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Angel's Light (First Book) - A Spiral Knights Fan Fic

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Fri, 03/04/2016 - 16:48
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(Edit from September 2021)

Hi, uh. So. I haven't written anything SK related since maybe 2018-2019, I stumbled on this again and just wanted to note...the first chapter is a rewrite. I rewrote all the other chapters and even wrote a few more, but they aren't updated here. I really suggest reading the fully updated version on Wattpad instead as I do not have the time or patience to update all the thread posts. Angel's Light: Spiral Knights Fan Fiction

I doubt anyone has touched this thread since 2017 or so but whatever. Enjoy if you want I guess? I also apologize for my bad writing, it's improved but I don't have the time to put it to practice here.

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Hey, fellow Knights!

This is the first time I've used the SK forums, but I'm far from a newbie. Around four or so years of playing this awesome game is this result of this fan-fiction.

So this is just about my SK character, Angel-Girl, and her best friend Braveheart (If there is a Braveheart in the game, it's not him. I made this one up.). This is the beginning of a very deep storyline (Note: some elements of this are original, all of my own creation.) of the cause of the Morai Wars and more. This book itself features a strange figure that is kidnapping Knights right and left...and AG (Angel-Girl for short) is being targeted. The true storyline of SK is merged with this one (meaning most of the missions, mentions of the missions, and such will be in the story)

DISCLAIMER: I'm somewhat new to this type of format, so I'll be editing my posts a lot (most likely). If it looks funky, I'm probably messing with/fixing it and trying to make it look good!

(Posting the first chapter in another thread- or is it called a post? I know nothing. XD- since it's kind of long. Chapters will be published once a day until it's up to what I have so far, which is almost seven chapters.)

Well, here we go! Hope you like it! ^-^

(The current, canon Spiral Knights storyline belongs to Grey Havens.)

Fri, 06/24/2016 - 18:17
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Chapter 1 - Truth Be Told...

Apparently, Lord Vanaduke hates wolves.

After all, the hulking Almirian did greet us with '"What's this? More wolves hungry for the blood of Almire? Our great kingdom shall never fall to the likes of beasts!"', and head after Braveheart first with his flaming scepter. Oh, did I mention that Braveheart had a helmet based off of a standard Frostifur Wolver? Guess I didn't.

Go ahead, throw a hissyfit over four visitors, when one out of three of them looks nothing like your least favorite animal. Real mature for an almighty ruler. My brain snuck in a sarcastic comment just as I threw myself out of the way of the fireball stick, right before it crashed where the four of us had been standing.

Bella-Lestrange (A.K.A. Bella), one of my squadmates, began to charge her Blitz Needle up to release a larger-than-normal amount of needle-like bullets. Gentleman Swift (Why is he called that, anyway? I just call him Swift.) noticed what she was doing and left Vanaduke a frosty present- a Shivermist Buster bomb. Vanduke was having trouble seeing us as we flocked around his feet and refused to stop moving, so the bomb caught him dead in his thundering tracks.

He froze- literally- in his spot, and Bella took the opportunity to nail some crystalline bullets in his bulky back. Vanaduke roared in pain, and in reply, part of the flaming rafters- which used to hold up a throne room ceiling - crumbled completely and hurtled for the ashen floor.

"Braveheart, duck!" Bella yelled, and tried frantically to get his attention.

My best friend automatically rolled to the side as a fiery mix of wood, ash and debris collided with the floor, singing the "ears" of his Polar Night Wolf Hood. He straightened abruptly after finishing his roll, and although his helmet made him look expressionless, a flash of annoyance glowed from his blue luminescent eyes. He coughed to get the ash-filled air out of his lungs before speaking.
"Great." He said in an irritated voice, which sounded more like his usual "I'm-fighting-you-and-I'd-rather-be-anywhere-else" tone.

From there on, we fought harder- I took out the fiery zombies- Slags- that popped up, Swift continuously used his Shivermist, Bella with her Blitz Needle, and Braveheart just ran around, putting out fires that would trap us on the floor or taking a shot at Vanaduke with his Combuster. We went out of our way to push forward, however- Vanaduke was getting madder and madder, and then he finally turned away and went to the back of the room.

"Where are you going, Lava King? We just got started!" Bella yelled at the big guy as he turned back towards us.

Something in the back of my brain beeped a warning, and I tried to recall what other Knights had said about Vanaduke from their failed encounters with him. Something about a...a floating fire mask? And water pots? Whatever they had said, I had a bad feeling about what was about to happen next. "Um, guys, maybe we should-"

The king of ashes fell to his knees with a loud groan, shaking the whole hell-like citadel, and for a second I thought that we had injured him to the point where he surrendered. He closed his eyes, the light behind his mask indicating eyes fading out to slits, like he was concentrating on something. Swift narrowed his eyes in suspicion, watching Vanaduke carefully.

Then to my complete surprise, the king's mask was detached away from his face by some unknown force. Fire ignited from its sides and the expressionless eyeholes, looking like a phantom's mask that had been lit by a pyromaniac.

Swift closed his eyes in exasperation, and his one permanently frowning eye twitched slightly. "Of course. How could I have been so stupid..." He trailed off, then opened his eyes and turned to the rest of us.

"Get to the springs on the edges of the room. Throw the water at the mask to extinguish the flames, and use it sparingly. Killing this....thing...may take awhile." He directed us, turning his leadership to the "ON" mode and motioning to the corners of the room. He switched from his bomb to his Polaris, wiped the sweat from underneath his Imperial Tricorne, and charged right for the hovering, ghostly fire mask and the kneeling Lord Vanaduke.

My shield hand automatically flew to my neck, fingering the only recovered item from my Isoran childhood- a rough quartz-like pendant, floating underneath an arch shaped metal piece with the help of (most likely) some complicated levitation device.

Touching it doesn't send tingles up my spine nor send adrenaline rushing through my veins, pumping me up to maul the next enemy that comes my way. No, it's nothing special. It's more of a way to get a sense of comfort, as if the happy memories from Isora are trapped within the rock. It's become a habit to touch it like a security blanket.

I dropped my hand, turned and shrugged at my friends, as if I wordlessly said "Why not, let's go!" I silently prayed underneath my breath that this would not be our last time charging into a fight together.

Bella understood instantly, grinned widely at me and charged her Blitz Needle before following Swift's lead. Braveheart didn't go quite yet then, he just looked at me for a couple extra seconds before he shook his head to clear the ash from his brain.

"Together then?" I lifted my Argent Peacemaker, and Braveheart gave me a nervous half-smile before we dashed like crazy Gremlins to our supposed deaths.

But we did it in the name of the sweetest word of this time period-

Redemption.

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"ANGEL!!!!!" Someone yells loudly not an inch from my ear.

Broken out of my mind's embrace, I jump two inches high and bonk my head against the bottom of the top bunk- HARD.

"OWW!" I exclaim, trying to decide which body part to comfort first- my skull or my left ear? I glare over at Bella, who grins sheepishly and looks like a Seraphynx who snuck too many Divine Orbs for a snack.

"Heh, heh...sorry about that." Bella apologizes, adjusting the brim of her Kat Eye Cowl so it doesn't cover her face quite as much. "Just a little nervous, I guess."

Peering over at the opposite bunk at the rest of my Vanaduke squadmates, Braveheart and Gentleman Swift, it's pretty obvious that Bella isn't the only one who's nervous. Braveheart looks a little green right through his dark cool gray helmet, and Swift keeps adjusting his Tricorne, smoothing out his Heavenly Iron Armor skirt, or his frowning eye continuously glowing a little brighter than usual, then fading back to normal. Yes, we're all nervous.

Nervous for what, exactly? Being declared Vanguards, the highest rank in the Spiral Order, in front of all of Haven's citizens, isn't exactly a tea party (although there's a picnic afterwards...). While we had already privately, officially, and ceremoniously received our Vanguard confirmation, four people reaching the max rank following the discoveries of the Core and the anniversary of the Skylark crash- well, that's something to celebrate, isn't it?

But we aren't just getting stage fright from a large briefing with food- no one knows yet about the new Core intel except for the Spiral Order leaders and personnel, including Bella, Swift, Braveheart and I.

After destroying Vanaduke, we'd reached the planet's Core and found an overlook, filled with defective communication screens and a Recon Module. It was from one of the planet's first explorer squad members, Parma, Alpha Squad Recon.

But why are we nervous about a civilian briefing? Because when they tell everyone the news about the center of Cradle, we're expected to pitch in and share our findings from the Core's overlook. Civilian or military, we have to do it WITH ALL OF THE SPIRAL KNIGHTS. Who wouldn't be nervous having an entire race of hundreds of thousands stick their eyes on you as you presented life-changing material?

"You're at it again, Angel." Bella waves her hand in front of my eyes, snapping me out of my thoughts.

"I drift off when I get nervous. Don't blame me because of my limited attention span." I swat Bella away in irritation.

Bella just laughs and turns to the other two at the opposite side of the room. "Don't tell me you both have Snipe-sized attention spans too. Because then I'm stuck having to watch everyone's back."

Swift looks up and the corners of his mouth tug against a smile. "Don't worry about it, Bella. I just have an eye that shoots out purple light." He points to his one frowning eye.

"Oh, oka- wait, what?!" Bella's face gets a priceless look of shock, and Braveheart raises his head to stare at Swift.

Swift chuckles for the first time since I've met him. "I'm kidding. Mostly."

"What do you mean 'mostly?'" I question with a raised eyebrow.

Swift ignores me and his smile fades. He hoists his legs onto the bed and leans against the footboard. Meh, whatever. I'm just somewhat glad that he's opening up a little. He was completely morbid when we were paired up for bringing back the Knight Arkus (which we completely failed to do, we had to kill him so he didn't kill us), but Swift must've softened a little before our attack on Lord Vanaduke's citadel.

The sound of running footsteps enters the hall outside of our room, and we all lift our heads to see a cadet Knight, wearing the default armor of the Spiral Order, who looks about 14 or 15 (must be an attorney with her age) skid into the room. She's panting and holding her holographic interface- the receiver of all missions, orders, and intel from Spiral HQ. She leans against the doorframe and wipes the sweat from her flushed face.

"Hguh....they said..." She tries to get out whatever she's trying to tell us, but her breathlessness is too overpowering for her.

"Are you okay?" Braveheart asks her.

The girl looks up, and she instantly looks like she's going to have a heart attack. But instead of falling on the floor going into cardiac arrest, she squeals and then covers her mouth.

"You're- Vanguards! I'm actually meeting some Vanguards! I can't believe it!!!" She screeches loudly enough for me to want to cover my ears. Oh look, it's me from 4 or 5 years ago when reading my favorite book. Yay.

Bella just stares in bewilderment at the fangirling Knight, Braveheart is almost frightened, and Swift rolls his eyes before speaking. "What is it?" He asks a little gruffly.

"Oh! Right!" The girl straightens, runs over to Bella, and nearly throws her Interface in Bella's face from excitement. Bella barely catches the base of the hologram, looking even more perplexed. She looks at me like Who let the wild Wolver in here?

"Kora wants to talk to you!" The bouncy girl turns to Swift with her answer. Then her face changes to confusion. "Er, sorry, she wanted me to give you a message!" She corrects herself, then stares over at Braveheart. He shifts uncomfortably under her gaze, throwing a glance at the door like he wanted to run out of the guild hall.

"Oh wow! You're Braveheart, right?!?" She starts squealing again, and I instantly restate my mental comment. Check that, that's me from an alternate reality.

Braveheart avoids eye contact with her and mumbles "Yeah...why?"

"Oh Isora!" The girl clasps her hands together in glee. "You're SO much hotter in person, Bravey!"

Bella's eyebrows shoot off of her head, BOTH of Swift's eyes become round circles, and Braveheart turns red through his helmet, backing up against the wall.

I take a moment to blink in astonishment. I suddenly have a strong desire to facedesk something a hundred times. Did she just call Braveheart HOT? I think in the best way possible.

"All of my friends said that you looked too short, but I LOVE short people! And you're taller in person anyway!" She keeps boring her adoring fangirl death stare into poor Braveheart, who looks like he wants to melt into the floor, get his shield out and hide behind it, or start loudly praying to the gods to have mercy on him and whatever it is he did.

"Ahem- what did Kora want to tell us?" I attempt to ask as nicely as possible, hoping to turn the attention away from my extremely introverted best friend.

It works, and the girl stops acting like a crazed Knight off the streets and more like an attorney. "Oh, sorry." she adjusts her glasses, like Kora does sometimes, and takes her Interface from the now-stifling-laughs Bella.

"She said you four need to get over to the civilian area. Like, right now." She answers quickly, heading for the door. "I wouldn't miss it if I were you, who would miss their own ceremony?" She stops at the doorframe and turns back towards us.

"And also, big fan here of all you guys! I can't wait until I get recruited too!" She hugs her Interface so it passes right through her, except for its very solid projector. "See you there, I hope! Unless Kora gives me some stupid errand again..."

She exits the room, and we all exchange glances with mixed emotions.

"Bravey...?" Bella half-snorts, giving a lot of effort to hide it and failing.

"I don't want to talk about it." Braveheart states, ungluing himself from the wall. He sounds like he'd just met an exploding Gremlin bomb and not a fangirl.

"Neither do I." Swift says, throwing a sympathetic look at Braveheart with his normal eye and now-frowning eye. "Besides, we need to get going. No one likes late Knights."

"Yeah, guess we'd better get." I stand up, brushing off the skirt of my Valkyrie Mail.

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We all left The Supreme Dream Team guild hall (Bella's guild), and we would probably be a couple minutes late. But we all had agreed it would be safest to be tardy than to encounter Attorney Fangirl again. I guess our becoming Vanguards had slipped a little early, if fangirls were to fawn over the guys and attack us girls. Who knew that Knights loved a Vanguard in that way?

We walk across Garrison, which held the Hall of Heroes building, the guild halls, the Lab and a long bridge leading to an entrance to Spiral HQ. We pass underneath a canopy of trees and shade before entering the Town Square, the center of Haven and military shopping. It's very empty and unlike its usual, busy self with many Knights in front of the Auction House. Everyone must be at the ceremony. I state while watching a Snipe cross our path.

We pass the large fountain in the middle of the square and went up a small flight of stony and dusty steps. We walk by the Advanced Training Hall underneath another canopy, only of overhanging cloth this time, into the Bazaar, the shopping area mostly for civilian lifestyle.

We stroll on through and enter the area of Haven with apartments, which is usually busy as well but it's startlingly hushed and very few people linger.

Then we come out of the cramped apartment area into a large field, a park for all Knights to enjoy, whether you're in the military or not. A pavilion is a little off-center in the very green field, and the path we stopped on was lined with small trees, leading all the way to a stone ground in a circular shape. Close by the pavilion is a makeshift podium had been set up.

I gasp and stop abruptly as my eyes fall on the vast field- it's two-thirds filled with nearly my entire race, and the area of Knights ended only a good amount of yards away. It's as crammed as a concert stadium going to see some legendary singer.

My heart speeds up super fast, and Braveheart nearly falls right into my back in surprise from my sudden stop.

"What? What are you-" Then Braveheart sees what I'm staring at and goes completely rigid. Bella and Swift come up beside us and stop as well, although they don't do it quite as suddenly. They both pause and we all watch the thousands of Knights in the field.

"It's strange..." Swift murmurs.

"What's strange?" Bella turns to Swift with a curious tone.

"Ah- never mind. Don't want to dampen the mood." Swift shakes his head, the purple floating Dread Seal shimmering over his face as he does so.

"Um...so should we go around? What if everyone sees and recognizes us?" Braveheart stares warily at the crowd.

I shudder at the thought of getting recognized by Attorney Fangirl x950,000 or so. Being crushed is not how I would want to start a ceremony.

"No, that'd take too long and we're already late." Bella revokes, biting her lip in thought.

"..I don't think anyone would actually recognize us. They know that there's new Vanguards, but they wouldn't know until they had our names. Unless they all decided to search up names for our images in the Spiral Order database or something." I conclude.

"You got a point there." Swift nods at my opinion, then scowls furiously. "I seriously hate crowds."

"Same here." Braveheart mumbles.

So off we all go, and as we reach the crowd we begin a zig-zagging weaving pattern. People groan and grumble about being pushed around, and some bark at us to stay in one place, but we ignore everyone and keep heading for the podium and the pavilion.

At some point the mob of people break off, dividers clearing a path for anyone coming or going. It snakes to connect with the stony circle with the podium, then reappears to lead to the north side of the park, disappearing into a neighborhood.

"They couldn't have put a path on the east side too, could they?" Bella grumbles, rubbing a bruise from where someone's Sealed Sword handle had whacked her right next to her eye.

We take the path for the rest of the way, and the only people we meet are Knights scrambling to find a spot to stand or sit on to see the show. Some sit on a small gate keeping the crowd away from the platform. As we get closer to the podium, a couple yards away from it is a couple large amplifiers, probably so the concert sized-crowd can hear the people on the stage speak.

Not a single Knight is on the lavishly decorated podium, but most of the Vanguards and leading Spiral Order Knights are sitting at the front of the crowd, on the ground like the rest of the Spiral Knights to symbolize equality.

Kora is there, and she spots us and gives a wave. Next to her is Lieutenant Vaelyn, the Knight given the position to guard the Core overlook after we killed Lord Vanaduke. A long line of other Vanguards follow Vaelyn, some of them trainers and supervisors, but all of them are vendors in the Hall of Heroes who tend to give advice on certain types of armor.

Most of the Knights down the line both ways I don't recognize. The ones I do is Barrus, who dubbed me Vanguard, Rhendon, who helped thousands of Knights to Haven, Wegner, the Head of the Geo Knights, Hahn, one of the Spiral HQ biotechs, Desna, leader of the Recon Rangers, and lastly, the leader of the Scarlet Scouts. Both groups had brought ALL of their members.
The Recon Rangers all spot Swift and wave proudly and happily at their fellow Ranger. Swift waves back and gives them a small smile, and Desna responds with a salute.

"There you are! You're late!"

We all turn to face a male HQ Knight, decked in the Azure Guardian set with the helmet popped up. He motions for us to come behind the podium, large enough to hide anyone beyond 5'6, which is EXTREMELY tall for a Knight.

"Here." the Knight holds out a bundle of headsets as we approach him. "Put these on. They should adjust to your helmet sizes."
He begins to stroll towards a box with tangled cords spilling everywhere. "Just go on up when Ara signals you."

"Ara? Who's Ara?" I question the Knight.

"Some girl who takes 10 espresso shots every morning."

"Uh...not following."

"She'll be by the speakers."

"Oh. Okay."

After we all put on our headsets and are cleared of any weapons, Braveheart approaches me in a timid state.

"Um...AG?" he uses his nickname for me, like always.

"Hmm?"

"Are you...nervous?"

