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Clockarama - Stupid stories starring OVC Industries

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Tue, 08/11/2015 - 07:00

Matikclocker

I was bored. That's why I created this.
Read the silly short chapters of Clockarama, where lots of silly things can happen.
From The Artakat turning into a Silkwing with a magic wand to Energyload getting launched by O.P.Lasma.
Everything can happen in Clockarama - Stupid stories with OVC Industries!

CHAPTER LIST
Chapters in bold are favored by community.
Season 1: The Random Beginning (Name states it all)

Chapter 1: Send Halp! (O.P.Lasma rejecting help to Plasmanator)
Chapter 2: Shut the Gear Up! (Nanonizer created a monster, but constantly waking up Plasma Bros.)
Chapter 3: What's up in Megajet? (Matik2002 throws a space party. Tinder tells how the parties go)
Chapter 4: Stay on key, Charge! (Heavyduty playing the guitar)
Chapter 5: Burning AIE! Facility (Destroying Awesome Insurance Eagle)

Season 2: Moola's End (Destorying Moola)

Chapter 6: The Preparation (Battle preparation)
Chapter 7: Onto the WAR (Fight against Multisaurs)
Chapter 8: The Boss (Moola appears)
Chapter 9: Scary Fact (Moola reveals her hidden secret)
Chapter 10: TX-1 Finish-upper (MEGABOT)

Season 3: Peace away! (A new threat to OVC Industries)

Chapter TX-1: Stupid Meteor!
Chapter 12: Cucumber and Devilite?
Chapter 13: Do Not Threat!
Chapter 14: Megasnarb Battle
Chapter 15: Captured!

Season 4: Raid Earth! (Matikclocker and his squad on Earth)

Chapter 16: Space Travel
Chapter 17: Crash Landing
Chapter 18: Arty UP Here!
Chapter 19: Overclocked work
Chapter 20: Back to Megajet!

Season 5: Engineers from Ravion (The Great Ravion War in a nutshell)

Chapter 21: Rise of the OP
Chapter 22: Pressure Under Mainframe
Chapter 23: Sub down!
Chapter 24: Unleashing Alpha
Chapter 25: Imminent Victory
- Part 1: Payload, Hammer, Muffins
- Part 2: The Giant Cannon of Death and Stuff
- Part 3: Laser Maniacs
- Part 4: Glorious Helicopter

Season 6: Clinked Finale (The fall of OVC Industries)

Chapter 26: Dastardly Mob
Chaoter 27: The Big Retaliation
Chapter 28: Battle of Clink
Chapter 29: Final Destruction
Chapter 30: End of the Industries
- Part 1: OVC in Ruin
- Part 2: Wasteland
- Part 3: No more Clockonium
- Part 4: The Deactivation

((The Random Beginning was a little bit too chaotic. Seasons 2 onward are organised.))

Sun, 08/23/2015 - 00:51

Matikclocker

Chapter 1: Send Halp!

Meet the Plasma Brothers.
The brothers are: Plasmanator and Over Power Lasma.

Plasmanator is a disciple in launching deadly Plasma at others.
He trains by firing at flying things and other robots.
Likes to play with Railer, the rail gun robot.

Over Power Lasma (shortly Over or O.P.Lasma), the Plasma Tank proves that Plasma is overpowered by destroying other robots. He is deadly, but watch out, if you say that Plasma should be nerfed then you might see the red menace coming for you!

---STORY---
Planet: Cradle
Time: 00:00 am
Event: Hunger Games
Location: Forest Quicksands

"I am Plasmanator, the king of Plasma and beware trees! I am coming!"
Plasmanator was riding around shooting trees, when he suddenly stopped.
He was sinking slowly. When Plasmanator saw what's under him...
He realised he is in a quicksand. He panicked for a while.
"Oh my god! I am normally stuck!" Plasmanator tried to get out.

Unfortunately he didn't get out. Plasmanator tried to call O.P.Lasma for help
He screamed "SEND HALP!" continuously .
Then he screamed "NEED HELP! I AM STUCK!"
After nobody responded he screamed "O.P.LEASE HALP!"

Now let's go to O.P.Lasma.

