Spiral Knights - The Other Person

The Other Person

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Tue, 11/29/2011 - 15:01

Jmtheawesome

And so, we begin the last part of the triology. Sadly, this story will go on no more when it's role has been done.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GEWkIANz4I (1)

Prologue / Loose Ends (1)

(Third Person)

It seemed only yesterday that Arus would be here, standing on the Auction House with his sword over his shoulder. But now, that had all changed. Where once was a Clear Blue Sky, was now only a dark swirl of clouds with the hint of the aura from the Force Field was the only thing that reminded us where we used to be.
Where once were places brimming with knights were only places in the dark where only those with a soul as strong as Soulwood. In this case, there wasn't anyone like that.
Except, for them.
They were the ones who accompanied Arus on the way to the Geat Colony, to avenge us for his own crime. But now, where has he gone? His friends were now simply gaurding the City, from anything else that posed a threat to anyone. That also included everyone who dared to step out of line.
Bright streets beaming with population were now void with anything other than thieves waiting for the next recruit to come by. But still, where has he gone?

The swarm took over the clockworks, making every living creature evacuate to Haven. Every single enemy of any type was in some place in Haven, regardless. We learned from out mistakes, and sided with the monsters that once were our mortal enemies. Seems that Snarlbolax, and Vanaduke came back for some reason. Heh.
Anyway, where was I? Oh yeah.
Seems that the group got a new member. Now how did that happen?
Well, it was back when Haven was still sunny and beautiful. Seems Mystic isn't the only one who crossed paths with the Konjuring Kat, (who is at rest at the moment)
Sir-Shade of all people would be the one chosen to be half Wolver as well.
You should have seen Mystic when he found out. His eyes were bigger than dinner plates.
Now what you might be thinking is what do they do now? Where does this story end? Who the heck is saying this messege to you on the Forums?
Well, they wait. They wait for an answer what to do next. Because right now,
Hariko is already plotting revenge.
And where was Arus right then?
Well, someone said.
He's just viewing us.
From.
The Other Side.

Tue, 11/29/2011 - 17:29

Windsickle

Oh.

4th again. Heh.

Wed, 11/30/2011 - 05:18

Softhead

YES!

I can't wait. Would everyone else appear from The other Side/Story?
If so, I made a few changes from chuck to make him like how you portrayed him In The Other Side plus from a new threat( just a few!)

After The events of the first story, Chuck was drafted into an experiment where he was mutated with a chromalisk named mr Chroma. Mr Chroma died and Chuck gained stealth abilities. Mr Chroma didn't die, but his consious went into Chuck. That's good for a conersation when he is loney. Chuck now works as a Mercinary and published his life from birth to The Other Side called ''Memoires of a Devilisk''. He is currently bored with his life and wished he was with Arus and gang again.

He is rude,sarcastic and even more straightforward and less nice after not being included in the epilouge
(Breaking 4th wall!) but is kind. Loves money now since he has to make a living.
Ironicly he said to be so good that he killed 1000000 things in one day and set a record(actualy it was only plants)

Wed, 11/30/2011 - 13:45

Jmtheawesome

OKAY! Lets get down to

OKAY! Lets get down to BUSINESS!
First off, there are 5 slots for new characters, no more, no less. :)
Second off, Sir-Shade has joined the group, Necro has returned, and has joined as well. :)
Third of all, all of the people in the original group will DIE A MISERABLE DEATH. >:L
Just kidding! o_o ..or am I..?

==CHAPTER ONE==

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXIYNADL5xo&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zYntKfHUMk4&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C96MmBn3R-o (3)

Chapter One /o/

The Journey of a thousand miles begins with one step.

(Necro Narrative)
The Lantern in my hand cast an Amber glow through my surroundings, dark figures soon became ruined signs and rubble all left in the wake of the Darkness. A short muffling noise behind me alerted all senses I had, I threw a rock in the direction, hoping it was just a snipe or a wolver. Turns out, whatever I hit wasn't either one of them. Instead, a figure rushed towards me with a silhoutte of a sword in the Lanternlight. I swung my Khorovod forward, attempting a side-strike when he darted backward. Leaving an opening in his chest. I thrusted with my other hand my Triglav, instead of spearing him pushed him against a nearby wall. A grunt made me smile, as I pushed the side of my blade against his throat, not cutting him rather pushing him to the wall. As the lanternlight brought some sun into the face of who I was attempting to kill, I backed away.
"Dusk, what the heck are you doing here at this hour?" Asking as I sheathed my swords back into their scabbards.
"We got an Alarm that there was a bandit party coming this way, they must have passed," Dusk whiped the dirt from his armor.
"Isn't Mystic tagging along with you?" I asked quietly, there could be someone watching us.
"He was, but he went a different route, Amber and Alex are coming too,"
"Hey anyways, you wanna come? We could use the help, they snagged money from 3 Spiral Order members," Dusk alerted some more senses.
"Whatever," I shrugged, walking with him past more corridors, until hearing what sounded like an explosion from a Super Blast bomb. We didn't even think twice before running into the darkness,

turning off my lantern to be safe about it. Some rustling noises and we approached the corner. I looked past it, and nobody was there, except for a dead body on the ground.
"Another one.." Dusk sighed.
"I GOT YOU NOW!!" A sudden scream burst from a doorway, and a massive figure leapt out of it and crashed into Dusk, a sword raised flashed in the moonlight.
"No! Mystic-" The figure was about to plunge his sword into Dusk's stomach, when I turned my lamp back on, a familiar trojan appearing in the light.
"Mystic? Got them covered yet?" Some more voices came from the doorway, and Alex with Amber following came out.
"No, just Dusk and Necro," Mystic whiped himself of dirt and got back up, reverting back into a Knight.
"Haven't seen you in a while," Amber smirked quietly.
"Ditto," As we turned to face eachother. Some loud music then erupted from a direction.
"The bar.." Mystic growled silently, pointing in the direction of a lit building where dancing silhouttes moving to the beat of music were seen in the distance.
"I was ABOUT to go there..." Alex laughed, unsheathing Lachesis.
"Okay then, from the sound of the music they're playing there, there should be alot of Knights, drunk, and with their weapons, they already know we're coming," Amber pointed out.
"How do they know?" I asked, "I thought this was a stealth mission," I asked, a little confused.
"Apparantly, Mystic had to go and laugh out loud after he killed a Bandit," Dusk rolled his eyes. Mystic's expression: ^_^"
"Fine, we'll go in through the front, you guys go through the back," Dusk ordered, signaling for us to go.
"Necro, get your swords ready, this'll be fun," Smirking as we ran off again.(1)

(Dusk Narration)
We arrived quickly, as if we simply teleported ourselves there.
"Ready guys?" Necro asked, carrying his Triglav and Sudaraska.
"Whatever," Alex smirked, running off in the direction of the back door.
"Wait! ALEX-" Amber yelled, but soon stopped when Alex turned to see her, and tripped on a trash can, faceplanting into the ground with a loud thud. Mystic facepalmed, and walked along the same path. Necro was already standing by the door.

(2)
Loud, the only way to describe it.
IT
WAS
FLIPPING
LOUD >:(
All of that practically changed, once a Knight or two caught a glimpse of the two knights coming through the door.
"HEY! ITS DUSK AND THAT NECRO GUY!" A loud shout came from the back, some knights brought out their swords, some grabbed the bottles they were drinking out of, and the knights on the stage with their instruments were looking agry as well. (2)
"GET 'EM!" Another loud shout, and a large cluster emerged from the crowd and rushed off the tables. (3)
"Necro, you get the left side," I ordered, he nodded and ran in another direction, as a Knight came from behind and attempted a thrusting attack. I stepped to the side as his sword was planted into the wall, I twisted his hand to make him scream, and pushed him onto the floor. Two knights came from both sides of me, I only stepped backwards for them to crash into eachother, a clang of armor broke the music that the band started to play. A HUGE number of knights appeared before me, their swords all pointed outward with another group with theirs pointed forward in front of me. I backed away, to find myself next to a corner.
Crap.

