Closed SK Fanfic

Lore (Recommend reading before making an App)
Rated W for "Who uses ratings these days?"
*Mild Language
*Strong Violence
*Something about Darkness
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Rumors have been spreading that the Core is going out. Lower energy output and itself glowing dimmer each passing day contribute to the beliefs, yet the Geo Knights studying it can neither confirm nor deny it as a fact. Despite this, Lieutenants Vaelyn and Barrus has requested three teams to journey to the Core and, if necessary, bring life back to it before Cradle dies.
Seemingly a simple task, Vaelyn has detected traces of Dark Matter within the Core. On top of that, Spiral HQ has been receiving reports of two strange beings on the surface, slaughtering anything they come across as the make a beeline towards Haven.
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Dark Core is gonna be a Co-op FanFic hosted by yours truly. I'm accepting Apps for the following:
*Two immortal Psychopaths (one app per person; Revived by and works for Dark Matter Lord )
*Team B (Enemies/Rivals to Team A/Team C, respectively; Basically Team Jerk; Up to two per person; You choose the name, leader, and storyteller)
*Team C (Friends of Team A; Up to two per person; You choose the name, leader, and storyteller)
*Any other characters
The Immortals and the Teams are available on a First Come, First Serve basis. For the teams:
*Up to 4 per team, any gender
*Allowed Species: Isoran (Knight only), Gremlin, Devilite, Dragon, Valkyrie
*One A.I. per team, chosen by either the Leader or the Storyteller
*(Optional) One Battle Sprite per team
*(Optional) Fifth member, Intel knight that watches from HQ
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Application Sheet
In the subject line, say whether your character is an Immortal or is in one of the teams.
Name:
Rank/Title: (Defender Elite, Mortafire, Layoafer, *insert custom title*)(Optional for Immortals)
Species:
Gender:
Appearance: (Description or Pic of face, body, etc.)
Gear: (Custom weapons are allowed, just don't get too crazy)
About: (Personality, Bio, How they joined or started the Team/How they became one of the Immortal Psychopaths)
Special Ability: (Only have one, not too op)
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat:
Sensory:
Endurance:
Speed:
Agility:
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Accepted Apps:
Team B:
Moira Patterson
Krell
Sarah
Team C (Full):
Archemiday
Nydelarin Caltamir
Anna Shamrock
Redley

Sorry. Probably should have been more specific with the "About" part. Basically their personality, bio, and, if you want, how they got into their team or how they started the team. If they're one of the Immortal Psychopaths, then explain how they became one.

Name: Archemiday
Rank/Title: The Bard
Species: Isoran
Team : C
Gender: Male
Appearance: Always seems to wear skolver. Personal color : Blue
Gear: Silversix, Leviathan, has a custom made lute with a sword-like edge, and Gray Owlite Shield.
About: A kind, friendly knight with a knack for music. While he does fine with a sword or gun, he excels at playing music. His Sword-Lute was given to him by a friend.
Special Ability: The ability to play magical music, with varying effects from healing, to more damage.
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat:7
Sensory:6
Endurance:3
Speed:7
Agility:7

Team A consists of characters that I made already. Apps for them will come up eventually.

Name: Nydelarin Caltamir (Another Caltamir! Seriously, I've gotta stop with the Caltamirs lol)
Rank/Title: The Reaper
Species: Isoran
Gender: Male
Appearance: Black Flak Jacket, Black Chapeau, Dark Aura
Gear: Dual Flourishes(Completely black. Even the blades.).
About: Nydelarin is shrouded in mystery, not to mention an aura of darkness surrounding him. His enemies call him "Reaper" on account of his dual flourishes and outfit. His friends call him "Larin", a simple but sticking nickname. He belongs to Team C.
Special Ability: Charm Speaking.('Nuff said.)
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat: 7
Sensory:4
Endurance:2
Speed: 9
Agility: 8

