-[Fan-Fic]-Cradle: Two Paths Chapter 11(Interactive Story)VOTING ENDS WITH 10 VOTES

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Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

B, because no one else is doing it beside Pi.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
@Valorai

A knight who cares :D That's how Blue the Wolver was supposed to come into the story, but people just don't wanna help out. have to think of another way.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Totally legit post not from me -----> "B because Pipipipipi is much more better then me" - Not-Pipipipipi

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Music

Do you guys think I should add links to music in the story and have you guys play it while you read? I did it once with some friends of mine and they said it enhanced the story.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

no thanks, if you want, you can put a audio that reads the story, but I would rather read it on my own

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

Putting Blue in using a different method would be welcome. She was never really meant to be confined to wolver dens anyways.

Colray's picture
Colray
Derp

I
Want
To
Help
The
Darn
Base
That
Is
Being
Attacked
By
WOLVERS

In case that wasn't clear for the third time I vote B to help against those wolvers.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
This Next Vote

This next vote determines if its A or B. 4 for B, 5 for A.

Flix-The-Ninja's picture
Flix-The-Ninja
Since im a sadistic knight who doesn't obey the Spiral order,

I vote A. Let those ungrateful noobs die at the paws of the wolvers.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Ack!

You fiend! XD

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Seriously, they should have died by now. If they were Perma-Frostifurs, the knights should have died by now.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Finefinefine

They're dead in the next chappie. Satisfied?

Colray's picture
Colray
Awwww

Noooooooooooooooo they're gone D:

Aekun
When will Mephiles appear?

When will Mephiles appear?

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Mephiles

Mephiles is in Pt. 2 of "Siege on Fort Shadowcog". Be patient gentlemen.

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, I wish I didn't have to do this

/makes a increadibly cute face at Psychnade

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
GAAAAAH I'M DEAD

*Blood gushes out of eyes, ears, mouth and nose and head blows up*

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Chapter 5: Siege on Fort Shadowcog Pt. 1

Missiles flew overhead as the Gremlins pushed the knights further back. Spiral Medics rushed back and forth carrying supplies and munitions over to the ragtag garrison the knights had set up. A gremlin and a few knights stood positioned around a holo-map of the fortress, studying it for weaknesses.

"Do you know nothing, Gremlin? You did help build this fort!" Said one of the knights. "Tell us something useful, for-"

"Shut your trap," Said Betrayus. "I built that thing to be impenetrable from everywhere but the front door, and that is now heavily guarded. I both curse and approve my work." The other knights groaned, they would most likely lose this battle if help did not come.

Will saw the desperate situation below, and he knew that this would be a long mission.

"It's too hot to land, sir!" Yelled the pilot from the cockpit. "What do we do?" Will and the team armed themselves with flight packs.

"Drop us over the camp, we'll take care of things from there!" Will ordered. The pilot nodded, and brought the ship around to the garrison. They all jumped out of the plane, and the flight packs did the rest. Mechanical wings, helped them glide towards the camp. Nick aimed carefully as he fell, and took out a Darkfang Mender. He smirked. When the team landed, they were met the commanding officers.

"Ah, finally help." Said Betrayus. "You don't look like much though." The knight next to him glared, then saluted the team.

"Defender Malkalome, sir!" The knight saluted. Aekun ran up to them, munching on a cookie…again.

"Glad you could join us, Soran." Aekun said. "We need your help at dismantling the turret guns that are guarding the front gate. We sent stealth teams over there, but none of them have come back. I was hoping you and your team could get the job done." Will nodded.

"I need to know where I'm going." Will said. "Where are the guns?" Aekun brought them over to a map. Betrayus pointed at a choke point.

"This is where the guns keep slaughtering us. The guns are manned, so if you sneak past their crosshairs, you could possibly get to the guns. From there, you should find the controls inside the gun and dismantle it."

"We'll get ready." As Will walked away, a message buzzed on his commset.

