I've stopped seeing stories in the vault. They look more like a bunch of grabs for attention.
I didn't join Machinauts, and I left outnumbered because I knew it would be too long. Much like the Yore of Almire, except in that case I just didn't know what to do. It's really hard to do a skeleton story, so I think I'll just have to put more restrictions, like making a map.
And yes, that means that in my previous stories you could literally go wherever the f*** you wanted.
When did stories stop being stories?
And no, I'm not saying you're all bad storytellers, because that would be rude and hypocritic.
Your stories are original, though not compelling, and they lose their point or intended read within a few posts.
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You are a student of Helix High, Just about to graduate.
That rumoured day is coming up again- The mysterious bus that shows up every year, and takes people. It is rumoured that people that get on never get off. For whatever reason, you are compelled to investigate.
Let's see how badly this goes.
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Application Sheet
Name:
Gender:
Bio:
Personality:
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Character List & Status
(APPS ARE NOT BEING ACCEPTED YET)
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So.
I'll be creating maps, and a story skeleton and the like.
Let's see how badly this goes. - Carda
It might or might not interest you to learn that I have been working on the sequel to By a Thread, for my fangame. No, it isn't just intended to carry my game. However, my busyness on other stuff, (Like reading The Hobbit) as well as forgetfulness, has kept me away from it.