Name: Dervenin
Rank/Title: Lone Juggernaught
Species: Isoran
Gender: Male
Personal Colour: Blue
Appearance: Stocky, Well built, a few scars dot his body, namely one running the length of his left cheek, hair is slicked back, spiky and short.
Gear: Avenger, Faust and Monolith*, , Armor is a modified set of Heavy Demo Armor, trading in it's bonuses and some of it's normal resistances, for an equal resistance to all elements, Traits are shared with his shield, which is designated as the 'Mighty Glacier' set. Do what you will with what it looks like, Has a heavy country accent, but this hides a good deal of intelligence.
About: Dervenin is known as a traitor, and has severed all connections with the Spiral Order to pursue his own agenda, and a few years later, he was discovered assisting gremlin forces in many of their deployments, such as repelling knights and speeding up deconstruction of levels, whilst also assisting knight parties, usually appearing out of no where and for no reason. No one knows what his goal is, but the fact that he is a traitor and that he still successfully resists attempts to bring him in, mark him as a high priority target. He tends to seen in emberlight, assisting in any way he can, and as a vendor selling things he has obtained over his travels.
Personality: Stubborn, Reasonable, Hopeful, Friendly enemy, Inspiring/Terrifying, Mellow, Loathing (The Spiral Order/Tikinzar and the Crimson Order's chains of command, he sees the two factions only as a careless bunch of monkeys, all too willing to send their soldiers to an inevitible demise, and as such intervenes in an attempt to minimise slaughter (We butcher them 5 to 1 ingame) he does not hate the footsoldier, only the general)
Special Ability: Dervenin bound his soul to his Avenger, allowing him to utilise abilities tied to it, such as morphing the sword into alternate heavy weapons, and flinging around the silhouette blades that line is known for, whislt a secondary bonus is that it essentially is a Lock Circut. Power increases as hope rises, in himself and his fellows.
Role: Although this is up to you, I'd prefer if he was a third party in the story, that assists/hinders groups A and C, whilst purely hindering group B. The subject of his mortality is also up to you.
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat:8
Sensory:5
Endurance:7
Speed:3
Agility:7
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Monolith
Appearance: A Sudaruska with an eye where the 'head' of the blade is, other than that, nothing else different
Gender: Male
Personality: Jerk with a heart of Gold, Mocking and a Troll, to anyone in his general vicinity.
About: Dervenin's companion/weapon, Monolith was formed purely by accident, and has relentlessly pestered Dervenin for the entirety of his existense, annoying and supporting him throughout his adventures. Loves to scream "DYNAMIC ENTRY!" whenever Dervenin shows up.
Sorry if I went a bit overboard with the description, I get carried away writing walls of text >_<
Anyhow, Good luck with your fanfic, I look forward to reading it.

@Creeper Still waiting on you to finish
@Archem+Rai+Infini Accepted

Application Sheet
Name: Anna Shamrock.
Rank/Title: The brutal striker
Species: half Isoran and half Valkyrie.
Part of team: C
Gender: female
Appearance: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-4Kiq1eJur8Q/T7Uv8Ts33YI/AAAAAAAAAtw/ddEOitVLCI...
Gear: the armor she wears is just a re-skin of the divine set and the gauntlets she uses deal split elemental and normal damage.
About Anna Shamrock
Personality: Anna tends to be a very relaxed and helpful person. But she can get angry fast if she sees someone treated unjust.
Bio: when the valkyrie named Liam Lionheart went to Cradle disguised as a knight he Met the beautiful Elisa Shamrock. The two shared a bond almost immediately. And after a short while they even started living together. but the happiness had to end and Liam had to return to Elysium. however he did not know that Elisa was pregnant with his child and left never knowing that he forced Elisa to raise it on her own.
Special Ability: Divine aura.
What it looks like: A light starts emitting from Anna along with six wings from her back (only esthetic, she cant fly).
How it works: When Anna gets pushed over an emotional limit or faces crave danger she can tap into her divine power greatly increasing her speed, attack power and she can fire beams of concentrated light (elemental damage).
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat:9
Sensory:0
Endurance:5
Speed:8
Agility:8

The things I forget to mention are gonna kill me one day...
In this universe, Gremlins and some Devilites live and work with the Knights. Constructs, for the most part, have been reprogrammed by the Gremlins' replacement, the Prismas. I really should add some of these things to the OP.
@Liam Accepted
@Creeper Can you change the Bio part? Sorry, real sorry. I just find my forgetfulness really annoying.