Wed, 11/30/2011 - 13:52

Jmtheawesome

For any joining Readers...

Areas with *'s are NEEDED.

*Name:

*Race:

Color:

Weapons:

Armor:

Personality:

*Likes:

*Dislikes:

Die Early?:

Small Bio:

AND TEH FINAL QUESTION

THAT DETERMINES UR FATE.

Do you like Kozma's cooking?:

Thu, 12/01/2011 - 23:58

Windsickle

Heheheh!

*Name: Zooduth/"Zood"

*Race: Gremlin (Darkfang Demo)

Color: Mostly red (due to large number of uncared for stains and red "paint" on armor and fur)

Weapons: Anything explosive but mostly 5* Bombs.

Armor: Standard issue Darkfang Demo armor/clothes

Personality: Pyromaniac, explosive fanatic, violent, destructive, evil, noisy, hyperactive, insane, etc.

*Likes: Bombs, explosives, murder, sugar, violence, running, jumping, gore, food (including hot, spicy, and disgusting), caffeine, laughing, speed, bright lights, drinks, destruction, heat, loud sounds, mayhem, chaos, etc.

*Dislikes: Silence, being bored, sleeping, sitting still, wearing fancy clothes,

Die Early?: He doesn't care. As long as he goes out with a KABLAMOOMAMANANG!

Small Bio: Though there are many rumors, nobody, Gremlin or otherwise really knows where Zooduth came from or how he became insane. He has lived life as a mercenary for whomever will hire him and causes as much destruction as the jobs allow and was also wanted in many areas in the Clockworks and Surface alike before the Void. He will destroy whatever he's told regardless of who or what it is and will destroy whatever he wants if no one tells him otherwise (not guaranteed). He has joined the survivors in Haven only because he happens to find it insanely funny to blow up Void creatures and he likes the food (much to the other survivors' fortune).

AND TEH FINAL QUESTION

THAT DETERMINES UR FATE.

Do you like Kozma's cooking?: YES HE DOES.

Wed, 11/30/2011 - 19:23

Jmtheawesome

-_(\

The power of copy and paste amazes me.

Anyways..

YOU GOTTA HELP ME MAN MY TIE IS EVIL AND ITS GONNA KILL MEEE!!

Thu, 12/01/2011 - 20:23

Nechrome

where did I come from? I

where did I come from? I thought that I ended up in one of my stories? And isn't Necro a bad guy? It seems like he's working with teh goodies now.

also, edit for you. you say i have a khorovod, then a suduruska. typo. unless I have both.

Thu, 12/01/2011 - 20:46

Windsickle

Goodie Goodie Gumdrops

He's working with the "goodies" because the "baddies" got "out-baddied" by the Void.

Thu, 12/01/2011 - 21:06

Jmtheawesome

word

My laptop is acting up, chapters will be coming at a bit of a slower rate. :(

PLOTHOLE FILLERS

Necro came back when a he dropped from the sky when Arus disappeared.
In my first story, the "his" in where Mote put Lachesis Blade into reffered to Alex's scabbards.
Imnoobandimproud requested her character to be removed. ;(
Where does her weapon go to?
Note: Watch out from Amber.

4 Character slots remaining.
GRAB DEM WHILE THE VOID IS STILL KEPT OUT! GRAB THEM! SAVE YOURSELVE- (End of Transmission)

Thu, 12/01/2011 - 21:12

#10

Nechrome

but Necro is a cold-blooded

but Necro is a cold-blooded killer! He can't be working with teh goodies! he's supposed to kill them!

no, but really. it's sort of wierd that he's working with the goodies. And this'll complicate Rise of Necropolis quite some bit... evil Necro was supposed to get killed by good Necro. but I guess I can adapt.

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 06:43

#11

Jmtheawesome

HA-DO-KEN

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4SdDjsnI28&feature=relmfu (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5YJAfmK3SPU&feature=related (2)

Chapter Two /0/

(Dusk Narrative)(1)
Heavy music beat from the loudspeakers, crashing waves of music fell upon the room like a Tsunami, drowning almost every other voice in a deep level of sound. Up against a corner, a Gremlin rose up from the crowd, a bomb in his hand. 5* by the looks of it. He threw his bomb forward, reacting quickly as throwing it back. Hot potato anyone? >:) He chucked slightly, throwing it above my head shattering the window. A loud explosion followed by a comical "MY CAR" rang from outside. He laughed again, not seeing I had already sent him backwards, crashing into a Knight or two. One tripped me with a chair, landing loudly on the floor. I looked up to find myself surrounded, knights on every direction.
"Who do we have here? Another member of the Original Group?" The same gremlin laughed dimly.
"TROJAAAAAAAAAN CHAAAARGE!" A sudden outburst from behind the crowd made heads turn, as knights were thrown to the side.
"Mystic?" I yelled, scrambling onto my feet as I dodged a massive object that simply faceplanted into a Wolverale Cabinet, landing on the floor as a Knight.
"Duskie?" Mystic swaggered, some Wolverale from broken bottles on the top shelves dripped into his mouth.
"Oh crud," Amber facepalmed, walking in through a doorway in the backround. Depthy, isn't it?
A flash of purple and black, and suddenly a huge amount of Knights slammed against the wall, pushed by a massive object. The same object rounded a table, jumping off the top and kicking off a wall, landing on a couple unlucky knights. A burst of Golden Purple flashes registered that Alex decided to join too.
"Heh, don't forget about me," Necro snarled from behind, jumping off a chair and swinging both of his weapons downward, landing hits on knights that were thrown forward, crashing down another table. (1)

/MEANWHILE/.. (Burp Narrative) (2)

Kozma brought the pot up from the heater, bubbling with steam spouting off the top faster than Mystic throwing up. Note: >:)
"Um, it boiled for 45 minutes, and I added some Blaze Pepper," Kozma shrugged, taking a seat back at her table.
"I love my job.." I smiled slightly, peering into the pot of bubbling something. (IT STRIKES AGAIN!!) I dipped a spoon into the pot, taking it out to find a black foul-smelling fluid to fill the spoon. I digested the contents spoon and all.
"Awful," I whiped my "mouth", Kozma smiling with accomplishment.
"See Amber? Thats when you apply 100% effort in your cooking," Kozma walked back to her table, setting off the heat and taking a seat. (RHYME TIME)
"GAH!" A sudden scream interuppted the class, and then 3 familiar gremlins burst through the door, tripping on eachother respectively.
"What may I assist you in?" Looking down at Mote, Donovan, and Andrein who were sprawled across the floor.
"It's.." Mote stammered.
"It's what?" Jumping down from my chair.
"It's Chuck, he fell into a Labratory machine, and the speciment in the other container was a Chromalisk, Dr. Chroma actually," Donovan panted. I stared at them with a little disbelief, and some of the class giggled a little bit.
"Hush your vocals," I glared back at them.
"Chuck's in the infirmary at the moment, he says he wants to see us right now," Andrein added, Kozma immeadiately got up from her seats.
"The rest of the class, work on Page 56, the Purple Pudding," I ordered, stepping out the door heading to the infirmary. (2)

(NOTE, Sir-Shade's character will be added sometime around chapter 3-4)

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 06:46

#12

Jmtheawesome

:P Riddley riddley riddle.

If you can find a reoccurring joke in all of my stories, you shall win a nifty prize.

The prize is... if someone gets it...

