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Fri, 06/28/2013 - 06:37
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Okies, new fic for reasons of why I chose to stop Melancholy that are too obvious. I will write this one here, because sometimes Google Docs won't load for me and I'd hate to see the trouble of links you'd have to go through to read. Anyways, its about my character, Zero, which I've applied to KoV's side of the Spiral Conspiracy. Anyways, Prologue's next post, and I'll be posting chaps at least once, twice or thrice a week.

Name: Zero

Age: 20

Race: Isoran

Rank: Vanguard

Loadout: Dark Retribution, Metal Sonic Suit and Helm, Swiftstrike Buckler, Determined [Red] Eyes, Parrying Blade as Side Arm

Bio: A cold-blooded individual with a lust for revenge... or "justice" as he calls it. An intelligent fellow, in fact. He devised a way to enhance the versatility of his Swiftstrike Buckler through use of his Dark Retribution and only he knows the specific mechanism for it to work. When he was a small child, his parents were killed in a fire. He knows someone set fire on their house and he will do anything to get vengeance.

Contents:

Prologue
Chapter 2
Chapter 2.5

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 06:38
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Prologue: Ablaze

[March 17]

I awoke, spring sunlight shining through my window. I got out of bed, took a bath, wore my clothes and ate breakfast. I was feeling great. Actually, I’ve never felt better. I bid my mother goodbye, and I went out.

The sight was beautiful.

Snipes roamed freely, enjoying the fresh spring air. I took a long breath, and skipped to my best friend’s house. It was just right beside mine, we usually talked at the middle of the night at the window.

I called out to her, “UNI!”

A head with a smile and blonde pigtails popped out of the window, and yelled back, “In a minute!” She went back in, and I sat on the nearby bench to wait.

This town... It looks like a fountain park now, unlike in the past. I tapped with my fingers the wooden arm of the bench, as a blue snipe plopped down on my lap. It nuzzled my tummy a bit, and I petted it in return. It nuzzled me more and I just sighed in relaxation. In fact, I was relaxing so much I didn’t see Uni at my face.

“Zeeeeeeroooooo!” she cried. It scared the snipe out of my lap and it flew away like... like a dove.
“What’d you do that for?” I asked.
“...Eh... Nothing. Hee-hee...” she giggled, twirling her pigtails.
“So. Where will we go today?” I asked.
“You choose. I chose yesterday,” she replied.
“Fine. Nightshade Forest?” I suggested.
“No way! That place is scary! You know that wolver almost attacked us!” she said. I sighed, and thought again.
“Uh... What else, what else... Oh! I know!” I said, and whispered something in Uni’s ear. She burst in excitement and yelled an “OKAY! MEET YOU THERE!” and skipped off.

I sighed again, and followed her to a small area a little back our houses. It was covered in trees, and no one could find us there, heh, it’s actually a large hollowed tree and adults can’t get in without finding the larger entrance. :”3

~

The day ended, with both me and Uni tired. We played knights, heroes and everything else. We went home for dinner, and went to bed at EXACTLY seven pm.

I yawned, and took out the lights of my room, and laid on my bed.

~

“ZERO!”

I woke up at my mother’s scream. I was shook awake, and she was in a fritz trying to get me out. I rubbed my eyes and looked around, and saw the cause of her panic.

Our house was ablaze.

She carried me outside, where all our neighbors are gathered. I looked for my father, but he was nowhere to be found, and my mother pushed through the door and looked for him.

Several minutes had passed, and I saw a shadow run into the Nightshade Forest. I paid it no attention, although it went away quickly, which meant escape. I knew then, what happened to my parents.

I fell onto my knees, tears trickling onto the ground. A hand patted my shoulder, it was Uni. Knowing it was comfort or pity, I didn’t, all I wanted to do was take revenge. Dazed by anger and confusion, I fell unconscious to the ground, with the memory of that shadow.

~

I groaned at the feel of a cold miracloth touching my forehead. I awoke with a jolt, and the memory of the night before. I stood up, and a hand forced me back into the bed. An older woman than dad, and his sister, my auntie.

