Spiral Knights - An old outdated fanfic.

An old outdated fanfic.

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Wed, 08/17/2011 - 11:55

Valorai

Hey! I just see all these people making fan-fiction, so i thought i would try it out. Dont be shy to say it sucks.

Prologue

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Fire. It was always my least favourite element but I never thought I would be killed from it. But here I was. All by myself, in the most secret gate anyone would ever find, left to die. And it was all because of him. It's his fault that Haven and the rest of Cradle is about to be destroyed. And it all started a few weeks ago........
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You know.... On second thought, I'll do this. I would like some people to be part of this story, say.......4 people for now. One to be "Him"(Feel free to pick his name) And the other 3 to be friends of me. (My characters name in the story is Revan) Although, if you want you can pick what you would like your character to be. And when all the spots are taken I will continue.

I need to know your:

Characters name.

Personality.

Equipment.

Other.

And if there's something else you can put it in too.

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:03

Rangerwillx

Yay.

Name: Will

Personality: Nice, help the poor guy out, has a dark side, swordsman.

Equipment: My weps are: Avenger, Silent Nightblade, Gigawatt pulsar, Shivermist Buster. Armor: Vog Cub Coat. Helm: Miracle Hood. Shield: Grey Owlite.

Been in a few other stories, hope to be in this one as well! I dislike fire and shock the most as elements.

Best Regards,

~Rangerwill~

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:22

Nechrome

Name: Trinodius Personality:

Name: Trinodius
Personality: Enjoys killing. Very unfriendly, but still helps people.

Equiptment: Nightblade, Khorovod, Grintovec, Defender, Snarble Barb, Fiery Vaporizer, Magic Hood, Cobalt Armor, and beginner stuff.

Other: Another brother of exodius. that makes... lesee... Necro, Exodius, Nemodius, Alamar, and Trinodius... wow. I hope i'm not forgetting anyone. And hates shock status so badly.

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:23

Valorai

Oh, and im thinking this time

Oh, and im thinking this time period will be like, months a year maybe after they have crashed, so they've gotten use to cradle and plan on staying.

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:28

Shadownox

Name: Shadow Personality:

Name: Shadow
Personality: loner. stays to himself. doesnt talk much. always appears when someone needs help, but dissapears right after. no one knows much about him.
Equipment: Ascended calibur(soon to be a Leviathan blade!), brandish, striker, autogun, magnus, blaster, blast bomb, spinecone, hazebomb(im trying to sell it...), bristling buckler, wise owlite shield, magic set, wolver set.
Other: has a pet mewkat

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:34

Valorai

Nevermind about "him" But the

Nevermind about "him" But the next person to join can pick what they are
and when we get 1 more ill work on the next chapter right away

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 12:37

Valorai

I keep forgetting about

I keep forgetting about things. I want to ask your opinions. How many chapters should there be? Im thinking around 14

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 13:16

Valorai

I'll just make this chapter,

I'll just make this chapter, I'll try to get the 4th in chapter 2, but i have to make a chapter now! These first chapters are the days before the prologue in case you get mixed up.

Chapter 2

The strangest thing happened on my way to the auction house today. I was going to see if there were any cheap shields to buy when i saw a slime!!! It was a normal pink slime, and it seemed to be following a knight I recognized as Trinodius. He was a knight that was always around the training hall or polishing his armor and weapons. I did not know him very well. But then i realized it wasn't following Trinodius.... It was trying to flee from him! I saw it was heading for the arcade, probably hoping to get to the gate it came from. But Trinodius saw this too, and immediantly sliced it in half. Of course this did not surprise anyone, because Trinodius regularly brought monsters into Haven. Most people said this was dangerous because he could hit someone but everyone knew that he never missed. He always says he's just practicing in case a horde of monsters run lose in haven, but that would never happen! He picked up a slime drop and went to his business.

Well after that i went to walk around town like i always do. A man came up to me, seemingly out of nowhere. He asked me, "Why do you walk around Haven everyday?" I thought it was an unusual question to ask a stranger, and I replied," It gives me time to think about things, like our future on cradle."
"Ah, but why?" He was starting to freak me out a little so i just made an excuse to leave and ran to the arcade.

