No Road left (Fanfiction) (accepting applications)
Fr, 08/16/2013 - 04:54
-----------------------===========++++++[{Chapter One: Dreams of Ashes}]++++++===========-----------------------
In the distance there a world full of fire and smoke no life there except for the shadowy figure sitting on a throne
It spoke:"The end is near no more Joy no more life no more souls the thread of happiness is just a toy no more friends no more family just the screams of eternal agony"
a tiny knight sat near the throne fear stricken his face
he asks : What what are you talking about what are you saying?!
It Speaks: "soon the world will fall i will end it all no more friends no more family just the screams of eternal agony"
He screams: No no no no NO NONONONONONONONONONNONONONOON THIS CANT BE IT CANT END LIKE THIS NOTHING ENDS LIKE THISPLEASE PLEASEPLEASE THIS ISNT RIGHT NOTHING IS RIGHT OH GOD OHGOD OH GOD NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
The alarm clock rings BEEP BEEP BEEP
Drag wakes up with sweat on his forehead he checks the clock 5:00
Drag: Oh god im late im freaking late!
he runs to his closet dust spewed his face as he opened his closet there lay his cloak
he takes no time in wearing it just a quick fling in the air and done time is 7:00
Drag: WHAT THE HELL time cant go that fast i mean this is the clockworks and crap but it cant go that fast!?
Oh s#!t i forgot!
On his refrigirator was a note "Bandaides birthday tomorow :D" it said
Drag: Crap i need to find a present ah i know! maybe ill ask kaotikus for one! he'll help me i know he can!
He rushes to the cafe across the street blasts the doors open then rushes to the employee room
Finds Kao cooking a steak he then slaps the steak off the grill then grabs Kao
Drag: Kao you Have to help me!
Kao: you forgot its her birthday didnt you?
Drag: hey i knew it was her birthday i just forgot the present!
Kao: yeah yeah i got you covered here ya go.
Drag: what is this?
Kao: You'll Find out soon
Drag left in a hurry to emberlight while kao picked up the steak and put it in the grill again this time its a little burnt
Kao thought for a moment this might be a sign of the spirits then he thought "Must be going nuts" Then went back to cooking the steak
Later at emberlight
Drag looked desperately for Bandaide for he knew she would kick his [bucket] if he forgot again
mhm this wasnt the first time he forgot about her birthday
anyway he looked everywhere then he saw an inn it said "Rudkin's Inn come and have a drink!"
Drag wasnt in the mood to drink right now but she may be in that Pub
Drag took a deep breath and went in
No Bandaide but a familliar face
None other than Mr-Knight and Basilfluff
Drag: so why are you two gentlemen here
Mr-Knight:Ah if it isnt wee little Drag we got ourselves sum company boys
Drinks are on me!
The whole pub cheered and roared with laughter
Smiling faces left and right beer and food were all over the floor
Basilfluff: So what brings you here Drag?
Drag: trying to find Bandaide Basil im not in the mood to drink right now
Mr-Knight: well you better find er then she will whoop your [bucket] if you dont find er
Drag: Thanks for the words of confidence Knight...i'll leave you gentlemen here i have to find somebody
Mr-Knight:Best of luck te' you Mr Chaos
Basilfluff: oh yeah i almost forgot bandaide said she was going to the Auction house in haven
she said there was a good deal on materials these days.
With those words he left
Walking to haven when approaching the steps
he felt a slight fear something was bothering him obviously
then he remembred his dream a king was on a throne and
was saying something something important but the dream is fading away fading
untill the king of ashes was fading way from his mind.
--+=End=+--
Want to join the story write these things
Name: (something legible)
Species: (human/knight, gremlin, etc.)
Gender: (male or female)
Life stage: (child, adolescent, young adult, mature adult, elder)
Age: (be consistent with your lore)
Appearance: (eyes, color, height, costumes, etc.)
Biography: (second most important part. Helps to define the character.)
Personality: (the most important part. Be detailed, please.)
Desired Role: (main, supporting, minor, recurring)
Expendability: (when/how can I kill your char?)
Arsenal/Abilities: (weapons, magic, etc.)
