YEAH NEW PAGE! *looks around* HUZZAH! *steals Isis' victory dance that involves falling out of chair* OW! *creates new victory dance* YEAH
A fanfic i made. (prequel to the battle for haven)
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 21:10
#52
YEAH NEW PAGE! *looks around*
Fri, 03/16/2012 - 22:43
#53
@outnuendo
Nothing so far, but I'm sure he is wise enough to learn from mistakes so he won't do something like that again(well I hope)
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 01:55
#54
I have recently made a fanfic
I have recently made a fanfic called The Clash!
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 09:17
#55
WHO CARES
.... I dont really care if you made a fanfic... But Pow, please STOP advertising on my thread. I will unleash my Nacho Alchemer MKll on you if you keep doing it.
Oh and... Im not trying to sound mean. BUT STOP SPAMMING
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 18:09
#56
And so I assume when they are
And so I assume when they are in the Auction House, they will hear Mayist:
Tsuna: Who's that that's yelling? What's he yelling about?
Striker: Oh, he's just this one madman that no one really pays attention to.
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 19:31
#57
Response
@Mindspark: lol i am putting those lines in right now. Ok im working on chapter 5 now.
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 20:36
#58
Chapter 6
Chapter 6: The Rebel
The poor Snipes fainted. The Strangers twitched. Even Tsuna sighed. The screaming Knight was ignored by most of the other soldiers. But Tsuna was getting anoyyed. "What was that, Striker? Whats that weirdo yelling about?" he asked.
Striker waved dismissively in the direction of the man and said, "Oh, that guy is just this one maniac that everyone ignores. Dont worry, youll get used to it."
Sadly, the young Archangel did NOT get used to the shouting. Somehow, Striker went on bidding on Materials, new recipes, accessories and gear. Finally, Tsuna yelled, "SHUT UP!" The screaming man paused and looked at him. He glared at Tsuna with a weird intensity as he said, "You are not welcome here, weakling. Get out."
"And you? You think you are so strong?" Tsuna shot back. The man responded with a snarl and he said, "Care to test your theory, fool?" Tsuna nodded and grinned.
"What? What, what, what, what, WHAAAAT?" was Krogmo's response. The king's toady cheeks flapped up and downat the request. The stupid Knights were asking to borrow his Coliseum for one match! But they promised to give him 150 Jelly Gems in return! He laughed, then started to chortle. "Fine by me, Knights. But i better get my Jelly Gems soon!" Striker nodded and went off in search of some Jelly Gems. Sullivan the Pit Boss tried to hide, but his employer saw him. "What be wrong with ye, Sullivan? Get my Coliseum ready for them scurvy Knights! Off with ye!"
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Done, hope you liked it?
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 23:05
#59
[Insert Title Here]
sweet, is my knight the crazy screaming guy?
Sat, 03/17/2012 - 23:34
#60
What Dark Ritual?
Name: 'Footm
Gender: Male
Race: Undead
Weapons: Gran Faust, Sentenza, Umbra Driver, Dark Retribution
Armor: Chaos Set
Shield(optional): n/a
Personality: Evil, Twisted, Wretched, as bad as you can be.
Bio: Ruler of [main setting], was once good, with the others, but then back stabbed them, desired more power, and went on to rule his own... Domain/setting?
Twist degree(this is how your character develops over the course of the story): MOAR EVIL
Good or evil? Eveeeeel.
Role: ...Ruler of a bad place, wants to kill everything? (Other Knight #1)
Misc: 'Footm likes wells and often shouts "DIE IN A WELL!", much like the Red Queen from Alice in Wonderland shouts "OFF WITH THEIR HEAD!"
Sun, 03/18/2012 - 07:28
#61
It's been 6 chapters.
And no Sign of Kristopher? -_-
Sun, 03/18/2012 - 18:03
#62
@Phantom
Hell appear soon. Just wait. Hes gonna be part of the- WAIT. I CANT REVEAL THE PLOT! Stay tuned, you will see him
Mon, 03/19/2012 - 12:54
#63
... No one is reading...
