I'll be posting later today then, if I get a break at school.
Retribution- a Roleplay (discussion thread)
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 06:12
#102
Pretty colors
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 06:44
#103
Demoman?
((Sorry about the shortened post, books to read, stuff to do))
I followed saya into the door. After some conversation and some fighting, the boy brought us to a tournament. I said, "I'm fine as long as I don't have to kill another person.". I then took off my backpack and reached inside. I found my swordlute broken in half. I reached in further to find a roll of gaffa tape. I taped the two pieces together. I reached in and found some of my old dusker gear. After a few minutes, I was a dusker knight with a swordlute and no shield. I turned my head to saya in a way that asked if she wanted to duo with me.
((I thought of a perfect song for when arch was falling. Its rainin men!))
((@thin and kaiju. I agree with those plots 😊))
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 07:11
#104
@everyone
Remember, this is the discussion thread. I'm the only one posting to the story thread so far.
Here is the story thread. Kaijuhunter, could you link to it in the opening post here please?
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 08:26
#105
welp I just got completely
welp I just got completely ignored.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 08:31
#106
@Gzilla
Darn, I'm sorry about that; thanks for pointing it out. Let's see what I can do about it; first, I'll copy-paste your last post here:
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"Crap." I muttered. This wasn't good, we had sent the fangs crawling back to the hole they had wormed out of. "Alright give us your location we'll be there soon." Thank Cradle that the Enforcers hadn't been able to identify them, they could still walk in public without getting arrested, but most if not all Haven locals knew their reputation. I darted over rooftops with five other pack members. When we reached the location, Hotaru had something else to say. "That group over there." he pointed to a group of four in the nearby square. "Yeah what?" I asked inquisitively. "One of them just took down three fang members single handedly." "If the Fangs want them, they know info, let's "talk" to them and see what they know." I grinned they seemed tough but it was four versus six, and we were a hell lot stronger then some spiral order rookies. I stopped and grabbed one of the girls on the shoulder, "You're going to tell us all you know about the fangs, they wanted you for a reason, tell us, and I might consider letting you go." The girl looked in shock at Hotaru. I looked questioningly at him, he backed off immediately. "We don't need to discuss this with any of you." one of the guys said angrily. "Oh where are my manners, we haven't introduced ourselves." I grinned all, all seven of the pack members present revealed their weapons. I laughed sadistically "We're the pack, and right now you're the only thing standing between us and our prey."
Had some powerplays, need you guys to check off on it.
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Who is the girl you mentioned? I marked her presence in bold print.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 08:34
#107
I wanted to get the
I wanted to get the attention of Saya, since then she would notice Hotaru.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 08:44
#108
Alrighty then.
@Gzilla, is it possible for you to tweak your story addition so that it occurs right after Gwen knocked off the Fangs thugs? You'll need to handle it kinda carefully though - Gwen's rash tendencies might get your characters killed.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 08:58
#109
Done, now the pack arrives on
Done, now the pack arrives on the seen right before Gwen cuts in half the last fang member.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 10:39
#110
@Ultimaknightz
Gzilla has edited his post, and has interacted with someone in the group. I'll need you to acknowledge it somehow before we proceed.
Proposal start
The young blond guy then said, "Alright. But first, I'll need to see how good you guys are at fighting. We'll enter a local tournament; is everyone okay with that?" Gwen and the others nodded in agreement. "Okay then! Let's go." He tapped a few buttons on the Coliseum entry terminal, and it showed the only available tournament - a 2 vs 2 battle. The young man heaved a sigh and said, "I hate to break it to you guys, but...the only available tournament is a battle of duos with a 100kcr prize. What do you all think about that? Should we give it a shot?" He grinned at Gwen, who blushed a bit. But she was also a reasonable girl. "If you want to test everyone's fighting skills, everyone here will need to participate. We should wait for a larger tournament."
Just then, Sakaya yelped as a knight with Pack insignia grabbed her and interrogated her. Gwen cloaked, drew her sword, and crept up behind the offender. She then decloaked with her flamberge at his neck. "You'd better let her go, man, or so help me, I will dice you like a tomato."
Proposal end
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 14:47
#111
Bluurrk*
Hey, I'm back. Also, for an example of really good fight scenes in text, Read the Redwall series made by: Brian Jaques
"Tell me, spirit of Martin, what shall I do?" he said, asking for guidance.
