Spiral Knights - EL DIABLO: Victorinox De Angelo [Fanfiction] APPLICATIONS URGENTLY NEEDED AND NOW ACCEPTING

EL DIABLO: Victorinox De Angelo [Fanfiction] APPLICATIONS URGENTLY NEEDED AND NOW ACCEPTING

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Mon, 05/25/2015 - 10:55

Eliott-Shane

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HEYYY THERE!!!!!!!!
All you wonderful people of the whole wide world...
And WELCOME to MY Fanfic [whoooo hoooo :- )]
*plays awesome disco music*
My name is Sammy but you can always call me Nyestone and I am a guy who wants to write fanfic for T.P. so I can keep the good ol brain engine working and to give you guys some entertainment AAAH.
Enough of this SHTUPID RAMBLIN ALDREADY Sammy....*goes out kicks a dog, gets himself on an adrenalin rush and comes back*
soooo; Sorry I cannot give you guys a prologue as for now I only have the character I created and one can get nowhere with one character nowadays.
But, to give you ppl a rasher.... heres a bit of somethin for y'all:
"The knights landed a an year ago. There is still no sign of the Alpha squad. Rebellious factions have arisen in the ranks of the Isorans. The knights are getting weaker, the enemies are getting stronger. The researchers are still wracking their brains on how to use the core to restore the Skylark. All in all the knights on cradle are nearing total annihilation. But, there is still a glimmer of hope. Reports of a mysterious figure carrying rather unusual actions have been registered. Some think of him as a savior, others as a threat. Nevertheless, the only viable info the Spiral H.Q. has on him is his terrifying moniker "EL DIABLO". Then, a group of young vanguards discover his true identity and with it, a conspiracy greater than the Morai wars. Friend and foe are indistinguishable and the decisions of the group will either ensure or jeopardize the existence of their species and the result of the wars threatening their existence."
This is as much of the storyline that I will give you guys FOR NOW.
And yes, this fanfic will follow lore only in places where it is possible. At other times, EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED.
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APPLICATIONS: URGENTLY NEEDED
APPLICATION REQUIREMENTS:
Knights cannot be half-breeds.
Selected knights can select their own superpower from a list that shall be provided later.
Only five star gear is allowed.
Knights are allowed to choose one specific piece of costume which will be fully functional e.g. wings will give knight ability to fly.
Knights cannot have any relations with opposing sides such as the swarm, gremlins, or other monsters.
Knights must expect the unexpected.

What I need:
- 1 Snarbolax- acquired.
- 6 knights- 3 knights acquired.
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Application Sheet:
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Name: (This is important: This name MUST be based off of your forum or in game name. For example: Nyestone would be a satisfactory name. Coolie-dude would not. e.g. if your name is like Charger Apocreos , change it to Apocreos. I will decided whether names are acceptable or not.)

Gender:

Armor: (Any armor is allowed, only one costume item allowed)

Weapons: (No obsidian weapons, no WHR. Dark retribution is allowed.)

Personality:
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I only need the bare minimum details. Now for the stats.

Stats are basically the skill points of a knight. Only fifty stats are allowed. If you go over fifty, your application will be denied. Zero IS an option, however it is strongly discouraged.

Swordsmanship:
0- Incompetent. Chop your own hand off instead of vegetables.
10: Expert. Can chop vegetables so fast and good the onlooker cant see the blade moving.

Gunning:
0: Incompetent. don't know which end the bullet comes out from .
10: Expert. Can dish out a perfect headshot to a target ten miles away while moving at 100 Isoran miles an hour .

Bombing:
0- Incompetent. Would try to eat a bomb thinking it is a fruit.
10: Expert. Can pop an electron vortex into Lord Vanaduke's mouth while hanging upside down..

Vitality/Endurance/Stamina:
0: For people who can be knocked on their butt by a breeze.
10: Suggested for people who can defeat The Hulk single handedly.

Intelligence:
0: What are alphabets???.
10: Father of Stephen Hawking.

