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[Fanfiction] Jaxter Merrick and His Merry Band of Friends and Enemies(ACCEPTING APPS)

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Tue, 08/05/2014 - 05:25
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Psychnade

Dum, da da dum dum da dum!

Join Jaxter Merrick on Cradle during his days as a younger, less experienced thief. Be there to witness all his blunders, triumphs, and everything in between. You can become one of his fellow compatriots, or work with the law to stop him. There will be blood, tragedy, romance, and alcoholic beverages!

Sample Application:

Name: Jaxter Merrick

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Affiliation(Law or Thief): Thief

Appearance: Has a fair complexion and a smile upon his face that kills ladies(metaphorically). His dark brown hair is often messy, as Jaxter is either stealing, drinking, or running from the law. Eyes are an unusual grey that puts a lot of people off.

Gear(Just weapons if you're a thief): Two Iron Slugs

OOB Gear(Thieves remain in OOB gear throughout the story): Dusty and ragged black jacket he keeps open with a dirty white shirt underneath it. Also has a pair of brown cargo pants and black boots.

Bio: Jaxter was something of a thief known for his quick feet, hard right hooks, and a fast gun hand. Jaxter never really had a formal education, being raised on the streets as an orphan. He had a basic grasp on most subjects when he stole from a teacher, but that's about it. He grew up on Cradle, but instead of serving the Order, he lived a laid back life of thieving and drinking. And he was good at it too. Nobody ever caught him, and he made a lot of crowns. He avoided the draft, evaded the law, and had fun doing it. And he continued this profitable life with a certain band of friends, and that is where our story begins.

Personality: Jaxter is a seemingly always laid back kind of guy, but as a thief, he can be cruel when he needs to be. He's a man who's not afraid to fight dirty to survive. Jaxter enjoys a good drink if he can find one lying around, but he ingests too much he can become a drunken killing machine. His skills as a thief allow him to take money from almost anyone, anyplace, at any time. His laid back attitude can even go as far as in battle, to the annoyance of others. He's also a bit of a romantic, and flirts often. However, if you're really important to him, he will save you.(You will profit him in some way. That or he likes you.)

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 00:44
#1
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Colray
Lorecraft

Name: Beck Lionel

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Affiliation(Law or Thief): Law

Appearance: Dark Blonde hair, curling around his ears and barely going any farther. Viridian Eyes. Holds himself lightly, ready to bolt at a moments notice.

Gear(Just weapons if you're a thief): Sinister Skelly Helm, Ash tail Coat, Vile Striker, Super Blaster, Sinister Skelly Shield

OOB Gear(Thieves remain in OOB gear throughout the story): Black T-shirt with curse eye on it. Grey Hooded jacket usually unzipped on top. Loose dark blue jeans with a brown belt. Combat boots.

Bio: Beck used to be a thief, he made quite a name for himself. Then he was captured. He sat in prison for two years, then was given an early release on one condition. He must help hunt down criminals. His experience as one makes him perfect for hunting others down. He knows where to look, what to look for, and how to catch them. But even then, he rarely brings them in. Officially, the offending law-breaker evaded his capture because Beck was 'out of practice.' Unofficially, he chases them down and asks them for info, then let's them go. The only time he will bring someone in, is when other law enforcers are with him. As a former criminal his superiors don't give him any chance of escape. He even has a tracking device on him. He has no information of the outer world, so he gets it from his targets. And nobody knows what's going on better than the people who live off of stealth.

Personality: Beck is a laid back, calm sort of guy. He doesn't take offense to much of anything, and likes to pull the occasional harmless prank. He is very skilled with his sword, but not so much with his gun. He hasn't made any plans of escaping the law, because he gets paid and gets to eat every day. He doesn't like rich people, he sees them as people who could help others but don't. He doesn't have any friends, any of his friends before ehis capture thinks he is a traitor, and nobody he works with will trust him. He gets lonely some times, but his job is usually around the clock so it takes his mind off of things.

