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Kataclysm: my first Fanfic

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Sat, 06/28/2014 - 11:07
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Alfreton

Alrighty then!

So, all you lovely chaps and chappetes: I've noticed that there hasn't been many stories about the Kataclysm, and three rings seem to have practically made a story out of it already (see the mysterious alchemy machine and look for the Kat stuffs.) so it would be easy to fill in the gaps somewhat...right?

....right?

So, (wow I like that word) due to my recent obsession with fanfics I've decided, in my infinite stupidity, to make a S.K fanfic. Please, PLEASE keep in mind that this is my first attempt at fanfics. It's a miracle I've managed to persuade myself to post this at all.

And so, without further ado, I give you, ladles and jellyspoons, the first chapter!
(One more point before we begin our not-so-epic tale: this is a FANFIC. It doesn't strictly stick rigidly with the rules of the game, and has some new stuff in it which isn't in the game. Also, no health pills. Great for a Clockworks run, not so great for drama. Anyway! On with the show!)

1: Margrel

Margrel gazed up at the full moon, feeling its midnight glow falling onto her face. She wanted, more than anything, to be away from that place. Away from the army of the Kat tribe, away from the ceaseless marching, and away from the Owlite High Academy of Magicks. She wanted to be with the moon.
She wanted to be home.
The marching stopped. The Kats lay in wait, eager for commands from their Generals. "Margrel?" She sighed, turning away from the moon and facing Torair. Torair was the Kat tribes' foremost expert on explosives, knowing everything about them. If it went bang, Torair probably knew how to use it to its maximum potential. He scratched his messy brown fur. "Sorry to interrupt your Nightdreaming, but the Generals want to see you. Stat. Briefing's about to start." And with that, Torair was gone, scurrying through the crowds. Margrel took one last look at the moon and followed him.

The war tent was a hodgepodge of whatever materials the Kat Tribe could get their hands on. Pelts, fabrics, Margrel even saw a glint of metal. Leaning over a table in the middle of a room, examining a map, Scraith stood. Scraith was an expert swordsman, able to pull off seemingly unbelievable attacks that took years to master in the blink of an eye. It was said that he never took off his sheath, a hardened leather and silver casing permanently strapped to his back. Next to him stood Preowa, checking the rounds in her crossbow. There were rumours that she could hit anything with that bow, no matter how far away. Many Kat soldiers had placed bets back when she was training if she could hit an object 50 metres away. A lot of crowns were lost in the process. Torair, who had just arrived, nodded at Preowa, and she nudged Scraith. "Wha... Oh. Margrel. Thank you for coming." Margrel noticed the weariness in his eyes, the surprise in his voice, as if he were ready to pounce at anything. Ever since the leader of the Kat tribe had assigned them the siege, Scraith had spent every waking, (and some sleeping) moment planning every detail. The Owlites were notoriously good at defending their settlements and citadels, and, due to the lack of information, Scraith was forced to prepare his soldiers for every eventuality. He adjusted his red and grey cowl, and pointed to a spot on the map. "This is where we are. The surrounding foliage should be enough to cover us for now, but when morning comes, we're sitting ducks." Scraith moved his hand to another part of the map. "It took our best scouts weeks to get the perimeter of the Owlite High Academy of Magicks onto paper, and even then there are still flaws." Scraith moved his hand to several points on the map. "There are Grey Tower Sages along these lines. Their job will be to snipe any unsuspecting invaders. We'll have to take them out first." Preowa finished loading her crossbow, placed several spare rounds into her white and grey cowl, and stepped forward. "Me and my squad will take care of them first."
"How close do you need to get?"
Preowa flicked the sight on her crossbow upright. "Anywhere within fifty metres should be okay." Scraith wearily grinned. "Good." He returned his attention to the map. "Me and my squad will then scale the walls, taking down any archers or sorcerers they may have on the outer layer. However, that still leaves the gate..." Torair stepped forward. "Something big and impenetrable? Nothing explosives can't solve. Your attack should create a diversion for us to plant the bombs." Scraith nodded. "That'll work. Just don't blow anything other than the doors off."
Torair groaned in response. "There are no orders from that point on apart from one, direct from the leader." Scraith looked at each of them in turn. "There are to be no prisoners."

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So! There you have it. The first instalment. Of course, I need to know if people actually care about this or not before I release more chapters, so tell me what you thought of it! Was it semi-okay, or was it the worst piece of writing you've ever read? Let me know!

-Alfreton

Sat, 06/28/2014 - 12:16
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Reddehwow
Hold on what

Woah woah woah
FIRST FANFIC
Uwotm8
This is more like PRO fanfic.

Sat, 06/28/2014 - 12:24
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Colray
Lorecraft

Actually, that was quite good. I liked the portrayal of Margrel being a girl instead of a boy. I always pictured Margrel as being a confident leader, with a vendetta against the Owlites.

I like it, and will be waiting for more.

Sat, 06/28/2014 - 13:26
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Liminori
Hoy, what about the fall of

Hoy, what about the fall of the Owlites and such? All the stuff before the kataklysm that started it perhaps?

Anyhow, you portrayed everything excellently.

Sun, 06/29/2014 - 00:41
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Alfreton
Chapter 2: final orders

Hello!
So, here is the next chapter (quite short, sorry about that.) in my first Fanfic, Kataclysm. The events and the characters are based on the item descriptions in the Mysterious Alchemy Machine for the Kat Cowls (like Torair, Preowa and Scraith)
Please keep in mind that this is my first fanfic, so please forgive me for any mistakes that appear.
So, let's continue!

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2: final orders

The Owlite apprentice hurried through the intricate halls of the academy, pushing, impatiently, past other Owlites. He finally arrived at an old wooden door, and began knocking ceaselessly as soon as he arrived. The door opened, revealing an elder Owlite. "Ah. Come in." The apprentice hurried into the room, the door shutting behind him. "Do you have the Tomes?" The elder asked and the apprentice nodded, placing several large books onto a desk. One of them had a silver feather attached to the front. The elder examined each of them. "Sir, if I may..." The apprentice began to stutter. The elder simply nodded without looking up, engrossed in the tomes. "Sir... I do not believe we should've attacked the Kats." The elder looked up, surprised. "And why do you say that?" The apprentice looked at the floor. "They will not forget that day. We hit them harder than we will ever know. I fear they may already be amassing their armies." The elder shut the book. "Really, apprentice Olum? The Kats are bloodthirsty savages, who would gladly eat both of us for dinner. They are a threat to this world, and you know it." The apprentice stepped back, looking at the floor. "They deserved every casualty." The apprentice, Olum, looked up at the elder. "Not all of them did."

Margrel followed Scraith out of the war tent, pestering him with questions. "So what am I supposed to do? Why invite me to the meeting?" Scraith looked at Margrel with exhausted eyes, and she immediately felt guilty for asking. "You understand, Margrel, that I do not trust our leader entirely." Margrel thought back to meetings between the two, the cold shakes of the hands, the icy glances. "Yes... Why?" Scraith shook his head. "There is one more order that he gave us. We are to retrieve a book. It is called the Book of Feathers. It is said that the book contains the entirety of the Owlites' power."
"And you want me to get it for you."
Scraith stopped, checked that nobody was nearby, and continued, rubbing his sleepless eyes.
"I do not think our leader needs any more power than he has already. Our tribe is being twisted into a dictatorship without us realising. I need you to make sure that we never find it."
"Wait... You mean..." To defy the leader of the Kat tribe was treason, and he knew it.
Scraith looked at Margrel's shocked face. "Do what you have to do. Find it and get rid of it."

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So! There you have it. Chapter 2. Very short. Don't worry, though, Chapter 3 will be quite a bit bigger!
What did you think of it? Any questions you need answering? And suggestions for the plot? Don't be afraid to comment!

-Alfreton

Sun, 06/29/2014 - 10:21
#5
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Alfreton
Chapter 3: Siege

Right, sorry about the short length of Chapter 2, it mostly acts as an intro to chapter 3.
So, this is one of the largest chapters in the fanfic, (possibly smaller than chapter 4. But I'm still working on that one.), and goes on for about 6 or 7 paragraphs.
Alrighty then, intro out of the way, chapter 3!

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3: siege

Preowa crept through the trees, her crossbow at the ready. Behind her, her squad, the Kat Seekers, followed just as silently, toting white and grey caps. Preowa held her hand up, the squad stopping behind her. She loaded her crossbow with a single round, slender and silver-tipped. Silver was the only thing the Kat tribe could find that seemed to have an effect on the Owlite sorcerers. She held up the crossbow, peering through the sights, lining them up perfectly with her target. She fired, the crossbow making no more noise than a leaf rustling. Behind her, identical rounds were fired from her squad, the night making them invisible as they soared up to their targets. Preowa listened, her body tense. No alarms. "Did we hit them?" A voice whispered from the back of the squad. Preowa holstered her crossbow, looking up at the moonlit walls of the Owlite High Academy of Magicks. "Only one way to find out."
And with that, the squad ran back to base camp.

"Scraith! Torair!" The two generals looked up from their weapons as their names were called. Preowa was running towards the camp. "Did you hit them?" Torair asked, pocketing a bomb. "We think so. You two should be good to go." Torair nodded and walked to his squad, handing out bombs and instructions. Scraith turned to leave but was stopped by Preowa's hand on his shoulder. He turned, surprised, and met her gaze. "Good luck." She whispered.
"You too."
Preowa gave a small nod and turned away, walking towards her squad. Scraith looked where she had been for a little longer before he, too, walked away.

The Grey Feather Mage arrived at the top of the tower, one of many that stood on the perimeter of the academy. "Sorry I'm late for watch. An apprentice thought it would be funny to set my cloak on fire." He yawned, pulled his chair up and sat down next to his watch-partner. "So, I've been thinking about the spells we were trying yesterday, and my only concern is... Hello?" The Mage realised that is partner was slumped in his chair. "Come on, Alsen. Quit playing around." The Mage punched the slumped mage's shoulder, only for him to fall off his chair, revealing the neat, perfectly circular exit wound which a round had made, a round which was now embedded in the wall behind him. The Mage pulled it out of the wall. Silver tipped. His eyes widened every Owlite had been taught the shape and size of that particular round, as it's users were so deadly. Kats. He noticed a similar round embedded in the wall where his chair had been, too. He stood up quickly, revealing the hole in the chair's back. "...damn..." He muttered to himself. Down below he heard the unmistakeable sound of grappling hooks hitting their mark. He rushed to the edge of the tower, seeing a Kat in a red and grey cowl haul himself over the wall, draw his sword and leap into the fray. "SOUND THE ALARM! WE ARE UNDER ATTACK!"