Also, I just noticed, none of the RP's I've done has me playing as a male.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 14:59
#112
uguu
Well I couldn't type a new addition at school D:
Would you still like me to make an addition with me controlling Shion?
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 15:09
#113
@Liminori
Thanks for the tip! I was wondering where to find good fight scenes. Got any critiques on some of the ones I've done?
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 19:27
#114
Meep
Sayaka
I growled at the Pack member who had grabbed me. I'd been harassed by boys before, but they never actually touched me. He whirled me around and I caught my brother's eye and stared at him. Hotaru became suddenly interested in his boots, and I watched as Gwen appeared right behind the Pack member and held her Flamberge at his throat. The girl's eyes flared in anger as she said, "You'd better let her go, man, or so help me, I will dice you like a tomato." The Pack member- oh god, it's Axis- let go and snarled. He growled, but my brother put a hand on his shoulder to calm his boss. "Come on, we'll take care of them later. I have another source of information..." Axis nodded and waved for his troops to follow. I simply stood there, watching the receding figures of the Pack, and sighed.
When the Pack finally left, Arch looked at me shyly and asked, "So, about the tournament... You wanna team up with me and the other two?" I saw the invititation as an opportunity to kick some ass in the arena, so i nodded happily.
"Lets do this!"
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I smirked at the blond boy as he said, "Alright then. You guys better get your heart pads ready..... The enemies won't be holding back." I nodded at him and fist pumped Arch. I whirled my Swift Flourish around casually and grinned, "Good. Because we're not, either."
Gwen smiled as I entered us into a competition. The four of us were a team, and our first match against two swordsmen, a bomber, and a gunner would start in about an hour . I nodded at Gwen, who finished, "Let's kick some Wolver tail, guys." I smiled.
"This will be fun."
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 17:26
#115
The silver-haired girl was
The silver-haired girl was quite reasonable, actually. "If you want to test everyone's fighting skills, everyone here will need to participate. We should wait for a larger tournament."she reasoned. Right after, the girl with the maroon-obsidian hair was grabbed by a knight with the Pack insignia. The silver-haired girl disappeared, and a few moments later, appeared behind the offender, flamberge close enough to his neck that she could decapitate him at any moment. "You'd better let her go, man, or so help me, I will dice you like a tomato." That Pack member let go and snarled. I found this amusing. When they left, the guy who looked like he was from the 80s asked the maroon-obsidian haired girl whether he could duo with her. She accepted. But we had to find another tournament. I walked over to the vending machine. Tapping a few buttons, it showed a list of available tournaments. "1v1.... No.... 2v2..... No..... AHA!" I spotted a tournament in which you had four people in a team, against another team which had four people in it. The winning team would get 1000000 ce. Fairly reasonable. "Hey guys! Over here!"I shouted, stopping their chatter. "Well.... There's this tournament thing, but there are four people in a team, against four other people in another team. Winning team gets 1000k crystal energy." I turned to face them. "You guys better get your heart pads ready..... Because I'm not gonna be holding back."
(EDITED)
@Thinslayer
Let me know if this powerplaying of mine is unacceptable.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 17:06
#116
@Ultimaknightz
Here's my critique:
Why would he somersault over to the vending machine? It's right over there; he can just step up to it.
Also, allow me to speak for Gwen. I'll be doing that anyways in corrections, so you might as well wait for it. :P
The tournaments usually pit 4 vs 4, not 2vs2vs2vs2. Similarly, two pairs on two teams is kinda redundant with groups of 4 on each team, and they can pair up individually and autonomously on their own anyways. So how about it be a 4vs4 tournament, but Gwen and Nate simply choose to stick together for the duration of the match?
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 17:16
#117
I haven't posted in foreeeeever
@Liminori: Since you haven't responded to my earlier question, which is fine, I'm going to go ahead and write another segment, while controlling Shion to some extent. And for some reason every time I type Shion, I want to type Shiro. No idea why :3
She looks at my name written on the paper for a while, and then wrote something and hands another piece of paper to me.
"My name is Shion. I can't speak." I'm a little confused by this. I wrote back on the paper.
"Neither can I, I haven't spoken in a long time. Why can't you?" When I handed this answer back, she looked a little confused. She wrote back.