Example:
Name: Dragonlordofchaos
Species: Knight
Gender: Male
Life stage: adoloscent
Age: 16
Appearance: Green, Green, Small, Enchanted Hood/cloak
Biography: Used to just mine in the Red coral caves never in his life would he think he would become a knight. Age of 6 Family killed...by some weird creature jelly like....He ran for help people thought he was crazy blabbering about an alien jelly no one believed him until the next morning. 4 people dead 2 adults 2 kids Drag was a suspect police thought he might have gone crazy and killed his family. Drag went to jail held for murder he never had a nice childhood. 5 years later 11 year old Drag out of prison he had nothing no one to turn to he thought "might as well die i guess" then he bumped on someone on the way "Bandaide" was er name holding a jar of honey when she was tripped she caught the jar in time before it hit the ground. Drag got a long look at her "cute" was the only thing he could describe she wore this army helmet kind of thing pigtails sticking out Definitely Cute he said to himself she spoke "What the hell is your problem?!" Drag said "Um im sorry i wasnt looking" Band said "Well your lucky that it didnt break this is my ration for the year. Drag thought to himself "Ration that tiny jar is a Ration?!" Band said "well my name is Bandaide nice ta meet ya" Drag said "my name is Dragon..." Band said "Dragon huh hmm ill just call you drag its much nicer :)" Drag said " Drag huh yeah i can take that" from then on out Friendship blossomed from those two. Years later something happened no one knew what happened they all had to evacuate to another planet all of the pods left seperately...When it landed Drag reached the camp he searched asked everyone where Bandaide was he checked one last pod no luck then he said to himself " Hmm not her pod Dont worry bandaide i got us into this mess ill get us out...." Then it begins the end of one life begins another maybe meet people on the way Kaotikus,Princess,etc. maybe more But he cant find this feeling hes had for a while all he remembers is the name Tyraelarchangel.
Personality: Always happy,quick,mysterious,
Desired Role: Main or Minor or maybe both?
Expendability: Until he meets band again i guess not
Arsenal/Abilities: Tempered calibur , Great Defender
Fr, 08/16/2013 - 18:27
#2
Sorry Bout that....
Not really sure about writing this is my first fanfiction i made and not much work put into it but do'nt worry i'll add your character
Fr, 08/16/2013 - 23:29
#3
Another Chapter i guess.
-----------------------===========++++++[{Chapter Two: No Honor}]++++++===========-----------------------
It was midnoon in the skylark one of the officers took a sip of coffee
"Do you really think its a good time do drink that much caffeine"
"Hell naw i have got to stay up this time last time i took a nap the general spilled coffee over my good armor"
"That must've been a riot!"
"Well everyone did laugh"
Just then an explosion came from the right bridge
"What was that?!"
"Explosion we should check that out..."
"What are you f***ing nuts? we cant do things like this leave it to the Elite's"
"Listen we may just be knights but i'm not going to let some a-holes like those elites get to the site before me Burk"
Burk: Fine we'll do it your way Knight
Knight: That's what i want to hear!
Burk: But if this crap goes downhill i'm wont be there to save you
Knight: I don't need saving Burk!
Burk: Sure you don't just like that time in the 1st,2nd and 3rd skylark post!
Knight: Shut up Burk.
The two knights left for the explosion site unsure of what will happen...
Knight thought:"Smoke and fire thats about it" until Burk saw something in the mist
Burk: What the hell is that!
Then it rose it was huge cant tell what it was they cant see it but IT can see them
It picked them up threw them to the walls that kept the skylark safe
Knight almost lost his breath lucky him he's still alive but Burk took most of the beating
Burk is almost dead the creature is closing in on them Knight had enough air to mouth some words..
Knght: Burk im so sorry.....
Then it spoke:
No more friends no more family just the screams of eternal agony!
-=([{13 Years Later}])=-
"Ty! Ty! look i found something"
"What is it Felicity something wrong?"
Felicity: I found coal!
"Thats um i guess its nice!"
Felicity: I know right (cough)
"Felicity i told you..you shouldnt stay at the mines for too long leave the work to me"
Felicity: ok..
