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Depth Zero (Fanfic): Chapter 3 Teaser & Part 1 released

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Mon, 02/13/2012 - 22:58
Encross

Thanks to Lysane, we have a Spiralspy TEASER here!

Chapter 2 (Strength in Unity) TEASER here!

Chapter 3 teaser!

Chapter teasers from now on will be linked at the top, and more spiralspy illustrations will be within the text!

This is a short Fanfic that will have a Prologue, five chapters, and an epilogue. It will be authored by me, and illustrated in Spiralspy by Lysane.

NOTE: It is rated T for Violence/Gore. Since everyone's technically 13+, I think it should be okay.

Prologue:

It was almost a comical sight – three knights tiptoeing their way through tall grass, and one knight lazily slagging behind. But Varnus didn’t find it very funny. It was another day training recruits, and he was bored already. Long had he worked with the Spiral Wardens. Long had he fought through the dusky mess of the Gloaming Wildwoods. And long had he hunted Snarbolaxes, so many and so often that he was surprised they weren’t extinct. He was an exceptional knight, skilled in both blade and gun, and yet the Wardens had him picking barbs out of new recruits and telling them to avoid the bushes next time, or shield when attacks came. He was destined for more than this, and he knew that, and…

His thoughts were interrupted by a series of loud, panicky barks; he stopped in his tracks. With his experience, he considered himself an expert in wolvers and their different types of cries, but this was a new one. Normally, they’d be eager, jumping at their chance to grab a bite of fresh recruit. But scared, panicked, even? This was new. The recruits stared at him, fear evident in their eyes, but Varnus was over it already. He waved lazily, giving the order to proceed. “I guess it makes sense to be panicked. I mean, Varnus IS coming…”

A couple minutes later, and they had arrived at the clearing, nothing but a lone training bell in the center. “Sir Varnus, Sir Varnus, Sir Varnus,” they chimed, “What do we do now?”

“Now? Defensive formation, four corners, in the center. Do I have to tell you guys everything?” It was hard not to laugh as they scrambled onto the button, shoving each other aside to keep room for him. He rang the bell, mounted his place, and waited for the wolvers.

Silence.

“Seriously?” He thought. “I’m just trying to get through with this training session, work with me you stupid dogs.” He rang it again, and returned to his position. The only response was the quivering from the recruits.

“Uhm…excuse me...sir…?”

“What.”

“…Are we waiting for something?”

“Well, what do you think? Of course we are! I mean, wolvers, wolvers, wolvers. We’ve only been fighting them this whol—“

A blade of fire scorched across the map, singing the grass as it lit the wildwoods with anger and energy. Varnus was frozen, blinded by the light and distracted by the feeling of sudden heat on his armor. “Fire? In the Gloaming Wildwoods?”

The thought that something was terribly wrong had almost docked at the station before Varnus was enveloped in a second beam of flame, scorching straight through his cobalt armor and maliciously frying the insides. The body of Sir Varnus fell to its knees and disintegrated, armor melting into his pool of remains.

The recruits stared awestricken at their fallen trainer. “Sir Varnus…?” One asked.

Then, they were gone, running in every direction, dropping weapons and shields, the squad decomposing into the madness of terrified, raw recruits running for their dear lives as blades of fire lanced from every direction.

After what seemed like an hour, the recruit that had questioned Sir Varnus stood in a clearing, alone in the silence and renewed darkness. “Guys?” He called out timidly. “Anyone…?”

The chink-chunk of gears whining filled the atmosphere, first from directly in front of him, and then to a notable radius. His eyes reigned up in horror at the mechanical monstrosity that he heard before him, feet planted in sheer horror of size and reckoning.

The two evil, red, robotic eyes were the last thing he saw.

Tue, 05/22/2012 - 22:26
#1
Encross
Chapter 1: Faith in Armor.

Chapter 1: Faith in Armor.
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“Atten-TION.”

The three privates stood at attention, robust cobalt armor chinking as it fell into place. The sergeant, pacing in his own, rank-distinguishing armor, examined his team.

“You there,” he called. “Private Lysane, stealth and recon specialist.”

“Sir!”

“Are you ready for your mission?”

“Yes, sir!”

“is your blade sharpened, and armor shined?”

“Sir, yes sir!”

“Do you promise not to switch roles with Typhon this time?”

“Sir, ye—what?”

The sergeant looked at his private with an air of supposition. “Do you think I’ve forgotten what happened last time?”

Lysane shifted uncomfortably. “Sir…I…uh…”

“It’s all right, bro.” Typhon, the stocky guardian, stepped in. “You see, I was weight training Ly by having him carry my shield – you know, these recon shields are light. If he fights with that kind of strength, he’s not even going to kill a jelly in good time.”

“Hey!” came the interjection. “That’s not true, you know I—“

But Typhon already had him into a neckhold. “And just between you and me, Sergeant Anders, we all know our Ly can use a little sandwich,” he finished, with a wink and a grin.

Anders left with a chuckle, trying not to listen to Lysane squirm and protest the neckhold. “And you, Hip?”

The diminutive bomber adjusted his glasses and looked up to his superior officer. “Oh, me? Yeah, I totally have everything ready. See, I even got my scarf.” He held up a purple sheet of cloth. “Well, don’t just stand there. Does it match my boots?”

Anders refrained from commenting, as it was common knowledge that if one didn’t have nice things to say, one shouldn’t say anything. “Hip, I’m more interested in your bomb selection.”
“Oh, those? Psh, I have all the interesting ones. Well, original ones too, I guess. It should totally do the trick.”

Anders eyed his Heavy Deconstructor. “Hip, you DO know we’re investigating the Gloaming Wildwoods, right?”

“Whoa, whoa, hey. You never know what’s gonna be down there,” the fashionable hipster retaliated. “Plus, you should see that thing in action. It totally blows up anything manmade. Or gremlin-made. Or…clockworks made. You’ll see, trust me!”

“I’ll take your word for it,” Anders remarked with a smile, “Till then, I’ll make sure your storage box takes good care of this until we get back.”

“Oh, just keep it.”

Anders stared blankly at the metrosexual bomber.

“One free sample per customer. And that way, it’ll be coming down with us anyway,” he announced gleefully.

Anders pocketed it with a sigh. “Alright, but don’t get your pants in a mess if I never touch it. I mean, when’s the last time we’ve seen a construct there?”
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“Talk to me, Kora.” Anders leaned back in his tent and sipped a coffee.

“Greetings Sergeant Anders, this is Intel-Agent Kora communicating with you regarding—“

“Cut to the chase, Kora. I know who you are,” he laughed.

“—well, alright. A number of training groups have disappeared over the past week, all centered around the Gloaming Wildwoods area. We suspect there may be some connection.”

Anders took a swig of his coffee. “Tell me more.”

“Each training group was the recruits’ first exposure with the second stratum of the Clockworks. They were split in the standard configuration: three privates, proto geared, being led and trained by a top-ranked private, ready for promotion. In our cases, we have MIA and presumed KIA Private Irving, Private Wilder, and Private Varnus, along with their recruits.”

Varnus. That name sounded familiar. “By any chance, do you know if Varnus was a member of—“

“Lieutenant Barrus’ first strike platoon, yes. He was a member of your class, and trained alongside you. You may have remembered fighting him in Cyrano’s close combat fencing.”

“Right, I remember him.” Varnus, that crazy b****d.

“Anyways, it should be a fairly straightforward mission. Your tier two 3rd-stratum cleared B team should be more than sufficient for the job. Any further questions?”
There was a slight pause as he stared thoughtfully into the corner of his room.

“Sergeant Anders…?”

“Oh, sorry. No, that will be all,” he lied.

“Then good luck. Kora out.” The line disconnected, and he removed his comlink.

Varnus, you crazy b*****d. What got you down there?
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“So, you’ll be gone how long, again?”