“Now, now. Don’t get too worked up,” she said.
“B-but!...” I protested.
“Ssh... Calm down, first,” she began.

She told me the entire story, the truth, and continued to take care of me. After I had grown up to be eighteen, I personally went to Haven, alone, to get my revenge. Before I left, though, my auntie gave me something that I will always treasure, a supposed gift from my mother when I was to be this age, a pair of solid blue headphones, with an MP3 player, too.

I bid her goodbye, slung my backpack over one shoulder, and followed the forest paths into the town of Haven.

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 07:51
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Topoyozariane
Application.

Name: [Not known by anyone}

Age: [Appearance's makes him seem like 19 or so~]

Appearance: Light brown hair, black pupils. Wears a T-shirt (Short sleeved) with the words [Cobalt FTW!] and black pants. Has the 'suspicious' eyes.

Loadout: Full Cobalt Armour, Backpack, Ascended Calibur, Valiance (Modified: 10 bullets in clip, and is a sniper. Stock, barrel, scope and clip.)

Special: This guy, wears his Backpack all the time, including in the toilet. In the baths too. (It's waterproof :P). People underestimate him while he is in Azure, as they think it's noob. But what people don't know, is that the backpack is actually something like a class changer in Lockdown. You can cloak like recon, be as fast as Striker, and protect people with a gigantic shield.

Rank: None. He's a merc.

Bio: A normal kid, taught how to spell and stuff. One day, the Spiral Order had framed him for a crime he did not do. In fact, it was an inspector who framed him, knowing the crime-do-er was his friend. He used the Valiance to kill the Inspector, and led his life as a merc.

Personailty: A usually happy person, hates people if they show the slightest sign of betrayal, doesn't trust people easily, but if he meets Zero.... Maybe they'll be friends! (Btw, his name is Topoyozada, but no one knows. Under no circumstances you may put his name or hint anything in the story.)

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 08:27
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Hogmos-Forum
Here is my application-

Name: Alfred

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Species: Isoran

Bio: As a kid, Alfred was diagnosed with a strange illness and was expected to die.Left to fend for himself,he survived a month in sub-zero temperatures trying to reach civilizations.When he did reach a town,he was falsely accused by the garrison commander of being a spy and put in a cell.He escaped and vowed to prove himself innocent.This he did with such brutality that the mayor of the town saw the steel in him and inducted him into the Spiral Order.Here as a new knight he has already proved himself and has earned respect of senior officers.He is often quite cold and only loves his pet Wolver.

Load-out: Storm Driver,Argent Peacemaker,Umbra Driver,Combustor for close combat,Nameless Hat with a Helm-Mounted Sniper Display,Camouflaged jacket,Grey Owlite Shield

Personailty: Being young, he is aggressive but is nice to his friends and those weaker than him. He is extremely shy in-front of female knights and has a brazen attitude towards superiors.

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 14:58
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Feline-Grenadier
One angry MOFO coming right up!

Name : Vedrisca

Age : 18

Race : Isoran

Rank : Champion

Loadout : Ironmight Platemail, Mighty Cobalt Helm, Ironmight Plate Shield, Triglav, Callahan. All weapons have ASI : VH and CTR : H

Bio :

Vedrisca was once a shy, young boy who thought for the greater good of society. He was a nice, diligent boy, who, while not being the smartest, was impossible to shake from his pursuits. He always saw a task through, and he even threw a tantrum when he failed his test.

Vedrisca KNOWS that Zero, a loner-boy who had a violent streak, almost killed a few of his best friends in the deranged thought that they set fire to his parents house. After Zero permanently disabled three of his friends from walking, Vedrisca snapped, and ran off to join the Order. There, he completed missions with a ferocity that few other Knights had, and he was training himself to become a killer.

Just because he's a Champion doesn't mean he's weaker than a Vanguard.

In fact, he's constantly called to take high-risk missions, definitely more often than any other Vanguard.

Some might say that he stayed a Champion to train. They don't know what's it for, but it did't matter; he's got a LOT stronger than even the most legendary of Knights.

And he's out for Zero's blood.