I blink at the question I didn't see coming, then recover my poise. "No...I'm more like having an internal meltdown."

Braveheart looks slightly nonplussed at my reply and I giggle at him. "I'm kidding. Yes, I'm nervous." I cock my head at my friend. "How about you?"

Before he can answer, a loud voice squeaks from the speakers and fills the whole field with strong soundwaves.

"TESTING, TESTING...1, 2, 3."

Braveheart claps his hands to his ears, and the whole race follows his suit. I jump at the sound and cover the sides of my head too late. Loud protests and grumbles come from the audience as the screech fades out, and I turn to see Lieutenant Feron standing on the podium.

"Ah, sorry about that, everyone." Feron stands to his full height, reaching about 5'4 as the tallest Knight in the Spiral Order. His huge metal (and fake) eyebrows make him appear more serious than he really is and his armor makes him look huge.

"We've taken large measures to make this gathering happen, since this week isn't an ordinary anniversary and this isn't any old news." Feron begins his speech, or introduction or whatever it is he prepared.

"The past month has been full of fortunate events, and despite how gloomy they appeared to be at first, we just had to pull the curtain away." He sweeps his hand along as if opening a curtain to emphasize.

"The Spiral Order wishes to share our news and celebrate with you all today, we felt it would be appropriate to bring good news on the day all of our lives changed for the worst- at first.

"Although this anniversary is not something we would usually put in league with rainbows and sunshine-" a ripple of snickers and chuckles weaves throughout the crowd at that. Feron smiles a little before continuing.

"With all that we've learned-" Feron clears his throat. "-We'd like to look upon the Skylark incident as a milestone to how far we've come. It's been three years since the day our lives changed, and today, the Spiral Order shall give you hope for our future."

The crowd watches Feron intensely, hundreds of thousands of eyes, all different spectrums waiting for him to go on. I gulp, my gut sensing that we're up very soon.

"However, finding the key intel would not have been possible without a very talented squad." Feron pauses, then motions his hand behind himself with a flourish. "They cleared the fiery hellish kingdom that blocked any entrance to the Core, and eliminated any further threat of Knights going MIA inside Firestorm Citadel.

"Give it up for our newest Vanguards; Bella-Lestrange, Gentleman Swift, Angel-Girl and lastly, Braveheart!" Feron's voice booms through the mic, and the whole crowd erupts in loud applause. The ground nearly shakes with the vibrations and I forget that I'm not the one who should be clapping.

"Hey! That's your cue guys!"

A familiar and hyper voice floats from the right side of the speakers, and I whirl around to see Attorney Fangirl waving and pointing at the podium. "Good luck, Vanguards!" she squeals and disappears behind the platform.

"What!? You're Ar-" I have no time to finish my squeaky question before I find myself on top of the stage, stuck right in the limelight and squeezing my necklace like it's an extremely durable stress ball.

Calm, calm, calm.I try to relax myself but my heartbeat is inside my ears. I've never been super good with crowds, so this is an invitation to bad stage fright. The crowd whistles and whoops, and the row of fellow HQ personnel cheer wildly. Everyone knows how huge of a deal becoming a Vanguard is. I take a deep breath and salute Feron, following suit of my comrades.

"At ease, soldiers." Feron turns to us. We relax from attention as Feron continues in his deep voice. "HQ has invited the squad here today to personally share their findings with the world. After all, they've earned the right to do so." Feron motions to us respectfully. Braveheart blushes a little and everyone fidgets just the slightest.

"Erm, right." Swift steps forward, his voice much more youthful sounding than Feron's through the headset. "We discovered an abandoned overlook just above the Core, and sitting at the edge was an Alpha Squad Recon Module."

The crowd murmurs in disbelief, and I can't blame them. They hadn't seen any recon modules since the Roarmulus Twins factory had been gutted, a small remnant from the Alpha Squad yet again is a bit...unexpected.

"This one was left by Parma, the squad Recon if you all recall," Bella steps forward this time. "And what she found was something I couldn't believe if it hadn't come from the Alpha Squad."

Feron lifts a gloved hand towards me. "Angel-Girl, if you would activate the module," his eyes dart towards my skirt pockets. I gulp slightly and reach my hand into my pocket.

It comes back out with a small, blue disc-shaped device, and I shakily press the "PLAY RECORDING" button. A hologram springs to life from the disc, and I turn up the volume, holding it to my mic.

A staticky version of Parma enlarges to about 30 feet high from the device as the volume goes up, and several gasps emerge from the audience. Parma flickers once before speaking with a cuttish voice from the static.

"We are at the end of the line. Pursued by some kind of terrible darkness we are forced into the unknown." The voice that nearly no Knight has ever heard, or is only a fleeting memory, seeps into the air and hushes it. Parma looks hurried, distressed and battle weary. She looks over her shoulder before continuing.

"As we neared the Core- I don't know how to describe this really... the shadows came alive and began to attack us." Someone in the crowd shrieked, and was slapped in order to be shut up.

"Rulen became enveloped in it and by the time Grantz freed him his body was badly burned. He said it felt like both fire and ice.

"And then we could go no further. As I record this, the darkness is nearly upon us, consuming the world we see, the light."
Parma's face changes slightly, into an emotion I still cannot recognize for the umpteenth time of watching it.

"But then the Core, it began to open, filling the place with such a light, such an intense, blinding light. Euclid has made the call; faced with the darkness, we'll enter the core, enter the light."

"This will likely be my final recording."
Parma looks back over her shoulder again, and just as suddenly as it had turned on- she bleeped out.

No one dared to move.

It's Feron who breaks the silence. "While there's been no success in getting the Core to open again, Lieutenant Vaelyn will be looking into it as the Core is her new station. So w-"

The crowd explodes, and the whole field appears to move as a whole race jumps to its feet. Cameras flash, people yell questions and some scream angrily.

"Lt. Feron! How long ago was the module recorded?!"

"We can go home!!!!"

"When is the Skylark gonna get fixed then?!? Or are you too cowardly to keep trying?!"

"Are you lying to us?!"

The yells, cries and camera flashes all mob into one as the uproar increases. The crowd attempts to move towards the platform, and the front row of HQ personnel, Recon Rangers and more push them back behind the thick gates.

"Questions will be taken when HQ officials are interviewed! Shut off those cameras-" Kora's yells are drowned by thousands more, the air is heated with the intensity of the news and the commotion.

Braveheart is frozen in his spot, and I remember how much he despises (maybe fears?) loud crowds. I fight the urge to run with him off the crowd and back to Bella's guild hall, instead I jog over to him and squeeze his hand tightly.

"It'll be over soon, just hang on." I whisper into his ear, wanting to hug him in comfort but I'm not sure if he would like that in public.

Feron reads Braveheart's mind and dashes over to us. "I think it's time you four left. Follow Ara back to the Guild Halls."

"But-" Braveheart starts to speak, but Swift finishes it for him.

"What about you?" he crosses his arms and Bella looks at Feron expectantly.

Feron sighs and stares back at the crowd hungry for answers. "HQ has a long day ahead of itself."
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Well, that's the first chapter!

Thoughts are appreciated, but keep the criticism constructive. I tend to be sensitive.
I might include illustrations whenever I get to putting them in.

Have a Knightly day, and watch out for Jellies. I hear they're malicious today.

EDIT: Complete chapter overhaul!
Also, Bella-Lestrange is a character that belongs to one of my good friends, NightGuardSoldier (on Wattpad), and Gentleman Swift is Inquisitive-Ego's (who is on the forums) character. They gave me permission to insert them into the story.

~Angel-Girl, the Fangirling Valkyrie

Fri, 03/04/2016 - 18:17
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Midnight-Dj
Le critique?

Good writing over all, but here are just some gripe I have with the story line:

Railan seems to be someone who 'trolled' you in the game or in real life, and this seems like one of those 'revenge'/'payback' fan fics, I would sincerely implore people not to put their own personal need for vengeance into a fan fic. It makes you look very immature.

This fan fic also seems to presume the readers, ie. me, knows the relationship between you, braveheart and Railan. This is a mistake I made myself numerous time and I can see why people criticized me for. I felt not weight behind you and Braveheart's friendship (is it love or just platonic?) and felt it was just a ploy for the convenience in the power of friendship. I really think some back ground stories could help fleshing out the characters before you move on.

I felt a lack of need to read the story due to an absence of tension, I didn't feel the need to care about AG's plight or the friendship building, but this is just the first chapter, so I will withheld my opinion, hopefully the stakes go up from here on now.

Fri, 03/04/2016 - 18:59
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Angel-Girl
Oops, wrong point to get across

My apologies for making the Railan-AG relationship look like it's showing bitterness to a real person, so I should clear things up- Railan is a totally made up character. She is not based off of anyone in real life or in game, and if anyone in SK is named Railan, it's only coincidental. I should have clarified that earlier, it never even crossed my mind that I might seem like I'm taking out 'troll victim anger' through this chapter! Sorry about that! Railan is only here to bring out AG's internal fury, which has been boiling for awhile, and also so you can know she can get provoked easily.

But, thank you for the critique! The bit about adding backstory is something I probably never would have thought of.

Sat, 03/05/2016 - 13:55
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Angel-Girl
Chapter 2 - Should You Choose to Accept It

(Hey again! Another day means another chapter! Enjoy!)

(Note: Spiderstorm is an in-game character who I have gotten permission to use. The owner also approves of her attributes, personality, ETC.)

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Dragging myself out of bed was extremely hard today.

Normally, it’s hard because I just don’t want to get out of bed...but this time, it was literally difficult, thanks to all of my injuries.

Although it wasn’t quite as bad as it was a few days ago, when I COULDN’T get out of bed. I hadn’t been so sore in years, when I had first become a recruit. Unluckily for me, unless I had actually broken bones or had trouble walking, I was still required to train. Yes, Vanguards still have to train every day, we just don’t have as much things we have to work on. However, the performance has to be way beyond expectations. But we weren’t born with a sword in our hands, okay? We’re never gonna be THAT good!

I trudge down the steps of my guild hall, dragging my Avenger behind me, forcing it to scratch and bounce against the ground constantly. I have to hold in yawns every minute, and my armor feels ten times heavier than normal. It’s a wonder that my eyelids can keep themselves open, otherwise I’d have to get crowbars the height of an average knight to keep them from shutting.

I barely know where I’m going, but my feet seem to know where my necessary location is. I find myself at the steps of the Advanced Training Hall, and I stare at the steps down into the entrance before slowly stretching my arms out to the sky, letting loose the biggest yawn I could allow myself today, crack my neck and shake my head several times to break myself out of my daze. None of this works very well, but, hey, it’s better to try it than falling asleep on your feet.

My steps carry me sleepily into the entrance, past the ‘reception desk’, where the guide of the building, Konway, sits and does who knows what behind the counter. He may have given me a concerned glance if he wasn’t so busy diving into a bunch of papers, probably just the light and technical stuff. All of those spikes wouldn’t spear and those gates wouldn’t shut in our faces if we didn’t have it.

“The good ol’ trap simulations…” I mumble to myself as I pass by a recruit trying to jump over a sheet of spikes- a trick most of them use, but don’t catch on that it never works. They always end up overconfident and-

I wince as the knight lands exactly in the middle of the simulated spikes and screeches. The worst pain he’ll have to bear through is syringes- those spikes are only virtual. They are actually just tiny pain simulating needles. But they pack a LOT of punch on your feet, teaching you to be light on your toes.

“AG! Hurry up!”

I snap my head away from the hurt recruit towards the call, the sound next to a room filled with test robot-dummies. A knight equipped in full Vog Cub armor is waving for me to come over.

“Echo’s gonna be here any minute, and you’ll be dead meat if you don’t get over here before then!” She yells with her hands cupped over her mouth. Another knight, decked from head to toe in Rock Jelly armor, peeks around a storage locker that makes two passageways in a large space of floor.

My heart leaps at the thought of being penalized by Echo. While he’s not MEAN, he just isn’t one of my favorite Vanguard instructors. He’s strict, not totally beyond emotion, but just the same I wouldn’t want to be late to one of his sessions, or mess around during an intense demonstration. Personally, I think he’s just grumpy because he has to leave his merchandise post in the Hall of Heroes. He’s perfectly approachable there, like he’s completely linked to his Striker selection and it makes him happy. Talk about weird….

My chest leaps again, more panicky this time, as sound of dreaded footsteps enter the Training Hall. I peek over my shoulder for half a second for confirmation, and I get it.

The pointed ‘Wolver ears’ of Echo’s armor are poking over the low wall.

I wake up in that instant and almost appear right next to Rock Jelly knight. I don’t dare look in the direction of that approaching, Skolver-decked male, and try my hardest to strike a natural pose. But as everybody knows, purposely trying to look calm and normal is beyond achievement- especially when you’re sure you just barely made it to your training session.

“...AG?”

I stop sweating in my armor.

That nervous, quiet tone definitely isn’t Echo’s voice.

I come back out from behind the storage unit to meet a Polar Hood covering my friend’s face, which is very similar to the Ash Tail Helm, and I nearly poof out all air in my lungs for a sigh of relief.

“Oh, hey Braveheart.”

He waves a little, and I wonder if the light had been playing tricks with my eyes. I’m not THAT scared- no, sorry, WARY- of Echo, am I?
Vog Cub knight shoots Braveheart a strange look for her greeting. “Yeah, hi.” She says, almost resentfully. Braveheart nearly shrinks back, but instead he gets a strange look in his just visible eyes...is it...hurt…?

Not taking any chances, I grab his arm and pull him around a corner, to avoid both knights’ gazes boring into Braveheart like he had just kissed a Gremlin- because then the whispers begin. Some weird rumor must be going around for this kind of attitude, because it’s not just those two who’ve been doing it around Braveheart.

I turn back towards Braveheart. “What is it? You’re not supposed to be on training today, you went to-”

“I know,” Braveheart interrupts me, with an obvious edge of urgentness in his voice that makes me look at him twice. “But Kora contacted me. She said that-” He pauses. “Well...she wanted you to see for yourself…”

I raise an eyebrow. How important could this be if the training is called off for me? And why didn’t Kora contact me herself; or, even more conveniently, gave a pass to Echo to let me miss training? She’s usually very thorough with those sorts of details.

Braveheart reaches up by his helmet, and touches his comlink. “Yeah, Kora? AG- I mean, Angel-Girl’s here. I’m changing you to hologram.”
He plucks the comlink from his ear and lets it lay in his palm. He punches a button on it, making a holographic, girl knight, pop out of the round, flat disc. Kora. I think to myself. She would be almost completely lifelike if it wasn't for the static that made the screen all wavy, or the fact the Braveheart kept shifting his posture nervously.

"Hello, Angel-Girl.” She says with a smile, and I smile back.

Kora gets right to the point. “HQ has discovered that the recent disappearances of knights in the Clockworks are starting to become more frequent." She says in a pleasant but serious voice.

My eyes widen. Usually most knights would be able to get a rescue team to get them if they were down, but every now and then someone would disappear. “What? How is that possible? Don’t knights-”

“Yes, I know,” Kora interrupts. “They all called pickup. But by the time the teams would get there, they wouldn’t find the knight. They’ve all scoured whole levels with no success. We’ve lost over ten knights in one week already.”

Ten knights in a week?! I glance at Braveheart worriedly, who just keeps staring at the hologram. I put my gaze back on Kora.

“That’s horrid!” I exclaim. “You don’t have any idea how these disappearances are happening? No clues whatsoever?”

Kora shakes her head and sighs deeply. “We have found no evidence of any Clockworks monsters, not even Gremlins. They couldn’t be so bold as to kidnap that many knights in such a short timespan!” She scoffs. I nod in agreement. Most Gremlins are cowards, everyone knows that.

“So you’re saying you want us to go find out who- or what- is doing this…?” I question.

Kora nods in reply. “Report back when you’ve returned; maybe you’ll be able to find something that we missed. You do tend to have a habit of uncovering things!” Kora chuckles, and I smile awkwardly, and Braveheart follows my gesture. I’m not sure if the comment is meant to be a compliment or an insult.

“If you find a knight, bring them home. We’ll question them for any information they might have.” Kora salutes, ending the conversation. “Good luck, Angel-Girl! You too, Braveheart.” She looks over her shoulder at my friend before waving, and I salute at her. She blinks out with a click, and Braveheart fumbles to put the comlink back on his ear.

Excitement, as well as fear, swells up in my chest, but I grin widely. Every time we get a mission, no matter how small it is, I always become enthusiastic. I’m not elated with bloodlust, unlike some knights I could name, I just- well, I don’t really even know what it is. It may just be that I’m trying to hide fear of being killed, as there’s always that risk, but who knows!

"Oh yeah..." Braveheart mumbles. I peer up back at him, but he still doesn’t look at me. “She also said that we were going with someone else…”

I raise an eyebrow. "We are? With who?" I ask.

"Some Senior Vanguard named Spiderstorm." Braveheart shrugs. I go over the tons of names in my head and don’t come up with ‘Spiderstorm’.

"Never heard of him.” I shrug too.

“Sounds like he'll be our on-hand backup. Anyways, we have to meet up with him in about ten minutes." Braveheart continues.

“Okay, guess we’d better get ready.” I pull up my holographic arsenal, preparing to find any suitable equipment for the mission.

Braveheart nods, and turns almost eagerly to leave for a physical arsenal station nearby, which arouses my suspicion. He could have just pulled up his holographic one...

He’s WAAAAAY beyond normally nervous. What’s up with him? I ponder, watching his back.

I scan my list of armor and weapons, and I sigh as my equipment that shows up is barely any good. Gran Faust sword, Argent Peacemaker gun, Valkyrie set….the normal because it’s almost impossible nowadays to forge new stuff. Something called ‘alchemy orbs’ are required to make things now, and they take FOREVER to get! Really stupid if you ask me.

I wave goodbye to my training comrades, right after retrieving my weapons from the physical arsenal and placing them on my belt. “Where ya goin’?!” Rock Jelly Knight calls.

I grin. “Away from here!” I call back playfully, and turn my back on them.

I place my fingers in my mouth and whistle shrilly for my Seraphynx, Sophie. It had taken forever to learn how to whistle a high enough pitch, but I can do it with ease now. Within one minute, a zooming, flying Kat-like creature crashes into my side and plonks to the floor, dazed. I laugh as Sophie stands back up on her almost invisible feet, shakes her head and launches gracefully back into the air.

She meows and cuddles me, the cute little ball of kitten ready to become ‘the mandibles of death’. I stroke her soft, tufty back, smiling and forgetting about my worries.

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Braveheart and I exit the Training Hall about five minutes later, heading for the Arcade. “Where we meeting Spiderstorm?” I ask Braveheart as we enter the almost abandoned Arcade.

He scratches his arm while he answers. “Emberlight. We go down from there.” He says shortly, then walks on ahead for an elevator, the Gate to the Clockworks. I stay a few feet from the contraption, cross my arms and tap my foot as Braveheart fumbles with the controls.