“Just a couple of days.” Anders double checked the equipment in his pack: rations, tent, fresh undergarments. His team did likewise as they prepared to board their elevator in the Arcade, which was scheduled to depart in five minutes.

“But it’s just a Stratum 2 checkup, right? Why can’t they send someone else? It’s two whole days…”

“Serena, it’ll work out. They’re sending us because they’re not sure anyone else can get the job done as well as we would,” he reassured his girlfriend. “You never know what could be down there…”

She rolled her eyes. “Wolvers, what a scare. Maybe you’ll even run into the Snarbolax, which we routinely hunt as the final training test.”

“I’m just going to investigate. Everything else shouldn’t be a challenge.” He mounted his pack, and adjusted the straps. “I promise I’ll be home in time for Valentines.”

“I guess you’re taking your squad, huh?” she trailed off, before beginning with renewed energy. “Hey! You know, if one of them wants to stay, it is near holiday season after all, and I’d love to try my new magnus…”

Ty smiled. “I’d love to do that, but you know, I can’t leave my squad with you two lovers. First they’ll be searching, and before they know it, you two will be hiding in the bushes going…OKAY JUST KIDDING DON’T SLAP ME.”

Anders lowered his palm and laughed. “We can take our vacation down there later, if you want. The only one that’d be willing to slack is Ty, and trust me, we need a guardian, not a gunner. Plus, who’s gonna keep Jodi company, while I steal her Lysane for a couple days as well?”

“Well, all right then,” she pouted ruefully. “Have fun, I guess?”

Anders moved in for the hug. “I’ll be back before you can say Valentine,” he said, joining his team on the elevator and loading his mist tank in the slot.
She watched as the four knights disappeared into the darkness of the Clockworks with a whirr. “Valentine,” she whispered.
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Ty was off the elevator with a jolt, shield up and sword in the standard defensive position. The squad fanned out closely behind, Ly quietly sweeping the front with Anders, Ty, and Hip crawling as a cohesive unit through the exposed jungle of the Gloaming Wildwoods. Not a creature was in sight.

“At ease, men,” Anders ordered. The squad lowered their guard and surveyed the looming forest. Already, Anders could feel the pit of anxiety forming in his stomach. Something was off…

“Well,” Hip spoke up, breaking the silence, “where are all the wolvers?”

“I guess they’re too busy munching on dead recruits, huh?” Ty jested. “I’d get in on it too, but they’re probably a bit smelly for me now…”

“Cut it, Ty,” Lysane defended, “Show some respect for the fallen.”

“Alright, alright, too soon, I know.”

Anders resigned himself to his thoughts. So it’d been a while since he’d been down here, training recruits and running them through the basics of combat. But usually, wolvers were all over the elevators that came down; whether rookies or full-blown Wardens, they’d always be trying to grab a meal. Could they be deeper inside…? Or, is something more sinister at work here?

“Let’s check the training path. Move out.”
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They had almost reached the second checkpoint before they found a clue of life. A single wolver, nothing more than a mere pup, lay hiding in the
bushes. Anders hushed the squad to a halt, and motioned Lysane forwards.

Lysane advanced cautiously; hand on hilt, heart in his throat, counting the seconds between his steps. The wolver watched him approach with its huge, beady eyes, retracting deeper into the bush, as if hiding could save it. It watched as the flourish slowly extended out of its sheath, closed its eyes, and braced for the coming impact.

He hesitated. He was so certain that it would dodge behind him, prompting him to draw and slash as it passed. This one, though…whether inexperienced or simply frightened to death, it was offering no resistance. Coming this far along a training route that had eaten three squads of recruits and three seasoned soldiers, only to find one morbidly frightened wolver pup, incapable of even baring it’s teeth…

Lysane sheathed his sword. “This wolver,” he said, “It’s….scared.”

The squad rose from the tight defensive triangle they had formed. “It is” Hip said, adding more than a touch of pity in his voice as he watched it tremble in the bushes. “So scared…”

Anders watched as it reopened its eyes, almost in shock at the fact that it was still alive, regained its composure, and darted through the underbrush. Then, as before, it was just them and the heavy, almost tangible atmosphere of silence.

“Scared of what?” Ty asked.

Silence.
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Another eternity of cautious tiptoeing passed until they came across a clearing. This clearing, unlike any before it, finally gave them a taste of danger that had been so absent during the earlier phase of the trail. Scattered proto armaments and footprints trailed in elaborate shapes around the single bell which remained tall in the center.

Then there were the large, dark tracks of burnt underbrush, drawing huge, vicious lines across the battlefield. Almost the entire surface was blackened, and the “freshness” of the ashen told Anders that it was mere days since the battle occurred.

“Well, ain’t that a s**tshow,” Ty grimaced, looking at the wreckage before them.

Hip bent down, digging an armored glove through the earth. “There’s no nitronome residue,” he analyzed, grinding through the ash with his hand. “No deconstructor remains, or shards of crystal bombs, or barrage spikes…whatever did this, they did it with a pure combustible.”

“Only constructs and gremlins use pure combustibles in the clockworks. This…is a beast’s lair.”

“It’s what the dirt tells me,” Hip finished, adjusting his glasses. “One more thing, Sarge. I’m no spiral medic, but as a bomber, I can tell you that only second degree, if not third degree, combustibles penetrate the earth this far.”

“But no enemies this shallow even have access to second degree combustibles.”

“The dirt doesn’t lie.”

Anders was still processing the implications when Ly’s voice sounded across the clearing.

“Sarge! You’re gonna want to see this.”

Anders followed Lysane to the center of the clearing, which, from the intensity of the flames, had formed into a dramatic depression. As they closed in, Ly pointed Anders to the trough of the branded valley: amidst the black lay specks of a hue of cobalt which eerily resembled the one they bore so proudly.

They began digging as the other two watched the perimeter, sweeping layer and layer of ash off the reclaimed armor set. Albeit scorched and warped from the high heat damage, it was clearly of Spiral design, or more specifically, Second Sergeant; no doubt the squad of recruits could be confirmed KIA if their guide hadn’t even managed to survive the encounter.

Ly and Hip pinged their comlinks. “It’s either Second Sergeant Irving, Second Sergeant Wilder, or Second Sergeant Varnus,” Ly read. “Those are the ones that Kora marked were MIA.”

“Maybe there’s some identification information listed here, like size, variant, or class,” Hip added.

“There’s no need for that.”

The squad turned towards Anders, who was staring deeply into a freshly-uncovered green proto crest, adorned on what was once the left-breast mesh.

“It’s Varnus.” [Click for Spiralspy!]

___________________________________TWO___YEARS___AGO_____________________________________________________

Cyrano stared at the long line of recruits, each one clad in standard cobalt armor and calibur. “At ease, soldiers,” he gruffly nodded.
Not like it did anything. To be in the presence of a Warden Lancer, much less, the Champion of the Spiral Order himself, Cyrano, set the recruits on edge. His flowery hat, his fastened coat adorned with the first lancer crest, and The Namesake secured tightly to his side; the whole vision of Cyrano emitted an aura of awe and fear that soaked his diminutive audience through and through.

“You,” he said, “are recruits. And I am among the best we have here in Haven. As such, it is my duty to train you in the fine art of close-quarters dueling.”

“You will be quick,” he said. The Namesake flew out of its sheath and pranced through the air, slicing blurs in the wind as it hummed with the deadly sting of controlled power, striking down invisible enemies. His blade was everywhere, his body nowhere.

“You will be disciplined,” he continued. With a quick whip, he saluted an invisible opponent and leapt back. Then, he was in his ready position: primary foot turned right, lateral balance, sword and arm ready to decimate his opponent; the poise of an artist, the power of a soldier.

“But above all else,” he warned, “you must be honorable. Respect your opponent, respect the Order, respect yourselves.”

