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Hm? Whats this? Kaiju is planning to finally make a story?

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Mon, 08/20/2012 - 21:15
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter

Yep, im making a story, titled, "Agent: Codename Black-Tide". Ill have the link to the first chapter up soon, so plz be patient.

Ill be needing apps again, so plz follow the app skeleton below

Name: their standard, normal name.
Code name: basically what a knights username is, such as kaijuhunter, or isisdelltion.
Age
Gender
Additional appearance: be very descriptive, just so you know, knights look like anime people, for reference. They even have the option of anime eyes, if u want. U can post links of what ur character looks like as well.
Race: spiralian, gremlin thwacker, rabid snarby pup, etecuh.
Personality
Gear
Acessories if any
Twist degree
Bio
Role: list of available roles is below
Class:

There are also custom classes, just to make things interesting.

Normal classes-
Striker: same
Recon:same
Guardian: same
All around: good with everything, expert in all classes.
Destroyer: like guardian, only focused on almost pure power. expert in heavy, extremely powerful gear. Very strong
Assassin: like a mix of recon and striker. all around, very fast and stealthy. Expert in fast gear.
Defender: like guardian, only focused on almost pure defense. Very resistant to almost anything.

Custom classes-
Be creative, and the gear has to fit! Ex. A "sniper class" knight cant be using a dark retribution, unless hes a mix of bomber/gunner
You can even make up your own gear, but it has to be descriptive, and not too OP.

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Skia squad: main squad, full

Leader: Ray (codename Black-Tide)
Swordsgirl: Sarah (codename White-Ripper)
Optional class: destroyer class, Drago (codename Red-Death)
Optional class: Assassin class, Zero (codename Dark-Blaze)
Optional class: All around class, Anna (codename Blue-Slash)
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SLE= Spiral Law enforcement: one slot left

Leader: specialized Defender class, Dusk (codename Gzilla)
Optional class: Tactical class, Lynne (codename Spark)
Optional class: Revenant Class, Darius (codename Snow-Raven)
Optional class: available
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So far, thats all. Ill keep updating.

Mon, 08/20/2012 - 22:31
#1
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Myqpalzm
APP!

Name: Neil Watt
Codename: Stealth-Watt
Age: Around 15-25
Gender: Male
Additional Appearance: Personal color is yellow, have a round eye, not too tall.
Race: Spiralian
Personality: Friendly, respect each others, a bit cheerful.
Gear: Equip Ash Tail Coat as the armor and Cobalt Armor as the costume, Gunslinger Hat as the helm and Magic Hood as the costume, Primary weapon is Final Flourish, Secondary weapon is Blaster, Have a Tetra-Heart Pendant as the trinket.
Accesories: Cobalt Crest, attached to the Cobalt Armor.
Twist Degree: He used to be a nerd
Bio: Newbie, that's what they call Neil. Neil is very popular in place he call "school", because he never made it in every class. Many thinks that Neil can't become a knight and have to become innocent Spiralian. But, Neil still doesn't give up until he can made it in a class. Yup, Neil actually made it in the Recon class. If Neil want to become a Recon knight, he have to made it in the final test. But, Neil made it into the Recon class. Neil was so happy that day. He proved himself that he can become a knight. After that, Neil got a mission, the briefing is in the Skylark. After he go to the Skylark, the ship fly off of his homeplanet. In this point, you should know what happen next. After Neil make it into Haven, he got a medal because of his bravery. Wanna know why? Sorry, but that's another story!
Role: SLE Leader
Class: Recon

Tue, 08/21/2012 - 05:56
#2
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Artistbma
I was gonna give you an app

I was gonna give you an app but my phone ran out of charge right when I finished, so I'm in an annoyed state.

Tue, 08/21/2012 - 07:33
#3
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Oh, shoulde told you guys

Oh, shoulde told you guys this, but, this happens about 70 cycles (years) after the spiralians crashed.... So u cant incorporate anything about Isora, unless you character is super old.

Fri, 08/24/2012 - 08:55
#4
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Doctorspacebar
After making two complete psychos in other threads...

I think I'll make this character sane.

Name: Lynne

Code name: "Spark"

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Additional appearance: Personal Color: Blue, Eye Appearance: Determined, Height: Tall.

