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Sun, 01/26/2014 - 19:23
Aekun

Helloooooo, people! My name is Nade801, or Aekun, and I am here to bring a fanfic of generations, one that is in loose relation to Attack on Titan. Be warned, though, it's probably going to be less satisfactory than most stories here. Oh yeah, and here is the application form:

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Armor & Shield:

Weapons:

Personality:

Bio (Optional):

And onward forth!

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The knight's heart pounded in her chest as if it was going to pop straight out of her ribs and onto the cold stone floor below. And indeed, that almost happened. For she tripped, and when she crashed into the ground a great noise echoe throughout the dark hallway. Almost instantly, the knight, whose name was Miyanumi, was surrounded by an immeasurable amount of monsters, ranging from small wolvers to huge jellies, all bent on destroying thier shared enemy. Miyanumi staggered backwards. "No, no no!" she whispered to herself, "This can't happen! Oh dear lord, please someone save me!"

At that very moment, as if in answer, a secret stone door swung backwards, and she fell backwards, landing flat on her back with a thud, and the door swung again, and closed, trapping the monsters outside. After spending a while grimacing in pain, Miyanumi got up and brushed the dirt off of her outfit: a near complete Azure Gaurdian set with a Quicksilver helm, and saw a figure clothed in black shadows. She made a move to usheaht her sword, but then realized the she had left them outside the door. With growing horror, Miyanumi watched as the figure stepped out of the darkness, and one word camed out of her open mouth.

"Seerus!"

The Warmaster stared at her through the eye sockets and smiled under his mask. "Indeed," he said, and laughed. "You knights are, and will always be, so foolish. You cannot even identify a faker when you see one." he gloated, and then continued, "When I supposedly 'died' at the hands of Lieutenant Feron, I didn't. Instead, while his back was turned, I phased out, and wet to my home region." At that, he snapped his fingers, and several fearsome-looking attack bots appeared out of nowhere. "Take her away!" he ordered, and they did so, carrying the quivering Miyanumi into the infinite, black shadows of the clockworks.

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So, how was it, eh? Also, the slight relation to attack on Titan will come later.

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 20:56
#1
Hexlash's picture
Hexlash
I was confused when I saw this....

lol, #BlastFromThePast #http://forums.spiralknights.com/en/node/87287 #xD

Anyways, pretty decent. Although, it always good to have a quick grammar sweep, but otherwise, I would suggest building up on your character more. So far, I don't really care about her because I have no idea who she is. Past her name and armour, she's a complete stranger, as I heard somewhere way back when, make us care about this random Knight being pulled through mortal danger! :)

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 20:57
#2
Aekun
Chapter 2

Miyanumi awoke to find herself strapped to a chair, armorless and in a jumpsuit, with syringes, formulas and other instruments of experimentation laid about around her. A great fear overcame the knight, ad she struggled in her bonds, only to be heard by Seerus, who chuckled quitely. "No one can save you now, little knight." he said. Miyanumi narrowed her eyes and replied, "Well, if they can't save me, then they can save Haven." Seerus swiveled in his chair to face her. "Yes, but they'll have a hard time doing when the enemy is..." he begun, and walked toward her. "You." he finished, "Now begin the project! I want her fully transformed by tomorrow." Then, he walked out of the lab and out of sight. A small drill bored a hole through an opening in the jumpsuit, and released a green fluid into Miyanumi's bloodstreeam.

She gasped with pain, and a desire to kill and eat Knights suddenly flickered through her. She shook her head, but the desire grew stronger, and she gave up fighting it. Next came a syringe that injected more of the liquid into her spinal cord. It went right up to her brain and twisted the thoughts, the memories, the emotions, indeed, everything in her head, to pure nothingingness, leaving her a blank slate. One of the attack-bots pressed a button, and a cord went though the same hole, and began to upload a different personality into her head. It was a personality of evil, mindless rage, filled with the want to bathe in the blood of enemies. And for the last step of the horrifying procedure, the chair dumped her into room of great size, where it filled to the brim with the substance that was responsible for her transformation. After a hour had passed, it drained out of the room.

Miyanumi was no more. Instead, in her place stood a colossal, genderless creature, bent on destroying Knights everywhere. It roared, and the bowels of the clockworks shook.

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 20:59
#3
Aekun
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@ Hexlash: Well, she was kinda just a figure for Seerus' procedure for transforming knights into Titan-like creatures. The real main character(s?) come later on.

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 22:52
#4
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Feline-Grenadier
...

You were beaten to the punch about a year ago...

And this reflects how Eren got his own shifting powers, am I not wrong? Still, it won't correlate with the other shifters' pasts, like Ymir.

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 23:23
#5
Aekun
Chapter Three

Many leagues away from the transformed Miyanumi stood the glorious watchtower, built from the ruins of the Skylark. This building had come to be made because the core had been found out to be an insufficient power source, only able to power small ships. And so, Cradle became the new base of the Spiral Knights. This did not mean that they were stuck there. No, the small ships carried many Knights to Isora, wher ethey were happily reunited, and in the progress of building a new ship.

Even Tinkizar himself had proclaimed peace, prosperity, and harmony between the mobs of the Clockworks and their former enemies. Haven and Emberlight were fused into one, and the three races, Knight, Strangers, and Gremlins helped to build the huge city, surrounding it with three walls: Marya, Roka, and Siha. It remained that way for 100 years, until Seerus figured out how to travel through time and came to the future, bringing an army with him. There was a huge battle, and Lieutenant Feron, who had followed the Warmaster through the breach, supposedly killed him. Then, the portal closed, and trapped Feron in the future. Luckily, the citizens understood, having records of him vanishing at an exact period in time. After that, Feron invented the EMD, or Extended Movement Device, which allowed the wearer to do things not previously possible.