Time: 00:10 am
Location: Teddy Plains

O.P.Lasma was looking at the sky.
"Ah, it's so cute day, stars are shining..."
O.P.Lasma kept looking at the sky.
"When you look at the stars, you remind yourself of your home..."
After a while O.P. heard Plasmanator.

O.P. said, "My brother needs help?!"
He looked for a while, shrugged and returned to looking.
"Nobody cares about trouble when you look at the sky."

Time: 08:30 am
Location: Teddy Plains

Plasmanator, in some way, got out of the quicksand.
But he is enraged because his brother failed to help.
He ran to O.P.Lasma and slapped him.
He said, "Y U DIDN'T HELP ME?!" (Why you didn't help me?)
O.P.Lasma said, "Nobody cares last night."

Suddenly, O.P.Lasma exploded because of Plasmanator.
Plasmanator killed him. Then he took his head to the forest.

Time: 09:00 am
Location: Forest Quicksands
Plasmanator dropped O.P.Lasma into the quicksand.
"Let's see how will you feel there! Haha!" said Plasma.
THE END

Sun, 08/23/2015 - 11:58

Matikclocker

Chapter 2: Shut the Gear Up!

Meet Nanonizer.

Nanonizer is an engineer of Overclocked Industries and Matik Co.
His origin was during the Great Ravion War between Matikclocker and Luggy.
The nanobots healed so many people so they got tired and merged to one nanobot creature.
The Nanonizer. He can heal 7 people simultaneously at 50 Parts Per Second.
He doesn't know how to fight, but when he wields armor he gets deadly.

---STORY---
Planet: Clink
Time: 01:30
Location: OVC Industries

Nanonizer was tinkering inside his lab.
He put NanoRadio to max to listen how to make a weapon alive.
A song was playing from NanoRadio.
"Put a gear and spin that wheel,
Pick a muffler and blow up through it.
No scopes, no drops, no MLG,
You made a bullet alive!

AND TEST!"

Nanonizer activated the AK47 which was shooting at targets.

Meanwhile Plasmanator was sleeping. He heard NanoRadio.
"Why I got placed near his tinkering room..?"

After he heard shots, he finally got mad.
"O.P.Lasma, wake up! We need to investigate!"
O.P. was snoring.
"ZzzzZZzzzz... Plasma in your face... "
The he fired plasma at Plasmanator.

"Again?" Plasmanator decided to get to Nanonizer alone.
Plasmanator came to Nanonizer tinkering room.
His room was protected by a blast door, so Plasma overclocked Plasma reload time.
Suddenly a heavy teddy bear crushed him.
"PlushyAntiCheat reminds: Do Not Hack!" said the teddy bear then he went to Plasmanator room.

Plasmanator started firing plasma at the blast door.
--- 30 minutes later... ---
The blast door suddenly became a forcefield due to excessive plasma.

Time: 03:30

Plasmanator finally got to the room.
"What are you doing! Shut the Gear Up!" said Plasmanator.
From other room he heard, "Plasma in your face!"
Then suddenly plasma exploded in his face.

O.P.Lasma came, crushed Plasmanator and took him to their room.
Plasmanator was disappointed, because O.P.Lasma forced him to go to bed.
He also couldn't go out, because O.P. set up Tesla Blades around his bed.

THE END!

Tue, 08/11/2015 - 07:54

Matikclocker

Chapter 3: What's up in Megajet?

Meet Tinder.

She is a fairy residing Tankobo, one of Clink's moons.
Supported by Tanker and her pack from Tankobo nothing stands in their way!
She got the job as a medic in Matik Co. Tinder knows how to surprise people by entering battlefield.
Tinder hid the fact that she is a fairy to become a medic. Nobody in Matik Co. knows that.

---STORY---
FT-170 Megajet is a powerful starship usually escorting crew to other planets or to throw a stupid space party.
And this happened. Matik2002 threw a stupid space party inside the Megajet.
Matik Co. Members started singing like they never were on singing lessons. Really.
While the tryhards singed, Tinder was then curing Mike, the Matik Co. Sniper.