Race: Spiralian

Personality: A brilliant tactical mind, Lynne is calm and calculating, to the point of sometimes seeming cold; she's brutally honest about many matters. Her heart's in the right place, though; anyone who has earned her trust has gained a strong friend.

Gear: Lynne wears a Dusker Coat and a Fused Demo Helm; she has planned on making these into a Skolver Coat and a Volcanic Demo Helm, respectively. Her father gave her an Elite Bomb Focus Module, an Elite Quick Draw Module, and an Elite Sword Focus Module; she'll equip whichever two she deems the best for any given situation. Lynne has a varied, but fairly low-levelled, Arsenal. As far as Swords go, she can choose an Ascended Calibur, Iceburst Brandish, and Swift Flourish. Her guns include a Super Blaster, Needle Shot, and Shadowtech Alchemer. Her bombs are a little better due to being straight from Dr. Spacebar's own laboratory.

The Snowbomb Cluster is nothing more than snow packed around a bomb; however, this is alchemically primed snow, and it contains samples from the Heart of Ice and Everfrost Valley. Its basic explosion causes Elemental damage and strong Freezing, while spitting out more exploding snowballs that give it more hitting power. Both explosions combined have a little more magnitude than a Spine Cone of the equivalent level, and unlike the Premium Shard Bombs that can be found in local wastebaskets, have no ridiculous dead-zones or stupid disappearing clustered-bombs. Lynne currently has the three-star Snowbomb Cluster, as well as a Graviton Vortex, a Twisted Spine Cone, and a Lightning Capacitor.

Acessories if any: A black Plume on the back of her helmet; this is really just a hole, to let her hair out of her helmet.

Twist degree: Lynne has minor acrophobia. She finds this to be "irritating" when called to go into the clockworks.

Bio: Doctor Julius "Spacebar", an expert on computers, medicine, explosives, and medicinal computer explosives, married late in his life. Lynne, his only child, was his pride and joy, more so than any bomb he developed. Lynne always wanted to work for the Spiral Order, and in her later teenage years, she found her calling.

Spiral Law Enforcement was having a tough time with the sinister Hidden Blade, a secret society of truly wicked Spiralians. SLE had vastly superior firepower, but the Hidden Blade was clever, striking from the darkness, and laying traps that brave yet unprepared SLE agents would run right into. However, they made the mistake of attacking Dr. Julius's laboratory. Aside from the fact that those Everfrost Snowball Clusters really can dish out heavy damage, this attack incurred Lynne's cold, calculating wrath. She recognized the need for more advanced tactics against the Hidden Blade than what was already employed, and had been considering a job in the SLE.

Quickly proving herself a worthy Recon as well as a tactical mastermind to be feared, Lynne found herself welcomed into SLE with open arms. The Hidden Blade was thwarted and their dealings with Gremlins, Devilites, and the Swarm had been stopped. Lynne, under the codename "Spark", continues to work for SLE, coming up with plans of attack and fitting her loadouts to match the situations as they come up.

Role: SLE Tactical Support

Class: Recon

Sat, 08/25/2012 - 00:13
#5
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
To read the story, go here:

To read the story, go here: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/62941

Edit: sry spacebar, but the knights made peace with gremlins, so they wont be dealing with secret evil organizations for a while... Other than that, your character is great! Shes accepted

Sat, 08/25/2012 - 03:50
#6
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Roablade
Okay, let's see if I can create a good one...

Name: Darius

Code name: Snow-Raven

Age: 21(Due to his background, this is simply his speculated age.)

Gender: Male

Additional appearance: Slightly taller than the average Spiralian. Personal Colour: Cyan. Eyes are usually Shifty, but change to Determined when in combat.

Race: Spiralian

Personality: An aloof and shady character, Darius would rather spend his time hidden in the shadows than fighting with the team. He is known for often abandoning his assigned missions for missions of his own and those given by the Stealth Corps. As for tactics, Darius leaves thinking multiple steps ahead to others and instead uses his quick reflexes and sharp mind for the current situation. However, underneath his somewhat dark demenour is a Snarby-lover that would gladly go into improvised rescue missions with weapons at the ready. Despite his nature he is friendly towards others when not in combat, even if he often fails to express it in a normal manner.

