Yo~, so I was bored and decided to write something. This is my first ever fan fic, feedback and constructive criticism are appreciated. Enough chit chat, lets just get right to it :D
Index
Prologue
Chapter 1 - The Fall of Order
- Part 1 - New Haven
- Part 2 - The Melancholy of the Knight in Cobalt
- Part 3 - Den of Madmen
- Part 4 - Sunny Days
- Part 5 - Deconstruction Zone
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Prologue - Part 1
“There once was a king. He ruled over a small yet beautiful kingdom. Rivers flowed like emeralds gleaming under the mellow sunlight, lush green as far as the eye can see. Two other nearby kingdoms felt envy, and decided to work together to take over the beautiful kingdom. From atop his castle, the king can only watch as his land gets decimated by invading armies. The king fled from his castle and went to the mountains for divine intervention.“
“He tirelessly searched, for years without end, until he found a massive cave, rather hot, filled halfway with ashes. On the far side sat a blackened shrine. He prayed to the shrine, first whispering, and then gradually increasing in volume, until he was shouting. The king was on the verge of tears, he remembered his family, friends, people, getting killed right in front of his very eyes. The shrine glowed hot, and so does the soot he was in. The heat seeped in his body, his eyes, his face, slowly morphing him from the man he once was. Clad in steel as his skin, given a molten scepter on his hands, mobs of fiends following him wherever he wished to go, he was a god.”
“He went back with his army of death, engulfing everything in a blazing inferno, killing every soul. In a day everything was ashen, eternal flames lingering and burning like it was the rage of the king itself. He sat on his blackened throne; not letting anything enter his once prosperous kingdom ever again, for it is the only action that would let the king redeem himself of his mistakes.”
As the pages ended, I closed the rather thin picture book, placing it gently on the wooden round table. The title “The Tale of the Fiery King” was engraved on the hard leather cover. It was a classic folk tale almost everyone across Almire knew. I stood up and walked towards the window, the wooden floor slightly creaking as took each step. Mellow sunset sunlight was seeping through the opening. I could feel a soft evening breeze brush my face as I pulled open the glass pane.
The sun was slowly setting on the horizon, covering the stone and wood buildings of Almire with a blanket of orange, birds flying through the array of clouds above it. Beyond the city buildings was a huge prairie, covered with a lush blanket of grass, a wide river running through it, slowly turning into a forest the further my eyes went. The un-evenness of the landscape formed hills of green here and there. A huge mountain range could be seen on the horizon.
The sunlight gradually faded, evening turned into night. I closed the window shut and walked back towards the round wood table on which my gear was placed. My modest cottage of wood and stone was gently lit by the fireplace on the middle of the room, as well as oil lamps lined up on the walls. I donned my ivory white armor and helmet, strapped my lance and shield on my back and headed out. Walking down the hill my cottage was built on, I headed towards the Almirian Grand Citadel that stood proud on the city center, its wide open courtyard of stone surrounded by buildings and houses that are now brightly illuminated by warm night lights.
Damn, another awesome read, I really wished that my writting skill was better, but sadly, language was never my strong point, not even in my native language.
I can sense the Jamais Vu theme here...
ps. hmm, is it me, or is it most fan fic writters out there prefer humble protagonist? I always like mine hot and heavy! Micheal Bay style! With Metal Gear Solid philosophies sprinkled in.