A preview from my next story, Data Knights. :)

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 10:48

#13

Nechrome

Kozma's cooking?

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 13:34

#14

Windsickle

Mystic throwing up?

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 16:36

#15

Axonio

Using "Something" as a food

Using "Something" as a food name¿

Sat, 12/03/2011 - 16:50

#16

Blindshot

Expressions?

Random expressions/emotes of the characters? (ex: >:D)

Mon, 12/05/2011 - 18:25

#17

Jmtheawesome

Axonio is correct. :D Preview

Axonio is correct. :D Preview anyone?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4SdDjsnI28&feature=relmfu (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5YJAfmK3SPU&feature=related (2)
Chapter Three /o/ Breaking Through

(Amber Narrative)
I sent a fist spiraling into the chest of a drunk knight, he wailed before falling to the floor head first. I noticed a fire pot in the corner, and the ideas of what to do with it filled my head faster than Mystic could eat. I shoved another knight onto a table, somersaulting before landing on the floor. Mystic, yelled victorious and drunk, landing his blade into the floor, shaking the entire room. I quickly grabbed the pot, and turned to face everyone else in the bar wide-eyed. A gremlin stepped up, and threw an Irontech Destroyer overhand, heading straight towards me. I only ducked for the bomb to fly through an open window. A loud explosion followed by numerous wails of burning destruction silenced the room.
"OH THE PAIN!!!" Someone outside yelled, agony straight in his voice.
"IT BURNS! OH HOW THE MISERY OF IT ALL! SOMEONE PUT IT OUT! SOMEONE PUT IT OUT!" Alex facepalmed, and grabbed an oil pot in the corner, and threw it in my direction, ducking again I found the oil pot to sail right through the window. I feel bad for that man. The fighting soon resumed, by Alex landing a hit on the loudspeakers. I quivered slightly, two or three knights caught me in their eyes, and ran towards me with their swords in a mad charge. Shockburst Brandish, Iceburst brandish, and Fireburst Brandish. Sidestepping to avoid an overhead from the knight which had the Shockburst. Landing a punch on him, I looked away to see a Fireburst Brandish preparing it's explosive charge attack. I grabbed the arm of the one with the Iceburst Brandish, spinning for him to be in front of the charge. I rolled out of the way, and a loud explosion followed by ANOTHER scream left a smile on my face. :)

(Mystic Narration)
The bar started to clear up, some knigths scrambled out the doors hoping their lives would be spared. As heck that would happen. I grabbed Dusk, and threw him clear across the room for no reason whatsoever, crashing into a loudspeaker. I chuckled slightly, before a Gremlin with a 5* bomb hurled a Radiant Sun Shards. I crushed the bomb with my hand, and headed towards him with my sword raised. Leaping out of the way of my attack, he escaped through the back door. At last, nobody else was here. Except that is, for me, Dusk, Amber, Necro, Alex, and a couple other dead bodies here and there.
"It's all clear," Dusk came up, whiping sweat from his forehead.
"I guess so," Amber snapped in, a grin matching Frande Scarlet (LOL) was still stuck on her face.
"So you think you can mess up my bar!?" A voice behind us alerted senses, as we turned to see a really ticked off gremlin, blowing steam faster than Kozma's cooking.
"Um.. who are you?" Necro stared at the Gremlin from a chair.
"Zooduth, Zood if you dare," Glaring like we called him.. i dunno, an Imp?
"Ok.. Zooduth," Alex walked up from behind him. (FLANDRE SCARLET SMILE) Alex raised his sword, glittering with pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty- what!? Oh, pretty lights. Zooduth dashed behind Alex right before he was about to drop his sword onto Zood's head like a chunk of firewood. Alex turned around only to find that his sword was stuck into the floorboards. Zooduth looked at him with a smug grin.
"Alex.." Amber has a face of "I totally see this coming".
"What?" He turned to look at Zooduth quietly placing Proto Bombs around Alex.
"Proto? You gotta be serious-" Alex only said those last words, until the bombs broke the floorboards and sent Alex, with his sword still in the floorboards into the Wolverale basement. Zooduth grinned maliciously.
"Oh cool! I didn't know I could bend like tha-" Alex's comment broke the awkward silence, and maybe forth wall, then the most horrifying line ever spoken in the history of Fanfiction broke the voice of the Narrator.
"OH MY GOD THIS HURTS LIKE HELL OH MY GOD!!" (1)

(Sir-Shade Narration) (2)
I stood next to the door of the infirmary, the words on the door was written in a red substance. Blood I think. Footsteps alerted my senses as I turned to face 3 gremlins, a jelly cube, and a knight running at full speed, about to crash into the ground and leave drag marks.
"Shade?" Kozma broke her speed, looking at me with some kind of disturbance.
"What're you doing here?" Burp asked.
"I saw the demonstation of Mr. Chroma's experiment," Explaining coldly.
"Chuck's inside, oh, and by the way, Chuck wrote a book about his life until now," Adding as we opened the doors to find the 3-room infirmary almost empty. In one, a Knight bleeding from his head down laid in the medical bed, followed by a Gremlin scorched through and through. And last, but a weird mix of Purple, Green, and the colors between gave way to a weird looking devilisk sitting on the chair.
"Hello," Chuck laughed slightly, before disappearing into thin air. (2)

Mon, 12/05/2011 - 18:26

#18

Jmtheawesome

PREVIEW TIME

(Qwex Narrative)
"And without further ado, I would like to welcome our new and returning students to our school," The principle bellowed over a microphone. We didn't need a microphone and forty-something speakers, his voice was clearer than a window without glass.
"Geez, boring," Valgus sighed, turning to look at me from behind his chair.
"Tell me about it..." Kala yawned.
"Hey, you guys heard of the Death Web?" Lunia whispered, making sure no other students were listening.
"What?" I leaned in.
"Some say, when theres an energy storm, you can look up a certain website and see people in it," Interested, I leaned in closer.
"Pfft, that's completely stupid," Valgus shrugged, Kala was still intrigued.
"Okay then, go look it up yourself, and we'll see then," Lunia smirked, handing him a slip of paper.
"Got it," Valgus grinned, reading the paper.
"Weird," He shrugged, placing it in his bag.
"Hey, you two, shush it," A nearby student harshly whispered.
"Okay okay, dont get your Plate Set a new dent," Valgus growled, I pulled them apart.
"Sheesh, not even noon yet and your already picking a fight," Kala's expression matched =,="

Mon, 12/05/2011 - 18:30

#19

Windsickle

@Jmtheawesome: Where does (1)

@Jmtheawesome: Where does (1) start? Or rather, when? You leave out those numbers a lot by the way. Start ones and end ones. It gets kind of confusing.

Mon, 12/05/2011 - 18:49

#20

Axonio

"Axonio is correct." Hell

"Axonio is correct."