Chirrup!

I jerk my head up to see a green snipe and a blue snipe hovering over Braveheart’s helmet. I can’t help but giggle as he flicks his hands at them. "Shoo! Go away!" He says loudly, irritated. The blue one spots me and leaves Braveheart alone, thoroughly interested in me. It flutters over and tries to snuggle in my helmet. Sophie tries to bat at it, and hisses, trying to scare it away. The bird just tries to doze off, completely ignoring the flying Seraphynx.

I start laughing now, but I gently flick the Snipe off and watch it fly away. I have a mission to do, snuggling with Snipes isn’t part of it.
I look back at Braveheart, who has not been able to get the green Snipe to go away. Braveheart growls quietly "What are you looking at?" then bats even harder at the little smart aleck. It makes a startled chirp and is gone before I can say 'Stranger pet'.

Braveheart wheels around as I approach, and I have to snort to hold in another chuckle. He blushes, turns away quickly and presses the sky blue ‘down’ button, and we zoom away into the Clockworks.

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The jerk of the elevator stopping thrusts me out of my imagination as we reach our destination. The safety bars slide down into their holes, allowing us to walk through into our stop- Emberlight.

I step off the elevator, and I suddenly a rush of dizziness overcomes me. "Woah-ah!" I stumble around to keep my balance, and Braveheart peers at me, confused. "Elevator rides always make me woozy!" I laugh, and he smiles awkwardly at me, then becomes strangely interested in a TV a Gremlin had turned on on a nearby roof.

I eye Braveheart for a moment, before slowly looking away, once again wary of his attitude.

I try to forget about the last few seconds, and begin scanning the terminal for Spiderstorm. I eventually rest my gaze on a bench nearby, and notice a knight sitting on the wooden seat.

His expression is very faraway and he doesn't notice me. He’s wearing a Skolver helm- designed off of the Wolvers, with points on the top of the helmet for ‘ears’. The middle of the helm is colored with dark gray, and the rest of the helmet is white. The eyeholes are only slightly curved lines, sloping downwards diagonally. The outline of the helmet follows the same slanted attitude, making a slight curve towards the top and straightening out as it goes down.

His armor is the Vog Cub armor, much like the rest of the Wolver family armor set. The fur gathered around his helm is an ashen gray, several parts of his armor are lined with crimson-orange, and his feet are in boots that have molten cracks designed into them.

His arm is weighed down by navy blue Barbarous Thorn Shield, ringed with faintly glowing, red spikes and three, glowing, sharp ovals in the middle representing the Snarbolax’s eyes. A Divine Avenger, a celestial sword that is ringed with a translucent, yellow, glowing-holographic edge, and a Fang of Vog, a jagged, molten orange sword that flickers with flames constantly. The whole image seems to awaken a vague, recent memory in my mind, but I can’t place it...it’s too fuzzy.

I pause for a second, having a hunch that told me that was the Vanguard HQ sent us, so I give a friendly wave after thinking it over. "Hi there!" I call out.

He doesn’t reply, he just plucks something off of his helmet and stuffs it in his pocket. I power-walk straight over to the knight and stop in front of him. He doesn’t even look up until I speak again.

"Hello, I'm Angel-Girl. Are you Spiderstorm?" I question invitingly, and I hold my out hand for a handshake.
He looks at it for a second, and he nods curtly to the question, but he doesn’t take my hand in return. He stands up and walks right past me onto the elevator, without a single word of acknowledgment. I look after him for a second, my hand still held out. I shrug, but I look down at my feet and uncomfortably finger the hilt of my Avenger.

Wow, what's with him? I ponder. I can't help but feel like I did something to make him...like that.Suddenly a firm yet slightly tender hand is placed on my shoulder, and I turn my head to look over at Braveheart, who seems less embarrassed.

"Don't let him get to you." He whispers helpfully, the corners of his mouth hinting at turning up into a comforting smile, but some sort of longing is in his eyes that nearly makes me ask what’s wrong. But I don’t.

Out of the corner of my eye, Spiderstorm looks up from the elevator controls, right at us, raises his eyebrows and smiles amusedly, as if something Braveheart said wasn't correct...and he took a sort of weird entertainment out of it.

I don’t really care, so long as he doesn’t start laughing, and I flash Braveheart a thankful grin. "Thanks for the encouragement." I whisper back. He smiles back weakly and jams his hands in his pockets.

Spiderstorm clears his throat, and I turned to look at him. He’s not smiling anymore, he’s holding his posture erect, and his is chin held high like an army general's.

"Alright," he barks to get our attention. His voice is strangely high, but not squeaky high. It makes him sound almost twenty years younger than he should have been, but he still sounds like an authority.

"HQ assigned us for a mission. Our purpose as of now is to complete it. No standing around. No whining. No hesitation. Break these rules, and you get left behind. Do I make myself clear?" he says with a true general's touch of discipline and sternness.

From the very sharp tone of voice, I immediately know he means REAL business. I bob my head nervously. Spiderstorm nods back, satisfied, and turns to the elevator and meddles with the buttons.

I’m the first to move. I walk to the elevator, turn back towards Braveheart and stand on it, then motion Braveheart over, my nervousness still in tact but starting to ebb away. Braveheart gulps and walks over, making an effort to stand as tall as he can- which isn't very tall for most male knights.

Spiderstorm punches the glowing 'descend' button, and the elevator begins to lower. "No turning back now, newbies." he mutters. I’m instantly struck with annoyance, and from Braveheart's sharp inhale I know we’re both thinking the same thing: Jerk. The elevator groans, as if agreeing with us as we fly down into the lower depths of the Clockworks.

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~ Angel-Girl, the Gamer Valkyrie

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Chapter 3 - Everyone Hates Candlestick Keep

Well guys, new chapter. This chapter, as you probably noticed from the subject title, features the level which the majority of us hate the most- Candlestick Keep!
Enjoy!

DISCLAIMER: I hurriedly did an edit in a scene in this chapter...since I have to turn in for the night soon, and I need to get this up. It's longer than it should be, so that'll get fixed later... I'll fix it completely some other time...

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My ponytail jerks up all of a sudden, and I nearly lose my balance as the elevator slams to a halt abruptly. Eyes widened, both my hands grabbing the thin metal railing, I feel my heart beating out of my chest. I take a moment to gather my wits before turning my head to the left to see Braveheart grip the railing tightly, so tightly that the rail might meld with his hands.

"Dasked rusty tech!" Spiderstorm growls and hits the console with his fist. The only noticeable reaction from the console is a tiny zap, like it’s replying “Nope, I’m not gonna move.”.

I inhale slowly as I continue trying to relieve the shock from the startling stop, except my stomach has jumped to my throat and is refusing to slink back down into my chest. After a couple deep breaths, I feel less shaken up. I release my grip on the elevator bars and relax. Just peering at the console, I conclude it looks like we may be here awhile.

I stare around at the mechanical mantle of Cradle, something I haven’t been able to do very often anymore. I used to just go down into an Aurora Isles environment, kill any intruders that might take a go at me and then settle down on a grassy ledge to watch the sunset. While it was always fake, it’s not very easy to see a pretty sunset inside of Haven, and outside the walls is strictly forbidden. Too many shifting plates, they said. So I settled for less than none. But who said those fake sunsets weren’t pretty anyway?

I sigh blissfully at the memory of the past years. They weren’t the best, but some of the moments were ones I wouldn’t trade for Isoran ice cream again. And trust me, we haven’t had that since...actually, since the Morai Wars. Wow. It’s really been that long? That was almost, what, 17 or so years ago? I pause before rethinking that thought.

...Ah, that’s right, I recall the fact I’d kept in my mind. It started the same year I was born. 19 years ago. I sigh a little more sadly this time. I stare at my hands, mainly the armguards I’m wearing. If I was still on Isora,right now, I wouldn’t even be wearing this. Well, maybe a different version, but we didn’t have the same materials on Isora that we have here on Cradle. Nothing would be as it is now.

...How much would be different if we hadn’t crashed? Or if the war had never happened? The thoughts I’ve had countless times before flare up again. I place my hands behind my head in a strange but comfortable position. Ugh, I hate my philosophical thoughts. Takes me places I’d rather not go.

"Come on! You crappy elevator!" Spiderstorm yells loudly, and kicks the bottom of the console.

The sound echoes around us and the Clockworks, then leaves an uncomfortable atmosphere in the air, startling me again. As if a coincidence from Spiderstorm's kick, the elevator jerks again and crawls downwards, groaning and clunking loudly as it went in protest. Spiderstorm mutters something unintelligible under his breath and crosses his arms impatiently. I sigh, slide my hands into my skirt's pockets, and plop my back against the railing with a thunk.

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No...not this place again! I give a groan under my breath, quietly enough so Spiderstorm wouldn't hear.

The gate of the elevator is open, waiting for us to exit, announcing the first level of Tier 3. Unfortunately for us three adventurers, it just HAS to be the dreaded Candlestick Keep. If you gather up a hundred knights and ask them which common Clockworks environment they hated the most, the majority is going to have Candlestick Keep on their list. Trust me.

I flip out my Argent Peacemaker, locked and loaded, and follow Spiderstorm through the No Return Gate, warily peering at the ghostly darkness. Braveheart, maybe in attempt to make a good impression on Spiderstorm, fake-confidently walks through the gate behind us and retrieves his Radiant Pulsar from its holster. I give a thumbs-up to Braveheart, and try to present him a not-fake-smile, but I have a feeling it looks more like a nervous side grin.

Braveheart clears his throat. "So, did HQ give you anymore information than they gave us? We didn't exactly get a boatload." he says to Spiderstorm.
Spiderstorm shakes his head as he disintegrates a few gray boxes with his sword, clearing a path for us. "Nope. Go on expedition, get to the coordinates, find the kidnapper. That's it."

I’m a little disappointed at that. Surely HQ would at least give the leader of the expedition a little more information than that! Before I or Braveheart could retort to Spiderstorm's answer, my ears catch sudden eerie noises, which sounds like groans and screaming meows. We all shut our mouths and quickly run over to a nearby blue, enchanted candle, which is barely shorter than me. The blue flame begins flickering gently as the wind from our speed passes over it.

I pocket my gun, whip my Avenger out with a flourish, and the noises cease. The silence is deafening, my eyes darting around to find the first sight of the enemy, sheer suspense hovering around us- it’s even worse than when there were actual screams. I brace myself for the enemies I was going to stab to pieces- And they hopefully won't do the same to me. I think with a grimace.

And then I see them.

About five ghostly Kats float towards us, their mouths open wide and their eyes ready to pop out of their tinted pink heads, if they even have eyeballs. Some of them just stand there, not blinking once and mewling in such a way that should’ve sounded cute, but it was almost petrifying. The rest dash towards us, and Kat shot out about five or so purple projectiles at Spiderstorm. He blocks a few easily and dodges the rest. He barely sidesteps the charge of the Kat, and slashes it through its middle with his Divine Avenger. It screams with shrill pitch and plops to the ground, dead.

I turn to see a Kat rush straight for me, opening its mouth even wider to bite.

“Woah!” I yelp, and I barely escape with a few nips, and within a moment I shoot it with my Argent Peacemaker the speed of...its bullets, you could say. It turns and flees back into the shadows, shrieking eerily in pain. I smirk at its reaction, but I snap out of it, seeing a Kat sneaking up stealthily on Braveheart, pure hatred swimming in its intense, dark violet eyes. I’m too far to help, and my gun’s projectiles can’t reach all the way over there.

"Braveheart! Behind you!" I yell urgently, waving my arm and pointing my Avenger at the sneaky little Kat.

Braveheart whirls around, just avoiding the Kat bite to his foot. Instead of his skin, the Kat gets a hold of the cloth on the coat of his armor, and tears the corner off like a rabid dog. Braveheart starts hacking at the ghostly Kat with his Avenger, stopping it from biting or spitting at him. It isn’t long before it screeches in pain and dies.

Within a few more minutes, we obliterate most of the Kats, and the rest have flown away, into the darkness, in a shrieking hurry.

"Ha ha! Scaredy-Kats!" I smirk, although it’s more in an attempt to shake off the battle aftermath.

Overdoing it, I raise my Avenger in the air victoriously. The glowing sword is extremely heavy, as if it’s designed for an extreme bodybuilder, and my arm struggles to keep it in the air. My arm fails to bring it down safely or quietly, the sword swings awkwardly and crashes to the ground, producing a loud BANG.

I blush and smile nervously as Spiderstorm gives me a stern look to stop acting like a recruit. Oops... I think, reddening and rubbing the back of my neck. Braveheart gives me a nervous look, but I notice a flash of twinkles behind his mask, encouraging glimmers.

I return the nice gesture with a smile, until Spiderstorm calls out "Stop your staring and catch up, newbies. We've got a few more levels to hit." He says sharply.

I turn towards Spiderstorm and dash to catch up with him, and so we continue along the dark halls of Candlestick Keep. But for some reason, the place gets darker with every step I take- as if not even beridding this place of all monsters could keep the darkness away.

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We trudged on throughout the still darkened halls of Candlestick Keep, walking by what seems to be the same candle we’ve passed over and over and over... Spiderstorm looks ready to kill someone, or something, some not so-positive emotion. I’m totally not gonna point out the strange circle we'd been going in to him.

Is he ever in a good mood? I think randomly. I turn my head to look at Braveheart and whisper "Is it just me, or are all of these paths taking us nowhere?"

Braveheart peers at me wearily and nods after a moment. "You're not imagining it. We've passed that couch-" He pointed to a dark purple couch we were passing. "-For the umpteenth time. The Clockworks are being…” He pauses. “Weirder...today..." He chooses his words carefully.

I scan the area, maybe from sheer hope we just missed a passageway, or maybe find a hidden button, gear or whatever that might help us get out of this maze. IF only we could start this all over again, and for once, it wouldn't be a pain in the neck.

Five minutes or so pass by, and Braveheart suddenly stops and cranes his neck, looking to the far left, then walks away from us into the misty darkness. I halt abruptly and change my current direction to my left, side-stepping a little in order to catch a glimpse of my friend before he disappears completely.

“Uh-” I hastily cut myself off to keep Spiderstorm from looking my way. What does he think he’s DOING? We’d already gone that way, only to find a small area with dusty bookshelves, filled with indecipherable texts. Did he see something and just realized it might be useful, or what?

With a quick look over my shoulder to be sure Spiderstorm doesn’t see me sneaking away, I trace Braveheart’s steps into the foggy passage. Whatever Braveheart is doing, I’d better get him back in the party before Spiderstorm notices and starts ranting about that “Getting left behind” stuff.

The path is darker than I remembered, but thanks to all of the shiny, glowy features on my shield and armor, and my very faintly glowing necklace, I luminate the way decently. It isn’t long before I reach the looted treasure area, and the only traces of our previous arrival are the opened Treasure Boxes, and remnants of Luminite, Crimsonite and Valestone.

As expected, Braveheart is there, but what surprises me is that he’s rummaging through the bookshelves. I raise an eyebrow, observing Braveheart flipping through books, bringing them uncomfortably close to his face due to the dark, putting them back on the shelf, and repeating the process again.
What? What’s he even supposed to be doing reading those books? Nobody can even tell what they’re supposed to say….

“Ugh...just had to be hard…” He mumbles, and the end of his sentence I can’t catch well enough.

He bends over and picks up scattered scraps of paper, text that had been gathering dust for most likely centuries. My curiosity unbearably nagging me, I choose that moment to make my entrance.

“What do you think you’re doing?” I come closer to Braveheart, my arms crossed over my breastplate.

Braveheart jerks his head up, nearly dropping the bundle of papers. He just barely lets one flutter to the ground, dust particles following. He stares at me as if I had just turned into a Snipe mid-sentence, and doesn’t even open his mouth to reply.

“Why are you reading- er, analyzing those books? You know that we can’t understand...whatever language this is.” I trot over and pluck a book from the bookshelf, flipping through the yellowed, torn pages. Yep, complete gibberish to my eyes.

“Uh- I-” Braveheart stammers, and shakes his head to compose himself. “I...I noticed that these papers looked different from the others…”

I slam my book shut with both hands, a little loudly, and some dust settles on my face. “They all look strange to me, Braveheart!” I swipe the dirt off the book cover. “It’d be cool to see what they say, but being able to get enough knowledge to decipher them would take several generations. Not to mention,” I retort, carelessly shoving the text on top of the others in the bookshelf. “From their appearances, they’re just minor things, like cookbooks.”

Braveheart swallows slowly, preparing his reply. “But...these texts...they don’t glow like the others, and this one in particular had barely any dust on it. And-”

“Don’t only Ancient Page texts glow?” I interrupt, brushing my palms together, in order to keep dust from lurking on them. “Not to mention we only find those when the Black Kats invade…” I shudder at the thought of the Black Kats. They’re hideous versions of Kats, which eat the rare, yet virtually useless Ancient Pages when they come around.

“AG-”

“We really need to get back. This place is giving me the creeps, and a Grimalkin could spawn soon…” I grab Braveheart’s wrist, and begin to drag him back to the intersection.

“Angel-Girl!” Braveheart yells loudly, forcing me to start and snap my head back towards him. He rarely ever uses my full code name.

“I can read the text, okay?”

I stare at him, my mouth almost dropping open in surprise. “You...can read those?” I almost whisper, dropping my friend’s hand.
He shakes his head no. “It’s only this scrap…and it’s talking about-”

"Okay, what are you doing?" Spiderstorm's sharp voice interrupts our observation.

Braveheart and I both turn around at the same time, and I unexpectedly sneeze, blowing off all dust that had been gathered from the books. The action shatters all air of any soberness we had left.

"We-um-uh..." Braveheart loses his ability to speak full words and gains a stammer.

"I told you already-" Before Spiderstorm starts barking at us again, I swoop in and save Braveheart from total embarrassment.

"Braveheart found something...important!" I reply through clenched teeth, hoping that the statement will overlap the fact that I’ve interrupted.

This thing better be worth looking at, or we’re toast... I silently add. I sniffle, which doesn't help my case, and hastily brush the back of my hand against my nose.

Spiderstorm takes a step forward to approach us, when suddenly a creaking noise echoes through the air, rings in our ears and sends shivers down my spine. I whirl northward to see a Grimlikin growing out of the black void, groaning like a creaky door.

My eyes widen in surprise and fear, my hands clenched tightly on my Avenger and I screech "Guys, quick! Find a candle or something!"
We hastily dash for the intersection, stumbling through the murky dark, until I realize that we’ve completely overshot the joint. Even so, I search frantically for a candle and a fireball brazier, which will be our only way to destroy the dangerous Grimlikin, and keep more from spawning- otherwise get bitten to death.

