I'm still here! Please don't ditch me!!!!
ERHHRHHAAHHEEMMMMM
But anyways, I've got Part 4 done, nothing too flashy, more of an intro thingy, still, I got some ideas down with this part. And I'm wondering, some of the characters are actually just your n game knights isn't it lol, I had to resort to making my own character cause no one has used this thread... T.T
Ahh, oh well, Enjoy :3
~ Fan Fic: The Secrets of the Clockworks - Hidden Truths ~
Thu, 07/12/2012 - 15:58
#52
Why U No Like Mah Story/Thread Anymore!?
Thu, 07/12/2012 - 16:03
#53
The Secrets of the Clockworks - Hidden Truths - Part 4
Rose stood over the limp bodies lying on top of each other. What to make of this, she wondered. The one on top looked like a Dusker, and was wearing a pair of some shades that obscured his eyes. Wasn’t that quite pointless in a place like The Keep? Idiots, Rose agreed frowning. He also had a pipe and it was exuding a thick odour, Rose had a pipe too, but it was merely aesthetical. The smell ticked her off, and she HATED it when someone looked like her. The Knight underneath the Dusker was old, and wrought with scars. Oh great, an old toughie, Rose thought annoyed, he was shield less as well, what a show-off, Rose crossed her arms angry. She looked down at the knight squashed at the bottom. He seemed to be the youngest out of the three, being short and having the weakest armor, Rose silently laughed to herself about how He would react to this.
They were all unconscious, Rose fumed, all the more work for her, why? WHY?! Except... Rose looked closer at the one at the bottom, who seemed to be struggling to stay conscious, but he was. Rose stepped forward and the knight looked up, or tried to (it’s kinda hard with two other fat knights on top of you)
“Wha-...? Help...” The knight breathed before his eyes closed and he slumped back onto the ground. Rose stared at him a while longer.
“WAKE UP!” Rose screeched, but none of the knights moved.
“I am NOT carrying you.” Rose grumbled to the unconscious trio. Then she charged her Voltaic Tempest and unleashed it down the Keep, into the gloom beyond the Candles surrounding them. She examined her armor, a Vog Cub Coat, and walked up to a Candle, reached in and pulled out a chunk of the shimmering blue flame. She raised her eyebrow in curiosity, then stuffed it into the centre of her Vog Cub Coat, which instantly flared blue. The red cracks leaked a blue light, flowing from the centre outward, changing it into a light blue version of the Vog Cub Coat.
“This better work or I’ll...” Rose threatened to no one in particular; in the area. She hoisted all three of the Knights up, with one under each arm and the small one on her back. Taking a deep breath, she sped off with remarkable speed, the Halls lighting up as she ran by, a flickering light in the midst of the darkness that overwhelmed her.
George opened his eyes, he felt exhausted. Suddenly, he wondered, how did he survive falling over the edge? Where was he? Was he dead?! George looked around; Ian was still lying unawake on the... bed(?) next to him, George was also in a bed. George forgot, where was that other guy? He turned around and saw Trobolta standing in a corner, glancing out the window.
“Uh... what’s... going on?” George asked Troblta, who remained silent, leaning against the wall. He appeared to be in thought. George got up and realised there was a bowl of... something... unpleasant smelling and looking on a table. George was starving, and he knew that the stuff that seems the worst is actually most likely good for you, only for food however. George got up and headed for the table.
“Don’t eat it” George heard Trobolta say as he was reaching for the spoon.
“W-why not?” George asked peering at Trobolta’s back, but he didn’t reply. George thought it would be best to listen to his advice, and went back to Ian’s bed. He was still breathing, and wasn’t out of health energy, he was just... sleeping. George hadn’t given much attention to where he was so he looked around, he was in what resembled to be an infirmary, but there was no door to enter, or not one that he could make out. He walked over to where Trobolta was standing, and looked out the window, he was then reminded of the true majesty of the Clockworks, giant axles, gears, wheels, always in constant motion, stretching far off. Just then, a section of the wall, vanished, sliding into itself, revealing a hall. A decked out Knight walked in, who looked from Ian to George to Trobolta. Then she glared at the table where the three untouched (with the exception of Trobolta’s, which was spilled and food remains splattered all over the table) bowls lay.
“WHY DIDN’T YOU EAT!?” She screamed stomping her foot.
“I save you from being turned to Soul Dust and the LEAST you could do is eat my cooking! I’m not TRYING, yet, TO KILL YOU!” Rose yelled at them.
“What?” Ian said, glancing at the scene in the room.
“Never mind that, GOSH, come with me, seems you’ve got strength to at least walk, even without my delicious food. He needs to talk to you or something.” The Knight turned and headed out the door, into the hallway. Trobolta breathed and then followed. Ian looked at George and shrugged, gave the food a disgusted look, then hopped out into the hallway. George ran out and they all marched after the knight.
“So, um what’s your name? Where are we going? Who needs to see us? Where are we? How did-”
“SHUT UP!” The knight grabbed at her Divine Veil. She took an exaggerated breath.
“Name’s Rose, don’t. Forget. It. And if you must know, I’m taking you to see Seth.” And Rose said no more.
Thu, 07/12/2012 - 16:04
#54
Whoa.
I lost track of this
Whoa.
I lost track of this thread.
Ill be sure to catch up on the story.
Thu, 07/12/2012 - 16:13
#55
Heart
I LUVZ U
/gunpuppyface
Thu, 07/12/2012 - 16:24
#56
Friend me!!!!
Refer to title, I will accept if I can get on (interwebz problemz as of late) this will help me develop your characters better! But I will not spoil anything, unless you want me too :3
Fri, 07/20/2012 - 12:31
#57
Sorry about the small chunks as of late
Yah, I'm falling behind, so I have to throw out small chunks so knights don't forget I exist :(
Please don't forget me!