... No one is reading... FUUUUUU
Mon, 03/19/2012 - 13:53
#64
I read them all so yea
But I'm still waiting for more chapters, as well as for a reply for my questions.
Mon, 03/19/2012 - 13:55
#65
I am reading.
Except I'm also reading Knock, Knock, Boom by Tevokkia.
Mon, 03/19/2012 - 14:28
#66
Response
@Aria: 1- were going back just 2 years. Second, im alright with that, Sora will appear hopefully. If i have a spot for her. Third, yeah, Seerus mad eproject R, but in this story Tinkinzar helped. There. Im making chapter 7-8 right now
Mon, 03/19/2012 - 14:50
#67
Chapter 7
Heres chapter 7. Btw the crazy knight is called Mayist
Chapter 7: Battle
The two Knights entered the ring. It looked sort of like the Training hall since it had the vials all over and some barriers and obstacles. Tsuna took out his Ash tail coat and Angelic helm then put them on. He strapped his golden Nightblade onto his back and drew his Ascended Calibur. His white Mighty Defender gleamed in the sun.
Mayist, on the other hand, had equipped a Sinister Skelly set and Dark thorn shield. He had a Faust in one hand and a Sentenza in the other. Sullivan the Devilite yelled, "Enter!" and the two stepped in the battlefield. King Krogmo was on a high perch and was stuffing himself with the Jelly gems that Striker had brought back. Tsuna looked over and his friend's face was haggard and worn, tired and sleepy. But he stayed awake and watched Tsuna with a mixture of concern and excitement. The Archangel looked away and took out his sword. Mayist pretended to shoot him with a finger gun. "This is going to be fun" he said. Krogmo, that fatty toad, watched in disinterest and said in a bored way, "Begin."
Mayist charged Tsuna and feinted a strike to his left. When the Archangel blocked, he swayed to the right and shot him in the stomach with his Sentenza. Tsuna absorbed the blow and slammed Mayist on the head with the butt of his sword. His foe quickly recovered and began to barrage him with dark energy. He slashed at him with his Faust but Tsuna intercepted him with his golden Nightblade and kicked him to the ground. Mayist toppled over and fell. Tsuna pointed his Ascended Calibur at him and looked up at Krogmo. The toad nodded and announced drearily, "Tsuna Sawada has won. Give him his prize and get this Mayist man out." The Spookat guards grabbed the Knight with their teeth and dragged him out. Tsuna looked at him and swore to himself that he had seen something strange on his rival's face... That man would be a real problem in the near future... Even though Tsuna tried to stay calm, he could not shake the dark feeling in the pit of his stomach...
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there, done. Hope you like it.
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 14:14
#68
Chapter 8
Heres chapter 8. Enjoy.
Chapter 8: The Mission
Striker as just about to take a nap in his makeshift bed when a ring came on his com unit. He tapped it and heard a familiar voice: "
"Hey, Striker. This is Intel Agent Kora here. I need you for a mission." Striker groaned silently and responded. "Fine, what do you
want, Kora?" "Ok, Spiral HQ has found another artifact left by the Alpha Squad. We need you to get it." Striker's eyes twitched and he
shot back "Why do you need me, you son of a snipe?" Striker could almost hear Kora scream inside of her brain as she said "We need
you because of your... Skills." she said that like an insult. Again, Striker yelled inside as he said "Ok. Roger that, Kora. I'm on it." He
hung up and walked over to the couch he had let Tsuna sleep in overnight. He poked his friend awake. "Come on, dude. We gotta go
somewhere." Tsuna groggily lifted his head, dark rings under his eyes. The guy had a right to be sleepy after the duel he had
yesterday. He had fought that maniacal Mayist and had mutilated him. The kid is pretty impressive, Striker thought. Anothe ring
came, only this time on Tsuna's com. Striker could barely hear anything, but he caught a few snippets of the briefing Kora must have
been giving Tsuna. "Dreadful... Docks... You m-st d-stro- th- Devi-it-s... W-tch out, k-ddo. Yo- will f-nd new a-lies th-re." Striker
didn't hear anything else. Tsuna gulped. His white wings started to droop. He nodded grimly to Striker and said, "Ok. Let's do this."