"Because of an accident that happened a while ago." I found this stranger still. I heard the Knight moan a little, and jumped back, ready to run at any moment in case he woke up
"We should get out of here, this man is dangerous and I don't think you want to be around him", I write back. It looks like he was still unconscious, thankfully. I look back up at her as Shion was reading the paper. However, Shion shakes her head.
"I have all my research materials here. I can't just leave them", she writes back. I take the piece of paper and write back again.
"Well... if you are going to stay here, make sure this Knight doesn't get you. I think he really likes experimenting on Gremlins." She reads it over and adjusts her Stranger's Hat a little. She wrote back once more.
"Alright. I'll look out for him. Safe travels." Shion reached into her pocket, and took out a notepad and a pen, handing them both to me. Even if it was just a notepad and pen, I became overjoyed, looking at Shion and nodding happily out of gratitude. One of my first friends... but I have to leave. I start walking away, looking back at the unconscious Knight and Shion as she walks back to her lab. I start to daydream about making more friends. I walked on to the elevator and pressed a random button as if mind-controlled. I'm ripped out of my fantasies as the elevator starts to rumble. Panicking a little, I check the monitor. It reads, 'Next Destination: Haven'. Oh no... Knights are gonna be all over me.
S-Swarm... I've made a huge mistake. I pressed the button to Haven.
I hear a sigh in my head.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 17:20
#118
Yes, lets do that!
Yes! Kaijuhunter agrees! Arch, Sayaka, Nate, and Gwen are all on the same Lockdown team as of NOW!
As a twist, perhaps Hotaru, Axis, and two more Pack members can join the tournament. It would fit the story, since the prize would provide the Pack with money, something they need to defeat the Fangs.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 17:23
#119
@Thinslayer
Alright
@Thinslayer
Alright then.
@Kaijuhunter
Cool!
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 18:35
#120
We entered into the tourny.
We entered into the tourny. We were up against a bomber, a gunner, and two swordfighters. The gunner had an Antigua, the bomber had a lightning bomb, a trioka, and a swift flourish. I searched in my bag to find a pair of steel knuckles. I loved these because they did damage but didn't kill. After the gate went down, I decided to flank with saya while Gwen and the stranger went to charge to front lines. We managed to flank the bomber who was setting traps I ran at fall speed at him, and did an uppercut. This made him raise off the ground for a second until he fell. I then elbowed him in the face and he fainted.. The knight with a trioka turn around and smashed the ground l, making me fly away from saya. After being split, I headed towards point 3 of 3. I was about to take the point when someone grabbed me from behind. A fighter had gotten behind me and gotten me in a headlock. The fighter then took a swift flourish. She said in a attractive voice, "Aww... What a cute little angel fighter. I'm afraid that I will have to stop you from taking this point.". She said as she sheathed her flourish and started to suffocate me. "Ack! Someone... Help..."
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 19:34
#121
Never fear, Saya-chan is here!
After the Troika knight's attack, I clutched my head in pain. I was dizzy and my whole body ached already. Suddenly, I saw Arch being strangled by a girl with a Swift Flourish. I scowled, [Jackin' my style, huh?] and picked myself up. Quicker than lightning, I pulled put my Sealed Sword and smashed her aside with the flat of the blade. I followed with a deadly upward swing that shattered the girl's Flourish. Smirking, i slammed her against the wall until she fell to the ground, unconscious. It would only be a matter of seconds before the medics revived her with Energy ((this explains the revival process of Lockdown)) and she was back on us. I helped Archemiday to his feet and I stood guard beside him as he captured the Control Point. I spotted the Troika Knight, who had cleverly run away and changed to a Recon. He was invisible, but I saw the small depressions his feet created in the grass and lunged towards him. I tackled him to the ground and seized his Troika, then slammed the sword into his chest. He fainted and was immediately teleported back to the Locker Room to be healed. Arch finally finished capturing the Control Point and smiled at me. "Thanks for the save," he muttered. I nodded and looked at the HUD in my helmet, "Come on, we still have four minutes left, but we're down four hundred to five hundred seventy." Arch grinned mischieviously and gripped his sword tighter. "Let's change that."
"Sure thing."
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 19:27
#122
Rescuing Arch
Should Gwen, Saya, or Nate rescue Arch?
