Spiral Knights - the beginning of the ending of the gremlin empire: chapter 13(3RD LAST CHAPETER DONE) done

the beginning of the ending of the gremlin empire: chapter 13(3RD LAST CHAPETER DONE) done

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Tue, 10/23/2012 - 07:29

Knight-Of-India

hello this is my first time writing a story so if there is any typo or thing u did not like please forgive me . i would like to thank lordofnecromancer and kaijhunter for their stories which inspired me to write my own and to all the good folk who have helped me from chriz to kratos for their support.this is 500 years after the skylark had crashed on cradle the knights had been able to take the energy source from the core and went home but when they came home they got reinforcements and made a promise to destroy the gremlin empire and all of the clockworks except the strangers.

chapter 1 : king tinkinzar and the crimson order
"what is are status at the battlefield ?" said the king ."not good sire" said herex ."my compound has been destroyed by several raids . all the weapons have been taken or destroyed "."even the grand arsenal has been raided and seerus is missing in action. dead or alive we don't know "said another member of the order ."what about are allies?" asked the king ."not as good ours sire.the jelly king is dead and ice queen has took over,vanaduke is gone and only his mace remains.our machine of mass destruction the twins have been destroyed and are being repaired and the snarblox is also in the same condition."said lord randi.the king let out a deep sigh and wondered what will happen to his kingdom."very well prepare for battle my fellow lords we attack emberlight and then haven and take all the strangers as prisoners and kill those useless gremlins !".all the lords got up and left to assemble their troops.at the same time this news was sent to all the lords of the clockworks to assemble their troops.at the same time the elites and higher ranks of the gremlin army where either fighting in various clockwork tunnels or resting at their homes they all were called to the center of the great colony. a war was coming.

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 07:32

Knight-Of-India

small chapter

the above chapter was small but the other one's will be big

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 07:47

Immortous

Aaand....

Its nice to see people being creative with stuff like this and all,
but this belongs in the "Treasure Vault" section of the forums.
Not "General Discussion." :P

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 07:49

Knight-Of-India

oh srry i didn't know can i

oh srry i didn't know can i shift it to that forum

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 07:50

Knight-Of-India

there..

i shifted it

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 02:37

Knight-Of-India

chapter 2 :falcon intro

ah another sunny day in the jigsaw valley .the sun and green floor were making me sick.i wanted to find the knights not cut trees .i wanted to be in a compund even a guard in the palace of the king would be enough. well we were here cutting trees until the elites and higher ranks were called not us backers me and gungish were stuck here and the rest went to the colony . back to work for the two of us./sigh
there are only 3 ways to become a elite:-1 work for 100 years or more
2 kill 10 knights or a high ranking knight like a vanguard
3 save the life of the king or another important person like a member of the crimson order
then suddenly a knight with a antigua shot a bullet killing gungish .he was wearing a crest only given to the vanguards finally a person who i could kill and become a elite with my dasher a standard issue gun for the backers and my axe in my hand we fought for an hour or 2 exchanging bullets and strikes finally i got a shot on his head but his helmet protected him and he got a stun for sometime and i killed him. blood started to come out some kind of ooze which i stored in my container bag for the crimson order and others to research on.but strange why was a vanguard holding a 3* gun instead of a 5* gun like sentenza or peacemaker but who cares now i was finally a elite next step was to become a commander and then a crimson guard these guards protect the members of the crimson order and the king himself only a few 100 are chosen to such a rank.then came a commander with a few elites who saw this action behind the scene of me fighting and promoted me to a elite officially .but i was sad at the death of my best friend gungish what was i going to tell his mother then suddenly he woke up it turns out the commander had given him a pill to heal and told him to act dead well he was still a backer but still my best friend he gave me a thumbs up as a sign of good will .now i could finally go to the colony and get some new gear and fight along side the commanders and crimson guards i might be even able to meet the crimson order in a few 20-30 years . well now i have to get to the elevator with my "new" commander and gungish was sad but i can't do anything for him.

AFTER A FEW HOURS
ah it is good to be back in the colony the grandest city in all of cradle .the cars were flying ,the pollution it smells so good. better than that fresh air of the jigsaw valley yuck! ah the great palace i was going there to meet with other backers who had just become elites we were in the same brigade are commander was MR. flash it is said he killed a 1000 knights in his career it would be good to train under such a good commander and trainer . straight after the ceremony we were given are new gear a fire axe said to be created with fire of the fire storm citadel,the falcon it resembles my name and it is also like me in character i was sick of staying in the valley the gun was sick of staying in cold storage we were meant for each other and finally the greatest things of all the shield of gremlin.this shield's design was made by the king himself it gathers energy from the dead gremlins in battle so that when we return back into the colony we give this energy to the dead gremlins family as a token of appreciation from the state half of the energy was used in battle to charge the shield quickly there is even a button which will combine our energy and create a shield strong enough to protect the entire brigade. then we went to the training hall it was actually a simulation taken out from the brain of a gremlin who died in battle it horrified me and a few more who had never been in actual combat i killed a few robot knights and got some wounds as well which were virtual but do pain in the simulation are commander was least impressed but what would you expect from new elites well it didn't matter to him he was doing his job of being a good trainer i wish i could be like him but not today i made a few new friends.i wonder how the recruits of the spiral order train ? a question which i can't answer well it is time to go to sleep now.