His audience nodded in mute agreement, still in awe of his presence. “To begin our instruction we will have a little competition. “You will each of you, fight to overcome your comrades. As the losers are eliminated and the victors move onward, I will assign ranks based upon your performance. The winner of our competition will be awarded a crest.” The recruits craned their necks to see the small glimmering proto crest secured under Cyrano’s Warden crest. Guardian Major Barrus stepped forward. “Now form a line! I want those caliburs off, we don’t want you hacking through each other’s armor.” The recruits jostled and shoved each other, all struggling to form the head of the line. “You two, step to!” ordered the Warrant Officer. The first two recruits saluted one another and drew their caliburs and circled each other like wolvers, both eager for Cyrano’s approval.

Cyrano drummed his fingers on The Namesake’s exquisitely crafted hilt. The current crop of recruits was poor. “What are you thinking Lord Cyrano? They’re green as grass, but these are the only ones that passed the combat simulators,” Barrus inquired.

“Their standard is the best we’ll get.”

Hours passed as Cyrano and Barrus watched the ensuing fights, proctoring the battles and intervening when necessary, mentally noting the style and skill of the recruits all the while. In front of them a dull “clunk” echoed through the training all as one of the privates brained the other with the hilt of his calibur. “Private Varnus, that will do. Private Jonah, you have been eliminated,” called Barrus. Jonah hung his head and sidled over to the growing crowd of eliminated recruits, while Varnus crowed his victory. “This one fights with spirit, but his moves are clumsy and brutal. More in the fashion of a schoolyard bully than a fencer,” mused Cyrano.

“Anders, and Nigel, you’re up,” ordered Barrus.

Private Anders swept his calibur upward in a warrior’s salute. He was already tired from his tussle with Private Braxton, and Private Wilders had been no pushover either. Shaking slightly under the stern gaze of his instructor W.O. Barrus, he glanced timidly at the tall figure of the Champion of the Order, scrutinizing him from under the brim of his chapeau. Across the training ring, Private Nigel did the same. “You may proceed.” Nigel lunged forward in dramatic fashion with his calibur, eager to impress the commander. Anders easily dodged the clumsy blow. Moving forward rapidly he checked Nigel’s swift advance with a slight push to the shoulder. Nigel stumbled, his footing disrupted as he realized he had badly overextended. Before he could move another inch, he found the point of Anders’ calibur at his throat.

“Very good Private Anders, you are eliminated Private Nigel,” announced Barrus. “This one has talent, his moves are swift and light,” murmured Cyrano.

Barrus checked the roll call, and nodded to the crowd of defeated knights amassed. “And for the final round, fighting for the proto crest which will be awarded by the Warden Private Varnus vs. Private Anders.” He nodded to the top ranked recruits, who had already taken their post on opposite sides of the ring. Cyrano’s eyes darted from the tired Anders, who quietly cleaned his blade and mentally preared himself, to the rallied Varnus, who was flexing and beating down imaginary opponents. He waited.

“Begin.”

Anders swept his caliber up, saluting as he did with every match. His salute was matched with a spit in the sand, as Private Varnus charged. All eyes moved as the two clashed near the center, caliburs flaring. Anders buckled under the swiftness and vigor of the incoming attacks, struggling to parry Varnus’s brute force and savage speed. Varnus snarled, watching as his attacks were harmlessly redirected.

But even Varnus, with all his strength and vigor, could not fight forever. His attacks slowed, his arms heavy from exhaustion, and Anders felt each successive blow weaker than the one before. Cyrano nodded, approving the simple yet elegant strategy exhibited by the recruit.

And with that, Anders struck. With a swift blow, he locked Varnus’s blade in the sand and elbowed him, knocking him to the floor. Varnus, with all his energy drained, looked up at the clear victor, who backed away and gave his opponent a chance to recover. Rage boiled within him.

Barrus was about to call the fight off when Varnus, with a new bolt of energy, rushed to his feet and kicked the sand towards Anders and rushed in behind it. Anders, blinded by the cloud, was still scraping the sand from his visor when…

SHINGGG.

Anders stared ominously at the blade mere inches from his nose, stopped by a blurry white line. As Anders focused on it, he made out the razor rapier edge and intricate engravings.

“Enough,” Cyrano said. With a whirl, he danced the edge of The Namesake around Varnus’s parried calibur and knocked it to the ground. Cyrano sheathed The Namesake, eyes tracing a path from recruit to recruit.

“Your crest, as promised,” he spoke dismissively, tossing the badge to the eager Varnus without taking his eye off Anders.

Then, he was gone, back turned and proud stride carrying him into the distance.

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“…So he bore this crest proudly, proof as champion of the tournament and top of the recruits,” Anders finished, polishing the last of the dirt off the green trainer’s crest which should’ve been his. “Even through the rest of his poor training, even through the dishonor, even through the instability one and a half years ago; it never left his chest.”

Hip and Ly stared on at the green glow in Anders’s hand, absorbing the story until they were interrupted by Ty’s voice. “Sarge!”

Within seconds, the hounding of wolvers and sounds of commotion were upon them. Instinctively, the knights formed up in a defensive huddle, Typhon at the front with the others watching sides. Shadows danced through the woods, flickering rapidly through the clearing. Panicked barking of the racing wolvers rang through the forest, disturbing the utter silence the squad had been used to.

But they were running…away?

Anders lowered his guard as the silence returned, the tornado of bestial panic fading into the gloomy forest. His gaze glanced into the distance, suppressing annoyance as he tried to put the clues together. Then…

It had been faint at first, but with the whirlwind of panic past, the robotic clunking became louder and louder, heavier and heavier, more and more widespread. Typhon readied his shield while Lysane watched his scanner anxiously, watching red dots multiply. “What on Cradle…?” Lysane whispered as the whining of mechanical gears descended on them.

The clearing lit up as a lance of flame sliced across the ground, and the battle was on. Anders was out in a flash, combat roll recovery position, calibur drawn, while Typhon planted his shield and braced for impact. Flames licked the edges of his shield as he uttered a guttural cry of strength. The assailant stepped out from the shadows and fixed its single eyes on its enemies, whirring as it processed the situation. With a command, multiple others sprung from the underbrush.

Anders watched as more retrode charges warmed up, lasers locking in on his squad. “Scramble!” he ordered. Flame tracks scorched the area the squad had been; behind the ashen haze, he could only see the glow of Typhon’s shield rushing to engage. With a battle cry of his own, Anders rushed to engage.

Hip reached for his Heavy Deconstructor, only to find the slot replaced by a static field generator. “Damnit, Sarge!” he thought to himself, “I knew I shouldn’t have let him take it.” He made do with blast bombs, lobbed them liberally into the fray while catching up to his squad.

“Feel it,” Anders whispered to himself, ignoring the latent explosions as best he could. He ducked right smoothly, dodging a first attack while bracing his shield for the second. The retrode’s knuckles buckled against his shield as Anders rolled with the momentum, skimming a few electric circuits with his calibur in an elegant reversal. Unfazed, his robotic foe charged on, strikes finding only air as Anders rolled to his left. As the retrode’s momentum came to an end, Anders charged, shield leading as he used his superior mobility to duel. A dodge left, a slash right, and a parry of an instinctive left thrust later, Anders was where he wanted to be. A two-handed slash on the front, and the retrode turned accordingly; a backhand across its back slicing through crucial circuitry, and the retrode fell forward, barely catching itself on its knees as its balance program tried to compensate for the complete loss of function in its lower body. With a warrior’s decisiveness, Anders finished the fight with a well-aimed strike to the neck. The retrode’s head came loose with a flurry of electric sparks as its body collapsed, its critical systems losing power and deactivating. Anders turned to his left, watching as Typhon struck down a foe in a similar fashion and Lysane ambushed a retrode from behind, delivering a critical hit right through its control panel. It sputtered and died.

“Sarge!” Hip gasped, just catching up to his squad. “There’s more!”