*If Gwen rescues him, it boosts his opinion of her in preparation for her departure scene.
*If Saya rescues him, it boosts his romantic interest in her.
*If Nate rescues him, it gives the two reason to be friends later on.
Opinions?
EDIT: it seems Kaiju has decide for us! :D
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 19:44
#123
Teh savings
As I began to lose breath, I was released from her grip. I didn't see what had happened because I was too busy breathing. I soon saw my savior, saya, looking down at me. I offered her hand and was pulled up. "Isn't that a sense of deja vu?". I said, laughing a little bit while we captured the point. Then hunger hit me. I tried to pretend that nothing was wrong. "look in your bag for a blood tablet! I put one in there.". Paluntena said. I reached it, found the tablet, and threw it in my mouth. After taking it, I felt a lot better. I was ready to follow saya, seeing how I didn't want to go off by myself again.
((Never split the party!))
Mao: I was waking up. As I opened my eyes I saw the gremlin who hit me. I stood up, turned her around and grabbed her shirt. "What the heck? I almost had a perfectly good gremlin with strange powers to experiment with! Don't mess with me again or you will be on the experiment table!". I said stomping towards the elevator. I checked the history. "Party of one, destination Haven". That's where the gremlin went? Strange place to go. I went up to the haven in pursuit, hoping I haven't lost much time.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 19:45
#124
((@kaiju arch has a set of
((@kaiju arch has a set of steel knuckles equipped, and you might want to edit the blood tablet into your post.))
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 20:12
#125
The Pack
Boom. And just like that the knights head went up in a burst of synthetics, his head was still intact, what a shame. I hated this, the shields systems never displayed actual gore, the medic arrive and proceeded to inject him with CE. The crowd went up with a roar of approval. We got all three points under control and were currently sitting around the closest capture point to their base. Casualties started racking up. It was a boring facing a team of complete clones. I sighed, I dodged an incoming troika, parried another strike then switched to my alchemer and loaded his stomach full of condensed plasma. I grinned we won, 500 to 10. We had entered the tourney to secure more money, we had funding but for this op we needed a bit more then our occupations covered. I looked up and snarled, the 4 man team of the spiral rookies had progressed further. I pointed my finger at the screen, "Looks like your "friend"made it further too Hotaru." He only shrugged. I turned back. Our team was well composed our bomber Rez was experienced ex-military. His loadout was a fused demo set, a electron bomb, a prismatech alchemer, a lightning capacitor, and a grintovec. Hotaru had his usual loadout. Our gunner was Nex, using a magnus, swift flourish, antigua, and a varying alchemer mk. II each round.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 21:20
#126
The Great Experiment!
All right guys, I'm going to test out a new battle-scene fighting style that tries to promote the image of speed. Please, PLEASE critique it. Tell me if it's great, awful, looks weird, doesn't give you the image of speed, or whatever; TELL ME! It's an experiment, and I'll need feedback.
Proposal start
Gwen drew her Flamberge as the match begun. She sped in on the nearest enemy and raised her blade.
She swung.
He blocked.
She swung again. Scraped armor.
He swung.
She parried. Backstep.
He jabbed & missed.
Let's dance!
She spun to the side, jabbed his foot.
He tripped and fell.
She raised and plunged. Blood.
One down.
Foe boosted behind her.
She whipped around. Sliced.
Blood.
He whipped around.
Shots fired.
She blocked.
More shots fired.
He froze.
She charged.
Blood.
Two down.
"Point captured!"
Darn!
Raced to the home point.
*screech*
*smack*
She fell.
Foe punched at her.
She tilted her head. He missed.
She kicked him off. *crunch*
Blood. *groan*
She flipped to her feet.
Tip at his neck.
*groan*
Heh heh, he's in no shape to fight. She withdrew her sword from his neck and captured the point.
"Match End!" declared the announcer. Gwen breathed a sigh of relief. Her enemy was still holding his sore groin, so she withdrew a remedy capsule and health capsule and handed them to him before walking off the field. "How'd you guys do?" she asked her team.
Proposal end
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 23:49
#127
Yep.
