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-[Fan-Fic]-War of the Carnations(APPS AND PLOT, CURRENTLY ACCEPTING)

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Wed, 02/05/2014 - 19:43
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade

PLOT:
Cradle, Long Before the Fall of the Skylark…
Two wealthily families of Almire, the House of the Scarlet Carnation, and the House of the Black Carnation, are at war. They fought for the power of artifacts and knowledge from the lost empire of Apocrea. Whilst Lord Vanaduke beat the invaders of the other two nations at bay, these two families feuded within the kingdom of Almire. The war had lasted generations, and the two families are still at war, neither having an advantage over the other. Our tale switches between the two houses: Nathaniel Calvert of the Scarlet Carnation, and Miranda Wross of the Black Carnation. The war still rages within the walls of Almire. Who do you fight for?

CLASSES:
Almirian Fencer: Similar to swordsman, but faster, more precise strikes. Very proficient at close combat, but limited at ranged combat.
Almirian Desperado: Wields lots of guns like a more advanced gunslinger, expert at ranged combat, but novice at swordplay.
Almirian Bombardier: A master bomber and trapper, explosives are your thing. However, ranged combatants can meddle with your bombs.
Alimirian Specter: A shadowy killer, is a master of stealth, fencing, and gunning. However, Specters like the shadows, direct confrontation is a Specter's weakness.
Almirian Guardian: A heavy hitting, heavily armored juggernaut who can take in lots of damage and dish it out. However, he is very slow, and a faster warrior could take him down.
Almirian Dasher: A quick, fast knight who can jump all around you, and leave you dizzy while his beats you down. However, his speed doesn't make him immune to bombs.

APPLICATION TEMPLATE:
Name:
Gender:
Race:
House(Scarlet or Black Carnation):
Class:
Appearance(Please put a picture if possible):
Armor/Weapons:
Any Special Powers(OPTIONAL, NEVER MAKE IT OVERPOWERED):
History:
Personality:

Fri, 02/07/2014 - 13:09
#1
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Valorai
Heart of Valor

Let's see, who should I enter...not Gatley, not Valorai, not blah blah blah. Yknow, I haven't entered Blue in a while...

Name: Blue

Gender: Female

Race: (This confuses me, and will be edited later.)

House: Black Carnation

Class: Dasher

Appearence: Picture? Heck naw. A short knight with a- you guessed it, blue personal color. Nothing outstanding about her Appearence.

Armor/Weapons: A customized armor: A Black Cranation hood and cuirass in completely dark blue color. Her weapon is an extremely advanced pistol that's spits out darkness at her foes. (Can cause blindness and has normal damage)

Supahpower: She has no superpowers...but she is amazingly good at reading peoples emotions while concealing her own.

History: UNKNOWN, BI-

Personality: Dat sass. Often talks back, and will never lower herself to call someone 'sir' and stuff. She's happy enough with friends, but would rather be in a forest. Eating leaves or something. She doesn't tell me these things. >.>

Tue, 02/11/2014 - 08:32
#2
Colray's picture
Colray
Entry and Question

Name: Leo
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House: Scarlet Carnation
Class: Almirian Desperado
Appearance: Almirian Crusader Armor, (Without giant spike thing on side to allow for more movement.) Almirian Helm, Crest of Almire.
Armor/Weapons: ...ummmm see Appearance. Weapons: Almirian Sidearm, Looks like Valiance, but instead of white there is light red, and the blade is gold. Also equipped with an Almirian Crossbow, made of Fire resistant wood, uses bolts that can pierce the stongest of armor, but takes longer to load.
Any Special Powers: True-Aim: For a couple of seconds, everything in his view slows down allowing him to aim and fire in those seconds. He is also very accurate in the first place due to practice. (not sure if counts as power but is a special skill.)
History: Is a loyal Almirian and fights for the kingdom itself. Is in the Scarlet Carnation clan, but doesn't care that much about the war, he thinks Almire should be united instead of divided, and often tries to negotiate instead of fight.
Personality: Kind, precise, not the one to start a fight. Easygoing, laid-back. Knows weapons, and admires someone who takes care of theirs.