Sure enough, another wave of constructs dashed through the underbrush and rushed. Gremlins followed suit, a couple wielding hammers while others carried gun puppies through and prepared an offensive line. As the squad recuperated, Lysane analyzed the approaching dots on his scanner, attempting to formulate a plan.

“Boys, it’s been a hell of a ride,” Anders said, worry written on his face as he gauged the looming situation.

“Sir, wait! I’m getting something weird…”

A small contingent of yellow, friendlies, seemed to approach from the side, rushing to collide with the lateral front of the red forces. Among them, one dot zipped with impossible speed, racing towards the frontline.

Lysane had barely taken his eyes off the scanner in time to witness a ball of shadow land amidst the forming frontline. Pinpoint slashes rang out at supersonic speeds, with such force that even fifty meters away, the ripple of wind could still be seen reverberating through the underbrush. As all knight, gremlin, and construct looked on, a dark figure, knightly in shape, stood amongst the destroyed gremlins and turrets. Without hesitation it turned, chapeau lowered, black plume high in the air, vorpal barb at the ready.

As the robots turned to counter the new threat, a squad of friendlies collided into the lateral front with an impressive flank: swordswoman and guardian leading the charge while a gunner dipped in and out of combat, shots flying downwind with pinpoint accuracy. The frontline was consumed by the whirl of blades and sparks of parries within seconds.

Typhon was already rushing forward when Anders ordered the charge. Together, the met the frontline dead in the jaw, blades flashing and shields gleaming in the reflection of newly fabricated scrap metal.

“Sergeant Helena, we’ve got the front secured!” the second guardian shouted.

“Push the line, Vot! Drive them back into the hole they crawled up from,” the swordswoman snarled. As Vot drew the line, Typhon dove in right next to him, the two guardians doubling the pressure on the enemies.

“Ly, hit them where it hurts!” Ty urged, devoting his strength to pushing forward. As Ly searched desperately for an opening, a cobalt blur rushed past him. In moments, Anders was on the ground, tackling a mecha knight and exposing the lateral side yet again. “Now!”

With a smooth roll, Ly was in the clearing, weapon charging with an elemental glow. Ensuring his weapon was set to “shock,” he yanked the blade forward and unleashed the full potential of its power source on the line of enemies.

A gigantic burst of blue-white electricity surged forward, frying circuits and overcharging the power sources of their robotic enemies. The last things Ly saw before absolute whiteout were robot heads exploding at the surge of voltage, which reflected off the guardian shields and returned for a deathly second dose. In his blinded state, Ly flew back from the force of the charge, landing in what he hoped was friendly territory as he heard his team rush into the thunderstruck frontline. Faint, hasty orders hit his ears as the world began to desaturate – he could just make out Ty and Anders running into the brush chasing survivors while the second squad secured the area.

It was over. They survived.

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“How does he look?” Anders asked anxiously.

“Not too bad,” the second squad’s medic, Daina, replied. “The shock broke through most of his elemental seals, so he’ll want to get that repaired. Otherwise, he’s lucky though – a few electric burns, stigmated nerves, slightly scorched corneas, but it’s nothing that will bug him for too long.” She smiled at Anders, and patted Lysane on the head.

Anders nodded thanks to Daina and walked away, whispering additional thanks to the powers above for the fortuitous save – not only were they a higher ranked team, but they had the foresight to bring a medic. He nodded to Ty, who was relaxing against a tree and making small talk with Vot, as he walked towards the superior officer of the second squad.

“Sergeant,” he said, throwing a modest salute.

Helena returned the solute, and the both relaxed. “Sergeant Anders. What brings you down here?”

“Our mission from Spiral HQ. We are currently investigating the disappearance of three training squads down here, which were led by rising officers.”
Helena chucked. “Do you have your answer?” she smiled wryly.

“Constructs…down in the gloaming wildwoods. Second and third grade constructs too. I don’t understand.” He shook his head. “Those squads…never stood a chance.”

“They’re not the only ones,” came the gruff reply. The emblazoned dark knight approached, a deathly shadow following in his wake. Everything about him spoke of a tarnished elegance, an eroded greatness, a blackened soul. Anders had only felt the magnitude of reverence this fallen knight emitted once before.

“Who…are you?”

Sergeant Helena stepped in. “I believe I can answer that for you, Sergeant. My team was sent down here about a week ago, in order to investigate the ‘shadow presence’ which lurked in the gloaming wildwoods doing the exact opposite of all the other shadow presences. This one was helping, not impeding. Saving, not killing. The Wardens were most curious.”

“The Wardens?”

Helena shrugged. “I suppose I would be too, now that we’ve discovered the truth.” She nodded towards the dark knight.

He turned, looking Anders in the eye. “My name,” he said, enunciating every word with a regality and clarity that gave it away before he finished, “is Maverick.”
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Anders was in awe. He knew it from the start – that same presence, those same moves, that same discipline…of course, the black knight was a Warden. But of all Wardens, Warden Maverick himself, the up and rising Lord of Shadows, infamed duelist only once bested, by Cyrano himself? The same Warden that had disappeared only one and a half years ago in self-exile to the clockworks, proclaiming that he was finished with the Spiral Knights as a whole?

“So…you were investigating?” Anders admittedly had no idea where to start with this.

The gunner, who had joined the conversation and introduced himself as Jed, nodded. “We suspected that the shadow would be within the Lair, so we investigated. It was a carefully planned mission, nothing more,”

“Carefully planned, my a*s,” Mav scoffed.

Jed shot a glare at Mav before returning to his default state of logic and reasoning. “We had intended to only search the area, and try and find the one shadow that did not behave like the others.” He shifted. “We…were not successful.”

“They aggravated everything,” Maverick laughed, taking the failure in stride. “I was only there to save them.”

Jed shook his head. “Not my finest moment.”

“But…,” Helena picked up, leading on, “That’s not all we found. It seems like a large number of constructs and gremlins are surfacing into the Lair, scaring the wildlife and causing it to collapse into the disordered state that is now.”

Jed nodded. “I picked up two extremely large, electromagnetic field generators at the core. Typically, gremlins only use them for Gun Puppies, but this is something on a completely different magnitude. Unfortunately, we weren’t able to investigate further before the swarm of Snarbolax attacked, and well…you know the story from there.”

“They have since moved…up. As if…they’re attempting to surface.”

Attempting to surface? Constructs? Gremlins? Gloaming Wildwoods…? The puzzles pieces floated in Anders’s mind, unaligned, with no matching parts.

Mav nodded to Anders. “Want answers, kid? Then grab your recon, or Jed will do, as your recon’s blinded right now, and let’s move.”

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The two knights struggled hard to keep pace with Mav, who glided through the shadows like a native. Abruptly, he signaled a halt, and the three knelt into the underbrush.

“Up ahead.”

Anders and Jed watched the scanner, large electromagnetic pulses drawing concentric circles. “This is it,” Jed remarked, “The same thing we were unable to investigate.”

Quietly, Anders and Jed moved forward, making as little sound as possible in the underbrush. They eventually arrived at a cliff, overlooking a large clearing, and went prone for full stealth.

Jed, the recon, glanced first. An eerie silence penetrated the atmosphere, and Anders could feel Jed’s shock.

“Jed, what is it?”

Jed motioned forward, and handed Anders his binoculars, pointing southwest.

Anders looked through, and felt his stomach leap, heartbeat pounding in his ears.

He wasn’t sure whether he was more surprised at the number of troops, or at the fact that he didn’t need the binoculars to see the two oversize, menacing, flaming gun puppies that made the horizon. He could almost see its bright red eye blazing into his soul, as if it was omnipotent and sensed his presence. And suddenly, everything made sense.

Anders withdrew, white-knuckled with tension. “Spiral HQ has to hear about this.”

Answers, at last.

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 20:26
#2
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Chapter 2: Strength in Unity

Chapter 2: Strength in Unity

Alistair looked into the gathered War Council. He could see the worry carved on each of their faces, hear the hushed whispering of chances of probability, and feel the gravity of the situation precipitate from the air.