Name: Seatus
Race: Human (not Isoran, HUMAN)
Gender: Male
Appearance: Wearing a hand-me-down Stranger Cloak with mask. Twisted Snarble Barb (After my abuse from Nyx, my power is damaged)
Bio: Son of the Snarbolax, Seatus has grown into a powerful Great Snarbolax, a Beast of Legend. But in his last adventure, he was trapped into an Intersection of All Dimensions. Now, he has found freedom, and he retains his memory from the other dimension. He is now sitting in the crowd, behind his mask, smiling at Gwen's...shall we say...more vulnerable persona. He is here exactly to talk to her, and somehow turn their path to stopping Vog once more, along with Nyx and freeing the Clockwork Gods.
Proposal (if accepted)
I shift uncomfortably as two Strangers wedge me between them. I shrug them to get some breathing room. I adjust my mask and watch the match from the stands. My eye catches someone, a blonde haired boy. I feel a strange mixed aura around him. I look at Gwen, whom seems to be doing as good as herself did...which reminds me even more how I need to get back to my dimension.
Nyx has left her mark on me, a blackened claw mark running all the way down either of my arms, hidden my my sleeves. I watch the blonde guy start using his bare hands, and that's when I catch it. An aura of darkness and light. Ugh. It buzzes in my mind like an annoying mosquito. I've felt this before, in Gwen. This guy...he is most likely headed for some pain. But it's not my job to take care of EVERY psychological oddity. Only the ones that carried Fate in them. I will have to wait until this match is over to confront Gwen. As it ends, I have to squeeze my way through the crowd to get to her. As I get nearer, I feel eyes on my back. I turn, but I can see no one looking at me. I shrug it off and turn to walk to Gwen. "Hello," I say casually, "I saw your fancy fighting. That was amazing." I remove my mask ad shake the roughs out of my hair. "Oh, how rude of me, I'm Seatus." I hold out my hand for a shake.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 23:32
#128
Holy Sword is in his left
Holy Sword is in his left hand.
Chaos Blade is in his right.
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@Thinslayer
That's.... very.... interesting.....
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"3......"
"2......."
"1..........."
"GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Knowing this gamemode inside out, immediately I rushed towards the enemy base as a Striker, taking charge of the situation. I summoned my swords almost instinctively, my Holy Sword glowing a vibrant golden, and my Chaos Blade casting a shadow over itself. Using the Striker shield as a speed boost, I rushed towards a yellow control point, but another Knight on the opposite team spotted me. He was wearing Dusker armor, and charged at me with his swift flourish. He aimed to stab me, but I swiftly parried his attack with my Holy Sword, sending him and his weapon flying in different directions. He vanished. "He's weak, that's for sure,"I thought. "I wonder what the oth-" My thoughts were interrupted by the sound of another Knight charging towards me, wearing the exact same loadout the preceding knight used against me. "It's no use. I could beat your entire team even without the use of my swords."I mocked menacingly, as I unsummoned by swords. The knight became angry and charged at me with all his might. As soon as he tried to swing his flourish downwards upon my head, I grabbed his wrist with my left hand tightly, causing the blood flow there to be stopped, thus making his grip on his flourish weaker. While doing so, I kicked him in the stomach to immobilize him for a moment, and disarmed him of his weapon with my right hand. I spun his sword vertically for a few times before sending his own sword plunging down upon the kneeling knight. He vanished, along with his weapon. I checked the HUD. We were in the lead. "In fact, I bet I could beat your entire team with one hand behind my back!"I cackled. I kept my word, however. I had a trick up my sleeve, though. I infused my body with the power of darkness, granting it enhanced speed and power. It also put a dark aura around me. I put my right hand behind my back as my next opponent charged at me. Apparently he did not learn from his teammates. However, he was quickly followed by another knight, using the same loadout. I yawned as the knight tried to stab me. Reacting quickly, I somersaulted above him, grabbed him with my left hand and threw him at his teammate that was charging at me, immobilizing the both of them, and sending them back to their bases as ghosts. "More points for me; that's for sure,"I trailed off, while rolling my eyes. Another one came at me. Don't they ever learn? I teleported behind him, kicked him up into the air, teleported behind him as he was falling down and kicked him to the ground just as he was about to land on the ground, dealing heavy amounts of damage to him.