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 09:58

Knight-Of-India

looking for people

i am looking for people who want characters in the story 3 knights and 2 gremlins if u are want to be a knight pls tell your name,weapon,personality .fi u want to be a gremlin pls tell name and rank .
let me tell u the format of gremlin ranks backers :-least impressive do odd jobs like giving medical attention and doing jobs like cutting trees managing weapons and other not important things etc.
2 elites :-fight like normal soldiers and when there is no war they do jobs of the backers.
3 commander:- leaders of the elites and look after brigades whatever they do cutting trees or fighting battles
4 crimson guards :- guards of the order and king said to be equal to all the vanguards

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 11:59

Oroseira

Nice.

Not sure if I'll apply (I'm an author too) but I might once I get all the stories I have underway done.

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 12:45

Takuyaz

Hm...

Maybe I should write a story too...

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 13:15

Artistbma

Nice title. x3

Tue, 10/23/2012 - 22:52

#10

Knight-Of-India

thank you

@phantom :- it is your wish if u want to apply or not
@takuyaz:-yeah u should write a story
@artistbma:- thank you

Wed, 11/14/2012 - 01:37

#11

Knight-Of-India

chapter 3 :knights prepare war

feron rushes to the hall of ozlo a secret chamber where only the most high ranked officials can come not even vanguards.he saw that he was late .brinks,kora,the alpha squad (they had been found till now ) , the chief of emberlight (it had turned into a democracy about a 100 years ago),kozma and many more important officials were already there.
"as usual late" said kora.
"i was busy " said feron ."doing what?playing cards with rhendon and friends" mocked kora.
"yes .....no i meant no"poor feron he was not good at telling a lie.
"anyway back to the topic " said brinks who had customers to attend."
"our spies(some corrupt gremlins) tell us that king tinkinzar has declared war on us "said feron who had met some of them 3-4 years ago .
"he always says that and doesn't even attack us " said kozma .
"but this time it is different he has already attacked many camps in the clockworks and is on his way to destroy emberlight.
"he has even made friends with ice queen who we helped! and the entire clock works is under his and various lords command who have made a pact to destroy us!".
"very well we prepare for war!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " said ozlo .
"brinks give all your things at half the rate" brinks started to cry there goes his profit for the year.
"alpha squad take a 100 assassin's and kill as many lords as you can!!!!!!!!!!first the ice queen that useless blob of jelly!!!!" there goes alpha squads holiday.
"chief i give you 2 options either fight with us or stay neutral ".
"i would rather fight with you knights then die the death of a coward"most probably he was the only one the chamber who was happy.
"very well tell the strangers to give their weapons to knights who don't have it at a cheap price and the rest of HQ shall hack into gremlin communications and try destroying them and send a word to Ilsola for reinforcements".ozlo was in a excited mood and who can blame him after like 300 years a wars was happening.

AFTER A DAY OR TWO
a new announcement came in haven "all vanguards get your best gear out and be prepared to go to emberlight for the first battle of this war.champions pls protect haven while the vanguards are gone away .all less ranks continue to explore the clockworks and work hard .thank you for listening" .
in the bazzar there was a line in front of brinks and brinks was giving away things too cheap and everyone said "long live ozlo ".and brinks was thinking to commit suicide but he can't die like that is a dishonor to die without fighting.both sides were preparing for war and it was soon to come.maybe the spiral order will lose or win that is a question only time will tell.but this is certain who ever wins shall become the most powerful species on cradle and exterminate the rest of the species. the future of cradle hangs in the balance.
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well since no one is applying for the 3 knights or 2 gremlins position i might have to create my own characters the last date is till Sunday.
thank you

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 01:18

#12

Kimahsonite

This is good, but almost

This is good, but almost impossible to read because of the bad grammar. =( Perhaps you could fix it.

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 02:27

#13

Rabeet-Ahsan

I want to

I want to apply for the knights.My weapons are ascended calibur and an electron charge.And i am a defender and alway think before and attack.Guardian would be a good post.Use my Lord-Raedon ign.

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 02:42

#14

Knight-Of-India

thanks for commenting

@kimahsonite thanks for the comment i am trying to fix as many mistakes i can.
@raedon do u want to be a gremlin or knight?

