You have a lot of typos that need fixing. Your choice of gear is good, but you should explain why it's good. And it's too narrow; you should explain a wider array of choices, and why they make sense.
You have a lot of typos that need fixing. Your choice of gear is good, but you should explain why it's good. And it's too narrow; you should explain a wider array of choices, and why they make sense.
I enjoy your feedback Bopp. Thanx C:.
But the most important thing is to read the mission text.