"Match End!" declared the announcer. I hated that sound. Seeing the hurt Knight on the ground no longer as an enemy filled me with great sadness, and I offered to help him get back up. He declined. I slowly walked off the field to the lobby. "How'd you guys do?" she asked us. "Not very well. The match was very short, and so I could only kill 5 people, 1 with a parry, and the others with my bare hands."I calmly replied. "As for martial arts, I specialize in Tiger Kung Fu and Aikido." I turned to look at the silver-haired girl. "I believe you still haven't told me your name. However, due to courtesy, I'll start. My name is Nathaniel York, and I am the White Knight of the Rose."
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 23:46
#129
An exercise in humility
"Not very well," the young man replied. "The match was very short, so I could only defeat five people; one with a parry, and the others barehanded." He added, "I specialize in Tiger Kung Fu and Aikido."
"I believe you still haven't told me your name. However, out of courtesy, I'll start. My name is Nathaniel York, and I am a White Knight of the Rose." Gwen was a little surprised that he was a White Rose knight, but she knew she shouldn't have been - his skills were on par with her father's. The White Rose knights were among the elite of the Rose Order, matched only by their Red and Black Rose cousins. She curtsied and replied, "I'm...simply Gwenyvier. You can call me Gwen."
The other team approached them, embarrassed at their quick defeat. Gwen walked up to them and shook hands with them. "Good game, everyone! You guys did well. It was an honor to have fought you." The one knight with the sore groin just groaned again. "And...sorry about that, sir. You fought well." He nodded and smiled weakly.
Gwen noticed a curious figure in the departing audience. Had he been staring at her this whole time?...
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 23:50
#130
@Seatus
Ah. Nathaniel hates
@Seatus
Ah. Nathaniel hates the Snarbolax. Wait. But if he's the son of a Snarbolax, how can he be human? :/ It also says that he is a snarbolax in your fanfic. I'm a tad bit confused over this matter.
Tue, 04/02/2013 - 23:58
#131
:/
Easy, you haven't read my full fanfic nor participated in the last roleplays. Case closed. Nathaniel is gonna HATE me when I switch to Snarbolax form. I do it from time to time without really controlling it. The end of my Fanfic will explain it all.
Oh wait. Nah I hold a grudge against my Father as well. He abandoned me at a young age when I wasn't even finished molting yet.
OH! And it's not son of A it's son of THE! I explain this so much. There are only four Snarbolaxes. My Father, my Twin Brothers in the Swarm Lair, and me. All other people are just wearing the Coat for hoax, my Father and brothers are regenerated by the Core when they die. I am too, but the Swarm hates me enough that whent they see the vacant body, they will possess it ad eventually the destruction of all will come
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:02
#132
2:01 AM
Seatus returns :D
I'll make another entry tomorrow, and add my entries to the main thread if nobody has any problems with them.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:05
#133
;)
I was only leaving because Diyu was so underestimated. He can do FAR more than swish around that twig called a Swift Flourish. XD
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:19
#134
Stranger Human Snarbolax
The curiously short Stranger approached Gwen and said, "Hello. I saw your fancy fighting; that was amazing." He removed his mask, revealing a pleasant human face. "Where are my manners? I'm Seatus." He extended his hand to her, and she shook it. "Yes, where are your manners? What did you do with them?" she asked with a wink.
Without waiting for a reply, she gestured to her teammates. "These are Sakaya, Nathaniel, and Archimeday. I don't know them very well, as we've recently become friends. Want to join us? I'm thinking of treating everyone to a victory meal."
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:24
#135
(time forKaijuhunter to pop in and accept my app...)
^
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:28
#136
The Lobby
We walked through the lobby briskly. It was after all the qualifier matches. The weaklings had been weeded out, the true competition started now. The match ups had been announced. We hadn't been matched against the team of rookies, I was eager to follow up on that threat the silver hair girl had issued. I spotted them a few feet away. I heard a conversation about the order of the white rose. I laughed in disgust. Hotaru had a questioning look at me. I took off my hat, it wasn't the usual cowboy hat. I cleared off the dust and grime, revealing a peculiar symbol on it. It was the mark of the black rose. Hotaru gasped and the other pack members gave me a scrutinizing look. "Well I told you guys that I was ex-black ops right?" I said. My laugh and the commotion we had caused drew the attention of the group. The silver haired girl gasped then looked away suddenly. I had attracted a lot of attention with the mark. I was getting amazed or horrified looks from the other teams. "And that, is how you make yourself known." I said. "Regardless, we're winning this thing, fair or not." Nex said grinning jokingly.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 00:46
#137
@Gzilla
Gwen is not at *that* shocked at Axis's presence in the Rose Order. She did become acquainted with many of its lower members, and spent a lot of time with them. She'd recognize the characteristically dance-like fighting style.
