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Tale of the Tear chapter 2. the crash. (old topic, look for the other one will will be updated dayly)

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Mon, 04/01/2013 - 13:01
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Lonely-Tear

to those that dont know whats going on i started a new SK story on the forums. search for the Tale of the Tear chapter 1, the family and keep up with story ^^ post comments suggestions, and more. characters from story are actual game players. just slightly changed. enjoy
"*" represent a narration of some sort :3 (note that you will come across spelling mistakes, i apologies)

*and so he dreams again...
this time his sight is bit more clear.. he sees the red lights.. the giant mechanised gears spining around.. strange sounds are heard too, it seams like panic is around the place. he sees shadows runing from him. he tries to reach them but he cant.. sudenly a light behind him apears again and as it consumes him the panicking noise grows louder and louder.
in a second he wakes up breathing fast and notices people running past his room. screams are heard and he hears a voice talking outside: "all passengers are to IMMEDIATELY evacuate. head towards the great hall and transport to the escape pods. the ships engine are acting strange and we canot control them anymore. we are crashing on nerby planet. i repeat, head towards escape pods right now!"
he jumps from the bed and looks outside. and as more knight runs past his room the woman appears again. "Tear!" she yells.. "what are you still doing here, hurry up and get to the escape pods. i just saw Soul and Nag runing there as well. grab what you need and go!" Tear carefully looks at her eyes saying "but mother.. arent you coming? lets go togeder". "no" she said.. like she had something heavy in her heart "i have to go back and find your father. i cant leave him..".
the knight quickly tries to argue "but mother we cant j..." and as the huge chunk of metal falls from sealing the woman quickly notices that and pushes the knight back, saveing him. the place around it begins to burn as the huge amounts of steam are entering the hallway. "MOTHER!" screams the knight, "mot.." "cough" "cough"... the woman speeks for the last time "go Tear find the others. i will find your father and find another way around" after that she runs back..
seeing that he cant do anything about it he quickly returns to his room, grabs the stun gun Nag gave him earlier and runs towards the elevator that was full of passengers. there was no room. "damet" he thought. now what is he ment to do.. the elevator wont be back so fast he needs to get out of there.. he notices the air vents close to the elevator... "unless... ah damet i will regret this.." he grabs the stungun and shots the bolts on the vent and opens it up. the gun flew away after his first shot.. he is still in-experienced after all...
he grabs the gun and jumps in the vent. he slides down the vent and after half minute of falling he hits the opening vent on the other side breaking it and jumping out.. that had to hurt.. as he slowly gets up talking to himself "yeah im definitly not trying that again". he shakes his head for a little and notices he is in great hall... as the elevator door opens the crowd rushes out, the floor of the great hall now had holes, people entered there in hurry. he quickly looked trough the window only to see the nerby plannet getting bigger and bigger. "TEAR!!" someone calls him. he turns around and Soul apears behind runing towards him. she hugs him saying "oh goodness im so happy to see you" Tears face turns red as the soul snaps out of it and pretending like nothing happend.. "where is Nag" she asked.
"im not sure i thought he was whit you the whole time".. "he was" says Soul "but just when everything started happening he left in hurry saying he has to take something, i though he left to find you".. Tear thinks for the moment and then says "the hetchet...".."what?" aks soul in confusion. "what is that?"
Tear loses himself in thoughts for the moment the quickly explains.. "am.. look Nag took some wapons from training hall today when the alpha was giving us lessons. he gave me this" he puls the stun gun and accidently shots a bullet next to souls foot "AHHH! watch where you point that!!" screems Soul.. "SORRY! :( i think he left to get a sword. he said he hidden it somewhere..."
"HEY guys!!" Nag apears whit huge sword on his back. Tear asumes that was hetchet. "damet what do you think you are doing" asks him Soul whit almost angry voice. "borrowing things. dont you see the ship is crashing who will need them when they are broken anyway"
a voice is heard from afar. now the hall is nearly empty, and one man in armor aproaches them. what do you think you are doing. we are going to crash. get inside the escape pods.
they quickly folow him to one of holes. Soul enters one asking "what is this? i never seed this before". "thise are escape pods" explains the man "we placed them in hall like this so people can evacuate quickly and.. hey what is that. YOU cant carry weapon like that boy!" and as he tries to grab sword from Nags back he jumps into the pod whit soul. Tear tries to enter the pod as well but in that moment the cracks are being heard. coming from the windows.. they are breaking up! the ship is now too close to the planet and the windows canot take presure. "oh my god..." says the man and as the windows cracked and broke the strong wind fills the place. the pod in witch Soul and Nag where closes and they decapear beneath the floor... Tear unable to hold to anything was sent flying all over the hall along whit the knight helping them and several others that werent able to escape on time. he hits the wall and his view gets blur... few moments leater he opens his eyes again only to see once great ship Skylark crashing down the unknown planet.. and him flying outside it... he is flying trough the clouds... and as he starts to accept that he wont survive the fall.. he closes his eyes again compleatly forgetting whats going on... he dreamed again...

he saw a person.. lying in the floor.. he aproached it... it was breathing heavily... he tried to toch it.. and while everything around it was dark... a light a peared behind him once more.. "NO!"
everything went white... a calm voice was heard.. "your journey is not over yet.. feel your fingers... take deep breath.. good... now take another... wake up..."
our knight opens his eyes.. he sits on grass.. looks around... he sees the flowers and a river... everything looks so nice...
"where am i?"

Mon, 04/01/2013 - 13:21
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Xenonguard

It would be a lot easier to find it if you just posted your second chapter in the same thread of your first chapter. It keeps things a lot less cluttered.

Mon, 04/01/2013 - 13:55
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Lonely-Tear
lets move on

alright i figured that when i add repleys or anyone elce does to the topic the topic will keep on frong pages lol. so that shouldnt be problem. i will keep up the story in 1 place, this is the 2. part. the 1. 2. and all future parts will be updated. keep eye out for "Tale of The Tear"
ty everyone

Mon, 04/01/2013 - 14:12
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Xenonguard
Make sure you graveyard them.

Please graveyard the extra ones. You can do this by editing it and changing the subforum to Graveyard. Make sure you untick the box saying leave a shadow copy.

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