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 02:51

#15

Knight-Of-India

done...............

fixed as many mistakes as i can find if you find more please tell. thank you

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 04:59

#16

Knight-Of-India

chapter 4:finally a battle!

falcon is talking in this chapter
chapter 4:-finally a real battle there we about 20 or 25 knights against us we were about 50 gremlins from the brigade of a 1000 gremlins(the rest were somewhere else fighting )we fought and almost lost if not for me i think the knights were more experienced in combat then us elites one of them was saying that someone known as ozlo was going to kill us all.god knows who this "ozlo" is.but we lost about 13 men in the battle and the knights about 4 or 5 i took one of the dead knights sword but i couldn't understand what type of sword was it when i charged it some kind of beast came out it was yellow in color and didn't do any status damage. but it was still better than my fire axe i can kill a few knights with this. anyway this was not much of a battle more of a skirmish but i can't wait to go to the battle which will take place in emberlight i guess there will be 10000 gremlins and who know how many knights but it will be fun slicing knights and killing those exiled gremlins. I can't wait for the battle to take place but even though it will happen after a month or so there are still many camps to be destroyed i have heard that lord herex shall forces and forces of MR.FLASH shall meet up. this means i can finally see some crimson guards in action! well he has only got 20 crimson guards and about 2000 mecha knights under him. our goal is to destroy the camps of the knights and search for war master seerus if he is not found then we can say he is dead .but right now i have to take the energy of the dead gremlins in my shield. well we used little energy in the battle and will take the rest in our shields as backup.i have made a friend tokila he came from compound 42 he is also a new elite but he knows more combat then me because he had defended the compound about 50 times .he is from a small village near the great colony.

AFTER A DAY
we met up with the rest of the brigade. but i got sad news commander flash died they say when they all were asleep some 100 knights attacked them and killed many gremlins in their sleep including MR. FLASH well so now we are altogether only about 800 gremlins survive. are new leader was landed with a spacecraft he is commander darkface his named was changed after a knight hit him with a sword which did shadow damage and now his half face is black and does not move so he uses a machine to talk . but he has only killed 700 knights in his career not much compared to MR.FLASH.well now we are in a camp resting for the while resting

AFTER A WEEK
we have finally met up with herex and his army but just like what happened to MR.FLASH. herexand his army was also attacked by these 100 knights but herex and 19 of the crimson guards survived and 1900 of the mecha knights survive who are these knights who strike at the night and kill so many the gremlins.they have started to call them "the black army" and how can the mecha knights be caught off guard they don't sleep when i asked this to tokila he said they charge their battery at night it is kind of their sleeping. well for now i am with my friends training and only about 5 weeks remain for the battle at emberlight to take place

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 07:16

#17

Rabeet-Ahsan

I want to be

I want to be a knight.As my current rank is knight elite.

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 09:10

#18

Knight-Of-India

readon

so your name should be readon or guardian.

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 09:51

#19

Knight-Of-India

chapter 5:- raedon intro

it felt so good killing so many gremlins they didn't even know what hit them! i am one of the members of the assassin brigade sent to kill the lords but the alpha squad said we should also kill gremlins and other monsters if we face one of them we attacked a brigade of gremlins which was 10 times our size and still survived i heard Euclid kill their commander. when they knew what was happening more than a 100 of their troops were dead then about 3 days later we saw herex and his army when those robots were charging we sent 20 of our men to kill their power source they failed but were able to cut some of the wires and then killed as many bots as possible then the guards didn't even know we were their and i killed one of the guards in stealth mode but it turns out when you kill one guard the other guards know it instantly quite a neat piece of technology anyway the guards were able to protect herex and they escaped i think herex pressed some button activating all the robots who started attacking us grantz was able to kill a few but most of us were on the run.right now we are in the jigsaw valley going from tree to tree to the ice queen to give her a invitation to heaven of the jellies we have got some people with poison which we will try to put her in her food if that doesn't work then we will use bombs to destroy her .

AFTER A FEW DAYS
we have reached the palace of the ice queen the guards were quite easy to kill just take out the dark redistribution bomb made by seerus and wait then you can go forward the only part which was difficult was how to get near the ice queen if you touch her than you freeze but rulen had a plan he created some gloves which we could where we put the poison in the food but the cook had it and died so plan b we threw a 100 shadow damage bombs and hit her with are night blades and sentenza's and black hawks still she didn't die and woke up i hit her with my electron charge bomb and killed her by the shock so i was made in charge of about 20 knights who were carrying elemental and other types of weapons . so are next destination is king tinzinkar he will be difficult to kill their are many hazards in the way his army many lords of the order and the great colony the greatest citadel on cradle well i will take of myself and others we shall win this war and cradle will be a better lace for all!

Wed, 10/24/2012 - 10:04

#20

Lord-Raedon

So u only mentioned my electron charge and not me.Thats kinda sad.