Question: Since this is many years before the Spiral Order came to Cradle, should Spiral Knight weapons be allowed. I'm only talking about things that the spiral knights brought here, like the Calibur line, blaster line, Magnus, Troika, etc. Things that came directly from Cradle would be acceptable, like Wolver armor, Chroma armor,jelly armor, token gear (the armor/weapons you get from brinks) Just kinda wanted to put that piece of info out there.

Wed, 02/05/2014 - 23:07
#3
Aekun
App

Name: Norin

Gender: Male

Race: Almirian

House: Scarlet Carnation

Class: Almirian Fencer

Appearance: Determined Purple Eyes

Armor/Weapons: A larger, more armored version of the Azure Guardian armor (spikes, more chest protection) that is colored red black, and white. Also, a red, black, and white helm resembling an Volcanic Plate Helm, with a purple scarf wrapped around it. Also, dual swords resembling the Combuster/Glacius/Voltedge, only black and white with a purple, Shadow status dealing blade. Finally, two Shadow-Dealing Wristblades on each hand, and a shadow dealing black spear with a purple blade.

Any Special Powers: Very, very strong despite the fact that he is not a Guardian

History: Norin's family was slaughtered by the Black Carnations when he was very young, but he escaped. After training for many years, he applied to join the Scarlet Carnations and was accepted.

Personality: Norin is usually very serious, but is very fun when with friends and people who he likes. He is an excellent military commander and strategist.

Thu, 02/06/2014 - 14:21
#4
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
@Colray

Yeah, Spiral Order stuff isn't invented yet so it isn't allowed. You can get creative with the gear if you want, but nothing too OP.

Fri, 02/07/2014 - 12:48
#5
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Robo-Drilldigger
App

Name: Eve
Gender: Female
Race: Almirian
House(Scarlet or Black Carnation): Black Carnation
Class: Almirian Fencer
Appearance
Armor/Weapons: MK 2 Armor and Helm (Has max Elemental defense, immunity to fire and poison). Wields sharp dark spears that do armor piercing damage, mixture of elemental and piercing.
Any Special Powers(OPTIONAL, NEVER MAKE IT OVERPOWERED): Queen's throne: A large shockwave goes around her and 4 spikes appear on her back, 2 on the top and 2 on the hips. Her spears deal double damage and has increased speed. Only once per day and lasts for 30 seconds. After the 30 seconds, the spikes vanish.
History: Eve is the daughter of the Black Carnation who mastered her main weapon. Eve wouldn't allow the Scarlet Carnation enter the Black Carnation. Eve has helped the almirians with her special weapon,
Personality: Smart, patient, often alone, will strike first if given the chance and will try and rescue any almirians in the Black Carnation

Fri, 02/07/2014 - 13:29
#6
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Classes

Can we get something more diverse than Fencers? It can't be all fencers.

Fri, 02/07/2014 - 19:53
#7
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

question, does the fact that there is a race option mean we don't have to be almirians?

Sat, 02/08/2014 - 06:46
#8
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Races

Some members of the other nations defected from the other two nations, Arthea and Dracia and became mercenaries and bounty hunters. All three kingdoms used to be one giant nation, so they all look very similar.

