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Fri, 06/21/2013 - 06:29
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Topoyozariane

Hi guys! KoV here! (Knight Of Vanaduke). This is my 5th fan-fiction attempt, and so far only two survived to the end. Let's see how this goes!

Applications are preferably in this format.

Name:
Age:
Race:
Allegiance:
Bio:
Appearance:
Loadout:
Personality:
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Table Of Contents:
Prologue: Click here!
Chapter One: Click here!
Chapter Two: Click here!
Chapter Three: Click here!
Chapter Four: Click here!
Chapter Five: Click here!
Chapter Six: Click here!
Chapter Seven: Click here!
Chapter Eight: Click here!
Chapter Nine: Click here!
Chapter Ten: Click here!
Chapter Eleven: 100th post!
Chapter Twelve: Click here!
Chapter Thirteen: Click here!
Chapter Fourteen: Click here!
Chapter Fifteen: Ooo! Love triangle!
Chapter Sixteen: Application, please!
Chapter Seventeen: Click here!
Chapter Eighteen: Click here!
Chapter Nineteen: Lots of swearing. :D
Chapter Twenty: Click here!
Chapter Twenty One: Click here!
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Characters accepted:

Kyrie: Here
Fang: Here
Arthur: Here
Rose Hawthorne: Here
Alfred: Here
Carter: Here
Edo: Here

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 06:30
#1
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Topoyozariane
Prologue here!

Prologue:

It was suddenly awake, alert, suspicious. Instantly the ones around it awoken too, arising from their deep slumber. They shook their heads, and muttered. They all seemed to nod in agreement, and messaged to the rest of the troops. Instantly, a sudden flash of red filled the air, as hundreds of thousands of troops awoken from their deep sleep. A cry rose up, and repeated, until it seemed like a pattern, repeated over and over again. All this was observed by a hooded figure in a tight-fitting body suit.
He raised his comlink to his mouth, “They have awoken, my liege.”
“Very well. Mobilize the troops. It is time we take the Clockworks back from the knights.” A dry, raspy voice replied.
“Understood.”
The hooded figure dropped silently from the ledge he was perched on, landing with a slight thud. He grinned, and pressed a button on a remote. It was time the Knights paid for what they did to him.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 15:33
#2
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Hearthstone

I feel sleepy...

Anyways, I sense greatness, and I hope you don't abandon this one.

~

APP

Name: Kyrie
Age: 17
Race: Feral Hybrid of a Knight and Feral :3
Allegiance: Arbitrary
Bio: Left by his parents at age of ten, he resorted only to fend for himself, as food and water, clothes and shelter weren't that hard to find where he lived. One catch though, he didn't have anyone to turn to as he grew. By age of 15, he began to become more succesful and happier at his activites, and yet the hole in his heart to have someone to care about is still not filled. Currently, he has no Allegiance with anyone, nor anything, but I am looking forward to how you can puppeteer his abilities :) he has admirable strength and speed, which fills the lack of defense and vitality, which results in tiredness.
Apperance: A somewhat Ash Tail Set for his body and head. He looks part Wolver and part... Knight... O.o
Loadout: Ash Tail Set, his hands have properties of blades, one has Nightblade line prop. and the other has Iceburst Brandish line props.
Personality: Little aloof and little loner-type

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 16:36
#3
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Dewca
Appy!

Name: Fang

Gender: Male

Species: Knight/Valkryie

Age: 23

Bio: Was abandoned by unknown parents when he was 6. He eventully came to sense to find food and shelter. He hid in the forests, occasinally stealing food from random people but prefering to nick things of the shelves of the auction house. He was caught and then brought to the labs and experiemented on. They grafted valkryie DNA into his own DNA and has come out as a quite succesful hybrid. His wings are large, their wingspan being 9 feet streched out fully. He managed to escape from the labs using his new found wings bur later on experienced a side effect of a a large random spazm occuring every year. Most people have no clue about his wings and only the trusted know. He dosen't bring out his wings to fly often and uses them in emergencies. Fang is extremely prone to hospitals, labs, ect. He joined spiral HQ and leveled quite high. He started gaining respect from other knights. He dosen't steal from anyone anymore but can use the skills if needed to. Fang can be very sensitive to the subject of family and it tends to cut right through to him. He is also very good at combat.

Personality: He has quite a solitary personality. He rarely says more than 5 sentances in a row and he talks softly. However if angry or sad, his face dosen't usally show his emotions unless he is greatly pained or hurt. He rarely cries or smiles. Although seemingly quite hollow, he can be very caring if he has trusted them and has made a strong bond. The people he trusts are a great deal to him and he will do alot for them

Apperance: Short black hair. dark, dark, dark brown eyes. Around 5 foot 9. Handsome face. Medium build. Personally colour, blackish blue.

Loadout: Vog cub cap and coat, Fang of Vog, Polaris, Heater shield.

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I haven't used exactly the same app but I hope it'll do.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 17:32
#4
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Topoyozariane
Woohoo!

Two applications in one night? Thanks!

Both are accepted, but I want to ask a question. Skype? Kyria is a boy, who's arms are blades? One which is Nightblade, the other.....Iceburst Brandish?