Wed, 11/14/2012 - 01:41

#21

Knight-Of-India

chapter 6:yerpo intro

this is me
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i was with lord randi as a crimson guard we were on our way to take the support of the rebels of the knights not all knights are loyal to ozlo some went to the jungles and want to kill the order but there are only about 50 of such knights who are just soldiers and knights if even they join us they will barely make a difference they only have 2 star weapons and gear and barley any troops to offer we will give them some equipment for the fight.

lord randi said "join us we will destroy them and make you guys the new order" .

their leader who was a defender said " we won't ozlo might be our enemy but so are you gremlins we will never take down the oath of destroying you
gremlins ".
lord randi sighed and said "very well "
he raised his hand which meant to kill them they shoot a few bullets and a few blows from there sword but it didn't work our armor was to strong then suddenly from no where came out the black army and killed most of the guards and lord randi we ran for our lives using there stealth guns they killed us one by one i was one of the only survivors we sent a message to the colony that lord randi was dead and many crimson guards . king tinzinkar was shocked. those knights had actually signed a agreement with ozlo that they will join only if they got 3 star equipment ozlo got a win win situation he gave them the weapons for free because of brinks and was able to kill a member of the order right now we are running for the nearest brigade me and 2 more .what !oh my god my comrade was just shot in front of me i would be wise to run .
FEW DAYS LATER
finally we reached the brigade the brigade is also in a bad condition the knights had thrown some kind of poison bomb which is killing the troops as we speak their commander is also affected with this poison how can just a one brigade of knights do so much damage what will happen on the siege of emberlight maybe this is the end of our kind or not we shall fight till the end of our lives for our great king ! long live king tinzinkar!

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 10:51

#22

Knight-Of-India

well.

this story is dead so better send it to the graveyard

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 11:08

#23

Drestroy

Say

Hey Knight-of-India you seem to know about the story of spiral knights! Not many people do i for one though do and I would like to contact you and maybe i can give you some info on the swarm and other things. My in game name is Drestroy. please reply and tell me your in game name thanks.

Tue, 11/06/2012 - 13:18

#24

Artistbma

Hehe.

Many people know the story. Just those who are newer, like who have been playing for a month or two, don't pay any attention to the story line and don't know what the wiki is. :)

Wed, 11/14/2012 - 01:47

#25

Knight-Of-India

chapter 6:on the run(readon)

we have been found!!!!! a army of some 100 gremlins and a commander are after us god knows for how long we can survive but we have to there are still many lords to kill are army of 100 knights has been cut short to only 80 we have to be careful (although we killed those 100 gremlins and there commander is our captive) we still have many things to do so we better run the spiral order has been notified about our lose and they are sending some knights for our help but it shall take some time for them to come till then we keep on running in a few moments we shall be near Herex and his contingent of various creatures this time he is going to die i swear on the name of ozlo .

AFTER A FEW DAYS
we got him of guard but he still survived with more than enough to destroy us we lost a few good men out there but this is war loses are a part of war i lost my brother to a fire in the fire storm citadel we should be more careful and better geared but for now we are all sleeping in the morning and i am watching guard .herex was in his room discussing plans for his attack when suddenly a bullet passed just inches away from his head he took up his sword and was ready to kill but good for him it was just a bullet fired for testing his skills by king tinzinkars general pio (the real leader of the crimson order)

he was happy with the good instincts of herex and told him "it is hard to believe that u are still in such a good shape after all these months of enjoying yourself in the great colony"

herex "shut up i am as fit as you are "

. then they both gave each other a hug and the general secretly took his sword and charged it inside herex luckily herex was wearing some king of armor strong enough to protect him or he would be dead by now he quickly moved away and took his hammer and crushed the general the general was actually a knight with are latest morphing gear he became unconscious but shot a bullet from his sentenza paralysing herex's leg with shadow damage now his leg was useless he screamed but no one came all the elites were asleep , the crimson guards were all dead we had found a way to destroying that alarm of there's and all the mecha knights were recharging there batteries so he was screaming for the rest of the night the he killed was rescued and saved although he can't walk or move his hand for a few days . he told this story to us near the campfire now are next stop is emberlight for now everything is peaceful .

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 02:24

#26

Knight-Of-India

is anyone....

is anyone even reading this thread or it is just waiting to go to the graveyard ? please if you are reading this thread post a comment thank you

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 02:29

#27

Knight-Of-India

replys

@drestroy i know the story but it will be nice to meet you in person(i mean in the game not in reality) we can write the remaining chapters together
@art i know what the wiki is and i have been playing the game for 5 months and if you want you can help me with the story and i still need people for the characters so if you want to apply i will gladly accept