Speed:
0: Slow as a dying snail.
10: Did you just teleport???.

Cunning: (Problem solving abilities)
0: Simpleton.
10: Father of a Genius.

Agility:
0: Slower than a stunned lumber.
10: Can bend 180* without breaking a single bone.

Biography:

All of these are out of 10. e,g. 7/10 on speed.
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CAST:
Xteri - Snarbolax
Coolie-Dude - knight(steve)
Hexslash - knight[Dokanya(Dok)]
Redacted-Sanity - knight(Tyrel)
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LORE/MECHANIC CHANGES:
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Captain Ozlo is leader of the Spiral Order.
Tinkinzar is killed by EL DIABLO.
100 Energy costs 100 crowns.
Wounds are healed by special field medics keep them safe.
EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED

Mon, 05/25/2015 - 10:58

Eliott-Shane

MEMERSHIP

JOIN QUICK ONLY SIX KNIGHTS
ONE SNARBOLAX
ONE ALMIRIAN STARSHIP COMMANDER ZOMBIE
APPLICATIONS ARE OPEN

Thu, 05/28/2015 - 21:45

Xteri

How does one write an app for a snarbolax?

Name: Growl GroWl grrr (Xteri)
Stats:
-Swordsmanship:...?
-Gunning:...?
-Bombing:...?!
-Vitality/Endurance/Stamina:10/10
-Intelligence: 10/10
-Speed: 10/10
-Cunning: 10/10
-Agility: 10/10

Gender: Female.
I am actually going to do this again with swordsmanship being attack power and finesse.

Name: Growl GroWl grrr (Xteri)
Stats:
-Attack power and finesse:9/10
-Gunning:...?
-Bombing:...?!
-Vitality/Endurance/Stamina:9/10
-Intelligence: 8/10
-Speed: 8/10
-Cunning: 8/10
-Agility: 8/10

Gender: Female.

Bio: When Xteri was a puppy, she was abducted by a group of science gremlins for use in their project Compound 42. while testing on her they accidentally overdosed the stun medication that kept her calm. she then became comatose and the gremlins dumped her down the trash shoot. Xteri lived in the sealed trash dump for four years, slowly mutating into an Inferno Snarbolax. when the knights attacked and blew up the compound, a group of them took pity on her and nursed her back to top condition. she has been friendly towards knights and other passive creatures ever since. Her favourite pastime is to wait until a snipe lands on her face, then to stare at it cross-eyed until it goes away.

:P(Spell check thinks Snarbolax is Sunblock)

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 00:09

Eliott-Shane

How does one write an app for a snarbolax?

you give your character name, your chosen stats and a character biography is mandatory for all character applications

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 00:11

Eliott-Shane

about the snarbolax

xteri, give me a biography and your application will be selected

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 00:13

Eliott-Shane

max stats

and yes, max stats are fifty not forty

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 12:40

Eliott-Shane

PEOPLE OF THE WORLD

PLEASE POST YOUR APPLICATIONS WE ARE LOOKING FOR FIVE KNIGHTS AND AN ALMIRIAN STARSHIP COMMANDER ZOMBIE.
-SAMMY OUT.

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 21:08

Hexlash

I love your enthusiasm

Name: Dokanya

Gender: Female

Armour: Salamander Suit, Wyvern Scale Helm

Weapons: Wildfire, Radiant Sun Shards

Personality: She is friendly, always with a smile ready for a friend. Strives to please others. Due to this, she may seem unnaturally friendly, and too accommodating to everyone.

Swordsmanship: 4

Gunning: 7

Bombing: 7

Vitality/Endurance/Stamina: 6

Intelligence: 6

Speed: 7

Cunning: 5

Agility: 6

Tue, 05/26/2015 - 23:09

Coolie-Dude

Well I guess I am one of the first three entries!!!