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 17:37
#5
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Hearthstone

Kyrie**

Left, Nightblade, because it's scabbard is in the left. :3 And the Iceburst is in the right.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 17:48
#6
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Thinslayer
Trying this out

I'd like to apply a character of my own.

Name: Arthur
Age: 371 cycles
Race: Human avatar for the Core
Allegiance: Spiral Order
Appearance: pale skin, silvery-white hair, soft gray eyes, slim & somewhat feminine body build
Bio: Before he became the Core's avatar, he was a blacksmith for the Spiral Order. One day, while he was gathering supplies for his work, the Core created a telepathic link to his mind and took it over.

Personality: The personality of the Core hasn't changed much; as the Core's avatar, he is kind, generous, loyal to his Knights, and is a bit sassy. Some people mistake him for a homosexual due to his feminine mannerisms, and they wouldn't be too far off, since the Core considers itself female. Thanks to the Core's extensive studies of the knights, Arthur does not seem very unusual as humans go.

Loadout: Magic Hood & Cloak

Powers: full extent is unknown; space-time manipulation, energy-to-matter conversion, teleportation, and genetic manipulation are second nature to the Core (and therefore Arthur).

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 18:14
#7
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Topoyozariane
Accepted!

Mind if I add Joshua, Thin? :P Just following Intiate Protocol 13's characters :D

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 18:23
#8
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Thinslayer
?

Uh, Joshua? What about him? This is the first time I've ever heard of that character. This is your fanfic, so you can add whoever you want. If you intended Joshua to be related to the Core in some way, feel free to replace Arthur. It's totally up to you.

Fri, 06/21/2013 - 18:53
#9
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Topoyozariane
Oops.

Sorry Thin. I mean After Cradle, where Joshua and Arthur were friends. No matter, I think I might not do it. Writing lots of characters in a spot is NOT my strong suit. Anyways.... ENJOY!
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Chapter One:

Feron was in his office, munching on Biscotti’s haven famous biscuits, when an alarm sounded. Feron spewed the last biscuit in his mouth, leaving crumbs all over the place. “Shoot.” He muttered, getting up when the alarm sounded again. “Oh what now?” He grumbled, leaving his office and heading towards Spiral HQ control room. “What is it?” Snapping to his familiar curt, stern tone.
The technician glanced up, hesitated, then stifled a small laugh. “What’s wrong?” Feron asked.
The technician shook his head, then smiled, “You still got some crumbs on you.”
Feron scowled, and activated his Combat armour. “Now, what’s with the alarms?”
The technician immediately stopped grinning, and turned back to his console. “It appears the several squads in the Clockworks have sent distress calls.”
“So?” Feron asked, annoyed. All these alarms, just because these squads sent distress calls.
“We have sent teams tasked to retrieve them, all failed.”
“Send Delta.” Feron snapped.
“Sent, sir. They disappeared, along with Beta and Omega squad.”
Feron was aghast. What could kill Delta, Beta AND Omega? He quickly regained his composure, and said, “Recall spec ops squadron Theta.”
“Yes sir.” Feron left, and hurried the Theta squad’s barracks. When he arrived, Theta was already there waiting for him, still in their combat armour.
“Sir.” The squad leader nodded. “We’re ready. We’ll get Delta and Omega back.”
Feron nodded in agreement, then stopped himself. “This is all good, but a few people would be joining you for this mission.” He flipped open the datapad, and opened up the file, ‘Task Force Delta’ He keyed in his security code, and immediately names popped up. Quickly following that, KIA and MIA symbols followed behind their names. Only a few are still alive. “Joining your squad for this mission are two people. Kyrie, and Fang.”

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 05:30
#10
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Kaijuhunter
App-desu!

Name: Rose Hawthorne

Age: 17

Race: Isoran

Allegiance: Spiral Order

Bio: to be revealed

Appearance: short red-black hair, sea green eyes. Small scar under her left eye

Loadout: a blackened Angelic Set (with no weakness to fire), a Blackhawk, and her protractible shield/scythe, Eclipse.

Eclipse: At level 10, it deals 4 bars normal damage, 4 bars shadow damage. It is faster than even the striker and has as long a range as most Alchemers.
Description: Just like in an eclipse, the last thing a victim of this scythe sees is darkness descending upon them.

Personality: although at first glance a typical, happy-go-lucky teenage girl, Rose is a complete and total psychopath. While it is true that most of the time she is a kind soul, in a battle she is ruthless and devoted solely to killing all in her path. Precisely why she was recruited into the Delta Task Force.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 03:14
#11
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Topoyozariane
Accepted!

Thanks, Kaijuhunter, for the application. Btw, no one knows they were recruited into the Delta Task Force. It's kinda like the Avengers Movie, where none of them (Except Tony Stark, who hacked S.H.I.E.L.D's computers) even knew they were in the Avengers Initiative. So..... Rose doesn't know.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 05:33
#12
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Hogmos-Forum
Looks promising.

