All right. I realize this has been done before (I think...), but what I will post here soon is my take on the Alpha Squads origins... kinda. More of how it became Rulen, Parma, Grantz and Euclid and their first adventures. Also, if you like my work here (or don't) and play Savage Worlds table top RPGs, then here: http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/67946 is a link to Savage Cradle, a Savage Worlds retake of SK. Enjoy all! see ya soon!
~Ted
Rulen looked up around the room. “Is this a joke?” Parma turned, questioning. “What do you mean?” Rulen scoffed. “Me, here. Testing to see if me, of all people, can join the Alpha Squad.” Grantz walked by and, with a smirk, said, “It doesn’t make sense to me either, kid.” He chuckled and walked away. Parma scowled and said, “Even on an elite team, there’s room for a technician.” She finished double bolting her Kamarin and stood, looking down at Rulen. “Even a weak one.” Rulen sighed and looked around The Barracks.
Desna and Reeve, Guild Master and Officer of the infamous “Recon Rangers”. Even if she and her companion didn’t make it on the Alpha Squad, the Recon Rangers would be employed as elite warriors. Or so the rumors said. Barrus, an amazing leader and warrior. He was on the opposite team, with Desna, Reeve, Daxen, Jorin, Echo and others. You see, the final test was a Lock Down battle, twelve verses twelve.
Suddenly, someone shouted “The map is Ramparts!” Sound came from more than twenty of the contestants. Every one stood, ready for the fight. Rulen looked at his computer. 0:07 before the battle. Rulen looked at his team. All able warriors, ready for what would come. Then the gate opened.
Good work. If you continued it would probably be a great story. But what I am aiming for is the view of the Wolvers, and how the arrival of the Knights aroused their curiosity of their own world, since they have never ventured out of the forest. It really is good though.
Awfully similar to my own fanfic.... little bit of plagiarism perhaps?
YOU FOUND THIS?!?!
I was just thinking I should go back and graveyard this....
Hmm...
Don't think I'll be coming back for this, but if you want you can check out the Fan-fic I am currently working on....
http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/83699
There is a lot of it out, but I'd like to believe that reading it is worth it. =)
At this point, you're being inane. Can't a person write their own fanfict without having to be pestered by an utterly STUPID comment from you? The whole site doesn't revolve around you, so please stop bashing others' works. If a fict is similar to yours, then let it slide (unless it's EXACTLY your typing). I don't even think what you're describing is plagiarism.
ok, Vinny, your kinda over reacting. Malkalack, I was not "running," simply amazed someone (anyone, not just you) found this. I'm honestly thinking of starting this back up again. I also honestly had no clue you even HAD a fan-fic. Honestly, every idea is out there, especially when it comes to Fan-Fiction. So, as Vinny said, unless this is exactly your typing, shoo, leave, depart, etc.
He's been like this at other fanficts too, which really pushed my buttons. Sorry, though.
And "STUPID", huh? Maybe you should check the tos, sounds like a personal attack to me.
btw, the "YOU BETTER RUN" was me goofing off.
If an insult to one comment is a personal attack, what is your comment on Mawashimono's fanfict? Should that be a personal attack?
And it is unreasonable, at this point, to say that Tedme had been plagiarizing. There's no maybe's, and's, if's, nor but's if his fanfict predated yours, which should mean that in NO WAY he could steal any idea of yours.
I admit... It's so obvious, hidden in plain sight....
I'm the Doctor. I traveled back in time and stole your ideas. Its true, Mal, everyone is out to get you and steal your ideas.
Now that we have that joke over with, two things;
1. Even if I did steal your idea (or you mine) there is nothing you can complain about. We are writing stories in
Someone else's world.
We can not claim copyright and even if we were copying each other, the most you could do is say "please" to OOO.
2. I am not stealing your fan base, nor are you mine. We have very different stories, and I'm not even working on this one.
"How are our stories different?"
Your's is about Euclid and (as you said at the start) bloody and violent. Mine is about Rulen and far more focused on his development with the other characters. More then that, you began at square one. I began with choosing the Alpha Squad. With that said, can we move on and write our fan-fiction in peace?
You can write yours all ya like, mine stunk anyway XD. I quit it, so enjoy the undivided Alpha-Attention
"2. I am not stealing your fan base, nor are you mine. We have very different stories, and I'm not even working on this one."
Before I start,
1. I realize a lot of this stuff wasn't there when Alpha Squad was.
2. This is MY take. I don't know how it happend.
3. Enjoy!
Rulen fought, but three good warriors against one not so good is always not a pretty sight. He focused on dodging, it being his only hope. But Jorin and Echo landed amazing hits at the same time and Rulen flew backwards. Shortly after he landed, there was a loud booming sound. THUD. When he looked up all he saw was a dust cloud. As it cleared, a figure lifted her great Kamarin from the earth. Parma smirked and, as two others entered the room, said "It's our move."