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lun, 04/09/2012 - 10:24
Skillkid

im gonna write a SK book so please copy out the content below for characters. Not sure how many i need il take em when i need em Probably a lot so post all u can.

Name:
Gender:
Race:
Likes:
Dislikes:
personality:

How about i call the book fire oasis. Its probably gonna be about all the boss characters band together (for a change) and attempt to take over haven. I have plenty of ideas for the begining

just rate this for chapter one, it will probably suck cause i can only use a few characters (people like basil and cosma and all the rest of it.)

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i knew for personally about the the ocasional murder by snarlbolax for food. i knew about the few kidnappings from royal jelly. A few rockets were boosted to haven. a few houses burnt by...... infact. im sure you know who it is . This is cruel i know but i personnaly had only just survived all 4. I was onto my 15th* sword because they were being ripped apart i had been forced to use several shields my armour was battered. I was one of the luckyest alive. i was the only person alive to survive even one of them. Few survived they were **

*any number rely. that was a random one.

** some of those u put down

lun, 04/09/2012 - 13:37
#1
Portrait de Artistbma
Artistbma
Ill just make a new

Ill just make a new application...

NAME: Hero
GENDER: Male
RACE: Spiral knight
LIKES: Keeping to himself, staying out of crowds.
DISLIKES: Having a great burden put on his shoulders such as a life or death choice.
PERSONALITY: Lone wolf. Doesn't talk a lot ever since his house burned down and his family with it. However, though he has experienced very sad times, he is an amazing fighter. He only uses one gun; a silversix. And with that gun, he has killed thousands of enemies. He wears a Justifier set. No one crosses him in any way. And, don't ask him why he is so quiet, because he won't answer you.

mar, 04/10/2012 - 07:24
#2
Skillkid
thats nice cause it sort of

thats nice cause it sort of suits the story ( i mean, compare him to ma character). Hero is a weird name, u said Lone wolf for personality. That could be a name. it strikes ya. Lone wolf

jeu, 04/12/2012 - 14:16
#3
Portrait de Artistbma
Artistbma
I dont know...Hero is an

I dont know...Hero is an actual name in real life and lone wolf doesnt sound much like a name....

ven, 04/13/2012 - 13:32
#4
Portrait de Angelic-Tear
Angelic-Tear
two apps :)

Name: Tear(ninja or angelic-Tear (me!!!) is the full name)
Gender: Male
Race: Spirilian
Likes:jelly cores (eats them, all types) and swords and snarby armour
Dislikes: Guns. not having any jelly cores.
personality: fun, quick thinking but silent and a hard worker, trying to earn a reputation as a knight. Often fails at stuff sadly, but people respect him for trying.

OR

Name: Wildfire
Gender: Male
Race: Darkfang mender (you say race, so i guess we can be any and are all friends?)
Likes: Tinkering with things. trolling people
Dislikes: Gremlin colony
personality: Strong funny, nice to be around and is never butt-hurt.

sam, 04/14/2012 - 02:27
#5
Skillkid
@artistmba

i didn't know that hero was a real name :3.

thanks for the 2 apps. it is ok to not be a knight on the app. How about he left the other gremlins and didn't know about emberlight.

EDIT: watcha think of ta first chapter. Im open to suggestion on how to improve

sam, 04/14/2012 - 04:29
#6
Portrait de Artistbma
Artistbma
@Skillkid Um..well i was

@Skillkid

Um..well i was looking at your chapter. There are a lot of grammar problems with it to start off. There are also spelling mistakes and i see that you are gonna add onto the chapter whe you get our apps in it. But you gotta add a lot more. In books do you see a chapter as one paragraph? I hope that you are planning to make it longer because that would help with people understanding the story and stuff.

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