Name: Steve
Gender: Male
Armor: Vog cub set, Heavenly wings
Weapons: Glacius, Blitz needle, Stagger storm
Personality: Steve is a calm knight, not too aggressive and fierce and invincible during action
Swordsmanship: 8/10
Gunning: 7/10
Bombing: 6/10
Vitality/Endurance/Stamina: 5/10
Intelligence: 9/10
Speed: 4/10
Cunning: 7/10
Agility: 4/10
Biography: My knight was born in a poor family who were searching for the strongest element in the universe when my spaceship got hit my meteoroid. My father being a scientist but a poor man, thought it was the end of their family so they sent me in a capsule to an unknown planet where I could make a carrier and one day will surely find the element. I grew up fighting with different monsters, some small some big, some short some long, some weak some strong, some weird so some cool! My life was a risking life but one of the adventurous one!! One day the day came to defeat the all mighty King of Ashes for which I had done a lot for this day to arrive. Defeating was very tough though, but from then on my post from a recruit went up to Vanguard!!! And this was how from then my knight is just roaming around helping different kinds of people who are in need of help……… Thank you!!

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 16:12

Redacted-Sanity

Name: Tyrel "Vandal"

Name: Tyrel "Vandal" Imperozzo

Gender:

Male

Armor:

Skolver Coat

Divine Veil [Functional Skill - The Halo serves as a sonar receiver that can reveal most entities on the map, but to an even better extent so as to analyze weak points and reveal known information about a target, if need be.]

Grey Owlite Shield

Weapons:

Cold Iron Vanquisher

Master Blaster

Personality:
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He's very...human, to say the least. He lacks a good deal of self-preservation, but that's reserved for greater dangers. He will still fear, love, hate, respect, and strive to at least KNOW the world around him like any person will. In that sense, he has no qualities that make him unique.

Except for the fact that he might be as almost as old as Ozlo or Feron. He doesn't have that strategical wisdom most men his age do, but he still makes himself useful as a brother and father figure. It's the only thing he could do for those fallen on Isora.

Stats:

Sword : 5

Gun : 6

Bomb : 5

Stamina : 6

Intelligence : 8

Speed : 7

Agility : 7

Cunning : 6

Bio :

Tyrel got the name "Vandal" not because he was into destroying and desecrating others' property, but rather, the futures he built up during the Morai War by going above and beyond his objectives. Certainly, he was CAPABLE of doing so for many others, and more often than not he did when the fighting became quite rough, but in reality, it wasn't something he was proud of.

He always preferred being a Geo Knight or a Biotech, but for all the intelligence in the world, he couldn't bother himself to solve simple questions. Complex ones, sure, but he had this horrible habit of getting ahead of himself...

It was because of his smarts and spontaneous resourcefulness on the field, then, that carried him to the Vanguard. Second only to Parma as a Recon Knight, Vandal also doubly functioned as a skilled point-man and espionage expert during military operations; his contributions directly aided with the full evacuation of Knights from "hot zones", the elimination of some in the Morai chain of command, etc.

By then, though, his reputation had risen so that he could finally set up to retire and settle down. This one last mission would be one he could look forward to, besides the drinks and possibly the ladies that were coming after...

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 05:51

#10

Eliott-Shane

GUYS GUYS GIRLS

please post your biography's, also, you will be given your fully functional costume pieces after you have posted your biography's(only applicable to knights). only one piece of costume per knight.
the ones left are as follows:
1. heavenly wings(give user ability to fly)- assigned to Steve
2. red prismatic glow eyes(can shoot lasers)-assigned to Dokanya
3. field goggles(mapping terrain know where things are on the map)-Assigned to Tyrel
4. divine halo(limited psychic powers)
5. energy canteen(makes you stronger than the hulk for an hour)
6. the strongest knight will be given lionheart honor blade( can shoot super powerful lasers and is the most powerful blade on the list

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 05:57

#11

Eliott-Shane

GOOD NEWS FOR Y'ALL

@ Hexslash- application accepted your character will be called Dok by her buddies.
@ Redacted-Sanity- application accepted, to make your knights name better, i changed it from Tyre to Tyrel.
@ Coolie-Dude- application accepted, though the biography covers almost 1/4 of the story, you need to shorten it.