"Soran, this is Kora. We have gotten wind of a secret Gremlin weapon hidden inside the facility you are attacking, and it is operational." She said. "If you get rid of this as well, it would be a great addition to our cause."

"Understood."

Gremlin Warmaster Tharix stood in the fortress' highest tower. He watched the knights below, feeble and weak against his defenses. A gremlin approached him from behind.

"Warmaster, the prisoner is ready for interrogation." Said the gremlin. "Your course of action?" Tharix turned to him.

"Take me to the prisoner."

Nick scoped in, surveying the area. A squad of thwackers patrolled the gun. Nothing to worry about. He signaled Will and Doomskull, who created a diversion while Eve snuck into the gun with Oberon. Doomskull blocked a hammer strike, and kicked the thwacker violently to the side. Will sliced another in half, and fired at a thwacker behind him with his Valiance.

Inside, Oberon snapped a techinician's neck, while Eve shot the other in the head. She pushed the corpse aside and sat down in the control panel. She aimed at the other gun, and fired. After she was done, Oberon dragged his black blade across the control panel, rendering it useless. Aekun peeked over the edge, to find the guns inert.

"This is our chance!" He said. "Sharpshooters, get ready to take care of any other Gremlins that come out! Defenders, get to the front! Knights!" Aekun unsheathed his sword.

"CHARGE!"

Will and the team joined the knights at the bridge, where Gremlins were falling to the advancing knights. The battle seemed to be in the favor of the knights…until two imposing steel cubes fell from the ceiling. They unfolded into two mechanical deadnoughts. Frozen grins of malice were etched onto their iron faces. They hefted their giant maces and ground their shields into the floor, getting ready to rush at the knights. The defenders backed up, sweaty and nervous. The deadnoughts charged, scattering the knights everywhere. Will squinted, smoke getting in his eyes. Before his vision cleared, the side of a spear smacked him in the chest, knocking him into the wall. The mechanical deadnaughts grunted, something between a metal scream of pain and laugh of cruelty. Will got up, sword in one hand, gun in the other, and attacked.

Tharix hurriedly walked down the hallway. The clanging of metal and rumbling of stones loosening hastened his descent towards the infamous cell where they kept her. But before he reached the door, a huge pile of rubble and metal beams rained down on the entrance. Explosions started to happen above. He grimaced, and set a bomb on the ground before walking back the way he came.

Up above, the knights were fighting the to mecha deadnoughts, and the knights weren't doing well. Not even Doomskull's hammer could penetrate the shield. Nick managed to land a few shots on it's back, but it seemed to have no effect on the hulking beasts. The whole charging force was incapacitated. Just when all seemed lost, a huge blast of energy knocked one of the deadnoughts on its back. In the distance stood Kora, outfitted in battle gear and several Spiral Wardens flanking her. They had some of the weapons retrieved from the Intel Center in their hands.

"Wardens, take out those deadnoughts!" Kora ordered. The Wardens obeyed. The Wardens shield bashed the hulking robots, knocking them back, while the others flanked the deadnoughts and stabbed them from behind. The Wardens were soon done with their work. Kora contacted the garrison, alerting them to move the base up to the bridge.

"I see I arrived in the nick of time, Soran." Kora remarked. She studied the pile of corpses and all the wounded from the deadnought attack. She turned back to Will.

"There are two important weapon vaults hidden in this base. You must find these vaults and disable all the guards there so we can salvage the Gremlin weapons. However, I've heard there is a very dangerous robot guarding each vault. It's your choice to decide which one to go to first."

A. Storm-Ballistics Vault(Mephiles)
B. Mecha Storage Vault(Knight Inspector)

Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Nice!

I choose Option B

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
Let's see

With option A, we fight a fast spider summoning robot who can move without much problem.
With Option B though, you fight a big robot who can't move easily and has more damaging but easier to spot attacks.
I will chose B

Trolololololololoe's picture
Trolololololololoe
This is getting better each part

I like these new enemies. I am going to guess, which ever robot gets destroyed, the other one will be fought at a later date.
I choose B.

Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

I gotta choose B as well. psych, well done with this chapter! I've enjoyed it much more than the others.

Also, for Blue, I have a suggestion. Maybe the knights can go on a mission later to salvage important objects that the knights battling the permas had. Introducing Blue by having her chewing on a dead knights corpse would be a grand idea. ^_^

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Blue

I will consider that, thanks for the advice! We did lose some ground to those wolvers, leaving it open for Gremlin takeover.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Steam and Proud!

Anyone there?

Feline-Grenadier's picture
Feline-Grenadier
Hm...

I'd personally choose A to create higher-caliber weaponry for all of our weapons. Sure, mechs serve as good for transportation and armor, but if we're lacking firepower overall for all of our units, we might not be able to bring more heat without lugging around larger mechs.

And from personal gameplay in Blacklight : Retribution, the mechs in there were good conductors.

And the pilots all ended up being burned alive or electrocuted to death, if their engines weren't shot to kingdom come.

More powerful ammunition may not seem like much, but if it takes a single magazine to punch through a cockpit as opposed to three magazines, time may be wasted focusing on one mech.

Time wasted are lives wasted :P

Colray's picture
Colray
Derppity derp

I choose A, Storm Ballistics sound cooler then Mechs

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I'd say A. I kinda wanna see MechTeka's Black Barrage introduced in there rather than be with him already. Also, Hypernova.

Redacted-Sanity's picture
Redacted-Sanity
I WILL VOTE

HARFLEBLARBLEBLARGHS! HARFLE

WEEEELLLLLllll....

I think I'll latch right onto here and MASH IN MY VOTES UNTIL THIS THANG IS STONE DEAD.

If I am allowed to vote at this point, methinks...METHINKS A. HARFLEBLARBLE <_>

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Tiebreaker round

Hazardous-Anomaly's picture
Hazardous-Anomaly
The better to shoot you with my dear

A FTW!

Aekun
Choice

A! Mephiles MUST be fought!

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Bwoop: Tie has been broken.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Steam and Proud!

A is the winning choice.

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
Well...

Seems Knight Inspector is out of the story. I can't believe it, you chose the harder to hit and more annoying boss then the more damaging one who is much easier to hit. I hate spiders...

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
I have done nothing!

I did not choose this, the readers did. Rant to them. Or are you talking to the readers? Because the Knight Inspector will be fought after Mephiles.

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
Readers, not the owner...

I... I just hate spiders, especially since Mephiles spawns them...

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

/throws a spider onto Robo-Drilldigger

/watches Robo scream in terror as the spider crawls all over him/her

/me would have vote A anyway

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Spoders

I hote spoders. Run Wessly

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
...

Pipipipipi, why! Also, why is Psychnade speaking in missing letters?

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

he's been stung by a wild MISSINGSP. (the SP stands for spelling)

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
BOO!

Bad pun is bad. I can tell that is MissingNo but you changed it to MissingSP... Bad joke, rate it 0/100, never repeat. What? You started it by throwing a spider on me Pipipipipi!

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Bad puns are forever <3

Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Alright, when and how Pipipi?

Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Bump

Waiting for the boss battle...

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
It's coming!

I'M WORKING ON IT! Please be patient. It's a really big chapter(or at least bigger than the previous ones).

Creeperlucario's picture
Creeperlucario
Just waiting...

Also, here is a Valentine present for Robo.

Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
XD

Oh you fiend! lol

Robo-Drilldigger's picture
Robo-Drilldigger
CREEPER!

Creeper, WHY! WHY A JOKE NOW? I HATE HATE HATE HATE SPIDERS AND NOW THERE IS A SPIDER BOSS!?! JEEZ! Why are so many people jerks...

Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Order in the Court!