Reworked my app so it's not a gremlin anymore and it is one of the immoral creatures...

I think the following speaks for the subject. More coming sooner or later, and possibly better.

Nothing much, really. Just a bunch of things and things.

Name: Moira Patterson
Rank/Title: Field Medic
Species: Isoran
Gender: Female
Appearance: Here
Gear: General Fatuiges and red cross insignia to mark her as a non-combatant, Surgon helmet, Extensive medical kit, flares, canteen, and Blaster.
About: Known to take her work to a serious degree, Moira can seem cold or detatched, but her cold demeanor creates a sense of professionalism and security amoungst paitents. After graduating from the Medical Corps, Moira was assigned into a group as cold as she was.
Special Ability:
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat: 1
Sensory:8
Endurance:6
Speed:8
Agility:7

Name: Krell
Rank/Title: Defender Elite
Species: Isoran
Gender: male
Appearance: Picture made Short, scrawny, desheveled, dark purple PC
Gear: (Custom weapons are allowed, just don't get too crazy) Cryo-Blade (Ice-Dagger, for close quarters.), Apocrean Bow and arrows (Self explanatory, does shadow/ poison)
Gear (cont'd): Hood of the night (Chaos Cowl with Sinister skelly mask front. Hi Psychnade) Shadow Brigandine (Custom Sinister skelly Armor)
About: (Personality, Bio, How they joined or started the Team/How they became one of the Immortal Psychopaths) Sneaky, strategic, thief, be careful around this guy. His humourous nature sems inviting, until you find you've lost all your crowns. He was caught once and they put him on a team to repay the order. He always looks for a way out, even if it means going AWOL. There is good in him, but its been buried deep under the depths of poverty.
Special Ability: (Only have one, not too op) Every hour he can regenerate his supply of arrows.
Stats (30 points max, up to 10 points per stat. Go nuts)
Combat: 5
Sensory: 5
Endurance: 5
Speed: 10
Agility: 5
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If we don't start this soon, it's going to crash and die.

Sorry, I'm in the middle of making the second Immortal, then we can start the story.

Name: Arkhov
Rank/Title: Black Knight
Species: Unknown, anatomy similar to Isorans
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall, muscular frame; black sclera w/ fuschia irises and pupils
Gear: *Mothanes - A size-changing claymore similar in appearance to a Gran Faust without the aura. Arkhov can summon Swarms or a force field by stabbing the ground, and shoot ethereal blades at his prey.
About: Arkhov is almost completely insane, as a result he is highly unpredictable in any situation. He has a tendency to laugh to himself or out loud, and is skilled in both sword and hand-to-hand combat. Despite this, he is loyal to the Dark Matter Lord who made him immortal and respects Genevra, seeing her as a senior (since she was made into an immortal before him).
Arkhov was (emphasis on "WAS"
) a highly respected warrior of his time. His enemies all fell to him, and his comrades all adored his abilities in the war zone. However, this would all soon change when his family was assassinated along with the Lords he swore to protect. This drove him to madness, and he vowed revenge on all who stand before him.
Soon, Arkhov's life slowly grew shorter as he laid waste to those who saw him as noble. The Dark Matter Lord became interested in him, and appeared before Arkhov one night. It promised him eternal life so long as Arkhov worked for it. He accepted the offer, and Genevra was summoned to rip his heart out. Since then, Arkhov worked for the Dark Matter Lord, constantly doing it's bidding as he quenches his bloodlust.
Special Ability: Swarm Energy - Arkhov has the ability to manipulate Shadow energy and Darkness to make blasts of energy and to increase his overall strength.
Stats
Combat: 8
Sensory: 2
Endurance: 9
Speed: 6
Agility: 5

Do you always complain when an RP doesn't start for a couple days?

Not really. I just like to keep the RPs I'm in at the top of the page........

Note: This is a FanFic, not an RP
I am starting on the first chapter now, since all I really needed were the two Immortals for now. You're free to choose the Storyteller of your team, however they won't be in effect until Chapter 2. Also, I'm changing the title of the thread.