Fri, 07/20/2012 - 12:42
#58
The Secrets of the Clockworks - Hidden Truths - Part 5
They made their way down the hall in silence. George had so many questions, but he could see that Rose was in no mood for any more questions; in-fact she looked very annoyed... or maybe she was always like that, George pondered. The hall was rather large, stretching at least five Lumbers across and a ceiling reaching remarkably high, despite there appearing to be only one level.
George transferred his attention to Rose, and inspected her more closely. She was equipped with a Vog Cub Coat and a Divine Veil, but strangely, there was a faint blue glow that emitted occasionally from the Vog Coat. A crest of Almire was strung across her back, but there were foreign fixations attached to the shield. She also had a flicking tails tails, but it seemed normal.
“Stop staring at me creep.” Rose glared, as George looked up sheepishly. “Right in here.” She gestured to a heavy metal door, before shoving it open forcefully. “SETH! The Knights who fell are awake! Get your furry little butt over here!” Rose hollered towards a giant computer set up. George’s eyes goggled.
“Wait furry?” Ian suddenly realized. “Wha-?” Ian looked at George, who shrugged quite confused himself, then at Trobolta who shook his head slightly. George look around the room, there were several doors leading in and out, he wondered what this was all about.
“SETH!” Rose cried angrily, stomping toward the computers, unsheathing her Acheron rapidly, which caused a horrible screeching as the shadow blade scraped against the scabbard. Everyone winced, even Trobolta.
“Okay!” A ‘growly’ voice called from behind a door. Which flung open and a Gremlin carrying an armful of multiple coloured shards wobbled out. “Just, er, let me place these things, off, down!” The Gremlin dropped them off in a pile near the computer. “Oh! That reminds me!! How did the mechanism work!?” The Gremlin asked in delight, running over checking all over Rose’s armor, mumbling things to himself.
“This is Seth,” Rose pointed to the Gremlin tapping at her armor, “who should get off me NOW.”
“R-Right, anyways, hello, I’m Seth.” Seth tapped a wrench on his head, smiling. George gaped, Ian mumbled “Now this is... new” and Trobolta scratched his head curious. “I’ll go through the ‘talking Gremlin’ thing later, but we got more pressing matters to discuss. As in, ‘how you got here?’” Seth questioned, his voice becoming more serious.
“Well...” Ian looked at Trobolta for an explanation.
“I was ahead of our group here, and it was really dark, but then I saw something move, at first I thought it was a Grimalkin, but then, everything in front of me shifted; I couldn’t make out anything in the darkness-”
“That’s ‘cause your wearing freaking SHADES! How idiotic can you get.” Rose interrupted angrily. Trobolta ignored her and continued,
“I felt this... horrible chill, worse then fighting any kind of undead, even losing all my health energy didn’t give me this chill, it felt like I was facing...” Trobolta sighed, “Death.” He crossed his arms and turned around, signalling that he didn’t want to continue.
“Well, after, Trobolta told us to ‘get back’, then before we could even react, this giant, black, shadow ‘thing’ came out from behind him and hit us all, it was like nothing I had ever experienced. Its power was overwhelming, just knocking us off, but that’s all I remember until waking up in that room.” Ian finished. Seth, thought for a moment then said,
“Come with me.” He and Rose headed off to a door near the computer.
“Again with the following.” Ian grumbled as they all headed towards Seth and Rose.
Thu, 08/30/2012 - 05:15
#59
herp
found thread cuz u told me to read the other parts ingame.
keep it going man!
Sun, 10/14/2012 - 17:13
#60
WHOA
Stealth Bump!
Mon, 10/15/2012 - 19:40
#61
LOL
I can't believe you did that lol, but yes... I said this thread would die when it dies... I haven't said it's dead, so it's still alive! It's just that no one cares about it anymore :C
Thx Artistbma :)
Mon, 11/05/2012 - 22:49
#62
The Secrets of the Clockworks - Hidden Truths - Part 6
They entered a room that somewhat resembled a meeting room, Seth was sitting at the far side of the rectangular table set in the middle of the room, on a custom made chair, he readjusted his goggles, while tapping the table impatiently, his face was scrunched up in concern. When everyone was seated, Seth sat up and began:
“I can understand how confused you are at the moment, but as always, the answers will come when the time for you to understand them is right. I’m afraid you guys are stuck with us however; you have entered a place - while still within the Clockworks – that is completely different from what you know as ‘The Clockworks’. This isn’t just a place to go to train yourselves and search for your mythical Core.” Seth paused abruptively, as if he had spoken of something that was not meant to have been spoken of.
“Mythical?” George interjected, “What? Many, many Knights have been to the Core! They have looked out at its surface, seen it beating like a heart!”
“N-never mind that... The point is that this isn’t the Clockworks that you’re used to. It is much worse. When you knights first crashed on this planet, it took a while for you to establish a base of operations in Cradle, but years to settle down and complete your network through the Clockworks!”
“Network? What do you mean?” George asked.
“Yeesh, you think the Arcade and elevators just randomly popped up, or the Strangers made them? Well, they didn’t, you knights did. They spent lot of time researching the Clockworks, and figuring out how to create that network. They were pretty smart though, creating that network like that. The use of Mineral properties to create those floors, it was genius! Combining the Minerals to conglomerate different creatures, manipulating the Clockworks essentially, however... many knights’ lives were lost building the whole thing. You should know that if you’ve ever visited your sword graveyard. Oh yes! Back to matters, Rose, can you demonstrate your special Vog Coat?” Seth handed the attention over to Rose who was slumped over her chair, sleeping serenely.
“Rose! You know I hate it when you, or anyone,” Seth looked slightly over at the three knights at the other side of the table. “Falls asleep when I’m explaining something, especially something serious!” Seth walked over and whacked Rose with his wrench.
“ACK! S-Seth? DON’T WAKE ME UP FROM MY BEAUTY REST!” Seth’s perky ears fell flat against his head as he winced.