Tinder: I told you not to go on that party! Previous party murdered count, 1, 2, 3, 5 members!
Mike: That was one time, don't be such a baby!
Tinder: You want to know why I never go on Matik's parties? Because at the end of party Matik pulls out flamethrowers, screams "WHAAA?! PARTY ENDED?!" and runs around burning everybody. Once he detonated a dynamite to destroy Boolean Asteroid. And I had to cure 25 people in 24 hours! I usually heal 1 person a hour and I didn't manage to cure the 25th one!
Mike: Don't think like Matik murders people through parties! UnkindGraph will stop him!
Tinder: Nope. UnkindGraph must to pilot the Megajet so he has no time to halt Matik's destructive nature!
--5 seconds later--
Matik2002: PARTY ENDED?! NUUUUUUUUUUU! *attacks people with flamethrowers*
Tinder: Well, I told you that this will be a "cool" finish.
THE END

Tue, 08/11/2015 - 08:20

Matikclocker

Chapter 4: Stay on key, Charge!

Meet The Robot Trio.
Matikclocker, Energyload and Heavyduty Charge.
I won't be telling you who they are because you know them well!

---STORY---
It's been a rough time for OVC Industries.
Heavyduty Charge played on guitar.
Wanna know why rough? Because Charge always messes up with the notes.

Heavyduty Charge: Clocker is the king of the Yorkshire...
Matikclocker: Stay on key, Charge!
Heavyduty Charge: And he was screaming out loud...
Matikclocker: What? If something bad then bye!
Heavyduty Charge: Energyload is way too big...
Energyload: Hey! Have some culture!
Matikclocker: Yeah! Stop that!
Heavyduty Charge: Because the Clocker shrinked.
And the Yorkshire squished them...
And nobody survived.
Thank you very much.
Matikclocker: Yo, wanna see the new resort?
Heavyduty Charge: Yes.
--2 hours later--
Matikclocker: *drops Heavyduty into the volcano*
THE END

Sun, 08/23/2015 - 12:03

Matikclocker

Chapter 5: Burning AIE! Facility

You wanna know who is OVC Industries rival?
It's the Awesome Insurance Eagle, aka AIE.
Their founder is Paul Benson, a very bad investor.
Paul scammed Matikclocker and he stole OVC's Internet connection, Exterratinator and Powablade.
And today it's the day where they will fall!

---STORY---
Paul was inside his office in Awesome Insurance Eagle facility.
Paul: HARRY! BRING UP OUR REPORT!
Harry went quickly to Paul.
Harry: Our retention is rising quickly thanks to these robo-dweebs which we scammed!
Paul: MICE JOB!
Harry: You mean NICE job?
Paul: NOT! MICE JOB! NOW HACK TO OVC!
Harry: I am not good at hacking, but Zeppelin is.
Paul: Get that Zeppelin and let's hack their reactororororor!
Harry: Yes SIR!

Meanwhile in OVC Industries...
Nanonizer: Sweet. You heard that? AIE wants to hack and destroy our reactor!
Matikclocker: It's OVER! We must to DESTROY THEM!
Energyload: But how? AIE is a step forward than us, they will strengthen every weak point!
Heavyduty Charge: We will do a full frontal - Whole destruction, no prisoners!
Matikclocker: Cool idea. Let's call Matik Co. if they can escort us to Earth.

Returning to the Eagles...
Harry: THIS is Barry Fingerstone AKA Zeppelin. He will hack their reactor and will self destruct it!
Paul: Ok Zep, go to this computer and crack into their corporer.
Zeppelin: Ok, master.
After a while Paul saw the familiar Megajet.
Paul: What'z this hammer?
Zeppelin: That's not the hammer, it's the spaceship. Looks like the robos came for us.
Paul: PRIPARE THE FASILITY DEFENSES!

Inside Megajet...
[Work in Progress...]
FULL FRONTAL!
Megajet fired the laser at AIE Facility.
AIE Facility fired Fasility Defenses back at the Megajet.
THE END OF SEASON 1
NEXT SEASON ANNOUNCED
TOMMOROW, SEASON
BEGINS 2 DAYS LATER

Tue, 08/11/2015 - 08:47

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Remember, don't shoot food.

5/10 It was alright...