Personality : An apathetic facade he holds up in front of most, but when anything is concerned with "friends", he rejects acquaintances, and if he hears "Zero", he gets pissed off. Very. Pissed. Off. The only person he'll open up to are his old friends, Uni being one of them.

Combat Notes :

- Extremely Tanky. A full Blitz charge won't phase him, getting cursed from a Gran Faust won't stop him from bashing a face in with his own head. Comparable to the boulder in Indiana Jones. The only thing stopping him is the fact that he can only murder once, and getting the wrong person isn't worth it.

- Sensible. Even if he isn't a master schemer, he uses common sense to get himself through situations. Even when he's angry, he finds a way to vent it out on something, but most of it just goes into thinking about Zero.

- Obsession. Vedrisca is obsessed with killing Zero, but he tries to hide it when the discussion comes across. Not many people know Zero is a killer off the leash, and even fewer know there's another right behind his trail. Because of this, there's not questioning him, no convincing him. He won't stop for anything, unless it means killing Zero.

- Unorthodox. He uses the force of his swinging Triglav to launch him several yards, if the enemy is fleeing, and he uses his Callahan's recoil to dodge attacks. He doesn't use keys; he breaks down gates with his Triglav. If there's anything stopping him, he literally crushes a piece of the level with sheer force.

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 16:13
#5
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Hearthstone

I'll post after my Sat. classes. :)

Oh, also, Top, what would you like me to call your character since it has no name currently? I mean, a name would really be useful.

Fri, 06/28/2013 - 19:04
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Topoyozariane

Under no circumstances, will anyone know his name is [classified]. So..... No. No calling

Sat, 06/29/2013 - 04:18
#7
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Hearthstone

Before I post, Vin, I made your char a little police-oriented, if that's okay. Okay, here's the chappie!

--Chapter 2: Found--

A boy the age of twenty sat on a bench by some stairs, enjoying a cup of coffee alone. From the crowds passing by, his handsome face stood out, and his fire-red eyes shot out a glare at those who looked. He sipped from the cup, and wiped the stain with the sleeve of his gray cotton jacket which bore the name "Zero", and his legs crossed. A crucifix hung over his neck, and a pair of headphones, the name [Z E R O] printed on one muff. His black hair swayed with the wind, and he looked up at the sky.

He watched the entire town square of Haven with its usual day-to-day noise, the Auction House booming with the large amount of crowns coming in and the Haven Cafe filled with friends and knights, a few of whom are the Peacekeepers, which like their name, keep the peace in Haven, they strut about in weird uniforms and try to resolve every damn thing in town.

The usual gossipers and news-mongers were around as well, giving the public the latest about almost everything.

Its disgusting. He thought, and took another sip from the cup. Then he stood up, crushed the cup in his hands, and threw it in the trash can beside the bench. He took out his MP3 Player, set his headphones and put the order in shuffle, a nice tune blasting. He hid the cellphone-like object back in his pocket, and began to walk away towards a somewhat exit to a civilian area.

Passing by the cafe, he windowed the shop, and saw six Peacekeepers talking at the front. The first five didn't seem that bright, or the type to know classified things. But, the last one, at the edge of the table, a boy somewhat slightly younger than Zero, seemed promising. The Peacekeeper wore a simple set of uniform, yet heavy as it is; an Ironmight Plate Mail and a Mighty Cobalt Helm. However, Zero just smiled slyly and went off.

~

The six Peacekeepers, engrossed in conversation, left the cafe. Suddenly, a skinny one, mentioned as he pointed at a twenty-year-old man, "Hey, isn't that the guy, from those murder reports? What's his name?"
"Uh... Zero, was it? Let's report him." said another Peacekeeper, who now took notice of the promising Peacekeeper. "Vedrisca, are you alright? You seem a little... tense."
"I... I'm fine. You guys go on ahead to HQ without me. I'm going on a short patrol," Vedrisca said, and bade goodbye to his colleagues. As soon as the man was still in sight, and his colleagues weren't, he rushed at the man, fist ready.

He grabbed the shoulder of the man, who turned his head around. Vedrisca yelled, "Bastaaaaaaard!"