It was normal after that, and it was 6:00 and everyone was finishing up there adventures in the clockworks, and getting ready to end the day. I felt something hit my metallic head and immedianlty everything was dark.

Hey this is my first chapter and i didnt have lots of time to make it, so im hoping the next chapter will be better.

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 14:19

Valorai

Chapter 2 "Are you alright?"

Chapter 2

"Are you alright?" The voice came again. "Are you alright?" I opened my eyes. In front of me was Shadow. "I found you on the ground with this on your head." he said, and showed me a small metal pointed object. "What is it?" I said. He replied, "Im not sure. But I've seen a gremlin fiddling with one once." "A gremlin!!! How could a gremlin have gotten here?" "I don't think it was a gremlin." Shadow said. We stared at each other for a moment. "Well, see ya." he said, and he walked away. I checked the back of my head were the dent was. It was just a dent, nothing serious. I looked around, seeing only a few knights talking and leaving. I went to meet one of my friends Will. We knew each other fairly well. "When would you like to go on that big tier 1, and tier 2 trip we were planning on?" Will asked. "Oh, probably tomorrow." I replied. I didn't tell him about the object that knocked me out. I was about to rest until tomorrow, but I was still thinking about that. Maybe that man was mad that i didn't answer him? No, that was stupid. Maybe I'll find out tomorrow.

I think ill make lots of these mini chapters often.

Wed, 08/17/2011 - 15:23

Ares-Hsg

Cool, I want in!

Check It.
Name: Armerio
Gender: Male
Arsenal: Flourish( soon a Flamberge), Brandish, Tempered Calibur (soon a Cold Iron Carver), NightBlade, Striker
Voltech Alchemer, Pulsar(soon a Heavy Pulsar), Pepperbox, Antigua( finally...)
Horned Owlite Shield, Bristling Buckler, Drake Scale Helm, Dusker Coat
Likes: Reliable Friends
Dislikes: anything trying to kill him
Personality: Smart, not the best fighter, but pretty good. tends to be unsure of himself, but is confident he'll do the right thing for himself.
Other: Has a way with Chromelons, not pets, but can persuade them to do his bidding.
By the way, i've started mine.

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 07:42

#10

Valorai

Chapter 3 Deep in the

Chapter 3

Deep in the clockworks, Amerio was gathering materials and crystals with stranger knights. He wasn't the most powerful, but he had tons of strategy's to kill the monsters. Up ahead there was a chromalisk. "Hey look!" he said, pointing to the chromalisk. But they didn't know what he could do with them, so they killed it. "Why did you do that!?" yelled Amerio. "It was a chromalisk! So it was an enemy that had to be killed!" replied the knights. After that, Amerio was still mad at them when a huge fissure opened and one of the knights fell in, and another knight grabbed his legs. They were both falling now and Amerio grabbed his legs, and the fourth knight, Trinodius, grabbed Amerio's legs. Slowly, inch by inch, they started lifting them back up. It would have worked, if there wasn't 10 chromalisks nearby. Amerio controlled all of them and commanded them to stick their tongues onto the knight at the bottom. Unfortunately, it's tongue hit the knights arm that was holding on to the knight at the bottom. It would have been ok, but it's tongue was made to deal damage. the knight let go to the knight at the bottom just before Amerio and Trinodius pulled him up.

The knight fell with a blood-curdling scream.

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 13:07

#11

Ares-Hsg

Am I going to be exiled?

I was just trying to save the knight, I mean seriously, is he really going to die because of me?

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 13:17

#12

Valorai

yes. u r evil!!!!!! jk

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 20:14

#13

Valorai

Chapter 4 "What happened to

Chapter 4

"What happened to him!" What I was staring at was something I thought I would never see. "He fell into a large whole in one of the gates earlier today" replied one of the medics. "So your saying he just walked into a hole!" "No he FELL in sir" the medic recruit said nervously. "Well shouldn't we close the gates so this problem can be taken care of?" Revan said. "We think it's highly unlikely that this will ever happen again sir." He was right. Something much worse was going to happen. "Well, warn all knights to be careful down there." "Yes sir!" the recruit said. The young recruit left the room. "How could this have happened" Revan said to himself. Everyone left the room, except the docter who was carrying the knights head with an inscription on the side saying "You should have reconsidered.!"