Torair watched as Scraith was the first to scale the walls, before climbing up the portcullis, attaching his bombs to the iron gate. The diversion had worked, Scraith's squad swarming up the grappling hooks which Preowa and her squad had shot from their bows. Torair wondered about those two. They had an unusually large amount of trust in one another. At first, Torair had just dismissed this as a strong friendship, the two never excluded him, after all. But over time he began to sense something more developing. He shook his head. He didn't have time for Nightdreaming. He fastened the last of the bombs to the gate, before scurrying back down towards the rest of his squad. One of the Kat Hissers held out the end of a fuse towards him. "Would you like to do the honours?" Torair took the fuse, and spared one last look at the academy, it's walls now covered in crossbow bolts and grapple hook lines. "This is for the people you killed on that day." Torair dragged the fuse across the stone, the friction sparking the flame. His squad dashed to cover, and Torair was about to follow when he noticed something as he glanced back towards the gate. The fuse was flawed. It curled upwards, far higher than Torair had thought he lay it. There was a single lantern at the top of the gate, the flame inside burning far brighter than the fuse. The lantern was filled with Exlondum. As an expert on explosives Torair knew that the fuse would "set off" the lantern before the rest of the bombs, and would produce a devastating explosion, rather than the controlled door-opener that Scraith wanted. The Kat Clawers were still too close to the edge to avoid the blast. There was no way to warn them.
Without thinking, Torair leapt onto the gate, climbing faster than he ever had before. His fingers ached from his earlier effort, but he refused to let them rest, ignoring the growing pain. He arrived at the top of the gate just before the fuse, and wrenched the lantern out of its housing. He threw it down to earth, watching with satisfaction and relief as it landed harmlessly, the Exlondum trickling out of a crack in the glass.
Then one of the bombs went off.
Torair clung to the gate with all his might, trying to control the circles now appearing in his eyes. Thank the Creator that the first bomb was merely a FireSplitter, designed to cause more flames than explosions. Fire. There was wood behind the portcullis. The flames wouldn't reach him, but they would roast the metal white-hot. Torair cursed.

"What do you mean?" The elder was more intrigued than angry, confused by Olum's logic.
"I'm starting to question why we even launched the raid. What good would it have done us, apart from start a war with the Kat tribe?"
"War is inevitable, Olum. But we are ready for it. The Academy is defended in every way we could think of. Sorcerers, Archers, Watchtowers... The Kats cannot hope to succeed against them."
Ironically, it was at that precise moment that another Owlite ran into the room, almost tripping over several large piles of books. "And what are you doing here, barging into my study without so much as a single knock?" The elder asked, raising his voice. The Owlite simply panted, desperately trying to refill his lungs with oxygen, and it was some time before he spoke. He looked at both of them with wide eyes. "They're here!" "Who's here?" Asked Olum, dreading the answer that he knew was coming. "Kats! They've scaled the walls already! The watchmen are dead!" The elder cursed and turned to Olum. "Take these back to the library." He handed Olum several of the tomes from his desk. "And hurry! We cannot afford for the Kat Tribe to find them." Olum nodded, his arms laden with books, before sprinting out of the library as fast as he could.

Torair gripped the heated metal, desperately looking around the walls for any possible escape routes. The fire had reached the spilt Exlondum, and was burning more furiously than before. If Torair let go, he would fall into the inferno. Several more bombs went off, heated by the ever-growing flames and battering the already-weakened gate. Torair could feel the metal begin to twist, unable to support his weight in its state. "Killed by my own bombs." Torair muttered to himself. "What a way to go." Torair knew full well that talking to yourself is the first sign of madness, but it didn't really matter where he was going. He was even beginning to hallucinate from the heat, as he thought a rope dropped down next to him from the wall above. A rope. Scraith's voice brought him back to reality. "Need a hand?" Torair grabbed the rope just as the gate fell crumpled into the fire, clinging onto it with his blackened fingers as it was hoisted skyward.

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So, what did you think of chapter 3? Got any suggestions for the plot? Any pressing questions that need answering? Feel free to comment!

-Alfreton

Sun, 06/29/2014 - 12:53
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Midnight-Dj
@Alfreton

;_; y u so good at writting?

Possible plot points:

-As the Kat tribe heroes entered the outter edge of the owlite academy. they encountered their owlite counterparts.
+Owlite hero Nezius, the leader of the tower sages, a six winged owlite elder who can devastate a horde of kats with his magik solar beam.
+Owlite hero Vuul, the leader of the academy elite guardian squad, the wielder of the first divine avenger as well as the best shield the academy has to offer.
+Owlite hero Xephis, the leader of the magik academy's alchemy division, likes to wear leather robes and is skilled in using alchemy bombs to attack foes with impunity.

-Margle finds the grey feather book, it was more than what she hoped for.
+She became the first BK, at first the dark sign (the curse seal on her head) seems to be helping her in battle, granting her immense power. But soon it became an endless hunger for knowledge as she began to devour large quantity of owlite books and gave birth to a horde of hellish beasts (BKs).
+Upon finding a way to destroy it, Margle opens the book by accident and was devoured by the overwelming knowledge, soon she came to the 'realization' that absolute power could only be attained when she destroyed both the Kat tribe as well as the owlites. This results in a three sided war between the Kat, the BK and the owlite, with margle seeking the destruction of all.

Sun, 06/29/2014 - 13:13
#7
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Alfreton
Response

Woah, great ideas! I never considered Owlite Heroes, but actually, Midnight Dj, that isn't a bad idea!
I'm pretty far ahead on chapter 4, (spoiler alert: Margrel returns to the story) but I'll see if I can incorporate them somewhere. Maybe chapter 5?
Anyways, thanks for the feedback. And the epic ideas. Did I mention those?

-Alfreton

Mon, 06/30/2014 - 09:48
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Alfreton
Chapter 4: The library (or the duel. Depends how you feel.)

Well helu!
With 25% (roughly) completion on chapter 5 (new characters inbound!) now would be a good time to release chapter 4.
Didn't get enough of Margrel in chapter 1? She's back!
So, ladies and gents, let us pick up where we left off! (I'm running out of ways to say that ._.)

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4: The Library

Margrel scaled the walls rather less elegantly than Scraith had, her arms straining as she pulled herself over the edge of the wall. Thankfully, Scraith and his squad had caught the Owlites by surprise, pushing them back sufficiently for Margrel to get in undetected. She crept through the deserted corridors, hiding in the shadows whenever the sound of footsteps came near. Her cowl was a dark purple colour, so she blended in quite well. She arrived at a large, gilded set of double doors, the intricate carvings forming the shapes of Owlite shields. Margrel pushed through the doors, shutting them carefully behind her. She was in a library, a huge one. She gazed in wonder at the hundreds of bookshelves stretching from floor to ceiling in neat lines. She took a book off a shelf and opened it, scanning the contents. Nothing. Just a story about some duke from Almire. She returned the book, and looked around the library. There were hundreds, probably thousands of books here and she had to find just one. The siege would end before she could even scratch the surface!
Then her ear twitched upwards. An unmistakeable noise she dreaded entered her ears. The creaking of one of the huge doors as it opened. Footsteps approaching. Margrel hid behind the end of the aisle, going into the row next to the intruder and peering through the shelves. It was an Owlite, his arms laden with books, making his way down the aisle. Margrel breathed a sigh of relief. It was just a librarian, surely?
Thud.
The Owlite tripped up, dropping the books and falling to the floor. Margrel's eyes widened. One of the books had a silvery feather on the cover. The Book of Feathers. Margrel had to retrieve it from him somehow. Taking a deep breath, Margrel rounded the corner, stepping into full view of the Owlite, now picking himself up from the floor. The Owlite looked up, and took a step back as he saw the Kat that stood in front. of him, just a few metres away. "Give me that book and I'll let you live." She said, more confident than she felt, pointing to the Book of Feathers that still lay on the floor. The Owlite stood up, drawing himself to his full height (not very tall) "What, so I can be murdered by the rest of your tribe? I have a better idea." The Owlite plucked a book from the shelf nearby, opening it to a certain page and chanting the contents. A fireball materialised in mid-air, it's flames licking the air but not growing or even spreading. The Owlite watched in amusement as the Kat took a similar book of the shelf next to her. If she intended to shield herself, it would be a futile attempt. He continued to chant, and the fireball grew until it blocked the entire aisle. The Owlite looked for a moment longer at the spherical inferno which obscured his view of the Kat before firing it, the flames blazing towards the end of the aisle, crashing into the Kat. The smoke began to clear. The Owlite gasped. Margrel was still standing, an azure shield surrounding her, an open book in her hand. "Guess what. You aren't the only person who can read." Margrel grinned.
Then they both began to chant.

Scraith hauled Torair up onto the wall, his brown fur now blackened by the flames. "Now what did I say about only blowing the doors off?" Scraith asked, returning the rope to one of the pouches on his belt. Torair just grinned. "Minor hitch. Nothing I couldn't sort out." Torair stepped to the edge of the wall, watching as the rest of the Kat tribe charged through the remains of the gate. "Minor? You would've been killed if I didn't come along." Torair took off his cowl, shaking the ash and grime off of it. "Well, the gate's open now. Mission accomplished." Scraith looked towards the main complex of the Owlite High Academy of Magicks. Out of nowhere, an explosion punched through the roof of one of the buildings, momentarily lighting up the night, leaving a gaping hole. Scraith turned to Torair. "One of yours?" To his surprise, Torair shook his head. "No bomb I made could've caused a blast that large." Scraith unsheathed his sword, the jagged edge glinting in the moonlight. "Let's go see what did then."

Preowa made her way through the rooftops of the academy, occasionally stopping to snipe an Owlite below. She and her squad had split up, supporting Scraith's Clawers from above. Scraith. As the best shot in the entire Kat Tribe, it was her job to cover the swordsman. Yet she couldn't find him. A terrifying thought entered her mind. Had he been killed?
...no. Scraith was too good with a blade to fall that quickly. She scolded herself for her worry. He was somewhere around the academy, that was for sure.
She just hoped that she would be able to see those amber eyes again.

Margrel had only performed a handful of spells in her life. She didn't get many opportunities to, as not many of the Kat tribe's enemies possessed books, let alone spell books. Even when they performed a few minor raids on the Owlite's outposts, there were only a few volumes inside them. Yet here she was, slinging spells at the Owlite across the aisle, magic coursing through her veins.
She was in heaven.
She countered whenever he attacked, before sending decoy attacks to throw him off guard, sending larger, 'real' missiles to attack. But she was running out of pages, and the Owlite was only getting started. If she paused to find another spell book, that would be enough for the Owlite to launch some spells which could do some real damage. She shielded again, the blast from an incendiary spell deflected to the roof, tearing part of it open. Margrel had to find a way to end the battle, and fast. She desperately held her shield together as she flicked through the pages, trying to find a more powerful spell. Nothing. Then she saw it. At the bottom of the page. A tiny scribbling, as if an Owlite had drawn on it. She began to chant, using every last ounce of her power to perform the spell. Her shield gave off a purple glow. The Owlite, sensing a chance, hurled several spells at once at Margrel...
...which were absorbed by her shield. The Owlite was stunned. Not one of his tutors had taught him that spell. How could a Kat, with no experience whatsoever, pull it off? Margrel felt power flow into her as her shield leeched the energy from the spells, flowing the kinetic and magic energy into her body. Margrel flicked back through her spell book, throwing every spell she knew at the Owlite, an otherworldly glow filling her eyes. The Owlite apprentice stepped back, fear written in capital letters across his face. His shield dropped. Margrel raised her hand towards him, and chanted a single word. The Owlite Apprentice tried to run, but it was useless. The hundreds of magical missiles that had grown around Margrel now shot towards the Owlite faster than a round from Preowa's crossbow.
The impact knocked the Owlite off his feet, and threw him, unconscious, to the floor. Margrel shut the book, the glow in her eyes vanishing, only to be replaced by a large grin.
She had done it!

Tue, 07/08/2014 - 12:50
#9
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Alfreton
Chapter 5: the Owlite swordsman.

Right! Very, VERY late chapter here. (I do apologise, I'm starting a project soon and am trying to produce prototype models) so here we go. A quick note to. Midnight-Dj: I did take on board your idea for the next chapter, but only based it loosely. I may have more next chapter. (which may be the finale!)
So, I'll shut up now. Chapter 5!