He threw his fist at the man, who caught it with his hand.

Sat, 06/29/2013 - 04:42
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Dewca
Appy!

Name: Fang

Gender: Male

Species: Isoran

Bio: Was abandoned by unknown parents when he was 6. He eventully came to sense to find food and shelter. He hid in the forests, occasinally stealing food from random people but prefering to nick things of the shelves of the auction house. He joined spiral HQ and leveled quite high. He started gaining respect from other knights. He is quite good at combat and dosen't steal from anyone anymore but can use the skills if needed to. Fang can be very sensitive to the subject of family and it tends to cut right through to him. He is also very good at combat.

Personality: He has quite a solitary personality. He rarely says more than 5 sentances in a row and he talks softly. However if angry or sad, his face dosen't usally show his emotions unless he is greatly pained or hurt. He rarely cries or smiles. Although seemingly quite hollow, he can be very caring if he has trusted them and has made a strong bond. The people he trusts are a great deal to him and he will do alot for them.

Apearence: Short black hair. dark, dark, dark brown eyes. Around 6 feet. Handsome face. Medium build. Personally colour, blackish blue.

Loadout: Vog cub cap and coat, Fang of Vog, Polaris, Heater shield.

Sun, 06/30/2013 - 00:21
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Feline-Grenadier
One does...

One does not simply forget his own creations...

...unless he is Skye-Lightning?

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 01:45
#10
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Feline-Grenadier
skye

UPDATE NAOGH FER JESUS CHRISTOS SAKE ANDELE ANDELE!

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 03:31
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Hearthstone

I am!... Writing it now, actually. I mean in the comment box! Also, I showed my sis your comment, we shared a laugh and then I pushed her to her seat. :3

Chapter 2.5: Hesitation

He grabbed the shoulder of the man, who turned his head around. Vedrisca yelled, "Bastaaaaaaard!"

He threw his fist at the man, who caught it with his hand.

Vedrisca's mouth was ajar, at the thought of not thinking this through. Of course he'd be able to do this... Why didn't I--

He was cut off, and put up his shield. The man, who had just caught his fist, now retaliated. The man's fist collided with the shield, a small scratch left behind.

"That's rude." the man said.
"You tell me!" Vedrisca replied, twisting, drawing his Callahan. He pulled his fist from the man's grip, and placed a distance between him and the man, slug-launcher raised.
"Oh-ho! A Peacemaker pulling out a gun in front of ALL these people?" the man laughed, taking notice of the growing crowd around them. "Kid, look around before you spark something up, huh? Name's Zero, by the way."

Vedrisca twisted his head, he saw the crowd. He couldn't risk it, all these people watching him shoot down someone maybe unknown to them. He lowered his launcher, "Damn you."
Zero laughed, walking over to him. He patted him on the head. "See you, kid."

Couldn't control his anger anymore, Vedrisca raised the gun up again, at Zero's head directly this time.
"I see you won't waste bullets, go on. Shoot!" Zero called, "But, you should know this, Mr. Cop. The way I'm seeking revenge, is what you're doing right now. Get the killer, satisfy your hunger. Get it?"
Vedrisca hesitated, his finger shaking at the trigger. Should I... What will this do for me...? I mean... he killed them. How else am I going to do justice for them?
"Justice. That's the problem with this 'Order'. You do--" Zero began, when a random citizen from the crowd, decked in Azure Guardian, spoke up.
"STOP!"

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 05:04
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Midnight-Dj
Mind if I join?

Name: Midnight
Rank: valkyrie inquisitor ( defender elite equivelent in the valkyrie order )
Race: Isorian/Valkyrie
Gender:male(female?)
Age: 32

Weapon set: valkyrie helm/mail+a frosty maid head band(a recognition to his rank),strike needle and CIV and a standard issued aegis.