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 06:02

#12

Eliott-Shane

SORRY GUYS

WE NO LONGER REQUIRE AN ALMIRIAN STARSHIP COMMANDER ZOMBIE

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 07:36

#13

Redacted-Sanity

Edited.

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 08:22

#14

Eliott-Shane

UHHHHHH

@redacted sanity, the morai wars are not over. they will be a part of this fanfic, please edit that, rest all is awesome

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 11:21

#15

Xteri

I added a bio to Xteri.

Wed, 05/27/2015 - 16:13

#16

Redacted-Sanity

Check again too!

Thu, 05/28/2015 - 11:40

#17

Eliott-Shane

GOOD JOB

Good job guys. Xteri, i really like the idea of an inferno snarbolax. though, she will be on the good side. all apps are for the good side u see. anyways, the snarbolax gets to keep everything with a bonus. though this was not supposed to happen, since you said that the snarby was subject to experiments, it can mutate at will with its power gem to suit her surroundings (specialised costume accsessory for the snarby)

Thu, 05/28/2015 - 11:41

#18

Eliott-Shane

IMPERATIVELY FOR THE WORLD

PLEASE GUYS WE ARE TAKING ALL APPLICATIONS. WE REQUIRE 3 KNIGHTS. SPECIFICATIONS ARE GIVEN ABOVE.

Thu, 05/28/2015 - 21:52

#19

Xteri

I am a ginger, I want to eat your soul

Minor edits and a large pile of snacks have been added.

Sat, 05/30/2015 - 04:47

#20

Eliott-Shane

cummon people

CUMMON PEOPLE WE NEED APPS. STOP PROCASTINATING AND START POSTING

Sat, 05/30/2015 - 04:49

#21

Eliott-Shane

HEY GUYS

WE NEED TO FILL UP THE APPS TO SATR WRITING. SO, I HEREBY DECALRE:
POSTING MULTIPLE APPLICATIONS BY THE SAME PERSON IS NOW ALLOWED

Sat, 05/30/2015 - 04:49

#22

Eliott-Shane

HEY GUYS

WE NEED TO FILL UP THE APPS TO SATR WRITING. SO, I HEREBY DECALRE:
POSTING MULTIPLE APPLICATIONS BY THE SAME PERSON IS NOW ALLOWED

Sat, 05/30/2015 - 06:53

#23

Snakey-One

APP!

@Sammy 1. Do I know you? 2. It feels like intelligence and cunning are the same thing. Same with agility and speed.

Name: Coatl Uno (FANCY TRANSLATION OF MY USERNAME (Is that allowed?))

Gender: Male

Armor: Wears a Vog Cub set for attack speed increase, given the weapons he uses, but his costume armor is a shadow flak jacket with a shogun helmet. He doesn't use a shield and is usually classified as a Berserker. My request for the functional costume is the energy canteen (MWAHAHAHAHA)

Weapons: Coatl is infamous for using almost all of the "Heaviest" heavy weapons, which are, in order of which one he likes to use the most, Sudaraska, Gran Faust, Divine Avenger, Triglav.

Personality: Coatl is generally very kind, but if you become his enemy, he will hunt you down forever until he can crush you into a gory mound of bones. If you become his friend, he will defend you to his last breath.

Stats:
Sword: 10
Gun: 0
Bomb: 0
Stamina: 10
Intelligence: 5
Speed: 10
Agility: 10
Cunning: 5

Bio: Coatl was abandoned at a young age, and he misses his parents very much, even though they had abandoned him. He was found by Ozlo, and was quickly trained in the art of combat, preferably swords. While Coatl was quite proficient at using lighter weapons and the flourish line, he chose to go the road less travelled, he chose to use heavy swords only, a big leap for some knights. Then, he climbed the ranks until he was a vanguard, and he often completes his adoptive father's assignments.