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5: The Owlite swordsman

Scraith and Torair wandered through the roads that dominated the Owlite High Academy of Magicks. The sound of fighting had retreated far off into the distance. Scraith began to notice more and more Kat bodies appearing instead of Owlite bodies. Something had happened. Torair and Scraith arrived at a large circular courtyard, a low mist now hanging in the air, illuminated by the moonlight. "Scraith... I think I see someone!" Torair whispered. Scraith peered through the mist and saw a figure standing in the moonlight, a hood obscuring their face. Torair walked towards him, intrigued, only to be held back by Scraith. "Stay there. I'll take care of this." Torair rolled his eyes as Scraith cautiously made his way to the figure. "Friend or foe?" Scraith yelled. "Hmm. I am not familiar with that lowly Kat tribe term." The figure announced, unfazed by the icy stare he received from Scraith. "Tell me where the book of feathers is and we shall spare you." The figure seemed interested. "The book? It's in the library." He gestured to a door behind him. Scraith was about to nod his thanks when the figure unsheathed a sword. "...if you're still alive, that is." Scraith stared. The sword was a Divine Avenger, it's edge surrounded by an intricate golden glow. The figure held up an Owlite shield. "I am Orvin, leader of the Owlite's Divine Guard. You shall pay for trespassing here." Orvin dropped into a combat stance. "You're the guest, you take the first strike." Scraith looked a Orvin long and hard, as if taking in his combat style just by looking at him. Out of nowhere, Scraith charged at Orvin, holding his jagged sword up high, landing a devastating attack...
...which Orvin blocked expertly. Scraith was amazed. That move could tear through any guard or block, and yet Orvin shield held up perfectly. Scraith noticed the carved eyes on Orvin's Owlite shield were glowing, power running through it, enforcing the shield with magic. Orvin took note of Scraith's distraction, and threw Scraith off, before swinging his own sword. Scraith brought up his own sword to counter the attack, barely managing to stop Orvin from embedding his sword in Scraith's shoulder. Orvin bashed Scraith's sword hand with his shield, and Scraith yelled out in pain, the jagged sword flying from his grasp.
He was unarmed. "Torair! A little help here?" Scraith yelled as he sidestepped a swing from Orvin, trying to make his way towards his fallen sword. Torair fished through his charred pack, and began lobbing bombs at Orvin, the fuses glowing as they soared through the air. Orvin expertly dodged the blasts, running as the colourful explosions scorched the air where he had been five seconds previously. Meanwhile, Scraith ran towards his sword, the piece of sharpened, tempered metal seeming further away than ever. Out of the corner of his eye, Scraith saw Orvin run towards Torair, hitting him in the face with his shield, sending the Kat tribe demo tumbling to the floor. Orvin turned his attention to Scraith, a look on his face that would be better on a monster, rather than a 'divine' Owlite. Scraith sprinted across the cobblestones, not daring to allow his feet to slip. He felt Orvin's footsteps behind him, slowly advancing. Scraith dived towards his sword, feeling his fingers close around the leather binding of the hilt, spinning round just in time to block a strike from Orvin. The Owlite Swordsman pressed down harder, forcing Scraith downwards. In all of his years as a swordsman Scraith had never met an opponent as ruthless or as skilled as Orvin. The Owlite never ceased to attack, relying solely on offence instead of defence. And it was working. Torair got up just in time to see Scraith's blade break in two, after previously being surrounded by runes from the Divine Avenger. Scraith fell to the floor, the weight he had been pressing on his sword now sending him tumbling forwards.
"Amateur. Goodbye, lowly Kat." With that Orvin raised his sword one more time, and brought it down upon Scraith.

Twang.

Scraith looked up, and saw Orvin with a shocked expression on his face. "No... That's not possible..." Orvin murmered, before crashing down onto the ground. Scraith saw a silver round lodged into his back, entering perfectly neatly and staying there, the only sign that it had ever harmed somebody the pool of crimson that was steadily growing on his back.
A shadow dropped from the roof in front of Scraith, dashed across the cobbles and held out its hand, downward, towards him, sky blue eyes gazing out from behind a white and grey cap.
"Need a hand?"

Wed, 07/09/2014 - 08:15
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Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

This Fan-Fic is good, so take this thumbs up

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Thu, 07/10/2014 - 00:52
#11
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Midnight-Dj
:/

I see now why the owlites lost to the Kats, their most skilled warriors literally launch themselves one by one, singled filed into the kat grinder. *sigh* Sometimes I wish the author of any story could make two sides of the war equally as powerful and both delivered devastating damage to their oppositions.

Example:

-Spiral order establish the fearless recon rangers, the Gremlins deploy their crimson elites to counter the infiltrators.

-Gremlins creates a new breed of AI mecha knights known as the Immortals, the spiral order finds a weakness with in the system.

-Spiral order uses the new obsidian edge to fight the dark fangs, the Gremlins seek help from Vanaduke's inferno legion.

-Spiral order destroy the grand arsenal, the Gremlins build a bigger and better one in their colony.

-Gremlins kill and torture captured knights, Spiral order retaliates by allowing knights to execute captured Gremlins on sight.

But still, war is meant to be unfair (99.99% army generals agree that it is stupid to fight a fair war) and this is not my fan fic.

Mon, 07/21/2014 - 12:42
#12
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Alfreton
Chapter 6: Kataclysm

The graveyard hasn't gotten this thread yet! Nope, still going. (If at a very, very slow pace.)
So, before we carry on I would like to apologise for the lack of efficiency. Time seems to be shrinking in quantity for me lately, and I've been finding it hard to find some to carry on.
However, there is a holiday coming up, so expect some more content then. For now, though, part six!

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6: The Book Of Feathers

"We seem to be overwhelming the Owlites so far. We have control of most of the Academy by now, but something seems to be holding our troops off at a certain point." Preowa told Scraith as she hoisted him off the ground.
"Why? What's going on over there?" Torair asked Preowa, stuffing spare bombs into his pack.
"We don't know. But our main priority now is the Book Of Feathers, and Margrel. Let's hope she isn't in trouble."
Out of nowhere, Orvin began to laugh, somehow still conscious despite the loss of blood. "You fools. The Book Of Feathers is not a power source." Orvin wheezed with every few words, a pool of crimson creeping onto the floor beneath him. Preowa levelled her crossbow at him, not deterred by the new information.
"Maybe one round wasn't enough to shut you up, Owlite. Keep clapping that trap and we'll see if another one makes it to you."
Orvin's smile slid off his wounded face, replaced by a serious expression. "You don't understand. It is a prison. A prison to one of the greatest evils this world has seen. If you open it, you release... Them..."
Torair looked nervously at the library.
"Your friend does not know this. Despite their surprising knowledge, it will not save them from the Black Kats. The Book mimics the greatest evils of its opener. She will bring about the Kataclysm."
The entrance to the library began to glow ominously, a purple light filling the room. Scraith swore.
Orvin slumped over, unconscious.
The Kat tribe trio ran into the library.

Margrel picked up the book carefully, it's weathered cover sliding into her hands perfectly, as if it were made for her. A single silver feather was attached on the front of the book, glistening in the moonlight let in by the hole she had made in her duel. It looked so beautiful.
"Scraith was right. Our leader does not deserve this." She whispered softly, as if the book could hear her.
Margrel felt her hands sliding to the edge of the cover, her fingers curling over the first page.

Margrel opened the Book Of Feathers.

At first, nothing happened, Margrel turned the pages, transfixed by the amount of content. Then it began to occur to her that it was not written in her own language. It was a garbled font of strange, golden writing, which seemed to spiral across the pages. Then the words began to glow. It was a soft radiation at first, and Margrel could barely notice it. But then it began to light up, slowly reaching a blinding brightness. Margrel tried to shield her eyes, but her hands were stuck to the book... No. Margrel was stuck to the book. She couldn't separate herself from it. Books began to fall from the shelves, the pages from some of the older tomes falling out, and beginning to fly around Margrel. A single glowing eye appeared over the book, blinding Margrel even further. Then it turned purple. The words on the pages did so to, turning from a bright white to a cold magenta. A glowing circle appeared on the floor around her, and, from... Somewhere... She heard a voice.
"AT LAST."
It felt like it was coming from within her, but was appearing from the book. It felt like chalk being dragged across a stone, every word exhausting her, drawing her strength to live.
"FOOLISH GIRL. WE ARE WITHIN YOU. BUT DON'T WORRY. YOU WILL SOON OUTLIVE YOUR USEFULNESS."
Margrel felt voices at the back of her head, as if the strange... Thing... That was talking to her was part of something much larger than the Kats or the Owlites.
"THIS WORLD IS USELESS. EVEN WITHOUT OUR HELP, IT WILL SOON BE DESTROYED, SIMPLY A JIGSAW PIECE, FILLED WITH PITIFUL MONSTERS. WE SHALL PUT IT TO MUCH MORE USE THAN THAT."
Margrel felt her hands turn to another page of the book, and begin to chant out the spells on that one. She could do nothing but watch as her eyes made their way across the page, her mouth reciting the black magic against her will. A hole of pure darkness appeared in the wall behind her, and she felt footsteps. Creatures of shadows, like Kats but... Twisted, somehow, began to fill her field of vision.
Margrel felt the voice tell her one last sentence, draining far more energy than necessary, torturing her.
"THE KATACLYSM IS NIGH."
And with that, Margrel was blasted to the side of the room, feeling her vision fade as she heard a familiar voice.
"Margrel!"

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Mon, 07/21/2014 - 12:52
#13
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Colray
Great

You gotta love cliffhangers.

Mon, 07/21/2014 - 12:54
#14
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Colray
the double post

It strikes again

Thu, 08/14/2014 - 12:04
#15
Alfreton's picture
Alfreton
Update!

Yes, yes, I know. I'm sorry.
So, the Graveyard Thread hasn't quite claimed this fanfic yet, but while chapter seven (and the ending) inch closer to completion, I'd like to take a moment to apologise for the lack of info or story.
So, expect a chapter seven soon! And once again, I am terribly sorry.

Until then, goodbye!

Tue, 09/09/2014 - 12:37
#16
Alfreton's picture
Alfreton
Chapter 7! At last!

At long last, chapter seven is finished!
Finally, you can now read it in all it's pixel-y glory, on your computer / laptop / other web browsing thingymawatsit.

Before we restart, I'd like to apologise for the time this took. A whole month! Wow. Sorry.

Anyway, I'll shut up now. Enjoy!

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7. The Owlite War Council.

The siege on the Owlite High Academy of Magicks had started quite well. Preowa had silenced the Grey Feather Mages, Scraith had been first onto the battlements, and Torair had clung to the gate as it - and his explosives, burned.
Even one of the Owlite heroes, Orvin, had been slain.
However, even with though the Owlite Swordsman had fallen, the Owlites were holding the Kats back quite well.
The element of surprise had been helpful at first, but with the Kat tribes' best warriors... Occupied... They were struggling to keep the tables unturned.
And so they fought on, both sides blissfully unaware of the Black Kats and the Book of Feathers.
Until, of course, it was too late...

