Spiral Knights - Graveyarded since noone reads it

Graveyarded since noone reads it

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Tue, 02/19/2013 - 03:54

Svanto

Ok so i decided to make an own fanfic... Here's the prolouge:

PROLOUGE

Vrango and Lodtryn ran trough the fiendish city... A large Greaver got the speed up and bited Lodtryn in the back, Vrango
looked back, Lodtryn was dead, as the rest of the squad. They had been sent down to investigate why some new large
Greavers had taken a devilish city. But the mission was about to result in a fail.
Vrango hurried towards the elevator, he could see it now, the Greavers where coming closer, he jumped into the
elevator and pressed the first button he could see, it was up, he let out a deep sigh of relief, he was safe.

Shortly after he heard noises from bellow, he started to get scared but told himself: "Greavers cant fly after an
elevator". But as the noises of wings grew larger he relised he was wrong. He pulled his calibur and prepared an
charge attack for the greavers, 5 came up and attacked he spinned and sliced 3 then the others retreated, and fleed.
Phew
But then he saw what they fleed from, greavers are sometimes cannibals, and here was a giant greaver. The giant
greaver bashed into him and broke the elevator, he fell. Down to the darkest corners of the clockworks, he fell.

Chapters so far:
0 (this post)
1 (#4)
2 (#9)

I will be accepting apps, to apply type out:

Name
Race (gremlin knight whatsoever)
Arsenal
Bio/history
Personallity

You can use other things too, but this is the small one.

Currently needed characters have bigger chanche of getting accepted:

1 gremlin ghostmanes that are in haven
1 gremlin demo digused as a knight in haven (digused as kozma)

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 03:56

Fleet-Miss-Gun

No titles?

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 03:57

Cobalterian

ummmm

Some mistakes in grammer and a lot in punctuation, but nice start:

@Fleet-Miss-Gun I think the title's Fanfic

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 04:13

Svanto

Sorry i missclicked save when i was experimenting with <strong>

So i saved before it was done... Its fixed now tho... Il add a better tittle later...

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 04:19

Svanto

Chapter 1

CHAPTER 1

Duske was a ordinary knight, not extraordinary in anyway, he didnt get why they picked him for a special mission.
Aperently a squad of knights had gone missing in a devilish city swarmed with greavers, thats not so special
in Duske's opinion and he thought they hadn't told him all details, maybe someone in his squad knew anything...
Well anyway he walked over to the town square and his friend Luorox showed him his latest buying from the
auctionhouse. They decided to do a run between depths 8-13 and look for kilowatt pulsar recipes, unfortantly
it was a fiend stratum today. Duske hated fiends of all kinds. Trojans, devillites, silkwings and specially
greavers. But he was lucky today, there wasn't any greavers anywhere, nor devillites. The fiendish cities was empty...
After reaching depth 13 he found a kilowatt recipe and went to haven to craft one.

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The knight woke up in a white room, he didnt know where he where or who he was, he saw a brown furred creature look at
him trough some glass, his head hurt alot. The creature seemed to be surprised that he was alive.
Where am i?"
The knight asked.
Who am i, and who are you?
The creature walked away and came back a few minutes
later with another creature that looked to be of higher rank, the first creature spoke to the other creature, it was
some weird language but the knight could understand it, it felt wrong to understand it, like if it he wasnt ment to
understand their language but he thought they said:
He fell from depth 16, it appears he got memoryloss .
He can understand us.
The other one said.
sleep him down", "then clear his memory again... I just got an idea.
The knight heard some gas being sprayed in and his vision whited out.

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Thats chapter 1... Applications are now needed before i can post chapter 2... wich im almost done with.

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 15:23

Shotjeer

App for one ghostmane

Name is Fripper
Race is gremlin
Arsenal: The ghostmane stuff, as well as a silent nightblade
Bio: Not a whole lot is known about this ghostmane, and he defenitly wanted it to stay that way. He was born with the talent of moving without being seen or heard, and he murdered his parents at the age of 9 with his shurikens his mentor gave him. Nowadays, he is the shadowmaster of the CO and even his closest friends don't know much about him. His training with his apprentices is quite brutal, and there is a rumor that 1 out of every 3 apprentices doesn't come back alive...
Personality: Evil, Scheming, good at battle, brutal.
Note: This is very different than the one I posted from Betrayal by Knight-of-Vanaduke. You should read it.

Tue, 02/19/2013 - 15:46

Svanto

Accepted

^
I got chapter 2 ready i need the knights for the squad tho.

Thu, 02/21/2013 - 00:52

Spiral-Knight-Kid

HI SVANTO :3 nice story (not sure, I didnt read it, being nice cuz im in ur guild) :3

Thu, 02/21/2013 - 10:17

Svanto

...

Since no-one is posting applications il just make some characters of my own instead...
Expect chapter 2 being here anytime now

Thu, 02/21/2013 - 12:26

Svanto

Chapter 2

Wrango came into the room, and sat down, Tyrpo spoke.
We want you to help infiltrate haven, we already have 3 people that have infiltrated haven, theyl meet you at the town
square and say the code... The code is ondo...
ondo? Wrango said...
Never mind that Tyrpo said. From there you will get more orders.
Wrango exited the room to prepare for his journey to haven, another gremlin appeared from the dark corner of the room.
Can we trust him?
He dosent remember anything, he only knows what we told him. Tyrpo said.
Well well but if he reveals the location of the great colony to the knights... Your dead!
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Duske and the rest of the squad meet up at the town square and they went to meet Feron before they went of
adventuring, and they got warned that this was a dangerus mission. They walked away to the elevator and went to the
mission. Feron was a bit scared 4 persons was too little... But this was a good squad anyhow, Ingoro was the most
agile bomber in the order, Yterem never missed a shot and Onklow Had been in the spiral order for
aslong as anyone could remember. But Duske... Duske's father and grandfather had both started to forsee the future
5 minutes before they died, which was the reason that they died... He was just being there to warn the rest of the squad.

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