oh, and have any of you read Antherton?

Sat, 03/03/2012 - 11:58
#11
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
@Kaijuhunter

I don't understand this part of Tsuna's bio He is Lord Ice's best friend and is the King's greatest tactician. Lord Ice is the "King" though his title is "Lord" Unless you meant the same thing.. this post is pointless! :D

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 09:34
#12
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Pow-The-Commando
Here's the form for ya XD

Name: Lightning
Gender: Male
Arsenal: Mercurial Set, Aegis, Voltedge, Storm Driver, Voltaic Tempest, Polaris
Characteristics: Shocks any enemy in his way. He ia a rather shocking person.
Bio: Soz, but the bio was electrocuted. Check back when the electrocution ends.
Role: Inner Circle
Additional Facts: He has his dungeon belt filled with Shock Vials and he's a thunderstorm made into a knight.
Suggestions: Maybe can he carry all the other 5-star shock weapons?
Is there any invading? If so, make Lightning live.
BTW Twist: Don't change him from the above because I LOVE that thunderstorm thing XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 15:16
#13
Scamall's picture
Scamall
Couple of ideas

Just a few. I can come up with more if necessary.

The first one I came up with for Almirian Destiny. Hope you don't mind me reusing it here.

Name: (Original) Construct B5714984, (Given name) Julius

Gender: Neither, but male voice.

Appearance and Weapons: A higher quality Mecha Knight, but somewhat damaged looking due to its backstory. Equipped with a prototype elemental beam-cannon in its ocular lenses (eyes, but I like to sound cool), a sword with minerals embedded in the core of its handle, thus capable of generating elemental and shadow edges on the blade. Durable armor, but not indestructible.

Characteristics: Somewhat timid and inexperienced, cynical and mistrusting, desires to learn.

Background History: Originally created with the same prototype circuitry that would later conceive the Roarmulus Twins, Julius was part of a large-scale AI program engineered by the Gremlins to create an army that would adapt to war conditions. This backfired when a computer virus (this can be a plot device engineered by the other main characters to introduce Julius) crippled the majority of the army, leaving only Julius and a handful of other Mecha Knights left alive. In a panic, Julius tries to flee, only to be attacked by Gremlins for an "intelligence defect" (emotions), thus damaging his armor.

Expendability: I could go either way about this character, really. I created him a few seconds before typing this, so there's no real emotional attachment. Others might like him, though.

Role: Surprise me.

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And here's one from another project I'm working on. Not SK-related, but I edited the character to fit in here.

Name: Null/Faust (Yeah, I know. Backstory should explain)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Green/Purple eyes. Equipped with Valkyrie Set that changes to Fallen Set when his sword takes over.

Weapons: Carries only a Sealed Sword, which becomes a Faust occasionally, and a bloodstained Darkfang Shield.

Characteristics: Disturbed and paranoid, desperate for help, frail./Cold, cruel, and insane, in a sadistic, playful sort of way, but easily angered. Very intelligent, but arrogant.

Background History: Captured along with his squad by the Gremlins, Null was imprisoned and forced to watch the horrendous torture and brutal slaughter of his collegues and friends for days on end. Once the rest of the squad were gone, his turn came, and he himself was tortured. He eventually snapped when the Gremlins tried to kill him with his own Sealed Sword, the inner darkness of the blade calling out to him. Disarming the Gremlins and reclaiming his sword, Null then went on to start his own slaughter, claiming his trademark Darkfang Shield while doing so. This left him with a split personality, with one trying to break free of the blade's influence, and the other relishing the blood it allows him to spill.

Additional Facts: Once his sword takes over, his equipment changes, hence the eye colour, armour change, and sword itself. He binds himself in the same bandages that cover his sword to keep himself sane.

Suggestions: If he seems "OP" feel free to nerf him a bit. I'd appreciate it if his (dual) personality was left relatively intact, however.

Expendability: Well, it's one of my more developed characters, but, like my last one, It doesn't matter to me. It's your story.

Role: Indeterminate. Null himself would fit into the Good category, but Faust could be anything from anti-hero to villain.

EDIT: Changed his name to Null. Not his real name, just a moniker.

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 06:57
#14
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
@Pow

You gonna put a bio on Lightning? Just a thought ;)

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 13:21
#15
Scamall's picture
Scamall
Bored. I'm submitting Cross.

Name: Unknown, goes by his alias, "Cross".

Gender: Male

Appearance and Weapons: Generally uses Gunslinger-themed gear, has each 5-star set that he adjusts accordingly with his chosen mission. Uses guns. Lots of guns, from Alchemers to "boss reward" guns (argent, sentenza, biohazard etc). His signature weapon is his Sentenza, often used as a means of execution. He still has above-average skill with a sword, despite only using guns.

Characteristics: Cold, melancholic. Uses dry, sarcastic humour to show his disdain at situations. Strategic mind, always changing loadouts for different missions.

