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Max Maybuttock's Epic Adventures!!!!

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Mon, 07/06/2015 - 05:41
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Snarby-Slasher

Chapter 1.0-Max The Loser

Max is a 13 year old who goes to school. He is a total nerd, no one talks to him, and he sits on the last bench.
One typical boring day at school. As usual, Max is getting bullied and teased because of his last name. The. He finds a Nanobot. He didn't know what it was, he thought it was a toy. Max thinks, 'What is this? Oh, it's free! Let's take it home!'. He puts the Nanobot in his Barbie backpack(such a loser).

Max goes to his home. It's his own house but he feels at home in his garden shed(that's where he does all his crazy experiments). He opens his Barbie backpack and takes out the toy. Atleast, he thinks it's a toy. He pushes the start button. BOOM! He blew a hole in his desk! The Nanobot is lying on the floor. Suddenly, the Nanobot jumps up and is hovering in the air. It's single eye is glowing red. Then it turns green.'Max.', the Nanobot says.'I've been sent from the planet Jargononsensolazoid to help you in your missions.'. Max is shocked! 'How can the toy fly???',he thinks.(he really is a dumbass)

'Max, I'm a Nanobot. I'm a robot designed by future scientists that is like a very powerful Personal Assisstant for knights in the Jargononsense Order that bring glory to Jargononsensolazoid. I am here to help you with your missions.'
'Oooooo, I can play with this thingie. After all, it's free.', Max thinks.'I am naming you JargoBot.', he says. What Max does not know is that he is about to be given a very big responsibility. He was chosen as the saviour of Jargononsensolazoid.

-----End Of Chapter One-----

Chapter 2.0- JargoBot

'That toy is strange.', thought Max. 'I wonder what it does......'.'MAX!!!! You have to tell me what to do!!!', said Bot.'Strange.....', thought Max again. 'I'm making a call to the Chief Commander of Jargononsensolazoid. He'll know what I have to help you with.
'I'm sorry but I can't play with you anymore.', said Max. 'I have to go to school'. 'I will have to come with you.' 'Ok, get in my bag.'
In Max's school toys are not allowed but he is dumb so he listens to Bot.

'School, school, school everyday! Oh when will I get out of here!', exclaims Max. Frankie, the class bully, comes over to Max's. 'Hey dumbutt!' says Frankie. 'Having fun? Now where's my lunch money?'. 'Uh-oh.', thought Max. He gave his lunch money to Frankie and his goons every school day. And when he didn't, he'd have to pay for it with a wedgie and a punch in the stomach.

'Hey F-f-Frankie I've got a g-gift for you.', he says. He takes out the JargoBot and turns it on. Frankie laughs. He turns toward one of his goons and says, 'Now do I want this dumbutt's stupid toy?' 'I want MONEY!!!', he shouts at Max. Then, an incident that changes Max's attitude towards life forever. JargoBot says, 'Master, are these humans bothering you?'. He says,'Yes but what will a small toy like you do?'. Bot's single eye turns red. Then he turns towards the bullies and a paintball gun comes out of his Action pod(will explain later) and wreaks HAVOC on the bullies. ' What the WHAT!!!!!', says Frankie in utter astonishment. 'You will pay for this!!!!!', he says while running away.

Bot looks at Max. His eye turns green. 'Mission accomplished', Bot says. 'What are you......' thinks Max. Ever since JargoBot came Max is thinking a lot. 'I have to show you to Hanna.'

-----End of Chapter 2-----

Snarby

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 05:43
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Snarby-Slasher
How do you think it was?

This is my first story I have written that I have published somewhere(though it's just a game forum). Did you like it? Please tell me if you want more!!!
Also, how do we make a link to a specific part of text in a thread or to a specific comment? Please help!!!

Snarby

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 06:03
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Matikclocker
To mark a comment, click on

To mark a comment, click on comment number.
Then copy the link.
Then do < a href = blahblah.com > Text < / a > but without spaces.
Btw you use a nanobot character. If this "JargoBot" will have the same properties as Nanonizer then I will kill you.

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 08:10
#3
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Snarby-Slasher
I have no idea what Nanonizer is

Btw thanks for the info!

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 08:31
#4
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Matikclocker
No problem. In case of

No problem.

In case of Nanonizer, he is a nanobot engineer that aids Matikclocker wherever he goes.
Nanonizer is yellow in appearance and with green eyes. His eye color suggests is mood.
Green - Happy, Red - Angry, Yellow - Stunned, Blue - Sad.
When he sleeps Nanonizermbecomes transparent.
He repairs the robots and constructs advanced tech and units.

Remember, if this JargoBot will also be an engineer like Nanonizer then I'm gonna kill you.

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 08:48
#5
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Snarby-Slasher
That eye color thing I'll have to change

I had just the same things in my mind :(

Mon, 07/06/2015 - 10:39
#6
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Matikclocker
There is some problem with MagicLocker.

Who is MagicLocker?
By the way I will keep an eye on this story.

Tue, 07/07/2015 - 03:19
#7
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Boneblinder
YES!

Snarby-Slasher has finally written an auto-biography...

Tue, 07/07/2015 - 08:42
#8
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Snarby-Slasher
Response

@Matik It's a typo. Will fix it right away.

@Bone I did not write it like an autobiography. You can clearly see that I'm the narrator and the main protagonist is Max. Please read carefully.

Tue, 07/07/2015 - 08:45
#9
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Snarby-Slasher
And my real life name is

And my real life name is Butterfrumper as I posted on the Gremlin Chatter forum thread.

Wed, 07/08/2015 - 03:11
#10
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Snarby-Slasher
Chapter 2 coming today!

Chapter 2 coming today!

Edit: Chapter 2 published.

Fri, 07/17/2015 - 03:47
#11
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Boneblinder
Look up the word "sarcasm" on

Look up the word "sarcasm" on the net.

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