Tue, 08/05/2014 - 12:09
#2
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Liminori
Agh.

I've been working on an app for about 6 hours now.
That's when you know you're getting sidetracked.
I HAVEN'T EVEN PUT A BIO IN, AAAAH- (Part of it was making a name. 4 Hours for an original name. Think about it.)
I spent the 1.85 ish hours left of that procrastinating.

Tue, 08/05/2014 - 12:18
#3
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Wololo

@Colray: Accepted

@Liminori: lol just like how I go about hw

Tue, 08/05/2014 - 13:06
#4
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Nooooooeeees

I had two of this out, but then I just realised, after closing the other one-
Oh, Crap. My app.
SHIIIIIIIIIII-

Tue, 08/05/2014 - 13:21
#5
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Crazee-Pi-Forum
Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

I think I'll, err

Arr, mateys, let me too make an app

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:55
#6
Liminori's picture
Liminori
App.le_OS

Name: Myerchea

Gender: ♀

Age: 17

Affiliation: Thief

Appearance: With Short shaggy Red hair, and blue eyes that steal attention, Myerchea certainly attracts more attention than she wishes for.

Gear: Final Flourish, Obsidian Crusher

OOB Gear: A long sleeved shirt, with a capelet (Which has a hood) over it, Some Jeans, Socks, and Knee-high boots.

Bio: Myerchea was a proud, dignified knight. She helped her comrades, Sometimes broke the law to stop lawbreakers, And fought for her planet and honor. One day, Her father was accused of treason, For leaking information to the Crimson Order. (But, He couldn't have, right?) They took him away, while she struggled against her mother who stopped her from killing the knights.
The next, Her mother was also accused of treason, But this time for "Harassing the King." Like the king cares about her! And she sure as hell doesn't have acess to do that anyway!
The next day, Myerchea was certain she too was going to be accused of treason. She ran like she had never before. Her feet ached, the muscles burned like wood. (Which is really slow, Depending) Finally, Myerchea was too tired to go on.
And that's where she met Jaxter. From a roof above, He taunted; "What are you running from, Proud Knight?" Jaxter chuckled a bit at the last part, While taking a swig from his bottle. Looking around cautiously, she eyed him carefully. "Running from the twisted law of the Order. What about you?"

From there, A great new and odd friendship arose that day, Thieving, Joking, Drinking, Whatever it may be.
Oh, and Myerchea has drank alchahol for 2 years.
It's been a year since Myerchea met Jaxter.

Outer Personality: Myerchea teases other often, Be it by cracking jokes (Even in battle, Mostly at the enemy), Or sexually (To all genders), However, She does try to embarrass people she hates more.
Running from someone you suckered? No problem! Tease them a bit more, and run!

Inner Personality: Myerchea doesn't let people know how she really feels about something unless she really cares about that person, or how they view her.
Myerchea was much kinder before she became a thief, So now crimes mean less and less to her.
However, She still does not tolerate killing people without a good reason.
Kill someone to steal? You're not a thief anymore! Kill to live? There were other solutions! Kill a menace to society? Fine by me.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 12:35
#7
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Crazee-Pi-Forum
Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

((Made my app, probably not the best app though))

Name: Helena

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Affiliation: Thief

Appearance: Short, which often gets her mistaken for a child, which she hates, long brown hair, brown eyes

Weapons: GF and Plague Needle

OOB Gear (Thieves remain in OOB gear throughout the story): A ragged blue T-shirt with the sleeves torn off, dusty black jeans and boots (I couldn't think of anything unique for the boots)

Bio: Having been born into poverty, look up a life of thievery when she was 9 in order to help provide for herself, as she had been living off of scraps until then, and even at that age she was rather good at thieving. She started scaling up slowly and by the age of 11 had started stealing weapons, books (Which she used to teach herself how to read), and eventually even things she didn’t need. Her bad reputation from thieving had her moving to new towns every now and then (About 3 months) in order to stay out of jail.

