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Tue, 09/01/2015 - 20:50
Trymal's picture
Trymal

The knights land in cradle, their swords in hand.
But things in the clockworks, they do not understand.

They fight gorgoes and wolvers, and dangerous jellies,
But do they have guts to face scary skellies?

They walk near the gears, not knowing which way,
Then constructs destroy them, the knights they shall slay.

But still we stand, in this dangerous planet,
Just waiting for resources, so that we can scan it.

We find rescue pods, we are saved! We are free!
But it's packed with gremlins, who have a MUCH higher fee.

Many have died, from those dreadful beasts.
Especially since they're packed with cheats.

When we run away, back to our haven,
it was unguarded, and so it was taken.

And now, fellow knights, we have nowhere to stay.
So I guess we will have to just run far away.

Tue, 09/01/2015 - 21:55
#1
Trymal's picture
Trymal
lolz

who likes ma poem?

Thu, 09/03/2015 - 11:47
#2
Spetsam's picture
Spetsam
Reaction.

Your poem is nice I'd say.
Just got a compliment,now go play!

I liked how I answered the same way.
And wasn't a douche to just say "k".

I'm not a big poetry fan.
But this is really awesome man.

Should probably stop rhyming.
And lets wait for positive comments to start climbing.

Thu, 09/03/2015 - 19:47
#3
Trymal's picture
Trymal
Lol

I appreciate the comment, so make some more,
Or else I'll hit you on the floor.

I would pone ya if I wanted.
My reactions will never be daunted.

Lol, I'm kidding, go have some fun.
You do not really have to run.

If you wish it, comment again!
Please don't go away in your van.

Sat, 09/05/2015 - 14:22
#4
Falminar's picture
Falminar
Well,

I somewhat like the poem,

But I would prefer the title to rhyme...em...?

Sun, 09/06/2015 - 15:39
#5
Trymal's picture
Trymal
...

Somewhat? *Pouting lips*

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