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 20:21

#14

Valorai

I need two more people to be

I need two more people to be in the story. *WARNING* one of you are going to be slaughtered

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 20:48

#15

Nechrome

Can I make a new character to

Can I make a new character to die? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE????Okay, thx. =P

Name: Salamar
Personality: Very hard working, awesome at smashing fiends, but works alone.
Other stuff: see Trinodius

Thu, 08/18/2011 - 20:50

#16

Valorai

U shall be slaughtered!!!!!

U shall be slaughtered!!!!! yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fri, 08/19/2011 - 07:09

#17

Valorai

Chapter 5 I had to run to

Chapter 5

I had to run to escape the terrible thing that was chasing me. It grabbed my leg. I knew this was the end. "C'mon! We just have to check your head to see if anything is wrong!" Earlier that day I told someone about the object that hit me and they all were frantic to try to see if anything was wrong with me. Of course they found nothing. I went to the auction house to see what crazy thing would happen to me today. I bumped into will and asked what he was doing. He said he was getting ready for that run we were going to go on. Too bad we never really got to do it.

Sorry i dint write much. Im preparing for the next chapter.

Sat, 08/20/2011 - 08:58

#18

Valorai

Chapter 6 The snarbolax was

Chapter 6

The snarbolax was not smart in any way. At least, the gremlins did't think it was. But the gremlins brought it to a meeting trying to get it on their side. "And that's why you should join us against these Spiral knights" the gremlin diplomat finished. The snarbolax had been snacking on a gremlins head the whole time. It stared at the diplomat with an evil smile. "It looked tasty", the snarbolax thought. After licking the diplomat, it decided that it was not good for eating. When it licked the diplomat, he thought it was a sign that he would join them. The gremlins knew that the snarbolax was a creature that gave birth to a hundred little baby snarbolaxes after those spiral knights killed it. Thats why every time a knight went to the wildwoods on of those creatures are there. That is why the gremlins wanted it on there side. The snarbolax new that they wanted it to kill those tasty things that come to its lair every so often. They made good food. It's allegiance was now with the gremlins. Well, after it had a snack.

Mon, 08/22/2011 - 21:01

#19

Valorai

No comments? Im feelin

No comments? Im feelin lonely.............

Thu, 10/20/2011 - 12:20

#20

Softhead

character

Name: AtrumVindex
Guild: Elite Explorers
Alignment: good
Arsnal:winmillion, Azure with heater set, Cold Iron Vanquisher, Valiance
Likes: groups, coins, trading, teamwork, tatical reasearch, games, arena, devilites
Dislikes:ME and CE prices, jerks, deserters, ''dying'', weak weapons and armor, being lonley, peolple not buying materials for 20crowns apiece.
Personality:Cynical, hard working, very angry with the spiral order and their way or buissness, kind but conservative, finds great potential in young knights and recruits them and wants to be stonger to not rely too much on others, he is a tatical person and works in a team.
Skill: A bit rusty due to going on hiatus for two months+ annoyed with the orders rule. He is a zig-zag, speedy fighter. He got favours from many devlites so they can fight on the good side.

Mon, 08/29/2011 - 12:39

#21

Valorai

Sorry for not writing in a

Sorry for not writing in a while, with school and all. But ill try to get a chapter out today.

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 06:04

#22

Duskfinder

any more room for another person?

Name: Dusk
Gender: male
Personality : not very kind but has a soft spot for his few friends
Gear: miracle set ; silent nightblade ; wise owlite sheild ; kilowatt pulsar
Other: is motivational ; likes winning

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 07:43

#23

Duskfinder

i just realized

Something

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 10:10

#24

Ancientwarrioralph

plz let me in

Name
every body calls me ancient so ancient will be name

Gender male

Personality tactical
knows how to handle situations
quick to anger
Loves weapons

Gear
Wolver set
cutter
Skelly shield
Shadowtech alchemer
Other hates fire and shock status affect

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 18:46

#25

Duskfinder

Y no posts ? Only me?

