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Wed, 05/16/2012 - 21:24
Ironfenrir's picture
Ironfenrir

I haven't seen a thread for the Crimson Order, so I thought I'd throw an idea for one of the members of the Crimson Order. One idea that I can come up with is a slightly - deranged gremlin named Martyrus, and his profession, knight intelligence extraction and the head of the torture division. When King Tinkinzar orders him to retrieve information and plans from the Spiral Knights, he is determined to carry out his plan, no matter what it takes.

He is known to be violently insane at the most random of times, and it is that trait that has made him be feared by both knights and gremlins alike. As many gremlins are fascinated with tinkering with machines, Martyrus is bent on finding a way of turning them into tools for his demented ways of torture, but his most favorite type is by electrocution. His apparel is a metal-plated gremlin garb, a large tattoo of the Crimson Order insignia on the side of his face, and a set of electronic goggles that are constantly short circuiting because of his obsession with electricity. Usually the images on the lenses are fuzzy, but when they do show, they usually appear as either red Xs or angry eyes.

As for his tool of choice, he wields an electric baton that's connected to an electric generator strapped to his back. His weapon pulses with so much power, lightning practically pulses out of his body. Nobody knows why he willingly exposes himself to a dangerous amount of electricity, but they believe that it somehow keeps him stable as his own way of shock therapy.

If any of you guys got any ideas, or if you got any comments for my idea, let me hear them.

Wed, 05/16/2012 - 21:42
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Schattentag's picture
Schattentag
Hm...

Sounds kind of cool, I suppose. I think there have been some threads like this in the past, but this is probably the most memorable description I've read.

Would this guy be a boss of some kind or were you just throwing the concept out there?

Wed, 05/16/2012 - 21:50
#2
Ironfenrir's picture
Ironfenrir
Reply to Manalicious-Knight

I would say a boss. The idea is to come up with Crimson Order bosses, like Seerus, and I thought I'd throw my own idea for one as an example. I'm trying to come up with another one, but so far, the personality behind it is still in the blueprints.

Wed, 07/25/2012 - 22:02
#3
Ironfenrir's picture
Ironfenrir
Crimson Order Member Idea

OK, I got another one. A female gremlin named Alaina, and is known as the head of the medical division of King Tinkenzar's empire. She may not be as violent as her other gremlin kind, but Alaina earned her place as a member because King Tinkenzar has a great interest in her ideas and skills in medical inventions. A lot of her work has always been top secret, but she had been known pretty well of being the first one to draw healing energy from the mineral crystals. She has a sweet nature with small animals, but just like the other gremlins, she isn't afraid to do what it takes to carry King Tinkenzar's missions. Because of her great healing and reviving abilities, she had been known by the other gremlins as "The Fanged Angel."

She is slightly taller than any average gremlin, and her apparel is the same as any mender, except her coat and hood are solid white with red gremlin markings. Instead of the usual gremlin symbols, she carried the crimson order insignia. As for her weapon, she wields a wrench-like scepter adorned with all kinds of mineral crystals, giving her her great powers.

I wish I could come up with more, but these two are the only ones that I can think of so far. Any criticism or have any more members you want to add, let me hear them.

Wed, 07/25/2012 - 22:36
#4
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
Hmm. This is all very

Hmm. This is all very interesting. :3

Some time ago, I made up 12 Gremlins to be the Crimson Order for my stories, but then I learned that there were only 9 and one of them was Seerus (and now the new guy from Compound 42. DX). So I decided to have seerus and the others be the public Crimson Order, but my 12 to be the real Order.

Lemme rephrase that.

See, the 12 I created were suposed to be the real Crimson Order, the guys that no one knew about. Seerus and the other 8 were supposed to be the public face of the Order, the ones who everyone thought was the Crimson Order, but they weren't really. :P A cover-up for something much bigger.

Sadly, don't got mcuh stuff for them. Only names and their roles.

Wed, 07/25/2012 - 23:02
#5
Ironfenrir's picture
Ironfenrir
Reply to Lordofnecromancers

Very interesting idea, secret higher ups to the other crimson order members. I'm sure the OOO will come up with an idea like that somewhere in the future :3

Mon, 07/30/2012 - 09:30
#6
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Kellnox
Grahkoll, "The Ex-Communicated."

Grahkoll was a General Demolitionist, in charge of most of the mining and building of tunnels and platforms, but was kicked out for accidentally collapsing an entire stratum, killing many gremlins in the blast. He now lives in Emberlight and helps to build houses and the like.

Not a boss, maybe he'd work like Rhendon and help fight another Crimson Order Gremlin, possibly his replacement?

Mon, 07/30/2012 - 09:44
#7
Kjtk
If I may add :3

this sounds pretty worthy of a update but if it was it would probally be a exspansion (or however you spell that) just like seerus over there. Since you are trying to make these new gremlins into almost bosses of some sort (unlike compound 42 which technically does not have a boss , but there is a mastermind to it) but overall its not bad at all

Thu, 08/09/2012 - 21:26
#8
Ironfenrir's picture
Ironfenrir
Reply to Kellnox

Sounds like a good idea. Thought of any details for him?

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