“Ladies and Gentlemen.” He cleared his throat.

The atmosphere dissolved into one of hushed reverence in the presence of the Lord Commander himself.

“So,” he started, beginning his characteristic, commanderly pacing, “We have a problem.”

Kora rose from the crowd, prepared notepad in arm, glasses checked days of reading and preparation. “They were smart in picking the hardest area of the Clockworks to survey – the natural shadows of the Gloaming Wildwoods kept their army secret for the majority of the week that they had been building it. Even after first contact, however, it’s clear that they’re still assembling forces and gathering them together for some sort of assault.”

“Right now,” she continued, moving to a gate map of the gate in question, “the best theory we can devise for their presence is that they are attempting to colonize the surface.”

Alistair turned to the three members of the Warden Council, seated behind him. “Talos?”

The Lord of Shadows rose from the end of the table, speaking in a gruff, quiet voice while enunciating every word clearly. “My Specters have taken an increased interest in the area, and have noticed that they are mobilizing their forces. As we speak, they are rising through the Wildwoods and approaching us from below. Especially their two magnetic field disruptions.” He gestured to the display, which flickered and switched to a picture of two exceptionally large gun puppies, each with a squad of gremlins tending it like barnacles on a whale. “I give them….four days.”

The whole room erupted into hushed whispering as assembled officers discussed the foe that had been presented. Alistair surveyed his counterparts in the Spiral Order, evaluating their reactions.

“Silence.” The booming voice of Ozlo brought order to the room. “It is clear that this threat is inboud, and we must have our defense ready before they are upon us. New foes are nothing new to us, and we shall persevere as we always have – improvising, innovating, and finding ways over obstacles. We,” Ozlo continued, looking at Alistair, “shall work together to overcome this foe, regardless of faction, rank, and ability.” To this, Alistair nodded.

“We shall descend all platoons into the Clockworks and camp out at an intermediate location, to prevent them from even reaching Haven. A single strike platoon will engage them deeper, and hold a stalwart defense, to judge their strength and tactic. Questions?”

The silence of the room was an answer in itself. They had a plan.

“Lieutenants, gather your troops. We build our defenses at Depth Zero.”

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

“Sir.” Cyrano saluted the only Warden ranked above him respectfully.

Alistair returned the salute. “What brings you here, Champion?”

“How do you feel about Ozlo’s plan?”

Alistair nodded thoughtfully. “I believe it to be good in intent, but effectiveness is always hard to say. We don’t even know what we’re fighting.”

Cyrano nodded. “We must assist the Spiral Order in this – without some of the most skilled knights fighting, casualties would easily multiply.”

“This is true. However,” Alistair paused, gathering his qualification, “We will have nothing to do with the initial strike force descending to the Wildwoods to front the first line of defense.”

“They won’t stand a chance. You know this, Lord Commander.”

“This is true. But Warden blood is rare and worth its weight in combat prowness. Any spilt too early, say, in unprepared fighting of a new enemy, is nothing more than a complete waste.”

It took all of Cyrano’s discipline as a soldier to resist speaking, and only nod.

“The headstrong Lt. Barrus has already volunteered for the strike platoon. We shall let him return to us with intel on this new enemy.”

As Cyrano left, Alistair let his gaze wander out the window. Already the elevators were piled high with knights and equipment as they descended to Depth Zero to assist the preparation effort. In the distance, he could barely make out the tall, wide shadows of the Strangers, riding into the distance with the snipes on their backs.

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The rescue camp had taken root nicely – tents in the back, barriers, stationary guns, and bunkers being set up in the front. Mini-Haven was well geared, as the knights met their neighbors, made mental notes regarding the locations of supplies and merchants, and prepared for battle. Anders was doing just that in his own tent when Serena walked in.

She eyed Anders as he, for the second time this week, worked to cram as many belongings as possible into a tiny backpack. “So…someone needs you again.”

“Haven won’t save itself.”

“Why do you even have to go, though? Even deeper?” she cooed wistfully.

“I’m a member of Barrus’s regiment, and we are to front the defense as volunteered by the commanding officer.” He turned from packing and reached out for a hug, hoping to end this goodbye as quickly and simply as possibly. “I’ll be back in a few days.”

Serena squirmed away. “I’m coming too.”

Anders laughed. “You?”

“I can’t take it anymore. I hate sitting back here, wondering when or if you’re going to come back. You’re going into the darkness, to fight whatever you find. What if it’s too much for your platoon? What if you all die? I can’t let that happen.”

She shouldered her gun. “I’m coming.”

Anders sighed, resting his hands on her shoulders. “And that,” he said ruefully, “is why I can’t let you come. You’re absolutely right – I have no idea what we’re fighting down there, and if it’ll be simple cake, or if we’re going to be completely steamrolled. But I can’t fight, when I know you’re in danger. If you were hit, or captured, or, God forsake, killed…”

“Then,” Serena spoke, voice becoming shrill and agitated, “Why do you think I can take it?”

Anders could only stare blankly.

“I can HELP you. I can HOLD my own. I can FIGHT…” her voice trailed off into a hoarse whisper amidst sobs of anguish as she broke down.
Anders shouldered his pack and turned towards the exit, placing a comforting hand on her shoulder. “I’ll be back before you know it, promise,” he whispered, voice heavy in guilt.

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Typhon was in an utter state of disbelief as his tentmate entered, depression written all over his face. Just ten minutes ago, Lysane had jovially announced that he was taking a walk with Jodi through Mini Haven.

“So...how’s Mini Haven?”

Lysane sat down on his bunk, refusing to make eye contact. “Fine.”

“…Well, I’m here if you want to talk about it…?”

“I don’t.”

“So it IS Jodi.”

Lysane glared at Typhon. “No. It’s none of your business. Shut up Ty.”

As if Typhon would. “You know,” Typhon began, making sure that Lysane was watching him, “the single life really isn’t all that bad. A few nights ago, I forgot to turn off my swag, and I woke up covered in ladies. Two on each bicep.” Thus followed obligatory flexing.

“Funny.” Ly scoffed.

“You should really try it. I mean, you’ve got that….that….skinny frame…..and nerdy scanner thing……….and recon ‘strength’….”

Ly sighed. “Shut up, Ty, you don’t know what you’re talking about. Plus, I really like this one.”

“OH. I get it. She doesn’t like you…?”

“She told me to have fun shanking gremlins.”

Typhon was taken aback. “Wait, what…?”

“I know, right? That’s all she said. Not even “be safe,” or “I’ll miss you,” or even yet, “don’t die or else I’ll be sad.”

Typhon did all he could to not burst out laughing. It wasn’t enough.

“WHAT now?!” Lysane’s exasperation was beginning to show.

“So we DO have a lady on this squad. Good to know, I guess.”

“Hey!” Lysane protested. “What do you mean by la—wait, what are you doing—wait, don’t grab me in a neckhold—“

The rest of the muffled curses were lost in Typhon’s armpit.

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Helena looked out on the rugged horizon. Depth Zero wasn’t quite the typical clockworks level – rolling green plains separated the large elevator constructs. Here was the mightiest elevator in clockworks, and very little space to maneuver between. This would be a down-and-dirty fight.

Her thoughts were interrupted by Jed, as he approached with a “Sarge!” She returned his salute.

“Both areas will be tight-knit fights, from the current play of Order.” She could feel some apprehension behind the gunner’s voice, who, by default, would like as much space as possible.

But war was war, and not every party could be catered to. “Very well. What’s the status of our team?”

“We’re ready…” Jed trailed off. “Vot and Daina will follow you to the depths of the clockworks. And I will be joining them.”

He paused, then continued. “But this forward assault could prove disastrous. Don’t you think, Sarge, that our team would be better suited to manning the front at Depth Zero?”

Helena nodded. Barrus had been brash in volunteering their platoon, and as a member, she could feel some apprehension regarding the coming fight. But…she was a soldier. “I’m sorry, Jed. But orders are orders.”