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 07:41

#26

Ancientwarrioralph

I love ur story this is

I love ur story this is exciting yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Tue, 08/30/2011 - 10:06

#27

Ancientwarrioralph

When next chapter ???? Bet

When next chapter ???? Bet its good :D

Thu, 09/01/2011 - 04:14

#28

Ancientwarrioralph

Ya my ign is

Ya my ign is ancientwarrioralph
I'm also dusks bro

Wed, 08/31/2011 - 07:53

#29

Valorai

Chapter 7 I saw a gremlin in

Chapter 7

I saw a gremlin in haven today. As soon as the first Knight saw it, he said, "WAR!!!! KILL ALL THE GREMLINS!!!!" And about 50 knights went into battle with that one gremlin. I thought only one knight was needed but anyways. Dusk, a fellow knight I have seen lately, said that a gremlin nearly ripped his head off today. Hmmm..... sounds familiar.

Ironclaw Munitions Factory

"C'mon guys! We can work this out can't we?" The lumbers carrying him just ignored AtrumVindex. A group of gremlins appeared in front of them. AtrumVindex could almost reach his Shocking edge, but the lumber carrying his sword saw this and ripped Atrum's arm off. "OWWWW!!!!!" "We'll give it back later" one of the gremlins said lazily. AtrumVindex knew he could get another arm but that one was his favourite......The knight next to AtrumVindex looked calm. Then he kicked the lumber holding him. The lumber let go and the knight sprinted to the elevator. As the knight went down he said,"Sorry AtrumVindes, we'll make a statue in our honor" he said sarcasticly. The elevator went down. Everyone heard a loud bark, a munch, then a scream.

Thu, 09/01/2011 - 05:48

#30

Duskfinder

hmmm

Not as good as the others but still ok .

Fri, 09/09/2011 - 17:20

#31

Valorai

YIKES I HAVENT WROTE IN A

YIKES I HAVENT WROTE IN A WHILE caps lock

Chapter 8

The gremlins took a few parts out of Atrumvidex's old arm then threw it away. Apparently they just needed a FEW PARTS. (srry caps lock) After a few minutes the gremlins were argueing on how to kill Atrumvindex. They decided to parylize him and watch the twins kill him.

Down the elevator he went. On the way down even though Atrumvindex couldn't move he could see. He saw more than two roarmulas twins. He saw 10!!!! They were planning an attack on haven!!!!! That explains why he saw the snarbolax on a couch watching animal planet. Once the elevator hit the ground, the snarbolax bared his teeth, mad that the elevator's creaking made it impossible to watch. The parylizing affect has worn off, and Atrumvindex staggers trying to get to the elevator where he could escape. Atrumvindex was very lucky. A few knights have just killed the easy prototypes that you usually see. The gremlins don't think we know that there just prototypes, but we found out eventually. One of the knights saw Atrumvindex, with a gaping mouth, he ran to Atrumvindex. "My names Revan, lucky for you im the head of medics." Atrumvindex collapsed on the ground. Why did he do that? It felt like something was pulling him to the ground. Everything went black, and he couldn't feel anything, but he could still hear. He heard the feet of the four knights carrying him across to the elevator. He went down. went up to haven after sprinting through emberlight. After a while he was in a hospital. He heard a voice, full of authority say." this isn't good. hurry! get him too th....... Now he couldn't even hear.

Was that ok?

Sat, 09/10/2011 - 04:10

#32

Duskfinder

'_______'

Yes ,yes it was

Sat, 09/24/2011 - 03:37

#33

Softhead

i have a new shield

Nice, anyway i have a bristering buckler.

Mon, 09/26/2011 - 13:47

#34

Valorai

Where do you get those

Where do you get those avatars?

Sat, 10/01/2011 - 16:38

#35

Softhead

Fourm References

Go to the fourm references right next to the search bar and click on it. Next you go to the edit tab and choose a picture(some are fannart, others are pre-rendered pics from spiral knights)! Next you press save at the bottom of the screen and your done!!

Sat, 10/01/2011 - 16:57

#36

Valorai

Thanks, it kind of sux, that

Thanks, it kind of sux, that u cant see if someones online.....well maybe it doents matter that much,

Sun, 10/02/2011 - 03:50

#37

Softhead

Why my beautiful arm,

Why my beautiful arm, NNNNOOO!!! They betrayed me!! My team, they're DESERTERS*!!!
(referencing Capter 8)
Do I suvive? Do I die? Do I get awsome upgrade into the best knight ever!?Why did I stagger?Was I poisoned?Or is it blood loss?Am I a major plot divice!?
I need to know!!
* Deserters are one of my dislikes.Nice

PS: I see you followed my advice of the avatars.