Hell yeaaah B-)

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 15:01

#21

Jmtheawesome

Chapter 4!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQyyUo2neDo (1)

Chapter Four /o/ Chuckralisk

(Kozma Narrative) (1)
In a second, Chuck simply disappeared into nothing, we looked at the area he was in for a second or two, then reappearing as fast as he disappeared.
"How did-" Burp stammered, quivering.
"The experiment was on morphing two creatures together," Chuck explained lightly. "I was unlucky enough to fall in the other container.
"What explains the invisibility?" Mote walked up close to me.
"He was a Chromalisk, DURRRRR," Chuck stuck his tongue out, laughing a bit.
"Here I!" And with a clinkering sound, and a light crash, an Isotrode struddled from behind.
"Durr?" Andrein started to him, taking note of the green lights brighter than before.
"Yes, this Durr," Replying.
"Haven't seen you in a while," Donovan patted his shoulder, before being lightly shocked by loose circuitry.
"Dusk, sent, messege, meeting, tommorow," He beeped in a rapid succesion, before straddling off through the doorway.
"It's ok guys, this won't hurt me, actually, I like this," Chuck laughed lightly.
"Are you sure?" I walked to his side, purple and green clashed in an.. awkward conflict.
"Does Mystic throw up faster than a waterfall?" He bounced off his chair, landing on the floor neatly.
I shrugged, and looked at the clock, it was already 10:00.
"Geez, we stayed up pretty late.." I yawned, before walking out the door, ready to simply collaspe on the floor. (I hate u rhymes >:U)

(Amber Narrative)
I rushed forward to Zood, he didn't look until I grabbed him by the back of his armor, and knocked him unconcious.
"What did you do that for?!" Dusk snarled, looking at me like I had a Flandre Scarlet expression. In that case, yes.
"Hurf," Growling back.
"Hey GUYS! My BACK IS STILL BENDING!" Alex called from below, hurting and maybe dying.
"Um.. you take care of Zooduth I'll get Alex," Rushing down the stairs without another word. I looked back, as Dusk hesitated with the help of Mystic grabbed Zooduth and carried him out. I hope I didn't kill him or anything...
"Hey um, Necro?" I walked past him, he turned to face me as I stood in the doorway of the stairs.
"Yeah?" He answered back
"There's a meeting tommorow, you should come," And without another word, I walked downstairs to get Alex.

/AT THE DORM\
(Genome Narration)
Some knocking at the door interuppted my reading, finding Alex, Necro, Durr, Dusk, Amber, Mystic, Chuck, Mote, Andrein, Donovan, Burp, and Kozma waiting impatiently outside.
"What took you so long? I started cooking something," Pointing to a pot I was cooking with.
"I added some Wolver Tail, Blaze Pepper, Soul Dust, and Maybe a Pinch of Forbidden fruit," They stared wide eyed.
"Um, can we just eat dirt instead?" Dusk piped from the back. (1)

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 15:32

#22

Mysticbeam

WTF

im am NOT drunk! >:L u meanie :OOOO. im glad mystic the awesome shape shifting trojan is back tho xD

u better give me a good part and NOT carry out the threats that u made O.O

btw guy, im glad to know im famous (windsickle remembered me! :3)

:DDDDDD happy to know ur making a new book, the first one rocked(it had me and dusk and kozma and amber and tony in it :DDD)

the second one SUCKED (horrible plot and me amber kozma dusk and tony are NOT in t :( )

this one looks good( me and dusk in it, plot lookin good :DDD)

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 15:43

#23

Duskfinder

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!@#$%&*?/_"'()-+;:,.€¥£~=\^[]¡:(;):)¦><}{¿:'(:o:P:$:S:,.

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 15:44

#24

Duskfinder

^^^

Srry caps lock...
What I meant to say was , nice story

Wed, 12/07/2011 - 16:22

#25

Valorai

Its a little late. Can I

Its a little late. Can I join?

Name:Blue

Race:Oh...I dont know..... SKOLVER!!!!

Color:Light bluish

Weapons: Claws/fangs

Armor: Thick coat of fur

Personality: Agressive. Friendly to friends. Fast. Very experienced fighter.

Likes: Mystic (He tastes good) The taste of spiral knight metal.

Dislikes:Getting her fur coat dirty. When Mystic trojan charges her.

Die early?: No. She's too unkillable.

Small bio: Very secretive about her past. No one knows. But if you want to know. Ask a corpse.

NO!! Kozma's cooking gives meh a rash.

Thu, 12/08/2011 - 15:48

#26

Fallconn

character entry :D

name:Falcon

race:Spiral knight

Personality:Heroic,Helpful,Funny

Gear,Vog cub set, Wild hunting blade, Polaris, Divine Avenger, Acheron, Grand flourish, Heavy plate shield

Color:Red

Likes: Being heroic and beating the crud out of enemies

Die early?: heck no i'm invincible

Small bio: when he was on the skylark he accidentally burned his entire body by dropping some special chemicals on himself thus setting his entire body on fire...now for some strange reason he can ignite his entire body on fire just by thinking about it

Dislikes: All foes

Gender: Male

Other:Sometimes in a fit of rage will throw aside his sword and beat enemies with his flaming fists of fury

Fri, 12/09/2011 - 15:01

#27

Jmtheawesome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mH_uhIHuhKI (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-Z6E5ResUg&feature=related (2)
Chapter Five /o/ ..where..

(Arus Narration)
I woke up with a jolt, taking quickly my surroundings, shaking off the drowsiness in a flash.
Black. Black as night.
"Hello?" I yelled into the darkness. No response.
"Hello...." A deep voice echoed from one direction.
"Hariko?" The tone struck a nerve, and then a splotch of Purple appeared in the corner of my eye.
"Arus.." He hissed, walking towards me.
"Never give up, do you, well I guess I'll just have to-" I unsheathed Endpoint, about to bring it down on Hariko when he grabbed the blade.
"Hmm?" I grumbled, pressing the blade farther, until Hariko gave a smile, and pulled the blade upwards, pulling me apart from it. I landed on my back as I faced him, he held Endpoint in his hands with a menacing look.
"You won't be needing this anymore," He cackled with laughter, then gripping the middle section of the blade.
"What!?" I ran forward, then with a crush of his hand, he broke the sword into two. The blade and the handle fell seperately, then turning into ashes and fading away. I backed a step, before Hariko rammed into my stomach, knocking the wind out of me as I slid along the ground.
"Tsk, tsk," He waved his finger, charging dark energy in his fist. I picked myself up, and ran in the other direction to find that I was blocked by an invisible wall.
"Gah," I muttered, to find my arm speared against the wall by a slit of energy, brimming with darkness. Blood dripped from my hand, as I turned to face Hariko again, with both hands charged with energy.
"Good night," He snarled, and the last thing I could scalvage from my memory was him gripping my head with both hands, then darkness.
The darkness that once again roamed my thoughts.
And then, nothing. (1)

(Bloodless Narration) (2) CUE HAPPY MUSIC)
I floated over the table where everyone was eating at, grabbing another something from my plate.
"Um, Evan," Alex looked up from his food.
"Yeah?" Evan looked up from the end of the table.
"Would you have any idea where Arus went?" Some eyes turned. All except for Burp.
"Um," Evan staggered.
"Um what?" Dusk stood up, looking at him. I stared at both of them.
"No clue," Evan sat back down, stuffing his face (and mouth) with whatever he could eat.
"Okay..." They both sat back down.
Then, a horrifying smell broke everyone's eating. We all stared at eachother for a second, then we looked at where the smell was coming from.
"Oops!" Genome laughed lightly.
"God.. we need good cooking around here," Chuck yelled from his seat.
*BOOM* (2)

Sun, 12/11/2011 - 21:15

#28

Jmtheawesome

http://www.youtube.com/watch?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sYjgv4lafwI&feature=related (1)

Chapter Six /o/ Chapter Six /o/ Chapter Six /o/ Inception >:D

(Dusk Narrative)
Usually, this music would be playing the moment Amber finds out I stole her cookie, or that I did something to Mystic while he was sleeping. But anyways, back to real time.
So.. where was I? Oh, the really big explosion.
*BOOM*
"What-" Mote immeadiately got up from his chair, before the sound gave way to a huge wall where the doorway was, an eerie purple mist coming from the outside.
"Arus?" Evan stammered, a silhoette of a gremlin showed up, a sword in his hand.
"Arus!" As the figure stepped out, Arus alright.
We all turned to look at him, his expression blank.
"Arus? Are you okay?" Amber walked forward to him, until something caught my eye.
"Amber, step back!" I yelled, and pointed to the red in his eyes.
"What?" She turned her head, before Arus stepped forward, and swung the sword he had in hand as well. (1)
Amber was lucky enough to dodge that one, landing safely as she scrambled forward.
"That.. isn't Arus.." Evan stared wide-eyed.
"EVAN..." Arus snarled, the sword he held glowed with an uneasy purple aura.
"Hariko.." Evan gasped.
"Hari-who?" Alex asked, before "Arus" started walking towards the table.
"First instinct, run," Genome flashed out of his chair, heading towards the stairs.
I then looked at Arus again, and jumped out of my chair just for him to slash my chair into peices.
"What's wrong with you?" I landed on the floor back first.
Arus remained silent, and the demonic sword in his hand flashed a purple light.
And then, darkness.