“Over here!” I turn towards Spiderstorm’s loud call, just in time to see Spiderstorm point in a direction- and right where he directs my eyes, is an unlit candle! I sigh in relief and eagerly dash to light the candle, but Spiderstorm has already picked up a fireball with his DA. He throws it at the candle hastily, but it misses, hits the wall, and puffs out.

"Crap!" he yells in frustration, and the blackened area on the wall sizzles in reply.

Braveheart's running footsteps are approaching, and I glance behind me to see him, occupied with attracting the Grimlikin away from the candle station. He calls to us: "Try again! I'll distract this shadowy sheet!"

Spiderstorm waits impatiently for the fireball to pop back into it's place on the brazier, which resets every couple seconds, but just as it does I slide for it, and pick up the piece of fire- but with my gloved hands- and immediately realize that I had just been stupider than if I had jumped into a forest of Gremlins-which I have done before-and start yelping.

"Ouch! Ooh! Hot, hot!" I juggle it from hand to hand to keep it from burning my strong-but-not-strong-enough gloves off.

Spiderstorm slaps his forehead in aggravation, Braveheart starts to look a little queasy from running in circles, and the Grimlikin almost grins as he begins to catch up to Braveheart. My cheeks flushing, I finally stop lobbing the inferno ball and heave it into the air, and it goes in a large arch right before landing on the-

The room bursts with bright light, making all of us block the powerful rays, and the Grimlikin stops in its tracks. I hear it bite maliciously before melting into the carpeted ground, growling because it won’t get its snack. I uncover my eyes as the flame changes into a flickering wisp, and sigh in relief before plopping down, exhausted, by the white candle. Spiderstorm comes and stands against the candle while Braveheart tosses another fireball into it to keep its light from extinguishing, then sits down next to me.

"So, what now?" Braveheart mumbles to no one in particular.

I squirm uncomfortably at the question...because I don’t really have a good answer. Spiderstorm does not give any suggestions, as if he thought that we would be able to think of something just as well as he could- but what exactly are your options in a labyrinth? No one answers the question, letting it hang over our heads like bait.

"Wait, what about flares?" Braveheart perks up, contributing an idea again.

I check my pockets, and turn them inside out to find that I don’t have anything but dust in them. Very unusable dust. Spiderstorm rummages around in his bags, and so does Braveheart, but all they have combined is a couple VitaCapsules, a shock vial and a stun vial. I sigh for the third- Or is it the fourth? -time today.

But luckily the left-behind scrap of paper returns to my mind, and I voice the option immediately. "Braveheart...where's the paper thing you found?" I murmur.

Braveheart stares at me and then looks down at his empty bag, and I get the hint. I close my eyes in frustration and Spiderstorm rolls his eyes while I place my head in my hands. "You dropped it somewhere..." I guess, my voice muffled through my fingers.

"B-but we didn't go very far...I bet we could still recover our steps..." Braveheart replies quietly, although he sounds uncertain. "...D-didn’t I tell you that it’s Spiralian writing...?"

I slowly move my face from my hands and raise an eyebrow at him. "Seriously? A Candlestick Keep page with Spiralian writing?"

Braveheart nods, and somehow I find that hard to believe. “Spiralian text actually from the Clockworks?”

He nods again, more certain of himself this time.

That isn’t possible- we’ve only been here for three years, and that text looked REALLY yellowed. I think, and the thoughts sound bitter in my head- I should be grateful that he has a tool that might actually be able to help us, with either escaping this labyrinth or finally finding something worth this mission. Both, if we were THAT lucky.

"Then all that's left to do is go find the paper. Up, people." Spiderstorm says starkly, interrupting my thoughts.

I don't dare disobey the command. I get to my feet, and Braveheart moves out of the way of the candle just before Spiderstorm replenishes it. He removes the ribbon on the end of his sword and ties it to the candle, probably expecting to come back here when we’re finished.

We leave the room, and Braveheart turns out to be right. It takes less than two minutes to find our way back, although we do get a little confused. But the worst part wasn’t the walk...it was actually finding the scrap of paper. The STUPID scrap of paper. Braveheart just had to drop it in a huge mess of dusty tomes and sheets, didn’t he...

After a long and difficult search, all three of us gather around Braveheart and the paper. Spiderstorm and I hold up our shining swords up close to the paper, so the writing wouldn’t be too hard to see. Braveheart and Spiderstorm's breaths are hot on my neck, they’re so close next to me. Well, more of Braveheart's breath than Spiderstorm's...I get the feeling Spiderstorm doesn't like getting close to people.

“Um...can you guys move over…?” Braveheart asks, shooting both of us a pleading stare.

Spiderstorm makes a small grunt sound before shoving his Divine Avenger at Braveheart, and then walks off to lean against a wall. I give my friend a look of...well, just a look, I guess. I don’t join Spiderstorm, I just hang around nearby.

As I stare at the wall for no reason at all, the flickering light of a candle from the corner of my eyes goes out. I start in surprise, as that candle had only recently been relit. Weird. Must’ve been the wind or something.

"Relight that, will 'ya?" Spiderstorm says to me casually. “I don’t want more Grimalkins after us.”

I nod, and take no more than two steps when I gasp. The candle is completely smashed, the wick gone, and the brazier only smokes. I drop my Avenger without a thought, zoom over to the brazier and grasp it tightly in my hands, staring openmouthed at the inside, which has been doused several times in water.

"Uh, yeah, the candle can’t really be relit!" I say loudly, completely puzzled.

Braveheart and Spiderstorm are probably too busy doing...things...to hear me or see that there was no candlelight yet, because there’s no reply of any kind.

"It's almost like..." Braveheart says, his voice startlingly low. The frown in his voice is extremely obvious.

Suddenly a creak and a bam comes from the gloom, and even more eerie sounding noises fill the air than the previous ones we had heard. My heart increasing in beat, I whirl around, trying to locate the noises and decide what was making them.

"Guys...." I nearly whisper, turning my head quickly towards another direction where the sounds were coming from, my eyes bright with fright.

"Is that..." Spiderstorm says, almost in a whisper, like he’s reading along with Braveheart. But his voice indicates a sharp edge of alertness, not the tone of reading something intriguing.

Something that sounds like heartbeat develops from the west side of the room, too close to the drop-off, and I freeze. My hands start quivering and my heart beats so rapidly that it feel like a frightened Snipe is in my chest. Why am I so scared?! I shriek mentally. I shouldn't be scared of anything right now....and yet, something nagging at the back of my head is terrifying me…

Something is coming. Something dangerous.

"Guys...." I repeat, louder than before. They still pay no attention…

Or...or did they even hear me?

“GUYS!!!!" I scream, my fright now evolving into extreme panic, and I run back from behind the corner the smashed candle lays. Grimalkins? Please not again...

The sound of paper in the wind directs me to see the piece of text flutter to the floor, and both of my squadmates are nowhere to be seen. I scramble for the paper and clutch it tightly, jamming it into my pockets without bothering to glance at the words. “Where…?” I scan the area in complete confusion as my stomach drops to my feet.

Before I have a chance to call them again, or even open my mouth at all, something hard and alive collides with my body. It knocks me hard, flat to the ground.

“EEEEEEEK!!!” I scream loudly, more from releasing my bottled up horror than being instantly shocked.

“Hello.” It sneers in my ear, while something dangerously sharp digs itself against my neck.

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Well, there you go! Third chapter, hope you liked it. Now, I'm off to bed...I am SO TIRED.

EDIT: Little edits here and there, mainly dialogue.

~ Angel-Girl, the Exhausted Valkyrie

Mon, 03/07/2016 - 03:50
#6
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Nechrome
WE SWARM

swarmswarmswarmswarmswarmswarmswarmswarmSWARMSWARMSWARMSWARMSWARMSWARMSWARMSWARM

If it's not actually the Swarm then I'm going to look very silly aren't I.

Anyway! This is a nice fic, and I certainly am enjoying it so far! You do a great job with describing what's going on and setting the mood. Also, the character interactions are quite nice in general. I should mention that in the most recent chapter, there are multiple instances where Grimalkin is misspelled as Grimlikin. There are also other times where you did spell it correctly though, so I'm not too sure what's up with all that. But yeah, just thought you might want to know about that.

Now, part of me immediately thinks that the female Knight at the end of the latest chapter is Railan, and part of me figures that can't possibly be correct. I suppose I'll have to wait to find out. But evidently not too long, given your update speed. A chapter a day is very impressive, especially given their length. You get a sticker for your hard work! :D

And since this is apparently your first venture into these here forums, I'd like to formally welcome you to this here little corner of creativity that is the Treasure Vault! It's always nice to see a fresh face around here.

Mon, 07/11/2016 - 12:33
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Angel-Girl
Tankchu!/Another Chapter!

@Lordofnecromancers
Thanks for all of the compliments and the welcome! ^-^ But the reason I'm posting everyday is that I've already written the chapters. I have seven, I'm just posting one a day on here until I have to start writing full-time again. I just thought I should point that out.

@Everyone else!

Hey, it's that time again! Another chapter! *squeals randomly*

DISCLAIMER: A description of several people towards the end isn't finished...that's because their armor is completely custom, it does not exist in the canon Spiral Knights world. I have to design their armor myself, and until I'm finished, there isn't going to be a description/the description is outdated...

Chapter 4 - A Ruby Eyed Knight and an Aqua Revelation

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“Do me a favor,” the female forcing me down growls. “Shut up.”

I struggle to free myself, but the person is either ten times stronger than me, or I’m really tired. I turn my head as far to the side as I can to get a look at my new captor, but my neck feels like snapping from the attempt.

I can tell that she’s a Knight, though her eyes look unnaturally red and bloodshot. They’re narrowed in a fierce scowl of hatred and anger. The red tinted glow from her eyes illuminates her helmet, which looks exactly like a crimson-red Crown of the Fallen. Fur from her Snarbolax coat rubs against my arms and the bright red tipped spikes dig into my neck.

I desperately try to find words to get myself out of this mess, but the words I’d end up using would probably be a little too colorful for my own good. So words and brawn are out. Guess that leaves strategy… Gah, JUST THINK YOU IDIOT!

But on her own, the Knight picks herself up off the floor and dusts herself off carefully. I instinctively try to leap to my feet, but something pins my arms to the ground and sends burns throughout my wrists.
“GAHCK!” I yelp, my mouth open with the pain and surprise. I try to force my wrists up again but the only get the same result.

“I bonded you to the floor, I don’t think trying to get up is a good idea.” The Knight steadies the scythe in her hand- A SCYTHE?! Am I being attacked by a materialized phantom?!

I stare at my wrists, which are encased inside a half ring of purplish-red energy- made out of who knows what. My eyes widen as all sorts of morbid possibilities run through my head. Well, that theory seems much more likely now…

“Well, what are you waiting for?!” I spit. “If you’re trying to kill me, great. You win! Whoever you are! So get on with it!” Words tumble aimlessly out of my mouth, and I’m not sure where they came from. The energy must be affecting my brain.

“I’m not going to kill you.” She sticks her scythe on her back and approaches my side. She sounds like she made an unfinished sentence, like she wanted to add on ‘yet’. “But why would I tell you what’s going to happen to you? Life isn’t those books you read with the stupid people yapping on and on about their plans to their enemies.”

“And I,” she leans over and stares at me with a gaze that nearly pierces through my head. “Am definitely NOT stupid.”

And with that, she silences herself and straightens. She motions her hand in a strange and very quick way, and the bonds on my wrists lift, bringing my arms with them. What- she’s CONTROLLING them?! I strangle with all the emotions passing through my tightened chest. If I had to describe it, it would probably be something close to KOHADSIOFYHEAUISHGDFJKAFDHAHCKKKKKK.

I don’t resist as she telekinetically pushes me forward by my bonds, my trauma and fear is too great. I can’t even think anymore, everything is just a blur as I get prodded forward in directions that would confuse even Spiderstorm. I’m so dizzy that I feel like passing out any second.

“HEY!” A familiar voice calls out from the darkness.

The shadow Knight whirls around, too startled to make a sound. I’m already too scared to do anything but let my mouth open into a jubilant smile. I turn my head to see who’s stomping towards us.

“LET. HER. GO.” Braveheart growls ferociously, sounding like a much different version of himself. He holds both my Avenger and Spiderstorm’s Divine Avenger, probably the only other dual sword wielder on Cradle as of now. He crouches and holds out both heavy swords, trying not to let his arms shake.

The shadow Knight recovers her poise and her mouth curls into a snarl. “You IDIOT!” she sneers, dropping her guard to glare daggers at my best friend. “You don’t want to make me use this. Stand down NOW.” She readies her scythe and it glows with lines of red-purple energy, startlingly similar to ones seen in Unknown Passage floors.

Braveheart’s eyes flicker through several emotions, all too fast that I can’t catch any of them, but he doesn’t stand down. He doesn’t answer the Knight, he just darts his over to me, silently signaling me to act NOW while she’s distracted.

Isora, I could just kiss him right now. I think gleefully and gratefully, then take several deathly quiet steps towards my captor. I ball my fists and hold my wrists together, then with a mighty yell I swing my arms at the shadow Knight’s head with all my strength, anger, confusion and fear.

The Knight doesn’t see me coming in time, and I knock her out dead cold. She crumples to the floor and my cuffs evaporate into nothing, screaming whispers following their disappearance. I stare at my trembling wrists in horror, they have lines of burnt skin all around where the cuffs had touched them. I breathe in heavily and my knees give away as the pain begins to register.

“Oh crap, Angel, are you okay?” Braveheart zooms over and drops his swords to crouch down next to me. He tries to take my hands to look at them, but he hesitates. I oblige and raise my hands.

“Agh.” he winces as he examines the 2nd degree burn lines. “That looks bad. Can you walk?”

I breathe in shakily before replying. “Y-yeah.”

Then straight out of the shadows, about 10 dark-purple floating Grimlikin ghosts emerge and drool hungrily, as if they’re ready for their lunch. But these are no ordinary Kats- they have to be the big brothers and sisters of the Grimlikin we faced earlier. My eyes widen so much it’s a wonder they don’t pop out of their sockets.

"Oh. My. Gosh." I whisper from awe and fear without realizing it.

Braveheart looks confused and looks over at where I’m staring, and he leaps backwards. The dreaded shadow Knight slowly rises, but she isn’t standing up- gigantic, shadow infested wings are flapping in a menacing rhythm, transporting her off the ground. She looks angrier than ever, and without a word she shoots her hand out, palm facing down and her whole hand flat- a signal.

The Grimlikins slowly, but surely, creep towards us, drooling from the thought of dinner. I‘m stuck to the spot from immense fright, staring at the approaching Grimlikins, with no idea how we could ever survive this. Braveheart grabs my hand, forgetting that my wrists are in agony, and pulls me along the path, knocking me out of my daze. I regain control of my limbs, so scared that I squeeze Braveheart’s hand extremely tight, with no intention of letting go, unless I want to die.

We weave through the endless paths for what feels like an eternity to my legs, panting and trying to evade the Grimlikins, but we know deep down that it’s hopeless. As we round a corner, my best friend leading the whole way, the only sounds the groaning Grimlikins, the shouting now-winged Knight and our frantically running footsteps.

Braveheart and I run to the left, side-by-side together until we come to two paths- both so gloomy with fog that we have no idea what either one could lead to. We both skid to a halt at the division, and breathe heavily to catch our breath. I bend over, my elbows locked and my hands leaning on my knees. I exhale and inhale very quickly, trying to grab some air before we lose our fairly good lead.

"Are...you...okay?" Braveheart questions through gasps, his chest heaving back and forth, each time slowing down a little. I pause for a second, listening to my breathing and pondering the question, then nod.

"I...I think..." I finally catch enough breath to manage and stand upright. "Any ideas on how to get out of here? Also, where’s Spidersto-"
I stop in mid-sentence as the Grimlikins turn around the corner we’d just dashed through, and float viciously towards us. Braveheart looks at the Grimlikins, and then back at me, staring me directly in the face. “Serah,” he uses my real name without a second thought, making my heart stop. “Run. Don’t think. Just run.”

I stare at him in astonishment. “But...what are you doing?”

He claps his hand on my shoulder in a sort of 'good-luck' way, then heads down the right path. “Go! Find the exit! I’ll get Spiderstorm!”

I watch him go, with a large lump of emotion in my throat, and I stay stuck to the spot for who knows how long, until I notice how close the Grimlikins are getting.

Sweating, I fake a right and then sprint down the left path. The Grimlikins are fooled, and I smirk at them in spite of myself as I watch them swerve everywhere, looking for me. But they aren’t outfoxed for long, as one of them catches me in sight and groans to alert his friends.

All ten of them produce this spine-chilling creaky noise, then zoom straight for me. I lose my smirk and run even faster than I ever thought truly possible. Here goes nothing....I wish...I wish had said goodbye.... I think with regret, my eyes starting to sting with teardrops as I fear this could be the end.

Oh, no you don’t, AG. I think to myself, force the tears back and stand taller, keeping in mind that this will be for my comrades. I pull out my gun shakily, and shoot a few bullets at the Grimlikins, to keep them following me while I sprinted down the path-my deathpath. It’s pointless, since the bullets just pass straight through them like they were air- they’re ghosts after all.

“You call that stalking? COME ON, IDIOTS!” I yell, using a taunt to release some of my fear. I wonder how long until my impending doom arrives completely, but as if to answer that question-

BAM.

After a second, I unglue myself from the wall blocking my path, and rub my head. "Ow." I groan, dazed. Bumping into walls while being chased isn't the best thing- but what is worse is running straight into a dead end. Well, lucky me....

I whirl around in different directions, frantically looking for another hallway. I search around desperately for activation buttons on the floor, a gear that would open something- I even bang on the walls, secretly hoping that there’s a obscured passageway somewhere. But, of course wishing doesn't really help in these sorts of situations...especially if they're unrealistic.

The next few seconds happen too quickly. A woosh of air, like someone had swung a pole briskly and roughly, comes from behind me, and I don’t register it befo-

Something spears right through my arm.

I half gasp, half screech, my eyes widened in shock. I grunt as the pain crawls up to my shoulder, and stare at the wound. It isn’t incredibly big, only the smallest part of the blade has penetrated it, but that doesn’t stop it from making my arm sting and bleed like anything.

I focus painfully on the blade that is keeping my arm pinned to the wall. It’s big- too big. The blade is attached to a...a scythe...with lines of reddish energy running along the sides. It has a great air of darkness; one that reminds me of the Shadow Lair- the darkest and most dangerous place in all of the Clockworks.

It isn't long before the black breath of the shadow-knight reaches me, feeling condescendingly light on my neck.
"Don’t even try to scream," I turn my head slightly to be greeted with red eyes that are filled to the brim with all the things that are the opposite of light. Hate, treachery, evil, shadows- it’s endless. The villainous eyes send shivers down my spine, terrifying me beyond words, not helping my arm at all.