Now, however, we go back to the present, as Feron and his second in command, the Skolver-Set bearing Aekun, were discussing matters of importance.

Feron slammed his fist down on the table, almost denting the titanium. "This is making me very angry." he stated, and turned away from the table, "I cannot have more of my troops get kidnapped by who knows what, and who knows where. I simply cannot abide it. First it was Miyanumi, then a whole platoon of new recruits, and even experienced people like Commander Atragon. Whoever's taking them must be doing something with them!" He then put his head into his hand softly and sighed. "Lieutenant Aekun, report," he said. Aekun put away his chocolate chip cookie and saluted. "Yes sir, General Feron, sir! There appears to be an influx of activity amog the rebel mobs, sir. Also, we recieved a disturbing transmission." he said. Feron nodded at him, and Aekun played it.

"Hello, my delightful little Knights!" cried Seerus, "It is such a pleasure to see you, Feron. I hope you're enjoying the peace Haven is having right now, because that's all about to change. Oh, believe me, everything you love will die, and I will rise from the ashes as ruler of this planet, and eventually the galaxy. Now, goodbye, I have work to attend to." he said, and at the end of the transmission a huge roar was heard."

Feron's brows creased. "Everything will change ... everyone I love will die ... wait!" he muttered. "Collect the men, deploy the froces, do whatever you can! But most of all, prepare for a full-out battle!"

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 23:25
#6
Aekun
@ Feline-Grenadier: Actually,

@ Feline-Grenadier: Actually, it is only loosely based off of that. I may have one of the main characters somehow accquire powers like that, but Miyanumi is just the first in a line of War-Beasts that Seerus designed.

Mon, 01/27/2014 - 00:25
#7
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Hexlash
Doh

It makes sense now. I see what you did, though you could have messed with a lot of people if you built up her character up before you went all pooosh on her lol :)

Mon, 01/27/2014 - 02:25
#8
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Yorha
Well... Here goes

Name: Xylosha

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Armor & Shield: Arcane Salamander w/ Fancy Dragon Wings and Cool Bomb Bandolier, Grey Feather Cowl w/ Cool Mecha wings and Prismatic Halo, and swiftstrike buckler

Weapons: Divine Avenger, Polaris, Gran Faust, and Barbarous Thorn Blade

Personality: Outgoing, funny, kind, caring,

Mon, 01/27/2014 - 04:55
#9
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Scirio
Shingeki no

Shingeki no Curadoruuuu~~~~~~~~

Mon, 01/27/2014 - 19:54
#10
Aekun
Chapter Five

Aekun kicked over a small rock that was in his path. "Form ranks!" he called to his squad, and they stepped into position. "Despite the hundred years of relative peace, Seerus has struck again." He stated. Several knights gasped, for Seerus was thought dead by everyone on cradle. In fact, even the mobs belived him to be vanquished. But now, that he had risen again, the world was in danger, and only the Knights and their allies possessed the force to stop it. "Now," Aekun continued, "We shall march forth to combat Seer-" he was interrupted i the middle of his sentence by a loud boom, and whipped his head around to see many huge shapes rising out of the dust. He began to sweat, ad called forth the Knights to attack, but they ran away in cowardice, except for one known as Xylosha, he ran towards Aekun ad threw him an EMD, then strapped on his own. Aekun nodded, and the two ran fast, faster than possible for their species, leaping across huge hils and jumping from tree to tree.
When they finally reached the huge beings, the two skidded to a stop and froze, marvelig at the size. Then, Xylosha noticed that one of them seemed .... familiar. When he realized who it was, he screamed in rage and twisted upwards towards the beast, usheathig his sword and gun as he went. Aekun followed, jumping high onto the head of the beast, only to find Seerus waiting for him, Rocket Hammer in hand. Seerus laughed. "Oh, Knights, you are so, so brave. When faced with a challenge like this, you always attempt to get out on top, and you do, even when the situation is hopeless." he said, and then roared, "Well, that all changes now!" He leapt toward Aekun, swinging the hammer into his opponent's chest, knocking him backwards. The Knight, clutching his side, grabbed onto the Warmaster's leg as he jumped and flung him over the side.
Seerus grinned as he flew down, and arranged himself in a sitting position, and then disappeared. Meawhile, Xylosha had maneuvered himself so that he was at the nape of the neck, and stabbed in. The beast stumbled, ad then crashed to the ground. The two jumped off and began running back to tell fero about what had happened. However, when they got back, they found ruin and disaster far beyond anything they could imagine: the huge monsters had invaded Haven.

Sat, 07/30/2016 - 13:27
#11
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Vidalia-Rose
I'm so stupid

I just realized this was based off Shingeki no Kyojin

Also I hope you are willing to add me (its fine if you don't want to)

Name: Vidalia-Rose

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Armor & Shield: Divine Helm, Drake Scale Mail and the Mighty Defender

Weapon: Ascended Calibur, Master Blaster (I'm simple ok?)

Personality: Hot and cold, caring, humble, amiable

Sat, 07/30/2016 - 13:35
#12
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Corporal-Shade
Hello Darkness, my Old Friend.

This thread is from 2014 end of story.

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