“I just wanted you to demonstrate my special additions to your armor. Be right back.” Seth grumbled, walking out the door. He came back with a strange device which looked like a crane claw, but at the tips were two slots to fit something. He was also holding what appeared to be a miniature Owlite Candle. He stuck his hand into his pocket and retrieved two minerals, one Luminite, the other Crimsonite and inserted them into the sockets on his device. He pressed a button and the ‘claws’ snapped together with abrupt force, causing a small shower of sparks to cover the owlite candle, which caught fire and started expelling a warm blue glow. “If you will, Rose?” Seth gestured to the candle. Rose grunted and reached out her hand and almost magically before the other knights, pulled a little spark of flame from the candle and shoved it into the centre of her Vog Coat, which flared blue; as it had done previously, unknown to the knights sitting across the table, and the cracked veins altering from red to blue, but due to lack of mass quickly reverted to its menacing red color.
“Wha-What happened?” George asked gingerly.
“I rigged her armor so that it can contain and transmit the shielding affects of owlite candle light. I also made it so that she can pick up the flame, much like picking up embers.” Seth explained nonchalantly. George began to ask another question but was cut off by Seth, a sudden seriousness rooted in his voice.
“Okay, here’s the deal, and you better listen up. Many interpret the world, existence” Seth emphasized the word, “differently, with many explanations. Some say that reality doesn’t truly exist, but is just a mixture of how we interpret the things around us with our senses, others think that some over worldly force created everything or governs the actions of everything, some think that time is set and destinies are but predestined... but what I believe, is that everything, exists, because something of the opposite exists. Every single thing can be defined, by explaining what opposes it. Light cannot be without darkness, hot without cold; life without death. Because of this, anything that ‘exists’ will have something that can balance it out, making that thing definable. We can explain things with similar differences, but are actually not. Such as saying that the opposite of any single being would be...” Seth paused, hesitation suggesting that he wasn’t explaining things properly. He then pointed at George, “Okay, too confusing, what if I asked you what the opposite of you would be?” George, intrigued at this little Gremlin’s philosophy, turned to look at the other knights; Ian was absent-mindedly staring at Seth, occasionally looking somewhere else, Trobolta leaned against a wall, where he was focusing at, was a mystery obscured by his Dusker Cap. Rose was snoring decently, head on the table.
“Um, I don’t know, nothing?” George replied, unsure.
“Exactly, you’d think that the opposite of you, would be nothing, but then a lot of people will have the same opposite. That’s my point.” Seth paused again to let his words sink in.
“Um, I still don’t get it, and I’m paying more attention than this entire room combined.” George said. Seth looked distraught, but then said,
“Well, then take these two things from me. One, never, EVER, judge something before you get to truly understand it, trust no one but yourself. Two, everything has an opposite, which allows that thing to exist.” Seth summarized, sad that no one was paying any attention to him. He sighed, a hint of a canine sounding whine in it, before continuing. “Well, you guys aren’t going to last a second out there, outside this little establishment. The enemies are... different. I’ll need to give you guys some important info on how you’re going to survive.” Seth said advised before standing up, signalling the end of just one of his many lectures, and as if on cue, Rose woke up. “Follow me this way; we can get around to the store room form here.” As they all trumped over to follow Seth, a scratching sound was audible at the door of the meeting room.
“Hmm? What’s he doing here?” Rose mumbled.
“Must have come for supplies or something.” Seth answered. Ian and George exchanged glances, Trobolta scratched at his Dusker Cap and stood at a tenser stance. Ian’s eyes hinted suspicion, something seemed strange in the air, familiar. George looked questioningly at the two knights, it looked like they were preparing to take action. Seth opened the door and a flash of brown whisked through the doorway.
“What’s going on?” Ian said, his voice fierce as he held his Sealed Sword in front of him in a defensive pose.
“Aw, you scared the poor guy!” Seth mumbled, walking over to a corner of the room, where the three knights couldn’t see, their view blocked by the table.
“Just what we needed, more cuteness.” Rose complained, “I’ve got stuff to do, my job’s done, I’m out.” Rose said as she walked out the door.
“What’s this buddy? Got a message for us?” Seth said in a surprisingly mocking voice, a tone you’d use for a baby. George and Ian walked over to the other side of the table to see what Seth was talking to, curiosity overcoming their confusion, Trobolta with his hand gripping his blade followed. Seth turned around to look at them, “Oh, this is Cyan, please don’t frighten him again, he’s worn out as it is, hard coming this far, what with all the dangers outside.” The three knights peered behind the Gremlin to see a wolver, bright Cyan eyes locked onto theirs, a rolled up sheet of paper clutched in its mouth.
Mon, 11/05/2012 - 22:51
#63
I'm back
Yay, it's not over, so I need support again :D
My character submitters, could yah plz come back to help me!? D:
Tue, 11/06/2012 - 00:22
#64
Hey, Hexy. Guess where my char is from?
Name: Arzran / Spitfire
Gender: Male / Male
Age: Around about 23 / About 8
Arsenal: Vang of Vog, Vog Cub Cap, Vog Cub Coat, Grey Owlite Shield. (Feel free to change) / Just his claws and teeth.
Appearance:Arzran is a sturdy Knight. He stands a small amount taller than most Knights but does slouch out of battle. His eyes are light blue. Spitfire is a Vog Cub and is glowing. He has lines around his fur which are as hot as magma. His claws and teeth are black and ashen.
Special Skill/Trait:Arzran has a pet Wolver named Spitfire. They are dependent on each other, however and will easily falter if both are seperated.
History: Arzran was just a small, timid boy. He had a king and caring mother and father who hadn't let anything stop his exploration. Taught to read and write but only vaguely. Arzran trained as a Striker and would not let anything get in his way. If someone showed a hint of aggression towards him he would only hesitate if they were a Knight. On his first run of the Clockworks he saw it. Reaching the Elevator the whimpering whispered into his ears. He turned and saw it. Quivering in fear. Shaking. An abandoned Wolver. So small Arzran took it. He hid it in his home and tamed it. Taking it to the Clockworks. The fire-sptting beast was his pet. They worked together from that day. 8 years ago...
