Chaos [Fanfic][Accepting Apps!]
Jue, 12/27/2012 - 02:47
Alrighty... Hiya everyone!
- Chaos
Chaos is sort-of a Spiral Knights Fanfic with Cradle resembling Real Life. So... All I can say is, sit down, and here I go! Also... Can any of you guys post feedback of the chapters? I would love to hear... er... or see what you think about it.
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Chapters:
Made it easier for me and everybody ☺
My own character:
Name: Acel
Gender: Female
Appearance: She wears a Flak Vest and regular clothes under them and uses Arm Blades of any kind of sword. Eye color is black and her hair is pink.
Race: Knight/Student/Guild Master
Personality: Happy Go Lucky and Tactical
Bio: A father's daughter. She is pampered by her father, but one day, when she began to manufacture her own makeshift arm blades, her father died, leaving her with his fortunes, and especially, the rank of Guild Master in his father's guild.
Jue, 12/27/2012 - 09:19
#2
Let me see...
Name: Bob Jones
Species: Devilite
Weapons: His wits and an ancestral Gran Faust
Personality: Generally cheerful at all times except when working.
Likes: Adventure, Anything other than monotonous work
Dislikes: Cheese, his job
Bio: Bob Jones is your typical 9 to 5 devilite who managed to get a job at Haven. He longs to break free from the rat race that is his life and is always up for an adventure. He was born in a Dark City and worked under several Pit Bosses who frequently punished him for no good reason. After years of abuse and working overtime he tagged along with some adventurers back to Haven where he got a job working with Sullivan at the Coliseum. After a particularly traumatic experience with a hunk of Swiss Cheese he goes out of his way to avoid it.
Jue, 12/27/2012 - 09:53
#3
I might as well see what you do with this character
Name: Umbra
Appearance: He dresses in the max armor of Skelly series, his natural color is dark purple and he uses Gran Faust and Acheron
Race: Spiralian
Personality: Is dark, and sometimes goes mad(meaning crazy)
Bio: He went crazy from encountering the Rabid Snarbolaxes. One of them bit his right arm and he hasn't been the same. He has gotten counciling but every now and then he goes into a craze trance.
Vie, 12/28/2012 - 02:09
#4
Prologue: The Night Before the Day After
< A few weeks before >
A bead of sweat dropped from Feron’s chin. He breathed deeply as he looked at his adversary. The dark silhouette of his opponent revealed itself slowly in the light.
At the sight of his foe, Feron was shocked.
The figure dashed behind him and impaled him, and probably killing him.
“No one will know of this...” the figure growled.
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Umbra
I couldn’t sleep; so I went for a midnight walk. Strange, isn’t it? But over the past few weeks I haven’t really been feeling well, ever since THAT accident...
As I quietly walk through the neighborhood, I clearly see the leaves of a certain tree, rustling.
Suddenly, I hear footsteps behind me. I grab my Acheron in a flash, but then I heard faint voices. I dashed behind the cars and I listen carefully, straining my ears; but alas, as close as I have been, I could only make out the words:
massacre and Spiral Order
Whatever it could mean, probably the recent massacre of the Spiral Order, but what did these voices have to do with it?...
I begin to growl uncontrollably, as well as scrape the car I was behind. It made an unusually irritating sound which made me howl. Oops.
What was that?! one voice yelled.
I dash away, hopefully not seen by those guys.
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...Just a stray cat... I think... *
Idiot! If it wasn’t then we’d be dead by now! **
Well at least it was! *
You thought it was!... Now... Let’s just cross our hands it WAS a cat... **
Vie, 12/28/2012 - 02:32
#5
Maybe let's add another character
Name: Eternity
Race:Stranger
Appearance: Dresses in normal Stranger clothes, but in complete black, and keeps his black snipe(which is his beloved pet and has trained to send messages) perched upon the brim of his hat
Personality: He shows up at the least expected times, and gives info to Umbra and the other heroes of your fanfic.
Bio: He lead a peaceful life until the Swarm came and ruined his whole life by unknown events that lead to his wife and daughter to commit suicide. Since then he has acted like a Peace Keeper, being a tool for Fate and acting on it's will.
Vie, 12/28/2012 - 02:34
#6
Oops double post sorry
Oops double post sorry
Lun, 12/31/2012 - 06:37
#7
Chapter 1: The Weirdest Morning
Umbra
My head shakes from all the wine last night... Stupid hangover... Wait... Did I even drink a glass last night?
I walk along the sidewalk to my favorite newsstand. As usual, I buy my paper for a hundred crowns. Then I walk by the coffee shop, where obviously, I drink coffee... As I go back to my house, I pass by Eternity, my loyal friend who gives me information that’s not viewed on the paper. He shakes his head as I say “Hi” and I continue on my way. Strange of him, though, he’s not as quiet as this... Usually, he’s more talkative.
I shrug it off as I reach the doorstep.
I go to the living room, reading the article of the investigation of the massacre.
Massacre?
My head shakes again. I recall the incident last night. I heard these two morons talking about the massacre... Then I transfor—UGH!... Head feels like it’s in a vise... Urgh! I begin to growl... Quickly, I take the bell in my room and ring it.
At... least... I got it in timeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
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Bob Jones
Hi! I’m Bob Jones; but you can call me Bob Jones. I’m a Devilite living here in town... With my inherited Gran Faust, I help in fending off the Jellies that cross the perimeters of the coliseum seats. I was lucky to have the higher-ups let me in... :D
The skies darken, like something’s going to happen. It’s always a sign. My dad always taught me that...
“BOB!” Sullivan yells.
“Y-yes sir, I’ll get back to work!” I quickly say before he roars.
“GOOD!” Sullivan roars and gets back to his desk.
Sigh...
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Acel
Damnit... Nothing good to do today... Got mist to burn, some Prize or Lockboxes to keep me happy but something’s still missing...
I hold my pendant, a treasure I’ve held onto for years, since my father died...
“’Cel...” a deep voice behind me called.
“Oh, Swift, it’s you...” I turn around, seeing my best friend, Swift behind me. He keeps me from getting down, but... I know, I have the worst taste in best friends. A gal, with a guy for a best friend? Not really typical like girls but… He… He’s special.
”Whoa, whoa... Don’t just “Oh, Swift” me. What’s going on…?” he asks.
“It’s my dad. I keep thinking of him…” I say.
“Oh c’mon, don’t drag up that memory again. ‘Cel, if you don’t move on, you’ll never be able to,” he says.
“I know…” I reply.
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Umbra
Zzzzzzzzzzzz…
Lun, 12/31/2012 - 06:40
#8
Will post more interesting chapters...
And maybe I should cut it with the point of views. Maybe limit it to 2 P.O.V.s then switch to third persons?
Guys help me become better!
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Anyways... Hope you like Acel and Bob Jones' appearances!
I simply ooze inspiration don't I? Let me see the first Chapter and I might give some Apps =3