Felicity left for the door
"sigh that girl is going to get very sick someday"
The door swung open
"hey Tyrael good to know your still alive"
Tyrael: Could you knock for once Vana?
Van: Dont call me Vana call me Van...Vana sounds like a girls name!
Tyrael: Fine Van could you knock for once?
Van: Nope not gonna do it
Tyrael: Just get in here!
Van took a seat on the table
Tyrael: So whats the news...
Van: I have a note for you
Tyrael: So we got some pods alredy?
Van: Yes we're ready to leave
Tyrael: Great i just have to get Felicity and-
Just then and explosion happened....and its in the coal mines
Tyrael: oh god..
Van: oh no
They took no time reaching the mines
Tyrael: how the hell are we going to get through this cloud of smoke?!
Van: maybe we should take the elevator
Tyrael: i dont have the energy for that
Van: dont worry they fixed it it wont need energy!
Tyrael: great let's hurry!
Van was right elevators didnt need energy anymore
Down they go
Tyrael almost puked at what he saw..
Felicity's Parents lay dead on the ground burnt to a crisp
Van said nothing but nudged Tyrael
Van: We have to keep moving
Tyrael: I know i know....
Tyrael had to find felicity fast before he sees another dead body
Tyrael & Van: FELICITY! WHERE ARE YOU!
just then Tyrael heard a tiny scream in the closet upstairs
Tyrael hoped what he would see was alive
Felicity: Ty!
Tyrael: Felicity i'm glad your safe
They hugged for a second Van tried not to cry
Tyrael: Felicity i need you to follow what i say ok
Felicity: Ok
Tyrael: Close your eyes and dont open them untill i say so
Then she closed her eyes as tyrael hopes that she wouldnt see her parents
They ran to the elevator went outside and thought for a minute
just as he was thinking an explosion happened again this time at the skylark post 4
this might be more serious than he thought and there might be more to this than an accident
And whoever is doing this Knows nothing about Honor
--+=End=+--
Note: Tyraelarchangel was my old character before Drag and Tyrael is one of the main characters not Drag. Dragon is just a minor character
Sa, 08/31/2013 - 09:22
#4
Good idea and looks good so far.
Name: Creepbillion
Species: Vanguard (1st life) *Random undead enemy (2nd life and last chance)
Gender: Male
Life stage: Mature Adult
Age: 33
Appearance: Determined eyes, Blue, Tall and wears the Infernal Guardian Set.
Biography: When Creepbillion was born, he lived near Emberlight. He got used to the noise very quickly and seen knights walking by, relaxing and having party's. Then when he was 3, a disaster happened and most of the gremlins in Emberlight joined Warmaster Seerus but for the ones who staying got hurt by the Dark Retruibion, Creepbillion's parents got killed and was brought to the Grand Arsenal. When he was 23, knights and vanguards came and stormed through the Grand Arsenal and rescued Creepbillion and some gremlins that never wanted to work with Seerus.
The Spiral HQ started to teach Creepbillion the skills and how to fight for his life. Creepbillion started to complete the missions to rank up and even got help from Vanguards. However, most of the Vanguards where mean to Creep because they had to do this mission on their own. Basically making him doing the entire mission without the help from the Vanguards. Creepbillion had to tell the Spiral HQ and those vanguards that where supposed help got demoted and lost almost everything they had. They said they would get revenge on Creep for ruining there life's.
Creep eventually went through Snarby's lair and learned a new skill that surprised him and the Spiral HQ never taught Creep. Creep has able to talk to undead enemies and could solve there problems. Creep usually did and they let him pass through and helped Creepbillion during the Snarby fight. The Spiral HQ was impressed and then they sent Creep to deal with the Roarmulus Twins but Creep couldn't do it because Creep can't attack Gremlins without feeling very depressed. However, Creep has been able to dodge the Gremlins and made it to the Roarmulus Twins and defeated them without much trouble.