(Mystic Narrative)
A scream coming from Dusk broke my nerve, as I scrambled for ths stairs.
"Haven't we been in this road before?" Ether floated through the staircase.
"SHUT UP AND RUN!" Tony scampered up the stairs.
Another loud explosion, and I looked down from where I was standing. Arus was down there, and looked at us with a devious smile. (1)

(Zooduth Narrative)
I kicked a can down the dark alleyway, a little depressed.
"Hmph.. no Wolverale for me.." I shrugged, juggling a bomb between my hands.
"Aren't we all miserable.." I looked in the direction of a deep vocal.
And from an alleyway, a Skolver followed by a Knight in a Vog Cub set walked out from the shadow.
"Lemme guess.." The Skolver grinned.
"Them?" The Knight added, flashing a semi-heroic grin, also Brandishing a Wild Hunting blade.
"Who? I have no idea what your talking about.." I lied through my hood.
"Dont worry, we can get back on them for it... Im Blue," Barking like a microphone.
"Falcon, I'm just making sure he doesn't KILL anyone.." The Knight introduced as well.
"Zooduth, and I may know where they live," As we walked along a cold path, a new idea starting to juggle between us.

Thu, 12/15/2011 - 05:40

#29

Jmtheawesome

Tralalallla, dunno why im singing! Tralalalalala

Just in case you're lost in this...

•Links are for music, open in another tab.
•You die for real this time, no exceptions.
•Lana is out of the story.
•There WILL be really depressing parts.
•Due to violent content,parental discretion is advised.
•Pease, turn off all cell phones and pagers.
•You are reading this sentence.
•Muahahahahahahahahahaha....

Thu, 12/15/2011 - 17:52

#30

Jmtheawesome

Chapter from a LONG TIME. >:L

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdGy0dN65L0&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZj2TENVAjI&feature=related (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mH_uhIHuhKI&feature=related (3)

Chapter Seven /o/ Shattered

(Alex Narrative)
I opened the latch of the roof door, rusty as the lock screetched open.
"What do we do?!" Amber yelled from the back.
"Fight and die, fight and die, or jump off the edge and die?" Mote sneered sarcastically.
"I got you now.." And I could hear a nerve snap, as Arus rounded the corner, an odd look in his eyes.
"GO!" As I stepped out into the top of the building, an eerie wind blew across the top. We spread across the roof, armed ready for Arus to leap out of the doorway.
"Do we have to kill him again?" Evan whimpered.
"I hope not-" I started, before a sudden burst of energy erupted from the doorway, exploding in midair. I coughed for a moment.
"5 years and 2 score ago... " A deep voice toned from the mist.
"Arus attempted to slay me, instead sealing me away in the graveyard.."
"For 5 years I waited, until I came back, and decided to get rid of all of you, once.. and for all..." Silence fell upon the rooftop, until a large explosion triggered a fault in one side.
"W-woah.." Tony staggered, until the corner of the building he was standing on started to chip off. (1) (2)
"Starting... with YOU!" And then the shout gave way to another burst of energy spiraling at Tony. Leaping out of the way to luckily dodge the blast.
"Guys, it's not Arus, someone's controlling him," Evan shouted, running towards him with his guns.
"What? I have no clu-" Confused, before I was knocked off gaurd by an explosion. I slid to the edge, nearly falling off.
"Erk.." I grumbled slightly, picking up Lachesis.
"Arus or not, we still have to kill him," Shade explained, turning into a Wolver and holding his sword in his mouth.
"Or.. we can just set him to sleep," Mote stepped forward, and smiled demonically with his bomb.
"Alex, diversion," Shade ordered, before running at Arus with his sword.
"Oh well.." I hesitated, before unleashing a bolt of swirling energy. It arced and spun, in varying patterns before exploding in front of Arus. A silhoette of a Wolver darted into the cloud. Barking and grunting intervined with other sounds as Arus was pushed out, landing stomach-first. Shade leapt onto his back, and held his sword dengerously close to Arus' neck. He then spun around, and blew Shade away into Tony, they both stumbled onto eachother, before Arus came with his sword. He brought it into an overhead stance. I lashed out another series of strikes. Arus sidestepped, and sent a punch into the side of my chest, I stumbled backwards, and found myself staring into the sky with a sword against my neck.
"Stand aside... or I'll kill Alex," He growled deeply, I could already feel Shade turning into a knight again. Mystic stared with a confused look.
My god Mystic.. if I die because of you... Imaging the look of Mystic stupidly rushing forward.
Those thoughts were interuppted as a Golden Bullet came out of nowhere, and struck Arus in the chest. He was knocked off his balance, falling on his back as well. I leapt of my height, and held my sword close against his neck. (2)
"Hariko, what do you want from us?" Evan kneeled down, his Argeant Peacemaker still steaming.
"You see... I need to take all of your souls to get to my full power... " Arus scowled slightly, his eyes purple.
"Hell that's going to happen," Genome answered angrily.
" What about your friend Dusk? " And then, my nerve snapped.
"Dusk?" I remembered, almost forgetting about him when we ran to the roof.
"He's just the first victim, well then, who's next? " And before I could react, my sword flew to the side.

(3) (Falcon Narrative)
The doors of the Orginals quickly set smiles.
"So, what're we going to do?" Zooduth asked.
"I dunno, steal one or two things," Blue answered, creaking open the door. We found the place lavishingly clean, all except for a body in the floor.
"Who's that?" As I kneeled down to inspect the knight.
"It's... Dusk.." Blue sorta took a step backwards.
"What is he doing laying on the floor like that?" Zooduth asked, pale as a Hailstone.
"Waiting for you..." And then, Dusk got up from the floor quicker than I could react. I stumbled backwards and impacted a wall behind me. Spots flew everywhere as I could feel Dusk grabbing my neck tightly, and could also feel the palms of my hands growing warmer and warmer.
I see stars and planets orbiting around my head, I don't think I can handle astronomy right now...
Finally, my nerve snapped, and my fists ignited. I pushed him back with a powerful punch, and plopped onto the floor. (3)

Fri, 12/16/2011 - 16:56

#31

Mysticbeam

whoa O.O

this is a pretty good plotline so far :). can u make it that that guy cant controll me while im in trojan form? :D

btw, kill alex for calling me an idiot :OOOO

Fri, 12/16/2011 - 19:11

#32

Duskfinder

U can't hide from the truth

U can't hide from the truth forever mystic :p

Sat, 12/17/2011 - 05:25

#33

Mysticbeam

now make dusk stay under the controll of the bad guy and get tortured(not killed) >:) :PPPPP take that dusk! :OOOO

Sat, 12/17/2011 - 06:15

#34

Duskfinder

What about just u dieing?