Personality: Surprisingly optimistic, learns quickly, usually smiles, will fight if cornered, a bit childish, finds danger fun

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 16:33
#8
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Feline-Grenadier
MAKE IT A HAREM!

Name : Cecilia M. Tudor

Gender : Female

Age : 18

Affiliation : Law

Appearance : Compared to most Knights, she's on the shorter side of 5'2. Because of her short cropped-hair (which is a platinum blonde in color), she's often mistaken for a younger boy. Her grey-and-blue eyes makes a her a little older than she actually, and her peaches-and-cream complexion suggests health in her skin. She weighs 97 lb., no matter how much she tries to gain height and muscles. Because of these failed efforts, though, she's lean and springy all over, like a lively colt. In addition, her limbs are actually a little longer than normal, thanks to the various operations done on her as a child, so despite her short height, she had unexpected reach in a melee.

A clean incision runs down her spine, now just a long scar as wide as her palm. She doesn't talk about it much to anyone at all; it's a personal thing. Oddly enough, her spine can withstand impossible powerful impacts, like 5 story falls. Only a small amount of people know why, though.

Gear :

Black Kat Cowl

Snarbolax Coat

Nether Cannon

Nether Shell

Fearless Rigadoon

OOB : She wears a navy-blue button-up shirt, without the tag on her breast-pocket or any badges on her shoulders, as well as a pair of navy-blue trousers held together by a riveted belt, which hangs loosely on her hip. When she prefers conspicuous appearances, she'll slip on a navy blue cap, again, without any way to identify she's a cop. If you really want to know, she wears masculine underclothing, and her flat physique fools the unsuspecting in the locker room.

And yes, she likes her boxers made of Silkwing silk or Miracloth.

She also wears a pair of fingerless gloves, which also exposes the knuckles, but when the occasion calls for a street brawl without armor, she's prone to slip some studs under them for some extra punishment.

For her shoes, she doesn't wear the usual black leather, but instead wears form-fitting shoes that resemble feet.

There's a bracelet she wears on her left wrist, made out of thick weaves of twine, though no one knows who made it for her.

In short, she's almost like a cop's punk kid. She has a karambit in her possession, if things get rough, as well as studded brass knuckles and elbow-knee caps.

Bio and Personality :

Unlike most others, Cecilia is Jaxter's victim in more ways than one. The thief himself may have forgotten, if that was even possible, but it's doubted that few people can. At least, not unless they were drunk and desperate to escape.

Cecilia, you see, was a rich kid. Her parents owned the patent for the suits that the Knights wear under their thick exoskeletal armor. They worked their asses off for their entire life, and what did that get them? Besides the money (which was now useless since there were little luxuries in Haven to buy), nothing but a slightly larger house than most in a dusty old town. No wonder they spoilt their daughter as much as they could. She was 9 when she got first robbed, by an intoxicated Jaxter. Cecilia wouldn't put up with that, though. No, when someone took others' money for no reason other than the fact that he couldn't work for it, she thought, that person doesn't deserve it. And so, the little delicate girl followed after Jaxter all the way back to his hidey hole, his home away from his friends' homes.

Both of them were tired, and so, for the first night, the irritable, drunk, unkempt Jaxter had to cuddle with Cecilia.

And then, the day after, Cecilia had realized how desperate and sorry Jaxter was. Unlike her, he didn't have parents who gave a care about him. There wasn't any other choice, and the drinking was a bad judgement call on his part, but he was hooked before he could stop himself.

And he made the biggest profit on that day, thanks to Cecilia's surprisingly nimble fingers. As she was going off to buy a gift for him, though, he got drunk, again.

He, somehow in that state of stupor, still managed to finish his bracelet, and in his stumbling, he traded gifts before running off to steal again. He wasn't thinking straight, and he stumbled precariously at the edge of the roof. Cecilia tried to stop him.