Spiral HQ noticed that Creep couldn't attack Gremlins and noticed that was going to be fatal in the later missions. But, Creep usually got full party for the missions and made it to the hardest mission which was Vanaduke's lair. Since he could talk to the undeads and let Creep go by with no consequence and one of gave Creep and item called "Dark Spark of Life" and said "Watch out for the undead's in Vana's throne room, they can't be talked to and if you do, you will take damage and possibility die. Creep said "thanks" and made it to his throne room and the party was ready. The team made it to the vana's final phase but everyone dropped including Creepbillion. Vanaduke said "If this is the best that Spiral HQ can do, this world will be easy to take over". Creep took even more damage getting up and was able to restore some health with a pill randomly on the ground. Creep said "You won't stop us Vanaduke and we will stop you". Creep run and revived the other people and then defeated Vanaduke. The Spiral HQ was impressed and promoted Creepbillion into Vanguard and he is now 33 still helping people getting higher ranks.
Personality: Can be Chatty, always helps people even if it risks his life, gives people health pills if they are about to go down, gives up half of his health to bring someone else back up, often buys items that help the party, Kind, helpful and has a good memory. Never panics even when the situation is really bad. Can't hurt Gremlins. Doesn't mind if people call him Creep.
Desired Role: Main, otherwise Supporting
Expendability: Near the end and can either abandon him or let him sacrifice himself to save the rest of the team.
Arsenal/Abilities: Leviathan Blade, Barbarous Thorn Blade, Divine Avenger, Gran Faust, 2 Penta-Heart Pendants, Full Vog Cub Set, **Broken Barbarous Thorn Shield. If he dies, he revives himself as an undead enemy e.g. Spookat, Almirian Royal Guard etc.
*= Writers choice for undead enemy. **= Can be repaired in the future if you want.
EDIT: Added in more choice for the writer, also removed Trojan since it is a fiend enemy.
So, 08/18/2013 - 05:51
#5
An App, if I may. My nice friend, Hearthstone.
Name: Hearthstone
Species: Human-Knight
Gender: Female
Life stage: Adolescent
Age: 17
Appearance: Purple Determined Eyes, Tall, Prefers a Maid Headband and A Ribbon with a Pigtail Helm
Biography:
Before she was recruited by the Order, she was living a peaceful life with her parents only four months before Isora was gone and the Skylark crashed onto Cradle. As she was being escorted to a pod, she sadly bade goodbye to her parents, as there was only little left. Her parents promised to follow her, but the Skylark then crashed, her pod ejected into the deeper woods. She fought her way to the Rescue Camp, and looked for her parents, but she already accepted the fact that they may be dead. She simply moved on, following simple rules and missions issued to her by the Order. One day, as she was traveling in the Clockworks, she finds a little Maskeraith, whom she named "Hexodus," and cares for as if it were just a baby. The Maskeraith grew quickly, being able to learn Shadow Cloak in a short time, and triple that, the Hexing Haze.
Personality: Generally cheerful and trustworthy of secrets, nice and caring
Desired Role: Like Creeper, Main, otherwise Supporting
Expendability: Die trying to protect Hexodus
Arsenal/Abilities: Exceptional in using Swords and Bombs/ Chaos Hood and Mantle(costume: Spiral Pigtail Helm and Culet), Grey Owlite Shield, Leviathan Blade, Dark Reprisal
So, 08/18/2013 - 10:58
#6
Appy! Good old Fang.
Name: Fang
Gender: Male
Species: Knight/Valkryie
Age: 23
Bio: Was abandoned by unknown parents when he was 6. He eventully came to sense to find food and shelter. He hid in the forests, occasinally stealing food from random people but prefering to nick things of the shelves of the auction house. He was caught and then brought to the labs and experiemented on. They grafted valkryie DNA into his own DNA and has come out as a quite succesful hybrid. His wings are large, their wingspan being 9 feet streched out fully. He managed to escape from the labs using his new found wings but later on experienced a side effect of a a large random spazm occuring every year. Most people have no clue about his wings and only the trusted know. He dosen't bring out his wings to fly often and uses them in emergencies. Fang is extremely prone to hospitals, labs, ect. He joined spiral HQ and leveled quite high. He started gaining respect from other knights. He dosen't steal from anyone anymore but can use the skills if needed to. Fang can be very sensitive to the subject of family and it tends to cut right through to him. He is also very good at combat.