What about just u dieing? Sounds good to me :D

Sun, 12/18/2011 - 08:46

#35

Jmtheawesome

Blargha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZj2TENVAjI&feature=related (1)

Chapter Eight /o/ Backlash

(Arus Narrative)
Get out of me! I loudly thought back to Hariko, controlling me as I swept my blade narrowly missing Alex.
I never thought using you as my personal puppet would be so great... Hariko responded, I watched helplessly as I countered am overhead from Mystic with a twist of his arm.
Let.. GO! I yelled back into my head, throbbing as if Mystic whacked me overhead with his arm.
Believe me, I know how that felt.
Im content watching you squirm and choke fighting in your own blood... powerless to stop me.. And before I could think anything else, Genome swiped my leg, and I landed face-first onto the cinderblock roof. I heard Hariko grunt.
Heh, not so fun being the one to share my pain.. As I felt my eye bleed.
But the hurt of the ones who are dying, who are your friends..
*Nerve Snap*
Get out of me! I don't want anything to do with you! I never even wanted to be in this stupid role of fate only to know those who I knew are going to be nothing more than rotting piles of armor and flesh! I broiled under my skin, feeling the pain of Mystic pressing me into the roof with his foot.
"Who are you.. and what have you done to him?" Mystic growled, applying pressure made my face sink a little farther.
"Hariko, an evil from my past that has come back to kill me in the future, along with all of us, " With what little freedom I had, I was able to speak a sentence before Hariko took over again.
"What?" Mystic backed away, as I felt myself stand up.
"I'll be back.. and when I do, it'll be the end, for you AND your petty little friends.." Hariko growled through me, and before I could take over again, I felt myself flash out of Haven, and back to the hideout.

(Blue Narrative)
Falcon sent another punch into Dusk's open stomach, knocking him back as Dusk let go, stumbling upon eachother.
"Hrrk...." I heard Dusk grunt slightly, flashing out his Killowatt pulsar directed at me and Zooduth. I rolled out of the way of a bullet exploding right in front of me, Zooduth escaped by the skin of his teeth.
"This isn't... me..." Dusk's finger twitched against the trigger, his eyes a mix between helplessness and agony.
"What?" Falcon snuck up behind him, grabbing his arms and holding them against him. He then proceeded to knock him cold.
Dusk thudded against the carpet, his gun falling a meter away.
"We should get out of here," I stammered, about to walk out the door when a silevr bullet peirced the air behind me.
"Who... are you?!" And I turned to see a Female Knight standing with her Argeant Peacemaker pointed at at my forehead.
"Oh.. snap," Zooduth stammered slightly, about to run out the door when a Trojan Blocked the doorway.
Oh... crap. (1)

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Im actually.. really.. really.. sick, so the chapters might be really slow.
I cant even get through the day without having the feeling of throwing up. XD

Sun, 12/18/2011 - 11:42

#36

Duskfinder

u dont have to use all of them

Oh yea weapon update XD
I have Polaris, voltaic tempest , avenger, daring rigadoon , silversix

Mon, 12/19/2011 - 17:47

#37

Windsickle

Hope you get well soon (and

Hope you get well soon (and that it's nothing serious).

Tue, 12/20/2011 - 15:03

#38

My-Alts-Alt

..SILENCE!

And you might think Jm might be dead. :(

Dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

Tue, 12/20/2011 - 22:54

#39

Softhead

Don't say that!

He must have a bug.Poor dude, get well soon!

Wed, 12/21/2011 - 19:24

#40

Jmtheawesome

X_O Another.. Chapter *cough*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQyyUo2neDo (1)

Chapter Nine /o/ Munchy Munchy Munchy.... Crud

(Zooduth Narrative) (1)
"Who the heck are you? And what are you doing here?" The knight ordered, her gun still smoking.
"Uh... CARPENTERS!" I yelled out loud, she shot back a confused look.
"Yeah um... we're Carpenters...." Falcon grinned innocently. Expression: :)
"Orly?" The Trojan beheind me snorted. Expression: >:)
"Yeah.. um, YEAH! We ARE Carpenters!" Blue laughed.
"OK.. Well we have a leaking roof in Mystic's room, a dented wall in Alex's room, and I have bloodstains on mine, don't ask who's those are," She smiled again.
"What's Dusk doing on the floor?" The Trojan turned into a Knight, kneeling down.
"The Chlorine made him faint.." I added, taking another step near the doorway.
"Chlorine? I thought you were carpenter- OH..." The Female knight realized.
"I dont smell any Chlorine... THIEVES!" The Trojan/Knight wickedly yelled, and grabbed Falcon and Blue.
I was about to break it through the door before what felt like a sudden sensation to sleep right there in the doorway made me do what a regular person would do. I fainted.

(Mote Narrative)
I smiled creatively, as the Gremlin plopped out the doorway.
"Don't close the door, whatever you do," I pointed to Mystic.. AND Amber.
"Don't even bother to close it..." A familiar deep growl almost shook the room on whatever foundations it had left.
Where ARE Carpenters when you need them?
"W-w-who's that?" The Knight whimpered slightly.
"Oh, our dear friend... VOG," Amber cackled.
Cackled? Oh wait, perfect.
"First off.. i'm not on your side.. and second off... I got some GOOD news.. and some BAD news.." And before we could answer, Vog materialized on a chair, leaning casualy.
"What did I put in my drink.." The Skolver sunk slightly.
" Bad news... Arus has gone haywier and Dusk is close to death, Good news, you got three more people to help you out with,"
"What? Who?" I asked, he shot his glance in my direction.
"Well, safe to say, Blue, the Skolver in Mystic's left arm, Falcon, the knight in Mystic's right arm, and Zooduth, the unconcious Gremlin laying in the doorway," Vog pointed respectively, some immaterial ashes jumping off his finger.
"...What did we get ourselves dragged into?" Falcon growled, Mystic then releasing him and Blue.
"The worst mistake you ever made in the history of Cradle, in fact, I have a little story for you," And then Evan came out of nowhere.
"Huh?" I looked confused.
"Yeah.. you see..." (Place the Other Story here)

/MIDNIGHT/
"Ok... so this is where you guys are going to be sleeping..." I yawned, as I opened a vacant room, the bunk bed in the corner clean with sheets whiter than fresh snow.
Falcon, Blue, and Zood walked through the threshold, looking around their new "home".
"Who says we need to stay here?" Zooduth turned to look at me, arms folded, with a bomb in one.
"Just do what your told, it'll be the best while you're still here," I smirked, turning around to close the door.
When the door clicked shut, I heard some whispering coming from the room.
Ignoring.
(1)

Thu, 12/22/2011 - 04:16

#41

Duskfinder

NOOOOOO IM GOING TO DIEEE!! meh -_- *ME revives

Cackled? Lol

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 00:07

#42

Windsickle

Wait. Falcon, Blue, and Zood

Wait. Falcon, Blue, and Zood are just a random bunch of mercenaries and thieves right? How does Blue know what Dusk's name is in Chapter 7?

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 02:31

#43

Softhead

@Windsickle

They saved the Cradle from the Gremlins. They should be famous.

Fri, 12/23/2011 - 19:24

#44

Jmtheawesome

*cough* *cough* *cough* *sneeze* *cough* *cough* *chapter*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GEWkIANz4I (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdgPzyNbUQk (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvOQSOWTW24 (3)

Chapter Ten /o/ Dreaming in Dreams of Dreaming of Dreams About Dreaming of Dreams. AKA, Inception.

(Dusk Narrative)

I could feel myself being thrown onto my bed. (Literally) I couldn't move.
I wanted to scream to Mystic, but I couldn't move my lips either.
"Meh.. sleep I guess..." I heard him say, before some shuffling registered as him climbing to the top bed.
Welp. Whatever.