Jed nodded, understandingly. “Then I,” he said, resignation clear, “will prepare my close range weapons.”

She watched as he walked away, and returned to observing the field. No matter what the circumstances, work had to be done.

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Morning came, as many mornings had before it. Dark rays of reflected morning dew shined through the noble helmet of Barrus, who pioneered his platoon as they began the exodus of a descent. As the large freight elevator of Depth Zero had never been intended for such mass usage, Barrus ordered his squads to triple up into squads of twelve, and descend accordingly. The rest, waited their turn.

Anders nodded to his bored squad, bonding over the anticlimactic early-morning start. He watched as Hipster kneeled, feeling the ground and twirling a now-allowed heavy deconstructor in his hand, Ty and Vot chatted away, Helena staring into the distance, and Lysane pinged his scanner, as if he would see enemy contacts this high up so soon.

Anders approached Daina, who was in the process of preparing the last of her bandages. “Corporal Daina.”

“Yes, Sergeant Anders?”

“I never thanked you, that other day, for helping my recon recover.”

Daina smiled, and continued her work. “Just doing my job, Sir. I’m always happy to help.”

Anders turned to leave, thought for a second, and abruptly turned back. “You know,” he began, “I suppose I should pre-emptively give thanks, as well.”

“Oh?”

“I’m sure we’ll need your help one more time, especially down there.”

Daina nodded, understanding. “I’m not sure I’ll know how to patch up whatever injuries we may receive down there. But I have faith,” she smiled. “Faith in, at the very least, armor.”

Anders turned towards the elevator, an increasingly tight knot forming in his stomach. “No matter what happens, we stand as a team.”

“May unity give us strength.”

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 23:09
#3
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Chapter 3: Blades of the Fallen

Chapter 3: Blades of the Fallen.

Anders breathed on his hands and rubbed them together, warming them amongst the early morning dew the Gloaming Wildwoods had to offer. For the umpteenth time, he wished he'd brought his wolverhide coat.

He looked into the encapsulating darkness, held as Barrus's platoon spread in a semicircular defensive ring around the elevator -- ten squads deep. Anders held the right flank, while Helena was stationed at right flank. The lieutenant took center point.

Almost an hour had passed in eerie silence as Typhon waited, guard up, eyes on the horizon, Hipster nervously flicked safeties on and off, and Ly and Jed were engrossed by the little beeping and dots on their sensors, watching for movement. Anders silently thanked the gods for his officerly position; he had nothing to do but check his sword and flick its energy field on and off in anticipation of use. Barrus, at the tip of the semicircle, gripped his gargantuan blade tightly and held his equally epic shield at the ready. Being on guard for hours in silence left them twitchy and numb to the cold -- adrenaline powered all the mist tanks there.

Half an hour later, a warning call rang out. “Lieutenant, I’m picking something on long range scanners!”called out the fourth squad’s recon. Lysane checked his own scanner anxiously as the red dots coalesced and began to narrow the gap between themselves and the friendly yellow dots. Barrus barked out quick orders. “First and second squads, defensive positions. Third squad, overwatch in rear.” Like a well oiled machine the knights sprang into formation. The guardians were lined and ready, shields at the guard, eyes scanning the darkness searching for the first enemy to reveal itself.

The sound of heavy machinery drew closer and closer.

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"Ly, give me a countdown." Typhon, with his trained guardian’s stolidity, never took his eyes off the battlefront.

"At the rate they're coming, T minus 30 seconds."

Ty dug his boots into the ground. With such a quantity of knights behind him, there was no question that whatever came in his direction, he would block with his shield. No matter what it was, or where it came from, or how powerful it was -- a guardian’s oath was a guardian’s oath. He sensed as Vot, to his right, did likewise. They may be the first deaths, if it happens, but no others would die while they stood fast and could do something about it.

"10 seconds." Ty heard the characteristic hum of dozens of swords activating their energy fields. His shield flared with a deep blue light, at the ready.

"Proximity zero!" All eyes were on the battlefront as the buzzing of mechanical movement crescendoed to its maximum.

With a shudder of the underbrush, a scuttlebot emerged and fixed its single eye on Typhon. It charged -- as fast as its stumpy crab legs could carried it, and charged its energy bolts.

Typhon gutted it right down the middle, and his battle was over. All around him, scuttlebots fell with minimal effort -- guardians doing the damage, while stunned gunners and bombers conserved their ammunition.

"That's...the assault?"

A loud cheer erupted from the assembled squads as they began to move forward and carve through swaths of helpless scuttlebots, breaking formation in relief and bloodthirst. Ly checked his scanner, and sure enough, the red dots were decreasing exponentially.

With only a fifth of their original numbers, the scuttlebots turned to retreat. More cheering erupted, and without second thought, Barrus gave the order to chase. With a cheer, the whole platoon rushed forward, jubilant, relieved, and eager to eliminate the threat for good.

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In the shadows, not far to the west, a shrouded figure of a fallen knight watched onwards as the ordered ranks of the platoon disintegrated into a large pack of disorganized wolves, with knights running in each direction and crossing each other’s lines of fire as they blazed into the darkness

Maverick shook his head in disappointment. "Brash and thoughtless, your price will be steep."
He briefly considered running in to play hero, but dropped the thought immediately. He had stated it that clearly to Anders a week before -- he was no longer a Spiral Knight. He was part of the forest, and the forest doesn't interfere. It watches and weathers on.

The sunlight glinted off his hat, and he pondered the last time he'd been on the surface. Then, thought complete, he faded into the darkness.

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 22:59
#4
Encross
Reserved for Chapter 4

Reserved for Chapter 4

Mon, 02/13/2012 - 22:59
#5
Encross
Reserved for Chapter 5

Reserved for Chapter 5

Tue, 02/14/2012 - 23:47
#6
Encross
Reserved for Epilogue.

Reserved for Epilogue.

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 16:39
#7
Encross
Appendix.

Appendix A: The Spiral Order (rankings).

The standard rank and file members of the Spiral Order are ranked as they are in a standard modern military. In addition to their rank, Order members possess one of four squad designations (striker/recon/guardian/medic). There is no limit to the number of each type of designation per squad, except medics. Where there is only one. When a knight is promoted to the rank of Sergeant, his squad designation changes to the second level (Pointman/Agent/Guardian Major/Medical Officer). The third and final rank is reserved for only the highest ranking member of each squad designation. As a result, there is only ONE of each third level at a given time. The current First Striker is 1st Lt. Vaelyn, the current First Guardian is 1st Lt. Barrus, 1st Lt. Feron is the current Chief Intelligence Officer, and Biotechnician Hahn is the current Chief Medical Officer.
In regard to overall composition, the Spiral Order is broken up into Companies, each lead by a Captain. During the events on Cradle, only ONE company of the Spiral Order is present. The current commanding officer is Captain Ozlo.

Striker/Pointman/First Striker
Recon/Agent/Chief Intelligence Officer
Guardian/Guardian Major/First Guardian
Medic/Medical Officer/ Chief Medical Officer

Appendix B: Spiral Wardens

The Wardens function as an elite unit of the Spiral Order. They do not fall under the jurisdiction of the CURRENT commanding officer on Cradle. They answer only to the very highest ranking members of the Order. However, Lord Commander Alistair, the current leader of the Wardens has agreed to take orders and work in conjunction with Captain Ozlo, the current commanding officer of the Spiral Order despite the fact that he technically outranks him. He does this in order to ease tension between the Wardens and other members of the Order, and to ensure that the collective Wardens and Order members on Cradle are able to rejoin the fleet as soon as possible.
Wardens follow the same ranking structure as the rank and file Order members. Squad designations work in exactly the same way. In the same way as the regular Order, there is only one Champion of the Order/Lord of Shadows/Master of the Watch/Surgeon General at a time. These are honorific titles, and the holders of these titles are not directly addressed as such. In normal conversation, they are simply given the title “Lord” e.g. Lord Cyrano. The current Champion of the Spiral Order is Cyrano. The current Lord of Shadows is Talos. The current Master of the Watch is Lysander.