The Owlites had set up a makeshift campsite a safe distance from the front lines. A few minor protection spells glowed around the site, offering some protection from surprise attacks. Elementals patrolled the area, ready to blast anything that seemed suspicious, and a barricade of upturned tables, bookshelves, statues and other heavy, strong things sat across the main pathway, and would at least give the Owlites time to flee, should the Kats overpower their fighters.
Luckily, this probability was slowly growing smaller as the mages reached further into their magical arsenal. However, that didn't do anything to calm the nerves of the Chief Magician, a wise Owlite named Oniten, who watched the enchanted map of the Academy as it showed flickering symbols of both sides. Around the table were the Owlite lieutenants, a collection of mages, alchemists and one or two Assassins, all arguing about the best course of action.
"We should set them all alight," yelled Optum, the incendiary Mage with crimson robes. "Let them all burn!"
"That's a stupid idea! Our soldiers would die in the blaze, and it would doubtless spread to the Academy!" The voice of Oona, the head scout and advisor cried, her enraged amethyst-purple eyes glaring out from her hood.
"I say we throw vials at them, and-" one of the lesser alchemists began to pipe up, only to be interrupted by the steely voice of the Chief Magician.
"QUIET! ALL OF YOU!"
There was a deathly silence at the table, and for a moment the only sound was that of distant fighting.

"Have you forgotten who we are? We are the finest practicers of magic to have ever lived. Our lesser foes rely on instincts, weak metal and even weaker bodies. We use the greatest forces known to civilisation. So, can someone please tell me, why we can't act like it?"

Silence fell across the table once more.

"Oona. Status report." The Chief Magician lowered his tone, instead focusing on the map in the middle of the table. Oona stood up, and began to point to various parts of the map. "Our forces are holding... Barely. Our reinforcements have been all but depleted, and the Kats have the advantage of darkness to hide their forces. Once dawn arrives, we will surely overcome them."

"So you're saying that if we survive until dawn, we win?" Optum asked.

"Precisely. It will take some time for the Kat tribe to amass their forces, giving us time to counterattack before they come again."

"Counterattack?" One of the Owlites asked.

"Yes. Tonight, the Kats have declared war. If they want a fight, they will receive one."
The Owlites began to realise the impact of this statement. The Owlites and the Kats had never got on before, but they were notorious for their fighting skill. War could mean nothing but the destruction of one of their kinds.

Just as Optum was about to suggest using a different kind of incendiary concoction to use against the message, and Okarune was about to imply using a spell to make dawn come quickly, shouts began to emit from the far end of the war camp. Owlites began to make way for somebody, someone pushing through at full speed. No, not one somebody, two somebody's. Two of them carrying something between them.

Oniten felt a feeling of dread as he recognised the two Owlites and what they were holding. Medics. A stretcher. An unconscious Owlite on that stretcher. "Oh, no."
Gasps came from the lieutenants as they recognised the Owlite as their own swordsman. Orvin. The medics laid the stretcher on a nearby table, and began to treat the wound he had received from a crossbow round. Oniten ran over to the stretcher, the lieutenants following suit. "Orvin! What happened?" Orvin weakly opened his eyes, and coughed twice. "The fools... They've opened the Book." All of the blood drained from Oniten's face. "Are you sure?" He asked, holding the side of the stretcher with an iron grip. "Yes... They have no idea what it can do." Oniten cursed, striding back to the table, the lieutenenants following. "What happened?" Oona asked as they walked. "The Kats have opened the book. Unless we close it soon, it will consume us all." Oniten marked the library on the map, his hands shaking ever so slightly. "I want every Owlite who can hold a spellbook over there."
"But... The Kats..." Okarune began.
"Get through to them! We'll need their help if we're going to survive this."
The lieutenants nodded, and one by one, began to leave the table, shouting orders to other Owlites.

Oniten looked at the map, feeling as though he had aged considerably in the last five minutes.

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So, what did you think? Are you enraged about my laziness? Do you have any suggestions for the plot? Don't be afraid to comment! (Don't worry, I'll make sure chapter eight takes considerably less time.)

Goodbye!

Tue, 09/09/2014 - 19:25
#17
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Colray
Nice!

The owlites came across as a little snobbish but I like your interpretation, it makes for a better read!

Plot suggestions?

If/when the owlites make contact with Kat tribe, only half of the leaders agree, while the other half believe that they can wipe out the owlites with the book. Margrel included in this group.

Tue, 09/09/2014 - 19:55
#18
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Midnight-Dj
:/

Possible plot points:

Under the book's influence, Magrel has become so powerful to a point that she decided that even her fellow Kats were not fit to survive an event also know at 'Kataclysm'. Simply put, it was Magrel and her great 'purge'. Slowly but surely, Magrel masked her tranformation at the start, slowly manipuate her fellow kat warriors to their doom, Magrel's betrayle enraged the Kat tribe conclave and forced her into exile.

While she was in exile still corrupted by the black magik, Magrel learned that the book of grey feather was scattered during her opening of the book and the pages must be collected to become a source of power. While the owlites and the kats were busy collecting the various pages, Magrel revealed herself to the owlite and told them the secret to defeat the kats. Little did the owlites know, Magrel back-stabbed their advancing forces and lured them to a heavily defended Kat territory. Many owlite heroes went down in the proccess, but the Kats too didn't win the battle unscratched.

The kat tribe conclave unwillingly accepted magrel back after the victory and she once again brought war to the owlite's step. But little did the conclave know, by attacking the owlites, Magrel was secretly collecting the pages of the grey feather for her self. She even corrupted her fellow Kats, turning them into black kats, the mindless reapers of souls that only do magrel's bidding.

Seeing that they were both tricked by Magrel, the Kat tribe conclave and the Owlite high concil decided to join forces in a desperate attempt to ward off Magrel and her black kat army. Ultimately the few remaining owlites sacrificed themselves to replicate the book of grey feather and Magrel and her black kats army were sealed once and for all. All the Kats that participated in the final battle never returned to home and tell the tale.

--200 years later, Skylark was destroyed while in orbit with cradle--

Sun, 09/14/2014 - 06:44
#19
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Alfreton
...

Great suggestions guys! I'll see if I can incorporate some ideas for chapter 8!

Mon, 09/22/2014 - 11:30
#20
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Alfreton
Part eight!

Happy Kataclysm guys!
Here is part eight, in all it's sort-of-rushed glory. (Sorry for any dodgy storyline bits)
So, I'm going to try to get this thing finished by chapter 10 (I have some ideas for the end.) I will try and take on board some more suggestions, but it won't be long before the story ends. (I do have something planned for afterwards, but that May or may not happen.) also, you may have seen the new Kat armour, as well as tier 3 and 4 black Kat equipment, which implies that Margrel had a unit called the 'Kat Nappers'. It is too late to incorporate them, so I do apologise.

Right! Sorry for the lecture. On with the show!

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8. Alliance

Margrel opened her eyes weakly, taking in her unfocused surroundings. She blinked, calibrating her eyes. The full moon was shining onto her face, and she began to relax, letting its heavenly glow fall across her face. The moon always seemed to calm her, it's welcoming glow soothing her in every... Voices. Non-Kat voices. Margrel snapped out of her daze. She was in a stretcher, in some kind of camp. There was a medic nearby, a hood covering his face. Strange. Kats never wore hoods. The medic turned towards her, welcoming Owlite eyes looking down. "Owlite!" Margrel screamed, falling off her stretcher. The medic looked confused, and then shocked. He started after her. "Stay away from me!" Margrel cried, beginning to scurry away, stopped by the feeling of an arm on her shoulder. She looked up, and saw the relieving amber eyes of Scraith. "Margrel... It's alright."
Margrel stopped, breathing heavily. She looked around. She was in another makeshift camp, nestled in some corner of the Academy. Tables laden with maps, books and weapons sat on the cobblestones, and the area was writhing with both Owlites and Kats. No... That couldn't be right. There was a siege... She was sent to find a book... "Scraith... What happened?" Scraith was about to answer, when she saw another Owlite moving towards her. This one was female, with striking amethyst eyes that seemed to somehow watch everything while only looking in one direction. Her footsteps seemed easy, familiar, as if she had walked across each and every stone a thousand times. Which they probably had. "The Black Kats haven't made a move yet." She spoke with a voice like silver rain. "We've positioned our forces near the library, but not too close. It's only a matter of time before they strike." Margrel was confused. Black Kats? 'Our' forces?
"Why is everyone together? There was a siege..." Margrel began, stopping as the Owlite's piercing emerald eyes glared at her. The Owlite looked at Margrel, regarding her as one would regard a rotting corpse. "Ah. The little Troublemaker's woken up. Guess what? Your little book shenanigans have put both of our kinds at risk. If whatever's inside that library gets out of this Academy, you'll have global genocide on your conscience." Margrel inched a bit further back into Scraith's hold. "So, we called off the siege to try and figure out how to stop those things."
"But how do you call off a..."
"Shut up!" The Owlite turned to Scraith. "Now if your little pest has no more questions, we're meeting in five minutes to discuss these... Unfortunate... Events." And with that the Owlite stormed off, instantly lost in the sea of people.
Margrel looked up at Scraith. "Who was that?" Scraith shook his head. "The head scout and advisor to the big-cheese magician guy. Calls herself Oona."
"I have a feeling she doesn't like me that much."
Scraith helped Margrel up from the ground, waving away the medic's offer for help. "Not as such, no."

Oona felt more enraged than she had in her entire life. That insolent Kat! What right did she have to dabble in something she didn't know the first thing about, and cause such an uproar! If it were up to Oona, she wouldn't have dreamed of Alliance. But the Chief Magician seemed to believe that they could put their differences behind them. Oona would obey for now, but as soon as the truce ended and the Book had been recovered, that Pest would be the Kat tribes' first casualty.
The other Kat Generals seemed decent. For savages, that is. 'Scraith' knew when to keep his mouth shut, unlike his stupid friend. She didn't know much about 'Torair' though, the scruffy Kat just kept himself to himself.
Then there was 'Preowa'. she seemed to be the most competent of the four, never asking for anything she didn't deserve. That Kat was smart, too. Oona mentally slapped herself. "There's no point thinking about them." She muttered to herself as she wove through the crowds in the makeshift battle camp. "If everything goes to plan, we'll be killing each other soon."
Oona arrived at the main area of the camp, a large circular table dominated by a large, detailed map of the Owlite High Academy Of Magicks. The Chief Magician, Oniten, was already there, making detailed markings and diagrams with a quill. Oniten looked up as Oona approached, smiling. "Ah, Oona! Just in time. I've been thinking about the battle plans, and..."
"Sir." Oona interrupted, quite unexpectedly.
"...hmm? What is it?"
"I'm not sure this alliance was a good idea."
"What do you mean?" Oniten sounded confused, and Oona was surprised he hadn't though of what she was about to suggest.
"I don't think the Kat Tribe will keep their word. They're a backstabbing kind, Sir, and they'll slit our throats once this is all over, if not, sooner."
Oniten put down the quill, looking Oona in the eye, a stony look on his face.
"That may be. But if we are to survive this, we need their help. If we don't cooperate, the Black Kats will destroy both of our races, before moving on to the rest of creation. Whatever squabbles you have will them will have to wait, otherwise they will cost the lives of everyone, Kats and Owlites alike."
Oona looked away, unable to meet his gaze. Oniten was right, and that was the annoying thing. The alliance had been formed out of desperation, not pride. Whatever happened afterward would be better than the alternative.
"Do you have any other questions?" Oniten asked, returning his focus back to the map.
"No, sir."
"Good. Now, gather the troops. The second siege is about to begin."

Tue, 09/23/2014 - 23:21
#21
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Alfreton
Part nine!