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There, finished. Hope you liked it.
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 17:44
#69
Chapter 9
Heres chapter 9. Right now I'm experimenting with a new writing format that makes it easier for people to read the story. Ok, here you go, enjoy!
Chapter 9: Pow
Blue was infuriated. So was her friend Vot. Some stupid knight was going around and putting up posters that said that they liked
each other. NONSENSE, COMPLETE NONSENSE! Blue thought. She and Vot were good friends but they didnt like ach other THAT way.
"I swear, when I find the guy..." she heard Vot say. Then he bumped into another Knight. "... Uuh... Excuse me, but can you watch
where you step?" the boy said politely. Vot nodded and let the boy and his friend pass. Blue swore that she almost saw a halo above
the boy's head and wings sprouting from his back... But why would an angel come to Cradle, Blue thought. Then she shook the feeling
and went to the Auction house with Vot. There, crazy as ever, was that weirdo Mayist, the so called "revolutionist". Stupid guy wanted
to rebel against the Order. Blue sighed. "Hey, Vot. Im going over to bid on some items." she said to her friend. He gave her an
acknowledging nod and she walked away. Then out of the corner of her eye, she saw someone putting up another poster. She ran up
to him, grabbed him, and threw him on the ground. He had the standard Cobalt set, just like the two knights she and Angela had run
into the other day in the Training Hall. She stared at him in fury and he trembled. Vot had also caught a culprit by the Alchemy
Machine in the Arcade. This one wore a Chroma set, but Vot could feel the warm spark of a Mercurial Demo suit underneath his
costume. Blue did worse things. Horrible things. She stole all his crowns(not much, really) and even took away his cobalt gear then
left him in a newbie proto set. All of the other knights saw. Kozma, Brinks, even Feron watched. None of them liked the culprit, whose
name was Pow. One of the Knights, named Kristopher, even laughed. Pow deserves that, he thought. The stupid guy was always
bragging about how fast he was, about how much better he was than any other Knight, stealing their sandwhiches during lunchtime,
even saying that he would get the whole Snarbolax set in a week. Snarbolax? Ha! Try Snarbo-bit**! Everyone saw the kid get
decimated.. EVERYONE. No one helped. Blue gave Pow one last good strong kick to the stomach to prove her point, then walked
towards the lifts, ready for her next mission.
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Done
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 12:24
#70
hehehe
(Then out of the corner of her eye, she saw someone putting up another poster.) sounds like klepto. he does this stuff for fun.
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 14:57
#71
Hey, You said he'll appear soon!
You LIED. And I don't TOLERATE lying!
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 16:47
#72
Gosh...
For the love of god Phantom, Be patient! :|
Tue, 03/20/2012 - 19:51
#73
Respnse
@Phantom: if you had just read the update chapter 9, youd know that Kris has a brief mentioning. Dont worry, he gets a good role later on.
Sat, 05/05/2012 - 15:35
#74
Chapter 10
Ok, the fun starts here! Enjoy.
Chapter 10: The Squad's Birth
Blue saw the exact same two boys in the lobby. The exact same boys that she and Vot had met earlier. Then there was Angela and
that goofball Ace. One boy had a Dusker set on and sheathed a Sealed Sword. He strapped a Blackened Credt onto his back. His name
was Striker, and he was kind of an airhead. The other boy seemed nicer and more QUIET. He had a Seraphic helm and an Ash tail
coat. A Silversix and a golden Calibur hung from his belt. Angela had her usual Wolver set and Tailed helm as costume. A Rigadoon
was strapped onto her belt like a scabbard. The youngest boy, Ace, wore a Cobalt set and had a Swift Flourish in both of his hands.