Personality: Arzran is a leader of sorts. He loves to lead but if someone else pushes him aside he will stop leading at sit back. He is curious but one of his largest flaws is he can be trapped. By a wide-eyed Gremlin or a scared ghost can fool him into looking behind himself giving the beast a change to attack him. Spitfire is a Vog Cub Wolver. Aggressive unless Arzran cools him down, literally some times, he can be very dangerous. Spitfire, however bends to Arzran's kind words.
Race: A Knight and a Vog Cub
Notes: I know you already have an excess of Knights but I'd really like to see you add these guys.
Tue, 11/06/2012 - 16:17
#65
I was afraid you'd eventually catch me :3
How can I say no buddy? Already formulating how they are gonna fit in, and no, I'm glad that I have moar characters, I need a few more almost desperately, even if just for camos.... Hmmm, this might push things into a much more different path then before expected.... >:3
Wed, 11/07/2012 - 17:16
#66
Eh?
A story? Still rolecasting?
NOW'S MY CHANCE!
Name: Sarah
Gender: F
Age: 17
Arsenal: Snarbolax Cap, Snarbolax Coat, Barbarous Thorn Shield, Barbarous Thorn Blade, Divine Avenger, Leviathan Blade and Gran Faust.
Appearance: Sarah wears a Seraphic Helm with a Fancy Flower and Fancy Glasses on it, and wears the Tabard of the Coral Rose, with Fancy Valkyrie Wings attached to it. She has a Tall Height and her eyes are the "Delicate" style.
Special Skill/Trait: Sarah has the ability to do something she calls a "Energy Scramble" which has different effects, ranging from positive to negative and even...some that are totally strange. (O.o) Here's what the Energy Scramble can do:
Positive:
Energy Restore: Heals Sarah a small bit. Can be used on others.
Energy Zap: Damages enemies a small bit.
Energy Wind: Unleashes some mist that reacts to systems that have to be powered by energy.
Negative:
Energy Shutdown: Forcibly shuts down Sarah's armor systems, knocking her out cold.
Energy Shock: Self-electrocutes Sarah.
Energy Pause: Stops Sarah for three minutes.
Strange:
Energy Teleport: Teleports Sarah to a different part of the level. (Not the elevator)
Energy Spin: Makes Sarah spin. Can be used on others.
Energy Randomness: Chooses a different effect other than this one.
History: Sarah lost her parents in the crash, but she made a few friends and enjoys spending her time in the clockworks. She also researches energy.
Personality: Sarah is quite friendly and very curious, which sparked her interest to research Energy. She's extremely hostile to the swarm(to the point where she will stop at NOTHING to destroy a swarm-infected monster.)and hates it with a burning passion.
Race: Spiral Knight
Notes: She learned the Energy Scramble on accident when she got shocked by one of the giant lightning bolts in the Power Complex, during her research.
Wed, 11/07/2012 - 18:35
#67
Name: Valon
Gender: Male
Age:
Name: Valon
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Arsenal: Arcane Salamander Mask, Snarbolax Coat, Acheron, Callahan, Voltaic Tempest, (no shield)
Appearance: Extra Tall, Red shifty eyes
Special Skill/Trait: Valon is equipped with a Recon Corps standard issue cloaking device. It slowly drains energy while in use, and recharges when idle.
History: Valon, while excelling in training as a scout and infiltrator, never felt very comfortable knowing that his skills would make him stand out from the other recon trainees. Not wanting to be well known to the public eye, he intentionally sabotaged his records and decided to play the part of a lazy slacker. He came out of training known as the worst of the bunch.
Personality: On the surface, Valon appears to be lazy and sleepy. Underneath, he is calm and collected, and will not hesitate to strike down enemies of the Spiral Order. Many foes have fallen for his act, and paid for it with a blade through the torso. He is a brilliant tactician and very lethal swordsmen, though he does carry a Callahan around just in case.
Race: Knight
Notes: He is a terrible marksman, barely passing his shooting exams at the Recon Academy.
Wed, 11/07/2012 - 21:53
#68
Yes.... New Knights, muahahah I'm not dead yet!
@Phantomhamachi - Accepted, I can really see the potential of her skills! Especially needed another woman too lol, we'll discuss more on her developing those skills, I can see how they fit in already!
@Modelp - Accepted too, like the guys background, I can see where he fits, but I might need to get some stuff covered before I can fully fit him in a place that is appropriate.
@Both - Thank you SO much for the apps! Don't forget to friend me in-game so that the details can be discussed. Also both of your guys seem a TEENSY bit OP, so I might have to rework that, make them a tad weaker, can't all have %8 people running around lol, but yeah we'll talk more about them, thanks again!
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 05:42
#69
@Hexlash
Forgot to add this to Sarah's special skill, Energy Zap CANNOT be used on bosses. It also, unlike the name, can't inflict shock. It just sends out a lightning bolt that goes for 5 tiles and then explodes in a small blast that's range is one tile. And when I said Energy Pause stops Sarah, she cannot move at all . Nor can it be cured with a remedy capsule.
Also, Sarah only uses her weapons in self-defense. She's more of a pacifist because of her researching.
So, there's a few tweaks I forgot to mention.
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 11:56
#70
App
Name: Critzer
Gender:Female
Age: Young adult
Arsenal: Snarby coat and cap (or Skolver if you think snarby is overpowered), a grey owlite shield, Combuster, magma driver, and a daring Rigadoon.
She has multiple costumes and accessories (Currently likes to wear hallow fur coat with hallow bomb bandoleer and a hallow tailed helm with hallow vertical Vents). She collects any materials she requires really. But if she doesnt need a certain mat for her goal, she'll maybe trade it or just give it away.
Also has a weapon slot upgrade and trinket slot upgrade.
