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Dom, 03/31/2013 - 18:49
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Lonely-Tear

greetings everyone ty for coming here. as some others i made a "little" SK sotry.. i was working on it for a month so far and i still am, so tell me would you like to listen to another tale of the planet cradle? i will bring a new story and i will posting it here, the trasure wault. tell me if you would like to listen to my tales, tell sugestions and i just might start the magik.

safe travels knights ^^

Dom, 03/31/2013 - 18:58
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Aekuryi
Sure!

It sounds interesting, however, don't take this the wrong way, but you need a little work on your spelling. While this may be the Internet, it's unprofessional, no matter where, to have bad spelling in a story or novel. Make sure to capitalize any 'I's when you're referring to yourself, and make sure to capitalize the first letter of the first word of every sentence. But you probably knew that ^^

[Spell-check mode activated]

[Greetings] everyone, [thank you] for coming here. [As] some others[,] [I] made a [little], SK [story]... [I] was working on it for a month so far and [I] still am, so tell me[:] would you like to listen to another tale of the planet [Cradle]? [I] will bring a new story, and [I] will [be posting it] here, the [Treasure Vault]. [Tell] me if you would like to listen to my tales, [or give] [suggestions], and [I] might just start the [magic].

I took the liberty of correcting all errors in your paragraph. If you would like, I can proofread any chapters for you before you release them.
Don't take this the wrong way, I'm very interested in having a new fanfic to read, and look forward to reading some of your writing.

Dom, 03/31/2013 - 19:12
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Callis-The-Wicked
Don't worry about Aekuryi...

He is one of the grammar police. I'm sure you might've been typing too fast or posting on your phone....my excuse is that I am typing too fast on a Wii U....seriously, only an ampidexterious thumb texter could use this and not get ANY typos.

Dom, 03/31/2013 - 19:35
#3
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Feline-Grenadier
well...

You also have to pump out chapters at a steady rate

Lun, 04/01/2013 - 02:07
#4
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Lonely-Tear
wery well then

yeah my spelling is quite bad but this is internet after all. those that want to they will understand. i will start posting the story from now on, the caracters will include me, my friends and some people, and they will folow the standard storyline of the SK, whit some detals that will get you more into the life of a spiral knight. whit that said, lets get started.

story name will go as this: The Tale of Tear

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