(NAP TIME!!!!!!!!!) (1)

"Welcome..." A voice shook me from my sleep, I woke up in my own dream.
I was sitting in a chair, the cushion softer than a new pillow. The room was pretty empty, except for it's red-ashy walls.
A large golden chair was sitting in front of me, two torches burning with a crimson fire were on either side.
"Where am I.." I shook my head, it throbbed with pain.
"This is a place where only those who are connected to thee may enter... " Another gust of vocals was sent into the room, reflecting through the walls and causing an echo.
"What's going on? I can't move.." I stammered, at least I could move my mouth.
"Right now.. the Swarm infested in Arus' body has now started to infest in yours.. but since Falcon knocked you out before the moments it would start to control you, the Swarm has now gone dormant.."
"Then why can't move at all?" I asked, my body stiff.
"That is a lasting effect of the Swarm, it will be gone in a few weeks..."
"Is there anything else I should know?"
"Tell Evan Vee said hi..." Then, my dream broke, shattering into pieces of conciousness and fading into dust. (1)

(Mote Narrative) (2) YES, it IS called Mistic, and that is purely coincidence. >_>)

"Durr, screwdriver," I stuck out my hand to him, he handed me the wrench.
"Um, this is the wrench.." As I handed it back to him, Durr placed it back on the shelf and took out the screwdriver.
"Now.. give me the Mod Calibrator.." As I stuck my hand out again.
Durr placed the Item into my hand, as I carefully placed it onto the new weapon.
A Fire-Pot Launcher. Capable of creating and shooting fire-pots at a frequency equal to a Magnus.
"When launcher is finished, who get it?" Durr asked, eyeing the fangled intrument.
"Dunno, someone who would like to launch Fire-Pots at will to burn everything in her way.. leaving everything a burning inferno in the wake, burning everything in sight and laying waste to everyone around her who would try to attack her..."
We stared at each other for a moment.
"Meh, can't think of anyone," We both said in unison.
"Welp, naptime?" Durr yawned. (?)
I couldn't answer.
I fainted right on a pile of screws.

(Hariko Narrative) Keep on playing 2)

I retracted myself from Arus, chains appearing around his legs as he fell onto the floor facefirst.
"Hmph," I smirked, staring at him as he pulled at the chains.
"What're you going to do once the Void has consumed this planet?" He asked me.
"I guess i'll simply move onto another planet, and then the next, and then the next, and so on so forth.."
"What?" He gasped.
"You see, I used the Chaos spell when I was in the graveyard, but since I wasn't "alive", It couldn't take full effect. But when you revived everyone, you revived me as well, I had to use a couple months to charge up my energy in order to use the spell, and then, the fruit of my work is done," as I explained, the darkness covering the planet was a mere side-effect.
"What about Necro coming back?" As I remember, the strange portal coming out of nowhere.
"That was not calculated for, whatsoever, he'll be wiped out along with all of your friends and every single living creature on the planet, you are dismissed," Finishing with a wave of my hand, the shadow envoloped him and disappeared.
"Now then... Swarm.." I called out, a dark mass bubbling in the middle of the room turned into a humanlike figure.
"..What, is the problem.. Hariko?" He hissed, the leader of the Swarm all mighty.
"We need some more people in our army... go infest the friends of Arus, and birng them here, you shall be rewarded afterwards," I order, pointing to a door I materialized, leading to Haven.
"Shout if you need my help," As Swarm began out the door.
"I won't need it.." He smirked, opening the door as he stepped outside. (2)

(Arus Narrative) (3)

I sat in the damp dungeon cell, the bones of random monsters scattered everywhere with blood pooling on the ground.
I overheard the conversation from above, listening helplessly as I knew what was going to happen next.
"I have to warn them.." I sighed, looking out the barred window of the cell. The full moon only visible from here glittered with an evil light.
"How.." I thought for a moment, then I got an idea.
I grabbed a sharp bone from the pile, and started to saw my way out, when I realized something.
It was a bone trying to saw through a soulwood bar. (3)
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HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 11:53

#45

My-Alts-Alt

Hee hee hee...

==SCENE ONE==

Boss: Hey Chuck, you need to work overtime.

Chuck: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QTQRCef590M&feature=related
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==SCENE TWO==

Bloodless: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HID2VK4bsEg&feature=related

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==SCENE THREE==

Amber: I cooked dinner! :D

Everyone: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AiW2rX90o0o&feature=related

_________________________________________-
==SCENE FOUR==

Burp: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_R9c_tK8yNA&feature=related
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==SCENE FIVE==

Arus: *quietly sitting down*

SUDDENLY..

Arus: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VDpoyXZmKJM&feature=related
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==SCENCE SIX==

Durr: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YSfleHFmUg0&feature=related
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Probably wont happen. XD

Sat, 12/24/2011 - 12:17

#46

Jmtheawesome

BAD CHAPTER

Note, people will change sides. :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQyyUo2neDo (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdGy0dN65L0 (2)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWFeqQXqGug&feature=related (3)

Chapter Eleven /o/ What's Behind You?

(Mystic Narrative) (1)
I saw quietly at the edge of the table. Sipping a bottle of Wolverale, as Ether floated above me.
"So.. did oyu finish the marketing proposal?" Ether asked from above.
"What?" I asked, confused.
"Never mind," Ether floated to the recycling can, and dumped his bottle in.
"Night," I waved, he waved back as he disappeared along the hall. (1)
Silence befell, and then, something fell in the back of the room.
"Hello....." A sudden eerie whisper was drawn from the dark shadows. (2)
"Who's there?" I stood up, and grabbed my sword, heavier then what I expected.
"Come...." It echoed along the stairwell, I walked towards the door.
I knocked slightly, and the door slid open.
"Hello?" I peeked my head in.
Then, something grabbed me by the face.
And I felt myself fall down the stairs, landing hardly on the floor, as I stood up. I felt around myself, and couldn't find my sword.
"Maybe I let go when I fell down the stairs.." I said to myself, when I was about to go through the open door, it shut tightly.
"Doomed are you..." A whisper in the dark fell into my ear, I turned around to face whoever was talking.
Nobody was here.
It was dark, really dark.
"Who are you?"
"A NIGHTMARE!" A shout emereged from the closet, as I could feel something grabbed my arms, legs, and body as I swept across the floor.
A ! went off in my head, as I transformed into a Trojan and stood my ground.
"Just give in..." It whispered into my head, as I slumped to the floor.
I tried to stand up, but whatever was holding me had an iron grip.
I felt myself being dragged along the stone floor, into the darkness. (2)

(Genome Narrative) (3)
I sat in my room, tossing around a couple thoughts about the current predicament.
"Dusk in unconcious... Mote is working on a new project... and Chuck is outside, weird," As I looked out the window, a flash of purple of green whizzed outside.
"Hey Genome!" Chuck called from outside, fluttering in the dark and cold wind.
"What?" I asked, opening the drapes.
"I just found a a one million grand check! SCORE!" Chuck laughed, bobbing up and down.
"Whatever," I shrugged, and picked up the book I found under Mystic's bed.
Silence befell me, for a minute, before I heard Chuck scream outside. (3) (2)
"GENOME!" Chuck yelled, I went to open the window.
"What-" I opened the drapes, to find what looked like a puddle of a black liquid covering Chuck, and trying to drag him into a puddle.
"Can you help me with this?" He fought against the sticky substance. I was outside in a flash, finding Chuck waist-high in the stuff.
"What IS this?" I growled, grabbing chuck by the arms and attempting to pull him out.
"I dunno, it's worst than Mystic's cooking I know.." He laughed slightly, before the subtance seemed to burp, and Chuck seemed to sink even more.
"Help!" Chuck flailed, splashing bits of it onto my arms.
I breathed in and out, steadily to try and pull Chuck out, but to no avail.
Before I could do anything else, Chuck disappeared right into the puddle.
"Chuck?" I asked, still feeling his arms.
But that wasn't the thing that surprsied me, as I could feel myself sinking into the stuff as well.
I reached for the side, before it started to pull, my waist starting to do down quickly. My face fell into the black liquid as I closed my mouth, holding my breath as I kept a steady hold on the outside. My strength sapped from my arms gave away, and I could feel myself being dragged into the watery stuff, losing conciousness.