Gear: Wears an upgraded version of the Gunslinger Hat and Frostfur Coat crafted without the Stealth Corps' signature dark patterns. The Frostfur coat is is considered 3-star armour and the difference between it and the Dusker coat is that it provides increased resistance to normal damage and a resistance to fire at the cost of a portion the Dusker Coat's freeze resistance and half of its piercing resistance. Darius intends to upgrade his Frostfur Coat into a Skolver-Frostfur coat hybrid and his Gunslinger hat into the 6 star version of the Nameless hat decorated with white fur and feathers. As for his arsenal, he owns only three weapons. Firstly, he dual wields two Chilled Katanas when in melee combat. A Chilled Katana is a modified Nightblade with freeze related properties. Secondly, an Antigua which he plans to invent a new alchemic path for, which would focus more on the freeze status.

Acessories if any: A simple fur scarf.

Twist degree: If you have to change something, try to make it as minimal as possible. I also don't mind you creating the rest of the alchemic paths of the gear I made, so feel free to do so. However, if what you wanted a Twist Degree like Doctorspacebar's, Darius tends to become emotional when the subject of his family is brought up, and if there is ever a time where he has to fight a gremlin, he loses his head and flies into a complete rage.

Bio: As a child, Darius lived a happy life living with both his parents and a baby sister. However, all that changed during a family reunion, when a gang of renegade gremlin supremists forced their way into the restraunt and killed his entire family and extended family, leaving Darius alive so that he could tell the world of their might and how they would soon make the gremlins the only supreme race on Cradle. Darius was then adopted by a Knight and he grew up wanting to seek revenge on the gremlins, deciding to train as a Knight. However, his skills in stealth were noticed by the Stealth Corps and he was transferred over to them and there he learnt their ways of assasination and reconaissance. After completing his basic training there he was put under the tutelage of Corpsman Myrai, and under her guidance he recieved more detailed, hands-on training. By then he had started to control his hatred for gremlins, and after he was deemed worthy enough to be sent on solo missions, he went into the Clockworks for an extended period of time to study the elusive Skolvers and Frostfurs, which piqued his intrest in the freeze status and its uses. As for the reason why he decided to join the SLE, not much is known about it. However, the Stealth Corps definitely had a role to play in the decision. They always do, the little intelligence hoarders.

Role: SLE Intelligence Gatherer

Class: Revenant Class(Stealth Corps version of the Assassin Class, with increased stealth and precision emphasis).

Sun, 08/26/2012 - 15:52
#7
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Gzilla
Dusk app

Name: Dusk

Nickname: Gzilla

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Additional appearance: he's taller then the average knight and also a bit more muscular but he still has a normal frame. He has piercing usually angry eyes. color code red.

race: spirilian

personality: Dusk has a ruthless personality. He will literally do whatever it takes to defeat,conquer,destroy, and annihilate the enemy. He's even been known to rip into enemies with his teeth and bare fingers. Along with that his height and muscle have earned him his nickname. His downside is of course his rage and determination. He's been known to leave his squad in the dust chasing after his target or just barreling through anything that's in his way. he comes off as rude a lot of the time, but in can be bearable and even likable when he wants to be. One of the elite guards of the SLE, tasked with patrolling and protecting the clockworks with his squad along with emberlight, the manor, and haven in general. Pet peeves are slackers, class clowns, numbskulls, and zombies.

Gear: Dragon scale mail upgraded with pieces of heavy plate mail on the shoulders, chest, knees, neck, and feet. dragon scale helm, also upgraded with heavy plate mail, dragon scale shield upgraded with heavy plate mail. Carries 2 gremlin darkfang scorcher flamethrowers, limited fuel so he carries a gran faust specialized with sun steel to cancel it's curse and also make it 1/4 bigger think of it as a silver gran faust only bigger. has a spare antigua on him too. Has a crest on his right shoulder pad of the elite guards symbol, on his left a giant lizard.

Accessories: toasty mecha wings, toasty canteen, specialized armor gloves that can take high temperatures, while having built in brass knuckles.

twist degree: normal He may be ruthless but is loyal to the Spiral order, unless something really bad happens.