They both fell, but Cecilia took that brunt for him, and she broke half the vertebrae in her back before Jaxter came to and ran off for help.

She was 13 when she got her entire spine replaced with an artificial one.

That's also when she decided to enlist, against her parents wishes. See, while sitting in bed at home, Cecilia began to read the news like it was breathing air. She learned about all the horrors that she wouldn't ever have to face, though she still remembers that time with Jaxter.

She decided it was better to stay close to home whenever possible, in order to catch miscreants. That satisfied both her parents and her; she could keep the other soldiers' belongings and property safe if she ousted thieves and looters.

After her year of training though her family suddenly declared bankrupt. She still doesn't know how, but somehow, she was thrown back into the world of poverty.

And so she became her own provider at the age of 15. Some days, she'd train and take a mission or two. Other times, she'd mug a poor thief to eat, if she wasn't already taking burnt loaves from the bakery or taking part in a caged fight.

At 18, she became certified to join law enforcement, and so she did this in addition to normal missions. That meant a fast track to higher ranks.

Two years have passed, and now, she was on the case of a certain young man she knew as Jaxter. She remembered him like it was yesterday. Would he remember her, though?

In other words, what she does, she thinks is justified. In a hypocritical sort of sense, Cecilia has learned how to work on her own to survive and live off of the spoils of war. As a thief herself back then, she knows the desperation they have, but as a Knight, she finds that theft is the most selfish act there is to do on Cradle. As sort of a strange way to pay back to the world that has taken her spine and money, she wants to clean the streets. In other words, helping those thieves by putting them off the streets was the way to go.

And what better way to catch a thief by being a thief? She now lives in Jaxter's old hidey-hole, one of the few he has abandoned for another reason that isn't new construction. Of course she does have an apartment, but it always felt too clean, too uppity for her.

Like a mongrel, she prowls the streets in search for her prey, though instead of the wealthy, she looks for the poor. She dresses like none of them, yet lives like them.

And for that reason, she hasn't had the best of experiences with the wealthy. She isn't one to lose her cool, if at all before, but her backhanded language is just as painful as her fists, which, by the way, have broken at least over a hundred teeth on the count. What it pays to be a street fighter and a cop...

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 22:56
#9
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Isaac-Poy
Huehuehue, an App, fo this good story

Name: Isaac-Poy (cuz I like my name :3)

Age: 18 (because I was forced to ;-: jk jk XD)

Gender: male (Isaac Duh)

Affli...something something (lazy to spell :p) : Law

Appearance: Below average in height, like 5 foot 2 or something, dark brown hair, hazel eyes...um...lets see, a skin like a chinese guy (I am a chinese guy) uueeermmm...weighs like 40 kg (because were knights and knights are smaller and shorter than humans) lets see, like Jack Frost (XD no jk jk) Im not so good at this am I? hmm....Go search isaac Poy on Facebook XD and if u see some kid that live in Malaysia and look like a retard then that me XD this app is problaby not valid bwahahaha eh..Im going off topic...

Gear: lets see, Skolvah coat and a skolvah cap (dont have this yet working on it in game)

shield is BTS (cant find recepie >< have orbs ready)

Weapon is Acheron and polaris (my fav loadout)

OOB (whatever that is): is it like costume? oooh ok, lets see, Im more like undercover recon style police so people dont know Im a cop but think that Im some kid, well u wrong!!! Im undercover, so what I wear would seem a little thuggish, I wear a cyan coloured shirt and wear like one of them long but not so long pants that are loose, so I can move easily, I wear a grey jacket, that dont have any writing or anything on them, and all this would seem slightly worn out and some wear and tear here and there to make it mo believable. ofc I cant hide an acheron or a polaris in there, so when Im undercover I just stuff 2 silversix in my pocket, also a wallet and the jacket has a hood, I wear that hood and under the hood theres a com unit, for communicating. hmmm...lets see oh shoes :p, I jut wear sandals, thats all, bear in mind those sandals are high quality and has loads of traction to help me with emergencies.