Sun, 02/09/2014 - 15:19
#9
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Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

Name: Gerioun
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House: Black Carnation
Class: Bomber
Appearance: I have no clue how a regular Almirian would look like, instead of cursed like vana, so I guess like a regular Almirian
Armor/Weapons: A homemade Dark Briar Barrage (minus the snarby) with increased knockback but decreased damage (says the knockback is for sending them to the god "Ieggdasioh" to be punished to die by tomatos and get repeatedly killed again and again after they die by aliens with needle guns, at least he somewhat predicted the future) and a Deadly Crystal bomb with a slightly increased blast radius
Any Special Powers: Bomb Boyage: Summons a bunch of the bomb he is currently weilding near him to explode, 15 minute cooldown
History: Gerioun has always been very crazy, nobody knows if he was born like this, got serious pernament brain damage which stopped something, he did a bunch of crazy stuff that eventually made him crazy. Nobody knows why he is still here and not kicked out, but that is probally because he is very skilled with bombs.
Personality: very crazy and always wanted to plain out destroy the Scarlet with a whole bunch of bombs. Never trust any of your stuff with this guy, or yourself with him alone.

Sat, 02/08/2014 - 15:28
#10
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Creeperlucario
Apps

Name: Baradon
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House(Scarlet or Black Carnation): Scarlet Carnation
Class: Almirian Guardian
Appearance
Armor/Weapons: Strengthened Ancient Plate Equipment (Helm, armor, shield which reflect any bullets, decreased fire resistance.) Baradon's Flail, like a much slower but more powerful Giant Cleaver. Can also spin his flail above his head while moving.
Any Special Powers(OPTIONAL, NEVER MAKE IT OVERPOWERED): Baradon's rage: After Baradon takes enough damage (25%), he will start swinging his mace fast and violently and then will slam his mace into the ground (or person) 6 times and then shield bashes them out of the road.
History: Baradon is one of the elite guardians in the Scarlet Carnation who are able to damage the Black Carnation's barriers. Baradon is also the most loyal because he won't leave until the last possible moment but the dashers where always a problem.
Personality: Rough, aggressive, hates when dashers come, brave and extremely bold.
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Name: Belmez
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House(Scarlet or Black Carnation): Scarlet Carnation
Class: Almirian Specter
Appearance
Armor/Weapons: Customized almirian set, doesn't use a shield. Blade is called Hendleblitz which deals shadow/piercing and when Belmez is holding onto it, a giant claw will sometimes slash opponents (Only happens when Belmez has very low HP.)
Any Special Powers(OPTIONAL, NEVER MAKE IT OVERPOWERED): Gravity Circle: A dark circle emerges around Belmez and lifts people in the air, after 5 seconds, they will fall and shadow spikes rise, dealing heavy damage to anyone in the circle (except Belmez). Once every 30 minutes, only works in the shadows.
History: Belmez has been a master at attacking in shadows, and has sliently killed a few almirians from the Black Carnation. Belmez often knocks enemies into the guardians who obliterates the enemies. However, Belmez can't enter the light unless he wants to useless to the Scarlet Carnation.
Personality: Smart, prefers to be peaceful, likes the darkness more and won't allow the Scarlet's have a crush on the Black Carnation's

Sat, 02/08/2014 - 17:09
#11
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Psychnade
Apps

Apps are going well, keep it up!

Sat, 02/08/2014 - 18:49
#12
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Doomskull
Application

Name: Doomskull
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House(Scarlet or Black Carnation): Black
Class: Specter
Appearance(Please put a picture if possible): Full Chaos set, with glow eyes, and more chains on the armor than usual.
Armor/Weapons: Barerous thorn blade, Umbra Driver, Storm Driver, Blitz Needle modified to deal shadow and piercing.
Any Special Powers(OPTIONAL, NEVER MAKE IT OVERPOWERED): He does move quite fast for a Specter, and can deal with direct confrontations, but is terrible at fencing.
History: He was uninvolved until one day someone thought he was part of the Black Carnations and tried to kill him, and he decided to join the Black Carnations.
Personality: Cold, Arrogant, Ruthless, will kill without batting an eye.

Sun, 02/09/2014 - 15:20
#13
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall shall be shattered!!!

finished my previous app

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 10:32
#14
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Sonosuke
All shell will break loose.

Does the character have to be from one of the houses?