Appearance:(lean body >.>) Medium height, and the color of crimson red with a dash of blazing orange mixed it :3
Special Skill/Trait: The ability to smith very well and summon a fire giant as she was imbued with the soul of a large amount of crimson minerals in an accident. Her smithing came from learning skills on the streets (Will be explained below in history)
History: Critzer, some would say it is an odd name and she would agree it is. But her horrible past explains why she has a akward name for a female, even if male, its still quite odd.
Critzer was born from a family of moderate knights who envied the knights who had accomplished great things, bringing much glory to their families. Her parents on the other hand where the type of knights that didnt do to much of a WOW factor, but still they envied others. So they decided that they'd have a SON to bring glory to their families. But there plans were foiled when they had a daughter, and the mother couldnt have another child at the chance she may die from the labor. So in being the cause of a critical blow to their plans, they named her Critzer for the word critical.
The parents got the idea of trading her to a greedy man who happened to not want his son and rather a daughter, since she could rack in more crowns for him by being 'cute'. Critzer did learn a few tricks on how to make easy money but other then that, she hated the man and her parents for all her misfortune and at the fact her labor was unrewarded. So she eventually ran away at a young age but old enough that she could fend for herself (11 if yall wondering). But she just ran away from him and not to anything. She became an orphan roaming around, slowly earning crown by crown doing small task. As she got older, she began to endurance herself to require less to survive, allowing her to save her coinage. Once she grew to the ripe age of 16, she presented herself to the Order to become a knight.
She became a recruit in the order before the Skylark crashed and she escaped using a pod like everyone else. But her pod landed into a large deposit of crimson minerals, the minerals depositing their fiery quality into her body. But she did not receive all of it, otherwise she would have been killed, luckily her pod absorbed most of it, thus saving her but the amount still knocked her out. When she awoke, the pod was red hot. She soon left the pod and got to haven like everyone else. She told some researchers about her and what had happened and they examined her, the amount though was so vast, that they could not fond enough minerals to give to other knights (was also dangerous).
So now...In haven, she has used many of her skills to charge through the ranks and earn many crowns to buy and transmute her equipment.
Personality: A kind, loyal, trustworthy girl with a nice sence of style and how to look sharp. But she is a bit of a hoarder of her items, not that she never gives anything away but she never throws it away. Also, in danger, her mind and heart are like two prime blacksmiths who forge weapons and conjure plans at peek efficiency, but as do all people she does make simple mistakes time to time.
Race: Knight
(Im sorry for it being so long, i got rapped up in it XD. Please dont let that not allow her to be in the story >.<)
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 12:10
#71
^
Its quite different from other apps that i have put in that you may have seen but your story goes into so much depth, i felt it was necessary to make a character app with a large amount of detail. Once again i'm sorry if she is OP....you can move some of her equipment down a star if necessary.
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 15:48
#72
You called for a character?
Might as well try...
Name: Ayase Niritsuge (usually just called Anna) (pronounced Ayaseh Nireetsoogeh... Or something like that. Youd understandmif you were Japanese)
Gender: female
Age: 17
Arsenal: Chapeau of the Black Rose and Shadowsun Slicker as costume, while actually wearing a vog set. She wields a steel katana and wakizashi (long and short swords, respectively), a small tantō (knife), a crossbow, and two black-and-purple Valiances.
Has a shadow com unit, shadow bomb bandolier, and a shadow parrying blade. Also has an elite strike module and penta heart pendant.
(Prefers to use her katana and wakizashi instead of a sword and shield, which makes her swifter, but also leaves her defenseless. Even so, she can block even a strike from Vanaduke's mace with just her hands.)
Appearance: normal height, with stormy grey-blue eyes.
Special talent: is a trained ninja, and therefore posesses almost un-human like abilities; she can scale the Firestorm Citadel (im guessing its about 300 feet tall) in less than a minute, is capable of sprinting non-stop for hours on end, can sneak up on even a wolver (the most keen-sensed monster on Cradle), and is an accomplished swordswoman and hand-to-hand combatant: she is said to have defeated a Lumber with her fists at age 4, and supposedly even shamed Lieutenant Feron himself by beating him in Lockdown in only 2 seconds flat.) Ayase's senses are so sharpened, she could hear a pin drop from 500 feet away and spot a sleeping, camouflaged chromalisk out of a whole pasture of grass.
She also is skilled in other, not as impressive but still cool things. If lost, she can find her way simply by detecting a busy trade route (which is done by tasting the dirt for traces of salt, which is present in Spiralian sweat) or by using the night sky as a sort of map. She isn't superman or anything, but she is truly THAT skilled.
(Tidbit: Ninjas literally could sneak up on almost anyone, as they were so quiet, and ate particular foods so they couldnt be smelled either. They were on a life time healthy diet, and could scale even the hugest fortresses. Most were also good strategists: they used whatever means necessary to defeat their enemy, and were smart enough to know when to retreat.)
History: ill do this later,
Personality: respectful, well-behaved,graceful, pure, and kind (when shes in a good mood). Shes usually a goody-goody, but she knows how to have fun,too. But get her mad, and she will make you TASTE THE RAINBOW.
Race: Knight
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Not done, just gotta do the history
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 18:02
#73
Woot!
Thanks for more apps knights! I however, must adhere to the urgency of school work, along wiht the addded characters, so it will take me awhile to get the next part out, in fact, maybe not unitl december, because these new characters will be used, so I need to rethink the story line to fit them in, but also get my school work done, so don't expect a new part anytime soon, but I WILL use all your characters in the story, thank you! Sorry for the inevitable delay though... :S
Thu, 11/08/2012 - 22:42
#74
^
Dont worry Hexlash, just dont let this fall into the depths of the garbage of the the treasure vault....
You have great talent and we dont want your work (and these apps) to live in solitary confinements in the forum Grave Yard
Fri, 11/09/2012 - 14:34
#75
:O care!