"Because it's over." The knight's voice transfers the hate from her eyes and even a bit of fury through the word ‘over’. But something else is hidden deep inside that tone...I can’t realize what it is, but I can’t think straight anyhow.

The shadow-knight rams her hand into my neck, pinning me to the wall completely, and I struggle to catch my breath. The death knight rips her scythe out of the wall, freeing my arm and forcing me to make a strangled sound, desperately trying not to let out guttural screams.

She turns her gaze to the base of my neck, and a twinge of confusion sparks in the fear. What is she doing…?

Then it hits me as she reaches down for my neck with her free hand, and I fight back the tears of desperation. “No! DON’T! It’s…” I claw to grasp the right words out of my scratchy throat as she pulls out my treasured crystal necklace from my breastplate. “It’s all I have left…!” is all I can manage to say. “Please…”

She looks from the crystal back at me, her eyes turning stone cold now, without expression. Not hate, not anger, nothing at all. “And I have absolutely nothing. You took it all from me.” And with that, she yanks the necklace from my neck, the snapping clasp pinching my skin.

I stare at her with the corner of my eyes in shock, disgust and sheer terror, groaning and inwardly screaming a telepathic 'help' message to anyone who might hear me. We sit there for a moment or two, those evil eyes taking only seconds to stare at the quartz-like pendant for unknown reasons, yet making the passing moments feel like eternities. Then she closes her shadow infested fist around my last physical memory, and sneers. "This will hurt."

She lifts her weapon up high, and whispers something that I can't hear at all. I'm too scared of that hideous scythe to think about what she says. Probably cursing me for some reason I honestly wouldn't know.

I have no idea what that could possibly mean, but I’m too scared of that hideous scythe to think about it. I clutch the wall I’m flattened against, trying to close my eyes but failing, whimpering softly, and bracing myself for an immensely painful stab wound.

Then out of nowhere, a bright light glows into existence, startling me even though I hadn’t thought that anything would ever take me by surprise again.
Then I realize that it’s not coming out of nowhere- it glowing right through my captor’s hand. She notices this, but we both have no time to react when it radiates streams of energy, and knocks both of us backwards with mixed waves of shadows and light. Me, being against the wall with the force of the blast, I crash right through the stone and bounce in complete agony before falling right over the...

...The edge.

My right arm only just grabs one out of the few jagged dips of the top of the wall, and I shriek in fright and surprise. Here I am, dangling from the drop-off of Candlestick Keep, one arm speared and the other one clinging onto the only thing keeping me from plummeting through almost-never-ending void. What a great way to die.

What- was that my...! I blink several times, my vision clouding with purplish black, and what I can barely see is doing 360's. My eyes ache terribly and I have to squint to make anything out, but there’s nothing to look at but inky black, artificial sky.

I shriek as I try to pull myself back onto the cliff, pain climbs slowly, agonizingly up my hurt arm. My feet scramble to find any sort of foothold and are failing. I eventually just give up and hang there for dear life, tears squeezing out of the corners of my eyes and sliding into the void beneath me.

The next second, and flash a light crosses my vision again, and someone screams (probably the Knight) VERY loudly. Thuds against the ground happen numerous times, then the Knight appears right on the edge with one last crash, unmoving and as floppy as a rag doll. Smoke curls off of her Snarbolax coat as if a fire had been blazing and had just been extinguished.

I stare at her in a cross of relief and horror, wondering what had just happened to her, but before my mind can process those thoughts completely, an orb of light rises from behind the Knight’s body. It flickers, and I can clearly see the silhouette of my own necklace inside the glowing light.

It hovers there, circling a little as if motioning me to grab it, but I don't have the strength to move. I stare at it, my eyes wide and unblinking, not making a single sound- it feels as if even my heart has stopped. The very thing I’d treasured for years, not ever letting go of, now terrifies me from head to toe.

The orb stays hovering over me for a bit, like a Snipe cocking its head playfully at me, waiting. It finally seems to see that I’m in a sticky situation, seeing that I would not be able to grab it without plummeting to death. It slowly moves through the gap between my two arms, and it sticks itself to the chinguard part of my breastplate, making a strange humming noise. Dread runs its cold fingers down my spine as this happens.

The result is an immense light blast, going out in a huge radius, with so much force that I my arms are unable to hold on to my only barrier from death.
“HELLLLP!” I scream, even though I thought so couldn't scream anymore, my arms flailing and my weapons lurching through the air alongside me.

The words turn only into echoes and unintelligible things- something besides wind has cut straight through me, putting such a large amount of pain on my shoulders that I scream once again- so loud that it echoes and should have destroyed my eardrums with the amount of decibels. Just the touch feels like I’m being run through a Roarmulus Twin's shock beam, a dangerous creation of the Gremlins. Trust me, you DON'T want to know what it feels like.

If I wasn't paralyzed and falling, I would curl into a ball, but I can still yell. So I do- I scream and scream for a good amount of time. But before too long, the scene around me changes to a strange place, and the pain and noises transform to pinpricks and whispers, which quiets me down.

And just as soon as the transformation takes place, something slows my fall down- to the point where I’m going the speed of an exhausted Lichen. Soon my descent stops completely, making me hover, and then places me on an invisible floor. Even though I have the gentlest landing possible, I crumble to the floor and lay on my side, breathing heavily and trying to keep my body from shivering constantly.

After a minute of composing myself, I raise my heavy head to examine the new enigmatic environment I’ve been plopped into. The only way I know how to describe is like this:

Take a hallway you've seen in your dreams, warped with strange, yellowish colors. Then expand it to an infinite size in both directions, and add floating, blindingly white orbs everywhere. There is no floor whatsoever, yet you can feel something solid beneath your feet, keeping you from tumbling through the air. There is no end to the yellow ceiling, it’s like an alien atmosphere. You could wander around for days, weeks, months, years- you would find nothing else in this heavenly nullity, nor get anywhere.

After a minute or so, the ability to move comes back to my limbs, and I painfully sit with my legs crossed. Making sure my bones aren’t broken, and confirming that they may just be severely bruised, or fractured at the most, I peer in all direction with huge eyes. I groan as I hold my bloody arm, the wonder of this place not being able to take my physical pain away.

I freeze and whip my head around when a loud voice flows out from behind me, almost filling the whole void with echoes.

"Valis! Come on, man, what are you doing?!"

The flash of light that had caused my fall comes again, and I try to shield my eyes, but I find it impossible to block the light. Fortunately, it slowly fades out to reveal an unexpected scene. It takes a moment for me to adjust to the strange change, but soon I can see.

A knight is standing in the room. He is wearing a celestial, yet carefree style of armor I've never seen on any knight before. Instead of a helm, he’s wearing a cross between a Magic Hood’s- well, hood- and those fur linings on the Winterfest hats that everyone wears. The hat has something tearing upwards through the part next to the lining. He has absolutely NO body armor whatsoever, only a large cloth that’s gathered around his neck and draping down his chest and back. He’s wearing a “male skirt” about the same length as mine, only this is one piece. It crosses over the front, covering the majority of his legs, and a leaf-like designs is imprinted on the sides of the skirt. On his hips is a piece of soft cloth gathered around his waist, like a belt.
On his back, to my complete surprise, are slightly lopsided, feathery wings, colored with dark teal and blended with leather brown- they look like an accessorizer strapped them on carelessly, matching the attitude of his entire outfit. Yet somehow...he looks graceful. But his face definitely isn’t graceful. His expression is annoyed, and he's facepalming.

"Dude! Minula SAID to stop touching her holif!"

Holif? I wheel around to see another knight, one of his legs pointed out while he is reaching across a small table, his hands hovering over something that looks like leaves in a bowl, his eyes wide and his whole body frozen in its position. My eyes nearly pop out of their sockets when I fully register his appearance.

"But, Zero-"

"DON'T. TOUCH."

The knight puts his leg down and crosses his arms, frowning and almost pouting. He has ACTUAL HAIR falling over his face, he’s not even wearing a hat! The straight locks are messy, strands of dark, Gremlin-fur-colored hair cover parts of his red eyes. A cloth is tied around his head, and the tied part sticks out from the back, making him look like some kind of rebel. His only armor is the lightweight pads perched on his shoulders, flowing with red swirls on a white background. He’s wearing some kind of a cloak-dress thing, snow-white with a burgundy cloth belt. It’s almost too long for him to walk in, as if he ordered a size too large- but where can you get clothes like THAT?!?!

He has wings as well as Zero, but rather small ones in comparison. They’re a maroon red, fading into off white the farther down you looked- and they’re so feathery that one would think he stole them from luxurious Snipe-feather pillows.

"She doesn't like this stupid leaf THAT much!" He snaps. His voice has an accent to it, one that I haven't heard in a LONG time...it’s from the knights that lived in the aristocratic section of western Isora- Nobilia- before it had been seiged and taken by the Morai. I can hardly remember it, I was only 10 when I had visited the area for a field trip.

"That 'stupid leaf', is the last that we have on this ship, Valis. Eat it and I'll take the rest of your greas." A similar accented, female voice floats through the room like music. A beautifully dressed knight flies into the room - again, she has wings.

Her eyes are my favorite mix of blue and purple, just a little darker than periwinkle, and her wings are a very light purple, with feathered black tips. I swear that her armor is an old version of my own- a winged helm, an average sized, purple, feathered ponytail, layered skirt- everything. It makes me look at my own armor just to see how alike they could possibly be. The only major differences I notice are that she doesn’t have a breastplate, she does not have armor for her arms, she has draping sleeves instead, and her armor for her feet and legs is merely a thin, metal covering, just shoes. This strangely similar knight is probably the 'Minula' they were talking about.

The word 'ship' suddenly registers in my brain and I turn around to see that the whole wall that I'm standing against is complete, thick glass, stars rushing along so quickly, they're only streaks of light. I gasp and place my fingers up to the window slowly, as if it were hot to the touch.
"Oh- uh- hi, Minula. I thought you were on your bunk..."

I turn back around to watch the conversation, watching Zero rub his neck and blush. I roll my eyes and nearly laugh, if it weren’t for my injuries I would have. He is so TOTALLY crushing on her.

Valis doesn't go coo-coo like Zero, instead he just tries to hold back a smirk, his eyes darting back and forth Minula and Zero.

"What are you looking at?" Zero snaps.

"Nothing," Valis covers his mouth and muffles a chuckle. "I'm just picturing you and Minula sitting in a tr-" he starts going singsong at 'you', and Minula raises an eyebrow. Zero, well, he kinda explodes.

"SHUT UP!!!!" Zero holds his hands out and blasts an energy ball, something like the one that comes from the Super Blaster- huge, aqua-colored, and radiating immense amounts of energy. My mouth nearly drops open at the attack, and I don’t know what to think.

Valis completely falls over, smoking, but still cracking up to my surprise. Zero dives at him, half flying and half falling, and they start to wrestle. As they do, a strange gale starts to rush through the room, and I blink to make sure I’m not hallucinating. It starts to focus on Zero, as if….

As if Valis is the one controlling it.

The wind becomes so powerful that Zero has to keep his eyes closed, or he’ll be treated with a sandstorm style hit to his face.

“Valis, stop it!” Minula snaps, as if she were commanding a younger brother.

The two don’t respond, and soon they evolve into a huge mash of arms, legs and armor with every command Minula barks at them.

"Alright, that's enough!"

Everyone immediately closes their mouths, Zero stands up, and the wind stops completely. Valis scrambles to his knees and Minula turns sharply at the voice. As the knight comes into view, my eyes widen even more than they already have, taking in the amazing sight of the angelic person.

Another knight, probably the most beautiful in the whole room, hovers by the doorway, the sound of snow white wings flapping softly in the air. Her eyes are a deep blue, and her navy colored head is crowned with an alluring helm- with wings on the sides, like mine, and her chin is uncovered by the silver mouthguard, instead it protects her face. Her breastplate is a shiny gold, imprinted with swirls. Her deep blue skirt is nearly the same as mine- layered, with the front cut off to have a lengthy white piece of cloth flow in its place. A long, draping piece of fabric with equivalent colors, almost like a train, touches the floor behind her.

About 10 or 20 other people stand behind her, but I can’t make out their appearance- because at that moment a strong ringing and pounding comes into my ears, and I yelp and cover them, my head beginning to feel like a gong and the scene pixelates moderately, but the voices have not faltered.

"Can you stop behaving like Spiral Order recruits? Only Valkyrie fighters can belong on this ship." She crosses her arms and lands slowly and gracefully on the floor.

The three others in the room bow their heads in apology, and it almost seems like this knight is the leader on this spaceship- almost. Something tells me she’s more of maternal type than she is a commanding figure.

"The captain wants me to tell you that we've found a great planet to be our subject. So grab your bags, we have a long couple of years ahead of us." The knight continues, as if to confirm my thought.

The three knights let their mouths drop open, and I barely see Valis jump up and high five Zero before the sound of static fills my ears. The last thing I see is the leader knight staring right at me- or through me- and Minula say something, but all that reaches to my ears is 'Clarity, where-'.

I yell and bend over, slapping my hands to my head, eyes squinched closed, my mind only concentrating on getting rid of the pain. I feel something cold and vibrant touch my skirt, but I have too bad of a migraine to care.

My eyes open again only to see that I’m back in the dreary Candlestick Keep, which seems like a meadow compared to my enemy’s shadows now. I stop screaming, and my vision focuses to see Spiderstorm and Braveheart standing worriedly over me. Well, Braveheart looks worried. Spiderstorm doesn't exactly.

"AG?! What happened? What wrong?!" Braveheart nearly yelps. “Why were you screaming?”

"Ugh...my head..." I groan and sit up slightly.

I look around dazedly, relieved to see I am not dead, falling, or hanging over an abyss anymore. I cough, my body feeling like it had been melded together, smashed to pieces and then glued with not-so-effective glue. I open my mouth to say exactly how I feel, terrible, but then I touch something on my chest that feels like it's been there for years. I look down to see my white-yellow pendant on a silver chain around my neck.

I grasp at it, disoriented, and feel the cool, irregularly shaped stone, vibrating with a strange sensation. It matches exactly what I had been convulsing against my skirt just before waking up. I hold it to my face and notice that it looks much...smoother. Long silvery strokes form a spiky star on the surface, and strange white swirls inside of the stone dance like fire. I look up to see Braveheart become as pale as a sheet.

"What?" I ask, raising an eyebrow.

"Um...you...uh...guh-" Braveheart stammers. Even Spiderstorm looks like he would stammer if he spoke.

I open my mouth to ask again, but...a sensation that can only be described as complete agony cuts straight through my back.

It’s all too much. I can’t bear it anymore. I croak, my eyes turn into tiny dots, and the howl I let loose nearly rips the vocal chords out of my throat. Braveheart jumps and covers his mouth in shock and worry, and Spiderstorm looks pained, for real this time.

I collapse into a complete ball, wailing and crying from response to the pain- and the confusion. The torments in my back are so terrible that I can’t even process them, yet I forget everything else. Everything spins, tinged with a feverish red, but through that red I can see something that really knocks my armor off.

White feathers.

My mind can no longer take any more information, it becomes overwhelmed. My eyes roll back into my head and everything goes black. There’s frantic calling of my name, and the shaking of my shoulder before nothing comes to greet me. But the image I had seen just before passing out is perfectly burned into my mind.

Wings.

There are wings on me.

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Well, there you go. I hope that was enjoyable!
I'm off to eat dinner, I am HUNGRY!

EDIT: Some changes to scenes and dialogue, hopefully it's smoother and makes for better reading.

~ Angel-Girl, the Ravenous Valkyrie

Tue, 03/08/2016 - 15:01
#8
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Angel-Girl
Chapter 5 - Watch the World Burn

HEEYYYYYY....
Crashing after a LONG school thingy, but I can still post another chapter for you guys. Enjoy!

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The sunset is amazing tonight. Reds and purples, oranges and pinks, all of their hues fading into each other like a rainbow. The Clockworks sky is drowned in the array of colors, as if a knight had smeared paint everywhere- the small, streaky purple clouds help to give it such a look. If I didn’t know any better, I would think that this Aurora Isles sky isn’t fake at all- a real sunset, not dotted with holes here and there, not just a roof of a level, of a globe.

The Clockworks level is basking in the light- the trees swaying gently in the breeze, the grass darkened by the lessened amount of light is also blowing softly. The square, cream white, stepping stones I stand on look softer than they normally feel, as if they've lost some of their stony appearance.
In the midst of enjoying the atmosphere's performance, the hairs rise on my neck, and my sixth sense is kicking in. They're warning me that something- or someone- is coming.

I'm not alone.

I whirl to my right as a cracking stick alerts someone's arrival, but I relax as I see who it is. It's that knight- Clarity. I loosen up, assuming that she isn't a threat, and watch her stare at the horizon, alongside me, not once looking my way. Her celestial, golden armor baths in the orange evening light, the engraved swirls nearly appearing to be alive and in motion. Clarity hugs a mahogany book to her gleaming breastplate and sighs.

She sits down on the soft grass, legs crossed underneath her skirt, and opens the book. There's writing in it, and I wonder if it's some sort of journal, or diary. She flips through the pages, marked with words, until she comes to a clean sheet. She reaches to the left side of her head, and plucks a hidden pencil from the root of the wings on her helm. As soon as it touches the paper, echoing words start to run through my head.

'It's the day after the Injection is finished. I have to say, I regret having let them use my stone for such a clever trap. I don't dare say what it is, to prevent this writing from falling into hands that could use it against the Valkyries.

'While I don't agree with the Council at all, I wouldn't want to be responsible for their complete demise- I would never be able to live with that.'

Clarity stops scribbling, and as soon as she does, the words through my mind do too. Is it...her diary entry...? I put a hand to my forehead, as if to touch the words that have just entered. Something tells me that it can only be that, or I'm just telepathic- which I find highly unlikely.

'I already feel completely horrible,' Clarity writes. 'For even cooperating with this plan. How did it even come to this? All I wanted was to stay away from the conflict, and here I am, helping one side in the darkness of the Morai Wars.'

I blink in confusion as Clarity puts those words on paper, but I don't dare ignore them. Direct mention of the Morai Wars is intriguing me, as those destruction filled days are...vague.

'So yesterday, after the Injection, I made a decision. I'm not going back to Isora, and I'd been thinking about this before I'd even joined my teammates on the Arch. They can manage the ship perfectly fine without me, not to mention they have some...different... views of me now.'

What IS this? I tap my fingers on my chin while watching Clarity, shifting my weight. I don't even know why I'm hearing this stuff.

Suddenly things start to become more lucid, just for a few seconds, just as if I’m suddenly becoming part of this dream- and then everything starts to fade away slowly, half to my despair.

What- No, I didn't mean- I try to say out loud, but strangely, my mouth makes no sound and my words are merely thoughts. The words Clarity is writing are slowly starting to fade away too, and I try to make myself shout at her to make this stop, but I know inside that she's not doing this.