Here's my app:

Name: Alfred

Age: 22

Race: Isoran

Allegiance: Spiral Order

Bio: As a kid, Alfred was diagnosed with a strange illness and was expected to die.Left to fend for himself,he survived a month in sub-zero temperatures trying to reach civilizations.When he did reach a town,he was falsely accused by the garrison commander of being a spy and put in a cell.He escaped ..and vowed to prove himself innocent.This he did with such brutality that the mayor of the town saw the steel in him and inducted him into the Spiral Order.Here as a new knight he has already proved himself and has earned respect of senior officers.He is often quite cold and only loves his pet .Wolver.As a skilled Gunner, he is known to be able to take out targets a mile away.

Appearance:Short,black hair in a buzz-cut,thick build,6 feet 1 inch height dark brown eyes with the right one a little paler.

Loadout: Voltech and Shadowtech Alchemers MK2,Combustor for close combat,Gunslinger hat with cool helm-mounted display and sash.
Personality: Being young, he is aggressive but is nice to his friends and those weaker than him. He is extremely shy in-front of female knights and has a brazen attitude towards superiors.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 05:26
#13
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Kaijuhunter
Thanks-desu

Thanks for accepting Rose! She's my first attempt at a yandere character... :3

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 06:34
#14
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Hearthstone

Yandere... yandere...

Why do I feel like I heard of that word somewhere...

/looks it up on the net.

Nao I remember!

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 06:50
#15
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Topoyozariane
LOL.

Yeah, I looked it up on the net too, Skype. Btw, I changed your weapons to 4*, 'cuz the team are headed for Tier 3 Depths.
Find out what happens, in..... Chapter Two! (P.S No action here, guys. But I guarantee action in the next chapter) Also, see Kyrie's attempts to flirt Rose!
@Hogmos-Forums Accepted. But will appear later in the story. I got enough characters to juggle around already :P
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Chapter Two:

Kyrie and Fang stood in the Arcade, waiting for Theta to arrive. Kyrie was slouching on a wall, hands in his Ash tail coat while Fang checking on his Polaris. He didn’t want it to backfire, just like last time. He drifted off into a flashback, when Theta arrived. Neither of Kyrie or Fang saw them, and both jumped when squad leader Rose Hawthorne cleared her throat. Both saluted, and Rose nodded.
“‘Morning, soldiers. You got the briefing?” Both nodded. They had been briefed by Feron through Commlink. “Good. We’ll be starting at Depth 19, where Omega and Beta was first seen. We’ll go down then.” She cocked her head to one side, “Don’t have a lot to say, boys? I was hoping for some chatterboxes.” She smiled, then waved her squad over. “Basic introductions. Shadow, squad recon; Gildrein, squad gunner; Rue, squad medic and me, squad leader. You?”
Rose extended a hand to Kyrie, expecting him to shake.
Kyrie glanced towards Fang, “I’m Kyrie, and my friend here is Fang. I would love to shake your hand, but it would cut right through it. I’m a swordsman. My two arms here are swords, my left a Silent Nightblade, the right a Blizzbrand.”
“Hybrid. Polaris and Fang of Vog.” Fang said, grasping Rose’s hand in his own, and shook it gently.
“Well, let’s go, shall we?”

They arrived at Depth 19, combat armour on, weapons out. But there was no sign of any enemies. Even when they stepped on the party button, a thing that screamed AMBUSH! at them, no enemies appeared, bar a few totems. They had reached the elevator unscathed, except for Rue, who tripped and landed in some thorns. They clambered aboard the elevator, headed for the next depth. What they saw was the exact copy of upstairs. No enemies, just... nothing. It was Kyrie who broke the silence, “Man, my blades are itching to smash some enemies’ skulls.”
Rose nodded in agreement, “Nothing I can do here, Kyrie.”
Kyrie shrugged, then climbed aboard the next elevator. “Hundred crowns says no enemies on the next depth too, Ma’am.”
She smiled, and flopped down besides him. “I’ll take on your bet. I got crowns to spare. And don’t call me Ma’am.”
Kyrie smiled, then hit the down button.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 07:03
#16
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Hearthstone

...

I was blushing.

O///O

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 08:23
#17
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Kaijuhunter
Romance in the air...

Romance in the air... Desu.

Hey, Top, would you care to make Rose sound a bit more like a teen (slang n such)? She usually isn't that formal around her squad mates.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 09:17
#18
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Hogmos-Forum

No problem Top.You can include Alfred whenever you like...just include him,okay?
:-D

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 09:17
#19
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Shotjeer
hai again

You better make thiss one survive, or Ill bump your other dead fanfics. Lso, you're back on summary duty for my fanfic in 5 days, so have fun.

Oh yeah, BTW, would Fripper be accepted? He doesn't need to be if he doesn't fit though.

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 16:47
#20
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Topoyozariane
Wow.... A lot of posts to reply to.

Well, let's start with Skype first.....

@Skype Well, I hope Rose doesn't see that....
@Kajuhunter I would prefer to make her a little more formal when chatting, then very slang-ish when in combat. Brings out her wild side.
@Hogmos-Forums Actually, I was lying through my teeth. You character was never accepted..... Joking!
@Shotjeer Well..... Summary Duty, eh? 500 crowns per summary, as always. Remember to give it to the right account. It's TOPOYOZARIANE! And... Fripper. *Groans silently* Well, I'd be happy to, but I already got.....5 characters to juggle..... I'll put him in, right after Alfred. Oh, and you might want to make an application for Fripper, if you want him in. I need to put a forum link.

