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Mon, 01/26/2015 - 18:34
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Thinslayer

As I sit here at the kitchen table thinking about why some players decided to forego joining Forsaken World, I considered their reasons. Lack of time was the most prominent one. And then I thought about my own reasons, reasons why I wouldn't want too many players joining. Things tend to get really messy when you have more than, say, 4 players or so in the game.

But then another thought came to me. If you'll glance over at the Gremlin Chatter section, there are games over there with countless players in them, well over 10, that manage to stick around and actually work. What most of them have in common is brevity. Each post is short and sweet, and each carries as much punch as a few choice words can carry.

What if forum storygames functioned similarly? Supposing there was a Treasure Vault storygame with an actual, serious story, but played out like one of those trite Gremlin Chatter games. Would it work?

If you're interested, then this thread is for you. The setting is a simple one: You have escaped the Skylark in your escape pod and crashed. The rules are simple: you may only post up to two sentences. I chose two because, while one sentence per post would certainly work, high-quality writing can really only be done with more, particularly the infamous "show-not-tell" business. But at the same time, most players are average writers, and anything more than two sentences can get really painful and time-consuming.

So begin and leave at your leisure. Write with whatever quality you feel like. Begin when you're ready.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 18:47
#1
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Psychnade
Hungry...

Desmond Snow was holding a nice, juicy arm over the fire, another knight bound and gagged beside him, bleeding out from the already gangrenous stump of his missing arm.

"You'll taste nicely with a bit of seasonal autumn spice sprinkled over those nice ribs of yours, so...sit tight, kiddo."

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 18:54
#2
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Thinslayer
My favorite char: Astran Valderis!

Astran Valderis stepped out of the woods and into the clearing, and immediately scrunched up his face into knots upon seeing the one knight eating the arm of another. "That...does not look like pleasant business," he remarked quietly to himself as he approached.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 18:59
#3
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Psychnade
Dr. Desmond Snow

"Maybe you should try some first before you judge," Snow articulated to the newcomer.

"You don't seem as delicious right off the bat, I probably would prepare you up, so...heh, forgive me for my off-timed poetic reference, 'step into my parlor, said the spider to the fly.'"

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:00
#4
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Archemiday-Thebard

Alkyr sat from in her tree, watching one knight eat the other. On one hand, she wanted to help, but on the other, she didn't want to meet the same fate as that poor knight.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:10
#5
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Thinslayer
Wise Decision.

"No thank you," he replied quietly. He curled up his nose and slowly knelt before the campfire.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:16
#6
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Colray
Convergence

Picking himself out of his pod, Chris couldn't imagine what lay outside on this planet. He left behind the safe Haven of the pod and moved to the nearest sound of voice, only the voice was from an unsettling scene in a clearing, "erm, may I ask what in Isora is happening here?" he stayed at the edge of the clearing, aghast that anyone would resort to cannibalism.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:21
#7
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Psychnade
Can't a Man Enjoy His Meal In Private?

"Your unrealistically calm about it," Dr. Snow said distantly to the knight standing in the clearing.

"Besides, I wasn't about to eat that grey paste The Order calls food, and any meat, prepared correctly, is always nice for both the taste buds and the body."

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:26
#8
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Colray
Pshh what gave you that idea?

"A smart man never betrays his fear." Chris replied, raising an eyebrow.

"That 'grey paste' you are referring to is actually quite nutritious for the body, even if it tastes like cardboard." Chris crossed his arms and looked at the other knight, examining the potential ally.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:33
#9
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Liminori
Who said a healer has to be nice? (♀)

I watched with amusement, as I walked into the small encampment.
"Can't say that I'm keen to cannabalism, But I'm sure it's a good replacement for the desparate."

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:34
#10
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Archemiday-Thebard

Alkyr dropped down from the tree she was perched in and performed a three point landing into the green, wet grass, deciding to try to save the captured knight. She slowly and stealthily started to make her way towards the fire, unseathing her sword as the waist high grass brushed its dew across her clean face.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:38
#11
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Psychnade
DOCTAH DESMUND SNUH

"Yes, but would you rather eat something that is healthy but tastes disgusting, or something both satisfying to the needs of one's body and his or her's palette of tastes?" The doctor replied as he bit a morsel from the now roasted and spiced forearm.

