at first i like to apology if this is bad because this is my first fanfic ( everybode has to start somewhere ) my grammar is also bad cause i do not use english everyday . I accept helpful critic and stuff like that , tell me when the story got boring i will revise it a little bid. here goes the story. funfact search your latin dictionary all their name has a meaning !

A Recording from Parma, Alpha Squad Recon:
We are at the end of the line. Pursued by some kind of terrible darkness we are forced into the unknown.
As we neared the Core- I don't know how to describe this really... the shadows came alive and began to attack us. Rulen became enveloped in it and by the time Grantz freed him his body was badly burned. He said it felt like both fire and ice.
And then we could go no further. As I record this, the darkness is nearly upon us, consuming the world we see, the light.
But then the Core, it began to open, filling the place with such a light, such an intense, blinding light. Euclid has made the call; faced with the darkness, we'll enter the core, enter the light.
This will likely be my final recording.

The massage keep spamming into Oremus mind. It has been 6 month since his visit to the expedition team in the core still he can't seems to forget the message." What does that mean ? would that means that inside the core would be a whole new world ? or they die trying to get inside it ? or they got telleported away somewhere ?" he mumbled to himself."HELLOooOO ! do you want us to keep screaming like this until you get out of your bed ?! it has been a hour we waited outside ! " a painfully large scream followed by door knocking ( which sounds like a magnus charged shot to him ) Peirce throught Oremus ears . he dressed up amd open the door it was his squad leader Arma and his 2 freind , Percon a expert Recon , Auxili a newly joined knight using guns and bombs . He remembered that he made a promise to take them to the Advanced training hall to show each other their new weapon."Look at you ! still using your pyjammas ! sure its a training hall but heck at leat you gonna get 10 - 25 bruises when you get home ! " said Auxili spontan as Oremus opens the door."Well remember that time we got to the core ? i can't seem to forget what the alpha team said ." said Oremus while putting on his Heavy platemail set and picking up his "Mystery bag which hold his Mystery weapon" it glows faintly of purple ( go guess ) " oh come on Ore ! i tought we alerdy discuss this ! " said Percon and Arma spontanlly. Oremus just laugh it off and told their freind his ready to go to the advanced trainning hall. Once they got there they start showing off their weapons. " Look at this master peice oh such an beutifull Polaris !" said Percon " Wait till you see this ! " Said Auxili revealling an Obsidian carbine. "What ??? how did you get that ! since when you got to aprocea with who ?" Percon said jelously. "I tought we allerdy give you an invitation you nut head well my turn look at this ! " Said arma revealling a Combuster and a Glacius. "Nah i saw it everyday alerdy" Said percon " Well what do you have ore ? show it to us ! " " well i have this grand faust pretty neat huh ? " Said oremus with little doubt ( did you guess right ?) " ummm ore you do know that faust line has curae mark on it right ?" ask Arma " yes , What about it ? " Answer oremus. " well that looks like a gremlin sign there u sure it is a grand faust ?" Answered Percon. "I , i don't know it wasn't there yesterday ! " Said Oremus spontanly l Just then the blade lets out a purple mists surounding everyone in the training hall execpt oremus who reacts by throwing it away. Than the faust take an embodyment of an organic life which i will reveal in the next chapter..

So... what about it ? Is it THAT bad or is it NOT That good ? please comment on how i can improve.