Good morning/evening/other time!
Here it is, the second-to-last entry to the Kataclysm series.
Hope you enjoy! :D

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9. The Second Siege

Oniten, Chief Magician of the Owlite High Academy of Magicks, looked around at the various faces around the table. This was the first time in Owlite history that the Kats and the Owlites had been on the same side before a battle. Around the table were swordsmen, magicians, alchemists, demo men, scouts and archers.
Oniten hoped that would be enough.
There was clear unrest. Tension was so thick in the air that it was almost visible, an ice-cold feeling of unease that could burst into flames at any moment.
And it was Oniten's job to make sure that didn't happen.
He cleared his throat, and all eyes turned to him. This was it.
"Thank you for coming, everyone. Now, as I'm sure you are aware, an ancient threat has been accidentally unleashed in the Academy's library." Oniten marked the library on the map, causing it to glow a faint shade of purple. As he did so, he noticed one of the Kats, Margrel, looked very uncomfortable as he said 'accidentally'. Oniten mentally filed the information for later.
"Our goal is to retake the library, stop these 'Black Kats', and recover the Book of Grey Feathers."
Margrel cleared her throat. "I don't think that recovering the book is a good idea."
"Pardon me?"
Margrel looked at the map, a defiant look in her eyes. "You've seen what that book has done. We'll be lucky to walk away from this. Can you imagine what would happen if someone reopened it in the future?"
Before Oniten could reply, Oona chipped in. "You are in no position to change the plan, Kat."
Margrel met Oona's steely glare, and Oniten began to feel the tension heating up. "Why would you even keep a book like that?"
"That's rich coming from someone trying to steal-"
"SILENCE! Both of you!" Oniten roared, and the argument ceased, replaced again by the bitter-cold tension. Oniten sighed.
"I know that the prospect of alliance is troubling for some, if not all of you. But for the first time in our history, we are facing something bigger than us." Oniten looked into the eyes of those around the table as he did so, making sure he held their attention. If the plan was going to work, it would require unity.
"But I look around this table, and I do not see prey. I do not see weakness. I see warriors. Warriors who can and will not bow to the force of extinction that faces us tonight. I see warriors who can put aside their differences for one night to survive this threat."
Oniten could feel the tension beginning to cease, the icy coldness instead becoming a warm feeling that each and every one of them shared.
"But I am old. I could be wrong. It is up to you to prove to me that I am not mistaken."
Scraith held out his hand to Oniten. "On behalf of the Kat tribe, I hereby accept this truce."
Oniten shook Scraith's hand. "Thank you."

It is hard to imagine what feelings were racing through the minds of those around the table during this historic occasion, what dread and fear some of them must have had, and what relief and friendship others felt. Torair felt a bit of hope, with a slight twist of worry. Who could blame him? This was the first time anything remotely like this had happened. Preowa felt confusion. Understandable, trying to accept something that, all your life, you thought was wrong. Oona felt hatred, but it was peppered with relief. Perhaps it was the thought that maybe the war could end after all that soothed her. Okarune and Optum felt a twinge of regret, but mostly strength.

And as for Margrel?
Nobody knows what she felt as Scraith and Oniten shook hands, her eyes judging the event but giving no indication of her conclusion.
That was something she had never done before.

Oniten immediately began to detail the siege, leaving out no detail. Scraith was impressed with the authenticity of his plan, compared to the hodgepodge he had cobbled together earlier. But then again, the Owlites knew every inch of the Academy. The Kats didn't.
The plan seemed very well thought out, with not much room for error. Maybe they could pull off the attack after all...
"You all know your roles." Oniten told them once he had finished. "Are there any questions?"
Margrel raised her hand, and Oniten was expecting her to. "Yes, Margrel?"
"Erm... What do I do? It's just that you didn't mention my..." She stopped when she saw the guilty glances the Kats and Owlites were giving one another.
After what felt like an eternity, Oniten spoke. "Well, Margrel. We have taken into consideration your current condition and have decided that you should not take part in the attack."
Margrel was stunned. "What? But I..."
"No buts, Margrel. You were nearly killed, for heavens sake!"
Margrel crossed her arms. "Occupational hazard." She said with a clear tone of disgust in her voice.
"We barely got you out of that library in the first place." It was Preowa who spoke now, which only added to Margrel's feeling of betrayal.
Okarune looked nervous. "The medics say that magic was coursing through your blood at an alarming rate; they barely managed to stabilise you."
"As well as the fact that there is still strong residual magic in your body..."
"It wouldn't be safe!"
Margrel had lost track of who was talking. It didn't matter. She was furious with them all. She was a Kat! It was Margrel's duty to fight for her tribe, or at least help them. Wave after wave of excuses piled up until she felt as though she was drowning in them.
"We called a vote, Margrel. The majority has decided that you are not fit for battle." Oniten's voice cut like a knife through the endless voices. Margrel was almost grateful that he spoke up.
She felt a hand on her shoulder. Scraith. "I'm sorry, Margrel, but it's for your own good." Scraith always seemed to get to Margrel. He had always acted like the big brother she never had, taking care of her, as the youngest of the Kat Generals.
Margrel's rage turned to despair. She looked down, unable to meet the guilty looks of those around her. "Fine."
Oniten could see the relief written in guilt across the faces of the Owlites and Kats. He decided it would be a good time to end the meeting before anything else happened. "Meeting dismissed. You may go and prepare yourselves for the attack." Everyone scattered, relieved to have an excuse to leave. Everyone but Margrel, who felt tears begin to well up in her eyes. Out of impulse, she looked up at the full moon, a strong feeling of hopelessness inside of her.

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So, for the last time... Do you have any suggestions for the final part? Any opinions? Let me know! :D

Will Margrel be mentally stable? Do the Owlites have an obsession with tables? Why am I asking you all these questions? Find out in the last chapter of Doct- er... I mean Kataclysm!

Wed, 09/24/2014 - 21:28
#22
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Colray
The tension is high

Suggestion: have the attack start off well, then have a minor Kat/owlite footsoldier get in a quarrel, which leads to somebody dying, and then fights break out, and things get complicated.

Tue, 09/30/2014 - 12:01
#23
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Vohtarak-Forum
im vohtarak

this is the only fic ive seen that might actually finish
(the other person trilogy cuts off)(and spinning a yarn was made by luigiru and he left)

Thu, 03/05/2015 - 13:43
#24
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Alfreton
Not chapter 10... Yet.

It's been quite a while, and I've decided to fragment the fic one last time, with a build up on 10, a climax on 11, and an endy-bit on 12. Chapter 10 needs a tiny bit of refinery, but it's going to be released very shortly.
Thanks!

-Alfreton

Thu, 03/05/2015 - 14:08
#25
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Alfreton
Chapter 10! Woo!

Six months? Wow, I suck.
Anyways, after much pocrastination, occassional work, and of course a lot of laziness, Chapter 10 is here!
Now, this isn't going to be the final chapter. And I know I said earlier that there was going to be less wait time between chapters, but I'm going to try and make good on that this time. I've started 11 (which has got quite a start. Heh heh heh), and have a basic idea for 12, the final chapter. (Hopefully.)

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10: final push

Oniten had ordered that Margrel be guarded by two armed swordsmen. He had seen the look in her eyes at the war council, and realised that, unless they stopped her, she would try and get involved somehow. Margrel was seething inside, as she watched the preparations for the final push near completion. The others thought she was a loose cannon, and didn't want her botching the attack. This whole situation was her fault.
Scraith was briefing the soldiers, giving them a much-needed morale boost. Preowa was preparing her crossbow, dropping a few extra silver bullets into her cowl whilst her squad were doing target practice. Torair and Optum were tinkering around with some kind of alchemical bomb. Oniten was doing a few practice spells. Oona was scouting the area for possible vantage points. Okarune wasn't in sight, but was probably off gathering the mages or something.
Margrel felt so useless, standing behind two armed guards, who had been given orders to knock her out if necessary. Honestly, they weren't even looking at her, afraid to meet her gaze... Margrel felt the tiniest seed of a plan begin to formulate in her mind, a plan that would allow her to take part after all. She checked her pouch. Yes. It was still there.
Margrel allowed herself the tiniest of grins as the moonlight glinted in her eyes.

Torair felt a bit nervous working with an Owlite. Sure, they had a truce and all, but Torair couldn't shake the feeling that Optum was going to secretly rigging the bomb they were working on. The bomb was absolutely vital to their plan, without it, the Black Kats would overcome them. It was a miracle that they hadn't attacked yet.
Optum connected a single vial of explosive to the timer mechanism, and closed up the bomb. "I think it's ready." He told Torair, picking up the basket-sized explosive. "Are you sure?" Torair asked, nervously eyeing the bomb. "We don't want that thing going up in our faces."
Optum began walking over to Oniten, Torair following.
"We've got no time to test it. We just have to hope for the best. With any luck, that charge Okarune gave us should enhance the blast."
Despite being a pyrotechnics expert, Optum didn't have the magical know-how required to give the bomb it's maximum potential. Okarune had lended them a hand, taking time to insert a few booster runes and some crucial tinkering.
Oniten looked up at them as they arrived, closing his spellbook. "I trust that you have prepared the bomb?" He asked them, gesturing for his mages to close their books. Optum nodded. "We haven't run any tests yet, but it should be stable." Oniten took the bomb from Optum, nodding at Torair. "Thank you for your assistance. I understand how hard this must be, working with the enemy." Torair rolled his eyes.
"With all respect, Chief Magician, I'd just like to get to the part where we kill things."
Oniten smiled, trying to find some fun in the moment. "Very well. Notify the others. We begin the attack as soon as possible."

Preowa took up a good sniping position, just behind a chimney on one of the buildings near the courtyard and the library. Her squad sat in the darkness behind her, readying their weapons. Oona and her squad were on the building next to them, and Preowa caught her eye. "Good luck." She called out, just audible for her to hear. Oona just pulled her hood tighter on, and replied. "stay out of my way."
Preowa couldn't blame the Owlite for her unease, but couldn't she be a bit more polite? Surely-

Her train of thought was interrupted by Torair's 'BarkBomb' which detonated towards the rear of the library. The bomb, when detonated, was harmless. However, it looked just like a normal explosion. Preowa heard her squad readying their crossbows, the thumping of wood, iron and high-quality cord against skin and fur, the silent winking as they all closed one eye, peering through the reticles. Preowa did the same, examining the library. The smoke was clearing from the BarkBomb, but there was no sign of the Black Kats.
Then it happened. The noise. It started as a low-pitch humming, but eventually evolved into a deafening shriek. Preowa resisted the urgent temptation to cover her ears. The doors of the library, front and back, flooded open, and Black Kats hoarded into the courtyard. Preowa nearly dropped her crossbow. There were so many of them, each armed to the teeth and dark as the night, with two piercing ruby eyes glaring out of their sockets, glowing so intensely that Preowa felt as if she was staring at the sun. Each of them roared into the night, holding their void-black weapons aloft.
Of course, it was Oona's sense of sarcasm from the next roof that freed Preowa from her shock. "It's going to be a long night."

Torair watched as the Black Kats scurried out of the library, readying his explosives. For the plan to work there had to be confusion... And confusion was what Torair did best. He waited for the Black Kats to settle from their bloodlust, weapons slowly dropping with frustration. Torair smiled as they began to file back into the library, sheathing their swords and holstering their crossbows.
Then he hit the trigger.
Seven charges of pure Exlondum, given to him by Optum, concealed underneath the cobbles before the attack, detonated with the force of a miniature hurricane. Fireballs clawed at the Black Kats, dragging them skywards, stones flying as they sailed back to the ground. The shrieks restarted as the Black Kats who hadn't been involved in the explosion drew their weapons, but
couldn't see their target through the smoke and dust. Torair could practically feel Optum's joy as he sat next to him and the Kat Hissers, as well as the Owlite Alchemists, on top of the main hall of the Owlite High Academy of Magicks. Optum was certainly a pyromaniac, Torair decided, as he saw the explosions dancing in his excited eyes.
Torair saw Scraith's squad charge into view, bursting out of the Base Camp and into the fray, slicing through the Black Kats, making steady progress towards the library. Torair primed his bombs, hearing everyone else behind him do the same.

