@Blessid
Oh right... *shoots bullet through ghost head* ... oh right....
@Trololo
I'm making the App for the leader right now, sorry.
@Everyone
All Team Apps are now closed. You are allowed to make your AI program and/or Third-Party chars and must choose your Team Storyteller.
@Sonosuke: Never dare anyone, you will most likely regret it.
@Troloe: Let's see, with MK Ray, all you did was change the name, otherwise, you basically ripped off the Big Daddy!
As for Sarah, why did you have to choose Serena from Pokemon? Just why?
Edit: Also, can't be the story leader, bad story writer...
@trolol There's no point in having two neigh-useless fighters that are mainly healers on a 4-5 man squad, just think about it. 2nd, you have a near copy of what my character acts like (Quiet&paitent) The only difference is that yours is a "Jerk" while mine is "Cold". P.S. Look at her face, that smileing, happy-go-lucky face. Is that realy a quiet angry person? (But she is adorable)
Sarah could be rude, blunt, etc. and be quite joyful about that. There are jerks who love being jerks, and thus smile. As for the angry part, where does it say that? If she is, then there's such thing as Happy Mad, when someone is both happy and angry at the same time. How that works is beyond me.
I'm going to have to agree with Blessid , two healers on a team of 4 is a little unnecessary.
P.S. Bless is I'm going to hand off storyteller to you unless you don't want it. Then I will be storyteller.
Edit: Hey Sono if your low on time I can make a team C guardian if you want...
Team C is already full. If you want, you can make him a third party character.
@Raigaizam
Though I understand why you set all the points to that, I refuse to believe it's lasted 3 year without any form of endurance or sense.
Endurance and sense are added by the user. It's no stand-alone thing.
So the chip itself has no endurance whatsoever? Okay.
Hi I just realized my mistake, when I said team 'C' I actually meant team B since it has three people. Sorry about that my mistake.
Edit: not going to be here this weekend so I won't be able to post. until sunday afternoon at least.
Suuuuu I shink weh needa starts dis rulplay now. Anyvun elsh agree?
I love mispeling sturf.
Oi, Sonosuke?
I've seen how you work in Roleplays so I don't doubt your ability to write, though the plot seems a little bit iffy in my opinion.
Perhaps change the concept of the Dark Matter Lord into something worse, maybe? Perhaps the Apocrea has started to feed on the essence of the core, considering that Dark Matter is just that, standard Darkness, whilst the Apocrea is something far worse.
Or something along those lines.
This is indeed a very late post, but it's better late than never.
Just don't give up on the story, We need more fanfiction!
Looking over the entire thing, I feel as though I didn't relay the idea in the best way. The fact that I have to work off of not one, not two, but three teams is a bit too much for me, even if there are other storytellers for the other teams. I'd still have a whole team of four plus two AIs, the two Immortals (in this story, the others will have to control them when they encounter em), and have to worry about several other events and such. So maybe reworking the whole concept for others to have a easier time understanding would be a lot better than trying to fix a few minor things. At least, that's how I see it in my head. I'm of course gonna leave this thread here and start a new one.
I can understand that, I started a thread somewhere when I was younger and not so great ideas. It's rather easy to guess what happened, now that I'm older and have made things much more complex in comparison.
TVTropes also helped. Go look at it. It's wiki for everything, especially if you're writing a story, just be aware of tab cancer.
Anyhow, looking forward to Dark Core 2.0, so until then I will continue to lurk.
My team B app is a fast healer, it won't heal severe, deep cuts or status conditions, it mainly heals HP. Also, she has a weapon to fight with, just not a good aim due to combat level.