Tue, 08/11/2015 - 10:49

Matikclocker

I can adapt to it ;)

What episode was the funniest?
1. Send Halp
2. Shut the Gear Up
3. What's up in Megajet
4. Stay on key, Charge
5. Burning AIE Facility
The most votes will be marked as [FAVORED BY COMMUNITY]

Tue, 08/11/2015 - 18:42

Kian-Slime-Master

My favorite is Burning AIE Facillity

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 08:20

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Remember, don't shoot food.

None of them were really all that funny honestly. I mean, humor is subjective so I guess maybe other people might find them funny, but I don't see what the joke is at all on chapter 2 and 5.

And why? Why is Plasmanator in the quick sand? Why did it take them 30 minutes to reach a room that was near their starting point? Are they snails in disguise? Why do they allow you to party if they know you're just going to attack everyone afterwards? Why in 24 hours? How does one buy something without buying it? Are you implying he stole it? If so, how do you steal the internet? How does Nanoizer magically know about their plan? How does one laser wipe out an entire facility? Why are not all of these why questions?

And how you're doing dialogue, why to that too. What have quotation marks done to you to make you hate them so much? Did they take that last piece of cake you were going to eat, [insert the cake is a lie meme]?

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 02:22

#10

Fight-Beetle

No.

This is just no. This is no/5. For all the reasons crazee said but more. You toss around stupid numbers that mean nothing, humor is nonexistent, and there is no satire to butter it up. I could write better.

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 05:24

#11

Matikclocker

You ban me, I ban you. You blame me, I blame you.

Fight-Beetle is no longer allowed to post in my threads*.
* = Includes Kian Slime Master's threads.

You ruined my whole threads, now I won't get ruined AGAIN.
The next season will be about your demise. For real.

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 06:40

#12

Fight-Beetle

Pfft

I gave honest criticism and you que a ban. BAN REASON ABSENT BAN NOT QUED oh come on you know that I'm not stupid. Also, when did I ruin your thread? Also... are you by any chance related to Chris-Chan? I can't possibly link you to the article about him for reasons(he only has an ED article and ED is VERY rude), but here is a SFW review of his comic.
http://badwebcomicswiki.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Sonichu

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 07:15

#13

Matikclocker

You are shaming me and

You are shaming me and scamming me to graveyard this.
You ruined my fun in this bar fight thread.
And whenever you appear you do something to graveyard my threads.

Sat, 08/15/2015 - 22:48

#14

Falminar

If you don't want stupid stories, don't go to a thread titled stupid stories.

This thread is clearly titled "Stupid stories".

-----

I liked #3 best.

Sun, 08/16/2015 - 08:09

#15

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Remember, don't shoot food.

I really don't think that making someone you dislike a villain is the correct course of action.

Tue, 08/18/2015 - 20:16

#16

Fight-Beetle

Go matik!

To tell the truth, I am bost insulted and flattered by the villian making, and I sort of want you to write it cos it sounds funny.

Wed, 08/19/2015 - 00:48

#17

Matikclocker

Mann, you won't force me to

Mann, you won't force me to do that!
I remade the Season 2. I removed Fight-Beetle because of "name and shame" and replaced with Moola.
Engineers from Ravion chapters announced.

Wed, 08/19/2015 - 06:47

#18

Teddysmacker

Hrm.

I won't sugarcoat it, but I do agree with Pi.
Also I liked the third one the most.
I do write stories myself, but the following are only suggestions if you plan on being serious about this.
1.) I mostly had trouble reading it because it looks a bit unorganized. It might be better if you did () for all actions.
For example, (He tossed him into the volcano.)
2.) The dialogue. Ya gatta make some of your characters more distinct, ya know? It can be however way ya want, but you don't wanna let your characters sound like the same dude when they're talkin'. Personality-wise too.
3.) Needs more humor. If you can't do it, make it entertaining.

I'll await your next season. Reading somebody's work is a nice way to kill time, and I like seeing how creative others can be.

Wed, 08/19/2015 - 07:35

#19

Matikclocker

Thanks Teddysmacker. Season 2

Thanks Teddysmacker.
Season 2 soon.
Clockarama 1-3 "What's up in Megajet?" receives FAVORED BY COMMUNITY tag!

Thu, 08/20/2015 - 05:22

#20

Fight-Beetle

For the love of god...

Change 'moola' back to Fight Beetle. I don't care about name n' shame but I care about someone replacing my name with something as incomprehensible as 'moola' or 'merried seinor comic'.