Sun, 10/02/2011 - 05:54

#38

Valorai

yea, wolvers are my friends

yea, wolvers are my friends O.o, i might be able to get the next chapter in this week

Mon, 10/03/2011 - 10:18

#39

Softhead

Can't wait!!

I need to see the next instalment.

See yah on the flipside!!

Ps(please awnser this question):before you are abandoned, did you have a group of people like me and the others with you. If so, what happened with them?
Pss: I have school as well, I really need to schedule my time:(
Psss: I like owlites so I picked the second best thing, the cloak of an Owlite!!
Pssss: I live in london so thats why im replying to you at late times LOL!!
Psssss: What is your in game name can I add you, mine is Atrumvindex.

Mon, 10/03/2011 - 13:41

#40

Valorai

my ign is atgatg, and did you

my ign is atgatg, and did you say i was abandoned? im pretty sure i didnt say that

Tue, 10/04/2011 - 09:31

#41

Softhead

You know Proluge..

I mean in prolouge when you were left to die by ''Him'' in the secret gate. Did you go with a group or alone before prolouge happened.

Thu, 10/06/2011 - 17:57

#42

Jmtheawesome

Is it ok if i join?

Name : Jm
Likes : gremlins, mechanics, and explosives
Dislikes : Being alone
Personality : Never leaves a stone unturned, and has a fascination in gremlin technology. Quick to anger, and usually finds himself between a monster and a sharp place.
Arsenal : Chroma set (Magic set costume) Striker, Grintovec, Catalyzer, and an Autogun. (optional, wrench wand)
PS : Jm has an addiction to Katnip.

Tue, 10/11/2011 - 13:37

#43

Valorai

I think I decided to keep

I think I decided to keep that out of the story, because i dont think i liked it to much, and jm ill try to find a spot for you, but u will probably die :D

Fri, 10/14/2011 - 18:17

#44

Softhead

Check Character

I changed atrum's equips.

Fri, 10/14/2011 - 18:59

#45

Forum-Trader-Alt

let me in please

gender: male

likes: nature animals and flora

dislikes: machines gears and robots

equips: cautery sword dusker set with regal bolted vee toasty helm guards barrel and belly and twisted targe

story: Spent a long time of his life in the wilderness of Spiralis Prime making tools and weapons to survive. He didn,t know how he got there or even seen his family. All he knew was that he had to survive. After 25 years of wild living a traveller came by his camp and he followed him to the nearest town which happend to be the launch place of the Skylark. After 5 years of training and now the the Skylark,s leading wildlife reasearcher he was on his way to cradle were he expirienced the terrible event of the crash. Now he,s one of the many knights stranded on cradle.

personality: Amazed by all things natural while hating all things mechanical. His primary goal is to unlock the secrets of life,s origin.

Fri, 10/14/2011 - 18:36

#46

Nechrome

got new stuffz. jalovec,

got new stuffz.

jalovec, khorovod, shockburst brandish, electron chrage, snarby sheild, newbie stuffz.

Sat, 10/15/2011 - 11:08

#47

Softhead

Where is the next chapter!!

I don't need it...
I don't need it...
I don't need it...

I NEED IT!!!

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 22:01

#48

Carya

May i make a charecter

May i add my character to your fan-fiction

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 22:11

#49

Shadow-Arcanus

character

gender: male

color: yellow

likes: machinery, gremlins

dislikes: monsters, obnoxios people

hobbies: inventing things, dissembling the clockworks, conversing with gremlins

personality: keeps to self, loyal, a tinkerer

arsenal: wild hunting blade, polaris, grey owlite shield, mercurial mail (wolver cloak), mercurial helm (magic hood)

Mon, 10/17/2011 - 22:13

#50

Shadow-Arcanus

character

gender: male

color: yellow

likes: machinery, gremlins

dislikes: monsters, obnoxios people

hobbies: inventing things, dissembling the clockworks, conversing with gremlins

personality: keeps to self, loyal, a tinkerer

arsenal: wild hunting blade, polaris, grey owlite shield, mercurial mail (wolver cloak), mercurial helm (magic hood)

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An old outdated fanfic.