--Archive--

I need some help!

So I realized that I could use a bit of help drafting out some more characters into this story. I realized that I have slots in a second and third squad, and I figured this would be more fun/interactive if I could get the help of the forum. Anyways, if you're interested, go ahead and throw down the following information:

Name: I'm looking for more realistic names, not so much "Vengeance" or "Tank," for instance. This story's built to have an air of realism.
Gender: Self Explanatory.
Class: Stealth/recon, gunner, bomber, duelist, guardian. Please include some preferred weapons and stay within the class -- duelist obviously likes fast swords, where guardian should use heavier gear. Please note that the story is centered around 3*-4* gear, so fully geared 5*s will probably not get a huge role.
Traits: I'm looking for three key traits to describe your character. Personable, vengeful, hipster, hot-headed, jokester. Remember that I need a fairly good diversity. A whole squad of jovial, chivalrous knights is boring, unless if killed.
Background: This should somehow tie in with the traits (maybe, how your character got them), and otherwise describe your knight's level of training and instincts. You can include backgrounds with other characters.
Additional notes: Anything else you think I should know?

I'll consider every submission, and I'll try to include as many as I can. Keep in mind that your character's fate is ultimately up to the plot (which is fully drafted, by the way).

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 15:11
#8
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Softhead
Would it be okay if you chracter has some 5* gear?

Name: Eris(male)

Class:bomber. He has a Heavy Demo set. His usual weapons are Spike Shower, Plasma Capacitor, RSS and Graviton Charge. He somtimes alternates his Spike Shower with a Heavy Deconstructor and the Plasma Capator with a Freezing Atominizer. He has a Boosted Plate Shield. His trinket is two Boom modules.

Trait: Jokester, Mischevious and hot-headed

Background: A knight who used to play tricks on his friends and got in alot of trouble. He first started with Egg Bombs(do they have that in the SK universe?) as pranks and then soon Blast Bombs when he enlisted in the Spiral order. He is extremley cocky as when people meet him for the first time note about him. He has a mass amount of dud bomb that he practiced until he knew all bombs like an encyopedia. he was handpicked for promotion after being observed taking down King Jelly solo.

Additional Notes:nothing ATM.

If he doesn't work, here is another:

Name: Helena(female)

Class: Recon. Ash Tail with a Solid Colbalt helm as a costume. Has a Rigadoon, Archeron and Avenger. Her shield is a Boosted Plate.

Traits: vengful, morose and wrathful.

Background: after hearing that a friend was killed in the Gloaming Wildwoods, she devouted herself to kill the killer. a normaly chatty person, after that incident, she became gloomy and isolated and honned in on her skills.

Additional notes: once had a consort who she seperated with after that incident.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 14:53
#9
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Valorai
Name: Blue (Thats fine isnt

Name: Blue (Thats fine isnt it? If not, Daina)

Class:Stealth recon

Gender: Female

Traits: Friendly, bored, cautious.

Background: A friendly knight who was robbed for her trusting ways..... She trusted a friend, and after that she ended up with no sense of Joy. She wanders cradle searching for something to quench her thrirst for excitement. She is very skillfull but does not wrok well with a team.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 15:05
#10
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Kaijuhunter
Heres my guy!Name:

Heres my guy!

Name: Ace

Gender:male

Class: Duelist. Ace uses a Hunting blade and Grand Flourish, but will sometimes use a Dark thorn blade. He wears a vog cub set, but uses a Skolver set as his costume. Never uses shields, as he finds them much too heavy, thus dragging him down and reducing his speed.

Age: 15

Traits: calm, kind, and quick-witted.

Background: Ace is the son of Kozma and was always friendly to everyone, Snipes, other Knights, the Strangers, everyone, but when he gets serious, he is relentless. His only problem is that he will usually spare his enemies, leaving him open to a counterstrike. He never liked using heavy weapons, and took more to a quicker style of fighting. He became one of the quickest Knights ever to live and never lets it get to his head. He's also prudent and will think before acting.

If u dont like that, heres another.

Name: Hades

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Traits: a solo fighter, quiet, quick to anger.

Class: all around. Hades is good with almost any weapon, but he specializes in Shadow swords and guns. He hates using bombs. He wears a Snarbolax coat and Fallen Crown. He is armed with a Dark thorn blade, Sentenza, and even a Silent Nightblade renamed Thanatos.He wields a Dark thorn shield that matches his sword.

Background: Hades was thrown out of the kingdom of Almire because of his dark power. He can raise 30 zombies armed with Fausts to fight for him. He currently has not truly sided any faction, preferring to work for himself. He will occasionally help the Spiral Order, but only when he feels like it. Unfortunately fir the Order, Hades has abandoned fellow knights and even killed them himself. He will never obey an order and gets furious when he is defeated by someone he views as weak. He is usually seen with a small Snarbolax named Aeron and a black Snipe.

Additional info: Hades' real name is Aron, and he hates people talking about it. He also lost in a sword fight to Kozma,but anyone who mentions it to him is almost always found mauled or dead the next day, the symbol of the Underworld burning their remains.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 13:02
#11
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Isisdelltion
Vot

Name: Vot
Gender: Male
Class: Guardian. Mighty Cobalt set with an Ascended Cali and a Rock Jelly Shield. Wears glasses and has a com unit.
Traits: Timid, always trying to stay in the back and not get noticed.
Background: Vot was a rookie knight when the Skylark first crashed, and has been trying to become more than just a mere grunt since then. Of course, his tactic of trying not to get noticed makes that pretty hard.
Additional notes: Kinda awkward, but is there for his friends.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 15:07
#12
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Outnuendo
Some app

Name: Jed
Class: Gunner; sunset set with canteen/ helm mounted display, Silversix, kilowatt pulsar. 
Traits: Planner, Sarcastic, Confident.
Background: Jed is always planning, whether he is up against one enemy or a thousand. Most of what he does, supports one of his sayings: "Honor and Chivalry might look nice, but what really matters is who's holding the other person's head." He never rushes in without planning, and is extremity critical of those who do. He is very cynical and sarcastic, and will try and tear people that he doesn't like into shreds. Due to his planning, he is usually very confident in what ever he does. He is very observant and tries to use his surroundings to his advantage.
Additional notes: He has really good vision, and has a pretty good shot as a sniper.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 20:54
#13
Encross
Thanks for the characters,

Thanks for the characters, everybody!

@Atrium I do like your second character a bit more than the first, I think the vengeful personality may have a more interesting twist on the story. They're both good though, and I'll see what I can do about including them :)

@Atg I'll probably use Daina as the name, and see where she fits in.

@Kaiju I'll probably pick Ace from that pair, and play around with it. Do you have any 4* armor sets you'd like to see on Ace, instead of a Skolver set?

@Isis Expect to see Vot soon :)

@Outnuendo ^Ditto, for Jed.

These are great so far, I still have a couple openings left. Anyone?

Also, expect some promotional SpiralSpy created by my co-writer and artist the amazing Lysane ;D.

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 21:53
#14
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Kaijuhunter
Why thank you! *Ace sticks tongue at Hades*

Would ash tail and seraphic set be acceptable? I dont care wich u choose but id like for it to be the dusker one. Well, i hope those 2 choices r good. And ty for liking ace! He is in my fanfic, the Flames of Almire, so plz check it out! The thread is titled as chapter 1: skylark down! The almirian part is only the first arc, or section, ill wright more!

Wed, 02/15/2012 - 21:51
#15
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Kaijuhunter
One thing! *Ace still sticks tongue at Hades saying he got pickd

I have a question. Later in the story, can Ace's set, or at least the weapons upgrade into these items? Heres the set.