(TO ALL READERS: TOPOYOZARIANE IS GOING ON A VACATION AND WON'T BE BACK FOR 2 DAYS, INCLUDING TODAY. SO IF TODAY IS FRIDAY, I'LL BE BACK IN SUNDAY. THAT CLEAR, PEEPS? GOOD! SEE YOU ALL LATER!)

Sat, 06/22/2013 - 20:28
#21
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Thegreatpiggy
Let's see......

Name: Johnson igPay

Age: 27 years

Race: (Spiral) Knight

Allegiance: (none)

Bio: Although he doesn't know about much about his past, he remembers being trained as a Knight. After the crash of Skylark, Johnson was found by a squad of Knights. But because of his odd fighting tactics and diverse ways, he isn't very appreciated by some Knights in the order. After finding out that some Knights were planning to drive him away and possibly kill him, he left the order and went his own ways apart from other Knights. He roams Cradle away from other Knights, learning on his own, but sometimes helps some of his friends in the Spiral Order (although he has to be careful for some people still hate him). After some time outside the order, he has decided that he likes being on his own, and has decided that he wouldn't return in to the order. Has a fast-like speed and can easily dash out of situations. Knows how to use a shield very well.

Appearance: Average height and weight, brownish-black and wavy hair. Prefers to wear a cupcake head and vog cub coat to help "blend in" so he isn't recognized (even though it doesn't help, but he doesn't care).

Loadout: Ascended Caliber, with Shadowtech Alchemer II, with a Vog Cub Coat and Dread Skelly Mask. (never will wear cobalt).

Personality: Stubborn, and aggressive. Doesn't favor any Lower-Rank Knight's problems, but is friendly with his friends. Doesn't care whatever a person's rank is when it comes to arguments, power, and gear, or anything. Prefers to be independent. Likes to use sir-like vocabulary and has a sir like personality around people he doesn't like to annoy them. Only tolerates being bossed around in dire and critical times. Also can be selfless in critical times too. Derps around at times when he knows there isn't any "real" or very powerful danger that he can't handle.

Sun, 06/23/2013 - 03:21
#22
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Hearthstone

Seriously, I can't seem to stop blushing/giggling when I read Chapter 2...

...H-have... Have I become tsundere with Kaiju's app?! Q_Q

Sun, 06/23/2013 - 09:53
#23
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Everlas
gshock best watch eva

This is coming to gather nicely

Mon, 06/24/2013 - 07:16
#24
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Topoyozariane
I'm back, guys! And bringing

I'm back, guys! And bringing with me are some EGG ROLLS! But you can't eat 'em. Anyway, getting back down to business.

@Thegreatpiggy Okay.... My brain's not that clear right now, (Sleep deprivation.... Late to bed by 2 minutes.) so.... I'm going to get the facts straight.

1. You're character's last name is in pig latin.
2. 27 years old Johnny (Nickname) has been placed in Spiral Knights training. But people didn't like his fighting style (Another factor I have to make up :P), so they plotted to kill him. (Da fuq?) He escaped, and hates a lots of knights, and the feeling's mutual.
3. Speed is awesome, so defense and speed are in the awesomeness place. Attack isn't that good.
4. Vog cub armour. To 'blend in'.... Whatever. He also hates Cobalt. (Imma make him wear Cobalt.)
5. Stubborn and Aggressive, but his attack style is not aggressive..... Weird.
That's all now. Please correct any problems I have above, or explain 'em.

@Skype Umm.... Why would you blush? I read through Melancholy's Chapter Three, without feeling any emotion.... Or maybe I just have a teaspoon amount of emotions :P And yes.... You are becoming Tsundere with Rose. (LOL, had to search up the word on Wiki.) Later on, Kyrie and Rose's relationship would expand, until they are real lovers-....... *Slaps self with book* ARGH! Major Spolier!

@Gshockhawk Don't understand what you mean by the title of the comment... But if the comment's for my Fan-Fiction, then Thanks! If not.... I'll crush your skull with my fist.

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 02:29
#25
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Hearthstone

And I thought this was a new chap T~T

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 05:30
#26
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Topoyozariane
Ahhh

New chapter will be on tommorow. Sorry. I just came back from Vacation that time. I'm working on action scenes right now! Thanks for the support!

@Skype Dude, how did you make the title thing empty?

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 06:57
#27
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Topoyozariane
I am very disappointed!

Title says it all. Why you ask? Lack of response. I know what you might say, "Sorry, read your post, but didn't respond." Okay, fine. I do that once in a while, but it's just kinda sad. No worries guys, just post about this chapter, and you'll be doing good! (Critique and comments would be awesome. The first prologue, chapters 1 and 2, nobody commented or gave critique, so please.......