Thu, 08/20/2015 - 05:26

#21

Matikclocker

Why? Just WHY??

Thu, 08/20/2015 - 23:22

#22

Fight-Beetle

No, not gonna

Just continue with what you are doing and I'll sorta stay quiet. Oh and, make sure you describe how characters look like.

Thu, 08/20/2015 - 23:57

#23

Matikclocker

Season 2: Moola's End - Details

Y'all will encounter Moola, the main Matikclocker antagonist.
Moola is very big, has a dinosaur tail and has every shiny thing from the multiverse.
Here are chapters. If you don't wanna read it all, just read the TL;DR. WARNING: SPOILERS

Chapter 6: The Preparation (Clocker prepares for battle)
Chapter 7: Onto the WAR (Fighting the army)
Chapter 8: The Boss (Moola introduced)
Chapter 9: Scary Fact (Revealing of Moola's hidden genetic change)
Chapter 10: TX-1 Finish-Upper (Transformation into a megabot)

So here we go!

***CHAPTER 6***
Army is coming. It's very close.
A group of spaceships comes towards Clink.
Their behavior is unknown. But they have diamonds.
Is it one of enemy forces?
-- STORY --
Spaceships were coming to Clink.
They have a "surprise" to our robot.
Let's head over to OVC Industries.

Matikclocker checked the planet state,
Matikclocker: 'Sup guys, what's up with the Clink?
Nanonizer: No hostile creature on Clink.
Heavyduty: No attacks on the Reactor.
Energyload: Spaceships are coming to us! Perhaps hostile...
Matikclocker quickly pushed Energyload away from SpaceCam.
Matikclocker: OH MY GOD! They aren't going to tea party! They want to DESTROY US!
Everybody, PREPARE FOR DEFENSE!

*Preparation montage*
Matikclocker puts on his Cobalt Helm and reinforces his Duralloy.

Energyload prepares a belt with Tesla Axe, Tesla Blaster and Tesla Bomb.

Heavyduty Charge wields a Minigun.

Nanonizer puts on his shoulder guards.

Tinder puts on her Medigun.

Everybody come out of the base while Defensive Hail Drivers activate.

*We hope you liked the Preparation montage*
TO BE CONTINUED!

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 00:09

#24

Matikclocker

Chapter 7: Onto the WAR!

Last time on Clockarama...
Matikclocker checked the planet state, when Energyload saw spaceships!
They prepared for battle, ok let's go to the story I CAN'T STAND THE PRESSURE!

-- STORY --
Matikclocker: Look, overthere! They're landing on our planet!

Spaceships landed, when they came out. They were cosmic aliens from outer space...
They are big & scary, they have double blue tails, they are red everywhere, they're...
COSMIC DINOSAURS?!

Nanonizer: These are Multisaurs! They are the predators of the Multiverse!
Energyload: So that means...
Nanonizer: Yes. THEY'RE GONNA EAT US!
Heavyduty: Don't worry, we will destroy them!
Multisaur #1: YOU WILL BE DEFEATED! YOU ALWAYS KILLED US!

Matikclocker shrugged and accidentally hit Energyload while shrugging.
Matikclocker: WHEN?? did we kill you?
Multisaur #2: You killed one of us in year 2116!
Matikclocker: *facepalm* Blast, another future trash. DIE!

Everybody threw into the fight.
Matikclocker: DO NOT LET THEM KILL US!
Multisaur #1: NO! WE WIL-AAARRRGGHHHH!
Multisaur Commnader: WE WILL WIIIIIIAAAAAHHHHHHH!
Multisaurs: Commander is dead! RETREAT AND SEND IN OUR LEADER!

Multisaurs retreated.
TO BE CONTINUED!

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 00:21

#25

Matikclocker

Chapter 8: The Boss...

Meet Moolania Monieburger.
From confidential files that I snagged from the archives of OVC...
Moolania (shortly Moola) destroyed the Clockonium Reactor once.
The planet exploded because of Moola and Matikclocker had to recreate Clink.
Moola is half human, half Multisaur (from previous chapter).
She has 7 tails, each tail has different color forming the rainbow.
She likes to collect diamonds, flowers, she likes to collect everything the multiverse has to offer.
She also likes to partner with other enemies of Matikclocker.