Sun, 05/31/2015 - 21:32

#24

Hexlash

Weeeelllllll, technically, it can be said that agility would be akin more to the ability to manipulate one's body motions with ease, while speed merely refers to how quickly the person is able to move about.

Cunning would be more the ability to apply skills in a clever manner in any situation, while intelligence would be the quantity of factual knowledge someone has, or their ability to learn.

But in this case, it really is somewhat redundant =P

Wed, 06/03/2015 - 06:28

#25

Eliott-Shane

sheesh

comeon people we need 2 more apps to star. start posting aldready and as i said now posting multiple apps is allowed

Wed, 06/03/2015 - 06:28

#26

Eliott-Shane

sheesh

comeon people we need 2 more apps to star. start posting aldready and as i said now posting multiple apps is allowed

Thu, 06/04/2015 - 08:56

#27

Xaurian

You could always just let things happen naturally instead of, you know, flooding the forums with adverts. The last time someone tried that it caused a huge flame war in the Treasure Vault.

Point is, don't do things like that.

Tue, 06/16/2015 - 05:00

#28

Eliott-Shane

announcement

guys guys guys I cant start if the applications arent full. Thanks oroseira but the fact is that if you want the people to come to you naturally then you must try to stay at the top of the first page and since i cant write anything till apps are full so i wrote please join i will change that

Fri, 06/19/2015 - 12:03

#29

Eliott-Shane

hey there

same old thing pls join and i will also be leaking a teeny weeny bit of the story tommorow so read up:)

Fri, 06/26/2015 - 11:03

#30

Moonlight-Traveler

You know...

Keeping at the top of the page doesn't do anything for getting people to apply. Giving them a reason to apply (such as a good start for the story) is how you get people to give applications.

I just realized my thread died.

Curse you short trips.

Wed, 07/22/2015 - 09:19

#31

Coolie-Dude

Guys please fill in your applications!!!!

Good evening fellow knights!!!!
I am Coolie-Dude from the guild- Empire and Eliott Shane's best friend and i was the one to tell him about Spiral Knights.
Eliott Shane being an experienced player thought of creating a fanfic for y'all thinking that he would be getting more n more applications but you all guys are just skipping this fanfic...... Guys atleast read this fanfic fill in your applications as soon as possible.....! We need 3 more applications thats it and guys pls co-operate with me and him.....

Magmarce pls dont worry about that we all will work together as one nd will help your thread come to the first page of the forums but i need ur application to help my friend Elioot shane to get his tsory ready for y'all!!

Wed, 07/22/2015 - 16:22

#32

Falminar

Really?

Saying "Seriously people start posting apps!" won't make people post apps.

And neither will saying that everyone else's fanfics are pointless and that this is the only fanfic that really matters won't help either. (Talking to Coolie here.)

One more thing, not about the spamming about posting apps here, but about the actual fanfic here - 100 energy = 100 crowns? That just makes the entire energy system pointless. That means crowns are worth exactly the same amount as energy and the energy system is only to make knights have to waste a bit of extra time exchanging stuff. Even if the energy is still necessary because of the story (and how it's, well, energy, and crowns can't be used for the same things as energy, and it wouldn't normally be found in the same places), I still think it should cost more than that.

Thu, 07/23/2015 - 21:12

#33

Critzer

Im dissappointed

This is pitiful, to post shit like this: http://imgur.com/9JFqjcn

To do that on someone's thread is so disrespectful and disappointing. If you really need characters, make your own, not all fanfics cant have all reader created chars and fanfics that do this definitely dont deserve the work people put into their chars.

I have been here a while and this is the most disappointed I have ever been with something to be posted on the treasure vault. You either wait for characters and leave other people's thread alone, or you deal with it yourself and make your own characters to fill in.
END OF STORY.

Sat, 08/01/2015 - 20:17

#34

Moonlight-Traveler

Sheesh....

I leave for a few months and this thread is STILL here.

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EL DIABLO: Victorinox De Angelo [Fanfiction] APPLICATIONS URGENTLY NEEDED AND NOW ACCEPTING