Scraith had spent most of his time at the War Camp trying to repair his sword, which meant that he missed out on the majority of the training and preparation. After several hours at an anvil, some repairing runes and a lot of failed attempts, Scraith unsheathed his sword, holding it up to the sky, the moonlight glinting off of the jagged edge. Scraith charged, with a hundred Kats and Owlites behind him doing the same.
A few seconds later, Scraith began cutting through the Black Kats, his blade a smoking blur as he and his squad advanced towards the main doors to the library. Scraith began to feel hopeful. Even though Orvin had been declared unfit for battle (yet another detail which complicated the trust required for the attack) he had entrusted Scraith with his Divine Guard. This, whilst a gesture of friendship, made Scraith feel wary. He was not feeling great at the start of the original siege, and whilst the Owlites had no good reason to betray them yet, Scraith couldn't shake the feeling that Orvin would do something like that after he and Scraith tried to kill each other without attaching some hidden protocol. And so it was that as they advanced, Scraith made sure that he kept an eye on the Divine Guard.
"Scraith!" He tore his gaze from one member of the Divine Guard and looked over at where the voice had come from. Torair and his squad had made their way down from the rooftop, and were fully involved in the battle, placing mines and lighting high-risk short fuse bombs, before tossing them into groups of Black Kats. Torair ordered his squad to cover him as he took out a large bomb, before tossing it to Scraith. Scraith caught it, stashing it on his back sheath. "Torair, get your squad and clear a path to the library! We can't spend too long out here!" Scraith shouted, stabbing a Black Kat who was trying to stealthily attack him.
"We can't! We're running out of clearing charges! There aren't nearly enough to get to the entrance."
Scraith silently cursed at Torair's response. The sea of Black Kats was growing thicker by the second, and unless they got to the library and deployed the bomb quickly, they would be overwhelmed. "Duck!"
Scraith did not hesitate as he heard the voice of Oniten, but hit the Cobbles as fast as he could, just as a spell shot over where his head had been a second ago. The amethyst-green spell impacted into a group of Black Kats, and quickly ate into them until there was nothing left. Scraith had barely got to his feet before Oniten began dishing out orders. "Cover us! We'll clear the way!"

Things were, unsurprisingly, slightly less high-octane back at the war camp. Only a handful of people remained, consisting of a few medics, those too young or old to fight and Margrel's guards.
They had been trying to persuade one another to talk to her for the last ten minutes, and neither of them were close to budging. "I think you should do it."
"No way! Have you heard what she did? You seen that look in her eyes?"
"The Kats are gonna skin us alive when Margrel tells them how we're treating her."
"Still..."
"Go on. Just look at her."
One of the guards to a hasty glance at Margrel, before quickly returning his gaze to his colleague. "She's still there."
"Why don't you talk to her?"
"What?"
"Look, if we talk to her then she's spending less time plotting, isn't she? I'm surprised she hasn't made a move yet."
"Alright, fine."
The guard murmured a quick prayer before looking back at Margrel. He breathed a sigh of relief when he saw her condition.
"Er... I think she's asleep."
"Could be a trick. Wake her."
"No!"
"If you don't, I'll do it."
"Fine! But you owe me!"
The guard turned his attention back to Margrel. "Er... Wakey wakey?" No response. "Come on, Kat. Wake up!" Still nothing. "WAKE UP!" Not a stir from Margrel. In fact, she was barely breathing.
"Er... You alright, miss?" The guard said, prodding her shoulder. Or at least tried to. His hand went straight through her shoulder. Or what he thought was her shoulder. It then flickered and died, several runes that were glowing on the floor around "Margrel" fading away as the image vanished. The other guard had turned and witnessed all of this happening.
It was several minutes before both of them registered the event, closed their mouths and realised that they were dead meat.
Margrel had escaped.

Preowa and the others were unaware of this event, but right now she had bigger things to focus on. Half of her squad had been hit by Black Kats, (it seemed that there were a few artillery units amongst them) and had been slain. Preowa and the surviving members were darting across the rooftops, trying to avoid the Black Kat fire coming from below, and loosing off a few potshots every now and again. The method seemed to be working, and although they had no time to mourn those who had died, the survival instinct of fight and flee seemed to be doing well here. But it would not do her well for much longer. Scraith, Oniten and Torair were making a push towards the main doors, and Preowa had to provide cover fire if they were going to make it. She veered away from her squad, running towards a shadowy collection of buildings near the library, hoping that her squad would draw fire for her as she made her way to the library. No such luck. Arrows, rounds and a wide assortment of other items were landing all around her, and Preowa was barely dodging them as she approached the end of the rooftops. The terraced design of the buildings paused for the main pathway, and there was a sizeable gap between the rooftops on either side. Preowa considered finding an alternative route, but changed her mind as an arrow landed in the space where her leg had been a second ago. She would have to jump it. Now, this is not as suicidal as it sounds. Kats are very agile creatures, and the average Kat can jump quite a lengthy distance. As Preowa leapt from the rooftop, blocking out the moon, she felt certain that she would make it. She could see the library! She was going to...
Thunk.
Preowa felt a wave of pain erupt from her leg as one arrow hit it's mark, embedding itself in her flesh. Preowa had suffered far worse than that, but her dead leg pulled her down like an anchor, ruining the agile grace she had possessed when she started the jump.
Instead of landing on the other roof, Preowa hit the ground, back-first, with a thump, feeling as though she had broken several bones in the process.
Preowa hadn't suffered far worse than that.
As she lay there, fighting for consciousness she began to see things approach her. Black Kats.
They were walking slowly, as if Preowa could heal several bones in the blink of an eye and attack them. Which she couldn't. Eventually they began to walk faster, knowing that their prey was incapacitated. Then they were around her, their dark faces blocking the night sky as they looked over her, satanic glowing eyes glaring at her.
One knelt down beside her, it's eyes burning even more intensely than before, holding the sides of her head so that she couldn't look away. It began to talk to her.
It sounded like a hundred candles being put out a once, and spoke in a language that Preowa had never heard before. Then it began to chant.
Preowa felt pain shoot up her body, taking the previous pain and amplifying it until it reached an unimaginable volume. Preowa began to feel something she had not felt in a long time. Fear. The Black Kat began to chant some more, but Preowa couldn't hear the words over the roar of blood in her ears. What was it doing to her? Would it...
The Black Kat stopped suddenly, halfway through a word, it's eyes widening. The others looked confused, asking something in an undecipherable language.
The Black Kat slumped over her, lifeless, a round embedded in the back of its head.
A round made of silver.
Preowa weakly noticed that the other Black Kats were also lying on the ground, silver rounds lodged in each of them.
"Silver. Thanks for the tip." Said the unmistakeable voice of Oona, before the rest of her squad put healing runes on Preowa and brought her back to life.

Scraith finally breached the main doors of the library, Kats and Owlites filing in rows behind him as they entered. The book of Grey Feathers sat on a pedestal in the centre of the room, open and flicking through random pages, swathed in a purple aura. Elite Black Kats were guarding the book, and unsheathed their weapons as Scraith's army entered. A booming voice began to speak, echoing throughout the library.
"YOU DID WELL, I'LL GIVE YOU THAT. PUTTING YOUR DIFFERENCES ASIDE TO FACE ME."
Torair and Oniten pushed their way through the lines of soldiers, standing alongside Scraith. "So, after all these years of being imprisoned, you decide to take over a university? For a purple-death-monster, that isn't a very evil plan." Scraith called out. He had fought many enemies before with bark and no bite. Exposing them was the key to victory.
"AND I SUPPOSE YOU PLAN TO SIMPLY GO YOUR SEPARATE WAYS AFTER THIS? YOUR WAR WILL CONTINUE, KAT." Oniten stepped forward. "Will it now? Why can't we unite in the future?. We have united easily enough against you." Cheers arose from the soldiers, and Scraith felt impressed. Oniten had raised the morale of the fighters. The Black Kats shifted nervously, looking back at their master.
"Come on, book-worm. Show yourself!" Torair yelled, adding to the rising morale.
"VERY WELL."
A pinpoint of concentrated light shone in the middle of the room. A figure appeared, swathed in darkness, but it was a figure that Scraith recognised nonetheless. It was Margrel.
"I CAN TAKE THE FORM OF MY OPENER."
The creature roared, walking towards the Kats and Owlites, who began to edge back nervously. "YOUR PETTY FRIEND HAS A WEAK BODY, BUT IT SHALL SERVE MY PURPOSES."
More. Black Kats filed in from behind bookshelves, surrounding the Kat and Owlite forces. Scraith realised that the doors behind them were shut.
"So this is it, then? You intend to try and kill us?" Oniten shouted.
"YES. YOU ARE FOUR MEN DOWN."
Out of nowhere, silver rounds began to rain down on the Black Kats. Preowa and Oona dropped from the shadows, their squads following, reloading as they did so. "Make that two." Preowa called out, reloading her crossbow with silver.
"VERY WELL. IF YOU WISH TO TRY AND DELAY YOUR DESTRUCTION, SO BE IT."
'Margrel' drew a pitch-black sword from thin air, purple runes fluttering up and down the blade. The Black Kats charged. The Kats charged. The Owlites charged.
There was only one person in the entire library who wasn't charging.

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Okay, so as I've gone ahead and lengthened this by two chapters, I've been left a tiny bit stumped. As always, I really value your suggestions for where the story should go next, as it gives me a good idea of possible routes and makes the story better overall!
So stay tuned for chapter 11, coming Sep- I mean, erm... Soon! Probably!

Wed, 04/15/2015 - 13:08
#26
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Alfreton
Chapter 11!

It's almost finished! (For real this time, promise.) Lightning fast compared to 10, I know, but still, chapter 11 is here!
Alright, I will admit that it's a tad bit shorter than I was hoping, but Meyeh. I'll save most of the length and (hopefully) awesomeness for chapter 12.
Enjoy!

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11: Betrayal

Margrel scurried between the bookcases, scanning the books for anything useful. She couldn't tell what urged her to pull out a small tome, open it up and stop on a certain page, but it was a very strong feeling, some kind of instinct. Margrel gripped the page, tearing it out of the book, feeling the tome's rage burning in her skull. The books carried some sort of enchantment that protected them against vandalism, and it was extremely painful to remove the parts that she needed, but it was necessary. Ever since Margrel had opened the Book of Grey Feathers, she was slowly beginning to understand the Black Kats, iotas of information slowly unlocking in her mind. She understood why she was taking all of these pages. Margrel pulled out a wad of stolen pages from other books, held them with her latest theft, and began to chant. This was the most important part of the procedure. If the pages rejected one another, then it was back to square one. Margrel was hoping that she could bypass any hidden enchantments. The pages gave off a gentle hiss, steam rising from their dry surfaces, the writing on them glowing a brilliant gold. "Come on, hurry up..." Margrel hissed to herself, aware that she could not stay in the same place for too long. After several agonisingly long minutes, the pages fused together, the words darkening. Margrel shoved them in her pack quickly, before taking cover behind one of the bookshelves.