Background History: Originally part of a 4-man squad called "The Horsemen", Cross went by the alias "Death". Along with his allies "War", "Pestilence" and "Famine", they plundered and pillaged the Clockworks for vast amounts of loot. Once they found out about "Project R", they sought to steal weapon blueprints for their own purposes. War, however, was using the Horsemen to obtain weaponry to rule the Clockworks and sow the seeds of chaos throughout Cradle. He killed Pestilence, who was growing suspicious, but a pre-recorded message sent by Pestilence to Death informed him of War's treachery. Death hunted down and killed War in cold blood, but not without losing his love, Famine. Since then, he became a soldier of fortune, hired gun, you name it, doing jobs from "improvised demolition" to assassination.

Good/Evil: In it for the money, but he's not evil, just battle-hardened. He still has a conscience, and shows discomfort in killing innocents. He still kills baddies in cold blood, however.

Role: Maybe a supporting character/rival to an Inner Circle knight. Fits his character.

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 13:28
#16
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Its an argent, and make me

Its an argent, and make me whatever role you want.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 09:28
#17
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Pow-The-Commando
@Isekuube

It was electrocuted so I could not put it up. XD It was because there was too much electricity in the post.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 09:35
#18
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Pow-The-Commando
Edit

Edited Lightning to show the twist and electrocution notice XD

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 09:55
#19
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Ok,

Ok now that Chapter II- The Divine Avengers is complete I am trying to get the intro done for Lord Ice, may be done sometime this week, I can not say for sure, but it will be soon! lol Today apparently

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 09:54
#20
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Introduction! Hope ya like!

~30 Years After the Core was Opened~

Lord Ice is a ruler of an uncharted section of Cradle called Itopan; the knights

of Haven do not know that Lord Ice exists at all. Even though they don’t know Lord Ice

exist, let alone, knows about the knights of Haven. 3 decades ago they had opened the

Core, there was no need for Crystal Energy or Mist Energy. You just had to go down

to the Core and get some CrE or Core Energy, no body used Crystal Energy or Mist

Energy; everyone used Core Energy.

Lord Ice had installed Descent Pods for knights. They were like elevators, except

faster and more comfortable. Lord Ice was a man of pure genius. His developed empire

is more high-tech than the knights of Haven could ever imagined! There were strangers

there too, huge and friendly as the ones in Haven. There was also the matter of the

clockworks too…

Trojans, Menders, Zombies, Lumbers, Wolvers, and Lichens. Lord Ice and his

knights battled them for so long his knights barely could manage their families on

Itopan. As if the other monsters weren’t enough, new creatures of Light and Dark have

appeared, Light Mists and Dark Wisps; which is what Lord Ice has been discussing with

his group of scientists.

Lord Ice has issued a new order, more like a bounty on a Mist and a Wisp. If a

knight brought one of them in then the knight would receive 100,000 crowns, because

of this the streets of Itopan were empty. Lord Ice also noticed that Gremlins have been

disappearing ever since the Core opened, even the ones in Emberlight. This is also a

topic Lord Ice brings up from time to time with his research team.

One day Lord Ice decided to go down in the Clockworks to investigate the

disappearances of Gremlins. “It all seems connected,” Lord Ice had said. Tsuna, Lord

Ice’s Archangel friend and part of his Inner Circle had told him not to go, “Don’t do it!”

he had said. “I have to…” Lord Ice had replied. When he walked out of his throne room,

he had said farewell to his mecha-knight guard, Julius. “Farewell, Julius, I’m going to go

down into the Clockworks and investigate the missing Gremlins.” Lord Ice had said to

Julius. “Fare-well, Master, good luck, and be safe!” Julius replied in his robotic voice.

Lord Ice suited up in his best armour, Azure Guardian set, Aeigis strapped to his

back, his trusty Glacius in his hand while an Acheron was on his side, with a Polaris and

an Argent Peacemaker in leg holsters. Suited up and ready, Lord Ice ran to a Descent

Pod.

When Lord Ice had got to Emberlight he saw the barren town that had once been

home to outcast Gremlins. He walked over to Gracken’s counter where that cheerful

Gremlin had sold Vials and Vita Pods to traveling knights. Lord Ice sighed. “Why is all

this happening?” Lord Ice wondered aloud. Lord Ice headed over to another Descent

Pod that would take him down to the Gremlin stratum.

When Lord Ice got out of his descent pod he saw nothing, just an endless

landscape of dust. Lord Ice walked around for a bit and didn’t even see remains of the

Gremlins who fought so hardly before they disappeared into nowhere. He was about to

get into the next Descent Pod when he heard a noise. It was like a whisper… a whisper

whispering nothing. Lord Ice turned around quickly and the last thing he saw before

swirling into oblivion was black smoke.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 10:03
#21
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Nice, but it needs more

Nice, but it needs more gremlins. :P

MOAR!!!!