Name: Redley
Rank: Champion
Species: Isoran
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall, has green eyes, is also seen wearing Infernal Guardian Armor and Helm
Gear: Vog Cub Coat and Helm. Has a Grand Tortoise Shield. Has a Barbarous Thorn Blade, A blitz needle, A divine Avenger and a Gran Faust.
Personality: Is quiet when exploring with the team, often acts as the team's guardian due to his shield, likes to knock out lots of enemies quickly and is friend's with Tortodrone's.
Bio: Redley was often sent to explore the clockworks and due to a lot of exploring with 3 other knights, they asked if he wanted to join the team. Redley said Yes and then joined Team C. Redley then was told to explore a place called "The Ancient Grove" and Redley when to Depth 24 where it was.
As Redley was walking on the floor, he saw a Tortodrone being attacked by a unknown creature (Arkhov) and Redley rushed in to not only protect the Tortodrone but to fight back the unknown creature. The fight went badly due to Redley's weak shield and was nearly killed but the Tortodrone's friends came in the nick of time and managed to make the unknown creature retreat.
The Tortodrone's where going to kill Redley until the one Tortodrone who was being attacked stopped them. That Tortodrone walked over to the center and pulled out a shield from the ground. Redley was able to stand up and the Tortodrone gave the new shield to Redley which was the Grand Tortoise Shield.
Redley thanked them and since then, Redley has helped out Team C but as also been saved by Tortodrone's if things got really dangerous.
Special Ability: Call of the Tortodrone!: If Redley has low HP and his shield broke by an enemy, Redley can release a loud cry of help. A Tortodrone nearby will rush towards Redley and help him. Redley can still be attacked even if the Tortodrone is still alive. The Tortodrone won't attack any off Redley's allies either. However, when the Tortodrone is helping Redley, he can't heal, his shield doesn't repair and it only works once per Section. (e.g. 0-4, 5-8 etc..)
Stats
Combat: 10
Sensory: 0
Endurance: 10
Speed: 3
Agility: 3

Can you say hella-overpowered? Because that's Hella-overpowered there man.

How is it overpowered? It is only one Tortodrone in a section. It only happens when Redley is nearly out and shield broken. Redley can't heal, can't repair shield. Also, I used only 26 points instead of the 30 given. Care to explain how it is overpowered? If it was at depth 1 (For who knows why), It would have the strength of a Tier 1 Tortodrone.

Well, you have max endurance and combat (I don't think these are really going to factor into the game, more of a guide, but still.) And now, if someone manages to fight you, break your sheild, AND is about to kill you, you have a free "Nope, can't touch me" card. It's a copout sort of thing like how you said "If Redley has low HP and his shield broke by an enemy [Redly will call a Tortodrone]...Redley is immune to all damage until the Tortodrone dies."
So you're *LITTERALLY* godmoding yourself, creating a 'selective' perk (One that wont attack friends), and is refreshable. Need anymore explination why it's OP? I might have a few more reasons laying around here

*Sigh* App is changed but there is a huge loophole with one of the accepted characters, e.g. Genevra.
The description of how Genevra is described as well as the picture Sonosuke created, it looks familiar to a Y... Creeper can't create a character not based off a game! The one Creeper copied off this time was Yveltal due to the similar description and shape. It might have been the way Sonosuke drew it but, the loophole has been uncovered!

Really? *looks at Genevra, then at pic of Yveltal* ... Huh... That was a coincidence, I swear.
Also, you're always saying something about Creeper's Char descriptions and pics. It's starting to bug me. Aside from that, Redley is accepted.
@Team C Members
Now that Team C is full, please choose your team leader and team storyteller. Since Team B doesn't have much, I'll fill in the slots with characters of my own, and we'll start the story.

I am not as good at creating stories or being a leader. I am only good at uncovering Loopholes! Seriously though, all of Creeper's characters have a bit ripped off from another character from a game.

Why does it matter? If ze wants to use an official character, let hir use an official character. Unless said char is already part of the universe they're applying to, it shouldn't be a big deal.