Bio: dusk grew up normally, until his father went missing in the clockworks. Since then Dusk has wanted to join the order and look for his father, he ruthlessly progressed through basic training which both impressed and scared his instructors, but once higher ups heard about his prowess, they transferred him into special training. This type of training pushed Dusk to his physical limits, along with his mental limits. He was eventually put into the defense corps., but he wanted to be part of the striker corps, which made Dusk even more willing to show how good he was. Soon after he got used to being a complete tank and powerhouse. Always wanting to go deeper and find out if his father was alive, he rushed to get through missions, which got him put into the one of the most powerful groups in the Order the SLE. Through the SLE, he went deeper and deeper but never found his father. All the while he was getting more and more prestige he worked his way up to squad leader even though he was a guardian. To this day he looks for his father in the depths of the clockworks, while doing his second love, protecting the clockworks.

Role: Squad leader for SLE

Class: Specialized Defender Elite (upgraded defender that has a more powerful shield but is still breakable, and a personalized forcefield around the elite defender. But it's important to note that the forcefield is weaker then a normal defender shield.

Sun, 08/26/2012 - 16:29
#8
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Munuver
Nyan Cat

Name: Fabric
Nickname: Pillowcase
Age: 18
Gender: Asian (JK!!!!) male
Additional Appearance: Blue eyes. Turns red when he gets pissed off >:O Average height.
Race: Spirilian
Personality: Very fun and cheerful. Usually pisses people off but is quick enough to not get slapped. Cracks unecessary jokes. Bit lazy.
Gear: 6* Shadowsun (lets say a shadowsun mixed w/ snarby? with Grey Shield. Carries dual Storm Drivers, an umbrella (Jk Umbra Driver), and a BTB.
Accessories: Light gloves made of dead Vogs.
Twist Degree: Cannot control his farts.
Bio: Unlike others, pillowcase led a normal life. He trained very hard to be an expert gunslinger. Pillowcase's talent was noticed by the Assasin team. Over there, he mainly focused on speed, but was able to conceal himself well. Pillowcase was very skilled with his two Storm Drivers. Everyday Pillowcase stays in touch with his family :D
Role: SLE Co-Leader
Class: Assasin

Thu, 08/30/2012 - 19:58
#9
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Dusk and Darius are accepted,

Dusk and Darius are accepted, now just wait while i post chapter 2.

Thu, 08/30/2012 - 21:55
#10
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The-Ark
I noticed in the "race"

I noticed in the "race" section, an example was a wolver pup. Does this mean that we could have a non-gremlin intelligent race part of the normal squads? I.e. A devilite?

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 01:16
#11
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Frostrex
Also...

I noticed the Assassin's name in the squad thingy was Zero. You looking forward to a particular game named Borderlands 2?

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 03:45
#12
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Ariasky
Still listening to Area 11 (no joke here)

@ Frostrex I think kaiju is trying to refer to something else, a good guess. (unless he's a fan of borderlands as well)

Kaiju might as well add a C.C and a Euphemia here :)

"Yes, I have...destroyed the world. And created...a new."

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 08:45
#13
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Kaijuhunter
@Aria: ARIA! SHUT UP! I only

@Aria: ARIA! SHUT UP! I only mean to put a Zero/Lelouch in here, (and maybe a Suzaku... MAYBE >.>) ONLY ZERO/LELOUCH! ONLY!

@Frost: Btw i dont play borderlands, but it looks pretty sick. (im too hung up on the assassins creed series, im gettin the new one as soon as it comes out.)

@Ark: yep, if youve read the Clockworks Renegades, it can be like that. The monsters/ whatevers can be like bandits or watevs.

Also, theres gonna be non-knight intelligent things, like valkyries and demons and such. Maybe ill add a Fallen Angel.... *insert MWAHAHAHAH here*

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SPOILER ALERT

Almost, ALMOST everyone whos a good guy will die in this series, at the hands of *censored cuz i cant spoil it*. So plz dont get all sad if ur character is assassina- i mean randomly dies.

ALSO SPOILER ALERT

Im putting in a new status effect and type of monster, (and gear): water type! Ill add the details about them here later.
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details

Status effect- Water:
Well, im thinking water effect can be like oh, say, confusing your brain, with all the liquid going inside and swirling around you, so therefore: The Water Status Effect will disorient a knight and twist up the controls/his body for a short period of time, meaning that he will flail around helplessly for a few seconds, but he is still able to hit a monster.... Or knight.

Water monsters:
Hydro Wolver: a wolver that deals piercing (like all wolvers) and inflicts the water effect
Alpha Hydro Wolver: an Alpha wolver that does the same thing as the Hydro Wolver, only its chance of inflicting water is higher, and its damage is boosted as well.