Sun, 12/25/2011 - 15:33

#47

Jmtheawesome

Oochy! :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kWFeqQXqGug&feature=related (1)

Chapter Twelve /o/ Flashbackity BACK!

(Chuck Narrative) (1)
I woke up, with a slight tingling sensation.
Finding myself sleeping in a pile of bones.
"OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW OW" I yelled, jumping off and rubbing my back.
"WHO WHAT WHEN WHERE WHY," A figure woke up next to me, recognizing quickly.
Arus.
"Chuck?" He sat upright, and then two other shuffling noises came from the other corners of the room.
"Mystic? Genome?" I looked at them, confusion swept umong us.
I backed away from Arus, thinking he would try and stab my throat out or something.
"Guys, it's me," He stood up, gesturing himself.
"Me who?" Mystic snapped back.
"Me as in me,"
"Who me?" Chuck asked, tiling his head.
"No, the REAL me," Arus finished, rolling his eyes.
"How do we know it's you?" Mystic stepped forward, looking at him.
"Mystic, I read that book you keep under your bed, I can't believe you kept so many photos of-" Arus was about to say, when Mystic cut him off.
"OKAY, OKAY, it's Arus," Mystic shuddered, before the sound of an opening door following with it closing made us look in the direction of the doorway.
"Hariko," Arus growled moving to the bars as he stared at the figure.
"Yes," The figure sneered.
"Chuck, Mystic, Genome, out," He pointed to us, a wicked smile you would usually see on Amber when she's trying to kill someone. (LOLWUT)
I backed into the cell, staying away from Hariko when he stuck out a hand, and started to charge it with dark energy.
I felt myself float outside of the cell, alnding hardly on the floor.
What's going on? The voice inside my head registered, as I looked up.
Hariko stared grimly at Mystic and Genome, who were huddled in the corner.
"Out," He ordered, sticking out his hand again and causing the two of them to float out as well.
Arus was about to walk out of the cell, when the door shut tightly, a number of chains emerged and bound the door together.
Hariko walked out the door, and motioned for us to follow.
I decided I didn't like that guy.

(Mystic Narrative)
I wanted to run away from Hariko, only to find I was forced to walk whether I wanted to or not. I tried to transform into a trojan, only to find that the transformation was nullified by an object of some sort.
"Now then..." And suddenly, Hariko turned to a stop.
"Stand perfectly still, or else this might as well kill you.." As he placed his hand on my shoulder, glowing brightly when I felt a sudden pain in my chest.
Hariko concentrated further, as the pain grew stronger and stronger, enough to make me scream.
Hariko finally let go, as I felt my heart.
It wasn't beating.
"What.. did you just do?" I gasped for air, my throat dry.
"Steal your soul," He grimly chuckled, opening his hand to show me a small glowing orb, a trojan's crest etched into it.
"Don't worry, you'll still live," Hariko laughed, proceeding with Genome and Chuck.
He then took them, crushing in his hand.
Hariko groaned deeply, as what looked like a surge of energy burst through his body.
"Heh.. heh... heh.." Hariko panted, his clothing almost burst into flames.
"I want you three, to seek out and kill those you so called "friends," bring their souls to me, and you will be rewarded royaly," Hariko snarled.
"What? Heck no," I smirked, looking at him with a disgraceful glare.
"Oh really? Well, you'll be doing it whether you want it or not, Swarm, please come," He pointed to a dark bubbling mass behind us, shifting into a humanoid figure as I started to "walk" towards us.
"Take care of them," Hariko ordered, before walking away. (1)
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Also, congratulate Mystic for helping me with some..
*ahem*
details. :)

Sun, 12/25/2011 - 17:01

#48

Mysticbeam

yay

^-^

i haz beenz captured! SAVEZ ME!

Mon, 12/26/2011 - 16:58

#49

Jmtheawesome

instead of (#) and (#), it will be (start #) and (stop #)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_O0IlfxpaIk&feature=related (1)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ObOlaqhYGkw&feature=relmfu (2)

Chapter Thirteen /o/ OH MAH GOD EVERYONE RUN ITSA TUNA FISH SALAD!!!!!!1!1!11!!

(Dusk Narrative) (1) /10:00 AM/
Apparantly, the immobilization abated faster than I expected, being able to move the next day.
"Gotta find Evan," I said to myself, still dark outside, even though it was morning.
I hopped down the stairs, and found everyone already eating.
I walked to my chair, and sat down as I felt everyone's eyes were on me.
"Dusk, are you okay?" Amber put down her food, and looked at me from the end of the table.
"Yeah, completely fine, also, by the way, where's Evan?" I asked, just noticing now that Mystic, Chuck, and Genome weren't at the table.
"He finished early, and went to town square, crazy little gremlin isn't he?" Mote popped up, answering back.
"Ok, i'll be out for a little while," I took a bite of something and got off from my chair, about to open the door what Bloodless appeared by my side.
"You might need some company, there were more thieves on the streets now," Bloodless shifted into a orb, and floated above my head.
"Fine," I sneered, opening the door to the darkness outside.
I manifested my lantern, lighting it as a radius of amber light glowed warmly.
"Time to find him," I nodded towards Bloodless, as we began to walk the path to the Town Square.

(Bloodless Narrative) /10:30 AM/
We finally reached the square, looking around if there was anyone here.
Nobody to be seen, we were about to leave when there was a short muffling sound from the corner.
I walked towards it, when a black silhoette of a short figure appeared, then revealing to be Evan, blindfolded and tied with his arms behind his back.
"Get away! Get away I tell you! I won't tell anything!" He screamed, I cut his blindfold, as he was startled to see us.
"Evan? Who did this to you?" I turned back into my regular form, kneeling down to inspect his arms where the rope dug into his wrists.
"It was... actually, I really didn't know who, there was a small dot in the moonlit sky, then a flash of purple, and the next thing I find myself, I'm blindfolded and being asked about what I remember," He rubbed his wrists, still reddened.
"Thats right.." A trumpet solo- esque growl came from the corner, then another blurr of purple and green, and Dusk was on the ground.
"Dusk?" I leaned close to look at him, then felt his heart.
It wasn't beating.
"He's back.." Evan whimpered, grabbing his AP out of it's sheath.
"Who?" ( stop 1)
"ME!" With another scream, I darted out of the way fast enough for whatever was heading to me crash into a telephone pole.
( start 2)
Wait, telephones were re-invented?
"Chuck?" I looked at the thing that was sticking against the pole, green and purple.
"Chuck isn't anything mroe than a personal slave.." He growled, (trumpet anyone?)
I picked up Dusk, and motioned for Evan to follow, as I began to float upwards, Chuck following shortly. ( stop 2)

(Amber Narrative) /11:00 AM/ (Start 1)
"And now, the retail price of Chuck's "Memories of a Devilisk" has now increased! Pay or Die! " I sat near the radio, crackling random messeges.
Marketing has always been a mystery to me.
"Hey Amber," Alex called over, I looked at him while he was at the hologram computer.
"Yeah?" I got up from my seat, switching off the radio as I walked over.
"There's some trouble at the Fiend area, apparantly in the Trojan section," He pointed to the map, a red blip beeped on and off softly.
"Why me?"
"You were the closest person I could find," He looked at me with a weird look, and then looked back at that com for some more info. (stop 1)
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BTW, Mystic, the stufff you told me will happen in the span of a couple chapters.. (couple in writing, is like 3-5)

Mon, 12/26/2011 - 17:18

#50

Mysticbeam

kk :D

keep it up! ^_^

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