im making a SPIRAL KIGHTS(TM) manga.
any ideas?
(current ideas bellow)
spiral is the son of the leader of the spiral knights
there are some changes the storyline (take upper idea for example)
there will be a boss monster for each book (if one thats normaly from spiral knights dosent apper then ill make one up)
spiral will have flashbacks of his past.
not all enimes will be shown (mostly the copys will be removed)
other things from sega will have a cameo (a clear puyo for example will apper somewere)

I'd just like to say that a few of you(you know who you are) are some of my best friends and I even consider you as a second family(Don't worry, I still love my real family). Alot of you are inspiring and VERY helpful. For instance, Isis inspired me to write SK fictions, and Tev gave me O:CH, withuot which, My fanfic, Operation: Crimson Hammer, would not have been possible. And if Isis hadn't inspired me, it would still not be possible!

This is my second fanfic.
If you wanna have a character for this one, don't wish! I am NOT rolecasting until Chapter I is done.

Prologue:

If anyone knows me I do the invasion of the haven, a spiral knights comic series. I currently want to try and raise some money and so I figured the art subforum would be a good place to advertise for this (rather small) effort. My mom is going to be temporarily taking in some of my brother's cats while he gets back on his feet. One of them is a male and is currently unfixed and one of our house cats is also a female who is not fixed but we keep indoors. We want to fix the male cat.

Welp, here goes my try at making a fanfiction that doesn't have a shock ending and is longer than just a single post. Anyway, I've still got my finger on the Graveyard button in case things start to go downhill... anyway here goes

Prologue

-- Tinkinzar's Residence--
The gremlin raced up to Tinkinzar's throne.
"What? What do you want?" asked the Gremlin King.
"Sir, bad news. We've lost a platoon of Knockers, thwackers and demos that were escorting some supplies for the reconstruction and deployment of more Roarmulus Twins."

Ok, well i feel like writing a book.....so Ill name it The Crash of the Skylark. Ok.......here goes nothing......

THE CRASH OF THE SKYLARK: CHAPTER ONE

Why not give this a shot? Here goes nothing...

Well, first off. This is going to be a mainly humor fanfic thingy. If you don't want to be in something like that, don't apply. Once it actually starts, if you want to critique it, I am open to CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, by which I mean not stuff like "ur story is not funny stop writing" or "this is good, but my fanfic is better" or anything else like that.

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>Vog nub: "hoe 2 vendor recip?"
>Ters: "You take the recipe, throw it at the vendor then yell at them to give you crowns"
>Vog nuh: "k"
That discussion spawned this.. thing ^

I doubt my art skills and intellect after this 1 minute paint doodle. Troll away.

Also, the writing is..
"hoe 2 vendor recipe:
1. get recip
2. trohw @ vendor
3. ask 4 crown
vog: "10k cr!"
vendor: "I don't want your recipe :c "

This is going to be an RP based upon Atgatg and Kaijuhunter and Isekuube's adventures in game, in RP style. We each started a new character, and we are building the RP upon those new characters. We each chose different names for ourselfs and these are them:

Kaij: Lelouch
Atg: Lana
Ise: Ice