"But enough of this culinary talk, have you come to speak, eat, be eaten, or would you like to go on your way?"

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:44
#12
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Thinslayer
Neither?

"I would rather eat something that isn't one of my fellow countrymen," Astran retorted in a low, dangerous tone. "I have come in search of other knights, but my mission is prone to change."

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:50
#13
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Psychnade
"Where are my manners?" Said

"Where are my manners?" Said the doctor loudly, throwing the arm away.

"I don't even know your names, sirs, madams, ANYBODY ELSE LISTENING IN!" Snow shouted, clearly a bit more than annoyed, at the assembly in front of him.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:52
#14
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Archemiday-Thebard
Weapons up.

Alkyr arrived just before the clearing, still covered by the grass. She looked through a tiny opening through the blades of green and her long cyan strands of hair, observing the situation closer, as the knight yelled, "ANYONE ELSE LISTENING!?" As he was obviously annoyed by the gathering he had.

((Looks like meat's back on the menu, boys!))

((Thin, could you please post to DCF if you have time?))

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 19:54
#15
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Psychnade
Desmond slowed his breath,

Desmond slowed his breath, the creepy remnants of an excited grin on his face.

"Heh...sorry...I, uh...slipped, a bit there...sometimes I just get...excited."

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 20:46
#16
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Sonosuke
I'm done being serious. Time to revel in insanity.

Sorka had, in the past half-hour, been shot at, almost torn to pieces, become quite close to being one with a jelly cube, and, most recently, had been launched across a wide clearing by a robot tree. To say his day was terrible would be quite the understatement that he did not need right now, especially seeing how he had landed near a group of other Knights.

((Wow, this is actually kind of hard to fit my intro into only two sentences. I'm a bit used to more outlandish introductions (as seen in NKoRP (A New Kind of Roleplay)) for regular characters and short ones for my more prominent ones.))

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 22:09
#17
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Colray
Eden's garden

"Well! That's an interesting bit of information to know," Chris uncrossed his arms made a self-introductory gesture.

"The name's Chris, you have one I assume?" He hadn't moved from his position, but he resumed his crossed arms, waiting for an answer.

Mon, 01/26/2015 - 22:56
#18
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Feline-Grenadier
Quick entry!

Suddenly, a shadow popped up from the corner of the clearing, revealing a Recon Knight!

"Oo-oops," she (apparently) stutters as the bonds of the bound and gagged Knight fall to the floor, cut precisely by her blade.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 01:12
#19
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Hexlash
Genius, Thin. Ever in awe at your dedication.

(OOC: Don't mind me. Please. Just breaking rules the fun way.)

Though the night was once again dark, more of the strange streaks of light were bound to reappear. It wasn't immediate at first, but the curious new smells were soon strewn about the comforting natural ones, and unable to resist, the wolver dipped his head, trailing his way to the closest of the intriguing unknown.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 02:10
#20
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Topogaming
Hey Hex, I'm coming.

Topo the Wolver approaches a wolver, and barks, "Yo."

OOC: That's Hex.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 05:07
#21
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Archemiday-Thebard

She watched as a knight approached and "accidentally" set the captive free. Alkyr decided it was time to strike, so she charged towards the cannibal and tried to shield bash him down to the ground.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 05:57
#22
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Psychnade
Cannibal is such an ugly word, isn't it?

Dr. Snow turned around just in time to see and hear his captive meal being released by a Recon Ranger, and another, unknown assailant coming at him with a shield.

He dived to the side and popped a small blade from within his sleeve, but a bit late, as the shield connected with his ankle.

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OOC: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4QCLtgcJAog

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 06:16
#23
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Thinslayer
the Hexlash! And welcome back!

Astran suddenly stood up and put up his hands. "Hey hey hey, no fighting, please."

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 08:10
#24
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Colray
Yes please

"I agree with the knight over there, as repulsive as the man-eating person is, we need to not be injured in case something else decides to come along."

Chris paused, and looked around, "I thought we were introducing ourselves?"

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 08:35
#25
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Feline-Grenadier
FASTAR!!!! not.