I could certainly see her being a little stunned by it though.
Proposal start
Before they could leave the stadium, Gwen heard slight gasps come from the exiting crowd. She turned and looked to see a Black Rose knight leading the enemy team. He took off his hat, revealing himself to be Axis, Pack leader. Three Rose knights here?? This is going to get interesting fast. She lit her pipe and waited for Axis to approach her.
Proposal end
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 03:45
#138
The girl curtsied and
The girl curtsied and replied, "I'm...simply Gwenyvier. You can call me Gwen." Gwen congratulated the other team on their quick loss(or so I had anticipated), but kept an eye on a stranger amidst the leaving crowd. The stranger came up to her, and they introduced each other. Feeling quite friendly at the moment, she gestured for me to join her. Wait. There was something odd about him; something that made the light inside me shiver. I made my way to him and Gwen as fast as possible. "Gwenyvier. There's something odd about him, though I can't put my finger on it. The light in me is telling me that he is of the darkness,"I whispered. As I thought of what I was going to say, I caught a glance of the former assistant of the commander of the Black Rose. "That good for nothing rogue,"I thought. "Haven't I already kicked him out of the Rose? And yet, he is snickering at me. He doesn't even have fighting skills that are above average." After a few moments, I piped up, and turned to face the stranger. "Good morrow, stranger. It seems that you have made friends with my acquaintance, Gwenyvier. Now, shall we continue with the orderly formalities?"I aptly put. "My name is Nathaniel York, commander of the White Rose. And you are?"
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 05:02
#139
Hmm. . .
At the top, It says I'm not logged on, yet the chat box is still at the bottom. Weird.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 06:53
#140
I have a really cool, yet
I have a really cool, yet basic outline of a plot I'd like to present.
So the gang of five(Nate, Gwen, Arch, Saya, Seatus) decide to go after Vog, to stop his revival. The Pack knows that they can't best the Fangs of Vog or stop Vog's reincarnation by themselves, and so ask the group for help. They accept, though Nate thinks otherwise. Throughout their adventures, Nate and Seatus become friends fast, but like the same person: Gwen. After they both find out that they like the same person, they fight, but Nate easily gains the upper hand in the first quarter of the match. Seatus turns into a Snarbolax, and Nate is forced to use his powers. The match ends by an interruption of Gwen, leaving Nate and Seatus to part ways. Seatus tries to find Vog himself, while Nate does the same. Sakaya and Arch get angry at Gwen for causing this, and leave to find Vog on their own as well. Gwen is left alone. Gwen gets captured by the Fangs of Vog, knowing that the only people who could protect her we're gone. Moar adventures here. The group then meets coincidentally at the reincarnation ritual of Vog. They refuse to work with each other, but Nate and Seatus both try to save Gwen from impending danger, as she is about to become food for Vog. Seatus was easily knocked away by Vog. Nathaniel tries to fight Vog, but like Seatus, he gets easily knocked away. He then knows that the only way for Gwen to live is if he sacrifices his life for Gwen to kill Vog. He 'dies'. Gwen is heart-broken, and avenges him and the injured Seatus by killing all the members of the Fangs of Vog there. With Seatus almost dead, the original group(comprising of Gwen, Sayaka and Arch) tell each other that they'll become friends again. However, since Gwen had a closer relationship to Nate, she cries over his death, remembering the cold, yet kind words he spoke when he was alive. This is when she (maybe)kisses Nate, and he grabs his blood stained swords and magically revives. It is later revealed that he can heal people, and with the last of his mana, he heals Seatus, but not completely. The two become friends again after Seatus is completely healed. The group goes to eat at Basil's cafe once more.
Could you guys post your opinions on this and stuff? I've gotta go sleep in a short while, and besides; I'm doing this on an iPad. :/
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 07:05
#141
opinions .-.
