PROLOGUE

This story begins with a group of friends... BioSpartan,leader of the generation-tau. Evaralia,the team's new medic. Gabrieal,the leader of the groups guild. KillerTroop,the team's tank. these 4 knights ,together, fought through the chasm, through hell and back to keep a promise. Never leave a knight behind.

CHAPTER 1
"Where the hell am I?" BioSpartan muffles. He then hears a buzzing and activates his comm
"Is anyone there?" said a feminine voice from his comm.
"to who am I speaking?" he says in reply. he then hears a more masculine voice.
"Glad to see another knight make it down in one piece. There's another knight not far from your position. Why don't you go help her reach the rescue camp?"
BioSpartan hears the feminine voice again but not from his comm. "Is anyone there? Please someone help me!" he looks down the mountain and sees the knight the other knight was talking about. His heads-up display said her name was Evaralia. He could see clearly that her leg was trapped under a rock.he proceeded to slide down the rocks to reach her pod. upon getting there he walked over and used his telekinetic module to move it.The other knight no longer stuck was crippled but living.
"I guess your HUD already told you my name?"
"yes according to it your name is Evaralia correct?
"yes it is" she said obviously blushing behind her helmet.
BioSpartan proceeded to pick her up and slowly but surely made it to the rescue camp where medics attended to her crippled leg.
"Nice work bringing in the chick dude" joked one knight
eventually she recovered and they made their way over the chasm. before they had left BioSpartan had picked up two outfits one being a vita-suit the other a fencing jacket. He had taken them apart and combined them to create a vita suit that was light and sturdy wet could withstand even a snarblox's bite.now their journey had begun to reach a place..Haven and from there...Home.
END RECORDING

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