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 10:41
#15
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

#Sonosuks

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 12:12
#16
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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

And thus, my new default subject line has been replaced.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 12:13
#17
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Heart of Valor

Success is delicious.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 13:48
#18
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
@Sonsuke

No, not necessarily, but it would be better if it was.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:48
#19
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

((How about a spy from the Almirian Army? Doesn't say anything about that, huh?))

Name: Soteka Mokuzaki

Gender: Male

Race: Almirian

House: Scarlet Rose (Spy), Lieutenant of Almirian Army

Class: Almirian Fencer

Appearance: [link]

Armor/Weapons:
*Almirian Crusader Helm w/ Divine Bolted Vee and Mecha Wings
*Skolver Coat w/ Divine Side and Parrying Blades
*Crest of Almire

*Gokai (Primary Weapon) - A Japanese Feudal-Era katana blade which deals pure normal damage and has a high chance of strong Fire. The charge is similar to a Cutter-line charge, except it sends out a Firebolt on the last swing. The blade appears to be on fire, but this is just an illusion (and yet it still casts off light). When not in use, Gokai is held in a black sheath ornamented in steel that's attached to Soteka's waist. Handed down to descendant MechTeka (which is why MechTeka's Half-Almirian).

Any Special Power:
*Immunity to Fire (Not sure if that's OP or not)
*Increased physical strength

History: Soteka is of the highest ranking and highly respected soldiers of Almire's mighty army. Being from a middle class family, this is saying something. He is also married and has two children. Vanaduke's second-in-command, *insert name here*, noticed an internal conflict stemming between the two wealthiest houses of Almire, The Scarlet Carnation and The Black Carnation. Thus, Soteka and several other soldiers was sent as spies to stop this nonsense before it caused a war inside the walls of the great kingdom. If this were to happen, then the other kingdoms were sure to wipe them out.

Personality: Soteka is quite the hot-headed warrior, however at times can be calm and collected. Even through this, he is loyal to his lord and the people he has sworn to protect, even if it means risking his life. Soteka has high morals, which include not bringing harm to innocent bystanders, and giving his enemy a fair fight.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 16:39
#20
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
A Man of Honor

I really like that mediator kinda of personality and honorably fighter guy. Reminds me of the TF2 Administrator.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:16
#21
Colray's picture
Colray
Derp

You know what? There are so many fencers I'm changing my entry to another class

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:29
#22
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
PS Sonosuke

How did you create that image? Is there a program that allows you to design a knight as you wish?

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:38
#23
Colray's picture
Colray
Oh i know this one!

Yeah he is using SpiralSpy, a Computer program that allows you to play with the entities of the game. I have it, but haven't figured out exactly how it works tho. I recommend Solotron's tutorials, just search it on youtube

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:45
#24
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Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

Yeah, it's called SpiralSpy. It's just a plain old model viewer, so just slap that program in your SK folder and start viewing models. Just don't click edit or save any edits if you do, cuz that'll break the game.

Wait... ah crap. I just doomed Soteka to live to the end of the fan-fic because he's the ancestor of MechTeka and Sonosuke. Unless he's had a child with someone prior or during the events of this fic... yeah, lemme just change the history part.

Mon, 02/10/2014 - 19:55
#25
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
SpiralSpy

Ah, so thats what it is. Thanks!

Tue, 02/11/2014 - 08:33
#26
Colray's picture
Colray
Derp

I finished changing my character's name, weapons, and Special Power

Wed, 02/12/2014 - 14:35
#27
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Steam and Proud!

Tomorrow will be the last day to submit characters...This is a prequel to Cradle: Two Paths since one of the character's descenants is in Cradle: Two Paths...

Wed, 02/12/2014 - 20:36
#28
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

In case I forget to say it later, Ow.