Last time on Clockarama...
Matikclocker and the squad fended off Multisaurs and I forgot the rest, let's continue k?

-- STORY --
A mothership landed. The doors opened. It was a large abomination of- WAIT! This character is actually small.
But it was familiar for Matikclocker. It was... Moola.

Matikclocker: What are you doing on Clink Moola?
Moola: I am going to destroy your Reactor again!

Energyload rushed to Moola with a Tesla Axe, but suddenly she got blasted onto 2nd half of Clink.

Moola: No tesla will kill me!
Heavyduty: Ok. BATTLE!

Matikclocker fired Subatomic Machine Cannon and Rocket Multilauncher at Moola's head.

Heavyduty was reinforced by Tinder and fired Minigun + his shoulder cannons.

Nanonizer tried to dismantle Moola with Nanotech.

Currently OVC Industries was winning...
Or is it?
TO BE CONTINUED AGAIN!

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 00:44

#26

Matikclocker

Chapter 9: Scary Fact

Last time on Clockarama...
Matikclocker and his squad had to fight without Energyload.
Will they win?
-- STORY --
Moola was under attack by Clocker.
But now, she unleashed her true self...
Moola swept whole squad with her tail.

Moola: You thought the battle will be so easy? Time for scary fact!
I am a Multisaur Leader and I am one of the MULTISAURS!
NOW YOU HAVE 5 MINUTES TO SAY GOODBYE!
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Matikclocker was surprised of this discovery.
Matikclocker: Maybe, we won't lose!
Nanonizer: But we were overwhelmed by Multisaurs!
Heavyduty Charge: But we will soon die from hands of Moola!

Matikclocker showed everybody the plan to ultimately defeat Moola.
Matikclocker: THIS is a MEGABOT.
Moola hates MEGABOTS.
So if we will transform one of us into a MEGABOT...
...we will win. Gotcha?

Everybody agreed.
Moola: TIME OVER! PREPARE FOR DEATH!
Moola prepared to jump to squash Matikclocker and his base.
TO BE CONTINUED!

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 00:57

#27

Matikclocker

Chapter 10: TX-1 Finish-Upper!

Moola is one step close from destroying Clink.
Will Matikclocker save Clink from perishing?

-- STORY --
Moola jumped very high, her head was out of atmosphere, but she lived.
Energyload, after 2 hours of walking, finally reached OVC HQ.

Matikclocker: Our belowed TX-1 will become...

Then he saw Energyload coming here.

Matikclocker: ...Energyload! Do your best!
Energyload: I am tired, call me later ok?

She was about to go to OVC Industries, but one of Matikclocker's hands pulled her back.

Matikclocker: After struggling THAT long you deserve to defeat Moola.
Energyload: Ok, but on one condition.
If I will bring Moola's head, you will face the Tesla Axe.
Oh, it rhymes! You will face the Tesla Axe!

Energyload paused.
Matikclocker: Ok!
Energyload: Without armor!
Matikclocker: WHAT?!
Energyload: Chicken!
Matikclocker: Ok, I will do that.

Matikclocker prepared the TX-Ray for transforming people into Megabots.
He shot it into Energyload, causing her to become a Megabot.

Matikclocker pulled the Ultraphone.
Matikclocker: MOOLA! SOMEBODY WANTS TO SEE YOU!
HE HATES ME, MATIKCLOCKER!

Moola quickly landed.
Moola: WHO? WHERE? WHEN?
Oh no... is it...
Matikclocker: MEGABOT
Everybody: MEGABOT
Everybody were repeating MEGABOT.

Energyload fires 6 TX-1 Mega SMGs at Moola, completly dissipating her from Clink
She caught also Moola's head.
Energyload: I won. Matikclocker, you owe me one Tesla blow.

Back to OVC Industries...
Energyload: *hits Matikclocker in his face* IN YOUR FACE!
Matikclocker exploded. Then he was repaired.
Matikclocker: Well, at least there's no fiends!

Are you sure Matikclocker?
THE END OF SEASON 2!

Which episode was the best?

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 18:10

#28

Falminar

None of them

Disliked all of the ones in this group

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 18:36

#29

Kian-Slime-Master

hmm....