Scraith saw an opening. The Elite Black Kats were beginning to stray away from their leader. If he could fight his way through to the Darkness, then he could deploy Torair and Optum's bomb. Scraith pressed through the Black Kats harder than ever, scything through the masses with the Kats and Owlites behind him. It felt good to be in combat again. Torair and Preowa noticed his push, and were starting to fight towards him, glancing over at him, their eyes shining. Scraith realised for the first time that night that they could succeed. Soon, Optum, Oona and Oniten were by their sides as well, slinging silver rounds and spells into the enemy forces. "FIGHT BACK, YOU FOOLS! OR YOU SHALL FACE AN ETERNITY OF PUNISHMENT!" Roared the Darkness, the swarm of voices began to contain a hint of panic. This was not the plan. Scraith sliced through the last Elite Black Kat between him and the Darkness. The others filed out behind him, Preowa and Oona holding him at crossbow-point, Optum and Oniten preparing for a spell just in case, Torair brandishing an unlit bomb. The Darkness laughed. It was a horrible, horrible noise. It was like an insect squealing in pain, but magnified and triumphant. "YOU WIN, KAT. GO AHEAD. PLANT YOUR LITTLE BOMB." Scraith, quite suprised, lowered his sword and pulled Torair and Optum's bomb from his back-sheath. "Keep your eyes on him." Scraith told his compatriots as he took a step towards the Black Kat. "This seems too easy to me." Scraith shoved the enchanted bomb in front of the Darkness, before hastily stepping back. The Darkness simply grinned at him. "WELL DONE." Torair pulled the remote trigger.

Nothing happened.
Nothing.

Torair pulled the trigger again. And again. And again. "It's a dud!" He screamed. "We've been betrayed!" The Kats and Owlites began to panic. Scraith's eyes widened. "...you... Knew about the bomb..."
"YES. NOW YOU UNDERSTAND." Scraith suddenly realised that all of the Black Kats in the room had miraculously regained both their lives and weapons. It had been a trap. "ONE OF YOUR 'FRIENDS' WAS WISE ENOUGH TO COMPROMISE." Scraith saw a figure push through the crowds of Black Kats that now surrounded the Owlites, Kats and the Darkness. Scraith heard Oona gasp.
"Okarune! You traitor!" The Owlite was unable to meet Oona's glare, instead looking at the floor. "I'm sorry, Oona. But it was for the best. We needed to survive. Rigging your bomb was the only way to stop you..."
"Stop you? From saving our kinds?" Oona roared, making several of the less experienced Black Kats jump slightly. "And what would you suggest?" Okarune screamed back. "Just letting the Kats walk away after this?" He glared at Oniten. "They know the layout of the Academy. They've set foot inside it, for heavens sake. What do you think is going to happen after this? I'll tell you what. Their psychopathic lunatic of a leader is going to send them marching right back here." A few of the Owlites and Kats, who had fought together only moments ago were beginning to cast suspicious and doubting looks. "It's them or us. I only wish you could understand that." Oniten did not reply, instead looking down. The Darkness placed a clawed hand on Okarune's shoulder. It felt cold and icy, and almost weightless. "I'VE THINK WE'VE TALKED ABOUT THIS LONG ENOUGH. THANK YOU, OWLITE." Okarune smiled at his comment, before jolting upright. "But... You promised..." The Darkness simply laughed, tightening his grip on the hilt of his blade, twisting it painfully. "PROMISES MEAN NOTHING IN THIS WORLD OF YOURS, OWLITE." He pushed Okarune away, letting him fall to the floor, lifeless. realised with a jolt that there was a deep wound in his back. "YOUR LITTLE 'FRIEND' ASKED ME TO SPARE YOUR KIND IF HE BETRAYED YOU." The Darkness held the point of his sword to Oniten, the tip inches from his face. "But that doesn't make any sense! How did you... Oh, no..." Optum yelled, realising how Okarune's scheme came together. "He snuck away whilst we were preparing to attack!" Oniten shrieked, realising for himself. "INDEED. NOW, WHO TO KILL FIRST..." The Black Kats around the Owlite and Kat generals forced them to their knees, swords prodding their backs. "THE BOMBERS? ...NO. I NEED SOMETHING THAT WOULD HURT EVEN MORE." Optum and Torair breathed out guilty sighs as the Darkness walked past them. "HOW ABOUT YOU TWO? ...NO. NOT A DEEP ENOUGH WOUND." Oona and Preowa glared up at the Darkness, hatred burning in their eyes as he passed them. "NOW, THIS IS MORE LIKE IT." The Darkness knelt down in front of Scraith until the two were at eye level. "WITHOUT YOU, KAT, YOUR KINDS CANNOT HOPE TO PATCH THINGS UP EVEN IF YOU SURVIVE." Scraith spat on him, causing The Darkness to recoil as if he had been stung. He stood up, clenching his sword tighter. "YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT... IN BLOOD." The Darkness raised his sword above his head, ready for the killing blow. The blade arced downwards...

Clang.

Scraith wearily opened one eye, catching sight of the void-black sword, hovering inches away from his head. He could see a symbol resting on the edge of the blade, a rune appearing in golden light. Then the adrenaline coursing through his bloodstream diluted slightly, and the world sped up. The rune repelled the blade as if it was solid, forcing the Darkness backwards, throwing him off balance. Two hands appeared around the Darkness's neck, choking him, causing him to drop the sword. Margrel's hands. "Scraith! Go!"
Scraith reacted, reaching for the dark sword, grabbing it and rising to his feet, cleaving a Black Kat behind him in the process. Preowa kicked the Black Kat behind her, drew her crossbow and sprayed the mass with silver, Oona quickly following suit. Optum threw a smoke bomb, pulled Torair and Oniten to their feet and withdrew several incendiary grenades from his pouch. In a flash, the others were up, stunning the Black Kats and quickly cutting through several lines of them.
The Darkness roared in frustration, throwing Margrel off of him. She was sent sprawling, quickly recovering her balance and distancing herself from the Darkness. She couldn't fight him without help. Before she could call for her companions, however, the Darkness realised this as well, chanting a single word, runes appearing in a circular shape around them, fencing her in. A barrier.
"I MUST THANK YOU, KAT," Margrel's reflection told her, his voice cutting through the muffled sound of fighting in the background. "WITHOUT YOU, I WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABLE TO MANIFEST THIS QUICKLY."
"A caged fight, huh? Scared you won't be able to beat me unless I'm alone?" Margrel retorted, grinning slightly despite the situation.
"POWER RUNS THROUGH YOU NATURALLY." The Darkness stated, drawing a void-black spell book from thin air, purple runes fluttering across the pages. "YOU WILL MAKE A WORTHY OPPONENT."
Margrel caught sight of Scraith from beyond the barrier, fighting for his life along with the others. If she could end it here, she could save what little they had left. Margel pulled out her stolen spell book, power flowing through her irises.
"If only I could say the same for you."

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I've got a pretty good idea for 12, so I won't be lazy and ask for suggestions. (Although you still can if you have any last-minute brainwaves) I've started getting more into SK, so the final chapter will come out relatively soon(ish). Until then, goodbye!

-Alfreton

(Fun fact: in earlier drafts, I called the Darkness 'Margrel' with quotation marks, but it got too confusing when he/she/it/whatevertheheck met Margel. I sorta lost track of who was who.)

Wed, 04/15/2015 - 22:26
#27
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Xteri
Bump?

woot woot

Mon, 04/20/2015 - 07:16
#28
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Danegaman-Xz
I loved that

That part when Margrel found a book about Vanaduke was amazing. You should make a fanfic about Vana.

Mon, 04/20/2015 - 12:58
#29
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Alfreton
Thanks, Danegaman!

Thanks! I don't know whether or not Vanaduke was even in the same world as the Kats and Owlites (Cradle's a mash-up of those worlds and more) but I stuck it in there just for fun.

As for the suggestion, the main reason I chose the Kataclysm (flipping auto-correct trying to capatalise all of that from the Darkness's line) is that the basic story points were there from the helms and armours, and it allowed me to be lazy and fill in a few blanks here and there. I'm considering attempting an Almire story, but there isn't as much direction there as the Kataclysm, the only things giving any reference to the background of the forsaken Kingdom a Maiden's tear (possible love interest? Hmm) and, of course, the good ol' SK wiki, with a curiously accurate backstory of the events that transpired and how Vanaduke became the Ash-face we know and farm today.

This post is a lot longer than I intended, but Meyeh. We'll see what happens when this story ends soon. I won't say much, but I intend to put more references to the other worlds as Margrel becomes more powerful. ;)

-Alfreton

Wed, 04/22/2015 - 13:13
#30
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Alfreton
Chapter 12: the end

It's finally here! yes, I have finally finished this story!
Chapter 12 is probably the biggest one yet, but (hopefully, anyway) it's the best.
Thank you so much for reading this story, as I wasn't sure whether or not people would actually like this thing. It's probably taken waaay longer than necessary, but I've ended up with something that I think is the most complete it can be.
I'll stop procrastinating, and just say it. I really like the ending, and I hope you will too.
So, without further ado, here is the final chapter of Kataclysm!

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12: Margrel, the Kat Tribe Hero

Scraith slashed through another Black Kat, kicked another and sidestepped as one of Oniten's spells flung past him and dissolved several more. The Black Kats were easy to fight, hardly managing to parry before being sent back to wherever they came from. But there were a lot of them. Eventually, what was left of Scraith, the Kat generals and the Owlites would tire. And then the merciless wave of darkness would overcome them.
"Hurry, Margrel." He hissed to himself.

The Darkness was unlike anyone Margrel had ever faced, at least, compared to the Owlite magician. Whilst her own defences were adequate, his were unbreakable, a deep crimson barrier preventing any of her attacks from hitting home. He was fast, too, hanging back and weaving protection spells before jumping in and hitting defences, leaping back to defend from Margrel's futile counterattack.
He was toying with her.
Just as Margrel was considering this, the Darkness leapt forward again, tearing through her shield with a dark claw, snatching her spellbook and sending her hurtling into the barrier. The Darkness held up the spellbook, sneering at it. "I SUPPOSE THIS WORTHLESS COLLECTION OF IDIOTIC PAGES PASSES FOR A SPELLBOOK IN THIS WORLD?" Before Margrel could react, the Darkness crushed book in his claw. "YOU WILL HAVE TO DO BETTER THAN THAT."
Margrel picked herself up from the ground, pulling out something from her pouch. "I thought so as well. But don't worry." Margrel opened the collection of stolen pages, without cover or case, forged through her willpower.
"...I've made my own."