next: Bio: lets see Isaac grew up in a good family, with moral and good disciplin and even tho he is not the top scorer in class, he get good scores for his maths, science, and language, like the other subjects he passes but barely, so he was in school one day and then it was then that he met...uuhh whats his name? Jaxter!!! yea, he was raiding the school cafeteria with a bunch of his goonies and the teacher cant do no nothin, so, curious, he asked some elderlies about jaxter and decided to join the police, not to capture him, but to get a chance to change his heart, to convince him, that he can use these skills, fo somethin better! so, when he was 14, trainin starts!!! he worked hard and trained under his mentor, sometimes he lose focus in school because of this, but he knows, if he convince him, it will all be worth it, heck, he might even make friends with him (P.S. he was like saying hi to everyone that joined police training because he likes friends) so blablabla it all leads up to whatever happens in this story. P.S. he is fast and agile, but not really strong

personality (last but certainly not least): He is very well mannered, a gentlemen, just like how his mother tought him, even tho he is patient, he is quite sensetive and has his feelings moved easier than some random guy...like that guy........(guy: wtf how did i get here? y u pointin to me?) anyway, he is very humorous, loves to make jokes, both good jokes and lame ones (not dirty ones tho) and sometimes, not serious enough in serious times, very happy go lucky and respects anyone to seems awesome to him, regardless of age, but sometimes, without guidence, can believe things that are false, he works best in a team, team player, usualy cracks when forced to handle things alone. he likes guidence, he likes to be controled but not abused, he likes some mentor expirienced guy to teach him and he doesnt want to be some high position CEO because he knows his brain cant take that. And (just like in real life) wants to have more than a partnership with his comrads, wants to be more than team members, he wants to have a relationship and sincerely care for them, as friends, whether they see him the same way or not.

thats it! huehuehue hope this will get accepted, if not, well I have fun doing this anyway, see ya!

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 05:18
#10
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
The Law

Well I need you both make your characters older because a job as the police is going to have older people, with experience in battle. 18 at least.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 05:19
#11
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
The Law

Well I need you both make your characters older because a job as the police is going to have older people, with experience in battle. 18 at least.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 05:20
#12
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Aww schiesse

Double post...

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 05:49
#13
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Feline-Grenadier
@Psychenade

I gud durn dun it.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 06:34
#14
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
@Feline

Accepted

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:00
#15
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Sonosuke
(~O ,O)~ #Sonosuks

Can we make one of each?

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:10
#16
Liminori's picture
Liminori
In your case, Triple post.

I made half of the app listening to a. . . "Twisted?" song. It's. . . Wierd.
PS: The art is unsettling, especially at the end.

Also, I was thinking that this would become a harem on accident as well.
WHICH IS FINE BY ME, BUT DEEEEMN.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:10
#17
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Crazee-Pi-Forum
Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

Is my app accepted? Probably not, but I would like to know

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:38
#18
Liminori's picture
Liminori
Nobody knows.

Pipipipipi: Too young?
Isaac: Too young. Bump up your thing a few numbers.
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LOUD AND CLEAR, 524
Freud?
Keloid?
Just hit the key-
Everything, Everything's to be laughed at
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Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:48
#19
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Crazee-Pi-Forum
Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

Bumped her age up, anything else, or do I need to make her older?

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 07:51
#20
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Answers

@Sir Pi: Accepted

@Sonosuke: Yep

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 08:47
#21
Liminori's picture
Liminori
I finished my app.