The boy with wings, Tsuna, explained that he and his friend Striker were sent on a mission here. It was the same with Blue, Ace, and
Angela. Tsuna smiled politely at everyone and said, "Well, we aren't gonna get anything done just standing here! DESCEND!"
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Üna jumped onto her target. She stabbed part of his shirt to the ground so that he couldn't get up. Finally, she had caught Cross. He
scowled at her saying "What are you looking at?" Üna grinned slyly. Cross gulped, but his green eyes betrayed his fury. He ripped the
Calibur out of his shirt and tossed it away. Üna swiftly caught it and pointed it at Cross. But her enemy had recovered already. His
Shadowsun gear glimmered in a sinister way. In Cross' hands were two Sentenzas. An Umbra Driver was strapped to his belt. He
pointed his twin Sentenzas at her, an evil grin on his face. "Oh this is going to be easy. Get ready... Üna."
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"Phew! Damn, that was hard!" said Striker with relief. "Yeah, it sure was!" agreed Ace. They had descended into the Gloaming
Wildwoods and came out with minor injuries, even though they were dead tired. They had worked together perfectly. Tsuna's wings
glowed brighter and he said "I have an idea." The new friends looked at Tsuna as he said "Lets make a squad!" Everyone agreed. Ace
was the striker, Striker was the heavy hitter, Blue was the tactician and Medic, Angela was the gunslinger, and even though Tsuna
said no, everyone voted that he should lead. He was the one who had commanded them so perfectly in battle. He was the strongest
and best of all of them. Tsuna smiled and he started scribbling on a piece of Wolver fur. It said this:
Leader: Tsuna
Gunner: Angela
Striker: Ace
Heavy hitter: Striker
Medic/tactician: Blue
The Archangel smiled warmly at all of them and said "Ok then, from now on we are the Nova squad!"
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Done, I hope you liked the chapter so far.
Kaijuhunter, signing out.
Sat, 03/24/2012 - 01:46
#75
One problem, Pow always has
One problem, Pow always has billions of spare sets of armour in his arsenal station. So he regains his stuff and speeding all over the place. He has even been known to go so fast he ruined the forcefield gate at Emberlight! And he takes off that proto armour and reveals his real armour. And, also, it makes no sense for Blue to attaclk Pow because Blue is the elite squad's medic in my fanfic, and Pow is in that squad.
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 11:33
#76
@Powpowpowpowpowpow
You really have to stop frequenting places you apply to JUST to emphasise your characters' overpowered abilities. Just be happy you got your guy in. You have a fanfic, use that to emphasise how utterly flawless and boring your characters are.
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 11:38
#77
@Scamall
DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!
*Sets up High-Five*
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 11:38
#78
@Scamall
DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!
*Sets up High-Five*
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 11:38
#79
@Scamall
DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING!
*Sets up High-Five*
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 11:42
#80
@Atrumvindex
T-T-T-TRIPLE HIGH-FIVE! Yeah!
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 12:26
#81
Now, refer to my new fanfic
Now, refer to my new fanfic to see how much of a brute I really am.
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 14:06
#82
SHUT UP POW
Again, utilizing gargantuan idioms to appear intelligent.
I dont like you Pow. Never have, as you spam all my thread swith advertisements for ur own crappy story. So be happy I even ADMITTED your stupid, overpowered character. And I saw ur new fanfic. It sucks. Now I shall be converting back to my intelligent form. You have all the grace of a pregnant Lumber and I despair of ever being rid of you, you cretin.
And i said, stories are better with flawed characters. Your guy is so OP, i had to do that to him. Plus, i wanted to use him as a punching bag. So if you keep spamming me, i will either kill him off or remove him from the story entirely. Jerk.