@ultima the problem with that is that arch doesn't get angry over everything. Also, I have typed everything here on my phone. Be glad you have buttons bigger than an ant 😄
@seetus wouldn't seatus recognize arch a little bit?
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 08:31
#142
@Ultimaknightz
I think that if Gwen and Seatus ever got together, it would've a very platonic relationship, but it would also be very close. Gwen's not so heartless as to cry over another lover in the presence of her current one.
Besides, everyone liking Sakaya is more in keeping with her problem of loneliness. If anyone likes Gwen the whole time, it would be Seatus, though as mentioned earlier, it would not be very romantic.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 08:46
#143
Formalities
@Ultima Axis wasn't kicked out of the order, they left him to die after a failed mission, and they didn't want to stain their reputation.
"And you are?" the kid with the whit rose insignia asked. THIS was their commander? "I didn't know that the order of the rose was cradle robbing." I thought to myself. "Axis." I replied casually. "Former lieutenant of the black rose." The commander looked at me with scorn He must've just been promoted, not yet briefed on what REALLY happened during the supposed op I committed treason. I hated the order, they would go to such lengths as to wipe someone off the earth to keep their good name, corruption had spread, I didn't know if the new commander had been reached by the corruption, if he hadn't, he was free game, if anything the higher ups would approve they needed a person in the white rose. "I look forward to seeing on how you follow up on your threat." I said to the silver haired girl. "Good luck...." Hotaru mumbled to the other girl. She only gave him a cold stare. I raised my eye questioningly, the girl threw a stare that would freeze Vog himself cold. I shrugged, and we left. We had to check on who we were fighting next.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 09:00
#144
see four
The round had ended. We had won! Someone came to us and introduced himself. Now that we all knew each other, I was about to begin preparations for the next match. One man showed a fancy hat, which seemed to put everyone in awe. Except for me. I had no idea what he was in. I ignored him and pulled a small spider robot out of my backpack, along with some c4. I put one piece of c4 on the spider and put them in my pocket. I then stretched my wings. Well, as much as I could, seeing how I didn't know how to control them.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 12:19
#145
Mirror, Mirror
Fear of what's inside me...
Tell me, can a heart be turned to stone?
______
Nathaniel walked up beside me and whispered, "Gwen, there is something off about him, but I can't quite put my finger on it. The light in me tells me he is of dark-" Gwen cut him off. "Only the Purged have light inside them. All others are of darkness."
Nathaniel turned towards Axis (yes, Gwen knew his name) and said, "Good morrow, stranger! It seems you have made friends with my acquaintance Gwenyvier. I'm Nathaniel of the White Rose. You are?" Axis replied, "Axis, former Lieutenant of the Black Rose."
Axis turned to Gwen. "I look forward to seeing you follow up on your threat." Gwen scoffed. "I only threatened you because you grabbed and interrogated my friend. Such a threat is no longer necessary."
Axis and his team departed for their next Coliseum round, and Gwen took a stroll outside. She puffed her pipe and crossed her arms as she became lost in thought. The rest of her team eventually stepped outside and joined her.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 11:34
#146
Mmmh
Seatus (me) can't love anyone anymore. I look at Gwen in a sibling-like way. Oh, and could you edit the ' light senses something about Seatus' out, Ultimaknightz? I forgot to mention that Seatus was purified in the last roleplay. You can switch it to dark, if it fits you.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 11:42
#147
@Seatus
I think he already loves her. The only difference between a brother and a husband is (or should be) the type of affection and contractual obligations; both love each other dearly, but a brother is not contractually obligated to support his sister, nor is he entitled to higher levels of physical affection, unlike a husband.
I left out "boyfriend" because that kind of relationship would be rather out of character for Gwen.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 11:45
#148
Mmmh
Only as family, really. Something happened a long time ago to the one named Lily he keeps mentioning...
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 12:03
#149
@Seatus
Then perhaps it's about time he faced his loss and repaired his broken heart. Unlike Lily, Gwen is deathless and cannot be fully corrupted, by reason of being one of the Chosen.
Perhaps I will explain all this stuff about "Purged" and "Chosen" at some point.
Wed, 04/03/2013 - 12:08
#150
Arch didn't fly away, he was
Arch didn't fly away, he was just stretching
Really fast post, 19-ish minutes before school!
Aekyuri, you have control over shion while I'm gone!
Edit: New post in RtC.