To be perfectly honest, I don't know where to start. I've tried compiling even a simple start in my head.
Perhaps my storytelling downfall is that I don't write any of my ideas down- Maybe it is time for a change.
This story was intended to be a webcomic. No, not an SK webcomic, but I need somebody to make some comments, some friendly constructive criticism, and such, before I start making an all out series, drawn painstakingly by mouse- (Since I can't scan my drawn art...) and so on and so forth.
Feel free to make some character apps, just know full well that I do not intend to keep the Spiral Knights theme- This may start as a fanfiction, but when I'm done, It will be my story, through and through.
Here's your app sheet.
Name: (As always, this is important, but less so because I will change a lot of things in the final product.)
.Gender:
..Equipment: (Standard SK equipment, for now.)
...Custom Doodads: (New gear! Make a short and simple description of your extra items [ExI: Locket 'It carries peaceful memories of the past' [Ex_II: Enchanted Armband 'Carries a powerful magic that can be released after being charged up for a few hours.' (Like a mega buster.)
....Personality: (How does your character present xerself to others? How do they feel about themself?)
.....Bio: (This is extremely important. Please add information about the character's past experiences, ingame or out. This means that the player could have been traumatized by playing SK, or simply lost their parents, Lost an arm, or maybe even only has friends in SK.)
......CharacterBio: (This is the story of the player's character, made up, undecided, or simply simple.)
.......Pros: (What's good about your player? Are they kind-hearted? A natural leader?)
........Cons: (What's bad about your player? Are they rude, and brash? Or just too shy to do sum up the courage to make an important decision?)
Without further ado, I would like to welcome you all to Pre-Heldron.
You are the Beta Testers, so to speak, for my story.
Welcome to Heldron, sort of.
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Preview:
A: "I'm a... What do people call it... NPC?"
B: "Pffft, As if. You're trolling me, right?" B said, with a sure chuckle.
A kept silent, It wasn't her job to let someone else decide.
B: "...please tell me you're trolling me." B's mouth was askew, His eyes whirling in fear.
He scrambled to check A's Loadout, anything he could use to prove her wrong. He pressed that big, bright shiny blue button- Only to be greeted with an assaulting compilation of bright green numbers and letters; Raw code.
Sighing in frustration, he closed the window by clapping it between his hands.
B: "Alright, but what then? You're quite obviously sentient- But what good will that do you? ...You telling me won't change the fact that you can't leave this world."
A stayed silent, this time only looking at the ground, in a guilty, selfish manner.
B: "Wait, are you... Asking me to be your friend?"
B laughs loudly, and pats A on the back with force.
B: "You could have just said so!"
So, I'm a fool.
I went ahead and made this in the middle of the night, right before I needed to sleep for the long day of school ahead of me.
Between juggling school and personal time, I will try to squeeze some of this into my schedule somewhere.
On the bright side, I'll be getting my new glasses soon, so I can see what people are writing on the blackboards.
Considering a lot of us are busy, my time spent doing something else is fairly forgivable.
Apologies for the delays.
If I stop working on this for too long, remind me about it however way you wish.