Shattered Rapport (Interactive)
Wed, 07/09/2014 - 04:41
===::Chapter One; The beginning and the end.::===
Walking up the seemingly endless stairs,the two knights seemed to be the only color in the otherwise dull, grey room. Standing side by side, one was twice the size of the other, and while both were leaving a trail of blood behind them, the taller one's was significantly worse. The shadowy fog surrounding them seemed to move out of their path as they walked, only to quickly envelop the space behind them as they slowly walked upward. The sound of their tapping feet seemed to echo faintly in the walless expanse, leaving the labored breaths between the two to fill the void of silence. Without warning, the shorter one fell onto the stairs, simply breathing, unwilling to go on. The taller knight looked over, and wordlessly picked her up. Undoing the latches on her helmet, the extra weight fell freely from her head, letting her short blond hair poke around freely. The two stood there for a moment to listen to clinking of the helmet on it's way downwards, until it's sound grew faint. Taking a deep breath, the taller knight continued on with the woman in his arms.
"Why can't you come with me?"
The woman asked, her eyes straining to remain half open.
"...You know why. Only one can go."
The knight said, not bothering to look down as he continued onwards.
"It still hurts you know."
"I know"
"I never did thank you for that."
"You never needed to."
"I should've."
"..."
The girl's head went backwards as she rested it on the knight's arm. Her burning fever went unnoticed through the fractured steel plates on his arm. In a hushed tone, the woman's voice was accompained by a pained groan.
"Could you sing that song you told me about? The one you sang for her?"
Looking down slightly before looking straight again, the summit was finnally within view. Stopping a second to catch his breath, he began to remember and change the melody slightly. There was only a few moments left.
"Hush, little berry, don't say a word.
Rai's gonna catch you a flying bird."
He sang softly as he reached the top of the stairs, looking forward, there was a single escape pod in the smoke filled exspanse.
"And if that bird's no fun,
Rai's gonna buy you a proto gun"
Stepping forward, the pod didn't seem to be connected to any machinery at all. No wires, tubes, or latches at all, just the pod itself.
"And if that gun's boring as well,
Rai's gonna find you the shinest bell."
Pressing the button on the side, the hatch opened with a small gust of air.
"And if that bell turns out fake,
Rai's gonna make you a cake."
Placing the girl inside of the pod, Rai didn't know when she had started crying, but the tears had began to wash way the dried blood around her face. Kneeling down, Rai ripped a clean peice of cloth off of his frayed outfit. Wiping off her face, the girl weakly opened her eyes.
"And when the cake's all gone,
Rai's done singing 'till it turns to dawn."
Rai squeezed her hand tightly before backing up a few steps
"So hush little berry, and don't say a word...
Rai's just off to find that flying bird."
He said, as the pod's door sealed. After a few moments, the pod slowly faded away, leaving no trace of it ever having been there. Falling backwards, Rai's eyes wandered about looking at the smoke as it slowly encased him.
Goodbye.
Wed, 07/09/2014 - 07:52
#2
I think
I think you just make your own part up (P.S. awesome song dude, got it on youtube?)
Thu, 07/17/2014 - 05:02
#3
:/ interact? okay...
Chapter1: to an old friend
"Captain Avel!" a girl screamed out of her lungs in the middle of a charred battlefield, in her arms laid Captain Avel, the leader of the iron wolf, he was a tough lad, but even he couldn't survive the bloody onslaught against the Morai emperor and his guards. The emperor came from another world and scortched Isora into cinder, millions of spiral knights died defending their home, now Avel and his female squire were all that were left of the Iron wolf unit. They accomplished their mission of eliminating the Morai emperor, but everything came at a price, Isora was nothing more than a smoldering shell of its former self, the entire planet was on the verge of collapse.
"Desna... " said Captain Avel to his female squire with his last breath, his iron wolf coat was torn wide open by the Morai emperor himself and his claws sliced deep into his vital. "...What... what happend," Captain Avel swallowed the blood in his mouth and continued, "...to the rest of our squad?"
"They are all dead..." the squire sorrowfully replied with blood still oozing out of the bandages on her wounded right eye, she injected Captain Avel with another shot of morphine in a last ditch desperate attempt to keep Avel alive, "...Captain Avel, we did it," said the squire, "the morai emperor is dead! We did it!" after that the squire voice cracked, unable to continue due to the overwhelming emotions.
"Oh," Captain Avel smiled weakly, hoping that his smile might relief the weeping squire, "Damn, now I remembered, that bastard got me good... really good..." with his remaining strength, Avel took a blood stainned paper out of his pocket and handed it to his squire, "This paper contains a list of all the names of the iron and golden wolf squad team member..." Avel paused for a while before coughing out some blood, "...Find all those that are still alive... and reunite them... in my name..."
"ME?!" the squire panicked, "But I am just a soldier! How can I rally an army! I don't even have the adequate officer trainning like Vaelyn and Feron!"
Captain Avel chuckled bitterly at his squire's , "No Desna... you don't need officer trainning to lead a squad..." Avel paused and reflected on his past, "The truth is... I never had any officer trainnings either, frankly I am not even Captain Avel... my real name was Oraza, I took over for the real Captain Avel two years ago..." for a while the pain returned to his chest but he ignored the pain, "he died in the first hour of the Morai invasion when I was just his squire..."
"But, you are special, Sir Oraza... I am just a girl!" said the squire with a shaking head. "No you are not..." Oraza changed to a serious tone, "... you have something that no one in this universe have..." he lifted his sword and moved it into his squire's side. He was determined that Desna would be the one that carry on his legacy, "take my sword soldier," Oraza's smile grew gradually weaker, "Captain Avel gave me this right before he died, it is yours now, live... for Me... and Avel..."
As soon as Desna took the sword off from her captain's hand, Avel was gone, but what was more tragic was that only Desna knew who he really was. "What was he trying to say before he died?" Desna asked herself before her path of thought was cut off when her radio rang.
"Iron wolf four, this is captain Ozlo... do you copy? Identify your self!"
"This... is private Desna of the 14th shock division... I joined the iron wolf two weeks ago under the command of captain Ora- I mean Avel..."
"Is the Morai Emperor neutralized? And how many of you are still alive out there?"
"I am the only one left in the iron wolf, sir..."
"..."
"..."
"I see... stay put private... A rescue shuttle from S.O.S. Skylark is coming to your co-ordinate, we are picking up last of the survivors and soon we will be en route to another planet a dozen light years away from here, Isora is done for..."
"...Is this the end captain Ozlo? Did we win?"
"...No private... in the war of survival... there are no winners or losers..."
Thu, 07/17/2014 - 15:57
#4
Heart Of Valor
/pulls hair from head
I am so tired of seeing just RPs and no single-author fanfictions in the treasure vault.
Thu, 07/17/2014 - 19:46
#5
Thinslayer's Short Stories
I wrote another short story a little while back, but hardly anyone commented on it. The short stories are my primary inspiration for fanfictions.
How do I interact?