Main weapon: Hunting Blade-->Wild Hunting Blade
Secondary weapon: Grand flourish--> Final flourish
Third weapon: Dark thorn blade---> Barbarous thorn blade
Armor: Ash tail set---> Vog cub set(it upgrades speed, and that fits Ace, right?)
If u dont like this set, can u at least make the hunting blade upgrade? Ty!

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 00:55
#16
Encross
@Kaiju Weapons will not be

@Kaiju Weapons will not be the focus of this story, but yeah, we'll see him use something of that caliber in combat ;D.

Thanks to my partner in crime Lysane, we have a SPIRALSPY + Photoshop Teaser up! Let me know what you guys think, I'm excited to keep this going.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 02:00
#17
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Emostabe
Wazzaap

Name: Morris
Gender: Male
Class: Guardian. 'Liberated' a guardian LD set, so he does'nt do a lot of attacking. When he does, though, he has a Troika.
Traits: Quiet, Precise, Looks at the big picture.
Background: Morris is young, but he has a wisdom in his eyes (as far as that goes, at least) that is far beyond a Knight of his relative inexperience.
Additional notes: Is rather patriotic for the Spiralian cause.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 06:03
#18
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Kaijuhunter
Ok

Ok ty! I look forward to seeing the rest of the story

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 06:03
#19
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Ok

Ok ty! I look forward to seeing the rest of the story

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 12:51
#20
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
:D

Thanks! :D
Btw, the teaser looks great!

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 14:38
#21
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
How do u get an icon for ur

How do u get an icon for ur id? My posts dont have those icons.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 17:51
#22
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Kaiju

Forum Preferences, its right next to the search bar, then edit.

Thu, 02/16/2012 - 19:24
#23
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
YEAH BUDDY

Yup i got it! My new icon is valkyrie set, which i will be acquiring! I have angelic helm right now...

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 14:27
#24
Encross
Thanks, isis!

Thanks, isis!

In other news, Chapter 1 has been developed a bit further -- still playing around with characters. Apologies for the short sections, but I'm still fleshing things out before really diving into the plotline. The next and last part of Chapter 1 will be up soon! No player characters have been included YET, but you'll see the second squad before the chapter ends ;).

Thanks to Lysane and Spiralspy, we've got another teaser out, a squad pic. Expect more of these!

Fri, 02/17/2012 - 06:20
#25
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
*Ace eats ice cream*

Will Ace be making an appearance soon? Can u make a teaser for him?

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 14:24
#26
Encross
He'll appear when the plot

He'll appear when the plot dictates so.

Another teaser, of the members chosen for the second squad! (Don't worry, Ace will be in it, but not part of the second squad). Chapter 1 will be finished and uploaded early next week.

Notes:

I changed Daina's class to medic, as Helena is already a stealth recon, and Daina's given personality was more suited to the task.
Ace didn't quite belong here with his personality and loadout, so I balanced it out by cutting him and including Jed. Ace will be making an appearance later.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 18:54
#27
Valorai's picture
Valorai
Oh, there was a medic option?

Oh, there was a medic option? If I saw that, it's what I would've chosen.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 20:09
#28
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Love the second teaser, Vot

Love the second teaser, Vot looks just as I'd imagined. :D
Keep up the awesome work!

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 20:10
#29
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
--

D: Double post.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 19:48
#30
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Well....

Oh hey Spiral-Hipster, I made a new fanfic, The fight for haven... Please check it out. If u can, can u or Lysane make the art for it?

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 22:11
#31
Encross
Ly and I would be happy to

Ly and I would be happy to help you out, though Ly will probably be pulling most of the weight as I'm writing the rest of Chapter 1 as we speak (our graphics are already created, I'm the one behind >.<). Ingame mail me (Spiral-Hipster) and Lysane with what exactly you want, and we'll talk from there.

Sat, 02/18/2012 - 22:27
#32
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Ty ty ty ty

Ok nice! I will be on ltr so ill try ti contact u! Ill be telling u the teasers id like to be made! Thank u!

Mon, 02/20/2012 - 08:49
#33
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Bump

Keep up the awesome! PLEASE!

Tue, 02/21/2012 - 16:13
#34
Encross
Sorry about the delay

Sorry about the delay everyone! Chapter 1 will be completed tonight -- Ly and I have been a bit bogged down in work these past few days.

Wed, 02/22/2012 - 07:42
#35
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
FINALLY

Oh cool! Oh btw Hipster sent a letter to Ly and im waiting for the rsponse. He replied before, and im just waiting for him to create the teaser. Thnx

Wed, 02/22/2012 - 07:46
#36
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Errr

Btw this is the link for my fanfic, can you check it out, Hipster? This is the link:

Http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node44199

Plz check it out

Thu, 02/23/2012 - 00:28
#37
Encross
Chapter one COMPLETED,

Chapter one COMPLETED, Chapter 2 teaser released! Sorry it's late -- and I promise there will be more SpiralSpy in the next chapters :), but don't forget to hit the links!

Spoiler: Chapter 2 will be short, and will be out pretty soon in completion :).

@kaiju: Your link appears to be broken?

Thu, 02/23/2012 - 08:41
#38
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Yay almost done with chptr 4

@Hipster na i edited it. Before i forgot to put the http:// thing in. Btw Ly said he made the teaser for me and hes sending it to u for the final editing and photoshopping. Oh well, heres the link for my fanfic.

Http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/44199

Thu, 02/23/2012 - 09:21
#39
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
That was truly

That was truly just...
awesome. :D

Fri, 02/24/2012 - 14:34
#40
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
O.O

Hahaha nice teaser, i noticed theres another pic of varnus' crest or somethim? Keep up the good work

Tue, 02/28/2012 - 23:54
#41
Encross
Thanks for the positive

Thanks for the positive reviews guys! Chapter 2 will be released this Friday, the writing's there but we're trying to really get the graphics together to make it better. Stay tuned, shortly :).

@Kaiju, expect some ingame mail about your commission. I'm taking care of it ATM.

Sun, 03/04/2012 - 20:27
#42
Encross
Chapter 2, posted! It's

Chapter 2, posted! It's miles shorter than Chapter 1, and sorry for the delays -- schoolwork x[.

Chapter 3 is on it's way! Expect a teaser soon :), and it'll be a bit longer and more interesting ^^.

Don't forget to check out all the spiralspys!

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 13:00
#43
Isisdelltion's picture
Isisdelltion
Great work as always!

They just get better and better don't they? :D

Mon, 03/05/2012 - 16:40
#44
Encross
Thanks for the positive

Thanks for the positive comment, Isis! Ly and I will try to get more stuff out ASAP. :)

For now, here's a Chapter 3 Teaser.

Additionally, Ly has written up an appendix regarding the ranking system within the Spiral Order/Wardens. Check it out -- I think it'll make chapter 2 a little easier to follow. It's located right after the epilogue save.

Sat, 03/10/2012 - 23:09
#45
Encross
Chapter 3 part one posted!

Chapter 3 part one posted!

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 08:54
#46
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Questiones, por favor(I DONT NO SPANISH)

Nice, i love that chapter! Quite good! Btw i have a question, will Ace appear soon? Sry if im being annoying.

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 08:54
#47
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Questiones, por favor(I DONT NO SPANISH)

Nice, i love that chapter! Quite good! Btw i have a question, will Ace appear soon? Sry if im being annoying.

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 08:54
#48
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Questiones, por favor(I DONT NO SPANISH)

Nice, i love that chapter! Quite good! Btw i have a question, will Ace appear soon? Sry if im being annoying.

Sun, 03/11/2012 - 08:54
#49
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Questiones, por favor(I DONT NO SPANISH)

Nice, i love that chapter! Quite good! Btw i have a question, will Ace appear soon? Sry if im being annoying.

Tue, 06/19/2012 - 12:56
#50
Softhead's picture
Softhead
O_O

Is this still going?

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