Bio: Valkyrie order, running along side with Spiral HQ, is a para-millitary group founded to serve the purpose of solving crimes ( arson is one of them ) as well as keeping other super natural evil away from haven. Midnight is one of the few inquisitors on the streets of haven, other inquisitors prefer lurking in the shadow or fly across the sky to patrol for possible robbery or hit n' run. Midnight has being on to the arsonist(s) who is/are responsible for the death of Zero's parents for years, but was never able to caught them red handed. While wearing a valkyrie set, Midnight's gender is ambiguous, on the outside the dress do make him look like a woman, but his slightly low pitched voice makes many suspect that he is actually a man...well, skye-lightning, i think having a genderwise ambiguous character in a heavy theamed fanfic can serve as great stress relieve. Hope u add him/her, his final gender reveal is up to u to decide.

Personality: Midnight, while trying to sniff out the arsonists, has also been on to zero, years have he tracked zero's worsening voilent streak. Everytime when he gets a chance to talk with zero, midnight will always act kind towards him. Even assisst him in his "acts of justice" which often in public's eyes, a way to attract unwanted attension. In other occasions, midnight provides zero with food as well as shelter if zero get kicked out of the apartment by the landlord( zero, will probably think Midnight is rather.... G@Y) ( I will call midnight a guy for now, that is his default gender)

Zero, will often try to shake off midnight's pursuit by attacking him with a barrage DR, but the orbs do little against the shadow resist armor midnight is wearing. He may often get caught by Midnight's grasp and midnight will always give him a HUGE lecture about how revenge is bad and violence is never the way. Despite Zero's ignorance towards him, Midnight always shows up at the most desperate moment to help him cheat death, all to make Zero change his mind; Even if it means he have to hurt Zero's pursuers. Afterwards, he will always try to persuade Zero to stop the madness and go back to the custody with him, of course, Zero just refuses and dissapear into the shadow.

Midnight was brought up in a normal family, everyday, he saw innocent people get hurt and the bad guys walked away without charge. His obssession with justice made him join the valkyrie order thinking he might one day get a chance to unleash his wrath upon the guilties. But as the time goes by, Midnight starting to see, that the world might not be a beautiful place, BUT IT IS WORTH FIGHTING FOR. He sees zero as a dark projection of his former self, a knight consumed by hatred and vengeance. Midnight is determined to deter Zero from his path, hope it wasn't too late...

COMBAT: Midnight recived standard trianning from the valkyrie order, allowing him to dash quickly during combat with his wings, he can also lift a knight or two off the ground, making him a walking extraction helicopter. He uses his CIV's charge attack as his main attack and to deal with anything other than fellow knights, he uses his blitz needle. In addition, he do have hand-cuffs which allow him to arrest rioters and other crimminals alike, he is also carrying a small amount of CE shards with him,not steal-worthy but can be used for emergency revive before the ambulence/medic arrive.

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 04:53
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Hearthstone

Okies...

Nice story though.

MUHAHAHAHA... What a plot twist!

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 05:11
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Hearthstone

Guys, before I forget, don't forget to answer me on this:

How would you exact justice?

Clarified Apps:

  • Vedrisca
  • = From what I understand, somewhat vigilante-type.

  • Fang
  • = Bases on trust.

  • Midnight
  • = Law-abiding, yet whole-hearted to even help Zero.

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 06:15
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Midnight-Dj
ummm

Yep, seems good to me, u r good to go. ;) yeah, i'm in a fanfic! (?)

Sat, 07/06/2013 - 06:34
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Hearthstone

After writing this, I might try commissions next.

Wed, 07/24/2013 - 02:24
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Hearthstone
Note, this was copied from MS WORD.

Chapter 3: Her
Zero sat on the stairs outside of Haven, staring at the sky. He recalled the earlier event, with
Vedrisca, and that chap in Azure Guardian.

