Spiral knights:Banned
Di, 03/12/2013 - 18:52
Recon Module 1
Banned...banned from the people I fought for,the ones I looked up to,the ones i would give my life for.And for what reason!? I would not stand idely by while my squad murdered those defenceless gremlins in cold blood!I was not given a fair trial,no.I was locked in chains and taken to the deepest depths.Now I am stuck in this frozen hell of mine.I will have my revenge.Even if it takes me to the end of days.Mark my words Spiral Order.My return will be your reckoning.
Recon module 2
Arkus,i am sorry,I now feel your suffering.I hear them,I hear them asking why i did it.I tell them it was the right choice,but they don't listen! No,they still ask.I shouldn't have followed you,no.I should have let you be.Not make you see the true colors of this order.Rest in peace Arkus,you deserve it.
Recon Module 3
I see the light,not for death,no.For the sanctuary.It calls for me.It wants me.I need it.It wash's away the sins that the tears of angles could not.I do not hear their voices anymore.They do not ask,the tell me to go.Go to the sanctuary.I no longer want revenge,i am at [eace with the order.As the guardian of this sanctuary,I will protect this place from the claws of gremlins,to the jaws of wolvers.This is the place where the wicked cannot see you with their many eyes,nor can they grab at you with their many hands.This is my saf haven.I will go there.This will be my final recording.
This is my first Fan fic so please give me your feed back :) Thank you!
Di, 03/12/2013 - 21:27
#2
Some thing tells me someone didn't read it.
@ssosme obviously it's a fan fic it even says so.and unless you read the story then you would actually know what it's about..
Baka..
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 00:49
#3
Interesting...
@Night-Rove Are you Japanese? Your English is very good.
It was a bit of a short story, which could have probably been fleshed out but considering you were limited by Recon Modules as a text format it isn't too bad. One small plot hole though, recon modules were only necessary in the times of the Alpha Squad, when there was no uplink formed to communicate with knights.
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 01:04
#4
@Unstable
What's wrong with foreign english? There are players from different countries playing this game.
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 01:09
#5
I wasn't saying there was anything wrong with it. I even complimented Night on her good English. I just saw Night-Rove saying baka, which is stupid in Japanese and would fit into the context of what she was saying.
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 03:08
#6
Nice
Anyone saw this and thought some guy was discussing his ban on the forums
Not bad... Maybe change the title to banished? Or exiled? It's is rather misleading XD
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 04:55
#7
Wait...
I thought Baka was Phillipino....... Anyway, Nice fan-Fiction, but some weird things going on...
Sa, 03/16/2013 - 06:41
#8
@Zorbez
I too did think that he was discussing his ban. Then I saw Recon Module...
@Knight of Vanaduke - there is also an English Translation for Baka if it is in Filipino and that is *maybe*. However, the *Baka* mentioned is in Japanese, meaning *stupid*/*idiot*...
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 05:08
#9
Kawaii desu
Hey look guys, I said kawaii desu. I must be japanese!
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 07:11
#10
And then I saw the recon module...
I thought that someone posted a ban complaint here ._.
The story is nice, but maybe next time use a different title as what Zorbez said.
Kawaii is translated to Kuwait on IPad ._.
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 14:53
#11
Im multi language :)
Baka = Stupid/idiot in Japanese
Baka = Cow in Philippines
Mi, 03/13/2013 - 15:20
#12
Moar language!
Actually...
Baka = Goat, in Filipino :) (Philippine language)
Baka = Maybe, in Filipino
Cow is "Kalabaw" in Filipino.
But... Let's not derail this thread any further, especially since it's this guy's first fanfic.
Do, 03/14/2013 - 16:40
#13
O_O
A character from my favorite anime is named Baka *ruined childhood, runs home and flops on bed crying into Chromalisk*
Hi whats this really about ?
I read it!