So who is the storyteller in team c, because I sort of want be it and I'm guessing Blessid-Bombardier probably does too...
P.S. Robo-Drilldigger: Characters who are inspired by other characters are fine, what's your problem with that? I definitely didn't connect Genevra with Yveltal or whatever.
Edit: Hmm, went and looked at the two..
Sorry the biggest similarity I'm seeing is that they are both Dark and can fly. Yveltal wasn't formed when a creature was experimented on.

Alpha Squad Log, Euclid. Day 34
It's been over a month since we've been tasked to enter the Clockworks. Only a few days ago we entered the Core of this planet. I'm not sure how we're still alive, but we are. We've been going for days without food or water, yet it's as if we don't need those anymore. Rulen's been talking about it for a while, and Parma has been worrying about our comrades topside. Grantz, for the most part, has been quiet the entire time we've been here, occasionally mentioning how bright everything was when we wake up.
I think we've found something of interest for once. Grantz and Rulen volunteered to go check it out. When they came back, Grantz said it was a room with an orb of light in the middle, and that they found a machine with symbols on it. Rulen noted it had an uncanny resemblance to the Alchemy Machines in Haven.
This place is truly a strange one.
Euclid, Signing Out
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EDIT: Changed up some of the wording near the end

What does storyteller entail?
On a second note, I'll be team Leader for Team C (If you want me to be, I have tactics and charmspeak lol) if noone else more qualified is there for it.
ON YET ANOTHER NOTE, Team C needs a universal Battle Sprite and AI. I vote for an AI called 'Frost', a third-year AI with the wits of Napolean Bonaparte.

This one is a third party character
Name: MK Ray
Rank/Title: Construct Lord
Species: Construct
Gender: Genderless but people call it a male
Appearance
Gear: 5* Ancient Plate Set, 5* Shield Bracelet and 5* Vog Cub set defense values. (Basically, tons of normal, high piercing and elemental resistance and immune to most status conditions.) Has a drill on his right side which is permanent and deals heavy normal damage. Downside, all damage dealt to MK Ray is permanent.
About: MK Ray is a non talking robot who is calm, patient and occasionally follows other knights if he hasn't been attacked which is shown by his yellow eyes. If the eyes turn red, he will start attacking aggressive, gets smarter to the opponents tricks and will show no mercy.
Mk Ray was created by the masterminds in the Crimson order to help protect them but during the programming, they accidentally removed the ally system and when they activated him, he started walking around but, wasn't following their orders. A knight who entered the Crimson Order base was killed quickly by MK Ray because the knight hit him.
MK Ray never listened to the gremlins though and they just left him in the clockworks, hoping he would kill anyone that wasn't a gremlin.
Special Ability: Temporary dash: Like a knight, he can do a temporary dash and if anyone is in the road of the dash, his drill will deal heavy damage to anyone. Cooldown of 30 seconds.
Stats
Combat: 10
Sensory: 5
Endurance: 10
Speed: 1 (If dashing, is 4)
Agility: 1
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This one is for Team B
Name: Sarah
Rank/Title: Vanguard Healer
Species: Isoran
Gender: Female
Appearance
Gear: 5* Wrench Wand with healing powers, similar to a Spectrum 6 Darkfang Mender. Has a Blitz Needle if everyone is fine enough. Armor is the same as Azure Guardian set.
Personality: Quiet, patient, hates poison, doesn't like shouting and can be a right jerk sometimes.
Bio: Sarah was like any other knight growing up but the older she got, the more of a jerk started to show from her. Other knights didn't like the jerk part of her but a team wanted her to join because of the jerk part.
When exploring, she was a great fast healer as well as a half decent gunner but they really noticed the poison and fire dislike quickly. In the long run, Sarah has been a great ally.
Special Ability:
Reversed Healing: When the tip of her Wrench Wand flashes red instead of yellow, it will harm people instead of healing. Lasts one minute, cooldown of 5 minutes (Basically if the person was cursed and used a cursed weapon.)
Stats
Combat: 3
Sensory: 8
Endurance: 3
Speed: 8
Agility: 8
((OOC: Hope this is fine and I also hope I am not too late. Also, Sarah can be the leader of Team B if she is accepted...))