OMG thx Critzer! That means A LOT to me!!!! I'll try and get another part out this weekend, but being the Remembrance day weekend, I might not be able to.
Mon, 11/12/2012 - 07:08
#76
BUUMP
This be my bump, i shall support this thread!
Mon, 11/12/2012 - 17:32
#77
Thank you!
Thanks for the bump! Sorry for not getting anything out, but I did however, figure out how all the new knights will 'generally' fit in, keep in mind that I have no completely solid plot yet, so the characters and the events are really shifty, but the general climax and important events are the same. I also had time to actually 'read' Critzer and Kaijuhunter's apps, and have a place for them! But I have been thinking, what is my story lacking so far? I need some people to tell me how it's going, and also, if you want your character to against the protagonists, feel free to tell me, so far I really only have the general Clockworks enemies, they don't post too much of a threat, so if you don't mind having your character be 'evil' then please tell me! As well, I might need more non-knight characters. Oh and just because I'm requesting this, doesn't mean any new app presenters have to do it, if you had a character in mind then go ahead! I'll take whatever I can get! :D
Mon, 11/12/2012 - 19:19
#78
Random Teaser!?
I'm bored, and I want to prove that all recently submitted characters are being used, just keep in mind this on the spot chunk may or may not be actually committed into the story, but hey, what the heck :3
......
"Are you okay?" Critzer gasped, heaving heavily as she wrapped her arm around Valon.
"Yeah, I'll live." he smirked back, the two of them getting up without hesitation.
"Could you two hurry it up? Can't hold up my own forever!" Sarah called, as her hand lit up into a flurry of sparks (btw, can you specify her Personal Colour?) . She moved her hands in a quick snapping motion and flicked her wrist towards a dark silhouette behind the group, shooting a spray of bright light into it, knocking it back and leaving it stunned. Sarah turned and let out a gasp as another silhouette appeared between her and the group, catching her off guard momentarily. Valon's eyes sharpened, and in and instant he vanished, reappearing in front of Sarah as he whipped his Archeron through the creature, which dispelled back into the darkness as quickly as it had come.
"Thanks." Sarah barely managed to say before Critzer let out a cry, her Daring Rigadoon furiously slashing out an unseen foe before the group.
"Now!" Critzer commanded, not expecting an answer, she flung herself at the beast, which swiped it's claws at her sending her flying back. Sarah reached up her hand emitting a warm fluorescence as she caught Critzer by the arm mid-flight, exchanging the glow up Crtizers arm, reviving the wounds the creature had inflicted, as Sarah helped her land on her feet.. Valon shot up, firing his Voltaic tempest in a switch-back pattern, but the silhouette flashed between them, cleanly dodging them all. Then Sarah was there, taking advantage of Valon's distraction, she drove her Leviathon Blade into it's side causing it to dissipate.
"Aw and we were having so much fun." Valon sighed placing his hands behind his head in a relaxed position, but his tensity showed that he was anything but relaxed. "Maybe we should take a break, have Sarah give us all some patch-ups." Sarah smiled at the comment, but her eyes remained watchful.
"In your dreams buddy, we're not in the clear yet, we're going too slow as it is." Instinctively, the group picked up the pace, causing Valon to remove his hands from his head, grunting as he did so. "But I must say, good shooting, best I've seen you do." she joked.
"Um guys? Too slow is right..." Critzer mumbled, worry laced in her voice, causing the others to turn around to look at her, who was looking behind herself, where more than a dozen silhouettes had appeared taking up the narrow path just behind them. Critzer's hand flared red, as she gripped her Magma Driver, she fired randomly, wisps of red trailing behind every bullet, resulting in a small blast of red every time a bullet struck something, creating a blood red cloud obstructing the silhouettes, but they marched through unfazed.
"It's not working. They're getting stronger... how much longer?" Critzer moaned.
"Not sure, but Seth said it would be somewhere here, and we have to trust him." Sarah replied, agitated.
"Geez, calm down ladies, Seth wouldn't send us on a suicide mission, we're good, besides it's not like we can't trust him at this point. I can feel it, I'm sure we're-" Valon stopped. Causing Sarah and Critzer to bump into him. The two girls looked ahead, Critzer put her hands to her face and sighed,
"Really." Sarah mumbled. Ahead of them were a group of silhouettes obscuring the path, with both groups closing in on them.
"Nice 'feeling' you got there." Critzer mocked.
"Well, mind as well take a break now, seeing as we don't have much of a chance." Valon paused and said, "And no more 'magic', you know how risky it is to be using that here, we already took a huge chance using Sarah's Energy Scramble, and Critzer powering up your stuff. Anymore and you too could of..." Valon trailed off, gripping his Archeron in one hand and his Voltaic Tempest in the other. Sarah dual wielded as well, Gran Faust in one hand, Divine Avenger in the other. Critzer wielded only her Combuster. The group braced for the incoming fight, not sure about the outcome.
A flash. Metal reflecting light. The group hesitated, what was that?
Something zoomed through the silhouettes, resulting in a sharp cry as half of them vanished.
"What?" Valon breathed in disbelief.
A whish of sound emanated from the group behind them, several more of their numbers destroyed.
"How could..." Sarah gasped.
Several small objects whizzed by Valon followed by several more, one nearly striking Critzer.
"Ack, what's going on?!" Critzer asked, clenching her fists.
There was another flash of metal.
"Whatever it is, it's taking out these things quicker than we could take down one of 'em, prepare yourselves." Valon warned.
And then as another round of objects whizzed through the air, Valon thrusted his hand out, snatching one from the air, slightly scraping his hand, but he didn't wince. He inspected the object as he heard the last of the creatures vanish.
"It's... some sort of bullet." he concluded, showing the others. Suddenly they all turned around just in time to see a figure drop down and land in front of them without a sound. They all pointed their weapons at it, but then it spoke.