WARNING: DO NOT READ CHAPTER IF YOU ARE SCARED OF METAL AND MAIMING, EVEN IF THE MAIMING AND FIGHTING PARTS ARE KEPT TO A MINIMUM, AND NOT DESCRIBED IN GREAT DETAIL.
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Chapter Three:

Kyrie lost his bet. Depth 21 was the exact opposite with the Depths they have just seen upstairs. Gremlins everywhere, lugging bits of scrap metal, others holding axes and shields, as if they had to fight for their lives in a minute, which was true. Rose grinned at Kyrie, then held out her hand. Kyrie, grumbling, gave her the 100 crowns, then took rubbed his hands in anticipation. Rose signalled to Shadow. ‘Recon. Kill if necessary.’ Shadow nodded, and cloaked. Rose and the others flattened themselves against the wall. “Let’s hope Shadow’s recon skills are good.” Grumbled Kyrie as he deactivated his Combat armour, a Wolver pelt taken from an Ash Tail.
“He is. He’s exactly like his namesake: a shadow.” She smiled, then hesitantly put a hand on Kyrie’s shoulder. “Let’s hope your fighting skills are as good as your file says.”
Their conversation was interrupted by Shadow’s scream, which can be heard all across the Depth.
Kyrie’s and Rose’s eyes widened in shock, and quickly activated their Combat Armour. They charged into the surprised Gremlins’ midst, hacking and slashing. They were so surprised, that they just stood, and let them be cut through. The squad and Fang jumped in, dispatching the guards. After leaving the corpses on the floor, they ran towards where Shadow’s scream was heard. What they found scared all of them immensely. Shadow’s head sliced into bits, his body mauled so bad they couldn’t recognize it, and the legs missing.
Suddenly, a door slammed right behind them, blocking their only exit. A hatch from above opened, and out poured.....bits and bits of scrap metal. They all raised their shields, and the scrap metal bounced off harmlessly. But more and more begun to pile up, and before the knew it, they were waist deep, and stuck in the stuff. It was already an effort to raise their shields, and still the scrap metal came. It won’t be long before they were buried in it.
Suddenly, a bright light beamed down from the sky, and a person appeared, with a slightly feminine build. “Need some help?” She, no a he, Fang saw, a ‘He’ with a feminine build, saying. Kyrie opened his mouth, and scrap metal poured into his mouth. He can’t close his mouth, and can’t spit it out. “I’ll take that as a yes. Grab my hand, everyone.” He gazed down on everyone, clearly disappointed in the lack of response. “I’ll just have to move the pile too, then.” He concentrated, and they were gone in a flash of prismatic light. A hooded person scowled at the departure of the teleporting person, and angrily said, “They got away.”

They all appeared in a small town in the same flash of prismatic, and the team collapsed on the floor, the scrap metal which was also teleported, lying next to them. Kyrie spat out the metal in his mouth, and managed to smile at the person. “Thanks, whoever you are. Who are you? Or.... What are you?”
The person leaned her head back a little, as if remembering something, then said, “My name’s Arthur. I’m one of the many human avatars of the Core.”

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 11:10
#28
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Hogmos-Forum

So far it has been great.Awaiting your next chapter and hoping it's longer(impatient...grrr)

p.s How could Kyrie hand over crowns when he has swords for his hands?

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 17:45
#29
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Topoyozariane
LOL

OKay Hogmos.... I'll make the next one longer

Btw, Crowns are made of metal, and blades are metal, so metal against metal is okay. Hands just have properties, but he can make his hand into a fist or something.

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 18:10
#30
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Kaijuhunter
Hmm.

Oi, oi, dont forget to portray Rose's yandere side! I'd like to see more of her psychopathic tendencies in the next fight.... Sorry if i sound like a nagging mother, but i just wanted to remind you.

@Skye: *as Rose* ... Are you (insert profanity here) kidding me? I'm going to rip your throat out, you little- *held back my squad mates*

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 21:11
#31
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Topoyozariane
Oh stop nagging.

I just love when people nag at me. Nag nag nag. The perfect time to practice my ignorance skills.

Anyway, in this chapter, you won't be seeing Rose fight, but in the next chapter. The importance of this chapter: Basic introductions of Arthur, and Rose's sudden 'feeling' of Kyrie!
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Chapter Four:

Rose and the team had sought refuge in the small town, somewhat similar to Emberlight. But instead of Gremlins, knights walk around. It was actually quite famous for being a safe Haven when in the Clockworks, a haven away from Haven.
They were seating around a campfire, sipping some tea the locals had given them. Kyrie sipped a slowly, then lifted his head to address Arthur. “So you’re the human avatar of the Core?”
Arthur, who seemed like dozing off, but actually telepathically communicating with the Core, snapped up, and answered woozily, “Wha...? So.. yeah yeah, a human avatar of the Core.”
Rose glanced up, then asked, “What were you before you were an avatar?”
“Blacksmith.... Around three hundred to four hundred years ago.”
Kyrie spewed his tea all over the campfire, smothering the fire, and killing it completely. The others glared at him, and he shrugged, “What do you mean, three hundred to four hundred years?”
“Well..... The first Skylark DID crash in Cradle 5 hundred years ago. I’m from the first one. I’m assuming you’re all from ‘The Valiance’, aren’t you? The one housing the rescue party that was supposed to rescue The Skylark from Cradle?”
The squad glanced at each other, then nodded. A small smile reached Arthur’s lips, and he stood up. “It’s getting late. I’ll be in that tent,” He pointed at a small tent, painted silver, just like his hair. He then entered the tent.
“Well, you heard the old man. Sleep time, people. Get our your tents.” Rose stood and said, looking towards Kyrie and Fang. “You don’t have survival kits, don’t you?”
Kyrie shrugged once again, and gave Rose the I’m-just-an-innocent-rogue look, whereas Fang just said, “I don’t need it.” He deactivated his combat armour, and looked around. No one but Kyrie and Rose. The others have already crawled into their tents and fallen asleep. He spread his wings from the shirt he was wearing underneath his armour, and wrapped it around his body. “Good night.” He said quietly, so quietly that Rose had to strain to hear. Rose then diverted her attention to Kyrie, who was standing there awkwardly.
“Well...... I guess I could share my tent with you....” Rose asked, shifting from one foot to another. She had worked with males in her job, but she didn’t have any siblings and have never been in a relationship before. This, was getting her real nervous, despite facing Seerus alone in in Operation Crimson Hammer had not even fazed her.
Kyrie, just like Rose, had not had been in a relationship before, but he was less nervous. He looked around, trying to come up with an excuse, then managed to say, “You shouldn’t.... I’ll manage.”
“No, it’s okay. I insist.” The words were out of her mouth before Rose even thought of it, and she tried to take it back. “Urm... what I meant was....”
“I guess so..... It wouldn’t be a problem, right?” Kyrie asked, wringing his hands.
“No problem.... I’ll set up the tent first...” She asked, distraught. What has caused her to let Kyrie sleep with her? Perhaps she had taken a liking to to him? No, that was impossible. She had seen far more handsome boys. Then why? She was so caught up in her thoughts, that she didn’t notice she was repeatedly tying the tent to the ground, then untying.
Kyrie stepped up behind her, then helped her tie it. “There, that should do it.” He glanced at her, and their eyes met. Rose suddenly had a sudden urge of affection.
She blinked, then muttered, ‘Thanks.” She went past him, not even bothering to say good night, and slept.

The sun was just beginning to rise when Rose awoke, and found herself face-to-face with Kyrie. Kyrie’s eyes were closed, and breathing steadily. Sleeping. Rose gulped, then looked down. He had deactivated his Combat armour, and had wore a tank top. She gulped once more. She slowly got up, and out of her tent. She glanced back at the sleeping body of Kyrie, and headed out for a walk.

Wed, 06/26/2013 - 02:07
#32
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Hearthstone

Topo, to empty the title, put in 0.

Anyways, its.. Really messing me up... O///O

Wed, 06/26/2013 - 03:06
#33
Playerman's picture
Playerman
I don't know.

Name: Carter (Male)

Species: Knight

Physical Description: Hunched over a bit while walking, slighty tired eyes, a pouch to store extra supplies (he stocks up on the healing pills) - Age 25

Bio: Carter was never really lucky. He could easily win a spar in training, but he was rejected from actually becoming a knight because of the way he fought. He was called strange for his behavior for many years, but over time, he learned how to stop the insults, by talking back. Eventually he went back to the training facility, and convinced them to accept him, so long as he obtained some form of ranged weapon. He grew to be one of the best in the Spiral Order, but few really knew that, as he tended to go off on missions by himself.

Equipment: Solid Cobalt Helm, Vitasuit Deluxe, Gran Faust, Argent Peacemaker - rarely uses Peacemaker; sticks to fighting with a sword and some other physical attacks (ex: kicking) - He's a lefty.

Personality: Intelligent - Prefers sarcasm as his means of humor - Introverted, prefers to go solo - Especially has trouble communicating with females, will unknowingly makes a barrier from them (blocks them out of view with another person) - Will place other's lives in front of his, which surprises them often - Sits around a lot (eyes follow something like a butterfly), will usually notice something important, but won't interrupt someone else talking - Always seems to have the perfect thing for something in his pouch - Has a habit of poking things.

Fighting Style: Holds Faust one-handed to fight, no shield - uses body frequently to attack (can kick rather hard) - style involves flailing himself about a lot, which often makes others underestimate him, doesn't move recklessly though - Having no shield, he is vulnerable to certain attacks (explosions come to mind), stocks up on healing pills for this reason - Rarely misses a shot with the Peacemaker, but decides not to use it - Fights with honor, will not sneak up on an enemy, or constantly bash on one 'til it stopped moving - Prefers to walk into battle instead of charge.

:P

Wed, 06/26/2013 - 03:38
#34
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Topoyozariane

Accepted! Thanks for the application! I was hoping a little more ppl would see and comment though. I'm going to wait a least 2 more days for another reply, then post a chapter.

@Skype You-Kyrie-is going to (almost) die for Rose. There will be an ambush when she comes bac- *slaps self again* Damnit, Top! Stop giving out spoilers!

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 01:59
#35
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

I'm getting sweaty and hot here... O///O

Speaking of hot... Tea? /hands tea.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 06:34
#36
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Topoyozariane
Eh.