“Stop!” the chap yelled at the two, pushing them apart.
“Tell him that,” Zero smirked.
“Damn it...” Vedrisca cursed.
“Vedrisca, you’re a Peacekeeper. You should keep your cool in these cases,” the chap said.
“Now, go.”
“Ugh, fine. But just ‘cause you said so. I won’t let this guy slip so easily!” Vedrisca yelled, and
took off.
The chap turned to Zero afterwards.
“What’d you do that for?” Zero asked. “He was getting to the good part!”
“What the-- I don’t even-- Anyways. Don’t pick a fight with him. He has anger issues over you,”
the chap explained.
“How not obvious,” Zero said.
“Let’s... talk elsewhere. These people might think of things...” the chap suggested.
“You first,” Zero said.
The chap walked towards the exit of Haven, the outskirts. There they sat on the soft snow, and
began talking.
“So... Zero,” the chap began.
“Not talking to you guys of this so-called ‘Order’ anymore,” Zero cut off.
The chap sighed, and went on, “Anyways, you really shouldn’t pick a fight with that guy.”
“Pssh! Like I’m just gonna back away,” Zero said.
“Ah, crap. I’m late,” the chap added, “See ya.”

Zero contemplated a while about that, and silently walked over to the Arcade. It was empty, and
Zero had the freedom to be here. He dashed to the console of an elevator gate, tapped a few
numbers, then suddenly--
“Hello?” a female voice filled the room. Zero recognized it immediately, and hid behind the
console.
“Mr. Feron...? I have your papers!”
Zero sat there. The voice kept calling and calling, then he slipped.He fell down, making a loud
-thump- and she saw him.
A beautiful girl stood in the doorway, staring at him. She was wrapped in a Vog Cub Coat,
holding pieces of paper. She stood in horror, yet her eyes were flushed with some hope, her hair
suddenly swaying.

"...Zero...?"

Wed, 07/24/2013 - 03:34
#18
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Playerman
Let's see what happens :P

I'll place an app here, but I kinda feel that Carter doesn't fit into this story too easily.

Name: Carter.

Species: Isoran.

Gender: Male.

Age: 25

Rank: Vanguard.

Visual Description: Long black hair, black eyes (eyes seem tired/bored) - Body looks thin, but knows how to pack a punch - Slouches slight when walking, usually has hands in pockets - Stares at the ground while walking in a familiar area, with a face that makes others think he's thinking about something

Habits: When in a new area, will take one very long look, spotting any detail (usually doesn't pay attention to anyone speaking while doing so) - Sits down a lot, usually getting distracted by following something with his eyes (a bug crawling on the ground) - Pokes things. (someone who's being stiff with him, previously mentioned bug, etc.) - When walking and talking, won't make eye contact with the person - Takes note of things he sees others doing, and remembers them (remembers if someone likes/hates something, remembers something odd he saw on the floor), and will put knowledge to use later - Will unknowingly make a barrier from females (blocks them out of view with another person)

Bio: Pretty normal. No parents dying or anything saddening.

Carter grew up in a normal family, going to a public school. After the first few years, it was obvious that he was one of the smartest there. He had earned respect from the instructors, but he was one that was picked on during the earlier grades. By the time his years of school were over, Carter had taken an interest in fighting. After finishing, he moved out of his parents' house and got into training for Spiral HQ.

During the training courses, he developed some hobbies. He took an interest in physics, and tried putting it to use by messing around in the small space his apartment gave him. He eventually learned how to free run (which he usually didn't do as it attracted attention to him) when he went outside to try.

After several weeks developing the skills needed to become a knight, Carter became a knight of the Spiral Order, though they weren't sure if his way of dealing with the enemy would work. He grew to be one of the best there, although few knew that, as he usually ventured alone.

Personality: Intelligent, has much sense and reasoning - Introverted, prefers to go solo - Especially has trouble communicating with females - Has a sharp tongue - Will place other's lives in front of his, which surprises them often - Will usually notice something important, but won't interrupt someone else talking - Prefers not to sneak attack and will acknowledge the enemy as an opponent

Equipment: A blackened Solid Cobalt Helm and Vitasuit Deluxe, both modified to resist more of a beating (usually takes off helmet) - Gran Faust - Has a pouch with a few items that can occupy him when he's bored (a deck of cards, etc.)