"I hope I didn't injure one of you." The female tone was straight and clam, the figure stepped forward, revealing herself to be a knight. Her face abruptively became warm, a smile adorning it. "My name is Ayase Niritsuge, it is dangerous here, I was watching you a while back, making sure they didn't harm you, but what business do you have in this horrid place?" She questioned, pure concern in her face, yet still with a hint of authority.
"Um, we are sent here to, uh, do something, I'm Valon, and this is Critzer and Sarah." Valon answered, stepping forward and gesturing to the girls behind him.
"Well, it doesn't look like your used to this place," she paused and suddenly pulled out a strange weapon, and fired at the group, which dodged. A creature in the distance cried out before dissipating away. "As you can see, you're 'something' must be quite important to be dwindling here. Whatever your matter, I will put it upon myself to escort you through here. It would be my honor." The knight bowed, before saying, "Call me Anna." with that she turned around and continued up the path. A strange blade rested in her hand, as her footsteps made not a sound.
"Well, that's interesting." Sarah whispered.
"Agreed, but I'll take what I get, doesn't seem she wants to eat us." Critzer replied quietly.
"The creatures here will do much worse than eat you, friends, or was it... Critzer, correct?" Anna called from up front.
"Plus another crazy lady." Valon groaned, Critzer and Sarah exchanging surprised looks.
"So... Valon, I'm assumign you're the leader, so what is it you exactly are aiming at doing, if you do not mind me inquiring?" Anna asked.
"Well," Valon looked at the other girls. Who shrugged, Anna seemed as on their team as any. "We're looking for a knight with a wolver."
.........
So!? How was it!? I decided to show that I'm not a boring guy who just drones weird stuff, but the point in the story requires for me to get in as much info as possible, to set up the actual plot, so I did this, I guess, to show that I can (hopefully) write a good action scene with suspense. Please do not question this chunk, as like I said, it was on the spot and the details are sketchy. But I hope you guys liked it, and for the character creator's please tell me how you think I'm doing wiht your characters, and if this is the right sort of disposition and w/e to match them! Thanks for reading!
Mon, 11/12/2012 - 21:52
#79
I Luvs it
I like how you integrate them all into a team, 2 magic users with a non magic user. But....i wonder, why cant they use magic a whole lot and if they needed help, Critzer could have summoned her fire giant/Titan. I mean i know that was scene of disposition was an opening for Anna. Now if you just use Critzer's and Sarah's most powerful moves (magic) for prime bits then its ok.
was kinda in a rush so if it seems rude at all, im sorry >.<
When i say 'summon', its somewhat like using a mecha knight tool kit, and isnt really 'big' but is just powerful, but a bit slow....
Mon, 11/12/2012 - 22:25
#80
CAN i be in the story?
Name: Topoyozada
Gender: Male
Species: Half Gremlin/Half Knight
loadout: Hallow fur coat and Hallow Pith helm as costume, with the assecories ribbon, com sight and a comlink. Wears Mighty cobalt helm and armour and for weps uses full cobtl weapons.
Bio: The name Topoyozada is really long, so most people would call me Topo or Top, maybe even Chatter. Dad was Gremlin, called To'opakied, while Mom is called Astrid(who's a Knight, ranked Vanguard) Was found in the a aboanded Gremlin POD( stands for pelted oppostion den) Was then raised a knight and had a lot of adventures( *read Treasure Vault story My life as a Hybrid for refrence). Has a sister called Moltif and his best friend is called Moltif. Has a Vog Cub called Quicksilver, but she died in the last stand of the core*. Is specailly fond of Mewkats and Wolvers and hates using magic and hates gremlins.
Age: Not sure, around 8-16 as Gremlin ages are diffrent from Knights.
Tue, 11/13/2012 - 16:38
#81
"The most common name in the world is Mohammed."
Lol
@Critzer, the reason that a lot of stuff was un-specified or had restrictions was that for that little section, I had a setting where *Spoiler Prevention is in effect* because *Spoiler Prevention is in effect* and then I thought that it would make it *Spoiler Prevention is in effect*. Jk lol NO. Well, since I did it on the spot, it was closer to major plot points in the story, and I wanted to create suspension by not revealing many details, such as why they couldn't use their 'magic' which is already saying A LOT (hint hint) so yeah if I do eventually use it again later on, I'll revise it a bit and you'll know by then what's going on :3
@Topoyozada, thanks for the app, that's a really interesting character, but I think it'll take some time for me to find a place for him.
Tue, 11/13/2012 - 17:23
#82
congrats
i would like to say that i laaaave your stories they are fantastic, keep up the good work, and do you still need more characters?
~Hyeu
Wed, 11/14/2012 - 08:52
#83
Supporters
Supporters UNITE!!!!
Wed, 11/14/2012 - 14:39
#84
I forgot to do so but..
Her Personal Color is Sky.
Thu, 11/15/2012 - 17:48
#85
THANK YOU!
I really appreciate the renewed support and it really encourages me to continue!
@Hyeu, sure if you have a character, shoot!
Sat, 11/17/2012 - 15:12
#86
here's a character
Name: Hyeu :D
Gender: Male
Age: Young (lets say 19)
Arsenal: Perfect Mask of Seerus, Nameless Poncho, Barbarous Thorn Shield, Cold Iron Vanquisher, Callahan, Sentenza, Hail Driver
Appearance: Normal
Special Skill/Trait: Never misses a shot:D
History: Woke up in some random bar, in proto, worked his way up to the top the hard way
Personality: Practical, otherwise random
Race: Knight~~~
Notes: None...
Sun, 11/18/2012 - 17:00
#87
"The Neanderthal's brain was bigger than yours is."
Sorry guys, I don't think I'll get anything done for a while, too much school work, and I'm working on an entry for Tev's Contest, so jah...
@Hyeu Hmmm, I might have to fit him in as a camo... yeah I think that's what I'll do :/ But hey, he's accepted!
Tue, 11/20/2012 - 02:20
#88
bump
(large space) bump
School is school and we understand that, just hope you dont forget about this thread what so ever.
