Well, a few reasons:

1- your story have no plot, structure or anything that can make me care.

2- you have not established a lore, a solid background or a interesting set of characters to make me invested.

3- judging by how much you have wrote as an introduction, I don't put a lot of stock in your commitment.

4- you have not established how the interaction is going to work. More elaboration is needed.

Ugh, that is not a lot. What I am asking details I meant like a fully written introduction, I will give you an example:

BATTLE FLEET: ISORA

Location: planet Isora's orbit, Spiral order space dock 5 years b.s.f. (before Skylark Fall)

Planet of Isora, home to millions of knights, after decades of civil war and internal strive it has began to shut down from within. Viewing Isora from space, her crust could be seen crumbling as the waste created by the long conflict slowly choked her to death, lava streams bursting out from the earth below as the planet of Isora writhed and screamed. To witness all of this with living eyes, Biscotti, the vice admiral of the Spiral order's fleet, sighed, withered by countless wars, Biscotti was one of first female admiralty, intelligent and magnanimous in her humility.

The orbital dock was a metal ring around Isora, her last bastion of hope for the knights of the spiral order, its old metal structure creaked as Isora's gravity field became more and more unstable by her gradual destruction. Biscotti walked through the orbital dock's narrow corridor filled with hapless refugees, helping to oversee the civilian evacuation via the domestic shuttles. A loud shriek made the floor tremble and suddenly the cry of a young boy was heard, his toy fell to the ground. Recomposing herself, Biscotti picked up the toy and returned it to its owner.

"Remember child," Biscotti said as the boy wiped away his tear, "In life, there will always be struggle. Such is the nature of things. But in life, there is also hope, happiness." with the toy back in his hand, the boy smiled. It is the little things that brought smiles to the vice admiral's face. But standing behind her, the grim Admiral Ozlo had other things in mind. Heavily guarded by an entourage of wardens, the head of the Spiral order's fleet was not pleased to see his most trusted advisor attending to such minor errant.

"Biscotti... I see you are overseeing the evacuation," Ozlo nodded, acknowledging Biscotti's effort, "but leave that to your subordinates... we have more important tasks at hand."

"I simply wanted to ease up the tension around here, the refugees are restless," Biscotti chuckled, her positive outlook displeased Ozlo.

"Our planet is dying, there is no time for pleasantry..." Ozlo reaffirmed his stand on their situation, "Isora's core is on melt down after years of resource excavation sucked her dry, once we evacuated the refugees we will use the last of our tearium reserve to mobilize what is left of our fleet."

"where are we heading?" Biscotti asked.

"To the Morai home world of Ruia," Ozlo replied, "There we will launch a full planetary assault and capture the core of their planet, it is young and nourishing enough to bring Isora back to her former glory." Reviving Isora was easy, much like a knight, if a spark of life of enormous size is applied, it will revivify.

"Is there no other target?" Biscotti asked, trying to avoid an open conflict with the Morais, "the galaxy is a big place, surly we can find another planet to settle."

"We only have enough for tearium left for a one way trip to Ruia," Ozlo shook his head, "It is now do or die, Biscotti, we are not cadets at the naval academy anymore... millions of lives are depending on us..."