The other spellbooks were too weak, Margrel understood that now. This was an academy, and as such, the elders weren't exactly going to feed hundreds of inexperienced students powerful spells until they were ready. The shield spell that had defeated the Owlite she had encountered when she first entered the library was a small sketch scribbled by one of the students, probably one of a high level. Margrel had raided all of the more advanced spellbooks, stealing the most powerful spells from each one.
The flow of magic running through her bloodstream amplified as she opened her creation, her eyes flaring up again as fresh magical energy rushed through her irises. In seconds Margrel had shielded herself, deploying a new array of attacks before the Darkness had time to defend himself, and several of Margrel's missiles hit their target. "YOU... HOW DID YOU GET PAST THE ENCHANTMENTS?" The Darkness roared, charging into Margrel's shield, the impact from the two defence runes lighting up the makeshift arena. "I learned a thing or two from that book." Margrel commented, flinging a few incendiary spells at the Darkness before reshielding and darting back. "You've made a mistake putting me in here. Nowhere to run." With that, Margrel summoned all of her energy, the glow in her eyes becoming a blinding supernova as she gathered all of her strength. She chanted furiously, her hand a blur as she whipped through the vandalised pages, reciting the contents perfectly without so much as a glance downwards. Spells materialised, the raw power of the elements charging through Margrel, hanging in the air as they targeted the Darkness, standing blankly, terrified of the sheer power Margrel was exhibiting. It looked down furiously at its own spellbook, summoning magical barriers to defend itself, but it was too late. With a single word, Margrel sent the magical missiles flying towards the Darkness, the impact of pure magic energy onto darkness temporarily swathing its target in light.
Margrel blinked, the power fading, the makeshift spellbook dropping to the floor as Margrel fell to her knees, panting desperately. She looked up, the spot where the Darkness had been standing moments ago consisting of nothing but his dark tome, the shadows now shifting from the cover.

It was the Book of Grey Feathers.

The barrier faded, the Black Kats vanishing as the Darkness's power faded.
"...I won." Margrel realised, looking around at the Owlites and Kats that had survived, speechless at her display. "It's over..."
A hand appeared in Margrel's field of vision, the warm voice of Oniten filling the silent air. "It is indeed."
Margrel took it, hoisting herself up, taking a few seconds to look at each of the survivors. Scraith, sword still unsheathed despite the relief on his face. Preowa was sighing, giddy with relief. Torair was desperately trying to deactivate a bomb he had recently primed before the Darkness had been vanquished, but was still grinning maniacally all the same. Oona was helping Optum off of the ground, pulling out a bandage from her pouch and wrapping it round his arm. The other soldiers that had survived, Owlite and Kat alike, fell to the floor, breathing heavily. And as for Oniten, he regarded Margrel with awe, and he likely had hundreds of questions about her performance, but those could wait.
Margrel didn't crack a smile. "We have to go. Now."
"...Margrel? Are you sure you're alri-" Torair started, having tossed the half-primed bomb out of eyesight, only to be interrupted by Margrel mid-sentence.
"The Darkness was only a small part of something much bigger. We aren't safe here."
This came as a surprise to Oniten, taking a step back. "But... You defeated it..."
Margrel took a great big sigh, looking down
"I think so, but there isn't any way to be sure-"
Scraith cried out in surprise at something behind Margrel, sprinting towards her. Preowa and Oona took aim. Oniten jumped back, preparing a spell. Torair and Optum pulled out more bombs.
Two void-black claws began to crush Margrel's neck, beginning to collapse her windpipe. She let out a startled screech as the Darkness, reformed, held her high, Margrel's reflection choking her to death.
"YOU WANT TO LEARN, KAT?"
It roared, the claws strangling Margrel glowing furiously.
"HERE IS ALL THE INFORMATION YOU'LL EVER NEED."
Scraith couldn't reach her in time. The rounds from Oona and Preowa's crossbows weren't travelling fast enough. The bombs were still being primed. Oniten hadn't pulled out his spellbook yet. Half of the soldiers hadn't even realised the situation.
And so, nothing could stop the Darkness summoning all his power, transferring hundreds of thousands of pieces of data into Margrel's brain. She howled, clawing at the Darkness's iron grip, images of the past, present and future cascading into her brain, searing her senses and overloading her nervous systems. With a final jolt, the Darkness threw her across the library, sending her flying into a pillar, the sound of several bones snapping filling the stale air.

Before Margrel had realised it, Scraith was there, holding her, calling her name frantically. Oniten had sprinted over, applying healing runes to her ruined body. Out of the corner of her eye, Margrel could see the others trying to hold off the Darkness, fury alone powering their fighting. Margrel didn't process any of this. She was trying to overcome the waves of information that were still flooding through. Her breath came in short gasps, and she began to speak in short, undecipherable sentences.
"...The iron law is false... Our Kingdom will hold... The Wolves are no more..."
It came in no particular order, no pattern. Her brain was offloading information at random, trying to perceive it all.
"...Energy signatures are shifting... I am no mere Gremlin... This gizmo isn't worth dying for..."
Something began to change in her voice. It was becoming more stable. She was fighting the tide of centuries worth of data.
In the distance, the Darkness backhanded Torair as it was about to toss a bomb, kicking Optum into a bookshelf. Oona and Preowa stepped back, pummelling it's dark exterior with silver. The Darkness kept on coming. With one wave of its hand, the Darkness sent blasts of dark energy towards the marksmen, sending them toppling to the floor. Oniten turned, standing up, pulling out his spellbook and starting to chant, a weak barrier forming around the party.
"...I no longer serve the order... Within my dream... What it was before it is no more..."
Margrel sat up, groggily, her eyes a pure white, the fires of knowledge curling just out of sight within them. "...I... I understand now, Scraith."
The Darkness battered itself against the shield, Oniten recoiling as his concentration was tested and the barrier was cracked.
"We... We aren't supposed to defeat it..."
Bang. The barrier collapsed inwards, Oniten falling to the floor as shards of broken magical energy fell around him. He fell unconscious, the toll of holding a shield up against the Darkness for that long shutting him down. Scraith tore his shocked gaze away from Margrel, holding his sword up to parry a claw-strike from the Darkness, only for the other claw to send him hurtling backwards, sword clattering against the floor. Through his failing vision, he saw Margrel stand up, looking at the Darkness without expression.
"YOU ARE LOST, KAT. YOU HAVE NOT SURVIVED THE VISIONS, NO MORTAL CAN."
And then, Margrel spoke.
"I have. And I understand now. I understand what I must do."
Her hands shot out, grabbing the Darkness's claws, her eyes glowing with a primal ferocity as she peered into his shocked gaze. Without a spellbook, Margrel began to chant.

"For this world with which you toyed, I banish you into the void."

The Darkness writhed and howled, screeching as he was pulled in every direction at once. "NO! YOU CANNOT DO THIS TO ME!"

"Through my flesh and bone I will seal away, this monster that makes the shadows obey."

Pages began to fly out of books, a wind coming from nowhere sending them flying around Margrel and the Darkness. Scraith raised a hand, trying to reach them, groaning as his body tried to close him down for repairs. "...Margrel..." He whispered, fighting against the darkness that grew heavy around his eyelids. The chanting faded into the distance.
Scraith fell into a deep sleep.

Light.
Blinding light.
Scraith had no idea where he was. Had he died? Had the others? Had-
"Turn around, you idiot. I'm right here."
Margrel.
Scraith turned, catching sight of her, standing in wherever they were, sadness deep in her eyes.
"Am I... Are we..."
"Dead? No. You fell unconscious, so I decided to use this opportunity to say goodbye." Margrel told him, then, without warning, ran towards him, her arms wrapping tightly around him as a something glinted down her cheek.
"In the real world, I'm sealing away the Darkness with myself." She continued, stepping back. "We have some time before I finish the spell. I can explain things for you."
Scraith swallowed, taking this in. "How do you know the... You know, whatever you're doing?"
"The Darkness poured information from the future into my head, hoping it would fry my brain. I learned a few tricks by surviving. I can get rid of it for a while, but it won't be the end."
The glint reflected in whatever light was illuminating the limbo that they were both in, shining off of Margrel's tears.
"It'll come back, using whatever's left of me to try and take back whatever's left of this world."
Margrel sighed, brushing her face.
"We'll find it! We'll find you, too. Me and the others will pursue you to the ends of the world." Scraith said, a hopeful tone entering his desperate voice. Margrel simply shook her head.
"You won't be there to save me. None of you will."
"Then... It's pointless..." Scraith began, with no intention of finishing the sentence. Margrel shook her head more defiantly this time.
"Where there is darkness, there will always be light. They will come, falling from the stars. They'll stop the Darkness, and stop what the Darkness serves."
Margel looked up at Scraith.
"I have seen the future. The Darkness is just a puppet. The real fight is yet to come, but They will win. They have to."
Scraith took Margrel's hand, holding it tightly, as if it would vanish. "Who? Who will come? Who will win?"
Margrel hugged Scraith again, telling him, before ending the dream.
She had one last thing to do.
"Before I forget, Scraith. Thank you."

"YOU... YOU CANNOT SAVE THEM, YOU CANNOT EVEN SAVE YOURSELF!"
The voice of the Darkness, quivering with fear, brought Margrel back to reality. She did not reply, simply looking up, through the hole in the roof she made ages ago, up at the moon, the sovereign beauty of it staying with her even when she closed her eyes, the last truly beautiful thing she would ever see. Yes. This was how she would remember the world. Her world.
Margrel chanted, finishing the spell, and sending them both deep into the abyss.

Scraith awoke with a start, sitting up straight, screaming Margrel's name as he took in the morning sun. The sun. He was alive.
"At last. I was getting worried that you weren't as tough as I'd hoped."
Orvin was there, sitting by Scraith's makeshift bed, sharpening his sword with a rock. Scraith stood up groggily, regarding the Owlite High Academy of Magicks, and the Kats and Owlites who were inhabiting the war camp, still intact from the night before. Scraith turned to Orvin. "Tell me everything."
Orvin grinned in response, standing up alongside Scraith.
"We found you in the library. All unconscious, with no sign of the Darkness. But Margrel was missing. In the meantime, the peace treaty you decreed earlier became a little more concrete, but I'm not sure how your tribe leader is going to react to that decision."
"He can go and throw himself off a cliff for all I care. Just wait till I get back." Scraith grimly responded. Orvin laughed.
"I suppose so, I'd hate to be in his shoes. On another note, the others are worried about Margrel. Did you see her? What happened?"
Scraith simply sighed, recalling the last few moments he spent with Margrel. "She said... She told me she was sealing away the Darkness with her body, and that he would eventually overpower her and use her to return. But... She said something else. She said that... They would stop it."
"Who, Scraith? Who would stop her?"
Whoever these people were, Scraith swore to himself that he would find them. He would find them and help them stop the Darkness and bring back Margrel.
"The Knights, Orvin."

"The Spiral Knights."

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Thank yous are in order for this thing. So, here they are:
-My tutor, for getting me into stories and writing
-OOO, for making an amazing game with so many worlds woven into the chaotic mass of story we call Cradle
-You, fine sir/madam, for taking time out of your (probably) busy schedule to read this. Thank you!

So what did you think? Do you, for some bizarre reason, want more of the dribble I call stories? Or do you just want me to shove off and stop flipping coming along for your Vanaduke runs and messing the whole thing up? Tell meh!

That's all from me, I'm off to farm fire crystals. See ya!

-Alfreton

Wed, 04/22/2015 - 15:27
#31
Snakey-One's picture
Snakey-One
DUDE!

There are three things I would love if I got to see from you.
1. An interactive story
2. ANOTHER FANFIC!
3. An RP
You're an amazing writer!

Thu, 04/23/2015 - 21:33
#32
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Colray
You call that a Dribble?!?!?!

What an ending, I can't even...

This is too good, I loved the ending, the bit about the future just drove it home.

Thu, 04/23/2015 - 21:46
#33
Xteri's picture
Xteri
Cool story hansel...

Good job

Fri, 04/24/2015 - 09:21
#34
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Reddehwow
Very nice job! I remember

Very nice job! I remember when you linked me the first few chapters, and I'm glad this has come to such an amazing end.
It would be a shame for it to end badly like so many fanfics, or not end at all, but you pulled through and this fanfic's been great start to end.

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