Here's a new chapter. Hope more people would notice and give me comments :P

Chapter Five:

Rose was still confused when she returned to the small town, or what was left of it. Fires were just beginning to die, and buildings beginning to crumble. What in..... Rose thought as she ran through the wreckage, trying to find her squad. But her thoughts were mostly on Kyrie. He was just sleeping, handsome and..... Stop that, Rose! You know better than that! She scolded herself, when she found, a body, all covered up in smoke. Nooo! She flipped the body over, scared to see the face, to see...... Kyrie, eyes closed, the ghost of a smile. “No!” She whimpered, already searching for burn marks or anything. There were none. He must been smoked to death then. She bit her lip to stop crying, then lifted his body. She promised herself, that he would be brought back to Haven and buried. She activated her combat armour, and called in the squad’s private comn, which included Fang, “This is Theta actual, calling all Thetas. Come in, Thetas. Rue? Gildrein?” She almost called Shadow’s name, then thought if his body, then gagged. She shook her head, and cleared the thought. “Rue? Gildrein?”
She hung her head, ashamed in herself. It was she who was MIA, when the town was burnt down. That’s when a cackling noise startled her, from another end on the comn line. “Good day, Miss Hawthorne. I have two survivors at my end, your squad mates. Meet us at these coordinates.” Rose breathed an audible sigh. It was the familiar voice of Fang.
“Alright, Mister. I’m coming.” She followed the way, and arrived at the coordinates. What she saw shocked her.

Fang, Rue and Gildrein, all bound up and gagged. She gasped, and asked, “Who did this to you?” They mumbled and cried through the gags, which Rose could not make sense of. “Right, I should take your gags off.” She moved forward a fraction, and that’s when a black fabric was slammed onto her head, and a gigantic, hard object was slammed to the side of her head.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 07:12
#37
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Kaijuhunter

Yay! The yandere is about to be unleashed! Buckle your seatbelts, get some popcorn, and prepare for total annihilation!

/run for cover

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 13:03
#38
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Shotjeer
RAWR

TOPO please get on your car.

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 21:35
#39
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

No, topo, don't get in the car.

/grabs popcorn.

YANDERE MASSACRE!

Thu, 06/27/2013 - 23:31
#40
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Hogmos-Forum

I hate violence.

/grabs popcorn gets on the couch

I really hate massacre and genocide

/jumps on the couch

Sat, 06/29/2013 - 23:31
#41
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Hearthstone

BumP!

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 04:53
#42
Topoyozariane's picture
Topoyozariane
Thanks!