'I'm going to make a home here on the Cradle...the only thing I regret about doing this is that I won't be able to see another living soul for at least a decade. Ten long years...so much longer without anyone else.'

Clarity looks up, her eyes looking a little puffy. She taps her pencil on her knee in pondering before writing again.

'The only other problem now is where I should settle. If the effects are as unstable as they told us...the Clockworks are going to be a mass amount of insanity within a month. The surface of the Cradle is too uneven and changing, even worse than the Clockworks, to make any sort of home...and I don't want to live with the Strangers. As much hospitality they offer, I can't feel normal living permanently around people not of my own race. It may take awhile, but-'

Clarity jerks her head up to stare at the sinking sun, which has almost disappeared completely along with the colorful atmosphere. The sky is starting to become dotted with stars, and Clarity peers up at the glimmering lights. Something changes in her eyes, which are reflecting the stars so well that they may as well have been mirrors- very alluring ones.

And then the words are completely gone. Not even an echo is in my mind, and as Clarity places her pencil back on the page, the stars reflected in her eyes start to cover her whole body, until she's only a figure of stars- all of them twinkling.

Clarity! Come back! What are you- I struggle to scream, but even if I had a foghorn I probably would only be able to whisper. I run at her, trying to somehow get her back- I don’t even know why I need to know more about this diary. I don’t even know what this is besides a dream.

The Clarity-stars implode, making sparks fly all around me, and as they fly out, the ground just disappears, fading away at the edge of their increasing diameter in all directions. I stop in my tracks, staring at the increasing hole. I whirl around and try to flee from it too late- it reaches me, and I close my eyes, expecting to feel a dropping sensation in my stomach.

I open them again when there is none, only to find myself in a giant galaxy, and the sound of wingbeats echo around the star clusters. I crane my neck to look behind myself at the sea of stars- I do this several times, looking from shoulder to shoulder, after seeing where the wingbeats are coming from. Fairly large-sized, snow white, familiar wings are now firmly attached my back, carrying me through the air like a bird.

I have no time to really use them, before they fade to raven black, radiating with shadows, and stop working for me all together.

I plummet to the dirt ground, screaming with no noise, yet my ears begin to ring and pound. Right as I hit the ground, the sound of crackling flames reach me.

I jerk my head up to see myself in a ring of fire- now inside of the hulking, deceased Lord Vanaduke's throne room, the ashen wooden beams flaming, but not burning completely to ash. Fiery debris falls from the ceiling, and I dive to my left to avoid becoming a burnt piece of toast. I slam right into someone's leg, and dazed stars circle through my vision.

I take a moment to get rid of them before looking up into Lord Vanaduke's light-slate colored mask- a skull-like one, with fiery orange in the eye holes, the outline of the mask ringed with dark gray.

He bends over and stares directly into my face, his mask only an inch away from my eyes, scaring me to death and making me stammer:

"B-but you're s-supposed-d-d to be d-d-ead!" I try to whisper, but instead I yelp it. I scramble backwards, Vanaduke following me with heavy footsteps.

His body and mask slowly evolves, but does not shrink, into a knight's features...very recognizable ones, even more terrifying than the previous. The shadow knight unfolds her gigantic raven wings, and hisses with a voice combined with Vanaduke's deep, booming, grating voice, and her own cold, menacing, dark one:

"Burn! Burn to ashes, Angel-Girl!" Her horrifying, midnight black scythe appears in her hands. She straightens and raises it high up, and this time she DOES heave it down into...into...

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"She's burning up real bad! Quick, get some ice!"

My eyelids snap open, and I inhale sharply before sitting up quickly, panting and my eyes huge. I instantly regret doing all of these things- the world does almost ten 360's in two seconds, and I bite my lip. "H-hot..." I mumble, taking several shaky breaths through closed eyes, feeling beads of sweat slide down my temples.

“...Conscious! Lay back down right…” The voices are becoming too warped for me to be able to comprehend them. Exhausted and aching, I slowly lean back and wipe the fluid from my forehead.

At that moment a blurred, disoriented shape comes close, and I have no idea what it is until it speaks.

"Angel-Girl!" Braveheart's comforting voice echoes around the room, but definitely not because he spoke loudly.

Something takes my hand, and I assume Braveheart is the one who's holding it up. "You..I..." he stammers, and my vision becomes much clearer for a few seconds.

Braveheart's helmet is completely battered to my surprise. It's spattered with blood in numerous places, and part of the left eye-hole is enlarged with the fact that nearly the entire left side of his mask is broken. The one, deep blue eye I could see much better is heavy with tiredness, despair- and is starting to fill with relief.

Despite his ratty appearance, I'm relieved to see a friendly face after that nightmare. I give a small smile before my eyebrows come down with the pain and increasing heat.

"Well...I wasn't expecting to see you..." My vision is clouding again, my hand begins to convulse inside Braveheart's, and more blackness is starting to rush in. Braveheart stops smiling and opens his mouth to say something inaudible.

"....Like...thi...s..." I trail off after that, barely finishing, and my hand slips out of the one that's holding it gently. I'm falling unconscious again. I hear a yell before I can't hear anything else. Again.

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I drift in and out of deliriousness every now and then, hardly being able to even feverishly register anything. The next time I force my eyelids to open completely, and there is no haze whatsoever, there's no one else in the room.

I blink, relieved to have the hot, quivering sensation gone. That's one thing to take off the list of 'Things That Are Killing Me'. What else is on it? Too many things that I don't want to think about.

I turn my head a little to scan the space. It's a plain hospital room, with starch white walls and the medical instruments crowding around my bed. It's not a normal, crackly sheeted bed, it's comfortable and stuffed with Snipe feathers. The only decor in the room is a plain vase wedged in a corner, with a single bud sprouting from it.

I turn my head more to the left, and realize that there IS someone else in the room. A knight is sitting by the large window, back turned to me and as still as a statue. He has his elbows on the windowsill, sitting on a red chair with vertical, blue stripes. He stares into space wordlessly, appearing to be looking out the window, but not really seeing anything, deep in thought.

I try to sit up to see him better, but I groan and breathe in sharply, my arms shaking from the effort to hold myself up. He turns. "Don't strain yourself." Spiderstorm says roughly yet quietly.

I'm too weak to resist. I plop back down on my pillow and instantly regret it. I grit my teeth together as agony shoots through my back, not quite as bad as I thought it was going to be, but pretty intense.

"Owww." I groan through gritted teeth. "What on I-"

Out of the corner of my eye I see something that brings back the memories- and the nightmare.

Wings. Angel wings.

My near death scenario and the horrifying Vanaduke dream circle viciously around my head, making me gasp and slap my hand to my mouth. "Yeah, we know." Spiderstorm says, turning back to the window.

I’m so confused about all of this that I literally cannot think. My mind flies too quickly from one question to another to process any of them, making my mind feel like a recruit’s messy Guild Hall bedroom, trying to clean one thing and then having to switch to another.

But soon the thoughts begin to focus on my dream- the thought of Lord Vanaduke getting in my face like that forcing a chill down my spine. I shiver once in my scrubs, while regretfully reminiscing over the scare. How would that have worked out in reality? I’d probably get smashed by his flaming-

I do my hardest to push away the thoughts on my nightmare, trying to remember the first half of the dream- and everything is strangely vivid, like a memory from yesterday that stands out to me. It’s not so clear that I can remember the exact formation of the sunset colors, or the details on Clarity’s helm-

Clarity again! Why does she keep popping up? I cross my arms against my armorless chest, leaning my head back against the cushiony pillow. I frown as...my...wings refuse to stop digging into my back, and wiggling just makes tingling pain run up my back. I eventually give up and stare at the ceiling, trying to figure out Clarity’s appearances. How is she even related to me? Why is she even important? I don’t even know-

“Hello?”

I raise my head to look at a knight slowly shutting the door behind her, but Spiderstorm doesn’t even turn his head. She turns to face me and smiles, coming up to my bed. I smile back weakly, and wonder how on Isora she isn’t staring at my wings.

This knight is wearing a simple Angelic Helm, the three star, dark-gray version of my Valkyrie one, and simple Spiral Draped armor- just a long piece of cloth connected to her belt, much like a very lengthy, modest loincloth. It’s a set that many HQ knights wear for their uniform, but the little cross on her helm’s crest, and on her chest tells me she must be a nurse.

“Hey. I’m your nurse, I just came in to check on you.” She says politely, clasping her hands together and letting them rest in front of her legs. She pulls up a chair and sits next to my bedside.

“Uh, hi.” I say awkwardly, wondering when she’d notice my very-out-of-place wings.

“You feeling any better? You had a high fever earlier.”

“I feel like a Slag, thanks.” I roll my eyes, but not rudely. The nurse doesn’t take it offensively and chuckles at my sarcastic analogy.

“Um, so what exactly...did I hurt…?” I ask slowly, not really sure if I want to know.

The nurse bites her lip and leans back in her chair. “You...had a few fractured ribs….” She answers. “Um...a really big stab wound on your arm...and several notable cuts and bruises…” She finishes. I wince, wishing that I hadn’t asked. It just makes things hurt more.

“And how long am I staying here?” I give another question once more.

“Well, since we put VitaCapsule based bandages on your wounds...I’d say you’d be able to leave by tomorrow, late afternoon sometime.” She cocks her head while trying to answer, and I sigh in relief. Thank heaven for VitaCapsules, the wonder medicine of the Cradle.

“Oh, excuse me, but visiting hours are almost over, sir.” The nurse turns to face Spiderstorm, who straightens. He doesn’t turn towards us, but I can see his eyes glinting playfully...just like back in Emberlight. There he goes again. I think warily.

“Be out in a minute.” He says shortly, turning his head a little more a ways away from my view before I can get a better look.

The nurse nods and turns back to me. “Do you need anything?” She questions. “Food? A book?”

I shake my head. “No, thanks anyway.” My wings automatically flap, and I tense up. The knight peers carefully at my wings for several moments- suspicious ones. I bite my lip and finger a fold of my blanket, waiting for the statement.

“You seriously have Divine Valkyrie Wings!?” She stares at me in disbelief, and Spiderstorm actually turns his head towards us- quickly. I let out a small poof of breath, and nod after a moment of consideration.

The nurse looks at me in admiration. “Lucky! I wanted those so badly, and all I got were Military ones.” She frowns, sounding more like a normal knight in a normal conversation than a professional nurse. “Did you really just get those from a Lockbox?”

“Uh- I- uh…” I stammer. “N-no...I bought them while the boxes were still being sold.” I fib, wondering how many lies I’d have to tell to keep my very strange transformation a secret.

“They look so real! Did you modify these or something?” She reaches a finger out, as if to touch one of the feathers, and I nearly flinch.

“Welp, I’d better get going.” Spiderstorm states, standing from his chair abruptly. The nurse recedes her hand and straightens, leaving me free of uncomfort.

“Yes, it’s almost 5:00,” The nurse rises from her chair and claps her hands together. “And I must go find some more VitaPads. I’ll see you later, Angel-Girl.” The nurse grins at me, and heads for the door. Before closing it behind her, she turns and looks at me.

“They’re just so awesome!” She says through gritted teeth, the way a fangirling knight would when- well, fangirling. She giggles and waves her fingers at me before shutting the door behind her. I raise my eyebrows and sigh heavily, rubbing the bridge of my nose. Spiderstorm passes by my bed and heads for the door.

“Spiderstorm, wait!” I say quickly, and the Senior Vanguard stops with his hand on the doorknob. He turns his head a little, letting me know that he’s listening.

“You...you won’t tell anybody, will you?” I say slowly.

Spiderstorm peers at me with an expressionless face. “You have any reason not to trust me?” He says starkly, as if he thought I was ridiculous to be unsure of his reliability.

I shake my head no in reply.

“Then your secret’s safe with me.” He finishes, and exits the room, shutting the door with a click.

I stare at the door, both gratefully at his promise and disgustedly at his attitude. I roll over onto my side and sigh sharply, the room so quiet that I can hear the clock out in the hallway ticking- vaguely, but it’s there. The sound of people’s conversations and arguing floats from the open window, as does a soft breeze that rubs against my cheek. A crisply fresh sense settles throughout my senses, making me comfortable and drowsy. Even with the questions arising again, I find the weariness to fall into slumber once more- and this time I sleep dreamlessly. The only thing throughout my sleep that I notice occasionally is a strange, soft and somber sound...one almost like spine-chilling music.

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The next time I wake, it’s very dark outside my window- it must be pretty late. The everyday sound of the Town Square is gone, only with the occasional clanging in the Auction House. My room is dimly lit with an orange light, glaring right over my bed, and I blink several times before sitting up slowly.
It’s creepy waking up at night, and usually when I was little, this only happened when I was feverish or extremely achy- or from nightmares. Tonight is an exception- yet something is tugging in my stomach, trying to tell me something. Those gut feelings never end out well in my case- especially when the sensations increases slowly, as it is right now.

Something...something’s happening. My eyes dart around, with a strange feeling of a follower...a stalker...another presence has snuck into my room, or at least a feeling that something very bad is about to occur...

A loud yell and a crashing noise comes from outside my door, and I whirl quickly towards the noise. I have an urge to cover my head with my blankets, like a four year old, but I push away the urge and begin breathing heavily instead.

“Something IS wrong.” I whisper, hoping that if the creepy shadow knight storms into my room it will just be another dream. But do dreams feel so vivid? Can you really think that this dream is a dream decently, if it’s just a dream? Okay, now I just confused myself.

My door suddenly opens with a BANG, fluorescent light pouring into my room, and I squint with the sudden light change. A stretcher is pushed in, with six people managing it- two to push and pull the makeshift bed, four to...to pin down the wrestling knight wriggling around on it.

“Let me go, you idiots!” The knight screams, kicking a pusher in the nose. I gasp and flatten myself against the headboard, wondering why they would bring this screaming maniac into my room. The doctors and nurses successfully roll the stretcher about ten feet away from my bed, on the other side of the room.

“Pin him down! Pin him-” One of them yells, until the wild knight kicks out all of his limbs and thrusts most of the doctors down on the ground, and I cover my mouth, trying not to yelp in fear. The remaining two doctors back away slowly, but the knight dashes to both of them, socking them both in the faces to the point where they pass out. My lip quivers and I almost whimper, staring in fear at this strange knight.

He wheels around to face me, and for a second I see amber, brightly glowing eyes, which are filled with haze and creeping unruliness. It’s too dark to see any of his other features, and to my horror he sprints to my bed, leaps onto the mattress and grabs my shoulders. I stare at those horrific eyes, and he stares back at me.

He raises a hand, as if to punch me in the kisser, but then he blinks, his eyes flashing between clearness and cloudy. His fist uncurls slowly and he gulps.
“Help...me…” He whispers, his eyes begging me to do...something...anything. I just stare at him, terrified, sweating profusely and panting- speechless and petrified.

My attackers' eyes roll back into his head, now the normal softness, and he falls backwards, off of my bed and onto the ground with a loud THUD.

“HELP! Doctor, somebody, HELP!” I scream at the top of my lungs, staring at the motionless knight on the darkened floor.

What’s happened to him?! I think, covering my mouth with my hands and staring at the patient who’d almost strangled me.

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DUN, DUN, DUNNNNNNN! *cues the cheesy dramatic music*

What? That didn't have any effect? *sigh* Oh well...

Anyway, another chapter up tomorrow, as usual! Although on Thursday, unless the 7th chapter is done, I won't be posting.

See ya, and good luck to you on surviving another day in da Clockworks!

~Chrissy, the Bad-Composer Valkyrie

Tue, 03/08/2016 - 21:43
#9
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Nechrome
Don't worry, the dramatic music was quite effective

Ohoho, things happening! Souls! Valkyrie! Wings! Possibly possession!

I haven't seen the 'Valkyrie are part of the Spiral Order' idea before. Pretty interested to see where all this goes.

Tue, 03/08/2016 - 22:18
#10
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Midnight-Dj
@LoN

I have done it before, I mean, just look at this girl.

Wed, 03/09/2016 - 15:32
#11
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
Chapter 6 - This Cannot Be Happening

@Lordofnecromancers - Yay! I'm glad I'm keeping things interesting!

@Midnight-Dj - Randomness from me, but that looks awesome!

@The Readers Another chapter for you guys, enjoy!

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I watch the doctors work over the patient gloomily. The patient is lying quietly and unconsciously on the bed neighboring to mine, his glowing eyes only slits to tell the world that he is not awake.

I swing my feet back and forth over the ledge of my bed, hands clasped in the lap of my hospital gown. While I can’t forget the fact that this injured knight had attacked me last night, the look in his eyes and his last words before falling limp to the floor keep prodding me repeatedly. I feel sorry for him through it all.

It just doesn’t make any sense. I wrinkle my nose thoughtfully. Knights getting crazy like that is a rare sight. The only case I really know of is when I was dispatched to take down Arkus. Arkus had been a knight who’d gone completely insane after his entire team was murdered, while they had been on a rescue mission. I had been given the task to bring Arkus back to Haven, but he had refused and went wacko on me. I and my team had been forced to kill him in self-defense, which left me with sleepless nights for a straight week.

There’s gotta be something deeper than this guy becoming mentally ill. You don’t just snap out of those sorts of things. Even with my pondering, I still don’t really know what to think about all of this, all I know is that this poor knight needs some serious help- psychologically or not.

A sigh comes from one of the nurses by the patient, and I look up as she turns around to face me. She bites her lip before saying anything to me.

“He’s hurt pretty badly...I think he may have pushed himself too hard on a mission.” She murmurs quietly. I blink, noticing that the tone of her voice sounds like there’s more to her medical ‘report’- which can’t be good...

“But the mental readings...gee whiz, we can’t decide on what could have caused something like the fit he had.” She crosses her arms, sounding a little huffy at the fact that she hasn’t a conclusion on what could have happened.

My eyes widen in response, and I can’t help but ask “What- what do you mean by the mental readings? You don’t think he’s gone insane, do you?” I say with a low tone, wondering if my suspicions are being proven to be true. The nurse shakes her head, and darts her eyes behind her for a moment as a doctor accidentally drops a tool on the floor.

“Well, I wouldn’t think that,” She replies reassuringly. “Maybe he was hit by two separate monsters, and his body may have had some weird, psychological reaction to both status conditions the creatures caused. Something like that, perhaps.” The nurse shrugs, as if the suggestion isn’t really a very good one whatsoever.

“Anyway, he may be unconscious for a while. If he wakes up, and we’re not here, just press that button on the side of your bed.” She points to a green, circular button that is inbetween the space of my legs. I peer down at the button attached to the bed, which is meant to call my caretaker if I needed anything.

