Just for analyzing any fanfictions. Please use appropriate language, and don't bash the writers.

"My Life as a Snarbolax"

Indeed, it is a very engaging story to read. No overly complex words, yet there is an absence of elementary words. That's a plus. However, I do have a feeling that sign-ups should only be introduced right before another chapter, as a contributor could get very bored waiting for their character to enter the story.

"Tales from the Stonefield Borough (I think I got the title wrong)."

Very scrumptious series of shorts to bite into. The use of body language and dialogue was written well enough for me to literally paint a scene about, which is a huge plus to this story. The characters seem much more realistic than the average majority of the bipolar protagonists, and the use of descriptive words allows me to picture the little gremlins as if they were normal people. However, the only difficulty I have while reading this series are some of the resolutions, which are so short that I almost forget that they were written at all.

"Becoming a Vanguard"

A promising story, I'll guarantee you fellow Knights that. However, the story is practically riddled with grammatical errors, which makes reading very disruptive. The plot itself was a bit too random for me to comprehend, and some of the sentences seemed like fragments or run-ons. Still, if one could get past that, a perfect story is very close.