Thanks for bumping it Skype! I was going to post a chapter anyway :P

~~~~~~~~~

Chapter Six:

When Rose came to, she saw that she was in a cell with Fang, Rue and Gildrein.
“Where...... Where am I?” She managed, a thirst for water suddenly appearing. “Where’s Kyrie?”
Fang looked at her, “We’re in a cell. Exact whereabouts, we don’t know. And Kyrie? I thought he was with you.”
Rose paled at that, “No..... I lost his body! I remembered I was lugging it around....”
Fang frowned, “I don’t recall you carrying him. And what do you mean, his body?”
Rose hung her head, “I was up early, and I went for a walk. When I came back, I saw him dead. He was smoked the death.”
Fang nodded slowly, “We will mourn him, but right now, we need to think of an escape plan. Staying here will let Kyrie’s death be in vain.”
Gildrein piped up, “Umm, with all due respect, sir, but a death being in vain means he sacrificed his life for us. He did nothing of the sort.”
Rue merely shrugged, and did nothing.
“So..... What do you propose?” Asked Rose, looking to her squadmates.
Fang shrugged, “I was about to ask you.” They fell silent, and were silent for the following hours that they sat there.

Two days has past, and still Theta squad has not thought of an escape plan. That’s when a ghost arrived. The walls in Theta’s cell burst open, to reveal..... “Kyrie?!” Rose gasped, “You’re alive?!”
Kyrie grinned, “I’m not dead, and I can’t be dead. I was searching all over for you guys when I woke up! What was it? Two days?”
Fang grinned, and stood up, then asked, “Woke up? What, you slept the whole day two days ago?”
Kyrie looked away guiltily, “Yeah.... Anyway, I’m here to bust you out of jail.”
The squad smiled, and Kyrie threw their weapons to them. “I raided the armoury and found these.”
They moved quickly and silently, away from the prison. But what they didn’t know, was they had escaped from a danger, only to land in another.

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 05:57
#43
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Hearthstone

Yay for falling asleep!

Anyways, I can see the future as Rose repeatedly slapping Kyrie for feigning death like that. -3-

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 21:21
#44
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Hearthstone

Also, Kyrie likes behind-the-neck scratches, finger nibbles and hugs.

When he's sad or emotionally hurt his ears or tails usually wag slowly.

Hugs~

Edit, add tummy wubs from a certain someone. ;)

Mon, 07/01/2013 - 10:57
#45
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Hogmos-Forum
Great

You are doing great!

p.s Alfred!!!!!

Tue, 07/02/2013 - 03:34
#46
Playerman's picture
Playerman
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Still waiting for me to appear. :P

Can I add something to Carter? He's able to recognize people's personalities and feelings after observing them for a while, and know how to deal with them easily (can figure out what annoys/pleases them).

Thu, 07/04/2013 - 23:57
#47
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Possiblespy
Haven't participated in one of these before...

Here, though, have a character. All the explosions during the 4th of July gave me an idea.

Name: Grrghg (or George)
Age: 9, I think? Who knows?
Race: Gremlin Jumper
Allegiance: Ran away from the Gremlins, wants to join the Knights.
Bio: Recruited to fight knights as a Gremlin Jumper, was really freaked out when his own weapons exploded in his face.
Appearance: http://wiki.spiralknights.com/images/5/54/Monster-Gremlin_Jumper.png

Loadout: He'll try to avoid having to fight if he can, but kept the wrench wands from the gremlins just in case. He took both the minerals out, ground one up to a powder to throw or dump on things that need to be exploded, and kept the other as something to throw to detonate the powder. (Explosion will also provide a short burst of power. Might be usable for jumper cables, a defibrillator maybe. It wouldn't occur to him on his own to use it as a defibrillator though.) Also still has the two wrenches, which can probably fix/break machines or be swung at someone if he's really in trouble. Probably can't use any of the knights' weapons.

Personality: Easily frightened by danger, especially explosions, reasonably well educated about machines and wiring, nine-year-old attention span and comprehension in non-machine conversations. Likes cookies, favorite color is blue.

Fri, 07/05/2013 - 20:02
#48
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Viorayne
1st time for everything

Never done a Character for this to be used, but Ill give it a shot.

Name: Edo (Male)

Age: Unknown

Race: "Knight" (Ill explan Later why its sketchy).

Allegiance: With the Spiral Order, Has no idea of his true purpose.

Bio: As the Gears churned and Pistons pumped through the factory, Gremlins and Machines worked ferverously through the relentless work load to achieve the task that had been set upon them by Head Scientist, Zyrog. No other knew of the Project's purpose other than a few commanders in the Crimson Order and ofcourse, Zyrog himself. Inumerable orders were being shouted through comms while the boiling heat and steam bellowed through-out the facility at a constant pace. No rest was given to these workers, for the importance and care for this Project was too dire to have progress halted. Especially if it would be due to "Worker's Wellfare".

Zyrog slowly observed the ever-going construction and manufacture of the project. A few Menders kept steady watch over it in-case it needed repars of a more "Natural" type. The project remained dormant atop of the workbench, nearing ever closer to completion every passing day. The main body and servos for movement were already placed and fitted. Everything was down to the final element. The most technical of component that would form the project's very soul. The Mind.

Weeks, even months passed until it was finally ready, but the time had not been peaceful. Constant attacks and break-ins had grown more frequent from the Spiral Order's Recon teams, and the aggression and Determination kept on rising. Zyrog was under pressure from the Crimson Order to complete, and knew his life was literally on the line if this fell into enemy control. The main bulkhead detonated, sending rubble and scrap crashing all around. The Spiral Order were launching a full out assault on the Factory, and were advancing too quickly. The Mind had been placed into the Project, but not yet activated. It contained its Programming, but was not yet self-aware of its own purpose. Zyrog ignored the flashing Red lights and Warning alarms, and activated the Project, bringing it to life.

The Roof began to shake and rumble. To Zyrog's dismay, it did not hold as Explosions and gunshots could be heard closing in. The roof collapsed on-top of the project, and with no equipment to salvage what may have been lost, Zyrog charged toward the Assaulting Knights, knowing the price of losing the Project would be far worse than a quick death at the hands of Knights. Not even a scream was heard as the Valiance ended the Gremlin's life.
The remaining gremlins had fled, and the dust was clearing. Knights began to scour the area for anything that showed importance when they discovered a faint Purple light eminating from underneath the Rubble. A little while later, after combined efforts moved the pieces of fallen roof, a Knight encased in Angelic Raiment and Helm was revealed. The Knights could get no reaction out of this odd Knight, but noticed something imprinted onto the back of his Helmet. It read in uniform lettering "PROJECT: EDO".

Back in Haven, the Knight known now only as Edo, was given various tests to figure out what he was capable of. He fought with the strength of any other knight, worked well in Team situations, and even hung out with others, albeilt being very quiet, silent even. After a while. he seemed like any other Knight, Bearing a Set of Angelic armour and glowing a shade of Indigo. But inside his head, amongst the artifical gears and components, his mind held his true intent, waiting to be discovered...by the Crimson Order, by Others who know of his true existance, and by himself.

Appearance: Tall-ish, Never removes his helm and armour (Basically because its fused on amongst the wires and such, though he seems to think its sentimental value is too great to remove or something). Has the words "Project: Edo" imprinted on the back of his helm.

Loadout: Angelic Raiment, Angelic Helm, Ascended Calibur, Mighty Defender.

Personality: Silent, Fairly shy, Always acts a little annoyed at something he's forgotten.

Sun, 07/07/2013 - 04:55
#49
Hearthstone's picture
Hearthstone

Tops? You there?

Sun, 07/07/2013 - 08:08
#50
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Topoyozariane
Yeah.

Thanks for the bumps, and the applications.

Man, this is really..... helping guys. Some sarcasm intended. But because you guys are giving me and LOT of apps. I still need to put Carter and Alfred inside. :P

Chapter coming up in..... A week? Next week, I promise. Then, Carter and Alfred might come out. Might be Omega or Delta, who knows? ;)

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