The Storyteller is basically the one that writes out their Team's part of the story. I'll make a seperate thread for Storytelling Applications
If no one else comes up to fight for the spot of Leader by the time the first official chapter comes up, then Larin can be leader.
By "Universal", you mean a mixed BS+AI? The Sprites have AIs in them already, so I assume you mean a Combat AI that also operates a Battle Sprite body. Can you clarify what you mean or make an app for it?
Note:
AIs can communicate with Knights, Gremlins and whatnot in our speech patterns, so if you make that BS+AI hybrid, it can speak our tongue rather than growls and blips.
EDIT:
@Trolololololololoe
I Dare Robo to say something about your "unoriginality". Apps Accepted

Dude, that's a Big Daddy. ARE YOU KIDDING ME???? BIG DADDIES ARE PAINS!!!!!
(Big Daddies are from the Bioshock series.)

Uhhh, might want to change your Team B app there guy, we already have a healer.

Name: Frost
Rank/Title: 3rd Year AI
Species: Battle Sprite
Gender: Male
Appearance: An electronic chip. https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSZHmP7KtDfeMAskL1p... except with 'FROST' written on it.
His digital appearance is a Dire Wolf, such as this one from Game of Thrones http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120404151932/gameofthrones/images/c...
About(Now finished!): Frost's programmers were the most prestigious in the world, the smartest too. He was their one creation was even smarter than them. And, with the AI's symbol and graphical appearance as a Dire Wolf, he could be fearsome, too. The AI Frost has been passed team-to-team for 3 years, and is even more battle-worthy than when it was made. It may have no physical form like a battle sprite, but Frost's high-grade thinking more than makes up for lack of physical damage.
Stats (30 points max, up to 30(IN THIS CASE) points per stat. Go nuts)
Intelligence: 25
Endurance: 5
Team C
Name: Genevra
Rank/Title: Dark Mutation Guard
Species: Immoral Devilite
Gender: Female
Appearance: Has 2 dark wings where it arms where, it's legs are replaced by claws and tail is extended with sharp spikes at the end. The entire body is purple with dark lines all over the body. Eyes have eyelashes but the color is pure blue. At the tip of the claws are sharp spikes at the end.
Gear: Since she can't hold onto items, here are the attacks. Defense is the same as Snarbolax set.
Wing slash: Fly's towards the foe and slashes them with her claws.
Claw slash: Similar to Wing Slash but uses her claws. More damaging but if it misses, easier to attack her.
Personality: Silent, is unable to talk, likes to mess with anyone's minds, is known to be crazy and struggles to sleep.
Bio: Genevra was like any other Devilite, working hard, eating Dark Matter and trying to stop the mean gremlins from messing with knights or devilites. However, one day when the gremlin's attacked, Genevra got caught and fainted due to a tough battle. When she woke up, she was being experimented on by scientist gremlins.
The gremlin's experiments mutated Genevra which made weird mutations happen. The gremlins muttered to themselves when her arms changed into wings, her tail grew much longer and the thing that was most surprising was the fact her voice was gone. However, due to much experimenting, her body died and her soul was outside her body. Just then though, she got a request from an unknown source called "Dark Matter Lord" and said "I can revive you so you and your body is alive but, you need to work for me! Do we have a deal?"
Genevra's soul nodded up and down to agree and her soul entered her body again and woke up. The darkness inside her from agreeing to the unknown source was so strong that Genevra broke out of her prison and she killed the gremlins that experimented on her. Genevra then flew to the location of the creature and worked for it ever since then
Special Ability: Oblivion Pulse - If Genevra eats enough Dark Matter and is attacked by anyone, she will release a pure dark pulse that deals immense damage to anyone even if they have shadow defense. Anyone who is hurt by this attack, Genevra recovers 75% health from the damage that was dealt. Requires 80 Dark Matter eaten and 1 hit by a foe to activate. Cooldown of 1 minute.
Stats
Combat: 8
Sensory: 2
Endurance: 8
Speed: 6
Agility: 6