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Spiral Knights: The Story so far... ( as we know)

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Thu, 07/02/2015 - 20:37
Fireherat's picture
Fireherat

I decide to make a storyline what happending so far in Sk since for a new player who confused about the story it be easier for them to learn.
I decide to base it off from the Cutsense you get From FF13-2 ( ff= Final fastasy ) when you laod your game.

i hope this cleans up some of the storylien for new and old players

" As we know th spiral knights arrive on cradle after escaping from the great war and crash landing due to some magicical or something like force. you soon come to exit your pod and explain the new world you landed on, As you come on you meet Rhode a Knight that lso surive the landing. He soon sents you to the rescue camp by his suggestion, and restores power to the camp due to your help. you meet a gremlin who reserching a item ( that later on Will be God-knows imporptant). you take the item from before you restore power, then you remeet him on a trail to haven, A safe place for kngiths to rejoin at, he takes the item back and then does a explodion so big it sets the place on fire. You kill the Gremlin and douse out the flames, Soon you reach haven and you soon learns of what it new on this planet. Soon after you gain knowledge of a robotic pet called a battle sprite, you go on mission learning about each compation and soon takes one for your self. you then fights a robot that been stealing the Bs ( shortcut version). then you learn of a beast known as the snarblox on the tier 1, you conquer this beast and finds a recon moudle left by a member of the Alpha squad A Super elite squad that was sent first to explore cradle and has been missing ever since. as you go into Tier 2 you fight the king of jelly the Jelly king, then it comes to your attendion that Gremlins ( a Race that was there before you ) Are building war machines known in game as the twins.

You then move int Tier 3 and fights the King of a cursed kingdom vanaduke of firestorm citdel. Soon after your promoted to the highest rank of the spiral order, vanguard, You then starting meeting strange creatures that soon are called the swarms, They asborb monsters of the planet and make it their own. Meanwhile a Gremlin member known as Herez that eariler who stole the item thats is discovered to be a key to opening the core of the planet, somethng the knights been trying to do to leave the planet. They soon after fighting the Swarm of found a scount of the alpha team recon, She explains how they were taken into the core by a God? or Powerful alien entity Known as the Sleeper and how the sarm are attacking the sleeper and the being is losing power and how leaving the core close will in someway kinda save the sleeper ( this starting to sound like the plot of Destiny ) After you leave, you and the spiral order discuss the events and how Gave up their lives to save the sleeper.....

To be Contuion,

So how you guys like my Story line summary? let me know if i made a mistake.

( i havnt played the new vanguard mission , so i may have made some mistake at the end.)

i will update the story when i learn more

Thu, 07/02/2015 - 21:51
#1
Sir-Henry-Cooldown's picture
Sir-Henry-Cooldown
Pretty hard to read, brosef...

The amount of misspellings and grammar errors is astounding. Overwhelming, even, to a point where I can't read. e_e Also, all of this is literally is said directly by other NPCs to you, the player, so I really don't think it's necessary for your purpose of writing it; it isn't really vague. If it was something like Dark Souls with hidden lore, then it would be fine.

Sorry for the tone, just supportive criticism. And, er... your web browser should come with Spell-Check, so use it with every fiber and molecule of your being.

Fri, 07/03/2015 - 01:03
#2
Thunder-The-Bright's picture
Thunder-The-Bright
algorithms are the solutions to any problem.

english is probably not your native language. you want to spellcheck every sentence you wrote. was that google translate?
and was that a reference to FFXIII-2?

Fri, 07/03/2015 - 06:36
#3
Fireherat's picture
Fireherat
Funny you say that thunder....

Because English IS my native language. Also my goood chrome got corruted somehow so im using internet explorer until i find a way to fix Chrome...
Also the idea i got it from was from FFXll-2.Yeah when i fix google chrome i will use spell check try to it fix as much as possicble.

Fri, 07/03/2015 - 07:46
#4
Bopp's picture
Bopp
copy and paste?

Maybe try editing your post in a different program (a text editor or word processor) and then pasting it into this thread.

Also, you might want to read earlier threads about the plot, for example through a Google search such as plot lore site:forums.spiralknights.com.

Fri, 07/03/2015 - 11:24
#5
Fishysh's picture
Fishysh
this aint interesting...

Aside from the spelling errors, this isn't deep enough, you're practically just saying what your knight does, as when you're in tier 1, Herex is already plotting etc. And, the knights don't crash from a magical force, they get shot down, probably by gremlins, or by The Sleeper itself (to save it???) Herex is the one behind the swarm, and you just don't *stumble* upon it. The mission Crimson Chaos? There seem to be gremlins who are trying to find an antidote for Herex's poison, this is even in an earlier mission also, but were killed by Herex's minions, the Ghostmane Stalkers. The swarm doesn't absorb the monsters from the planet either >.< I could go on and on, but ill stop there.

Fri, 07/03/2015 - 21:12
#6
Fireherat's picture
Fireherat
Well....

I haven't Played the New Vanguard missions and it been a LONG time since i did the earlier missions so i could have made some mistakes ok?

Sat, 07/04/2015 - 09:12
#7
Vohtarak-Forum's picture
Vohtarak-Forum
I'm vohtarak, call me by that name

Don't try making a storyline if you don't remember and/or haven't completed the story
And especially don't make one without proofreading

Sat, 07/04/2015 - 17:18
#8
Skepticraven's picture
Skepticraven
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@Oohnorak

Good "you gotta proofread" posts should contain correct capitalization and punctuation.

Sun, 07/05/2015 - 10:33
#9
Vohtarak-Forum's picture
Vohtarak-Forum
I'm vohtarak, call me by that name

The point was to make it readable, not to make it perfect

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