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 03:06

#28

Knight-Of-India

chapter 7 reje intro

i was in the the skylark sleeping in my bed we had been called to cradle to help in the ongoing gremlin wars i heard that there was unimaginable fighting going on in the clockworks there gremlin king what is his name again? should have paid attention during the literature classes (they started to write stories about the clockworks when they returned to llsola) well there i was sleeping easily in my room when the alarm rang we were under attack !!!!!!! but is that even possible the morai was busy fighting us on llsola and gremlins don't have spaceships we found out who the attacker was it was ralph of the mercenary clan he was always fighting us he never fought on land or sea but in space could the gremlins have created some kind of machine from which they were able to make the clan there allies if this is true then a fleet of mercenary troops might be on their way to help the gremlins or was this good luck with a contingent of more than 3 million knights on our ship the blockade under ralph was useless most of his ships were destroyed we went aboard and killed the remaining mercenary troops but ralph had escaped with a small ship which couldn't be detected with our scanners i think so this blockade was never meant to stop us it was a distraction .well who knows what was the purpose of this blockade .we sent a report to llsola and cradle about this this made the entire order even more angry they sent a blockade of more than a 100 ships each as equal to the size of the skylark to ulloe (the planet of the mercenary clan) to stop more reinforcements to the gremlins and if possible to destroy the clan if required but the main concern right now is to destroy the clockworks and those useless gremlins it is estimated we shall reach cradle till 3 cycles which is equal to 4 weeks it is going to be a tiring journey . i should get some rest .well for now it is quiet in space but many enemies of the spiral order are still there if the clan knows about this then their are good chances that the morai also knows about this they might be making plans as i speak or they might be sending small ships with resources to fight us the battle of emberlight shall be a big one i guess there will even be soldiers from morai and other areas only time will tell whether we win or not ................

Fri, 11/09/2012 - 03:54

#29

Knight-Of-India

chapter 8 no need for a topic this will self explain it self

AFTER A FEW CYCLES
"yes sir i understand my orders" said ralph to the high council on ulloe ."sir we just got a word that most of are men have died only a few thousand have survived the attack" said a soldiers to ralph ."that is sad but we have done are work for which we got paid send that information to king tinzinkar he will be sad to hear that there are more than 3 million troops on the stupid spaceship "."but sir we were ordered to destroy the ship not give information " said the soldier .ralph laughed and said "you are new to this business we were told destroy there ship but which one ? are plan is to let the gremlins and knights fight when they all die we just go there and take over all those planets simple as that."

AFTER A FEW HOURS
"sir ulloe is under siege what should we do?"said the pilot ."what!?."said ralph."they have blocked all our communications " said the pilot."the knights have sent us a message "he pressed a button and a hologram poped up."greeting captain ralph we want to sign a treaty from now on your planet is under are command please come to this planet of yours and stay here or every one hour a 1000 people shall die starting from your beloved city . we have sent 12 SHIPS kindly let the knights in and let them control your vessel any resistance shall not be tolerated and your entire kind shall be extinct in just a few days .we hope this treaty is beneficial to both sides thank you " said the hologram which seemed like a knight with a sentenza in his hand ."captain what are your orders?".ralph was standing like a statue when suddenly a ship came out of hyper speed ."sir orders?" said the pilot."let them in" said the ralph whose all hopes had been shattered. some 30 knights came inside the ship and said their leader said "thank you for accepting the treaty your people shall not be harmed now please hand over your weapons and let us control this ship "said the leader who was pointing a peacemaker at ralph just in case he had some ideas of fighting .the ship was taken order while the rest 11 ships also came they headed for ulloe .

after 10 cycles

they reached ulloe the entire clan was held in the town square .then a message came to the head knight "begin act 56". all knights raised there guns and started shooting at the innocent people in front of ralph .he was about to get a heart attack .then the head knight put the hologram in front of ralph and then the hologram said"if you hadn't attacked skylark perhaps ..................." the knight in the hologram gave a evil laugh and said"let him live he will be stained with the curse that because of him his entire kind died ."the pilot who was near ralph took out one of the knights gun and was just about to shoot when his heart was pierced with a dark thorn blade."well now only you are the last of your kind officially." the knights went to their ship and left for cradle .only ralph must know how it must feel he was burdened with more than a billion deaths on his hand he swore that he will take revenge on the order . will the same fate come to the gremlins or will they win only god knows what will happen

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 01:59

#30

Topoyozada

GRAVEYARRD

graveyard this please, i cant read this though the bad grammer and there's no paragraph spacing!!!!!!! but still, good story and hope you continue making good stories! BUY pls. so it with better grammer.

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 23:22

#31

Knight-Of-India

all members of aegis team

pls join ominous and people who are still not members of aegis team can join pls look at this pagehttp
://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/68088#comment-562825

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 23:22

#32

Knight-Of-India

all members of aegis team

pls join ominous and people who are still not members of aegis team can join pls look at this page
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/68088#comment-562825

Sat, 11/10/2012 - 23:22

#33

Knight-Of-India

all members of aegis team

pls join ominous and people who are still not members of aegis team can join pls look at this page
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/68088#comment-562825

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 17:59

#34

Xylinga

Ullo

Hey knight I kinda like ur story add me cuz i love being in stories even if i dont read them (thats not implying anything)
My name is Zephyr I am a swarm infected mecha knight and i hav a barbarous thorn blade and an aegis kthxbye