Fighting: Wields sword one-handed, has no shield - Attacks with much strength and speed with both the sword and physical attacks (kicks, elbows, etc.), can chain attacks together and wipe out crowds of enemies, extremely powerful opponent at close range - Reaction time allows him to even deflect bullets if he gets lucky, but is much more vulnerable against some attacks due to having no shield (explosions) - Flails body about the area while attacking, which usually confuses the enemy (spins and flips) - Can't do anything with guns or explosives - Has a "rage mode", where he will resort to slowly walking towards the enemy, spasming from pure anger; huge pain tolerance, attacks become much more fierce (ripping, tearing, snapping), and the end result usually is blood everywhere - Loses consciousness after rage. You can edit the rage a bit if it's too gory.

How would you exact justice?: Will handle things lawfully, but if things get too personal, will become VERY violent.

Wed, 07/24/2013 - 05:02
#19
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Topoyozariane
Hey!

That's it? Me just walking away? Oh, and this should help.

Zero bumps into the chap in Azure armour. "Oh it's you again."

"Yeah. Listen, I got a mission to do. Care to be my escort."

"Sure, but I still haven't caught your name..."

"You may call me.... Topo. Honestly, call me anything."

"Alrighty."

Wed, 07/24/2013 - 06:34
#20
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Lord-Hood
Still taking apps?

Name: Kalem

Race: Knight, but, well, read on...

Gender: Male

Arsenal: Uses whatever he is issued from the Crimson Order, but has a gremlin upgrade of a Polaris fused to his right arm, which he lost after he was abandoned in the clockworks by some other knights, he can, however detach the gun and replace it with a highly advanced gremlin prosthetic hand. His armor is usually a Fallen Dragon Scale armor volcanic Dragon wings that he can fly for a short time with and a Crown of the Fallen with military knight vision goggles, he uses an upgraded stalker recon shield.

Characteristics: Tall, around 6' 4" (almost 2 meters) with dark hair and eyes, although few have seen him not covered by armor. Some knights report seeing his eyes turn black. His structure can best be described by the word "lean"

Personality: Takes what he wants and flattens anything, or anyone that gets in his way, he is a brilliant tactician, once even allowing some knights to capture him so he could get some plans for a new weapon from Feron's office. While he avoids battles where the odds are badly to his detriment, he is ruthless in every way, he has no care for knights and wants them exterminated, he does not think of himself as a knight, but as a gremlin, and the other knights see him that way too.

Bio: When he was young, he was taken out on a training expedition by some other knights, but when they were ambushed by jellies, the other knights left him behind. With insufficient armor, and outnumbered, Kalem fought his way through the jellies, but was eventually defeated, losing part of his arm to a spike jelly in the process. A stalker gremlin from the Crimson Order found him, however, and brought him to a gremlin city, where he was taken care of and his arm repaired by a Crimson Order warmaster, named Seerus. He never forgot what the knights did to him and swore to level Haven one day. He eventually became very powerful in the crimson order, becoming a Warmaster himself as well as an accomplished assassin and spy, thanks to his Stalker training. He takes his orders directly from King Tinkizar and allows nothing to get in the way of his orders. Feron placed a bounty of 5,000,000 CR on his head Dead or Alive, but he has managed to elude all of his would-be attackers, killing dozens of knights. He isn’t just a mindless killer though, like some other gremlins, rushing to attack any knight they see. He will watch them from a distance, find out what they are doing, and THEN kill them. A few powerful knights can overpower him, but few have escaped him.

Role: bad guy, you decide what specifics

Additional Facts: Using his alchemy skill as a knight and his training from gremlins, he crafts powerful shadow resistant armor for the gremlins under his command. Because Feron has sent assassins after him before, it is whispered among gremlins that he has two personal aides, both stalker gremlins, at his side always. Since his main weapon is fused to him, Feron had a special handcuff, or really a cap for the gun made that clamps onto Kalem's Polaris, and had it issued to all Arsenal stations in the clockworks, in case a knight were to ever run into him to help subdue him.

Suggestions: I'd rather he not die, but whatever

Thu, 07/25/2013 - 02:30
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Hearthstone

Do not fret, Tops, you'll have a somewhat GTA role here...

...I just gave spoilers away, didn't I?

Anyways, I think this is enough characters for the meantime!

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