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Sáb, 10/24/2015 - 22:21
Sáb, 10/24/2015 - 23:47
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Nicely done
while I'm horrible at giving feedback, I found this extremely enjoyable and easy to read. The characters were colorful and clashed well, and the showdown with Augustus was very well done. I look forward to more of your writing.
Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:13
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Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:14
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Mié, 10/28/2015 - 17:16
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You do not disapoint!
Awesome! Those were very nice reads and I never lost interest in the middle of it. I really like Apollo.
Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:15
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Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:15
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Mié, 06/22/2016 - 10:19
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*insert joke about zombies*
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Your actions can only change so little in everything that is going on right now, no matter how hard you try.
With that single sentence, Augustus is now my favorite character in this fan fic, screw Zack and max, they sounded like generic heroes.