Sun, 11/11/2012 - 17:59

#35

Xylinga

Triplepost

hey knight u tripleposted :O

Wed, 11/14/2012 - 02:17

#36

Knight-Of-India

chapter 9 zephyr intro

i was with herex and his contingent of some 1800 mecha knights and other armies most of the armies had joined up so that we could attack on ember light i was once a swarm infected mecha knight but the gremlin empire found me and with a little repair i was back to normal again but still i see dreams of the swarm commanding me and sometimes the swarm take over me again.while i was charging herex was screaming because of his leg which had been infected by shadow damage in the morning they found him with only one leg he had to cut his other leg to stop the shadow damage to spread the following night we had another attack but not of knights of a small army of swarm soldiers not a specific type but many types there were gremlins ,knights ,beasts ,mecha knights there commander was one of the most swarm infected creatures i had ever seen luckily this time herex had kept some night guards they alerted everyone we fought i killed many of them but then there commander came near me a sudden urge developed inside me the swarm inside me was awakening and then suddenly i attacked a gremlin standing next to me .The swarm spoke and said "welcome back old friend we missed you"

now i was swarm infected and started killing my fellow comrades then suddenly herex came in front of me shouting at his crimson guards who had just arrived from the colony .The guards then suddenly killed herex they all were also infected in a few moments the battle was over not many of my former army's soldiers died they all got swarmed infected also then are commander said "my new friends welcome to the swarm are objective is end this fight and bring cradle back to peace we neither loyal to the knights or to the gremlins we are loyal to cradle!".he was himself a knight who got infected by the swarm i was trying to fight back the swarm but it was no use everyone in this army was trying the same thing but the result was same no one could break free well right now i am marching to emberlight for the battle .

Sun, 12/02/2012 - 04:51

#37

Knight-Of-India

chapter 10 reje reaches

we reached haven i traded my weapons for cradle weapons .i am right now going to emberlight for a battle .

after 2 hours
what the ? my god!!!! all of emberlight is in ruins. we have found some survivors . the sensors tell us during the battle between the gremlins and the knights a third party entered the battle and killed all other enemies or converted them into the swarm minions we found a few enemies but we told to keep them as captives instead of killing them strange we also found some emberlight gremlins.

AFTER A WEEK
TODAY WAS A GOOD DAY!!!!!!!!!!! some swarm soldiers attacked us many of us got converted but we defeated them finally some action. all swarm infected soldiers are out in special containers we will try to treat them and make them back to normal . i hope this works my brother defry is also affected by it poor squire!!!

AFTER A MONTH
well today we are called back at haven we found most of the survivors and many gremlins i wish i dould kill them but orders are orders. i heard rumor from my captain that spiral HQ is developing something whatever it is itr is big and has the potential of winning this war. i hope so it is a weapon which we can use in battle i will be fun well emberlight is lost so all troops are called to haven .right now i am boarding my ship which will take me to haven.

AFTER A FEW HOURS
well we have reached haven we all our given a few days rest after a month of fighting well i am off to the casino(opened only a few years ago) i have heard if you win you can get rich in a few days and if you don't you will be poor in only a few minutes .

AFTER AN HOUR
i won !!!!!! got some 100000 crowns in my pocket right now i am off going to shopping.

AFTER A MINUTE
i got a divine avenger for only 70000 from the black market (these people steal the thing and earn a living don't tell anyone).i have heard these swords are awesome well time to sleep

Sun, 12/02/2012 - 05:37

#38

Knight-Of-India

chapter 11 ozlo's chamber

feron came in. "are the drugs ready " asked ozlo ."yes sir" replied feron."bring in the gremlins including him " said his stupidness the great ozlo.then about 20 gremlins came in the room a with 10 vanguards ready to strike at the word of these there was the great warmaster seerus himself."ah welcome friends i hope you have changed your mind your mind about changing sides?" said ozlo ."we will never join you knights you think you can make us your servants by giving us your things your people are too stupid especially you ozlo your are a coward" said a gremlin (who turned out to the one of the 10 princes of colony)
ozlo sighed and gave a blink then a vanguard too out his sword cut the prince into a million parts only in a second."these 10 soldiers are part of my own body guard they are trained in such a way that not even a 100 crimson guard can stand against them so please don't make any plans of escaping this room.so seerus will you accept my proposal and start making those weapons i asked ?"asked ozlo."never and you can't kill me because i am the only person in all of cradle who knows how to make those"."quite right you are guards please bring him forward and feron the drug please will you".seerus came forward and feron made him eat the drug in 5 minutes he started to change his body form and turned into a knight."what have you done with me you vile creature ?"."ah yes i have just tried a new drug on you which has converted you into a knight now since we are of the same kind make those weapons"said ozlo."never i might be a knight out side but i am still a gremlin in my heart and soul"said seerus and all other gremlins said yes."very well feron".another drug was given to seeru but this time it was injected into him."who are you loyal to?"asked ozlo."to the knights "."now my fellow gremlins since the drugs are a success guards inject them."the same fate happened to all of them."who are you people loyal to ?"."the knights"."good! feron take these "gremlins" and give them the gear they need.take seerus and put him in the lab for the weapons .oh and bring the knights now ".then 2 knight were brought in."so you were the one who rebelled against me"."yes we are your fatness"said the knight who unfortunately didn't know what was going to happen to him ."very well feron please do the honors".he injected them with the drug."throw them with the swarm ones"
.they were kept with the swarm ones but they didn't get converted."we did it feron now announce that all knights must have this drug "."now call the swarm infected knights those poor things need our help".they were called and injected with another drug they all came back to their senses and became immune to swarm."feron make this drug also compulsory "."sir what about those 2 knights in there?"asked feron."oh i completely forgot about them bring them in and but drug x in them.feron did what was ordered and left the room with ozlo.the 2 two knights started to turn into something that cannot be described in words and eventually died.a new gun was issued to all the knights which was the gremlin converter which shot the drug used in on seerus and his friends.