Blargh.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 09:48
#22
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Darkwatck
Hmm

I might have to read into this a little more.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 11:19
#23
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Sonosuke
(~O ,O)~ The oddest couple

Name: Virgil Stroph
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Affiliation: Thief

Appearance: Virgil, despite being a "thieving scoundrel" as they'd say, has the appearance of an everyday bystander. His skin is lightly tanned, with a few scars across his cheek. His deep blue eyes are quite fast and can see things very clearly. Although the lack of facial hair may say otherwise, he has the appearance of a worn middle-aged man. Speaking of hair, the navy blue mess on his head could be the closest thing to a stereotypical thief.

Gear: A butterfly knife that hangs from his belt, as well as a Blackhawk that lays over the knife, concealing it from the naked eye. Has a spring-loaded grappling hook hidden under his arm (for swinging away or impaling an unsuspecting victim.
OOB: Grey, shock-absorbing parkour boots (for a quick getaway by the rooftops (those things are super flexible and don't hold you down)) and black track pants, a blue jacket that's zipped halfway over a white t-shirt. Insulated gloves cover his hands.

Personality & Bio: Virgil is known to most as the "Hero of the Poor", as he exclusively steals from the rich and gives to the lower class. In some ways, Virgil could be seen as noble, yet however you look at it, he's still a thief. He knows what he's doing is wrong, but he still does it anyways. And still, not once has he been caught.

Virgil is usually calm and collected, never letting his emotions get the better of him. If he steals something, it's almost always undetected until a later time. He prefers to kill only when it's absolutely necessary. When a crowd forms around someone who was thieved or killed, he stays by, pretending to care, rather than walk away and have suspicions arise to him. Virgil almost always has an alibi if questioned. And if he Is found out, he makes a break for it. Not many people can keep up with him because of this.

Virgil had a regular life. A family he loved and that loved him, others he could call friends, and a place he could call home. However, that soon changed. When his father died in the War, his mother went into a deep depression, filled with gambling, alchohol, and drugs. Soon, they were unable to continue paying for their house and became homeless. Eventually, Virgil's mother died as well from drug overdose, and he was orphaned.

During one of his daily scavenging, he witnessed a brutal beating by a group of snobs (his word for rich jerks) on a fellow homeless man who was asking for food. Virgil took it upon himself to defend the man, and managed to send them running with their prismatic wolver tails between their legs. After this, he grew into the habit of stealing from the rich, primarily rich snobs, and giving to the poor, assuring that they wouldn't have to go through the same hardships he did.

Virgil has taken a special interest in a recently-appointed officer.
____________________

Name: Cinder Rexfir
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Affiliation: Law

Appearance: Cinder is of average height for her age, standing at about 5' 9''. Her bright red eyes and light skin show something of youth, and her shoulder length black hair is often tied up in a raised tail. She's a bit curved around her assets, however nothing too much that may attract unwanted attention.

Gear: An Infernal Guardian set (Grey Feather w/out shock resist) and a Dragon Scale Shield. Her weapons of choice are a Final Flourish and an Argent Peacemaker
OOB: Cinder wears black cargo pants and combat boots, a red long sleeve, and a white overshirt. The Spiral Order's insignia is displayed on the back, while her law enforcement badge was on the front, right over the heart on the shirt.

Personality & Bio: Cinder does whatever she can inside the law to gain the upper hand on a thief, whether it be through undercover disguises, the direct approach, or, less commonly, seduction. Even through all this, she's inexperienced with dealing with more prominent criminals, and as such, they usually get away before another officer catches them.

Cinder is hot-headed, stubborn, and overall emotional. Even so, she's still able to get the job done most of the time. However, one criminal has managed to escape not only her, but most of her colleagues as well, time and time again.

Back when Cinder was still part of the military, some of her friends and acquaintances have been talking about having several of their items stolen, whether from their homes or from themselves. Cinder, being the justice-lover that she is, decided to try and find out just who was doing this. One day, she caught the hand of a guy wearing blue snagging a couple of crowns from her close friend's wallet. Once she opened her mouth, the boy noticed and bolted away from them. Cinder was unable to catch up, but she remembered his general physique and appearance.