Hydrolizer puppy: same as a regular puppy, with water damage.
Hydrolizer rocket puppy: same as rocket puppy, with water damage.

Soaked Greaver: a greaver that inflicts water damage

Swimmer devilite: why would you burst into his Radioactive Pool? Well, apparently, hes got water powers from the contaminated thing, so run! Same as normal devilite, with chance of water damage.
Overtime swimmer devilite: hes really mad that the Pit Bosses cut into his vacation time at the radioactive pool! Inflicts shadow damage like most devies, with chance of water damage.

Aqualeon: same as lumber, with chance of water damage.

Water gun Gremlin: really? These little hooligans are using water guns against you? Well, keep away, because they have a nasty sting! Same as Gremlin scorcher, with water damage instead of fire.

Water zombie: same as zombie, with chance of water damage

Drowned Kat: the spirit of someone who died.... By being drowned! Same as regular kat, water damage.

Leviathan: MWAHAHAHA! Secret! Youll find out eventually!

Reference: for all of these monsters, imagine them as they are in their fire modes, then replace blazing fire with blue and dripping water
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ill edit and add more detail later

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 09:15
#14
Gzilla's picture
Gzilla
Thank goodness you didn't

Thank goodness you didn't make any evangelion references -__-

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 10:01
#15
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
And i plan not to add

And i plan not to add Evangelion... Cuz i never watched it, Code Geass is too epic! But im gonna try and watch corpse princess and a few others... Meh. In the meantime, everyone be patient! I still dunno what the mission for them should be...

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 10:13
#16
Artistbma's picture
Artistbma
Leviathan was a very large

Leviathan was a very large sea creature that would wipe out whole civilizations.

Fri, 08/31/2012 - 23:30
#17
Ariasky's picture
Ariasky
You are (not) alone, You can (not) advance

Hehehe, it wasn't hard for me to guess you love Code Geass. :) And you should try Evangelion sometimes, bit violent and boring at times
I'm waiting for the 3rd movie "You can (not) redo"
And Y NO C.C?

Anyway good luck on the story

Sat, 09/01/2012 - 05:03
#18
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Shue-Donnym
The Book of SEGA Genesis

The following app is filled with a bunch of scientific jargon that might be off-putting. Just to explain, "liquidate"=kill.
(I'm not even sure this'll get in.)

WARNING: The following Notable Entity file is classified under strict orders. Unauthorized viewing will result in designation as Confirmed Security Hazard Level 3 and possible liquidation. You have been warned.

Name: [UNKNOWN]
Code name: 2491-Jackell-Savarski
Age: [UNKNOWN]
Gender: Undetermined, but signs point to NotEn 2491-Jackell-Savarski being male.
Additional appearance: Hunched when running. Stands with a slight slouch.
Race: Undetermined. Sources claim that NotEn 2491-Jackell-Savarski is a Spiralian. Said claims lack verification, but are most likely to be correct from all the possibilities.
Personality: Entity seems to have a focused mentality and shows a profound lack of emotion. Rarely speaks above a whisper.
Gear: Wears a dark grey trenchcoat and black pants, along with medium grey boots and a black fedora. Head is completely covered in light grey bandages. Right hand is covered in wrist tape marked with several symbols of unknown significance. Left hand is protected by a black cloth glove. Black tinted laboratory goggles prevent observation of eyes. Carries a silenced pocket pistol and a needle filled with a lethal chemical agent identified as DDT-3497.
Acessories if any: none
Twist degree: I'll give you a moderate degree of flexibility if this guy gets in.
Bio: NotEn 2491-Jackell-Savarski was first observed in action during Operation ██████ wherein the entity liquidated rogue Knight ██████ before the former could activate a cache of plastic explosives in a chemical processing plant. Since then, the entity has appeared several times, each time liquidating a seemingly random target. Further inspection has revealed each target to have had malicious intentions relating to the general area they were in at time of death. Several high-ranking SLE officials have recommended instating the entity as a honorary SLE officer, but entity has refused to comment.
Role: ???
Class: Assister- drops in in times of need.

Sat, 09/01/2012 - 12:38
#19
Kaijuhunter's picture
Kaijuhunter
Accepted! Thats a pretty good

Accepted! Thats a pretty good app, Swill. Im working on chapter 2 now, so sit tight guys!

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