Fri, 12/07/2012 - 04:28

#39

Knight-Of-India

chapter 12 the king is missing

the servant goes in to the king's room but he is no where to be found.he tells the guards the king is missing the crimson order searches everywhere but they are not able to find him then finally they see him in his lab."your highness what are you doing here ?"asked the curious lord."oh lord mitto please come in.you see i am finding a beast scale" said his highness who was busy finding the thing in his storage ."but my lord you can just ask for it and we will bring an entire beast for you" said mitto who was almost about to laugh."but there is no need for that" said the king.lord mitto searched his pockets and found a beast scale and gave it to the king."thank you, lord mitto" said the king who was almost about to kiss the scale."sire may i have the honor of knowing what are u doing ?" said the lord in a rather casual manner."why of course u are one of the last 5 lords.i am trying to make a portal" said the clever king."a portal to where,sire?" asked the confused lord."that is a good question you see we currently losing this war and who is causing us such great losses ?" a quick reply from his highness."that would be there council on llsola"said mitto."exactly we will take our entire crimson guards there and destroy there council"said his highness."but sir don't you think even 300 crimson guards will be no match against the full might of the knights?" said the mitto who trying to make the king change his mind."ah yes but combined with the power of the morai not even the grand army of the knights can stop me my gremlins,my genius,morai's armies and our grand arsenal which i reconstructed after seerus was gone in private nothing can stop us"said the king with a small grin on his face.suddenly a soldier cam inside the lab and said in a rush "my lord after the battle at emberlight most of our troops are dead out of the the 50,000 troops only 15,000 have returned and the swarm is also coming near us with an army bigger than no other we have ever seen and the knights are also marching though at at a slow pace but still they shall reach us on a few days towards us what should we do my lord?"."what the gremlin!!!!!!!!!! tell all soldiers,woman and children to get ready and tell all soldiers who are out side the colony to come here at once.the portal is almost done it will be ready in a few hours.go at once soldier"said the king who looked a little worried.

after 3 hours
there was a rampage in the colony soldiers were coming,women were packing, some soldiers were planting some bombs so that when they leave the colony they will destroy it,extra weapons were being destroyed and some children were playing there games.then suddenly the king came holding jar he threw it at the very center of the hall and then suddenly a portal about 100 km in diameter appeared and with a 100 trojans."my fellow gremlins please enter this portal this will take us to a safe place and these trojans shall create a diversion until we leave our beloved colony please everyone come in a line and enter the portal one by one" said the great king who was almost crying in leaving his beloved city.people started to enter the great portal and the king one last time looked at his great city and then he entered the portal.the remote for the bombs was given to a small mecha knight whose orders were to blow the city as soon as all the gremlins left the colony and he and his small contingent of trojans were out of the city defending it for a small time.

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 01:04

#40

Knight-Of-India

chapter 13 the begingging of the ending

"we have been marching for 10 days sir we need to rest and the great colony is still so far away"said the exhausted readon."no soldier we need to keep on marching and did you take the drug issued by the order,did you?"said the officer."which drug ?"said the confused raedon."you fool here have this"saying that the officer threw a pill at raedon."yuck it tastes horrible" said raedon who was crying."shut up and have it this will protect you against the swarm"said the officer."yes sir"said raedon.

after 2 days
"ah finally we have reached the colony " the tired officer then sent this information to the HQ and suddenly from no where a trojan came and made the officer into a knight toast."all soldiers take out your weapons "said the 2nd in command who was now the leader of his brigade.then another 99 trojans came out of no where.raedon dodging the first trojan took out his calibur and hit the crystal hence making he trojan into a rock.while this diversion was working the gremlins were retreating to a unknown place.'falcon hurry up we need to go or we alls hall die"said commander dark face."one minute sir i am just planting my last bomb here." answered falcon while placing a dark respiral."all done sir lets go" said falcon and started to run for the portal.

MEANWHILE OUTSIDE THE GREAT COLONY
"sir we are being over run what should we do there are too may trojans"said 3rd in command or now 2nd in command."use plan b"said the officer with a evil grin.then all the knights who were still alive took out a cloak and all of them vanished."tell all knights who have a blitz to charge their it and come behind the trojans and on my mark fire it"said the cunning officer. he yelled "fire' and all the trojans died in a second and then they continued there march and entered the great colony."check this entire city and find as many gremlins as you can and kill them on sight or use that new gun"saying this he went into the throne room of king tinzinkar and sat on it.