Sun, 02/16/2014 - 21:02
#29
Colray's picture
Colray
Entry 2.0

Name: Daniel
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian
House: Scarlet Carnation
Class: Almirian Dasher
Appearance(Please put a picture if possible): Almirian Crusader Set, with Crest of Almire.
Weapons: Almirian Rapier: Blade is same as the Fearless rigadoon but without the strip of yellow. The hilt is grey steel.
Any Special Powers: Speed boost: For about a minute, Daniel can move twice his normal speed, allowing for more attacks.
History: Daniel was one of the top members of the Dashers, outclassed by an unnamed Black Carnation member. Determined to win the top spot, Daniel joined the Scarlet Carnation to hone his skills.
Personality: Strategic. Mind races, always trying to solve a problem. Upbeat, hasn't had anything really emotional happen to him, so his attitude stays up. Doesn't really want to destroy the Black Carnation, just wants to duel its members to hone his skill.

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 17:48
#30
Colray's picture
Colray
Lorecraft

Bumpitty bump bump

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 19:12
#31
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

So... what happened here?

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 20:22
#32
Colray's picture
Colray
nothing...

That is why I bumped it... Well I made another app but that's it

Sat, 03/08/2014 - 21:17
#33
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
#Sonosuks

I was asking Psych, but okay

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 10:14
#34
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Sho-Marufuji
OHGAWDAMI TOOLATE!!!!1111??//?

Here's my app! Been wanting to make a character like this for some time (I swear if I missed the deadline...).

Name: Raven
Age (Just for the heck o' it): 43
Gender: Male
Race: Almirian Fencer (Hey, hey, don't judge)
House: Red Carnation (Currently)
Appearance: A heavily bandaged head with a slit for one of his eyes, a Surge Fur coat except the blue becomes a gray-black sorta color, did I mention that it's worn, teared, and filthy as well? I couldn't post a picture cuz I only use MS Paint and ALL THE PICTURES I FOUND WERE TOO COMPLEX TO RECOLOR AND I'M LAZY. l:l
Weapons: A FF recolored to look as if it's rusty, battered, and old. A old pointy stick in summary.
Abilities: Wind: Dodges all attacks with incredible ease at the cost of not being able to use his sword for 5 seconds after the ability is used. Shield: Blocks all attacks with incredible ease at the cost of not being able to attack for 5 seconds after the ability is used. Discovery: Reveals his ugly and gory face stunning his opponent for 5 seconds and gives Raven an attack bonus that lasts for 30 seconds.
Bio: Decades ago during the times of the *Insert name here* War a mighty Captain led his squad against an ambush of 1000 soldiers. With victory assured he was betrayed by one of his troops. The troop took a dastardly swing at the valiant Captain's face and blinded one of his eye and scarred his face. The Captain lived but was feared and despised by the own people he protected! But one day the Captain disappeared and was never to be seen again and was rumored to have died somehow. Or did he? The Captain as you guessed was our fellow who now goes as Raven. After his not so glorious return to Almire he felt depressed and sad and decided to live out his life drowning his sorrows in drink. Though at times he may not be able to afford this so he takes the occasional role of a mercenary, fighting for the highest bidder.
Personality: Lol, I think I explained in his Bio. Drunk, sad, and an awesome fighter.

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 10:30
#35
Aekun
Epic

FIRST CHAPTER PLEEEEEEEAAAASE!

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 13:07
#36
Sho-Marufuji's picture
Sho-Marufuji
@Aekun

+1

Sun, 03/09/2014 - 13:58
#37
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Graveyard

This will be graveyarded until Cradle: Two Paths is done. Sorry guys! :l

Mon, 03/10/2014 - 08:58
#38
Pipipipipi's picture
Pipipipipi
The 4th wall be shattered!!!

NEVER

>:(

/stomps off madish, even though I know I can wait

Wed, 03/12/2014 - 13:02
#39
Sho-Marufuji's picture
Sho-Marufuji
Oh, so that's where it went.

Oh, so that's where it went. Derp.

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