"N-no, I believe one of us is already injured...and missing an arm," the Recon Knight (there's a difference between a RK and an RR; Rangers are lead by Desna and Knights don't necessarily.) answers uneasily, then picking up the injured one in both of her arms.

She extends her gaze towards the cannibal, as if she were about to memorize his face.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 09:00
#26
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Sonosuke
I'm done being serious. Time to revel in insanity.

Sorka woke up just as Alkyr and Desmond began to fight. "Oh, what's going on here?"

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 09:40
#27
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Hexlash
I've been here all along, admittedly.

So enraptured was the wolver by the curious new smells, that he didn't notice the other until they were upon him. He yipped in surprise, but when realizing who it was, he relaxed; this wolver was familiar.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 11:31
#28
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Avenger-Of-Troy
*sniffs*

[A gremlin comes out of an unseen staircase blocked by the trees, Note that since you have just landed on cradle, you don't know what a gremlin is]

Lisacle the gremlin: "MEAT!!! GIMME MEAT!!! I WANT MEAT!!!"

The gremlin bites off the knights other arm, and disappears back into the staircase, while a mechanized "whirrrr" closes the top.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 13:01
#29
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Archemiday-Thebard
Two sentences? I can make this work.

After knocking the cannibal down, Alkyr pounced on top of him, grabbing him by the collar of his armor and pulling him close to her, where he could see her once blue, calm, placid eyes turn into a vengeant and fiery red, with her left eye having a twitch. "While I see your guy's point," she said, temporarily turning to face the other knights before turning back around, "I need to exact punishment on him for the horrid thing he has done for his own self pleasure, rather than need." She said, as she leaned closer to him to the point where he could feel her breath, and positioned her sword towards his stomach before finally saying, "You two, go get the other arm of the poor screaming fellow back from whatever that was."

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 13:31
#30
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Psychnade
Pulling off the Lecter is harder than I thought

"I was just curious, and a bit hungry...you can't punish me for that, it's our nature." Desmond said, feeling her quick, energetic breaths against his face.

"I'd love it if you lowered the blade, that would make it easier to have a civil process of justice, which you seem to be so keen on." He continued as his eyes flitted to the blade at his stomach, then his right sleeve.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 13:54
#31
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Archemiday-Thebard
Anger

Alkyr, obviously angry but not wanting to kill the cannibal and prove his point right, got hesitantly got off of him and said, "Maybe unpunishable if you had a decent reason for it, rather than being a bit hungry and wanting pleasure."

She left her sword in her hand unsheathed, her eyes still angrily staring at the cannibals with a burning red, and in a frustrating tone stated, "If you try to kill any of these other knights or me, I will shove this sword down your throat."

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 18:55
#32
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Feline-Grenadier
POWERPLAY NULLIFIEEEERRRRRRR!!!!!

As the gremlin retreats, the Recon Knight raises an eyebrow as various tooth marks are seen on the Cobalt Armor of the injured knight; regardless of biting strength, it'd hurt like heck for the offender.

"...should we head out?" suggests the Recon Knight. "I'd rather find a base camp for our injured ally here; I don't have any sedatives to treat the gangrene, either."

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 22:12
#33
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Thinslayer
Crazy-Prepared

"I have some probiotic biofoam. Let me treat the injury." Astran removed a spray can of the stuff from his back bag and stepped over to the wounded knight's side.

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 22:17
#34
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Colray
Garden of Eden

"I would love to find a base camp, you don't happen to know where anyone is setting up?"

Chris uncrossed his arms and stepped forward to help the Recon knight with the Injured knight,

"Again, does anyone here have a name?"

Tue, 01/27/2015 - 23:06
#35
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Feline-Grenadier
I thought you were a MED STUDENT THIN

The Recon Knight steps back a bit, eyes furrowed in uncertainty.

"Isn't gangrene caused by infection? Probiotics will only aggravate the wound."

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 00:18
#36
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Hexlash
Perhaps Thin meant antibiotic. =P

The wolver continued it's trek, tracing the smell to its origin, a large and foreign object. At first, the wolver growled, seeing how it would react, but it didn't; instead it lay dormant, opposing and hot.