Wed, 11/21/2012 - 16:43
#89
:3
lol
Thanks for the support Critzer! I can really see that you enjoy my story so far, which really means a lot! But yeah, I REALLY don't think I can get anything out for a REALLY long time, but feel free to check out mt story entry for Tev, once it's done that is...
Sat, 12/01/2012 - 07:05
#90
Ok,
Name: Stephanie
Gender: female
Age: 12
Arsenal: Valkyrie set, divine avenger, Levi, aegis, AP, bts, Shivermist, valiance, royal jelly set, volcanic salamander set
Appearance: girl with long hair. Period TrollololololLol
Special Skill/Trait: fastest of all knights
History: just some random knight, nothing else. She's been training for 5 years. Her parents had died in a battle against gremlins, and she fled. She then trained hard, and has defeated many people in lockdown, matching the skill of even the most talented knights. She reached the rank of vanguard at age 10. She then defeated the most talented knights known and unknown to the spiral order, and she then met Chris and formed a guild with him. Then they made the jempire look like a wimp. After that, they had become some of the spiral order's strongest knights
Personality:she's nice, but aggressive towards enemies
Personal Colour: purple
Race: knight
Notes: well known by many and is the strongest of all knights
Number2
Name:Chris
Gender:male
Age:13
Arsenal:snarby set, skolver set, Vog cub set, aegis, Levi blade, GF, SentenzA, glacius, nitronome, Ash of Agni, true love locket, mercurial demo helm, mercurial mail, and saintly silver pin
Appearance:a small boy with spiky hair(not shown cuz of armor)
Special Skill/Trait:sneaky! Is so sneaky, it's like he's invisible Smart, and good at making plans. Expert aT recon
History:his parents also died. He then escaped, and he beat up a tier 3 lumber with Proto set. He then kept training, and was stronger than anyone else in lockdown. he kept training, reaching the rank of vanguard at age 8. He is an expert at soloing and also great at teamwork. He went on over 9000 expeditions without deaths. That included the time when he fought a knight in lockdown being "ninja" he also defeated some unknown godly knight who betrayed the spiral order. He then met Stephanie and, well formed a guild. Now their guild is number one on the list, making the jempire look like a wimp
Personality:kind, sneaky, and, likes to play pranks.
Personal Colour: blue
Race:knight
Notes:awesome gear, he is well known by many
Sun, 11/25/2012 - 11:37
#91
I see...
Hmm, thanks for the app, I'll get back to you on how they fit in @Doom-Xx, but a quick question, are the two related? Or do they know each other at all?
Mon, 11/26/2012 - 13:48
#92
They know each other
They know each other
Lol I wrote ITS OVER 9000!
Fri, 11/30/2012 - 13:42
#93
Bump
Bump
Sat, 12/01/2012 - 06:45
#94
"I can shoot faster than you," Mark Weisritter says.
Application, Cause I want to help you build more characters for the story!
Name: Sarah(anudder sarah... but if you need a new name, let it be: Vera)
Gender: female
Age: 19
Arsenal: Dark Reprisal and A Pair of Blades foreign to the world of SK(dey look liek dis: http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110311023614/superrobotwars/imag...)
Appearance: Girl with long brown hair, doesn't wear helmets and a large b*st...(Sorry... But I viewed her like this....) Beautiful face, gray eyes and fit body. Her armor's like a plain shirt and jeans. They contain small ethnic patterns...
Special Skill/Trait: She can transform into this http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110311023614/superrobotwars/imag... whenever she could, but it can only be available when she's at a moment of need. She has the ability, Kiss of Temptation, allowing her to hypnotize somebody.
History: As the Black Spectre, she was sent to eliminate the anomalies in Cradle. She was sent by Herald, a holy spirit manifested from the Core itself. Little does she realize, she has become an anomaly when her journey was three-fourths done.
Personality: Nice to a certain person(you'll find out soon enough when I release the sequel of Fallen White Angel...) and Agressive towards most knights.
Personal Colour: Black, with small streaks of red, yellow and white.
Race: God, Knight
Notes: She can use every weapon with ease, can copy everybody else's abilities and an expert with sword and bomb, able to teleport for easier maneuvering.
Sat, 12/01/2012 - 06:54
#95
Hexlash where are you?
Ps I
Hexlash where are you?
Ps I need to add to the histroy
Wed, 12/05/2012 - 08:25
#96
BUMP
Abyssal-Flmaberge, your character is quite unique....i wonder what would happen if Sarah(or Vera) and Critzer met....?
A knight with the ability of flame (usually associated with hell) and the God(knight/angel) that has the power to duplicate other's ability and turn into a mech.....
Both have reasonable background and are both good (nice) in a sense.....
Wed, 12/05/2012 - 19:33
#97
Reasonable background?
Reasonable background? Abyssal and Kaiju's characters are both incredibly overpowered.
Thu, 12/06/2012 - 08:15
#98
Yes, Reasonable background
When I say background, i refer to the story behind them, not their powers. I stated their power in the next sentence, keep the subject of their history and powers apart.
But i do agree that those to characters a op in some way, but i bet Hexlash asked for a weakness to make them less op, as he did with me if the weakness wasn't listed....
Thu, 12/06/2012 - 10:40
#99
Hello?
Hello?
Thu, 12/06/2012 - 14:27
#100
How did all these comments get here?!
When did all these comments pop up!? Well ok, let's get this over with.... lol
@Doom-Xx Sorry lol, I've been really busy, and I'm not sure what to do next at the moment.
@Abyssal Your character goes real in-depth, and it might have some complications, because you're story differs from mine, so, if we can sort that out I'll accept! :D
@Modelp Hi! I'm glad you dropped in for a post!
@Critzer /yes
I will may not be able to read anything very recent after this, but please! Please give me feed back and add to my characters! I really hope you enjoy what I've been throwing out there, so if you have an opinion that you would like to share, I would like to hear it! With that, I bid thee all, Good Night!