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 11:53
#22
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Wait for it

Next Chapter will have more Gremies! :D

Thu, 03/15/2012 - 12:34
#23
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Half-Bump/ Announcement

Ok I have started on the first chapter of this! BUt I have a problem, I need some character apps for Gremlins and atleast one Mender, two Thwackers, a scorcher, and a new gremlin idc which. Look forward to see your apps ;)

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 00:02
#24
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
I don't know if this is helpful but...

You can use Frostrex for the Inner Circle of Knights.

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 05:59
#25
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Thanks

Could you posy your app on here? I guess I'm just lazy :P

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 06:02
#26
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Blargh

Blargh Double post >_< /ignore me!

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 06:11
#27
Valorai's picture
Valorai
*Watches double post intently*

Y'know....

I coouldve taken the crimson guard SINGLE-HANDEDLY!!!

O-YEAH

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 06:15
#28
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
RAWR!

Is anybody going to post an app for the Gremlin? I need a couple of Gremlins too!

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 11:34
#29
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Soul-Jelly
New app

Name: Kalem
Race: Knight, but, well, read on...
Gender: Male
Arsenal: Uses whatever he is issued from the Crimson Order, but has a gremlin upgrade of a Polaris fused to his right arm, which he lost after he was abandoned in the clockworks by some other knights, he can, however still handle a sword with his left had better than most other knights. hiis armor is usually an Armor of the Fallen with volcanic Dragon wings that he can fly for a short time with and a Crown of the Fallen with military knight vision goggles, he uses an upgraded stalker recon shield.
Characteristics: Takes what he wants and flattens anything, or anyone that gets in his way he is a brilliant tactician, once even allowing some knights to capture him so he could get some plans for a new weapon from Feron's office. Ruthless in every way, he has no care for knights and wants them exterminated, he does not think of himself as a knight, but as a gremlin, and the other knights see him that way too.
Bio: When he was young, he was taken out on a training expedition by some other knights, but when they were ambushed by jellies, the other knights left him behind. with insufficient armor, and outnumbered, Kalem fought his way through the jellies, but was eventually defeated, losing part of his arm to a spike jelly in the process. A stalker gremlin from the Crimson Order found him, however, and brought him to a gremlin city, where he was taken care of and his arm repaired by a Crimson Order warmaster, named Seerus. He never forgot what the knights did to him and swore to level Haven one day. He eventually became very powerful in the crimson order, becoming a Warmaster himself as well as an accomplished assassin and spy, thanks to his Stalker training. He takes his orders directly from King Tinkizar and allows nothing to get in the way of his orders. Feron placed a bounty of 5,000,000 CR on his head Dead or Alive, but he has managed to elude all of his would-be attackers, killing dozens of knights. He isnt just a mindless killer though, like some other gremlins, rushing to attack any knight they see. He will watch them from a distance, find out what they are doing, and THEN kill them. A few powerful knights have escaped him, but barely.
Role: bad guy, you decide what specifics
Additional Facts: Using his alchemy skill as a knight and his training from gremlins, he crafts powerful shadow resistant armor for the gremlins under his command. Because Feron has sent assassins after him before, it it whispered among gremlins that he has two personal aides, both stalker gremlins, at his side always. Since his main weapon is fused to him, Feron had a special handcuff, or really a cap for the gun made that clamps onto Kalem's Polaris, and had it issued to all Arsenal stations in the clockworks, in case a knight were to ever run into him to help subdue him.
suggestions: I'd rather he not die just yet, but do whatever you want with him. I'm writing another set of stories with him in them , sooo it doesn’t really matter.

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 09:27
#30
Soul-Jelly's picture
Soul-Jelly
oops srry

forgot i could edit

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 09:39
#31
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Good good

I think I will use Kalem, as like talk I don't think he will be fetured, more as a cameo from time to time. Again as I said I need at least one Gremlin Mender and two Gremlin Twackers, all of them I'd like to be good.

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 16:48
#32
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
I'M SO SORRY DX

......bump

Fri, 03/16/2012 - 18:10
#33
Frostrex's picture
Frostrex
@Ice

Name: Frostrex
Gender: Male
Appearance and Weapons: Dark blue PC, Mighty Cobalt helm, Azure Guardian armour, Aegis, BlizzardHale, a sword who's blade is composed of ice
Characteristics:Doesn't talk much and gives yes or no as opinions. A dealy fighter, combining speed and strength to form crushing blows.
Background History: Is this neccessary?
Expendability: 50-50

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 11:32
#34
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Lord-Hood
This is Soul Jelly BTW

So, i think that we should add "Race" or "Species" to all of the apps. It would made it a little easier and more organized, I think.

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 11:35
#35
Soul-Jelly's picture
Soul-Jelly
If no one else will...

I should have a few gremlins later today when im not as busy.

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 12:06
#36
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Ah, yes sorry about that

I'll change the charactrer app outline, on the OP. Thanks for pointing that out.

Sat, 03/17/2012 - 12:14
#37
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
Ah yes and...

Soul-Jelly I have updated the OP so you can see what Gremlin roles there are. Thanks!

Thu, 04/12/2012 - 17:23
#38
Isekuube's picture
Isekuube
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