(OOC: Then again, it's Thin's character speaking, not him. Also, I spam the semi-colons like a baws.)

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 05:26
#37
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Topogaming
Sorry, Hex!

Topo moved to Hex's side, yipping as if to calm his Wolver companion down.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 07:48
#38
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Thinslayer
Probiotic

((I meant what I said. Probiotic biofoam is kinda like bacta from Star Wars - it promotes healing and regeneration. Antibiotics stop or prevent infection, which is different.))

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 08:21
#39
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Feline-Grenadier
Mmm...okay then.

((Welp, here goes nothing.))

With some hesitance, the Recon Knight drops the wounded one down, and pulls back the sticky armor and clothing from the stump to allow better access for the foam.

"...th-the name's Jun. Beamont. 1st division Recon Knights."

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 11:40
#40
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Hexlash
A Wolver's Purpose

The wolver, feeling less tense with the other around, approached the shiny, round object. It smelled faintly of the strange world below, but also foreign, and airy, begging the question of where it came from.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 12:51
#41
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Archemiday-Thebard

Alkyr's left eye turned back to a calm blue, but her right eye stayed red. She appeared to recollect her composure and calmly replied, "I'm Alkyr. My position doesn't matter much, besides the fact that I bring people to justice."

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 13:51
#42
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Psychnade
Justice is a rather vague concept, isn't it?

"Dr. Desmond Snow...I'd offer you food but you don't seem to want any." Dr. Snow said.

Justice is all relative, one man's good is another's evil...how telling.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 14:10
#43
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Archemiday-Thebard

Alkyr's left eye turned red again as she turned to Desmond yelling, "Maybe we WOULD have been interested if the food wasn't a person who would have probably fought along your side if you didn't EAT THEM!". Alkyr tightly gripped her sword, doing her best to not let her justice induced rage make her stab the cannibal.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 14:39
#44
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Thinslayer
Allies

The black-haired knight (Astran) on the other side of the cannibal had a hand on his sword, too. He narrowed his eyes and nodded slowly to Alkyl before quietly coming up behind the cannibal.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 16:26
#45
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Avenger-Of-Troy
A computerized voice comes from below:

"Lisacle, your order of: 3 scuttlebots, 10 Rocket puppies, and 1 Love puppy (All tier one) have arrived; please pick them up, and deploy them on the metal invaders coming to our planet."

A hatch opens up in the ground, and out comes the 3 scuttlebots, and 10 Rocket puppies; The love puppy is for Lisacle ;3.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 17:50
#46
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Psychnade
Dr. Desmond Prescribes a Healthy Dose of Knife in the Head

These new mechanical enemies advance on the group, 3 resembling mechanical dog-things, and ten others popping out of the ground, firing small missiles at them.

"Well, time to cut things up...that was always my favorite pastime." Desmond said as he unsheathed a large butcher's knife and a smaller, thinner knife, and ran at the incoming foes.
_____________________________

OOC: Don't feel like chopping people up yet...

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 18:06
#47
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Hexlash
A Wolver's Purpose

It occurred to the wolver that the foreign object he had been inspecting was hollow, with an opening poised slightly upward. As he crept inside, the wolver became increasingly aware of an even queerer smell, one that reminded him of life, making him wonder if this was another creature's den.

Wed, 01/28/2015 - 18:17
#48
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Archemiday-Thebard

Alkyr, happy that she could unleash her willingness to kill something after almost killing the cannibal, eagerly charged and dismembered the head of one of the stone dogs. She was a ball of fury with her attacks.

Thu, 01/29/2015 - 03:38
#49
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Green-Neko
A little bit shy...

A little creature (which seems to be a hybrid between a green jelly and a kat) peeks out of the bushes, wondering as to why the white knight (which wasn't really clad in shiny armor; more like furry and stinky armor...yuck) was emanating an aura of pure wrath that would make even the most evil, darkest undead run away and scream in fear. Well, I better sneak away now...

Thu, 01/29/2015 - 03:39
#50
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Avenger-Of-Troy
Hex, is that Lisacle's workshop, or the Skylark?

Scuttlebot x 1
Rocket puppy x 5

A barrage of 5 missiles shoot together at the knights.

Lisacle munches on the arm of the strange creature.

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