A couple of years later, she enrolled into Law enforcement. Cinder was intent on hunting down and capturing this "Hero of the Poor" that people began calling him. And although many of the middle and lower classes were defending him, they couldn't be arrested for defending a thief because law and stuff.
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Virgil and Cinder's "Relationship":

Virgil always finds some way to throw off his pursuit, whether by circling a path, taunting and baiting them away from the real thief, taking an unexpected route, or by parkour-ing up a building. When it comes to Cinder, however, he always toys with her, usually by pretending to run out of energy before bolting off again. If Cinder does manage to catch up, he teases her with something silly, causing her to become flustered or annoyed. This ranges from making faces to slowing down to her pace and pecking her on the cheek. (Oh my god, what am I doing with my life?)

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 11:27
#24
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Answers

@Liminori: Accepted
@Sonosuke: Both accepted

And yeah need more male characters

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 11:33
#25
Sonosuke's picture
Sonosuke
(~O ,O)~ #Sonosuks

There's already a 1:1 ratio of male to female. As well as 1:1 of law to thief. That is, once Isaac gets accepted.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 11:40
#26
Colray's picture
Colray
Hidden grapple?

Dang, why didn't I think of that.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 11:54
#27
Crazee-Pi-Forum's picture
Crazee-Pi-Forum
Move over, there's bubble-wrap to be popped!

I'll probably be editing my App to improve on it later on, hopefully not before the story starts, just notifying you

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 12:21
#28
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Alright...

We have enough, starting it tomorrow.

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 22:57
#29
Isaac-Poy's picture
Isaac-Poy
ok I did it!!

I took the whole cradle and made it travel 3 years into the future where I was 18, huehuehuehue now I accepted?

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 22:57
#30
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Isaac-Poy
ok I did it!!

I took the whole cradle and made it travel 3 years into the future where I was 18, huehuehuehue now I accepted?

Wed, 08/06/2014 - 23:11
#31
Liminori's picture
Liminori
BUNANANANAAAAH

Doublepost.

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 00:43
#32
Colray's picture
Colray
hrm

Everyone who is law is 18. I'm changing my age, nothing else will change.

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 05:08
#33
Psychnade's picture
Psychnade
Isaac-Poy

Yeah you're good

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 05:08
#34
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Psychnade
Isaac-Poy

Yeah you're good

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 08:00
#35
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Psychnade
Chapter 1: Coward? No, Just Lazy

Two men walked down into the Bazaar on a chilly late afternoon. The place was filled with people buying and selling. The younger man whispered something into the ear of the other man, and slipped away into the crowd.

Clink clink clink

The young man looked around him, carefully scanning the mass of people for his next mark. Then he found what he was looking for.

A knight clad in infernal red armor, Final Flourish at her side and Argent Peacemaker in her holster. A Dragon Scale Shield rested upon her back. She was in heated argument with another knight who was dealing out bombs.

What’s with those? He thought. Those weapons look okay to me…

“These prices are ridiculous!” She scowled. “The hell are you trying to pull buddy?”

Oh…Well, it’s not like you could afford those anyway. An account deduction is going to happen very soon. The young man thought to himself.

The young man thrust his hands into his jacket pockets and calmly walked towards the knight, his eyes flitting to the sky, then quickly to the bag of money hanging at the knight’s hip. He took out a similar bag, and swiftly switched the two, hands faster than that of a magician’s.

As the young man walked away, the older one strode back to his side, seeming to have silently materialized out of the crowd.

“Jeez Virgil…” Jaxter cringed. “That’s f***ing creepy mate. Don’t do that anymore.”

“Hey, it’s good for making inconspicuous entrances.” Virgil replied. “It’s part of our, ehh...’jobs’, to be hidden and quiet.”