“Wait, but why is he even in my- er, here?” I question. I DON’T want to risk having this person come after me again. “Couldn’t he just...be moved to another room?” I shrug, knowing I’m sounding a little selfish, but I’m seriously scared of another attack. I don’t reveal my fear of this knight, but the nurse peers at me in such a way that I think she knows why I asked.

“I’m sorry, Angel-Girl,” the nurse leans against the wall that my bed’s headboard is touching. “But for days we’ve been receiving huge amounts of injured knights. We’re a very small building, and it’s been flooded over the max capacity. We have to start putting knights in occupied rooms now.” The nurse looks worried, and my face falls.

“Oh... I’m sorry. I didn’t realize…” I reply softly.

“I’m sorry too.” My nurse says with genuine concern written all over her face. “But, look on the bright side. You’re leaving this afternoon, and he may not even wake up until some time after that.”

And I’ll feel nervous the whole livelong day. I think bitterly, wanting to scowl at the floor. But I don’t. Instead I exhale a little annoyance and nod. “Alright...I can manage...at least, I hope so.”

The nurse smiles graciously at me. “Thanks for understanding.” After a moment she snaps her fingers and pushes herself off of the wall. “Oh, yes! Are you hungry? It’s getting kind of late.”

Almost on cue, my stomach growls like a Snarbolax cub, and I chuckle. “I guess you have your answer.” I reply.

The nurse giggles, and pats my back softly before strolling to the door. “Be back in a minute with some food. And, trust me,” She comments while opening the door, and the rest of the doctors leave the opposite bed and through the open door. “We don’t have those rumored, horrid hospital meals.” She laughs gaily and shuts the door, and I can’t keep the half-smile from my face.

After gazing after the door for a minute or so, I hop onto the floor for the first time since the day before yesterday- when I had waken up to go to the unexpectedly-canceled-training-session. My bare feet feel cold without my armor-like boots, and stiff from not having been used for at least 24 hours. I don’t mind too much, it just feels good not to lay in bed constantly.

It’s little strange to not have been wearing armor for so long, but somehow...it feels...great! The hospital gown that I’ve been put into is soft and comfy, and as I pull up a chair by the window, I feel much more relaxed than I have been in weeks- months, even. I almost want to take my helmet off, but I remind myself that I have only a very tiny amount of hair underneath the lightweight helm. I’d better not. I state in my mind.

I cup my chin in my hands, and place my elbows on the windowsill, staring out into the busy Town Square. People are bustling around with the morning rush- either to get to training, take a spin on some Clockworks depths, or get some battle equip blueprint- we call them recipes.

I sigh and lay my head sideways on the windowsill, wondering by how much time could slow down when you want to get out of this hospital. And when you’re hungry.

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The rest of the day is pretty much uneventful. The only slightly intriguing thing I hear comes from the Town Square, and it’s Railan yelling at her minions about something I couldn’t quite catch. Probably for some stupid thing they forgot to do for her. Just the usual noises.

Luckily for me, Adria- my nurse- is very kind. She found me alone and trying to pick patterns out of the ceiling sometime after lunch. It’s one of the most boring things you can do, but you still do it because there’s nothing else to occupy yourself with.

Adria offered to take me out to the balcony the hospital has to entertain recovering patients. It felt good to be outside in person, and not just stare out at it through a window.

I spotted a comrade of mine as well from up there, although we couldn’t really talk for long. He was busy trying to find a Graviton bomb recipe, a royal pain in the neck to accomplish. You can only find it if you’re lucky enough to get it from Basil- a Stranger roaming the Clockworks- or very seldomly in the Auction House.

Afterwards, I went to the showers for the first time in at least three days. It was relieving to get in the water, and I could almost see my newest fears and worries stream down the drain. I wasn’t sure whether or not to be cautious of getting the newest addition of my back wet, but I took the risk and made a discovery- feathers are water-resistant. Well then...

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Later...

I’m curled up on my bed, book in hand and a smuggled Jelly sandwich- that’s right, a capital-J Jelly. Those square gelatinous creatures I’ve fought countless times. It counts as meat too, and it actually tastes unexpectedly….good.

The door makes a creaking noise, and I jerk my head up at the sound. It slowly swings open, and a second passes before Braveheart pops his head through the crack.

In that moment I notice that his helmet is completely repaired, and it’s difficult to see the area where it had been destroyed. It’s also been cleaned of blood splatters, and even the scratches have been buffed.

“Hey, AG.” He gives me a small, timid smile, and I furiously wipe Jelly off of my chin before giving a combined greeting-wave and grin. Braveheart lets himself in and shuts the door softly behind him. He turns around, and I spot him hugging an awfully familiar bundle of cloth to his chest.

He walks timidly over to the edge of my bed, and plops the roll of cloth onto the bedspread wordlessly. I slap my book shut and lean over to examine the cloth, and as soon as I unwrap it, I realize that the clothing is my armor!

“Yes! I was wondering where those went!” I exclaim gratefully as I hold up my grass green skirt. “Thanks, Braveheart.” I thank my friend, and he just shrugs slowly, like it’s no big deal.

“Uh...so the nurse said that I could check you out as soon as you got dressed…” Braveheart mumbles, and stares at the floor.

I grin even wider than before. Finally, I can get back to normal life! And then the negative thought prods me, making me think that I may not even have a normal life anymore…

You’re not gonna be able to hide your not-accessory-wings forever...and since when do Knights have jewelry? Weird necklaces, to be exa-

Shut up, me. I think harshly, and try to push away the stupid thought.

“Okay, well then, I’ll go find the bathroom. Do you know where-” I’m interrupted by the sound of a groan, followed by a mumbled sentence.

I whirl to my left quickly to see my roommate, rubbing his fatigue-filled eyes and trying to sit up in bed. I nearly choke, and Braveheart looks up swiftly. “What? Did something-”

Braveheart’s eyes fall on the patient, and he just stares at him for a moment before peering at me in confusion. “What’s he doing here?” He questions.

I don’t find the words to answer, and even if I did, they would be too weak to climb out of my mouth. The injured knight turns his head to face me, and looks at my face with hazy, amber colored eyes. “I...I remember…” he struggles to whisper, and I force my mouth not to start gawking at him.

He groans, and I shake my head vigorously to whip the shakes from my senses. I slide out of bed and approach the knight cautiously, hoping he won’t leap out of bed again. “Hey...it’s okay…” I attempt lamely to say those words soothingly.

The knight bites his lip. “I-I’m sorry...about…” he breaks off to grimace, and it hits me that he knows what happened last night- and he’s apologizing. My fear begins to ebb away and I come closer, trying to decide how to calm him down.

“Sh-hadows...ev-v-verywhere….” He stammers, and sweat breaks out on his forehead. “T-h-he darkness...it w-w-ouldn-n’t st-t-” He squints his eyes shut to keep me from seeing how watery they are, and I crouch down next to his bedside.

“But it’s okay now. You’re in a hospital.” I clasp my fingers tightly on the sheets, feeling intrigued and saddened at the sight of this confused knight.

He shakes his head in reply, and wheezes a little. “Sh-h-he d-d-d-id something t-t-o m-m-e...it- it h-hurts!” He groans, and my heart leaps at the sound. He’s stammering even more badly than Braveheart does at his maximum word stumbling.

“She? Who’s she?” Braveheart walks up slowly behind me, crouching down by me as well. I glance at him for a moment until the terrified knight answers.

“Gr-r-iml-l-akins….so many...so m-m-much fear…” He gasps, and something inside of me churns. “Sh-h-e alm-m-most k-k-killed me…”

“He’s gotta be traumatized. I’m going to get the doctor.” Braveheart rises swiftly and turns to leave.

“No! Wait!” I yell to Braveheart, commanding him to stop. “What did you say? Grimlikins? Lots of them?” I whirl back to the bed and question the patient, wondering if a rising hunch is turning out to be true.

He nods slowly. “A-and….and…”

“And what?” I push.

The knight stares at me, his eyes dilating in immense fear. He pauses for a good ten seconds before answering, with a voice tinged in obvious terror, “A...a...a sc-c-c-c-ythe….she h-h-had a sc-c-cythe….”

My eyes widen, and Braveheart almost gasps.

“This cannot be a coincidence.” I state in a tremblingly low tone.

The knight looks at me in painful confusion, and replies in a restrained voice “I-i-t was e-early m-m-morni-” He stops, and he coughs with a huge amount of force. “H-h-elp...h-h-hot….” the words are almost inaudible, and MY eyes widen.

“Braveheart, get help! Now!” My voice breaks in my urgency. Braveheart doesn’t seem to notice and bobs his head quickly in reply. But he whirls around only to bump right into Spiderstorm, and Braveheart nearly stumbles backwards in shock.

“Wh-what-” He backs away from Spiderstorm in alarm, and Spiderstorm’s expression is nearly as startled as my friend’s is. The Skolver-helmed knight opens his mouth, and I’m afraid of what words may come out, to the point that I forget that we have a “burning” knight on our hands.

But Spiderstorm breathes in sharply, shuts his mouth, and crosses his arms. “Don’t bother. I got it already.” He says through narrowed eyes, and I realize that several doctors are behind him.

They rush forward to attend to the heavily breathing knight, and Adria appears in front of me. “You need to go, the bathroom is just down the hall.” She hastily shoves my skirt and armor at my chest, and doesn’t bother to at least give a gesture of farewell. She wheels away and begins to assist the laboring doctors.

I just stare at the bed, surrounded with working knights. Thoughts of all kinds are streaming throughout my brain, and none of them are good things whatsoever. What will- how did- I can’t- I rub my face with a free hand in confusion. My wings flap unhelpfully, adding a reminder to the huge mess of the words in my mind.

Braveheart has to tap my shoulder lightly to remind me that we have to go. I shake my head and follow Braveheart and Spiderstorm out, still watching the crowded bed and listening to the sound of ordering doctors.

“Okay, what was that all about?” Braveheart jabs his hands in his pockets and stares at me, waiting for an answer while we stroll through the hallway.
I don’t answer, I just make low toned nonsense with my mouth while trying to find the words. I thought...I thought that...none of the victims had been found...and then...and then one is rolled right into my room…

In the progress of my wheels turning, I start walking faster, getting ahead of Spiderstorm and Braveheart. Braveheart calls me, but instead of stopping or slowing down, I break into a jog and sprint for the girls’ restroom.

I burst into the soapy smelling room and slam the door behind me, only catching a glimpse of Braveheart appearing behind the shutting entrance. He looks super mystified, but I’m too overwhelmed to care much. I lock the door and lean against it, breathing heavily.

“AG? What’s wrong?! Come on, please open up!” Braveheart raps repeatedly on the door, and I slide to the floor against the smooth, wooden door. I feel so scared that I shiver every few seconds, and I squeeze my bundle of clothes tightly to my chest.

What does this all mean…? How...how am I even supposed to be involved in this? I ponder nervously. If that knight had the same mission as I did...and he’s like this...then...am...I… supposed to be...

I can’t even think the word, let alone say it. I can barely even register that someone wants me dead- for reasons I don’t want to know.

My stomach churns rapidly, and my fingers grasp my hospital gown so tightly that it’s a wonder that it doesn’t rip. Please, please, please let this all just be a bad dream… I plonk my head against the door, staring at the ceiling in despair. Let this be just a nightmare...let me wake up...don’t let this be reality….

“AG, please...just tell me what’s wrong….” My friend pleads quietly through the barrier between us.

I close my eyes and gulp, tears of desperation and fear starting to form in my eyes. But just before the teardrops spill out, in that instant, an infuriating thought speeds throughout my head. My eyes snap open and I lower my head. I burn hot with the anger of suspicion, and I slowly rise from the floor, the tiles beneath my feet no longer chilling the my soles.

I wipe my nose and rip my hospital clothes off, preparing to put on my armor. Throughout getting dressed, I’m seething with more and more fury. My accusation is starting to turn into certainty as I receive even more infuriating thoughts, and by the time I’m fully dressed, I can hardly think. I jam my newest jewelry piece inside my armor, wishing I could rip the stupid thing off of my neck. Trust me. I tried.

“Angel-Girl…” Braveheart says softly, but it does pretty much nothing to sooth my feelings and hot cheeks.

I march to the door, unlock it in one swift movement, and then swerve it open with a BANG. Braveheart jumps backward, shocked, and Spiderstorm blinks.

“Outta my way.” I growl, pushing past them both, not thinking about anyone’s reaction to my outburst. I stomp down the hallway and enter the lobby, thinking only about the one person who’s betrayed me...and all of us.

“AG?!?! What- where are you going?!” Braveheart yells, dashing swiftly after me.

As I thrust my hand on the door handle to the outside, I stop only to reply to Braveheart’s question. I hiss as I say the name of the one knight who was partially responsible for my death-

“We need to have a little chat with Kora.”

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*The dramatic music again*

Well, next chapter is a work in progress...I might rush it and finish it tonight if I'm lucky. I MIGHT finish it tomorrow...it depends.

~ Angel-Girl, the Maybe-Better-At-Composing-Music-Valkyrie

Sun, 04/03/2016 - 18:10
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Angel-Girl
Chapter 7 - Somber Emotion

Hey guys! Sorry about the long lack of update, I had some mind blocks and then I was writing short stories for people on these forums... but, I'm back! I went on inspiration adrenaline and got this finished today! Enjoy!

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I’ve probably used the terms; “What on Isora…” and “For the love of Gun Puppies…” and “Crud” one hundred million times by the time I rampage into the sparsely populated Garrison.

My chest is tightening up, and my skull is pounding in the heat of my fury. I stomp my way down the steps to the middle of Garrison, turn roughly and duck into a tunnel underneath a bridge. Rapid, dashing footsteps are audible behind me as I reach a set of large, double doors in a space on the other side of the tunnel. The bridge visible behind me, and I’m lucky that the HQ Knight guarding the doors is grabbing dinner, otherwise things would get pretty messy.

Kora...you would dare...you dare… I breathe heavily while my mind spits repeated insults at the HQ intel Knight, and I can’t believe someone would even abandon the Spiral Order like that. I can feel the confusion and sadness underneath the anger, but not by much. The fury is diluting all other emotions and thoughts, and the clearest thing is the fact that the knight, who had been a personal comrade for years, is pretty much gone. The thought is fueling anger every second.

Stupid little… I thrust my hands forward to punch the doors open, almost smirking as I imagine the surprised expressions on everyone’s face-

“Angel-Girl, stop. Right. Now.”

My trembling wrists are clenched both tightly and painfully, forcing my hands a full foot away from the door. I grunt as I try to wrench my arms free, but I can’t even feel my hands anymore, the circulation is being cut off.

I turn my head slightly to see who would dare to hold me back, and Spiderstorm’s piercing death stare bores into my red-hot face. Braveheart is standing close behind him, biting his lip and darting his eyes around nervously, as if to scan for any guards coming back.

“This is between me and the traitor. So back off!” I hiss at Spiderstorm, who doesn’t even blink at my sharp retort. He increases his grip even more so, making my navy skin turn a shade of dark-purple-blue, squeezing a wince from my mouth and sparking more anger.

“You don’t think we were part of this? We got stuck in Candlestick Keep with you too, in case you didn’t notice.” Spiderstorm says in a very low and quiet voice. “If you head in there like this, you’re gonna get booted out of Haven at the worst time possible. So tell us what dasked thing is going on, and get your head in the game. NOW.” He blasts the words bouncing around my mind, but the other occupants of my head instantly neutralize them- and then something sneaky and treacherous runs through my thoughts, something I never thought I would even consider.

I breathe through gritted teeth for several, lengthy seconds, Spiderstorm peering at me through the eyeholes of his Skolver mask. I would grin like a trickster if it wouldn’t give me away, and instead I sigh in a defeated way as my chest tightens up even more. “Fine.” I murmur. “Now would you mind letting my wrists cycle blood through my veins?”

Spiderstorm releases his fingers from my arms after a moment, and I flick my wrists up and down as if they could shake off immense pain. I shoot an irritated side look at Spiderstorm before wheeling around, taking several steps away from the door towards Braveheart.

“AG, what were you-”

I abruptly break Braveheart off, whipping back towards the doors and shoving Spiderstorm to the side- hard. He stumbles backwards and into the wall, bumping his head a little too roughly on the stone. He plops down hard, dazed and not very happy. “What on…” he growls, rubbing his helmet and blushing for the first time I’ve seen.

I ignore him and walk towards the doors, and I certainly don’t plan on being held back anymore. Take THAT. Not some rookie anymore, am I? I wordlessly thrust my hands against the entrance once again, planning on hitting the doors open. I half-hope that Braveheart doesn’t get in my way, and I would have to push him down.

I don’t push enough force to open the door up to something larger than a big crack, before someone yells “Hey!”

I sigh and roll my green-grass eyes skyward, turning to see who is rudely stopping my march into HQ, ready to forcefully keep them away from me if necessary.

But as I do so, my chest lurches violently, and my eyes dilate into huge circles. I’m not terrified at who I see, no way- something medically wrong is occurring inside of me.

“Oh my gos-” I gasp, falling down on one knee, clutching my chest with curling fingers. My eyes dart around, looking at the dirt while I take loud, heaving breaths, and I peer up at Braveheart out of the corner of my eyes. He looks absolutely horrified- either at my attitude or my sudden plopping to the dirt.

My anger is slowly starting to fade away, but instead of regret, it’s being replaced with a growing migraine- and I find inhaling and exhaling a game that I’m not winning. “Brave...h...he...elp…” I wheeze, pleading and begging him with my expression. “I-I’m n….not...fak...in…p-p-lease...”

I feel like panicking; I’m so confused and scared. I thought I was fine! How would I...how am… There are only traces of thoughts as I struggle to breathe correctly. I swear I can feel my bronchial tubes closing up, it’s that drastic. I close my eyelids of my own will this time, wishing I could just pass out, and be over with the pain that’s spreading across and throughout my body. “I….m..sorry….I don’t….”

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“...Using the Arch formation. That about tops it all off.”

“You forgot one last thing- everyone, watch out for any plasma snares. These rebels cherish them like infants.”

My eyes slowly flutter open, vision clouded and everything feeling like I’m sinking through mud. Everything gives a muffled audio, the way things are after getting hit by an extremely loud explosion.

But like a Chromalisk slurping a Vial from my inventory, my surroundings are sucked into focus, and I’m sprawled out on a concrete floor. Although my eyelids are only half open, I can still make out the room and the inhabitants.

There’s around fifteen “winged-Knights” in the empty space, all huddled around a large, bay door that’s amazingly battered and scratched. Two others are guarding the branch leading to the area, cautiously looking over their shoulders every few seconds. All of them wear similar styles, long and flowing skirts with armor for the upper body- but altogether they have a huge array of colors.

There is no overhead light in the area, only blinding spotlights from the very big room nearby- I have no idea what it’s used for, though.

I slowly sit up, facing the Knights, wondering what on Isora is happening. One of them launches into the air, nodding to a heavily armored Knight, obviously motioning her to do something. She bobs her head back, and with one quick movement, she flicks a large, red button, surrounded with yellow and red “safety” stripes.

