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give me some advice on this concept "art style" for the spiral knights app I'm determined to make

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Fri, 03/25/2016 - 14:15
Spark-Of-Hope's picture
Spark-Of-Hope

Hello everyone I am back and from the thread title... I'm looking for criticism and advice for the way I've made for the "game" I'm making...

because you know the last tread I made was a thing....
so please comment if you got the time!
here is the link to it...
http://thesocialbomber.deviantart.com/art/Spiral-knight-head-598867813
this was made only using a mouse in adobe illustrator CS6 while I was at school took under 2 hours... I didn't really keep track of time...

(I'm not showing my progress I've done in making this app as the coding itself is a mess beyond messes and is not really a good site to be seen.... BUT I will make this app for all to see!!!!... eventually... hopefully before the end of summer?)
I'm also working on making my own game which is doing better than this so... yeah that's a thing...

(also to the people who asked for art request like months ago...I'll finish them eventually as well...)

Sun, 03/27/2016 - 17:48
#1
Canine-Vladmir's picture
Canine-Vladmir
O_O

Tha is amazing. needs moar recognition.
I have around 8 years using Photoshop and a little bit with Illustrator. First of all. Keep up the excellent work. You are an amazing illustrator.
If you dont mind, I decided to rough out the edges and give it a more polished look with a couple of edits.

Here ya go: feel free to use. You got my permission. http://oi63.tinypic.com/21kl2fa.jpg

Sun, 03/27/2016 - 18:28
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Umbra-Lunatis's picture
Umbra-Lunatis

Looks great. My only complaint , though, is that the nose area is more of a pointed shape instead of rounded like yours is.

Mon, 03/28/2016 - 06:29
#3
Hexzyle's picture
Hexzyle

Looks great. My only complaint , though, is that the nose area is more of a pointed shape instead of rounded like yours is

I believe that's a cheek, but the point still stands.

Mon, 03/28/2016 - 06:40
#4
Umbra-Lunatis's picture
Umbra-Lunatis
@hex

Huh. Since it's a side-view, I'm pretty sure that it's not a cheek.
Either way, I'm liking the way the helm was drawn. Is this program going to be 2-dimensional?

Mon, 03/28/2016 - 07:45
#5
Autofire's picture
Autofire
You are experiencing a PICNIC ERROR!

It's a really puffy cheek. xD

I think the helmet looks pretty good!

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