greetings everyone ty for coming here. as some others i made a "little" SK sotry.. i was working on it for a month so far and i still am, so tell me would you like to listen to another tale of the planet cradle? i will bring a new story and i will posting it here, the trasure wault. tell me if you would like to listen to my tales, tell sugestions and i just might start the magik.
safe travels knights ^^
It sounds interesting, however, don't take this the wrong way, but you need a little work on your spelling. While this may be the Internet, it's unprofessional, no matter where, to have bad spelling in a story or novel. Make sure to capitalize any 'I's when you're referring to yourself, and make sure to capitalize the first letter of the first word of every sentence. But you probably knew that ^^
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[Greetings] everyone, [thank you] for coming here. [As] some others[,] [I] made a [little], SK [story]... [I] was working on it for a month so far and [I] still am, so tell me[:] would you like to listen to another tale of the planet [Cradle]? [I] will bring a new story, and [I] will [be posting it] here, the [Treasure Vault]. [Tell] me if you would like to listen to my tales, [or give] [suggestions], and [I] might just start the [magic].
I took the liberty of correcting all errors in your paragraph. If you would like, I can proofread any chapters for you before you release them.
Don't take this the wrong way, I'm very interested in having a new fanfic to read, and look forward to reading some of your writing.