Personality: He has quite a solitary personality. He rarely says more than 5 sentances in a row and he talks softly. However if angry or sad, his face dosen't usally show his emotions unless he is greatly pained or hurt. He rarely cries or smiles. Although seemingly quite hollow, he can be very caring if he has trusted them and has made a strong bond. The people he trusts are a great deal to him and he will do alot for them
Desired role: Main or supporting.
Apperance: Short black hair. dark, dark, dark brown eyes. Around 5 foot 9. Handsome face. Medium build. Personally colour, blackish blue.
Expendibility: If he has to die, let him die with honour by defending someone or something.
Arsenal/abilities: Vog cub cap and coat, Fang of Vog, Polaris, Heater shield. Can fly but usually dosen't
Mo, 08/19/2013 - 16:45
#7
Ok 3 is good
Hmm ok sure ill add them
So, 09/01/2013 - 11:57
#8
BUMP
Yeah
In this case, you're using your ENTERS too much.
Only use them in dialogue and when there is a break in events >.<
And I seriously worry if you're going to botch a character by giving him a ridiculous sounding name, but what the heck...
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Name : Felicity
Surname : Madrea
Species : Knight
Age : 14
Biological Appearance : Five feet, three inches. Pale skin. Her eyes are like that of amethysts : a pair of shining bright orbs of purple. Her hair is black as midnight, and she usually keeps it shoulder-length cut and tied into a ponytail with an obsidian band. She has a weak physicality, mainly because of her ongoing battle with a severe case of asthma.
Appearance out of armor : She wears a white blouse, a pair of blue jeans, and a pair of sandals outside of duty, and she is sometimes seen with an inhaler in her pocket. On colder days, she wears a fur jacket over this. On hotter days, she wears a pair of denim shorts and a sleeveless blouse.
For celebratory attire, she dresses herself in a Frosty Raiment with Divine Valkyrie Wings, as well as a Frosty Tailed helm with a Frosty Flower.
Loadout : Dusker Coat, Miracle Hood, Swift Flourish, Pepperbox, and a Swiftstrike Buckler
Personality : She is usually an introverted young woman, who won't speak much in front of others. When talked to...well, she tries to avoid talking with anyone. She often has a slight stutter in her speech. She has a very solid moral and ethical stance of things, but she also knows as a soldier that death is a normal thing. Thus, she able to perform best in areas where others would hesitate, such as hostage situations.
Desired Role : Main, if not supporting.
Expendability : Kill her off towards the end, if you want. Just make sure that asthma does something to her.
Biography :
Felicity was born on Isora nearby a coal mine. Although she was quite far away, her exposure to a miniscule amount of carbon in the air heavily damaged her lungs. She was moved away to a hospital where the air was cleaner, until her lungs would be able to recover and withstand the particles in the air.
However, a mine explosion had killed both her parents, as both of them worked in the mines. By the time she was a year old, she was moved to the foster care of the Madreas, a family of foreign royalty. They had been wishing to find a little girl to raise up for years, and Felicity had met their requirements.
She was raised and tutored by her step-father, who turned out to be a master fencer. She trained harshly with him, and reached a proficient level within record time. Whilst doing so, she also turned out to be a master of the visual arts, often making paintings and sketches of people at a photographic level.
When it came, her foster family ushered her onto the Skylark with several other recruits of the Order, along with her elder foster brother, and...they were gone. When she landed on Cradle, she mainly had strayed away from the Camp after being chased by a group of Constructs, and found herself going farther and farther away from any chance of rescue. Finally, she was chased into an elevator, and made it all the way to Haven. However, her plight had scarred her. She had overexerted her lungs, further weakening them, and she was ordered to rest for several months. She lost her muscles in that time, and she had to train again in order to get back to working condition.
Her skill in fencing prior to arriving on Cradle turned out to be a blessing; she was a prodigy among prodigies in the art, and her skill brought her quickly up the ranks to being a Knight Elite within the first two months of her time of service in the Order.
To this day, she has no idea what happened to her remaining family member.