They all scurry to hide behind the edges of the door as it begins to yawn open, every one of them either flicking out a gun, charging a sword or crouching, as if to leap into the air and swoop in on an enemy. I sit there, blinking, confused and hazy.

The opening reveals a large courtyard, empty of everything but several Knight-sized, empty cages and a small number of other winged Knights. They’re all wearing crests of red and black swirls, informing me that they’re all from some sort of...organization? Group? Their clothes are much like the Knights’ huddling behind the door, probably as to not loudly state ‘“LOOK AT ME, I’M PART OF A GROUP THAT’S MYSTERIOUSLY COOL. SO I WEAR THESE CLOTHES TO TELL EVERYONE!!!”’

They all turn and stare as the door signals its full opening with a BANG. A long pause fills the air, full of confusion from the Knights in the courtyard, and contempt from the Knights crouching beside the door.

It’s the silence that comes before war breaks out.

Everything happens all at once after the tense peace is broken. The Knights leap- or should I say fly- out from their hiding places, letting their charges and bullets zoom through the air. The Knights in the courtyard shriek, the majority of them only barely getting up some kind of supernatural shield or dodging the attacks. Several of them are promptly knocked over, but one of them merely topples to the ground in a dead faint.

The leader of the assaulters barks a command as more winged-Knights rush in to see the commotion. They all scatter, heading for specific areas, not hesitating to attack any enemies. I slowly get to my feet, teetering a little but being able to stand moderately well.

A small rustling sound from behind me joins the mixture of explosions, gunshots and screams, my ears only barely catching it. I whirl around to see Clarity emerge from a dark corner, coming out of a crouch. She looks around nervously, but shows no signs of being truly scared. I raise an eyebrow. Why didn’t she come out with all of the other Knights?

She walks briskly towards the entrance to the courtyard, which is now a complete battlefield, and I intend to get some answers. I’ve had enough of this huge mess of weird flying Knights, scythes, and smoky courtyards. I swiftly step in front of Clarity without hesitation, and this time, I can actually have words emerge from my mouth. “Alright, what’s going on he-”

Clarity doesn’t even seem to hear me, or even SEE that I’m blocking her way. She continues on, with that nervous expression, and actually phases right through me- or I through her. I gasp as a strange, water-like sensation passes through my whole body, which turns white until she is no longer touching me.

I clutch my chest where Clarity had phased through, eyes dilating and a hazy feeling hitting my head again. I turn back around to face the scene, and Clarity is now levitating instead of walking. This...this is only a dream… I realize as a flying Knight hurtles another into a steel cage with a mighty heave. No wonder I hadn’t been able to talk before, or that I’d been receiving telepathic narration, or that no one noticed I was in the area!

Clarity, however, isn’t following the attacker’s demonstration. She peers around, eyes narrowed, as if she’s searching for something. I slowly tread over to her side, following her gaze in curiosity.

“Reinforcements! They’re coming! Hold your-” A Knight bellows as one of the flying attackers does a dive-bomb on her. She tries to punch the other in the nose in response, but he points a gun at her nose, gets right up in her face, and growls “Shut up, or eat metal.”

The Knight who had been the obvious leader observes the courtyard, satisfied to see that all targets had been captured, or had their head smashed with a sword hilt. “There’s reinforcements on the way?” He questions, lowering his gaze on the Knight who had screamed. He chuckles in a very disturbing manner. “Well, then they can see their precious hideout burn to ashes in front of their eyes. Agrel!” He points a sharp, unusual sword -which looks something like the Final Flourish- at a winged Knight about ten feet away with Chartreuse eyes.

“Yes sir?”

“Light em up, before we get the head of the enemy crawling out of his hole.”

Agrel salutes in reply, but he doesn’t pull out a bomb like I thought he would- instead, he holds out both of his palms, and orange-yellow fire begins to dance along his hands, flickering and swirling.

The fire changes into a sphere, getting bigger and bigger, and Agrel shows no sign of exhaustion as they both become as big as twenty Snipes huddled in a ball. He thrusts them both together with a quick, inward push of his hands, and now the combined result is about the size of a small Trojan. With a small grunt, he thrusts his arms to the left, and the fireball swoops through the air, eventually hitting a makeshift, wooden wall. It bursts into flames as well being given a massive hole.

The leader, the flying Knight Agrel, and everyone else launches into the air, disappearing from sight. Clarity narrows her eyes even more, staring at the Knight that had been pinned down with a gun. I follow her stare, watching the winged female hustle to her feet, staring at the crackling wall in horror.

I look back at Clarity, and something in her Cobalt eyes shift. One of them starts to twitch in anger, and Clarity’s face turns crimson red. She balls her hands into tense fists, and her breathing becomes rapid.

The red-crested Knight curses, and is just about to dash away when Clarity screams “YOU! MURDERER!!!” She points a trembling finger at the winged knight, making both the Knight and me jump in surprise.

Unlike me, though, the “murderer” whirls around to face Clarity, her eyes filled with the guilty fear of having done something immoral. She chokes on her words, utterly speechless by the accusation. Clarity snarls, and as the spreading fire produces loud crackles and illuminates her face with a Firestorm Citadel-like glow, she becomes someone else besides the tender Knight I had thought she was.

The nonspeaking Knight realizes that a chase is ahead, and she trips over her feet in order to get away. She barely saves herself from falling by spreading her dark gray, ashen tipped wings and taking flight. Clarity pursues, soaring into the air after the retreating Knight. I do my best to follow, but soon they disappear into the crimson colored sky, which seems to be that hue from all of the fire that’s beginning to surround me.

A squeaky sound of a door opening comes from my right, and I turn my head to see something - er, someone- that makes my eyes bug out.

The shadow-knight, whom I’ve dreaded since I met, is prodding a chained, winged-Knight along the path. She’s not wearing the Snarbolax coat or ruby winged helm, but I can tell it’s her by her blood-red tipped, shadow black wings. She stops in her tracks when she spots the rapidly growing fire now engulfing the whole courtyard. “Oh crud.” She growls anxiously, angrily and nervously fingering the red and black swirls on her crest. She grabs the cuffs of the prisoner and yells something that I can’t quite register.

I have no time to fully think about the image before I’m suddenly in a large forest, with one instant blink of an eye. The forest is bordering a middle-class neighborhood, which is basking quietly in the tranquility of the sunset. My eyes widen when I see the almost never-ending group of houses. This isn’t Cradle...this is...this is Isora! How do I know? Well, there’s definitely no neighborhoods around Haven, much less Cradle.

A loud swooping noise is heard overhead, followed by another one, and I only barely catch a glimpse of flashing red, then blue. I instinctively dash after the streaks, trying my hardest to catch up but not really making any progress. I bat several ferns out of my face, my feet pounding the ground, trying to keep an eye on the now-tiny, two flying figures while ensuring a branch doesn’t slap my nose. Multitasking is HARD...

Within a few minutes of running, Clarity speeds up just a little, enough to get within shooting range of the red Knight. And shoot she does- but not in any way I expected. She thrusts both of her palms forward, the base of her hands touching each other and her fingertips facing diagonally outwards. A strange, large ripple slingshots through the air, the way one would see a sonic blast.

The red Knight turns her head when she hears the loud vibrations, and as soon as she sees what’s happening, she goes up and over to avoid the blast that would’ve cut her to pieces. Instead it obliterates a poor, thin tree, its bark and inner parts shattering to timber. My mouth nearly falls open, but the only thing keeping it closed is the unconscious fact that a repulsive bug might splatter into my face.

Instead of becoming shaken up by the surprise attack, the red Knight swerves around, flying backwards now, and does the same hand motion that Clarity had used to send the strange ripple hurtling. But instead of Clarity’s power blast, her hands spurt a super-pressurized water stream right for Clarity’s head.

Clarity diverts her direction to flying behind and around a large tree, and the attack hits a large amount of shimmering, green leaves instead. The victim of the red Knight’s wrath is instantly ripped of leaves, losing all greenery it had and might’ve had.

The red Knight yells something I’m too far away to hear, and continues to throw water sprays in all directions. Clarity dodges them all, or so I think. She’s too quick for me to register her movements, one minute she could be hovering in the air, then next a sea takes her place.

The red Knight is becoming flustered and angry now, and her movements are losing their precise aim and her blasts are lasting much too long. When Clarity disappears completely, the Knight stops her journey and screams “Come on out and fight me, you traitor!!!!” She circles her hands around each other with fury, forming a large water ball to prepare for Clarity’s next attack. She hovers for a moment before roughly landing on the soggy ground, wet from her water attacks.

I stop running, but with the speed I’d been going I completely overshoot where I had expected to be. I trip and bounce against the dirt before rolling not a foot away from the red Knight, covered in dust, mud and scratches. I let my head bonk on the ground, my aching legs screaming for a chiropractor. “Oww…”

I rest my eyes on the Knight who stands above me, and with the way my head is leaning back, she appears to be upside down on what should be the “sky” and not the ground. Her Lake colored eyes are narrowed, alertly scanning for the first sight of Clarity. Her red crest is crooked from the fight, and her hands are curled as she lets the orb of water float between her hands. A drop from the ball falls onto my face, but passes right through me, and there is no sensation of wet or cold. Just the weird liquid phasing feeling takes its place, crawling throughout my face, and I shiver at the creepy sensation.

The Knight tenses, as if she’d felt a hostile presence in the vicinity. She whirls around several times, now only levitating the water sphere with one hand. So much as a stone cracking against a tree, or a tiny rustle of a bush makes her change her direction. Now her eyes are narrowed with the guilty fear again, and when a much more distinct rustle of a bush begins, she turns towards the sound, adding an extra liter of water to her large water ball.

Someone emerges, and it’s not Clarity. In fact, it’s only a kid Knight, so much shorter than the Knight standing above me. I slowly sit up when the newcomer comes into the circle of dirt, and my heart nearly melts. I haven’t seen a little kid Knight since my years on the Skylark! ...If any are in Haven, they must not be allowed to be outside of any...houses? I have no idea where the children are in Haven.

The Knight has no helm or armor, he only has a long, red and white cloak-like raiment that goes down to his upper knees. His eyes are the same color as the red Knight, and by the looks of his stubby fingers, he must only be three years old or so. He’s playing with toy spaceships, one which looks like a miniature Skylark, another is dreaded Morai Typhoon starship--I shudder at the thought of them--and the last is an exotic, angelic one I’d never seen in my whole life.

“Pew! Pew! Pew!” The Knight makes the Skylark and the Typhoon ship collide and pretend to wreck one another with lasers, while the angelic ship comes up and the kid says in a squeaky, high, playing-pretend voice “Stop fighting! You guys are stupid for shooting each other for food!”

The red Knight stares at the naive child, and lets her several liters of water dissipate into the air as water molecules. “Honey? What are you doing here?” She hurriedly rushes over to the young Knight, who had opened his mouth to keep the make-believe going, but looks up when the Knight puts her hands on his shoulders.

“This is my place, Mom! You keep fergetting!” The boy says in what would be his normal, youth sounding voice.

His mother sighs, then squarely looks the child in the eyes. “You have to get out of here. Your play area isn’t good for you anymore.” She warns him, desperately trying to find words that a toddler would be able to understand.

The boy becomes crestfallen, his face no longer having the light of youthful happiness. “Yes it is! I put bark all around to keep munsters out!” He protests, hugging his toys to his chest.

The red Knight opens her mouth, most likely to tell him that bark isn’t the best of defenses, when her and my ears pick up a shift in the leaves and sticks of the trees. The Knight shoves her son backwards with a small water spray--not enough to injure him but to push him a few feet away-- as Clarity assaults her with a surprise collision.

The red Knight screams in agony, and I cover my ears at the earsplitting cry. The three year old leaps to his feet, and yells. Hey! What-” When he sees Clarity pinning his mother to the ground, he chokes. “Mom!” He takes a step forward, but the red Knight holds up a weak hand to stop him. Clarity peers over at the kid, now utterly confused at the boy’s presence.

“No! Run! Warn your sister and-” She grits her teeth as she tries to move her oddly bent wings. “Get Varian! Tell him to-” Clarity shoots her hand over the red Knight’s mouth, not covering it, but nevertheless somehow forcing it closed. “Uh-uh.” She shakes her head and a finger, and shoots a glance at the boy that says ‘You heard her. Go on.’

He drops his dripping wet toys, and flees from the scene, sobbing in fear of Clarity and for his mother. His flying cloak is the last thing that’s visible before he disappears completely. Clarity's expression softens at the sound of his crying, and she pauses for half a second. The red Knight sees her opportunity, and thrusts a muscly fist into her face. Clarity reels backwards, falling on her back in the dirt, and the red Knight sits up gradually, not being able to stand from her injuries.

She lets out a shaky breath before speaking in a hoarse voice. “Never thought that your enemy had a life, did you?” She coughs a little. “Well, guess what? I’m just like you, I have a husband and two children. I just have a reasonable cause to fight for, while you mindlessly listen to that cursed Valkyrie Council.”

Clarity almost has steam come out of her ears, and she turns bright red. She thrusts a hand outwards, quivering and twitching from emotion. The red Knight is slowly levitated into the air, a bluish aura surrounding her while she’s airborne. Clarity walks closer, her hand closing into a teal-colored fist, and the red Knight grunts as her limbs are thrust against her sides, starting to shake as they continue to press against her body.

“I’m NOTHING like you.” She twists the Knight’s broken wings with a movement of her fist, causing her to scream in peril again. I wince at the sound of more breaking bones, covering my mouth in shock. “You’re a murderer, and I feel sorry for that little boy back there. To have you as a mother…”

The red Knight grunts from pain and resentment, and spits a little blood from her mouth. “We do what we do because you’re going to destroy us all with this ‘master plan’ of yours. Knight or Valkyrie, both will fight against you because of your Council.” She says these words with pride and undying loyalty, and it makes my heart twist.

Clarity brings her fist towards her chest, making the Knight come about a foot away from her. She doesn’t continue her unfinished sentence, she only uncurls her fist, starting to place her hands just beside both sides of her victim’s helm. The red Knight’s eyes widen slightly, apparently realizing what Clarity’s going to do to her, but I have no idea what she could possibly be trying to do.

Clarity growls nearly underneath her breath “I. Am. Not. With. The. Council.”

Goosebumps travel over my arms as I inch away from the two strangers. Clarity’s hateful tone instantly brings a recalled sentence, word for word and voice for voice, from the day I nearly died-

‘“It’s all your fault.”’

Clarity’s hands begin to glow with the same blue that surrounds the red Knight, and the Knight mumbles as a luminescent, bright aquamarine mist begins to seep into the air “I was wrong...you aren’t like me...you’re WORSE.”

And that’s the last sentence she utters.

Whatever Clarity is doing to her, the red Knight’s caterwauling and screeching makes me wonder -in disgust- if her brain is melting. Clarity’s face is set in a stony, heartless expression, showing zero mercy. It’s startlingly similar to the one Arkus--the insane, wandering and now-dead Knight--had when I had first encountered him. The one of which senior veterans have when talking about their old war days, the face one might have when they’ve seen too much and have been completely changed as a result.

I could go on for hours of what Clarity looks like as she kills that Knight, letting her crumpled frame fall to the mud and stay there, undisturbed, for her family to find. As Clarity closes her red-rimmed eyes for an unknown reason, I close mine, trembling in fear of the scene. I’m blocking out the sight of the deceased mother, whose son would never see those Lake colored eyes again- ever.

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I wanted to write more, but I realized this was too long to insert more into one chapter. I might get another one up this week since I still have this writing mood left over, but it really depends.

Anyways, thank you for reading! Constructive thoughts and criticism are welcome!

~ Angel-Girl, the Valkyrie

Thu, 04/21/2016 - 08:20
#13
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Angel-Girl
Some info! Also- SHAMELESS BUMP

Heylo, fellow Knights!

I am now on summer break (I AM HOMESCHOOLED. DON'T ASK.), and since I'm required to be doing more "constructive things" for the summer besides playing Spiral Knights all day (NOOOO), I should be able to write lots more for Angel's Light! :D YAY!!! So hopefully I should be able to roll out another chapter soon. Just keep watching for it!

Okay, thanks for reading!

~Angel-Girl the Valkyrie

Sat, 06/11/2016 - 19:50
#14
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
BUMPY

Ugh, I feel so bad, I haven't updated in TWO STINKIN' MONTHS. T-T

Luckily, I'm scrambling to rewrite the first chapter before I leave on a week-and-a-half vacation, starting this Wednesday. It will be so different that one might think it was a new chapter...if wasn't in an old post. XD

I should update before Wednesday, maybe even tomorrow if the miracle inspiration rush occurs, like what happened with the last chapter. WE SHELL SEE!

~Angel-Girl the Valkyrie

Mon, 06/20/2016 - 21:10
#15
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
HI!

Okay, chapter 1 has FINALLY BEEN REWRITTEN! Please enjoy the semi-new chapter. :)

Fri, 06/24/2016 - 03:46
#16
Nechrome's picture
Nechrome
👋👋👋

Loving the rewrite! I hope we see more of Bella and Swift in the future. Also Ara, because she's just precious.

Fri, 06/24/2016 - 05:41
#17
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
I'm a Valkyrie

Thank you! I thought that Ara would be a great person to put in, because the story just needed some more happy people (Besides AG). I don't know if I'm keeping Bella and Swift on, they were originally intended to just fill in the spots for the Vanaduke-extermination squad. But I will definitely think about it...

Fri, 06/24/2016 - 09:00
#18
Thinslayer's picture
Thinslayer
@Angel-Girl

You're homeschooled? So was I! Nice to meet you!

Anyway. Though I normally don't read fanfics, I broke down and read yours, and I'm glad I did - you have very high production values. And I may have been looking at the original piece. Your technique was amazing; there's no way I'll be able to write like that without a few months serious practice. The story had me gripped and wanting more. Well-done! I'd like to see you finish this thing. ^_^

Fri, 06/24/2016 - 18:21
#19
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
Daw

Thank you for the compliment! :D And you were reading the original and liked it? Wow.
I don't plan on leaving this hanging anytime- the only way this would come down is if the game lost it's servers, and that isn't happening anytime soon (hopefully). I've got about three books in store for this adventure. ;)

Thu, 10/20/2016 - 17:16
#20
Asaleth's picture
Asaleth
Wow

How long have you been writing for? This is simply amazing. Sorry about not having anything constructive; I'm not much of a writer :3.

Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

:D

Thu, 10/20/2016 - 18:59
#21
Angel-Girl's picture
Angel-Girl
I'm a Valkyrie

Mmm...I got really serious about writing back in 2014, but I really started improving in 2015 and from there on.
And that's okay, any comment is great even if it's just "THIS IS GOOD". Thanks! :)

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