Moola's end:TX-1 Upper finish

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 18:43

#30

Kian-Slime-Master

Im gonna make me some stories, although since its pretty late im a little tired and it kight habe some rough edges

Yes i noticed typos, when i feel like it i will fix those

Fri, 08/21/2015 - 19:01

#31

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Remember, don't shoot food.

((Incredibly off topic but could you see if you could get Doctorspacebar to answer my question in the new kind of roleplaying game?

I don't play Machinauts and I'd rather not suddenly barge in asking a completely unrelated question about the new kind of roleplaying game without making a post actually contributing to the game.

All I need is his response and then I should be able to post soon after.))

Sat, 08/22/2015 - 08:56

#32

Matikclocker

Season 3: Peace Away! - Details

Clockarama: Peace Away! introduces Pickle-Lord and Charles.
Pickle-Lord is one of legendary knights.
Charles is a servant devilite.
They take one of OVC Employees, Carbon 6 as a threat to Clink.
But is Carbon a threat or Pickle-Lord?

Chapter 11 (AKA TX-1): Stupid Meteor! (Pickle Lord lands on Clink)
Chapter 12: Cucumber and Devilite? (Carbon and Heavyduty find out about their new guest)
Chapter 13: Do Not Threat! (Pickle-Lord takes Carbon as a foul knight)
Chapter 14: Megasnarb Battle (Matikclocker vs. Pickle Lord and his Snarbolax mount)
Chapter 15: Captured! (Capturing Pickle-Lord)

***CHAPTER TX-1***
Matikclocker, Energyload and their new recruit Fortress are hunting.
Carbon and Heavyduty are doing work.
Is it a mild day for OVC?

- Meanwhile, in outer space... -
((Crazee Pi, do you agree to make Pickle Lord talk as I will write?))

Pickle-Lord and Charles are heading towards Clink.
The fun fact is that they turned AutoCloak on.
And that's why OVC didn't know about them.

Pickle-Lord: I am PICKLE-LORD, thy most BRAVE and VIGILANT knight known to thee THINGS!
Charles: All hail my sir!

Pickle-Lord sees Clink.

Pickle-Lord: That's not Cradle. Where are we heading, my squire?!?!
Charles: I don't know!

Pickle-Lord entered Clink's atmosphere.
The asteroid was burning. Will the BRAVE and VIGILANT knight land?

- Inside OVC Industries... -
Heavyduty: No signals of flying objects incoming...
TO BE CONTINUED!

Sat, 08/22/2015 - 08:48

#33

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Uhh, you mean like this?

"Charles, can you see what are they doing? They're too far away from here," said Pickle-Lord

"Alright sir," said Charles, who went down the hill to get a closer look, "They appear to be writing a fan-fiction, about us sir."

"Really? Let me see," said Pickle-Lord, who rushed down the hill.

"I can sort of read it sir," said Charles.

"Well let me read it," said Pickle-Lord, "Brave and Vigilant, sir, Clink, Cradle, servant, wait, servant? What?"

"I think they're talking about me sir," said Charles.

"No, thou are not a servant, thou are SQUIRE CHARLES," said Pickle-Lord.

Sat, 08/22/2015 - 09:02

#34

Matikclocker

NOT AN EPISODE - OFF STORY

((So you agree to use your characters?))

Matik2002 was lurking in the distance.
He came out and started laughing.
"Ha! Servant! Squire! I should call Matik Co. and tell them!"

((Also, I am going to modify the episodes before I will start Earth Raid season.))

Sat, 08/22/2015 - 14:50

#35

Crazee-Pi-Forum

Remember, don't shoot food.

((Uhh, I guess I'll try, if that's what you mean.))

Sun, 08/23/2015 - 01:15

#36

Fight-Beetle

My review...

8/10 from whence it was 6/10. You obviously paid attention to criticism and tried to make it better. You still suffer from problems such as the chatlog-based communication and the lack of thorough descripitions, but this is good enough for me to stop disliking you. I also see you made "moola" completely different from me. Favorite in season: T-X1 upper finish. Oh and, just to clarify the best way to describe a character is so that you can figure out what they look like completely.

Sun, 08/23/2015 - 01:40

#37

Fight-Beetle

My review...

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