Behind them, the female knight sighed in defeat, and reached for her crowns to pay the man. When he opened the bag, all she found inside were rocks. She threw the bag away and searched through the crowd for the thief. And she knew who was at work here. Well, at least she thought she knew who was at work here. Then, he moved into her line of sight.

Grey boots on quick feet, a blue jacket and white t-shirt. Navy blue hair with a light tan and a few scars. She noted. It’s him.

She unholstered her Argent Peacemaker and started running after Jaxter and Virgil.

“STOP! This is the police, you are under arrest!” She yelled.

Jaxter and Virgil cringed at the words they heard behind them, then started running.

“D*****, Jaxter!” Virgil swore. “You had to steal from an officer!”

“How the hell was I supposed to know that?!”

Shots started to peck the ground at their feet.

“S***!” Jaxter yelled. “Come on, we gotta move!”

They reached a dead end, walls riddled with pipes surrounding them. The female officer turned the corner and saw them, and advanced with them in her sights.

“Put your hands on your head and get on your knees.” She ordered.

“Alright, alright...take it easy.” Virgil said. Suddenly, he and Jaxter jumped up against the pipes and started to climb up. Yet the female officer would not be deterred.

She aimed and fired at Virgil’s leg, a silver bullet piercing his shin. His pace faltered as he grunted in pain, and the female officer climbed up after Virgil. She tackled him as they reached the rooftop.

“I personally hate you, you know that?” She said.

Virgil put a fake pout upon his face.

“Why’s that?” He said. “Do I know you?”

“I’m Cinder Rexfir. The officer you’ve been giving the run-around lately.”

“Oh yeah, I remember you!” Virgil exclaimed. Cinder scowled in distaste.

“You coward...instead of stealing, go down into the Clockworks and earn your loot like everyone else!”

Virgil frowned. He didn’t like to think of himself as a coward. He knew he wasn’t. Then he grinned.

“I’m not a coward. Just lazy.”

The back of an Iron Slug met the back of Cinder’s head, knocking her unconscious.

“Now you owe me a drink, Virgil. I can’t keep saving your ass.” Jaxter said. “Come on. The sun’s setting. Perfect time for a drink anyway.”

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 08:04
#36
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Raigaizam
Yall 'still ceptin apps?

Subject says it all.

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 08:05
#37
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Psychnade
RELEASE TEH APP

Yes

Thu, 08/07/2014 - 12:31
#38
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Colray
Yay tis started

Give me more.

Sat, 08/09/2014 - 19:48
#39
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Raigaizam
Every story needs a talker.

Name: Aaron Wakerka

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Affiliation(Law or Thief): Thief

Appearance: Dirty-blonde hair in a mess on his head. He has a fair complexion, and is 'handsome' is the eyes of ladies, but he isn't exactly a supermodel looker. He has a distinctive smirk.

Gear(Just weapons if you're a thief): Throwing knife in his pocket, and blaster on the inside of his coat, hidden. He also has a crossbow in his 'home'.

OOB Gear(Thieves remain in OOB gear throughout the story): A dirtied light-issue Jacket(Similar in appearance to the Spiral Flak Jacket, much lighter, not much protection)with a few booze-stains. He also wears a pair of leather boots.

Bio: Abandoned as a child, Aaron was picked up by another family. But this family was abusive. Aaron had to learn how to do things properly around them, get others to calm down, and persuade them to do things for him. When he turned 18, he ran away and went to join the Spiral Knights. They rejected him after he failed his test, and he stole a light Jacket from the armory. Since then, he's made a living stealing and using the money to buy booze. He was caught twice stealing, but his quick tongue soon got him out of the problems.

Personality: A sleeze. He's very convincing and has a way with words, but is often drunk off of his arse.

Fri, 08/08/2014 - 13:17
#40
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Psychnade
@Rai

He's a bit too similar to Jaxter, modify him a bit

Sat, 08/09/2014 - 19:47
#41
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Raigaizam
Edited

EDITED!

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