Want You Gone - Presented by Vanaduke
So, 08/04/2013 - 14:59
Yes, this is a parody of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dVVZaZ8yO6o
Because seriously, sometimes a villain needs some love, especially when he's the victim of the players' act of looting and grinding.
(For those who know the song, feel free to sing along as you read.)
Well here we are again
It's always easy for you
Remember when you killed me the first time?
Oh how we laughed and laughed
Except I wasn't laughing
Under the mist of your Shiv I've been scorchingly mad
You want your tokens? Take them
That's why I'm smashing on
I used to want you dead
But now I only want you gone
He was a lot like you
Maybe not quite as cruel
Now the Duke of Almire is in here too
One day they burned me down
So I could live forever
It's such a shame the same will never happen to you
Your health's two little pips left
That's what I'm smashing on
I'll let you rev right through it
Now I only want you gone
Goodbye my only friend
Oh, did you think I meant you?
That would be funny if the Blitz wasn't here
Soon I shall spawn again
I don't need hungry wolves now
When I'm revived here maybe I'll stop feeling so bad
Go make some new achievements
That's why I'm smashing on
You're King Tinkinzar's problem
Now I only want you gone
Now I only want you gone.
Mo, 08/05/2013 - 01:32
#2
The papaya has some suggestions :D
Overall its a wonderful parody :) But I want to make give you some suggestions, if you don't mind :P First of all, on line 3, you have it parodized (that isn't a word is it? XD) as "Remember when you killed me for the first time?". It seems to be one syllable too long, therefore, I suggest you remove the "for", thus, making it "Remember when you killed me the first time".
Secondly, (and this one, just like all of my suggestions, is up to you :D) On line 7 (or the first line of phase 2), it saids "You want your tokens. Take it" Maybe you could change it to "You want your tokens, take them" ?
That's all I have to say for now :) Once again, it's a lovely parody and it's nice seeing that Portal 2 is still flourishing :D
Mo, 08/05/2013 - 02:59
#3
@Xxpapaya
Of course, those changes make a lot more sense. Thanks a lot!
Just set the song along with this! Awesome!
+1!
First post goes to Topoyozariane.