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Poison Brandish and Alchemer series

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Thu, 05/10/2012 - 11:25
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Verodius

For the sake of completeness because the 3 other 'main' statuses have them:

Poison Brandishes:
3-Star: Toxinburst Brandish (or "Toxiburst Brandish")
("An upgraded Brandish infused with the elemental essence of poison.")

4-Star: Banebrand
("A high-tech blade that fuses Spiral and Clockwork technology. It can produce a powerful corrosive discharge that is harmless to knights.")

5-Star: Urbladeium
("Built using some older, unstable technology that was slated for dismantling before the crash, This blade is known to cause nearby plants to wilt from presence alone.")
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Poison Alchemers:
2-Star: Venotech Alchemer
("An alchemical handgun that fires highly corrosive bullets that split on impact.")

3-Star: Venotech Alchemer Mk II
(see above)

4-Star: Venom Driver
("A high-tech alchemical sidearm that fires powerful Venom bullets that split multiple times on impact.")

5-Star: Corrosion Driver
("The bullets fired from this gun are so corrosive that its inner workings require their own forcefields.")

Thu, 05/10/2012 - 11:47
#1
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Schattentag
Eh...

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Thu, 05/10/2012 - 11:53
#2
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Verodius
Oh goddamnit...

I've been ninja'd it seems. I promise I didn't actually read that thread before making this one.

Thu, 05/10/2012 - 12:06
#3
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Schattentag
lol

No worries. It's not like what you've put here exactly overlaps what Luguiru has. You've got names and flavor text, Luguiru's got logistics. Of course it would probably be better if there was just one thread containing both parts, but whatever.

On the subject of naming, I can't quite say I really like Toxinburst and Urbladeium. They don't exactly roll off the tongue too well. For Toxinburst, I think simply taking out the "n" might suffice - Toxiburst seems to flow better. As for the 5* version, it doesn't even quite to fit the poison-inflicting weapons' theme. We've got stuff about sickness (virulent, biohazard), stuff about venom, and stuff about toxins. How about something like Venovirus?

Thu, 05/10/2012 - 12:21
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Verodius
Yeah I was trying to make a

Yeah I was trying to make a pun on "Blade" and "Uranium" because you know, Radiation. It seemed like it'd be a good theme for a Toxic Brandish to have due to it being green and glowing.

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