AFTER A FEW HOURS

raedon rushes in the throne room and says "sir we found nothing but a hologram".show it to me" said the commander.readon threw it on the ground and then a mecha knight appeared and said "greetings my knights by the time u will be seeing this i will be dead and all gremlins would have left the city and went through the portal to a safe place this hologram is actually a trigger for the bombs place in the great colony.have a happy death".then in just a few seconds a big blast happened taking the great colony and all knight with it.the commander opened his console on his hand and quickly told this all to ozlo while he and his brigade where going to their graves and then he aid his last words "long live the spiral order" and the throne room got blown into a million peices.

MEANWHILE IN SOME PLACE UNKNOWN
all the gremlins had come to a unknown place and king tinzinkar said "welcome to yarflx a secret moon which i made for emergency situations like this now this our new home we can never return to cradle. we willl build our new colony here and flourish"said the king with tears in his eyes."what about the war" asked a gremlin."war? the war is over my plan was to join the morai and together destroy the spiral order but the morai himself has escaped to a planet unknown the order is too strong for us to defeat.this was all my fault which cost us our home,our families,our fellow clockwork species who are not as advanced as our and our sure to suffer and most importantly are planet cradle we shall live here and knights can never find us here because this place rotates around cradle and the knights believe it is just a moon but they don't know that this place is the new home of the gremlin kind.now my fellow gremlins lets build our new home here" said the old and wise king.but many questions still remain a mystery what happened to the swarm?,is ralph going to take revenge on the order? and what about the mecha knights who is infected by the swarm or readon who is somewhere in the ruins of the colony ?all these questions can only be answered by one person

and that is

TIME

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 01:06

#41

Knight-Of-India

END OF STORY

WELL THIS ENDS THE STORY BUT DON'T WORRY I SHALL COMPLETE ZEPH'S PART AND RAEDON'S .

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 02:23

#42

Rabeet-Ahsan

Well thanks for re assuring

Well thanks for re assuring me that i still have a part in this thing.
Lord-Raedon

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 07:13

#43

Knight-Of-India

ch 14 rescuing the stuck

well the war is over and many knights have died and the entire gremlin race is dead or that what the order say but rumors are roaming around that the gremlins have escaped somewhere most probably to some base of theirs in the clockworks.right now we are going to attack the rest of the species who rebelled they all are going to dead in a few hours.right now i am going to the ruins of the colony searching for survivors most probably they all are dead

AFTER A FEW HOURS

i searched the throne room and found some survivors one who's name is "raedon" is alive but barely half of his body is missing and i am able to see some part of his skull he is in critical condition bur is still better than his commander who has lost all his body parts and blood is the only thing coming out of him. i am still wondering what has happened to the swarm are they still there or all of them are gone i don't know the answer of that question.well for now i am digging for survivors no gremlin has been found till now they all are dead i guess.

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 07:33

#44

Knight-Of-India

ch 15 swarm

"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the swarm is killing me we all are dying the swarm is saying that we have done our purposes and are now dying we need to wake up from this dream no no no" the last words from zeph.

BAM!!!!!!!!!!!! his brain exploded and all the things got destroyed it was a massacre blood,jelly,circuits,goo and what else everything was scattered around nothing is there the knights came and took some things

after a few days
"I am alive again!!!!!! but with a small condition i am now a knight working for the order it is at least better than being with the swarm it turns out they saw my memory bank and felt sad about me they found some parts of my body which were still in use and now feron has given me the job of taking recruits threw depth 1 and teaching them some thing or two about combat so practically i am a teacher.well now cradle is just a post in this vast galaxy where people are fighting the order this now just a checkpoint for ships which go and fight the enemies of the order i myself say long live ozlo and the order zeph is out and now i am yaku a soldier for the order "sayng this his new students came and he started teaching them a thing or two

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 07:44

#45

Knight-Of-India

chapter 16 raedon

it is just another day in the hospital well i don't have lags anymore but the order has given me robotic legs instead my weapons are missing but i am still alive and now the order has given me the mighty honor guard well that means this my only shield now a sword given to everyone with this i also got my tempered honor blade right now i am just resting for a while and hoping i can be back in service as soon as possible

Sat, 12/08/2012 - 07:46

#46

Knight-Of-India

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lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll this the end of the story but i am going to make a sequel about ralph and his revenge

Mon, 12/10/2012 - 09:00

#47

Knight-Of-India

graveyard

this story is dead so it is going to the grave yard may u rest in peace my story ;(

Wed, 12/12/2012 - 05:19

#48

Artistbma

Its still a story though,

Its still a story though, just keep it in the Treasure Vault so if people want to read it they can find it.

Fri, 12/21/2012 - 05:56

#49

Knight-Of-India

thnx

atleast someone thinks it is still a story

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