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 15:19
#83
Awesome chapters kaiju
Anyway does anyone know a guy named Jim-Dale in the forums? He is a funny guy with a different outlook on things and always speak in third-person, there is a certain someone who isn't funny spams spam...I mean spam things. But I will read on over these events of random crap till it ends and hope someone can learn something out of this.
(P.S I love grammar too much, damn you English writing lessons.)
(P.P.S everytime someone posted a comment with grammar errors I cry my eyes out)
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 17:17
#84
NOW I see it.
Haha, he laughed. You should edit that a bit to make it so that Maria barks in a laughing way as well!
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 18:52
#85
Some responses
@Phantom: good idea, ill include that too! It would be funny if Maria was laughing. Another way to humiliate Pow's character! Btw if u want i will tell you of Kris and Maria's future roles in the story. I will send u an In Game msg notifying u. Its a private thing. Ok.
@basically everyone: i am working some more on chapter 10 and have quite a bit done. Expect the full chapter soon!
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 19:48
#86
[Insert Title Here]
so, do I have to be patient to get an appearance?
:/
Wed, 03/21/2012 - 20:12
#87
Responding to u
@Wenky-wenkers(Wenkuang): i guess, maybe in like 3-4 chapters will Javex appear. He's pretty good, ill put him in soon
Thu, 03/22/2012 - 22:46
#88
Any idea when i'm coming in?
Just let me know, i'm checking in now and then. Your chapters are really good btw.
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 10:39
#89
SUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Blows up this thread* HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHHAHA
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 10:44
#90
SHUT UP!
Jeez. Go back to your ''Fanfics''
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 11:34
#91
This is not a thread. This is
This is not a thread. This is just bits of other destroyed threads in one thread. HAHAHHAHAHHAHA
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 11:36
#92
I question your sanity..
Crazy son of a...
ADMIN!!!
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 11:49
#93
I question Aria's
@Aria: Everyone knows about Jim-Dale. Jim-Dale owns the internet. Not-Jim-Dale is confused why you'd even ask that.
~Not-Jim-Dale
Also....
Pow, you didn't read it, did you. -_-
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 11:53
#94
@Powpowpowpowpowpow
No! Bad Pow! BAD! *Squirts Pow with water bottle* You know you're not allowed on the thread! OUT!
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 12:38
#95
@Godofskype&Kaijuhunter
thers no call fore that cained of laugeg!
@Powpowpowpowpowpow no your the SUCKER *kiks Powpowpowpowpowpow of a platform* I'l see you in the core you troll punk!*stares at Powpowpowpowpowpow as he falls into the clockworks*. (I'm bad bass yyyaaa)
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 12:57
#96
@Kaijuhunter
I dunno, I'm not really a fan of nachos. The cheese is artificial and bad tasting. I prefer Doritos. Or tortillas. I'll form the Other Exotic Foods Coalition as an allied branch of JANEF.
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 13:53
#97
ENOUGH
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lSTOP FIGHTINGl
l
l Ok NEVER! l
l(can)(can't pick)
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 14:41
#98
Ok, I have taken it much thought and...
I JOIN JANEF! COUNT ME IN! :{O
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 18:52
#99
Notice
Sorry guys cant post any new chapters for a while. And Ise, ur now a JANEFian. Isis, Atg, we got a new member! :3 so like i said, cant poet any new chapters for now since im WAY too busy with certain things in my 14 year old life. Meh.
Fri, 03/23/2012 - 18:56
#100
MY PUNCHING BAG
@Scamall: NO! BAD SCAMMY! ONLY I GET TO BEAT UP POW! Nope, im just kidding. He's EVERYONE'S punching bag! :3 KEEEEL HIM, THE CRAZY DUTCH BASTARD!
What i would do: *headshots Pow with badass Sentenza and watches as he falls to his death*
bye bye, you damn troll punk.
Ok guys i added the links to some of the chapters in the first comment. Im gonna finish chapter 5 soon!
"Gah... We cant give up... NEVER GIVE UP!"
~Ace Braver, quick striker.